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Kabir ne Zelan ki aisi death dekh kar sirf ek gehri saans chodi. Waise bhi usne apne k warrior ke jo codes hote hai unhe break kar diya tha. Jab usne apni haar maan li thi tab bhi usne apne opponent par attack kar diya tha. Yeh sabhi warriors ke liye ek shameful baat thi.

Apne sir ko naa mein hilate hue Kabir Life and Death Platform se niche aa gaya.

Jaldi hi Kabir ke friends aur Yunvu Commandery ke students ne usse gher liya. Sabhi usse cheer kar rahe the.

"Kabir tum kaafi powerful ho. Even Zelan tak tumhare haato mara gaya. Mein ab yeh surely keh sakta hu ke jab tak hame tumhara support hai tab tak hame yaha par koi bhi bully nahi kar sakta hai."

Sabhi ke aankho mein Kabir ke liye ek respect aur admiration thi. Wahi bohot si female students bhi uski taraf dekh rahi thi.

Par is sabhi ke bich Kabir ke friends aur Linsen samajh gaya tha ke Kabir ka mood abhi off hai.

Linsen-Kabir mein janta hu tum kya soch rahe ho par shayad yeh sirf start hai. Hame aage bhi kaafi alert rehna hoga.

Kabir ne bhi phir usse dekha aur phir apne sir ko hilate hue usne kaha.

Kabir-Well ab jab is Zelan ki death ho gayi hai toh yeh matter toh kuch der ke liye yahi khatam ho gaya hai.

Jaha Yunvu Commandery ke students ki excitement kaafi thi wahi Square Commandery Prince ke face par same wahi expressions the cold. Vo abhi bhi kabir ko dekh taha tha. Usne gusse se apne aap se kaha.

"Yeh Zelan toh useless nikla. Vo is Kabir tak ko nahi maar paya."

Tabhi uske side mei khade ek Square Commandery ke student ne kaha.

"Toh ab kya? Kya ham is Kabir ko aise hi chod denge ?"

"Aise hi jaane du ? Bhala yeh possible hai ?"

Yeh keh kar Square Commandery Prince ne apne fist ko tightly close kiya aur cold tone mein aage kaha.

"Mein abhi jaa kar apne father ko ek letter likhta hu ke vo is Kabir ko marne ke liye Hades Department ko ek large price pay kar ke kuch killers ko bhej de. Agar yeh abhi mara nahi toh yeh future mei zaroor Square Commandery ke liye threat ban sakta hai."

Life and Death Platform ke match me baad Kabir directly Dragon Martial Temple mein aa gaya aur apne sword technique ki practice karne lag gaya.

Kuch 2 din aise hi uske practice mein chale gaye. Third day usse Headmaster of Western Campus se bulawa aaya.

Kabir bhi waise hi Headmaster ke office ke area ki taraf chala gaya.

Abhi Headmaster of Western Campus apne golden robe mein ek bade se stone ke side mein baith kar unke same jo ek small lake tha usmein se fishing kar rahe the.

Kabir-Greetings, Headmaster!

Kabir Headmaster of Western Campus ke paas aa kar yeh kehte hue usne respect pay ki.

"Kabir tumhe pata hai mein ne ek month wait karne ke baad hi tumhe kyo bulaya. Mein toh tumhe entrance exam ke just baad bhi bula sakta tha ?"

Headmaster of Western Campus ne abhi bhi apne haato mein jo rod tha usse pakad kar rakha hua tha aur unki aankhe abhi bhi water ke surface par hi focus thi. Unhone Kabir ko dekhne ke liye bhi turn nahi liya.

Kabir-Is student ko nahi pata hai.

Kabir ne entrance exam hone se pehle Headmaster ko dekha tha par vo kaafi dur se dekha tha.

Yeh toh is baar tha ke Kabir serious ho kar usne Headmaster ko first time dekha tha jo is pure Western Campus mein sabse Superior hai jo Golden Robe pehen sakta hai.

Headmaster ke sabhi hairs white ho gaye tha aur unki age bhi kuch 70-80 tak lag rahi thi. Par is sab ka unke face par koi bhi effect nahi hua tha. Unke face ko dekh kar yeh koi bhi nahi keh sakta tha ke yeh itne old ho sakte hai.

Kabir Headmaster ke cultivation ko thik se sense nahi kar paa raha tha.

Kabir-Waise mein yeh soch raha tha ke Headmaster kounse realm mein hai ?

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne apne haat mein jo fishing rod tha usse side mei rakh diya aur vo apni jagah se khade ho gaye. Unhone Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Kabir tumhe pata hai ke har new year jab top freshmen aate hai unhe Deputy Headmaster apna student accept karte hai. If course agar new student ka talent achha raha toh mein khud bhi usse as a apna student accept karta hu. Tumhara Tower test mein performance sabse achha tha. Ussi waqt mein ne yeh soch liya tha ke mein tumhe apna student banaunga. Wahi jab mei yeh keh raha hu ke tum outstanding the toh mein tumhare third floor ke second obstacale ko clear karne ki baat nahi kar raha hu. Balki tumhara third floor ke third obstacle ko pass karne ki baat kar raha hu jaha tumne Luo Su ko same realm mein haraya tha."

Yeh sunkar Kabir halka sa surprise ho gaya. Usne Headmaster se pucha.

Kabir-Headmaster aap ko pata hai us tower ke andar kya hua tha. ?

Kabir ki is baat par Headmaster ko halki hasi aa gayi. Unhone aise hi haste hue Kabir se kaha.

"Kabir tumhe sach mein lagta hai ke us tower jitne important place ko guard karne ke liye sirf Shreya aur Dina jaise ladkiyo ko rakhunga ? Waha par kuch aise secrets hai jinhe vo dono tak bhi nahi janti hai."

Yeh kehne ke baad suddenly Headmaster ke expressions aur unka baat karne ka tone serious ho gaya.

"Par unhone jo kiya usne liye mein unhe rokta bhi nahi. Kyo ki agar vo tumhe us waqt na rokte toh shayad mujhe khud aa kar tumhe forth floor par jaane se rokna padta."

