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Fantasy Gods and Demons

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Lovekillsyou

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Note- Update 177 hi 178 hain
 
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Xabhi

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Kaha hota hai bhai. Dekha mein ne morning se. Sabhi stereotypes bhare hue hai waha par. Koi bhi creator ki creativity ko samajh hi nahi paa raha hai. Jay bhai reply de nahi pate hai bas yeh baat hui upar se Jay bhai ne vo start kar diy jo koi kar nahi raha tha. Yaha ke almost har 2 story ka plot same hai. But Jay bhai ko story bilkul fresh hai. Unhone starting mei hi mentioned kiya hua hai ke yeh ek inspired hai but unhone apne points bhi add kiye hai. Jisne is story ko kaafi change kiya hai. Mein ne khud China mei 5 years nikale hai aur unke culture ko samjha hai. Pata bhi hai kitna headache hota hoga Jay bhai ko un chinese story mein se stereotypical monologue aur situation ko change karna aur kuch aisa create karna jo out of the box ho. Sorry agar aap ko yeh reply rude lag raha hai toh but as a reader of this gem I can't handle when someone says it's not upto worth it.
Bhai Mai kai forum me story pdhi hai or Bahut writer ka fan hu mujhe jaha pr bhi kuchh accha dikhta hai Ya milta hai Mai sajha kr deta hu sabhi ko

Maine sirf story ko padhne ko bola tha reader ke comment nhi reader ko just ignore them story padh kr kya anubhav hua aap Bs Uspr focus kariye

aapne jis way me btaya mujhe Bilkul bhi bura feel nhi hua

Jay Bhai se hme koi sikayat nhi hai or jisko Ho to Jay Bhai ne bola hai bold me apna apna question likh kr bhej do vo jvaab de denge
 

Rudrathakur

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Fabulous update...to kabir pr dragon Martial temple me hades department ke killers ne attack kr hi diya jisme wo baal baal hi bcha h agr use realize nhi hota sahi waqt pr to wo poisonous teer kabir ko bhed kr use ek dardnaak maut de skta h pr abhi aisa ho nhi paya sath me master situ ke sath wo dono killers bhi maare gye dekhte h ab bloody moon night ko kya bawandar machta h pr itna to h kabir ki security kabhi jyada hogi kyuki aaj ka attack usi pr hua h to headmaster koi kasar nhi chhodenge kabir ko safe rkhne me...wahi kabir bhi ab aur jyada alert rhega aur sath me khud ko aur bhi jyada strong bnana chahega jald se jald agr half saint essences ki 10 drop kabir ko jald hi mil jaati h to wo usko kafi jayada improve kr dengi fastly...wahi dina aur shreya me bhi lgta h ab sb thik h us fight ke baad se...pr dina ne abhi kabir ke revealtion ko mjaak me le liya agr wo gaur krti to bahut jyada shocked ho jati ...dekhte h aage kya hota h..ab to rati and maithili bhi dragon martial temple me hi rhengi shreya and dina ke sath dekhte h yaha kya kya hota h aakhir dina ke dil me bhi kabir ke liye kuchh kuchh hone lga h...
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Sorry jay bhai mai itne gap ke baad comment kar raha hu par kya Kari kaam mai phas sa gaya tha ke sirf story ko padh pata tha lekin comment nahi kar pata tha. Yeh story in mai se ek hai Jo mai apne ghar me sabhi ko padh kar batata hu. Meri Maa aur mere bhai Behan aap ke is story ke jaise diwane hai. Ab toh unhe bhi yahi rehta hai ke kab aap update de aur vo use soon sake.
 

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Well guys recently I notice ke mere update par jo reviews aate hai unhe mei relply nahi karta hu. Aisa nahi hai ke karna nahi chahta hu but mere paas time hi nahi reh pata hai update likhne ke baad so sorry for that. Agar kisi ko kisi bhi update mei koi sawal ho toh usse bold mei type kar dena. I will try my best ko answer it.
Peace ✌😊.
Okk bro
 

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UPDATE 141

Kabir abhi bhi aise hi dikha raha tha ke vo kaafi struggle kar raha hai 29th light dot ko stable rakhne ke liye.

Usne apne haat ko stone ke upar se hatate hue kaha.

Kabir-Deputy Headmaster mein ne apne full concentration ke saath sirf 29 light dots ko hi show kar paya.

Par jab yeh kehne ke baad usne apne sir ko utha kar dekha toh paya ke Deputy Headmaster Qin Hua aur Elder Jing usse kaafi shock ho kar dekh rahe the.

Usne palat kar baki students ko bhi dekha jo Deputy Headmaster aur Elder Jing se bhi zyada shock ho gaye the. Vo usse aise dekh rahe the jaise vo koi monster ho.

Kabir-Oh nahi!

Kabir ko yeh dekhte hi pata chal gaya ke kuch toh baat sahi nahi hai. Suddenly usse yeh samjhte der nahi lagi ke 10 Half-Saint's Essence drops ke chalte usne kuch zyada hi show kar diya hai.

Tabhi usne Luo Sihan ki dekha jo usse kaafi calmly dekh rahi thi. Uske face par ek smile thi aur usse yeh dekh kar jaise achha lag raha tha ke uske ancestor ke baad bhi koi aa gaya hai jiski vo apne dil se respect kar sakti hai.

Tabhi Elder Jing apne shock mei se bahar aate hai. Unhone apne dil se haste hue kaha.

"Great! Lagta hai Western Campus mei ek young incredible student aa gaya hai. Yeh sab dekh kar tumhara school rank 2 par nahi balki rank 1 par aa sakta hai."

Deputy Headmaster ko is baat par kaafi proud feel ho raha tha. Unhone kaha.

"Kabir yeh mein khud keh rahi hu ke mein khud school se vo Half-Saint's Essence ke 10 drops tumhe dungi."

Yeh baat sunkar Square Commandery Prince ko kaafi gussa aa raha tha. Is baar bhi vo Kabir ko outshine nahi kar paya ulta uske samne jaise usne khud ko hi medicore dikha diya tha. Usne Kabir ko dekhte hue apne aap se kaha.

"Yeh Hades Department ke assassin's kuch kar kyo nahi rahe hai ? Unhone ab tak is Kabir ko maar kyo nahi ha ?"

