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Wonderfull update
UPDATE 155

Kabir ne apne aaspas dekha toh paya ke baki sabhi group members bhi maare gaye hai.

Sab sahi hai yeh dekh kar Kabir ne Yuxi ko Space and Time Spinel se bahar nikala. Jab Yuxi bahar aayi tab usse bhi shock laga ke Kabir ne akele kaise itne saare warriors ko maar diya tha.

Kabir ke sword se abhi bhi blood niche ground par gir raha tha. Kabir ne usse ek baar hawa mei ghuma diya aur us sword par lage blood ko waise hi clean kar ke usse apne sheath mei rakh diya.

Yuxi bhi sab jagah dekh rahi thi.

"Yeh group akhir tha kiska ?"

Kabir har jagah apni nazar ghuma raha tha.

Tabhi Yuyan aur vo sabhi ni Savage Beasts dusre side se bahar aate hai.

Kabir-Sister Yuyan kya koi zinda bacha hai ?

Yuyan-Mein ne ek member ko zinda rakha tha par ham sabhi ke dar ke wajah se usne poison kha liya.

Yeh sunkar Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue un sabhi dead bodies ko dekhne lag gaya.

Phir Kabir ki nazar us Leader ke purple knife par gayi jo Knife kam aur short sword zyada lag rahi thi.

Kabir us knife ki taraf badha aur usne Yuxi se kaha.

Kabir-Inke bodies ko search karo kya pata hame kuch clues mil sake.

Yeh sunkar quickly Yuxi har dead body ko search karne lag gayi.

Yaha Kabir ne us purple knife ko uthaya aur uske inscriptions ko apne Genuine Qi se activate kiya. Usne bhi apne aaspas dekha.

Kabir-Yeh 22 inscriptions ka 5th Level Martial Arm hai. Iski price 100,000 Silver Coins ki toh hogi.

Kabir ne us knife ko apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Tabhi piche se Yuxi ne Kabir ko aawaz dete hue kaha.

"Elder brother inke paas Kuch weapons aur healing pills chod kar kuch bhi nahi hai jisse ham inke baremei kuch indentify kar sake."

Yuxi ko sabhi dead bodies se kuch weapons aur 10 healing pills ki bottles mili thi.

Kabir-Yeh sabhi weapons aur yeh healing pills ki bottles milkar 100,000 Silver Coins tak ke honge.

Kabir ne unhe bhi apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Yeh sab Yuxi apne aankho se dekh rahi thi. Usne normal tarah ke Space Treasures dekhe hue the jo choti-Moti cheezo ko store kar sakte the. Par true Space Treasures usne kabhi nahi dekhe the aur aaj Kabir ke haato mei usse dekh kar kaafi shock ho gayi thi.

Usne shock hote hue Kabir se kaha.

"True Space Treasure ?"

Ispar Kabir ne smile karte hue Yuxi ko dekha aur usse kaha.

Kabir-Yuxi jab tumhara cultivation Earth Realm mei pohochega tab mein tumhe ek Space zaroor gift karunga. Par abhi ke liye tum isse secret hi rakhogi.

Yuxi achhe se janti thi ke true Space Treasures ki value world mei kya hai. Usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Elder brother mein promise karti hu ke mein yeh baat kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi."

Iske baad Yuxi ke face par ek smile aati hai aur vo haste hue Kabir se kehti hai.

"Elder brother aap sach mei mujhe ek True Space Treasures denge agar mei Earth Realm mei pohoch jaati hu toh.

Kabir-Well jab tum Earth Realm warrior ban jaogi tab tum apne aap ko protect kar sakti ho. Saath mei tum ek top master bhi ban sakti ho. Us waqt tak mein sure ho jaunga ke tumhe Space Treasures dene ke baad tum apne aap ko kisi bhi danger se protect kar sakti ho. Waise yeh baat chodo hame jaldi se is jagah se nikal jana hoga. Mujhe lagta hai ke yaha par aur bhi masters honge jo Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko hunt kar rahe honge.

Iske baad dono hi jaldi jaldi mei apne apne Savage Beasts par baith gaye. Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass tak pohochna chahte the.

Yuxi ne Kabir se kaha.

"Hame raat hone se pehle Tianyue Pass tak pohochna hoga. Agar ham raat hone se pehle Pass mei enter kar gaye toh 4th elder brother ko mil sakte hai. Ab tak vo Tianyue Pass mei honge. Waha se ham Yunvu City tak jaane ke liye troops ko arrange kar sakte hai."

Jab Kabir aur Yuxi waha se nikle the us jagah par kuch der baad 2 aur groups aa gaye.