Kabir-Kya Headmaster is liye tension mein aa jaate ke kahi mein ne talent ko zyada show kiya hota toh mujhe bohot se log target karte ?

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue kaha.

"Martial Market School bhi completely safe jagah nahi hai. Black Market aur Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke agents har pal yahi sochte hai ke vo is jagah ko kaise infiltrate karenge. Vo sirf students ke bich hi nahi hai balki vo khud ch school ke higher levels mein bhi hai. Agar tum is din forth floor par chale jaate toh Black Market har vo cheez karta jisse vo tumhe khatam kar sake. Uske baad toh tumhe protect karna toh mujhe bhi difficult jata."

Kabir-Kahi Headmaster Black Market Killing Action ki toh baat nahi kar rahe hai ?

Kabir ke muu se yeh sunkar Headmaster kaafi surprise ho gaye.

"Tum Black Market Killing Action ke baremain jante ho ?"

Yeh note karne wali baat thi ke Black Market aur Martial Market Bank yeh dono hi ek dusre ke opponent the. Dono hi ek dusre ko na jaane kab se khatam karna chahte the. Dono hi ek dusre se fight kar rahe the taaki apne territory ko expand kar sake.

Martial Market School ek tarah se Martial Market Bank ka training ground tha talented warriors ke liye. Wahi Martial Market Bank ko puri tarah se destroy karne ke liye unhone Black House Killing Action ko create kiya tha. Jiska sirf ek hi goal tha ke Martial Market School mein jo bhi young prodigies hone unhe assassinate karna.

Black Market ne yeh Killing Action kuch 800 years se start kiya tha. Toh Kabir ko is sab ke baremein pata toh pehle se hi tha. Apne past life mein usne Black Market ke bohot se bases ko destroy kiya tha vo bhi akele hi.

Kabir yeh sab baate Headmaster ko samjha nahi sakta tha. Toh usne is situation ko dekhte hue kaha.

Kabir-Mein yaha aane se phele Nether Master se yaha ki sab information le raha tha. Waise Black Market ke naam aur uski jo baate mujhe Nether Master ne batayi hai usse zyada kuch bhi pata nahi hai.

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne sochte hue kaha.

"Ahh, Nether Master se tumhe yeh pata chala. Chalo achhi baat hai. Kyo ki tum aaye bhi ho Tiny World se toh tumhe yaha ke baremain zyada pata nahi hoga."

Kyo ki Nether Master ek Martial Market School ke elder the toh unhe aisi baato ka pata hona koi badi baat nahi thi. After all Yeh Killing Action almost thousand years se exist karta tha. Yeh baat itni bhi koi secret nahi thi.

Phir kuch soch kar Headmaster ne haste hue Kabir se kaha.

"Thik hai phir agar tumhe is sab ke baremein pata hi hai toh achhi baat hai."

Kabir-Waise mein yeh janna chah raha tha ke Headmaster ko sach mein kisi Black Market ke agent ko Martial Market School mein dhund liya hai ya pata chal gaya ?

"Haa ek tarah se tum yeh keh bhi sakte ho. Abhi mujhe sirf kuch clues hi mile hai. Lekin mein main party ke liye ruka hua hu. Jaise hi vo mere trap mein phas jayega wise hi khel kayam."

Yeh kehne ke baad Headmaster Kabir ki taraf badhe aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kabir kya tum mujhe as a teacher accept karoge aur mere disciple banoge ?"

Yeh kaafi badi baat thi. Kyo ki ek teacher ke bohot saare students ho sakte hai par disciple koi ek hi ho sakta hai.

Agar vo abhi Headmaster of Western Campus ka disciple ban gaya toh usse ek aur strong support mil jayega. Uska status pure Western Campus mein ek pal mein hi badh jayega. Future mein usse koi satane bhi nahi aa sakta tha. Even Martial Market School ke Internal Students the Kabir ka status unse bhi high ho jayega.

Par Kabir aisa kar nahi sakta tha. Kabir ke khud ke kaafi saare secrets the. Aise secrets jinke baremain vo sabhi ko bata nahi sakta tha. Agar usne Headmaster ko apna teacher accept kar liya toh uske sabhi secrets bhi xpose ho sakte the.

Kabir ne phir respectfully Headmaster ko salute kiya aur kaha.

Kabir-Thank you ke aapne mujhe us kaabil samjha lekin mein apni practice khud se karna chahta hu. Mein abhi kisi ko bhi apna as a teacher accept nahi kar sakta hu.

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ko surprisingly gussa nahi aaya balki unke face par ek smile thi. Unhone Kabir se kaha.

"Hahaha! Mein is Western Campus ka last 34 years se Headmaster hu. Mein ne ab tak 11 students ko yeh offer diya tha aur tum unmein se second ho jisne is offer ke liye naa kaha hai."

Kabir is baat ko sunkar surprise ho gaya.

Kabir-Toh first koun hai ?

"Wahi jo Dragon Martial Temple ke Heaven No-1 mein hai."

Black No-1 mein Dina hai, Earth No-1 mein Shreya hai toh naturally jo Heaven No-1 hai vo aur koi nahi balki Luo Su ki descendant Luo Sihan hai.

Par Headmaster jaise ek last try karna chahte the. Unhone phir se Kabir se pucha.

"Kabir phir se soch lo. Mein ne ab tak nine disciples ko apne under liya hai. Usmein se 6 ab Heaven Realm mein hai aur Martial Arts Legend ban gaye hai. Ek hai jo is school ke prodigy mein se ek hai aur Internal Students ke top 10 list mein aata hai. Wahi baki ke do ladkiya hai Shreya aur Dina. Aur tumhe pata hi hai vo kitne powerful hai. Right? Agar tum mere disciple ban gaye toh tumhe shayad zyada amount mein resources na mile par school ke andar aur bahar bhi tum mere naam ko use kar ke kuch had tak political powers toh paa hi sakte ho. Koi bhi tumhe easily satane ke liye nahi aa sakta hai."

Kabir ne phir se respectful tone mein Headmaster se kaha.