Usne yeh kehte hue apne fist ko tightly close kar liya.

Tabhi Deputy Headmaster ne kaha.

"Chalo hamne is test mei kaafi time waste kar diya hai. Ab tum sabhi Divine Power Palace mei jao aur haan tumhare paas sirf 2 hours hi hai. Is time ka kaafi achhe se use kar lena."

Iske saath hi sabhi 12 students ne Divine Power Palace mei enter kar liya.

Usmei jo 4 freshmen the unhe Divine Power Palace mei practice karna yeh kaafi exciting lag raha tha.

Sabhi kaafi shanti se Divine Power Palace mei enter karne lag gaye. Yeh kaafi rare chance tha unke liye palace mei enter karne ke liye. Vo kisi bhi tarah se apne is time ko waste nahi karna chahte the.

Palace ke first floor par 12 different directions mei 12 Golden Foil Paintings lagi hui thi.

Lin, Yachi aur do students ne palace mei enter karte hi apne apne choose kiye hue painting ke niche jaa kar baith gaye. Unke niche baith kar vo apni apni practice karne mei lag gaye.

Waise bhi yeh sabhi students pehle bhi Divine Power Palace mei aaye hue the. Unhe yaha ke sabhi ways pata the aur saath hi regulations bhi.

Kabir-12 Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph !

Kabir in paintings ko dekh kar kaafi shock tha. Yeh school kuch zyada hi wealthy hai. Yeh sirf external yard tha aur vo phir bhi yaha par 12 Half-Saint Sacred Glyphs students ko practice karne ke liye provide kar sakte the.

Kabir un glyphs ke paas gaya par paas se dekhne par usse kuch ajeeb laga.

Usse yeh 12 Half-Saint Sacred Glyphs authentic nahi lag rahe the. Usse yeh kisi Rubbing Scrolls ki tarah lag rahe the.

Kabir is baat sahi nikla yeh Rubbing Scrolls hi the.

Ek Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph us Half-Saint ke Martial Arts aur uske Spiritual Determination ko represent karta hai.

Students ko Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph ke Spiritual Determination ki help se apni Spiritual Power ko enhance kar sakte hai.

Of course agar unka luck achha raha toh vo un Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph mei se us Half-Saint ke Martial Arts ya phir kisi secret technique ko paa sakte hai as a list knowledge samajh kar.

Lekin wall par lagi paintings authentic nahi thi. Vo Rubbing Scrolls the jo Half-Saint's ke Spiritual Determination ko imitate kar sakte the unke Martial Arts ko nahi.

Is palace ka array yaha par lage Rubbing Scrolls mei Spiritual Qi ko transfer karta tha jo students ko us painting ke Half-Saint's Spiritual Determination ko show karta tha taki students apne Spiritual Power ko badha sake.

Is Half-Saint's Spiritual Determination ko 2 hours tak maintain karne ke liye palace ko 5,000 Spiritual Crystals ko use karna padta tha.

5,000 Spiritual Crystals means unki price 5 million silver coins ki thi.

Is liye school Divine Power Palace ko sirf month mei ek time ke liye hi open kiya jaa sakta tha.

Zina ne ek painting dekhi aur usse dekhte hi vo uske niche jaa kar baith gayi. Waha baith kar usne apni practice start kar di. Us glyph ke bottom left corny mei ek small sentence likha hua tha.

"Bloody Half-Saint's Spirit Glyph!"

Wahi us painting ke side mei hi wall par uski description likhi hui thi. Usmei likha tha ke yeh female warriors aur jo warriors speed aur slaughter type technique ki practice karte hai unke liye kaafi suitable hai.

Zina ki fighting style is description se perfectly match kar rahi thi. Uski fighting style bhi speed and slaughter ki thi. Isliye usne is painting ko apni Spiritual Power ki enhance karne ke liye pick kiya.

Square Commandery Prince aur Yachi bhi apne apne choose kiye hue painting ke niche jaa kar baith gaye.

Wahi Luo Sihan, Manzi, Shreya, Dina yeh sabhi second floor ki taraf jaane lag gaye. Jab Dina ne Kabir ko dekha toh usne usse apne piche aane ka ishara kiya.

Kabir uske ishare ko samajhte hue uske piche chala gaya.

Usne Kabir se kaafi halke aawaz mei kaha.

Dina-Jinki Spiritual Power ki level 20 ke niche hai unhe practice karne ke liye first floor hai. Wahi jinki Spiritual Power ki level 20 aur usse upar hai vo second floor par practice karte hai.

Kabir-Ham bhi Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph ke saath practice karenge ?

Dina-Divine Power Palace mei jo Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph hai vo sabhi authentic nahi hai. Yeh sabhi Rubbing Scrolls hai. Glyph ki Spiritual Determination is par depend hai ke ham kitni Spiritual Qi ko activate kar ke usmei transfer kar sakte hai. Although yaha ke sabhi glyphs Rubbing Scrolls hai par jo first floor par hai vo sirf students ke Spiritual Power ko level 20 tak hi badha sakti hai. Par jo second floor par 6 scrolls hai vo students ki Spiritual Power ko level 30 tak badha sakte hai. Aisa kehte hai me third floor par ek Saint level Sacred Glyph Rubbing Scroll hai but waha par sirf Luo Sihan hi practice kar sakti hai. Kyo ki sirf vo hi itni strong hai.

Kabir ne apne sir ko hilaya aur aage kuch nahi pucha.

Jab tak Dina aur Kabir second floor par aate tab tak Manzi ek Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph ke niche baith kar practice karne lag gaya tha. Divine Power Palace mei aa kar koi bhi time waste nahi karna chahta tha.

Shreya aur Dina bhi respectively Wind Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph aur Ice Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph ke niche baith kar apni practice karne lag gaye.

Kabir ne bhi sab dekh kar ek glyph ko choose kiya jismei 10 stars bane hue the aur unhe ek line mei connect kiya tha jaise vo koi pearls ki string ho.

Yeh dikhne mei kaafi ordinary painting thi. Agar yeh palace mei na hoti toh yeh koi bhi keh nahi sakta tha ke yeh ek Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph hai.

Kabir ne left bottom mei likhe line ko read kiya.