Unmei se ek ne aaspas dekhte hue kaha.

"Lagta hai yaha par kuch der pehle kaafi intense fight hui hai. Saath hi Group one ke Chief ke saath unke 20 disciples bhi maare gaye hai. Hame is baat ko leader chief ko jaldi se jaldi report karna hoga."

"Kya yeh possible ho sakta hai ke Martial Market Bank ke masters Yunvu Commandery ke branch person ko bachane ke liye yaha aaye ho ?"

"Nahi Martial Market Bank ke masters ko yaha aane ke liye kaafi time lag sakta hai."

Tabhi ek elderly person ne apne aaspas carefully dekh kar kaha.

"Dekho! Jin 2 logo ne Yunvu Commandery ke Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko bachaya hai vo Second Level Savage Beasts par ride karte hue aage jaa rahe hai. Footprints ko judge karte hue mein yeh keh sakta hu ke vo dono Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai."

"Vo Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai ?"

Us elderly person ne aage dekhte hue kaha.

"Haa! Chalo agar ham abhi nikle toh shayad ham unhe bich raaste mei pakad sakte hai."

"Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass pohoch kar apne aap ko safe karna chahte honge."

Iske baaf vo dono group jaldi se Tianyue Pass ku taraf badh gaye.

Yaha Kabir aur Yuxi ne Tianyue Pass mei enter kar liya tha. Kyo ki Yuxi Princess thi toh Kabir ko bhi koi problem nahi hui enter karne mei.

Waha par Unhe 4th Prince bhi mil gaya tha. Usne aage aa kar Military Camp chala gaya tha aur waha se 5,000 elite troops ko lakar Duke Mansion ko safe kar liya tha.

Sabhi commands 4th Prince de raha tha. Vo apne enemy ke tremendous power ko underestimate nahi kar sakte the. After all Heaven Realm jaise warrior ko unhone heavily injured kiya hua tha.

Tianyue Pass par jis general ko stationed kiya hua tha uska naam Yuchan tha. Vo Yunvu Commandery ke top warriors mei se ek tha. Jo puri tarah se Yunvu Commandery ko loyal tha.

Although Yuchan ka cultivation abhi tak Heaven Realm mei nahi pohocha tha phir bhi uske paas ek 8th Level Genuine Martial Arm tha jiske wajah se uske paas Heaven Realm warrior jitni power thi.

Important baat yeh thi ke Tianyue Pass ke aaspas kaafi sare arrays ko setup kiya hua tha. Ek baar arrays ko open kar diya toh usse koi bhi nahi nikal sakta tha. Even Heaven Realm ke Strongest warrior ko bhi in arrays ke help se mara jaa sakta tha.

Kabir ne Yuchan ko kuch nahi bataya ke vo Duke Mansion mei kyo ruke hai. Usne usse jo bhi kar raha tha karne diya. Kabir ko pata tha ke aaj raat rk blood battle zaroor Tianyue Pass ke paas hone wali hai.

Yuchan kaafi cautious person tha. Usne Kabir aur uske achievements ke baremei saath hi vo Yunvu Commandery kr Warriors ki jo help Martial Market School mei kar raha tha uske baremein suna hua tha. Isliye usse laga ke Square Commandery usse hunt kar rahi hai. Iske wajah se 4th Prince aur 9th Princess ne usse yaha laya hua hai.

Is ke wajah se uske kuch logo ko bheja Yunvu Palace taaki vo 4th Prince, 9th Princess hai saath Kabir ko escort karne ke liye kisi Martial Arts Master ko bheje.

Wahi Tianyue Pass mei ek mansion tha jo roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Tabhi us mansion mei ek maid ek shaks ko andar lekar jaa rahi thi jine golden mask pehna hua tha. Vo shaks ek house mei ghus kar ek pavilion ke samne aa kar ruk gaya.

Us shaks ne apne face se mask hataya aur uska old hua face samne aa gaya. Agar abhi Kabir uske samne hota toh vo is shaks ko zaroor pehchan leta. Uske past life is shaks ke saath uske kaafi saare battles hue the. Iska naam tha Hanlin. Yeh ek shopkeeper tha King Pavilion ka.

Ek 7 string instrument ko apne samne rakh kar ek kaafi khusbsurat lady usse play kar rahi thi. Yeh thi King Pavilion ki owner Mina. Jab Hanlin ne enter kiya tha tab usne ek kaafi beautiful tune ko play kiya tha.

Usse disturb karne ke bajaye Hanlin ne pavilion ke bahar wait karna thik samjha.