Kabir-Mein ne clearly soch liya hai. Even agar mein kisi bhi situation mein phas gaya even school ke andar bhi toh mein at least utna toh powerful hu ke usmein se nikal saku.

"Well agar tumne soch hi liya hai toh mein kuch keh nahi sakta. Lekin apne friends ke baremain tension mat lena meri nazar unpar hai."

Yeh keh kar Headmaster ne apne robe mein se ek small delicate jade bottle nikali aur usse Kabir ko dete hue kaha.

"Ismein Sacred Liquid ka ek drop hai aur isse mein tumhe de raha hu. Isse as a mera gift hi samajh lo."

Kabir-SACRED LIQUID.

Kabir ne yeh baat kaafi surprise hote hue kahi.

Martial Market School ke students same realm ke warriors mein sabse strong hote the. Jaise example ke liye Zelan. Although vo Black Realm ke Final Stage par tha lekin normal 7-8 Black Realm ke Final Stage warriors ko vo akela handle kar sakta tha. Iska reason tha ke Martial Market School ke students ko Half-Saint's Essence lene ki opportunity milti thi.

Ek normal Outer Student ko har year ek drop Half-Saint's Essence milta tha apni physical qualities ko refine karne ke liye.

First 100 Outer Students of Western Campus ko har season mein ek drop milta tha.

Wahi First 10 students of Western Campus ko har season mein 2 drops of Half-Saint Liquid ke milte the.

Wahi Western Campus ke first rank student ko zyada benefits milte honge. Us person ko har season mein 10 drops milte hai Half-Saint's Essence ke.

Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop bhi kaafi hota hai results ko dekhne ke liye. Us warrior ki physical quality significantly stronger hoti hai aur vo jo warriors same realm mein hai usne zyada powerful hota hai.

Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop Market mein hundreds of thousands silver coins ke liye sell kiya jaa sakta tha. Uske liye price toh thi lekin aisa koi market nahi tha.

Kabir ko jo Sacred Liquid Headmaster ne diya tha vo Half-Saint's Essence se kaafi precious tha. Uska har ek drop ki kimat 5 million silver coins se kaafi zyada thi. Isse sirf aur sirf Superior Commanderies mein hi buy kiya jaa sakta tha. Isse kisi bhi Medium aur Inferior Commandery mein buy nahi kiya jaa sakta tha kyo ki yeh waha par mil hi nahi sakta tha.

If course Kabir ne us gift ko khushi se accept kar liya tha.

Uske baad usne Headmaster ko phir se salute kiya aur waha se nikal kar Dragon Martial Temple mein aa gaya.

Kabir-Sacred Liquid ka ek drop, yeh amazing hai. Iske help se mera Body of Martial Arts aur bhi stronger ho jaayega. Shayad mein isse Black Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein break through kar saku.

Wahi students keliye Half-Saint's Essence kisi rare treasures se kam nahi tha. Kyo ki vo easily mil nahi sakta tha. Is liye usse koi bhi sell nahi karta tha.

Kabir ne khush hote hue uske haat mein jo jade bottle thi usse dekh raha tha.

Lekin Holy Water ke sirf ek drop se Ultimate Realm mein break through karna impossible tha. Iska sabse bada reason tha Kabir ki technique Buddhist Emperor Empyrean. Usne apne body k sabhi 36 meridians ko open kar liya tha aur Sword Intent tak ko achieve kar liya tha. Yeh advantage kisi bhi dusre prodigy ke paas nahi tha.

Sacred Liquid Kabir ke break through ke liye support kar sakta tha.

Waise bhi agar Kabir ne abhi jo achieve kiya hai usse dekh kar bhi uske Ultimate Realm mein break through karne ke chances kaafi kam the.

Is liye Kabir ne yeh soch liya tha ke vo Sacred Liquid ko abhi nahi lega. Vo jab tak Black Realm ke Completion Stage mein nahi pohoch jata hai tab tak nahi lega. Us waqt lene se uski effectiveness badh sakti thi.

Kabir-Har three months mein Western Campus ki quarterly assessment hoti hai. Tab first 100 students ko ek Half-Saint's Essence ka drop milega. Waise Half-Saint's Essence ke effect ko Sacred Liquid se compare nahi kiya jaa sakta hai but phir bhi vo precious tha. Usse bhi kahi buy nahi kiya jaa sakta hai. Ek month toh ho gaya hai means ab sirf do month bache hai quarterly assessment ke liye. Us waqt mein at least try karunga ke Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop toh le saku.

Assessment mein jo first 100 students the vo older students the jo is school mein several years ke liye train ho rahe the. Unka cultivation bhi Black Realm ke Completion Stage par tha.

Even Zelan me cultivation ko dekha jaaye toh uski rank bhi 173 thi Western Campus mein.

Kabir-Mujhe sabse pehle Sacred Sword Skill ke 12 strikes ko master karna hoga.

Kabir ne ab tak Sacred Sword Skill ke 6 strikes ko master kar liya tha. Vo abhi Low Class Spiritual Sword Technique ko complete karne ke lite halfway tha.

Abhi kaafi raat ho gayi thi. Kabir apne Buddhist Emperor Empyrean ki practice kar raha tha ke tabhi uski consciousness phir se aa kar us Divine Mountain ke aage ruk gayi.

Pehle toh usse samajh nahi aaya ke hua kya aue jab uski nazar us Divine Mountain par gayi toh usse phir se waise hi calming feeling aane lag gayi thi jaise usse first time aayi thi. Par aaj ek baat different thi. Aaj uske saath Saint Sumi nahi the.

Kabir Saint Sumi ko yaha waha dhund raha tha par usse vo kahi nahi dikhe.

Saint Sumi ke na hone ke wajah se usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ke vi kare kya. Usne phir se us Divine Mountain ko dekha aur jo uske samne beh rahi river thi usse bhi dekha.

Kabir phir se sochne laga ke uska cultivation ab kuch badh gaya hai toh shayad is baar vo is river ko cross kar paaye

Kabir ne ek step aage badhaya par phir se wahi hua. Vo us river ke paas tak nahi jaa paya.