Kabir-Half-Saint of Sword ne apne True Thoughts ko piche choda hua hai.

Ismei likha hua har ek word full of power tha aisa jaise unhe kisi ne kisi metallic sword se carve kiya gaya ho.

Kabir us glyph ke niche baith gaya aur apne mind ko calm karne lag gaya.

Boom !

Yeh aawaz Kabir ke mind ke andar hui thi aur uske saath hi uske aankho ke samne ab darkness aa gayi thi.

Jab yeh darkness hati toh usne apne aap ko ek cold aur dark land mei paya. Uske sir ke upar hi 10 stars ek line mei float kar rahe the jaise ke us painting mei the.

Kabir-Kya yeh glyph ke andar ka world hai ?

Jaise hi Kabir ne is baat ko samjha waise hi uske face par ek smile aa gayi. Usse bilkul bhi dar nahi lag raha tha kyo ki apne past life mei vo ek baar aise hi ek glyph ke andar aa chuka tha. Usse yeh pata tha ke vo glyph ke andar physically nahi balki mentally aaya hua hai jo uske Spiritual Powers ki wajah se hua.

Boom !

Iske saath hi uske sir par jo 10 stars float ho rahe the unhone pure aasman ki bright kar diya tha aur phir light beams ban kar Kabir ke upar shine hone lag gaye.

Suddenly Kabir ko apne upar weight feel hone lag gaya aur yeh weight usse har light beam ke hit karne ke baad badhta jaa raha tha. Jab sabhi 10 light beams ne jab Kabir ko hit kiya tab Kabir ko aisa feel hua jaise 10 kaafi bade mountains uspar daal diye gaye ho.

Kabir-Kaafi powerful Spiritual Determination hai.

Kabir ne apne pairo ko ground par kaafi firmly rakha hua tha. Uske ghutne halke bend ho gaye the pressure ke wajah se. Yeh itna unimaginably heavy tha ke Kabir ke pair ground ke andar jaane lag gaye the.

Jaise hi Kabir ne apne aap ko stabilize kiya waise hi uske saamne kuch duri par white robe pehne hue ek person aaya. Uske haato mei mei ek sword thi aur suddenly uske saath us person ne Kabir par attack kar diya.

Us person ne Kabir par apne sword se straight way mei attack kiya. Uske is attack se waha par thousands of sword shadows ban gayi.

Vo sabhi shadows merge ho kar ek white light sword mei change ho gayi aur usne Kabir ke heart ki taraf attack kar diya.

Yeh dekhte hi Kabir ne bhi apne haat mei apne Spiritual Power se ek sword create ki aur us white light sword par apne sword se attack kar diya.

Boom !

Jaise hi dono sword aapas mei clash hui waise hi waha par ek halka blast ho gaya.

Vo white light sword destroy hokar ab ek smoke mei change ho gayi.

Yeh dekh kar us person ke face par ek smile aayi aur usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Tumne 10 stars ke pressure ke under hote hue bhi ek sword ko create kiya aur mere attack ko destroy kar diya. Tumhari Spiritual Power at least level 30 par hai. Yeh Rubbing Scroll tumhe aage help nahi kar sakta hai. Tumhe yaha se nikalna hoga."

Iske saath hi ek white light Kabir ke aankho ke samne flash hui aur us light ne Kabir ke Spiritual Power ko us glyph se bahar nikal diya.

"Tumhari Spiritual Power ki level 30 par aa gayi hai lagta hai."

Yeh sweet aur melodious aawaz Kabir ke piche se aayi thi.

Yeh aawaz sunte hi Kabir ne palat kar dekha toh Luo Sihan uske piche khade reh kar vo jis painting ke niche baitha tha usse dekh rahi thi.

Kabir apni jagah par khada hua aur usne Luo Sihan ko respect ke saath kaha.

Kabir-Greetings Sister Sihan.

Luo Sihan ne Kabir ki aankho mei dekhte hue usse kaha.

Luo Sihan-Mein janti thi ke jab tum second time apne Spiritual Power ko test karne gaye the tabhi bhi tumne apne full capabilities ko nahi dikhaya tha. Ab mein kaafi curious hu ke tumhari exact level kya hai ?

Yeh sunkar Kabir ne halke se haste hue apne sir ko naa mei hilaya aur kaha.

Kabir-Lagta hai mei Sister Sihan se kuch nahi chupa sakta hu.

Luo Sihan-Mere piche aau Divine Power Palace ke third floor par.

Yeh keh kar Luo Sihan Divine Power Palace ke third floor ki taraf chali gayi. Yeh dekh kar Kabir bhi uske piche jaane lag gaya.

Kabir-Mein ne suna hai ke third floor par sirf Sister Sihan hi jaa sakti hai.

Luo Sihan-Toh kya tumhe pata hai aisa kyu hai ?

Kabir-Kyo ?

Luo Sihan- Kyo ki waha par ek authentic Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph hai. Jisse mein ne apne saath yaha laya gha Luo household se.

Kabir ke pair jaha the wahi ruk gaye. Usne kaafi calmly hote hue kaha.

Kabir-Agar Sister Sihan ne is Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph ko apne household se laya hua hai toh yeh Sister Sihan ka personal treasures hai. Mera waha jana thik nahi hoga.

Luo Sihan ne palat kar Kabir ki aankho mei dekha.

Luo Sihan-Kabir tumhe ek baat samjhni hogi ke yeh mera personal treasures hai toh mere paas itni authority toh hai ke mei jisse chahu uske saath us glyph ke saath practice kar sakti hu. Pure Western Campus mei iske liye sirf tum hi qualified hue ho.

Kabir-Well Sister Sihan ne mujhe iske liye worthy samjha yahi baat mere liye kaafi hai.

Jab vo dono third floor par aaye wais hi unh waha par wall ke bich mei hi ek Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph laga hua dikha.

Although vo bhi dikhne mei niche ke floors par lage paintings ki tarah hi lag raha tha par phir bhi uske aura mei ek ajeeb baat thi.. Kabir us glyph ke sirf paas kadhe hone se hi usse nikalne wale pressure ko feel kar sakta tha. Yeh pressure itna powerful tha ke kuch pal ke liye vo thik se saans tak nahi le paa raha tha.