Kuch der baad jo beautiful music abhi waha play ho raha tha vo ruk gaya.

Mina ne apne fingers ko ek silk ke clothe se clean kiya aur Hanlin se pucha.

Mina-Kya vo Martial Market Bank ka branch person mara gaya ?

Mina ka aawaz kaafi soft, low aue attractive tha baki logo ke liye.

Hanlin ne jaldi se usse reply kiya.

"Chief us Branch person ko kisi ne....Kisi ne bacha liya hai."

Is baat par Mina ne haste hue kaha.

Mina-Ohh! Aisa koun aa gaya hai jo Moon Worship Demonic Sect jise marna chahta hai usse bacha liya hai ?

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Agar hamari information sahi hui toh us branch person ko 9th Princess aur us Kabir ne bachaya hai. Abhi vo 4th Prince ke saath Duke Mansion mei hai."

Mina-9th Princess ? Kabir ?

Hanlin ko pata tha ke Mina is Kabir aur saath hi is 9th Princess mei kaafi interested hai. Toh usne aage kaha.

"Chief, 9th Princess Yuxi aur Kabir jo Tiny World se aaya hua hai. Group one ke Chief aur unke 20 disciples ko akele Kabir ne maar diya hai."

Jab Mina ne yeh suna ke Masters of branch gang ki Kabir ne akele maar diya hai is baat usse bilkul bhi gussa nahi aaya. Iske opposite usne smile kiya aur aage kaha.

Mina-Ahh! Yeh Kabir toh mere expectations se bhi upar nikla. Usse Is world mei aaye hue kuch hi waqt hua hai aur itne kam time mei uske paas itni power hai ke vo Earth Realm warriors ko maar sakta hai.

Mina ki is baat par Hanlin ne kaha.

"Martial Market School ke news ko dekhe toh Kabir ne Four Campus New Student's Martial Competition mei first position hasil ki hui hai. Saath hi vo Martial Market School ke history ka sabse top Spiritual Power Genius hai. Sirf itna hi nahi balki yeh tak kaha jata hai ke Luo Su tak Kabir ko same realm mei beat nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kaafi surprise tha Kabir ke achievements aur uske Chief ke usmei badh rahe interest ko dekh kar.

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Toh kya hame usse advance mei hi maar dena chahiye yaa ham usse pursued kare he join karne ke liye ?"

Mina apni jagah se khadi hui aur pavilion ke ek window samne aa kar upar aasman mei dekhte hue kehne lagi.

Mina-Nahi! Lady Saint ki jaan bas chuki hai usmein. Upar se usne mujhe yeh tak message bheja hai ke kuch bhi ho jaaye usse aur uske logo ko protect karna hai.

"Well ab jab Lady Saint ne yeh command di hai toh hame usse offend na karna ho sahi hoga. Waise bhi vo yaha Yunvu Commandery mei aa kar is situation ki toh change nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kuch der ke liye ruka aur phir usne aage kaha.

"Par phir bhi hame is branch person ko marna hi hoga ? Agar hamne usse nahi mara toh vo hamare liye khatra ho sakta hai. Upar se vo Master of Heaven Realm hai."

Mina-Chodo usse. Waise bhi hamne Martial Market Bank ke half industries ko hamare saath merge kar diya hai saath hi ham Yunvu Commandery ke finances tak ko control karne lag gaye hai. Toh bache final phase un Black Market walo par chod dete hai. Is sab mei sabse difficult baat yeh hai ke us Yuchan ke saath deal karna. Uske paas Induced Air Pearls. Is liye hamara is sab mei risk lena necessary nahi hai.

Hanlin ne apne sir ko haa mei hilaya aur kaha.

"Agar aisi baat hai toh ham stand by ho kar hone wale show ko dekhnege. Agar Black Market aur Tianyue Pass ke guards ke bhich lose-lose situation hui toh kuch bhi improve nahi hoga.

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Duke Mansion, Tianyue Pass.

Branch person ko heal karne ke liye Kabir ne kuch logo ko Black Pill buy karne ke liye bhej diya tha. Yeh ek 4th Level Healing Pill thi jiski price usse 600,000 Silver Coins tak dene pad gayi thi.

Black Pill lene ke baad Branch person ki injury visible speed se heal hone lag gayi thi. Jaha sir par bones break hue the waha par new bones banna start ho gaye the. Even uske broken haat ke injury ke aaspas bhi new skin banna start ho gayi thi.

Kuch der baad Branch person ko hosh aata hai. Vo uth kar baith jata hai par vo abhi bhi weak tha.