Usne aisa bohot baar try kiya par vo yeh kar nahi saka.

Uski consciousness waha se nikal bhi nahi paa rahi thi aur akele hone ke wajah se usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke vo kare kya.

Abhi vo is soch mein hi tha ke vo kare kya ke tabhi usse ek kaafi achhi dhun sunayi dene lag gayi.

Usse pehle toh apne aaspas koi nahi dikha par jaha se usse yeh dhun sunayi de rahi thi vo us taraf chala gaya. Thodi dur aane ke baad usse apne samne ek open part dikha jaha par kaafi saari cows thi aur vo sabhi ek tree ki taraf dekh rahi thi jaha ek ladka apni basuri se yeh khubsurat dhun baja raha tha.

Kabir na jaane kaise uski taraf chalta gaya aur jaa kar us ladke ke samne ruk gaya.

Usse toh yeh tak yaad nahi raha ke vo kaha hai. Uska dil kar raha tha ke vo bas us ladke ko uski dhun bajate hue sune.

Kuch der baad us ladke ne apni basuri bajani rok di. Uski aankhe abhi close thi par jaise hi usne apni basuri bajani roki waise hi uske face par ek kaafi khubsurat si smile aa gayi. Aisi smile Kabir ne aaj tak nahi dekhi thi. Usse laga jaise uske life ke sabhi problems hi khatam ho gaye hai is pal mein.

Us ladke ki aankhe abhi close thi par uske face par vo smile abhi bhi thi. Usse jaise pata tha ke Kabir apna sudbudh kho kar usse dekh raha hai aur apne aankho ko close rakhe hi usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mujhe sirf dekhte hi rahoge ke aage kuch kahoge bhi."

Us ladke ki is baat se Kabir jaise hosh mein aa gaya. Usne hadbada kar kaha.

Kabir-Koun ho tum ?

Kabir ke is sawal par us ladke ne haste hue kaha.

"Mein koun hu. Yeh sawal hi galat hai. Yeh pucho ke tum kuon ho aur yaha kyo aa gaye ho. Mein ne dekha tha kuch der pehle ke tum is nadi ko paar kar ke us parvat ki taraf jana chahte ho. Par jaa nahi paaye kyo"

Kabir ko jaise laga ke is ladke ko pata hoga ke is river ko kaise cross kiya jaa sakta hai. Abhi vo puchne hi wala tha ke us ladke ne kaha.

"Janta hu tum kya puchna chahte ho. Yahi na ke tum is nadi ko paar kar sakte ho ya nahi."

Kabir ne us ladke ki is baat par sirf apne sir ko haa mei hilaya.

"Abhi nahi kar sakte ho tum is nadi ko paar. Jante ho kaha aaye ho tum. Yeh vo jagah hai jaha aane ke liye naa jaane kitne hi tadpate hai. Sirf isse dekhne ke liye hi pata bhi nahi hai kaha kaha se koun koun aata hai. Yahi hai sabhi cheezo ka aarambh aur yahi jagah uska ant bhi hai. Yeh koi aam jagah nahi hai Kabir."

Us ladke ke muu se apna naam sunkar Kabir shock ho gaya kyo ki usne abhi tak us ladko ko apna naam nahi bataya tha.

Kabir ke muu par aise shocking express dekh kar us ladke ne haste hue kaha.

"Yahi soch rahe ho na ke mujhe tumhara naam kaise pata hai. Par mein toh tumhare baremain sab kuch janta hu. Jab sahi samay aayega toh tumhe khud hi pata chal jaayega."

Kabir-Aap ki age dekh kar yeh koi nahi keh sakta hai ke aap ek young teenager ho. Aap zaroor koi aise ho jisse sab kuch pata hai. Kya mein yeh jaan sakta hu ke jab bhi mein is mountain ko dekhta hu tab mujhe ek alag hi Khushi kyo milti hai ?

"Kyo ki khud DEVO KE DEV yaha vaas karte hai"

Kabir-Devo ke Dev yaani GODS of God. Yaani Supreme God. Par vo toh kisi aur realm mei rehte hai jaha par aise hi nahi jaya jaa sakta hai toh mei yaha kaise aa sakta hu ?

"Yeh toh Khud MAHADEV hi jaane."

Kabir-MAHADEV !

"Ha Kabir yeh jo tum parvat dekh rahe ho na isse Kailash kehte hai aur ispar vaas karte hai MAHADEV. Jo sab ke hai aur kisi ke bhi nahi. Agar sachhe dil se bulaoge toh vo tum jaha ho waha aa jayenge. Bhole hai mere Mahadev."

Tabhi Kabir ko consciousness waha se jaane lag gayi. Jaise hi usse yeh pata chala waise hi Kabir ne us ladke ko palat kar pucha.

Kabir-Aap hai koun yeh toh batayiye ?

"Mein koun hu. Mein toh in gaayo ka charwaha hu. Waise toh mere kayi naam hai par mere karibi mujhe GOVIND kehte hai."

Jaise hi us ladke ne yeh kaha waise hi Kabir ki consciousness return aa gayi thi.


Abhi morning hone lag gayi thi Kabir kuch der pehle jo hua uske hi baremein soche jaa raha tha.


Uska yeh din aisa hi chala gaya. Usne apni sword practice ki aur phir Dragon Martial Temple se nikal kar vo apne friends se milne chala gaya.
Awesome brilliant update brother
Bahot bahot shaandaar zaberdast lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb
 

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Jay bhai ek sawal hai aapne kaha tha ke is Omen Ridge mein Martial Market School open hue kuch 450 ya kuch years hue hai toh iski history Black Market ke jitni kaise old ho sakti hai. Yeh baat abhi mai ne notice ki toh puchi agar yeh koi error hai toh rehne dijiye.
 

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UPDATE 136

Kabir ne Zelan ki aisi death dekh kar sirf ek gehri saans chodi. Waise bhi usne apne k warrior ke jo codes hote hai unhe break kar diya tha. Jab usne apni haar maan li thi tab bhi usne apne opponent par attack kar diya tha. Yeh sabhi warriors ke liye ek shameful baat thi.