Kabir us pressure mei bhi is Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph tak chal kar gaya. Usne apne sir ko utha kar us glyph ki details ko dekhne lag gaya. Us Half-Saint's Sacred Glyph mei kaafi saare water currents banaye hue the. Kuch creeks jo aage jaakar brooks ko mil rahi thi, brooks jo rivers ko, rivers streams ko aur streams aage jaa kar ek bade se ocean ko mil rahe the.

Usmei at least thousands of creeks the, hundreds of brooks, tens of rivers aur nine streams ke saath ek bada ocean.

Sabhi nine streams ocean se milne se pehel merge ho rahi thi aur phir ocean se mil rahi thi.

Luo Sihan-Is glyph jo mere ancestor Luo Su jab Half-Saint realm mei break through kar gaye the tab unhone isse banaya tha. Kaha jata hai ke ismei na sirf unki Spiritual Determination hai balki unka powerful Martial Arts bhi hai. Unfortunately Luo family ke kaafi saare geniuses ne last 200 years mei kaafi kuch try kar ke dekha par unhe ancestor Luo ke martial arts ke baremain kuch bhi pata nahi chal paya.


Yeh baat Luo Sihan ne kaafi low tone mei kahi thi.
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UPDATE 143

Dina ne apne gusse ko calm kiya aur ek gehri saans chod kar Kabir ko kaha.

Dina-Quarterly assessment sirf 2 months par aa gayi hai. Ismei 2 rounds hote hai. First round mei sabhi external houses ke bich ek tournament hoti hai. Wahi second round mein Western Campus ke andar Ranking Evaluation hoti hai. Tum is sab ke liye confident ho ?

Kabir-Confident, kis liye ?

Dina-Tum is year ke No-1 freshmen of Western Campus ho. Yeh tumhari responsibility hai ke tumhe Western Campus ke honor ke liye fight karna hoga. Agar tumne hamare campus ke freshmen ko lead karte hue baki 3 no campuses ko beat kar diya toh tumhe surely kaafi merit rewards mil sakte hai.

Tabhi Black No-1 ke gate se Sherya, Rati aur Maithili andar aaye. Shreya ne andar aate hue sab sun liya tha isliye usne ek cold tone mei kaha.

Shreya-Although tum Western Campus ke talented freshmen ho par tumhari practical ability best nahi hai. Waise bhi baki ke 3 campuses mei bhi kaafi countless geniuses hai. In sabhi ke bich tumhe lagta hai tum 4 campuses mei No-1 ban sakte ho.

Par Kabir toh halka surprise hote hue Rati aur Maithili ko dekh raha tha. Usne waise hi Dina ki taraf dekha.

Dina-Meri taraf mat dekho mei toh tumhe yahi batane aayi thi par tumne hi mujhe gussa dilaya is liye mein ne tumhe yeh baat nahi batayi. Waise bhi yeh sab Sister Shreya ne kiya hai after all vo Headmaster ki disciple jo hai. Uske kehne par hi Rati aur Maithili ko unhone Dragon Martial Temple mei rehne ke liye allow kiya.

Shreya-Mujhe tum par trust nahi hai. Kahi tum in dono ke piche unhe cheat na kar sako is liye mein ne hi unhe yaha laya hai. Ab se Dina ke saath Rati aur mere saath Maithili rahegi.

Yeh keh kar Shreya Kabir ke samne aayi aur usne ek small jade bottle nikal kar usse Kabir ko dete hue kaha.

Shreya-Pervert! Yeh Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop hai. Isse lo aur mujhe bhi ek space treasure chahiye.

Kabir ne ek baat us small jade bottle ko dekha aur uske baad usne Shreya ki taraf dekha jo usse ek cold look ke saath dekh rahi thi. Usse Shreya ka aisa uske liye jo attitude tha vo bilkul bhi achha nahi laga tha. Usne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue kaha.

Kabir-Sorry Senior Shreya Deputy Headmaster mujhe Half-Saint's Essence ke 10 drops dene wali hai toh abhi ke liye mein shortage mei nahi hu.

Waise bhi Kabir ne pehle hi Shreya ko bhi ek Space Treasure dene ke baremain soch liya tha. Yeh uske aur Shreya ke bich hui first time ke misunderstanding ke liye tha. Par abhi ke uske attitude ko dekh kar usne apne mind ko change kar liya tha.

Wahi Shreya be jab yeh suna tab usne apne Royal blue aankho ko bada kiya aur ek cold look ke saath usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

Shreya-Toh yeh Dina tumhe ek Half-Saint's Essence ka drop de kar space treasure le sakti hai par mein nahi ? Lagta hai in kuch dino mei saath saath reh kar kaafi close aa gaye ho tum dono. Chodo in baato ko aur ba batao inki price kya hogi ?

Dina ko dar tha ke Shreya phir se kuch misunderstood na kar baithe is liye vo apne aankho se Kabir ko ishare kar rahi thi.

Lekin Kabir aise behave kar raha tha ke jaise usne uske isharo ko dekha hi nahi hai. Usne kaha.

Kabir-5 million silver coins. Usse kam nahi.

Kabir ki baat ko sunkar Shreya be apni sword nikali aur directly Kabir ke neck ki taraf point karte hue usne kaha.

Shreya-Phir se kehna.

Kabir ne usne is behaviour ko ignore karte hue Shreya ki aankho mei dekhte hue kaha.

Kabir-5 million silver coins. Usse kam bilkul bhi nahi.

Wahi Rati aur Maithili piche khadi reh kar yeh sab kuch hota hua dekh rahe the. Unhe pata tha ke Kabir ko aise attitude bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta tha jab koi kisi ko bina kisi reason ke apne se kam samajh le. Is mamle mei vo bhi kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Shreya ko kaafi gussa aa raha tha, uska temper kaafi short tha jo Kabir ke baato se badh gaya tha.

Shreya-Ab mujhe sab kuch pata chal gaya hai ke kyo us waqt Dina ne tumhe mujh s bachaya tha. Tum dono kaafi pehle se mile hue ho. Agar aisi baat hai toh mein tumhe us raat jo hua uske liye abhi punish karti hu.