External injury ko compare Internal injury ke saath compare kare toh Internal injury External injury jitne fast heal nahi hoti hai.

Itne der se branch person ki aankhe close hone ke wajah se apne aankho ko open karne ke baad usse kaafi roshni mei blur sa dikh raha tha. Uske samne ek familiar shadow khadi thi aur uske saath koi aur bhi khada tha jo uski taraf apni back karke tha. Un dono ko dekhte hue us branch person ne halke se kaha.

"Excuse me, kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ke mein kaha hu ?"

Yuxi branch person ke samne aati hai aur usse kehti hai.

"Branch person aap ko hosh aa gaya. Koun the vo jinhone aap par attack kiya tha ?"

Branch person ne jab Yuxi ke aawaz ko suna tab unhe hase ya roye yeh samajh nahi aa raha tha. Unhone ek gehri saans chodi aur kaha.

"Kya yeh 9th Princess hai jinhone mujhe bachaya hai. Kuch months pehle mein ne yeh bilkul bhi nahi socha tha ke aap bhi kabhi meri jaan ko bacha sakte hai."

Branch person kaafi tired dikh raha tha par vo Master of Heaven Realm tha vo bhi kaafi strong cultivation ke saath iske wajah se vo jaldi hi bed par se uth kar khada ho gaya. Even serious injury hone ke baad bhi.

Apne Genuine Qi ko body mei kuch der circulate karne ke baad branch person ko kuch had tak better feel hone lag gaya tha. Suddenly uske face ke expressions kaafi serious ho gaye. Uske is serious expressions ke wajah se room ka atmosphere bhi intense ho gaya tha.

Usne Yuxi ko dekh kar kaha.

"Yunvu Commandery mei jitney bhi Martial Market Bank ke industries hak unhe corrupt kar diya gaya hai. Martial Market Bank ke 10,000 ke upar important members ko maar diya gaya hai. Saath hi 3,800 shops kahi aur merge ho gaye hai. Wahi sabhi mines, pastures aur bank ko kisi ne thug liya hai. Yeh hamare liye ek heavy loss hai. Current time mei Martial Market Bank ka Yunvu Commandery ke economy ke upar se control completely chala gaya hai. Upar se hamne jis foundation ko Yunvu Commandery mei banane ke liye hundreds of years lagaye the vo ek raat mei kahi gayab si ho gayi. Mein is sab ke liye guilty person aur is sab ke liye mein khud hi responsible hu."
 

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Fabulous update sirji!!
UPDATE 155

Kabir ne apne aaspas dekha toh paya ke baki sabhi group members bhi maare gaye hai.

Sab sahi hai yeh dekh kar Kabir ne Yuxi ko Space and Time Spinel se bahar nikala. Jab Yuxi bahar aayi tab usse bhi shock laga ke Kabir ne akele kaise itne saare warriors ko maar diya tha.

Kabir ke sword se abhi bhi blood niche ground par gir raha tha. Kabir ne usse ek baar hawa mei ghuma diya aur us sword par lage blood ko waise hi clean kar ke usse apne sheath mei rakh diya.

Yuxi bhi sab jagah dekh rahi thi.

"Yeh group akhir tha kiska ?"

Kabir har jagah apni nazar ghuma raha tha.

Tabhi Yuyan aur vo sabhi ni Savage Beasts dusre side se bahar aate hai.

Kabir-Sister Yuyan kya koi zinda bacha hai ?

Yuyan-Mein ne ek member ko zinda rakha tha par ham sabhi ke dar ke wajah se usne poison kha liya.

Yeh sunkar Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue un sabhi dead bodies ko dekhne lag gaya.

Phir Kabir ki nazar us Leader ke purple knife par gayi jo Knife kam aur short sword zyada lag rahi thi.

Kabir us knife ki taraf badha aur usne Yuxi se kaha.

Kabir-Inke bodies ko search karo kya pata hame kuch clues mil sake.

Yeh sunkar quickly Yuxi har dead body ko search karne lag gayi.

Yaha Kabir ne us purple knife ko uthaya aur uske inscriptions ko apne Genuine Qi se activate kiya. Usne bhi apne aaspas dekha.

Kabir-Yeh 22 inscriptions ka 5th Level Martial Arm hai. Iski price 100,000 Silver Coins ki toh hogi.

Kabir ne us knife ko apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Tabhi piche se Yuxi ne Kabir ko aawaz dete hue kaha.

"Elder brother inke paas Kuch weapons aur healing pills chod kar kuch bhi nahi hai jisse ham inke baremei kuch indentify kar sake."