Apne sir ko naa mein hilate hue Kabir Life and Death Platform se niche aa gaya.

Jaldi hi Kabir ke friends aur Yunvu Commandery ke students ne usse gher liya. Sabhi usse cheer kar rahe the.

"Kabir tum kaafi powerful ho. Even Zelan tak tumhare haato mara gaya. Mein ab yeh surely keh sakta hu ke jab tak hame tumhara support hai tab tak hame yaha par koi bhi bully nahi kar sakta hai."

Sabhi ke aankho mein Kabir ke liye ek respect aur admiration thi. Wahi bohot si female students bhi uski taraf dekh rahi thi.

Par is sabhi ke bich Kabir ke friends aur Linsen samajh gaya tha ke Kabir ka mood abhi off hai.

Linsen-Kabir mein janta hu tum kya soch rahe ho par shayad yeh sirf start hai. Hame aage bhi kaafi alert rehna hoga.

Kabir ne bhi phir usse dekha aur phir apne sir ko hilate hue usne kaha.

Kabir-Well ab jab is Zelan ki death ho gayi hai toh yeh matter toh kuch der ke liye yahi khatam ho gaya hai.

Jaha Yunvu Commandery ke students ki excitement kaafi thi wahi Square Commandery Prince ke face par same wahi expressions the cold. Vo abhi bhi kabir ko dekh taha tha. Usne gusse se apne aap se kaha.

"Yeh Zelan toh useless nikla. Vo is Kabir tak ko nahi maar paya."

Tabhi uske side mei khade ek Square Commandery ke student ne kaha.

"Toh ab kya? Kya ham is Kabir ko aise hi chod denge ?"

"Aise hi jaane du ? Bhala yeh possible hai ?"

Yeh keh kar Square Commandery Prince ne apne fist ko tightly close kiya aur cold tone mein aage kaha.

"Mein abhi jaa kar apne father ko ek letter likhta hu ke vo is Kabir ko marne ke liye Hades Department ko ek large price pay kar ke kuch killers ko bhej de. Agar yeh abhi mara nahi toh yeh future mei zaroor Square Commandery ke liye threat ban sakta hai."

Life and Death Platform ke match me baad Kabir directly Dragon Martial Temple mein aa gaya aur apne sword technique ki practice karne lag gaya.

Kuch 2 din aise hi uske practice mein chale gaye. Third day usse Headmaster of Western Campus se bulawa aaya.

Kabir bhi waise hi Headmaster ke office ke area ki taraf chala gaya.

Abhi Headmaster of Western Campus apne golden robe mein ek bade se stone ke side mein baith kar unke same jo ek small lake tha usmein se fishing kar rahe the.

Kabir-Greetings, Headmaster!

Kabir Headmaster of Western Campus ke paas aa kar yeh kehte hue usne respect pay ki.

"Kabir tumhe pata hai mein ne ek month wait karne ke baad hi tumhe kyo bulaya. Mein toh tumhe entrance exam ke just baad bhi bula sakta tha ?"

Headmaster of Western Campus ne abhi bhi apne haato mein jo rod tha usse pakad kar rakha hua tha aur unki aankhe abhi bhi water ke surface par hi focus thi. Unhone Kabir ko dekhne ke liye bhi turn nahi liya.

Kabir-Is student ko nahi pata hai.

Kabir ne entrance exam hone se pehle Headmaster ko dekha tha par vo kaafi dur se dekha tha.

Yeh toh is baar tha ke Kabir serious ho kar usne Headmaster ko first time dekha tha jo is pure Western Campus mein sabse Superior hai jo Golden Robe pehen sakta hai.

Headmaster ke sabhi hairs white ho gaye tha aur unki age bhi kuch 70-80 tak lag rahi thi. Par is sab ka unke face par koi bhi effect nahi hua tha. Unke face ko dekh kar yeh koi bhi nahi keh sakta tha ke yeh itne old ho sakte hai.

Kabir Headmaster ke cultivation ko thik se sense nahi kar paa raha tha.

Kabir-Waise mein yeh soch raha tha ke Headmaster kounse realm mein hai ?

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne apne haat mein jo fishing rod tha usse side mei rakh diya aur vo apni jagah se khade ho gaye. Unhone Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Kabir tumhe pata hai ke har new year jab top freshmen aate hai unhe Deputy Headmaster apna student accept karte hai. If course agar new student ka talent achha raha toh mein khud bhi usse as a apna student accept karta hu. Tumhara Tower test mein performance sabse achha tha. Ussi waqt mein ne yeh soch liya tha ke mein tumhe apna student banaunga. Wahi jab mei yeh keh raha hu ke tum outstanding the toh mein tumhare third floor ke second obstacale ko clear karne ki baat nahi kar raha hu. Balki tumhara third floor ke third obstacle ko pass karne ki baat kar raha hu jaha tumne Luo Su ko same realm mein haraya tha."

Yeh sunkar Kabir halka sa surprise ho gaya. Usne Headmaster se pucha.

Kabir-Headmaster aap ko pata hai us tower ke andar kya hua tha. ?

Kabir ki is baat par Headmaster ko halki hasi aa gayi. Unhone aise hi haste hue Kabir se kaha.

"Kabir tumhe sach mein lagta hai ke us tower jitne important place ko guard karne ke liye sirf Shreya aur Dina jaise ladkiyo ko rakhunga ? Waha par kuch aise secrets hai jinhe vo dono tak bhi nahi janti hai."

Yeh kehne ke baad suddenly Headmaster ke expressions aur unka baat karne ka tone serious ho gaya.

"Par unhone jo kiya usne liye mein unhe rokta bhi nahi. Kyo ki agar vo tumhe us waqt na rokte toh shayad mujhe khud aa kar tumhe forth floor par jaane se rokna padta."

Kabir-Kya Headmaster is liye tension mein aa jaate ke kahi mein ne talent ko zyada show kiya hota toh mujhe bohot se log target karte ?

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue kaha.