Originally Shreya ne bhi yahi socha tha ke vo Kabir ko is Half-Saint's Essence ka ek drop de kar uske aur Kabir ke relation ko thik karegi.

Par jab usse pata chala tha ke Kabir uske bestfriend ke saath reh raha hai toh usse yeh bilkul bhi achha nahi laga tha. Tabhi usne yeh socha tha ke vo Rati aur Maithili ko Kabir ka real face dikhayegi.

Yaha Shreya ne gusse mei Kabir par apne sword ko swing kiya.

Kabir is sudden hue attack ke liye ready nahi tha aur halka shock bhi ho gaya. Usne immediately ek step piche liya aur Shreya ke sword swing kk dodge kiya.

Par Shreya jaise aaj Kabir ko chodne ke mood mei nahi thi. Usne sword breath ke saath Kabir par straight way mei strike kiya.

Boom!

Dina ne bhi apne sword ko nikala aur usse Shreya ke sword strike ko usne counter kiya.

Dina-Sister Shreya pehle calm ho jaao aur meri baat suno....

Par Dina ko aise bich mei move karte dekh kar Shreya ka gussa aur bhi badh gaya. Usne gusse mei kaafi saare sword moves ko use kiya jisse waha par ek sword breath ka vortex ban gaya tha.

Shreya-Dina aaj se phele hamne kabhi battle nahi ki hai. Toh kyu na aaj yeh dekh hi lete hai ke ham dono mei se koun stronger hai.

Apne long hairs jo hawa ke wajah se fly ho rahe the Shreya ne kaafi gracefully Dina ko apne sword breath vortex ke andar le liya.

Boom!

Do sword breaths ek dusre se clash ho rahi thi aur unhone upar roof mei ek bada hole kar diya tha.

Us hole mei se yeh dono hi ladkiya bahar nikal kar upar chali gayi. Un dono ki swords abhi bhi aapas mei clash ho rahi thi. Dono waha se ek Wall par battle karte hue aage chali gayi.

Kuch der baar sword ke clash hone ki aawaz shant ho gayi. Par piche yaha room ab phir se destroy ho gaya tha. Waha par Kabir Rati aur Maithili khade the jo us room ki halat dekh rahe the.

Kabir-Senior Shreya kaafi short tempered hai. Jaha bhi jaati hai kuch na kuch destroy zaroor kar deti hai. Lagta hai ab hame phir se new room ki zaroorat padne wali hai.

Suddenly Kabir ne ek murderous feeling ko sense kiya. Ek pal mei hi Kabir kaafi alert sa ho gaya tha.

Tabhi Kabir ne apne samne ki taraf ek jump lagayi aur Rati aur Maithili ko apne dono haato se niche girate hue niche so gaya.

Tabhi ke poisonous arrow Kabir ke neck k side se waha par halka scratch kart hue wall se hote hue aage chala gaya.

Ek pal mei hi jaha par scratch laga hua tha waha ki skinn dark purple ho gayi.

Kabir ne jhat se ek Detoxification Pill nikal kar kha li.

Vo murderous sense abhi bhi chala nahi gaya tha. Kisi viper ki tarah dark area mei chup kar baitha hua tha jaise kisi bhi moment par vo phir se strike kar dega.

Kabir ne ab tak Purifying Jade Genuine qi tak ko practice kar liya tha jo bohot se poisons ko purify kar sakti thi. Par is green arrow par jo poison laga hua tha vo kaafi special tha. Yeh kaafi powerful poison tha jiss kabir ne abhi ke liye suppress kar ke apne body mei failne se rok diya tha.

Kabir ne ishare se hi Rati aur Maithili ko aise hi jhuk kar waha se bahar chale jaane ke liye kaha.

Kabir-Lagta hai Hades Department ke assassin's aa gaye hai.

Kabir waise hi niche pade raha aur usne apne Space Domain ko release kar diya.

Space Domain ke andar Kabir 2 assassin's ke aura ko detect kar sakta tha. Ek usse kuch 7 meters ki duri par chupa hua tha.

Wahi ek isse kaafi dur trees ke leave ke piche chupi hui thi. Agar Kabir ke paas Space Domain na hota toh vo iske baremain kabhi bhi pata nahi kar pata.

Kabir-2 assassins ek paas ek dur.

Kabir unke martial cultivation ko bhi sense kar sakta tha. Yeh dono ho Black Realm ke Completion Stage mei the. Un dono ki Genuine qi kaafi strong thi aur dono hi Kabir ko maarne ki capabilities rakhte the.

Kabir-Kya coincidence hai ke jab mein Divine Power Palace mei se practice kar ke bahar aaya waise hi inhone attack kar diya. Yaani Zina ko chod kar yaha par aur bhi Hades Department ke assassin's hai. Shayad un 12 students mei se koi ho sakte hai jo mere saath Divine Power Palace mei practice kar rahe the. Par koun ?

Kabir ne socha ke yeh situation kaafi critical hai usse kuch ulta hone se pehle hi is baremein kuch karna hoga.

Kabir-Agar Senior Dina abhi mere saath hoti toh mein in assassin's ka kuch kar toh pata par suddenly Senior Shreya aa gayi aur usse le gayi. Uske baad hi yeh assassin's aaye hai. Yeh toh koi coincidence nahi ho sakta hai. Kahi yeh Shreya bhi Hades Department se toh nahi hai na. Par aisa kaise ho sakta hai vo toh....

Kabir ne apne sir ko jhatak kar apne breath ko rok liya aur Space Domain ke power ke saath apne aura ko cover kar liya.

Uska abhi ke liye sabse bada greatest advantage yeh tha ke vo in dono assassin's ko locate kar sakta tha.

Isse vo apne paas mei jo assassin tha pehle usse maar sakta tha. Uske baad vo dur wali assassin ko marta.

Yeh dono assassin's hi Black Realm ke Completion Stage par the jo Kabir se kaafi powerful the. Unmei se ek ko bhi marna abhi ke liye Kabir ko kaafi hard jane wala tha. Toh aise mei vo dono ko kaise marta ?

Tabhi usse apne Space Domain mei Yuyan ko sense kiya.

Usme library se aur do books ko issue kiya tha. Vo un books mei se ek ko read karte hue room ke andar aa rahi thi. Yuyan ko uske aaspas do assassins hai is baremein pata bhi nahi tha. Tabhi uski nazar niche pade Kabir par gayi jo usse dekh raha tha aur kuch ishara kar raha tha.

