Hello
Jay Sutar sir,
Really glad to know ki aap ki health ab theek hai.
Firstly mai ye kahunga ki I am a big fan of your storytelling.
Maine ye kahani abhi kuchh dino pehle hi start ki thi, starting me kabhi kabaar padh leta tha par dheere dheere pta nhi kb mai to aapki story se itna addict ho gya pta hi nhi chla ki kb maine saare updates bui padh dale. Aur ab bas aage ki story ka intjzaar chal rha hai.
Jis tarah se aapne apni story oceanic city se start krte hue badi hi smoothly isko Draconian realm ta le aae hai ye aapki flawless storytelling shramta ka ek namoona hai.
Aur jbse martial market school arc start hua hai tbse kahani ek alag level pe aa gyi hai aur bahut hi interesting ho gyi hai. Mujhe sbse badiya fight to kabir vs Yan Ning ki lagi ki kaise usne apni strength aur ability se upar ke opponent ko itni badiya strategic battle moves se hara diya.
Bas mai aapko ek baat kehna chahunga ki jbse kabir and friends tiny world se gye hai, tbse kabir aur maithli and rati ke beech me bilkul bhi romance aur emotional scenes nhi dikhaae hai jo kahi na kahi ek khaalipan sa anubhav hota hai. Vaise to iss samay kabir ki training bahut important hai lekin fir bhi usse kuchh samay un dono ko dena hi chahiye.
Ye bas mera personal opinion hai, story aapki hai aur ise aap apni hi tarah se chalao aur aise hi thrilling updates dete raho.
Hoping for your speedy recovery.