"Martial Market School bhi completely safe jagah nahi hai. Black Market aur Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke agents har pal yahi sochte hai ke vo is jagah ko kaise infiltrate karenge. Vo sirf students ke bich hi nahi hai balki vo khud ch school ke higher levels mein bhi hai. Agar tum is din forth floor par chale jaate toh Black Market har vo cheez karta jisse vo tumhe khatam kar sake. Uske baad toh tumhe protect karna toh mujhe bhi difficult jata."

Kabir-Kahi Headmaster Black Market Killing Action ki toh baat nahi kar rahe hai ?

Kabir ke muu se yeh sunkar Headmaster kaafi surprise ho gaye.

"Tum Black Market Killing Action ke baremain jante ho ?"

Yeh note karne wali baat thi ke Black Market aur Martial Market Bank yeh dono hi ek dusre ke opponent the. Dono hi ek dusre ko na jaane kab se khatam karna chahte the. Dono hi ek dusre se fight kar rahe the taaki apne territory ko expand kar sake.

Martial Market School ek tarah se Martial Market Bank ka training ground tha talented warriors ke liye. Wahi Martial Market Bank ko puri tarah se destroy karne ke liye unhone Black House Killing Action ko create kiya tha. Jiska sirf ek hi goal tha ke Martial Market School mein jo bhi young prodigies hone unhe assassinate karna.

Black Market ne yeh Killing Action kuch 800 years se start kiya tha. Toh Kabir ko is sab ke baremein pata toh pehle se hi tha. Apne past life mein usne Black Market ke bohot se bases ko destroy kiya tha vo bhi akele hi.

Kabir yeh sab baate Headmaster ko samjha nahi sakta tha. Toh usne is situation ko dekhte hue kaha.

Kabir-Mein yaha aane se phele Nether Master se yaha ki sab information le raha tha. Waise Black Market ke naam aur uski jo baate mujhe Nether Master ne batayi hai usse zyada kuch bhi pata nahi hai.

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ne sochte hue kaha.

"Ahh, Nether Master se tumhe yeh pata chala. Chalo achhi baat hai. Kyo ki tum aaye bhi ho Tiny World se toh tumhe yaha ke baremain zyada pata nahi hoga."

Kyo ki Nether Master ek Martial Market School ke elder the toh unhe aisi baato ka pata hona koi badi baat nahi thi. After all Yeh Killing Action almost thousand years se exist karta tha. Yeh baat itni bhi koi secret nahi thi.

Phir kuch soch kar Headmaster ne haste hue Kabir se kaha.

"Thik hai phir agar tumhe is sab ke baremein pata hi hai toh achhi baat hai."

Kabir-Waise mein yeh janna chah raha tha ke Headmaster ko sach mein kisi Black Market ke agent ko Martial Market School mein dhund liya hai ya pata chal gaya ?

"Haa ek tarah se tum yeh keh bhi sakte ho. Abhi mujhe sirf kuch clues hi mile hai. Lekin mein main party ke liye ruka hua hu. Jaise hi vo mere trap mein phas jayega wise hi khel kayam."

Yeh kehne ke baad Headmaster Kabir ki taraf badhe aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kabir kya tum mujhe as a teacher accept karoge aur mere disciple banoge ?"

Yeh kaafi badi baat thi. Kyo ki ek teacher ke bohot saare students ho sakte hai par disciple koi ek hi ho sakta hai.

Agar vo abhi Headmaster of Western Campus ka disciple ban gaya toh usse ek aur strong support mil jayega. Uska status pure Western Campus mein ek pal mein hi badh jayega. Future mein usse koi satane bhi nahi aa sakta tha. Even Martial Market School ke Internal Students the Kabir ka status unse bhi high ho jayega.

Par Kabir aisa kar nahi sakta tha. Kabir ke khud ke kaafi saare secrets the. Aise secrets jinke baremain vo sabhi ko bata nahi sakta tha. Agar usne Headmaster ko apna teacher accept kar liya toh uske sabhi secrets bhi xpose ho sakte the.

Kabir ne phir respectfully Headmaster ko salute kiya aur kaha.

Kabir-Thank you ke aapne mujhe us kaabil samjha lekin mein apni practice khud se karna chahta hu. Mein abhi kisi ko bhi apna as a teacher accept nahi kar sakta hu.

Yeh sunkar Headmaster ko surprisingly gussa nahi aaya balki unke face par ek smile thi. Unhone Kabir se kaha.

"Hahaha! Mein is Western Campus ka last 34 years se Headmaster hu. Mein ne ab tak 11 students ko yeh offer diya tha aur tum unmein se second ho jisne is offer ke liye naa kaha hai."

Kabir is baat ko sunkar surprise ho gaya.

Kabir-Toh first koun hai ?

"Wahi jo Dragon Martial Temple ke Heaven No-1 mein hai."

Black No-1 mein Dina hai, Earth No-1 mein Shreya hai toh naturally jo Heaven No-1 hai vo aur koi nahi balki Luo Su ki descendant Luo Sihan hai.

Par Headmaster jaise ek last try karna chahte the. Unhone phir se Kabir se pucha.

"Kabir phir se soch lo. Mein ne ab tak nine disciples ko apne under liya hai. Usmein se 6 ab Heaven Realm mein hai aur Martial Arts Legend ban gaye hai. Ek hai jo is school ke prodigy mein se ek hai aur Internal Students ke top 10 list mein aata hai. Wahi baki ke do ladkiya hai Shreya aur Dina. Aur tumhe pata hi hai vo kitne powerful hai. Right? Agar tum mere disciple ban gaye toh tumhe shayad zyada amount mein resources na mile par school ke andar aur bahar bhi tum mere naam ko use kar ke kuch had tak political powers toh paa hi sakte ho. Koi bhi tumhe easily satane ke liye nahi aa sakta hai."

Kabir ne phir se respectful tone mein Headmaster se kaha.

Kabir-Mein ne clearly soch liya hai. Even agar mein kisi bhi situation mein phas gaya even school ke andar bhi toh mein at least utna toh powerful hu ke usmein se nikal saku.

"Well agar tumne soch hi liya hai toh mein kuch keh nahi sakta. Lekin apne friends ke baremain tension mat lena meri nazar unpar hai."