Tabhi apne Genuine qi ko help se Kabir ne Yuyan ke mind mei ek message bheja. Yuyan ne phir ek taraf dekha.

Yuyan-Kaafi professional assassins hai yeh toh. Inke apne aap ko chupane ke liye credit toh dena chahiye. Agar carefully na dekho toh inh dhund pana impossible nahi. Par ab show start hoga.

Yeh keh kar Yuyan waha se kahi gayab ho gayi.

Ab Yuyan ke help ke saath Kabir kaafi confident tha.

Weapon of Thunderbolts !

Kabir ke Divine Soul ka nature same time par Space-time aur thunderbolt ka tha.

Apne Genuine qi ko activate karne ke baad Kabir ne 25 meters ke area mei jitni bhi Spiritual Qi thi usse merge kiya aur group of sparks ko create kiya.

Vo sabhi small sparks ek dusre se merge hone lag gaye aur ab strong ban gaye the.

Boom !

Suddenly jo assassin 7 meters ki duri par tha uske upar thunderbolt flash hua.

Aise sudden hue attack ki wajah se vo assassin seriously injured ho gaya tha. Uski body tak thodi bohot jal gayi thi aur uske muu se blood bhi nikal raha tha.


"Yeh thunderbolt suddenly kaha se aa gaya ?"

Killer abhi bhi shock tha ke yeh hua kaise par situation ko dekh kar usne waha se nikal jana hi thik samjha.

Boom !

Kabir ne us killer ko ek wall ki taraf zor se push kiya aur apne Flash Shining Sword ko us killer ke maathe ke center ki taraf point karte hue usse straight way mei strike kiya.

Par yeh killer jisne black clothes phene hue the vo Kabir ke sword strike se bhi fast aur nimble tha. Jaise hi usse sword ke wind ka sound sunayi diya waise hi usne kuch step piche ho gaya.

Kabir ne apne sword ko wave kiya aur us killer ke neck ke part par jo black clothe tha waha par ek cut aa gaya.

Us killer ne jaldi se apne neck ko touch kiya aur paya ke uska sir abhi bhi uske body se attach hai. Usne Kabir ko dekhte hue pucha.

"Tum mei kuch toh superiorities toh hai. Tum first rank bilkul deserve karte ho. Toh kya tum mujhe yeh bata sakte ho ke yeh thunderbolt bich mei kaise aaya ?"

Kabir janta tha ke yeh killer bas time nikal raha hai apne saathi ka uspar attack karne tak ke liye. Kabir ne phir se apne sword ko wave kiya aur kaha.

Kabir-Hell mei jaa kar uske king ko puchna ?

"Hump! Tum sirf ek freshmen ho jo sirf Black Realm ke Advance Stage par hai. Tum ek aise person ko marna chahte ho jo Black Realm ke Completion Stage par hai aur tumse strong hai. Tum had se zyada arrogant ho gaye ho."

Ek cold look ke saath us killer ne apne sleeves mei se ek kaafi thin sword nikali.

Fish intenstine sword hidden in sleev.

Ek glittering flashlight ke saath us killer ne apne sword se Kabir ke heart ki taraf strike kiya.

Us killer ke attack ki speed almost 50 meters per second ki thi aur uski sword ek pal mei hi Kabir ke heart ke paas aa gayi thi.

Jaise hi us killer ko laga ke ab vo Kabir ko maar dega tabhi Kabir ke samne jo space tha vo distort ho gaya. Us sword ne Kabir ke heart se direction change kar ke uske haat ko scratch karte hue nikal gayi.

"Yeh kais ho sakta hai ? Nahi."

Yeh killer abhi hua kya yeh samajh hi nahi paya.

Jab bhi do martial arts masters ek dusre ke saath fight karte hai tab ek little mistake bhi jaan gawane ke liye kaafi hoti hai.

Tabhi Kabir ne sword se us killer ke ankle par strike kiya aur usse injured kar diya.

Uske baad Kabir is killer ke piche aaya aur apne do fingers ko uske Sacred Meridian ki taraf point karte hue uske spine tak ko cut kar diya.

Us killer ki Sacred Meridian break ho gayi aur uska cultivation destroy ho gaya.

Vo killer wahi ground par gir gaya.

Abhi Kabir ke paas yeh bilkul bhi time nahi tha dekhne ke liye ke in black clothe mei jo killer hai vo koun hai. Kabir ne ek high area se apne Flash Shining Sword ke saath jump laga di aur waise hi usne kuch 40 meters tak ke distance ko cover kar liya. Kabir us taraf badh raha tha jaha dusri killer thi.

Vo killer ek bade pine tree ke leaves mei chupi hui thi. Par jab usne Kabir ko uski taraf badhte hue dekha toh usse kaafi shock laga.

"Isse kaise pata chala ke mein yaha par hu."

Us female killer ne apne back se do green long poison arrows nikale aue unhe apne bow par rakh kar usse ek full moon mei strech kar diya.

Vo apne archery par kaafi confident thi. Even jo warrior Black Realm ke Completion Stage par ho vo bhi is attack se 40 meters ke kam distance par bach nahi sakta tha.

"Suno!"

Tabhi us female killer ko apne piche se ek aawaz sunayi di.

Suddenly ek fire energy ball uske aankho ke samne flash hua.

Yeh koi aur nahi balki Yuyan thi. Usne apne haat ko ek baar wave kiya. Uske aisa karte hi us female killer ka right haat cut ho gaya aur us tree se niche gir gaya.

Yuyan ne apne haat ko is tarah wave kiya tha ke uska haat hi koi sword ho. Uske is attack ki wajah se us female killer ke right haat ki kalaayi cut ho gayi thi. Waha se nikal rahe blood ne uske pure clothes ko bhiga diya tha.

Boom!

Niche Kabir ne ek hi strike mei vo female killer jis pine tree par thi us tree ko hi cut kar diya tha. Jisse vo female killer waha se niche gir gayi.

Vo female killer kuch 20 meter ki height se ground par kaafi heavily gir gayi thi par phir bhi vo waha se bhagne ke liye try karne lag gayi. Par tabhi usse feel hua ke ek cold sword tip uske sir ki taraf point kar ke hai.