Yuxi ko sabhi dead bodies se kuch weapons aur 10 healing pills ki bottles mili thi.

Kabir-Yeh sabhi weapons aur yeh healing pills ki bottles milkar 100,000 Silver Coins tak ke honge.

Kabir ne unhe bhi apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Yeh sab Yuxi apne aankho se dekh rahi thi. Usne normal tarah ke Space Treasures dekhe hue the jo choti-Moti cheezo ko store kar sakte the. Par true Space Treasures usne kabhi nahi dekhe the aur aaj Kabir ke haato mei usse dekh kar kaafi shock ho gayi thi.

Usne shock hote hue Kabir se kaha.

"True Space Treasure ?"

Ispar Kabir ne smile karte hue Yuxi ko dekha aur usse kaha.

Kabir-Yuxi jab tumhara cultivation Earth Realm mei pohochega tab mein tumhe ek Space zaroor gift karunga. Par abhi ke liye tum isse secret hi rakhogi.

Yuxi achhe se janti thi ke true Space Treasures ki value world mei kya hai. Usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Elder brother mein promise karti hu ke mein yeh baat kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi."

Iske baad Yuxi ke face par ek smile aati hai aur vo haste hue Kabir se kehti hai.

"Elder brother aap sach mei mujhe ek True Space Treasures denge agar mei Earth Realm mei pohoch jaati hu toh.

Kabir-Well jab tum Earth Realm warrior ban jaogi tab tum apne aap ko protect kar sakti ho. Saath mei tum ek top master bhi ban sakti ho. Us waqt tak mein sure ho jaunga ke tumhe Space Treasures dene ke baad tum apne aap ko kisi bhi danger se protect kar sakti ho. Waise yeh baat chodo hame jaldi se is jagah se nikal jana hoga. Mujhe lagta hai ke yaha par aur bhi masters honge jo Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko hunt kar rahe honge.

Iske baad dono hi jaldi jaldi mei apne apne Savage Beasts par baith gaye. Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass tak pohochna chahte the.

Yuxi ne Kabir se kaha.

"Hame raat hone se pehle Tianyue Pass tak pohochna hoga. Agar ham raat hone se pehle Pass mei enter kar gaye toh 4th elder brother ko mil sakte hai. Ab tak vo Tianyue Pass mei honge. Waha se ham Yunvu City tak jaane ke liye troops ko arrange kar sakte hai."

Jab Kabir aur Yuxi waha se nikle the us jagah par kuch der baad 2 aur groups aa gaye.

Unmei se ek ne aaspas dekhte hue kaha.

"Lagta hai yaha par kuch der pehle kaafi intense fight hui hai. Saath hi Group one ke Chief ke saath unke 20 disciples bhi maare gaye hai. Hame is baat ko leader chief ko jaldi se jaldi report karna hoga."

"Kya yeh possible ho sakta hai ke Martial Market Bank ke masters Yunvu Commandery ke branch person ko bachane ke liye yaha aaye ho ?"

"Nahi Martial Market Bank ke masters ko yaha aane ke liye kaafi time lag sakta hai."

Tabhi ek elderly person ne apne aaspas carefully dekh kar kaha.

"Dekho! Jin 2 logo ne Yunvu Commandery ke Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko bachaya hai vo Second Level Savage Beasts par ride karte hue aage jaa rahe hai. Footprints ko judge karte hue mein yeh keh sakta hu ke vo dono Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai."

"Vo Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai ?"

Us elderly person ne aage dekhte hue kaha.

"Haa! Chalo agar ham abhi nikle toh shayad ham unhe bich raaste mei pakad sakte hai."

"Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass pohoch kar apne aap ko safe karna chahte honge."

Iske baaf vo dono group jaldi se Tianyue Pass ku taraf badh gaye.

Yaha Kabir aur Yuxi ne Tianyue Pass mei enter kar liya tha. Kyo ki Yuxi Princess thi toh Kabir ko bhi koi problem nahi hui enter karne mei.

Waha par Unhe 4th Prince bhi mil gaya tha. Usne aage aa kar Military Camp chala gaya tha aur waha se 5,000 elite troops ko lakar Duke Mansion ko safe kar liya tha.

Sabhi commands 4th Prince de raha tha. Vo apne enemy ke tremendous power ko underestimate nahi kar sakte the. After all Heaven Realm jaise warrior ko unhone heavily injured kiya hua tha.

Tianyue Pass par jis general ko stationed kiya hua tha uska naam Yuchan tha. Vo Yunvu Commandery ke top warriors mei se ek tha. Jo puri tarah se Yunvu Commandery ko loyal tha.