Yeh keh kar Headmaster ne apne robe mein se ek small delicate jade bottle nikali aur usse Kabir ko dete hue kaha.

"Ismein Sacred Liquid ka ek drop hai aur isse mein tumhe de raha hu. Isse as a mera gift hi samajh lo."

Kabir-SACRED LIQUID.

Kabir ne yeh baat kaafi surprise hote hue kahi.

Martial Market School ke students same realm ke warriors mein sabse strong hote the. Jaise example ke liye Zelan. Although vo Black Realm ke Final Stage par tha lekin normal 7-8 Black Realm ke Final Stage warriors ko vo akela handle kar sakta tha. Iska reason tha ke Martial Market School ke students ko Half-Saint's Essence lene ki opportunity milti thi.

Ek normal Outer Student ko har year ek drop Half-Saint's Essence milta tha apni physical qualities ko refine karne ke liye.

First 100 Outer Students of Western Campus ko har season mein ek drop milta tha.

Wahi First 10 students of Western Campus ko har season mein 2 drops of Half-Saint Liquid ke milte the.

Wahi Western Campus ke first rank student ko zyada benefits milte honge. Us person ko har season mein 10 drops milte hai Half-Saint's Essence ke.

Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop bhi kaafi hota hai results ko dekhne ke liye. Us warrior ki physical quality significantly stronger hoti hai aur vo jo warriors same realm mein hai usne zyada powerful hota hai.

Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop Market mein hundreds of thousands silver coins ke liye sell kiya jaa sakta tha. Uske liye price toh thi lekin aisa koi market nahi tha.

Kabir ko jo Sacred Liquid Headmaster ne diya tha vo Half-Saint's Essence se kaafi precious tha. Uska har ek drop ki kimat 5 million silver coins se kaafi zyada thi. Isse sirf aur sirf Superior Commanderies mein hi buy kiya jaa sakta tha. Isse kisi bhi Medium aur Inferior Commandery mein buy nahi kiya jaa sakta tha kyo ki yeh waha par mil hi nahi sakta tha.

If course Kabir ne us gift ko khushi se accept kar liya tha.

Uske baad usne Headmaster ko phir se salute kiya aur waha se nikal kar Dragon Martial Temple mein aa gaya.

Kabir-Sacred Liquid ka ek drop, yeh amazing hai. Iske help se mera Body of Martial Arts aur bhi stronger ho jaayega. Shayad mein isse Black Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein break through kar saku.

Wahi students keliye Half-Saint's Essence kisi rare treasures se kam nahi tha. Kyo ki vo easily mil nahi sakta tha. Is liye usse koi bhi sell nahi karta tha.

Kabir ne khush hote hue uske haat mein jo jade bottle thi usse dekh raha tha.

Lekin Holy Water ke sirf ek drop se Ultimate Realm mein break through karna impossible tha. Iska sabse bada reason tha Kabir ki technique Buddhist Emperor Empyrean. Usne apne body k sabhi 36 meridians ko open kar liya tha aur Sword Intent tak ko achieve kar liya tha. Yeh advantage kisi bhi dusre prodigy ke paas nahi tha.

Sacred Liquid Kabir ke break through ke liye support kar sakta tha.

Waise bhi agar Kabir ne abhi jo achieve kiya hai usse dekh kar bhi uske Ultimate Realm mein break through karne ke chances kaafi kam the.

Is liye Kabir ne yeh soch liya tha ke vo Sacred Liquid ko abhi nahi lega. Vo jab tak Black Realm ke Completion Stage mein nahi pohoch jata hai tab tak nahi lega. Us waqt lene se uski effectiveness badh sakti thi.

Kabir-Har three months mein Western Campus ki quarterly assessment hoti hai. Tab first 100 students ko ek Half-Saint's Essence ka drop milega. Waise Half-Saint's Essence ke effect ko Sacred Liquid se compare nahi kiya jaa sakta hai but phir bhi vo precious tha. Usse bhi kahi buy nahi kiya jaa sakta hai. Ek month toh ho gaya hai means ab sirf do month bache hai quarterly assessment ke liye. Us waqt mein at least try karunga ke Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop toh le saku.

Assessment mein jo first 100 students the vo older students the jo is school mein several years ke liye train ho rahe the. Unka cultivation bhi Black Realm ke Completion Stage par tha.

Even Zelan me cultivation ko dekha jaaye toh uski rank bhi 173 thi Western Campus mein.

Kabir-Mujhe sabse pehle Sacred Sword Skill ke 12 strikes ko master karna hoga.

Kabir ne ab tak Sacred Sword Skill ke 6 strikes ko master kar liya tha. Vo abhi Low Class Spiritual Sword Technique ko complete karne ke lite halfway tha.

Abhi kaafi raat ho gayi thi. Kabir apne Buddhist Emperor Empyrean ki practice kar raha tha ke tabhi uski consciousness phir se aa kar us Divine Mountain ke aage ruk gayi.

Pehle toh usse samajh nahi aaya ke hua kya aue jab uski nazar us Divine Mountain par gayi toh usse phir se waise hi calming feeling aane lag gayi thi jaise usse first time aayi thi. Par aaj ek baat different thi. Aaj uske saath Saint Sumi nahi the.

Kabir Saint Sumi ko yaha waha dhund raha tha par usse vo kahi nahi dikhe.

Saint Sumi ke na hone ke wajah se usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ke vi kare kya. Usne phir se us Divine Mountain ko dekha aur jo uske samne beh rahi river thi usse bhi dekha.

Kabir phir se sochne laga ke uska cultivation ab kuch badh gaya hai toh shayad is baar vo is river ko cross kar paaye

Kabir ne ek step aage badhaya par phir se wahi hua. Vo us river ke paas tak nahi jaa paya.

Usne aisa bohot baar try kiya par vo yeh kar nahi saka.

Uski consciousness waha se nikal bhi nahi paa rahi thi aur akele hone ke wajah se usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke vo kare kya.

Abhi vo is soch mein hi tha ke vo kare kya ke tabhi usse ek kaafi achhi dhun sunayi dene lag gayi.