Kabir-Abhi bhi bhagna hai tumhe ?

Yeh keh kar Kabir ne us female killer ke face par se us black clothe ko hata diya aur uske face ko dekha.

Kabir-Tum!

Kabir us female killer ke face ko dekh kar kaafi shock tha kyo ki yeh koi aur nahi balki Lin thi. Jo Western Campus 6 years pehle first ranker thi.

Lin ne apne teeth's ko tightly bhinch liya aur ho rahe pain ke saath usne Yuyan ki taraf dekha jo usse kuch hi duri par hawa mei ud rahi thi. Lin Yuan ki aankho mei clearly coldness dekh sakti thi. Phir usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Mein ne yeh expect nahi kiya tha ke tumhara kisi spirit ke saath contract hai. Lagta hai hamne tumhe weak samajh ne ki bhul kar di."

Par Yuyan ko usse contract spirit kaha jana bilkul bhi achha nahi lag raha tha.

Yuyan-Contract Spirit kise keh rahi ho ladki mein Fire Spiritual Goddess hu. Mein is world mei tab se jab tumhare ancestors bhi born nahi hue honge.

Kabir-Mujhe batao ke is Western Campus mei aur kitne Hades Department ke killers hai ?

"Kabir tumne mujhe kaafi kam aankh liya hai."

Boom!

Suddenly Lin ke pairo ke niche se ek 5 meter ki blood wave ne apna shape le liya. Yeh dekh kar Kabir aur Yuyan dono hi shock ho gaye.

"Go to hell!"

Suddenly Lin ne apne sleeves mei se ek kaafi thin sword nikali aur usse Kabir ke maathe ke center mei point karte hue strike kar diya.

Yeh strike kaafi fast tha.

Kabir hardly kisi technique ko clearly dekh paa raha tha.

Kabir-Lagta hai mein ne hi in logo ko kam samjhne ki bhul kar di hai. After all Lin bhi 6 years pehle first ranker reh chuki hai aur uska cultivation bhi profound hoga. Even agar vo Division Profound ki warrior na bhi hui toh bhi vo unse weak toh bilkul bhi nahi thi.

Kabir ne quickly apne Genuine qi ko apne body mei circulate kiya aur phir se Space warp ke power ke liye ready ho gaya.

Par tabhi kisi ke body mei sword ke ghusne ki aawaz aayi.

Lin ki body ek baar ke liye shake hui aur phir se niche ground par gir gayi. Uski aankhe abhi bhi Kabir ko dekh rahi thi.

Lin ke piche se Shreya apne sword ko uske back se nikal rahi thi. Usne ek apne sword ko nikalte hue kaafi cold tone mei baat kahi.

Shreya-Lagta hai Hades Department ke killer apne aap ko kaafi bada samjhne mag gaye hai. Inki himmat itni badh gayi hai ke yeh an Dragon Martial Temple ke andar aa kar bhi logo ko marne ke baremain soch rahe hai.

Kabir niche giri hui Lin ko dekh raha tha. Shreya ka sword strike kaafi precise tha. Uski sword Lin ke heart ke aarpar ho gayi thi.

Kabir ne Shreya ko dekhte hue kaha.

Kabir-Tumne isse mara kyo ?

Wahi Shreya is baat se bilkul bhi khush nahi hui aur usne kaha.

Shreya-Agar mei usse nahi Marti toh tum abhi mare pade hote yaha. Kya abhi tum uske sword strike ko dodge kar sakte the ?

Kabir-Are tum uske Sacred Meridian ko break kar ke uske cultivation ko destroy kar sakti thi. Usse marne ki kya zaroorat thi ? Kya pata hame usse kuch information mil jaati ke yaha aur koun koun Hades Department se hai.

Par Shreya ne Kabir ke is baat par haste hue kaha.

Shreya-Tumhe kya lagta hai ke yeh Hades Department ke killers tumhe kuch information de sakte the.

Yeh keh kar Shreya ne apne sword ko uske sheath mei rakh diya aur waha se jaane lag gayi.

Kabir abhi bhi Shreya ko jaate hue dekh raha tha. Tabhi uske side mei Dina aayi.

Dina-Kya soch rahe ho ?

Kabir ne Dina ko apne side mei dekha aur kaha.

Kabir-Nahi! Kuch nahi.

Dina-Kahi tum yeh toh nahi soch rahe ho ke Sister Shreya bhi koi Hades Department se hai ?

Kabir-Nahi mein aisa kuch bhi nahi soch raha tha. Bas yeh sab mujhe kuch zyada hi coincidental lag raha hai.

Dina-Yeh toh hai. Par tumhe mein bata du ke tum bilkul bhi mat sochna ke vo Hades Department hai.

Kabir-Kyo ?

Dina-First baat toh yeh ke Hades Department ne pure Western Prefecture mei kaafi crimes ko kar rakha hai. Second yeh killers log bante hi hai wealth ke liye aur Sister Shreya ke paar paise ki koi kami nahi hai na kisi practice resources ki kami hai. Kya tumhe pata hai ke Sister Shreya ki real identity kya hai ?

Kabir abhi bhi samne dekh raha tha aur usne waise hi answer kiya.

Kabir-Haan! Janta hu Senior Shreya ki second identity Superior Commandery ke Princess ki hai. Waise mein unke Commandery ke baremein bhi bohot kuch janta hu saath mei mein Senior Dina ke baremain bhi bohot kuch janta hu.

Jab Kabir ne last line kahi toh kuch pal ke liye Dina ke face par ek halka sa dar aa gaya tha. Par jaldi hi usse laga ke Kabir mazak kar raha hai. Lekin usse kaha pata tha ke Kabir ko uski bhi real identity kya hai yeh pata thi.

Dina-Tum itne serious waqt par bhi achha mazak kar lete ho.

Kabir ne phir Dina ki dekha aur smile karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Vo toh hai. Waise Senior Shreya kaafi short tempered hai. Jo bilkul bhi kisi Princess ki tarah nahi lagta hai.