Although Yuchan ka cultivation abhi tak Heaven Realm mei nahi pohocha tha phir bhi uske paas ek 8th Level Genuine Martial Arm tha jiske wajah se uske paas Heaven Realm warrior jitni power thi.

Important baat yeh thi ke Tianyue Pass ke aaspas kaafi sare arrays ko setup kiya hua tha. Ek baar arrays ko open kar diya toh usse koi bhi nahi nikal sakta tha. Even Heaven Realm ke Strongest warrior ko bhi in arrays ke help se mara jaa sakta tha.

Kabir ne Yuchan ko kuch nahi bataya ke vo Duke Mansion mei kyo ruke hai. Usne usse jo bhi kar raha tha karne diya. Kabir ko pata tha ke aaj raat rk blood battle zaroor Tianyue Pass ke paas hone wali hai.

Yuchan kaafi cautious person tha. Usne Kabir aur uske achievements ke baremei saath hi vo Yunvu Commandery kr Warriors ki jo help Martial Market School mei kar raha tha uske baremein suna hua tha. Isliye usse laga ke Square Commandery usse hunt kar rahi hai. Iske wajah se 4th Prince aur 9th Princess ne usse yaha laya hua hai.

Is ke wajah se uske kuch logo ko bheja Yunvu Palace taaki vo 4th Prince, 9th Princess hai saath Kabir ko escort karne ke liye kisi Martial Arts Master ko bheje.

Wahi Tianyue Pass mei ek mansion tha jo roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Tabhi us mansion mei ek maid ek shaks ko andar lekar jaa rahi thi jine golden mask pehna hua tha. Vo shaks ek house mei ghus kar ek pavilion ke samne aa kar ruk gaya.

Us shaks ne apne face se mask hataya aur uska old hua face samne aa gaya. Agar abhi Kabir uske samne hota toh vo is shaks ko zaroor pehchan leta. Uske past life is shaks ke saath uske kaafi saare battles hue the. Iska naam tha Hanlin. Yeh ek shopkeeper tha King Pavilion ka.

Ek 7 string instrument ko apne samne rakh kar ek kaafi khusbsurat lady usse play kar rahi thi. Yeh thi King Pavilion ki owner Mina. Jab Hanlin ne enter kiya tha tab usne ek kaafi beautiful tune ko play kiya tha.

Usse disturb karne ke bajaye Hanlin ne pavilion ke bahar wait karna thik samjha.

Kuch der baad jo beautiful music abhi waha play ho raha tha vo ruk gaya.

Mina ne apne fingers ko ek silk ke clothe se clean kiya aur Hanlin se pucha.

Mina-Kya vo Martial Market Bank ka branch person mara gaya ?

Mina ka aawaz kaafi soft, low aue attractive tha baki logo ke liye.

Hanlin ne jaldi se usse reply kiya.

"Chief us Branch person ko kisi ne....Kisi ne bacha liya hai."

Is baat par Mina ne haste hue kaha.

Mina-Ohh! Aisa koun aa gaya hai jo Moon Worship Demonic Sect jise marna chahta hai usse bacha liya hai ?

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Agar hamari information sahi hui toh us branch person ko 9th Princess aur us Kabir ne bachaya hai. Abhi vo 4th Prince ke saath Duke Mansion mei hai."

Mina-9th Princess ? Kabir ?

Hanlin ko pata tha ke Mina is Kabir aur saath hi is 9th Princess mei kaafi interested hai. Toh usne aage kaha.

"Chief, 9th Princess Yuxi aur Kabir jo Tiny World se aaya hua hai. Group one ke Chief aur unke 20 disciples ko akele Kabir ne maar diya hai."

Jab Mina ne yeh suna ke Masters of branch gang ki Kabir ne akele maar diya hai is baat usse bilkul bhi gussa nahi aaya. Iske opposite usne smile kiya aur aage kaha.

Mina-Ahh! Yeh Kabir toh mere expectations se bhi upar nikla. Usse Is world mei aaye hue kuch hi waqt hua hai aur itne kam time mei uske paas itni power hai ke vo Earth Realm warriors ko maar sakta hai.

Mina ki is baat par Hanlin ne kaha.

"Martial Market School ke news ko dekhe toh Kabir ne Four Campus New Student's Martial Competition mei first position hasil ki hui hai. Saath hi vo Martial Market School ke history ka sabse top Spiritual Power Genius hai. Sirf itna hi nahi balki yeh tak kaha jata hai ke Luo Su tak Kabir ko same realm mei beat nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kaafi surprise tha Kabir ke achievements aur uske Chief ke usmei badh rahe interest ko dekh kar.