Usse pehle toh apne aaspas koi nahi dikha par jaha se usse yeh dhun sunayi de rahi thi vo us taraf chala gaya. Thodi dur aane ke baad usse apne samne ek open part dikha jaha par kaafi saari cows thi aur vo sabhi ek tree ki taraf dekh rahi thi jaha ek ladka apni basuri se yeh khubsurat dhun baja raha tha.

Kabir na jaane kaise uski taraf chalta gaya aur jaa kar us ladke ke samne ruk gaya.

Usse toh yeh tak yaad nahi raha ke vo kaha hai. Uska dil kar raha tha ke vo bas us ladke ko uski dhun bajate hue sune.

Kuch der baad us ladke ne apni basuri bajani rok di. Uski aankhe abhi close thi par jaise hi usne apni basuri bajani roki waise hi uske face par ek kaafi khubsurat si smile aa gayi. Aisi smile Kabir ne aaj tak nahi dekhi thi. Usse laga jaise uske life ke sabhi problems hi khatam ho gaye hai is pal mein.

Us ladke ki aankhe abhi close thi par uske face par vo smile abhi bhi thi. Usse jaise pata tha ke Kabir apna sudbudh kho kar usse dekh raha hai aur apne aankho ko close rakhe hi usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mujhe sirf dekhte hi rahoge ke aage kuch kahoge bhi."

Us ladke ki is baat se Kabir jaise hosh mein aa gaya. Usne hadbada kar kaha.

Kabir-Koun ho tum ?

Kabir ke is sawal par us ladke ne haste hue kaha.

"Mein koun hu. Yeh sawal hi galat hai. Yeh pucho ke tum kuon ho aur yaha kyo aa gaye ho. Mein ne dekha tha kuch der pehle ke tum is nadi ko paar kar ke us parvat ki taraf jana chahte ho. Par jaa nahi paaye kyo"

Kabir ko jaise laga ke is ladke ko pata hoga ke is river ko kaise cross kiya jaa sakta hai. Abhi vo puchne hi wala tha ke us ladke ne kaha.

"Janta hu tum kya puchna chahte ho. Yahi na ke tum is nadi ko paar kar sakte ho ya nahi."

Kabir ne us ladke ki is baat par sirf apne sir ko haa mei hilaya.

"Abhi nahi kar sakte ho tum is nadi ko paar. Jante ho kaha aaye ho tum. Yeh vo jagah hai jaha aane ke liye naa jaane kitne hi tadpate hai. Sirf isse dekhne ke liye hi pata bhi nahi hai kaha kaha se koun koun aata hai. Yahi hai sabhi cheezo ka aarambh aur yahi jagah uska ant bhi hai. Yeh koi aam jagah nahi hai Kabir."

Us ladke ke muu se apna naam sunkar Kabir shock ho gaya kyo ki usne abhi tak us ladko ko apna naam nahi bataya tha.

Kabir ke muu par aise shocking express dekh kar us ladke ne haste hue kaha.

"Yahi soch rahe ho na ke mujhe tumhara naam kaise pata hai. Par mein toh tumhare baremain sab kuch janta hu. Jab sahi samay aayega toh tumhe khud hi pata chal jaayega."

Kabir-Aap ki age dekh kar yeh koi nahi keh sakta hai ke aap ek young teenager ho. Aap zaroor koi aise ho jisse sab kuch pata hai. Kya mein yeh jaan sakta hu ke jab bhi mein is mountain ko dekhta hu tab mujhe ek alag hi Khushi kyo milti hai ?

"Kyo ki khud DEVO KE DEV yaha vaas karte hai"

Kabir-Devo ke Dev yaani GODS of God. Yaani Supreme God. Par vo toh kisi aur realm mei rehte hai jaha par aise hi nahi jaya jaa sakta hai toh mei yaha kaise aa sakta hu ?

"Yeh toh Khud MAHADEV hi jaane."

Kabir-MAHADEV !

"Ha Kabir yeh jo tum parvat dekh rahe ho na isse Kailash kehte hai aur ispar vaas karte hai MAHADEV. Jo sab ke hai aur kisi ke bhi nahi. Agar sachhe dil se bulaoge toh vo tum jaha ho waha aa jayenge. Bhole hai mere Mahadev."

Tabhi Kabir ko consciousness waha se jaane lag gayi. Jaise hi usse yeh pata chala waise hi Kabir ne us ladke ko palat kar pucha.

Kabir-Aap hai koun yeh toh batayiye ?

"Mein koun hu. Mein toh in gaayo ka charwaha hu. Waise toh mere kayi naam hai par mere karibi mujhe GOVIND kehte hai."

Jaise hi us ladke ne yeh kaha waise hi Kabir ki consciousness return aa gayi thi.


Abhi morning hone lag gayi thi Kabir kuch der pehle jo hua uske hi baremein soche jaa raha tha.


Uska yeh din aisa hi chala gaya. Usne apni sword practice ki aur phir Dragon Martial Temple se nikal kar vo apne friends se milne chala gaya.
Wow bhai maza aa gaya story padhake bhai yeh sabase achchhi storyverse banane ja rahi hain bhai







Waiting for new update bhai
 

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Pehly to sorry itny dinnon bd comment krny k liy. Meiny aj he sary updates parhy hain.
Wasy to meiny abi ya update parhni ha is liy pta ni k kasi ha so us py 'no comment'.

Lakin ap aik kam kr sakty hain k ap conversation ya wasy English use nh kiya kery jasy k

Headmaster of Western Campus

Wasy to english mein koi problem ni ha ap use kryn lakin is tarh wali ni. Sirf words. Ku k words to aj kal hamari daily conversation ka part bn gy hain lakin asy sentence parhny ka flow khatm kr dyty hain. Baki sb ka mujy pta ni lakin mery sath to asa he hota ha jasy k ap likhty hain 'price of square commandary' aur abi wala 'Headmaster of Western Campus', "'usse as a apna student accept karta hu''' asy he aur bhot sy. Plzzz ya kam use kryn.
And sorry itni c bt k liy itna lamba comment type kr diya 😂
 
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