Dina-Sister Shreya ka character kaafi straight forward hai. Unhe kuch bhi dil mei chupana nahi aata hai. Agar tum bhi uske saath kaafi waqt tak rahoge toh tum bhi samjh jaoge ke vo dil se kaafi achhi hai.

Kabir palat kar Black No-1 ki taraf badh gaya jaha usne ek killer ko waise hi zinda chod diya tha.

Par jab Kabir waha pohocha toh usne dekha ke us killer ko bhi kisi ne maar diya hai.

Kabir-Yeh kisi ke strong palm stike ke wajah se mar gaya hai. Us strike ne iske heart ko hi destroy kar diya hai.

Kabir ne us killer ke heart par apna haat rakh kar dekha aur yeh baat kahi thi.

Dina bhi tab tak waha aa gayi thi aur usne yeh dekh kar kaha

Dina-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Ham yaha se sirf kuch 30-40 meters ke distance par the. Koi bina apne traces chode yeh kaise kar sakta hai ?

Kabir ne kaafi serious hote hue kaha.

Kabir-Yeh jo koi bhi tha uska cultivation zaroor Earth Realm ke Completion Stage par hai ya phir Heaven Realm mei.

Yeh sunte hi Dina ne kaha.

Dina-Itna dangerous killer Western Campus mei ghum raha hai hame jaldi ae Western Campus ke Headmaster ko is baremein batana hoga.

Tabhi unhe ek aawaz sunayi di.

"Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Badi fish jaal mei phas gayi hai."

Un dono se kuch hi duri par se Headmaster ek jagah se bahar aaye. Unke face par ek smile thi.

Kabir-Koun hai vo ?

Is baat kar Headmaster ne ek taraf dekha jaha par stones se kuch art banaye hue the. Us taraf dekhte hue Headmaster ne kaha.

"Apne aap ko kyo chupa rahe hai aap. Bahar aa kar aap sabhi ko apna face kyo nahi dikha dete hai Elder Situ ?

Tabhi stone statue ke piche se ek black clothe pehna hua person bahar aaya aur usne ek cold tone baat kahi.

"Headmaster aap kaafi sharp minded person hai. Aapne janbhuj kar is Kabir se milkar hame bahar nikala kyo ?

"Well mein ne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Par tum unke leaders mei se ek ho. Agar ham tumhe chatch kar sakte hai toh bakiyo ko bhi catch kar sakte hai."

Ab jab sabhi ko Elder Situ ke identity ke baremain pata chal gaya tha toh unhone apne upar se us black clothe ko hata diya aur apne skinny old face ko show kiya. Vo kaafi sharp aur cold look ke saath Headmaster ko dekh rahe the.

"Headmaster mein ne pata nahi last kitney years se aap ko fight karte hue nahi dekha hai. Mein yeh soch raha tha ke aap ka present cultivation kya hai."

Yeh kehte hue Elder Situ ne apne robe mei se do crimson spears nikale. Uske baad unke inscriptions ko apne Genuine qi se activate karte hue unhone ek 266 cm long Blood Dripping Spear banaya.

Vo spear kisi blood ki tarah crimson tha.

Jab bhi vo us long spear ko wave karte ho aisa lagta ke blood ka waterfall ho raha hai.

Elder Situ ne apne flaming Genuine qi se un spears ko pura cover kar liya tha.

Un spear ki heat ne aaspas ke area ke temperature tak ko badha diya tha.

Jab sabhi ko laga ke Elder Situ aur Headmaster ke bich ab ek duel hogi tabhi Elder Situ ne Kabir ki taraf dekha aur apne long spear se unhone Kabir par strike kar diya.

Vo 266 cm long Blood Dripping Spear kisi flaming arrow ki tarah Kabir ki taraf kaafi speed se badh raha tha.

Tabhi Elder Situ ne ek step right mei liya aur ek high jump laga di. Vo hawa mei kisi giant bird ki tarah lag rahe the jo ab tak dozens of meters cross kar gaye the. Tabhi vo Dragon Martial Temple ke wall par aaye aur unhone waha se bhi ek high jump laga di.

Elder Situ ko pata tha ke vo Headmaster ko beat nahi kar sakte hai. Par Kabir jaise unke weak spot par tha. Jab tak Headmaster Kabir ko bachane mei lage rahenge tab tak unke paas ek chance tha waha se bhaag nikalne ka.

Wahi jab vo crimson spear Kabir ki taraf badh raha tha tab usne quickly kuch step piche le liye.

Par bich mei hi Headmaster ne us spear ko pakad liya aur usse ghuma kar us taraf phek diya jis taraf se Elder Situ bhaag gaye the. Unke spear ko phekne ka force itna tha ke usne sound barrier tak ko break kar diya tha.

Boom!

Tabhi dur se sabhi ko ek cheenkh sunayi di.

Sabhi yeh dekh sakte the ke us spear ne Dragon Martial Temple ke walls tak ko destroy kar diya aur waha par ab ek bada sa hole ho gaya hai. Us hole mei se sabhi ne dekha ke kaise Elder Situ jaise powerful warrior bhi Headmaster ke ek strike mei maare gaye the. Jo Headmaster ke real strength ka jaise drop tha.

Jab Headmaster ne Kabir ke neck par injury dekhi tab unhone ek bottle mei se medicine nikal kar usse Kabir ko dete hue kaha.

"Tumhe ek hypertoxic poison jisse Netherworld Water kaha jata hai usse injured kiya hai. Fortunately yeh shayad tumhe maar nahi paa raha hai. Yeh ko yeh tailored Detoxification Pill khao abhi."


Kabir ne us bottle mei se ek pill wahi kha li. Jaise hi usne us pill ko kha liya waise hi jo dark purple spot uske neck par bana tha vo chala gaya aur uski injury bhi heal ho gayi.
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Well guys recently I notice ke mere update par jo reviews aate hai unhe mei relply nahi karta hu. Aisa nahi hai ke karna nahi chahta hu but mere paas time hi nahi reh pata hai update likhne ke baad so sorry for that. Agar kisi ko kisi bhi update mei koi sawal ho toh usse bold mei type kar dena. I will try my best ko answer it.
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Jay bhai reply karne ki jarrort nahi hai ... Aap aapni duty ke bawjud hum readers ke liye story per update karte hai humare liye yahi bahut hai... Thanks for this great story
 
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