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Toh kya hame usse advance mei hi maar dena chahiye yaa ham usse pursued kare he join karne ke liye ?"

Mina apni jagah se khadi hui aur pavilion ke ek window samne aa kar upar aasman mei dekhte hue kehne lagi.

Mina-Nahi! Lady Saint ki jaan bas chuki hai usmein. Upar se usne mujhe yeh tak message bheja hai ke kuch bhi ho jaaye usse aur uske logo ko protect karna hai.

"Well ab jab Lady Saint ne yeh command di hai toh hame usse offend na karna ho sahi hoga. Waise bhi vo yaha Yunvu Commandery mei aa kar is situation ki toh change nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kuch der ke liye ruka aur phir usne aage kaha.

"Par phir bhi hame is branch person ko marna hi hoga ? Agar hamne usse nahi mara toh vo hamare liye khatra ho sakta hai. Upar se vo Master of Heaven Realm hai."

Mina-Chodo usse. Waise bhi hamne Martial Market Bank ke half industries ko hamare saath merge kar diya hai saath hi ham Yunvu Commandery ke finances tak ko control karne lag gaye hai. Toh bache final phase un Black Market walo par chod dete hai. Is sab mei sabse difficult baat yeh hai ke us Yuchan ke saath deal karna. Uske paas Induced Air Pearls. Is liye hamara is sab mei risk lena necessary nahi hai.

Hanlin ne apne sir ko haa mei hilaya aur kaha.

"Agar aisi baat hai toh ham stand by ho kar hone wale show ko dekhnege. Agar Black Market aur Tianyue Pass ke guards ke bhich lose-lose situation hui toh kuch bhi improve nahi hoga.

...

Duke Mansion, Tianyue Pass.

Branch person ko heal karne ke liye Kabir ne kuch logo ko Black Pill buy karne ke liye bhej diya tha. Yeh ek 4th Level Healing Pill thi jiski price usse 600,000 Silver Coins tak dene pad gayi thi.

Black Pill lene ke baad Branch person ki injury visible speed se heal hone lag gayi thi. Jaha sir par bones break hue the waha par new bones banna start ho gaye the. Even uske broken haat ke injury ke aaspas bhi new skin banna start ho gayi thi.

Kuch der baad Branch person ko hosh aata hai. Vo uth kar baith jata hai par vo abhi bhi weak tha.

External injury ko compare Internal injury ke saath compare kare toh Internal injury External injury jitne fast heal nahi hoti hai.

Itne der se branch person ki aankhe close hone ke wajah se apne aankho ko open karne ke baad usse kaafi roshni mei blur sa dikh raha tha. Uske samne ek familiar shadow khadi thi aur uske saath koi aur bhi khada tha jo uski taraf apni back karke tha. Un dono ko dekhte hue us branch person ne halke se kaha.

"Excuse me, kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ke mein kaha hu ?"

Yuxi branch person ke samne aati hai aur usse kehti hai.

"Branch person aap ko hosh aa gaya. Koun the vo jinhone aap par attack kiya tha ?"

Branch person ne jab Yuxi ke aawaz ko suna tab unhe hase ya roye yeh samajh nahi aa raha tha. Unhone ek gehri saans chodi aur kaha.

"Kya yeh 9th Princess hai jinhone mujhe bachaya hai. Kuch months pehle mein ne yeh bilkul bhi nahi socha tha ke aap bhi kabhi meri jaan ko bacha sakte hai."

Branch person kaafi tired dikh raha tha par vo Master of Heaven Realm tha vo bhi kaafi strong cultivation ke saath iske wajah se vo jaldi hi bed par se uth kar khada ho gaya. Even serious injury hone ke baad bhi.

Apne Genuine Qi ko body mei kuch der circulate karne ke baad branch person ko kuch had tak better feel hone lag gaya tha. Suddenly uske face ke expressions kaafi serious ho gaye. Uske is serious expressions ke wajah se room ka atmosphere bhi intense ho gaya tha.

Usne Yuxi ko dekh kar kaha.

"Yunvu Commandery mei jitney bhi Martial Market Bank ke industries hak unhe corrupt kar diya gaya hai. Martial Market Bank ke 10,000 ke upar important members ko maar diya gaya hai. Saath hi 3,800 shops kahi aur merge ho gaye hai. Wahi sabhi mines, pastures aur bank ko kisi ne thug liya hai. Yeh hamare liye ek heavy loss hai. Current time mei Martial Market Bank ka Yunvu Commandery ke economy ke upar se control completely chala gaya hai. Upar se hamne jis foundation ko Yunvu Commandery mei banane ke liye hundreds of years lagaye the vo ek raat mei kahi gayab si ho gayi. Mein is sab ke liye guilty person aur is sab ke liye mein khud hi responsible hu."

Ye moon worship demonic sect pehle kahi to padha tha story me pr yaad nhi aa rha🤔🤔
 

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Kabir ne apne aaspas dekha toh paya ke baki sabhi group members bhi maare gaye hai.

Sab sahi hai yeh dekh kar Kabir ne Yuxi ko Space and Time Spinel se bahar nikala. Jab Yuxi bahar aayi tab usse bhi shock laga ke Kabir ne akele kaise itne saare warriors ko maar diya tha.

Kabir ke sword se abhi bhi blood niche ground par gir raha tha. Kabir ne usse ek baar hawa mei ghuma diya aur us sword par lage blood ko waise hi clean kar ke usse apne sheath mei rakh diya.

Yuxi bhi sab jagah dekh rahi thi.

"Yeh group akhir tha kiska ?"

Kabir har jagah apni nazar ghuma raha tha.

Tabhi Yuyan aur vo sabhi ni Savage Beasts dusre side se bahar aate hai.

Kabir-Sister Yuyan kya koi zinda bacha hai ?

Yuyan-Mein ne ek member ko zinda rakha tha par ham sabhi ke dar ke wajah se usne poison kha liya.

Yeh sunkar Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue un sabhi dead bodies ko dekhne lag gaya.

Phir Kabir ki nazar us Leader ke purple knife par gayi jo Knife kam aur short sword zyada lag rahi thi.

Kabir us knife ki taraf badha aur usne Yuxi se kaha.

Kabir-Inke bodies ko search karo kya pata hame kuch clues mil sake.

Yeh sunkar quickly Yuxi har dead body ko search karne lag gayi.

Yaha Kabir ne us purple knife ko uthaya aur uske inscriptions ko apne Genuine Qi se activate kiya. Usne bhi apne aaspas dekha.

Kabir-Yeh 22 inscriptions ka 5th Level Martial Arm hai. Iski price 100,000 Silver Coins ki toh hogi.

Kabir ne us knife ko apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Tabhi piche se Yuxi ne Kabir ko aawaz dete hue kaha.

"Elder brother inke paas Kuch weapons aur healing pills chod kar kuch bhi nahi hai jisse ham inke baremei kuch indentify kar sake."

Yuxi ko sabhi dead bodies se kuch weapons aur 10 healing pills ki bottles mili thi.

Kabir-Yeh sabhi weapons aur yeh healing pills ki bottles milkar 100,000 Silver Coins tak ke honge.

Kabir ne unhe bhi apne storage ring mei daal diya.

Yeh sab Yuxi apne aankho se dekh rahi thi. Usne normal tarah ke Space Treasures dekhe hue the jo choti-Moti cheezo ko store kar sakte the. Par true Space Treasures usne kabhi nahi dekhe the aur aaj Kabir ke haato mei usse dekh kar kaafi shock ho gayi thi.

Usne shock hote hue Kabir se kaha.

"True Space Treasure ?"

Ispar Kabir ne smile karte hue Yuxi ko dekha aur usse kaha.

Kabir-Yuxi jab tumhara cultivation Earth Realm mei pohochega tab mein tumhe ek Space zaroor gift karunga. Par abhi ke liye tum isse secret hi rakhogi.

Yuxi achhe se janti thi ke true Space Treasures ki value world mei kya hai. Usne Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Elder brother mein promise karti hu ke mein yeh baat kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi."

Iske baad Yuxi ke face par ek smile aati hai aur vo haste hue Kabir se kehti hai.

"Elder brother aap sach mei mujhe ek True Space Treasures denge agar mei Earth Realm mei pohoch jaati hu toh.

Kabir-Well jab tum Earth Realm warrior ban jaogi tab tum apne aap ko protect kar sakti ho. Saath mei tum ek top master bhi ban sakti ho. Us waqt tak mein sure ho jaunga ke tumhe Space Treasures dene ke baad tum apne aap ko kisi bhi danger se protect kar sakti ho. Waise yeh baat chodo hame jaldi se is jagah se nikal jana hoga. Mujhe lagta hai ke yaha par aur bhi masters honge jo Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko hunt kar rahe honge.

Iske baad dono hi jaldi jaldi mei apne apne Savage Beasts par baith gaye. Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass tak pohochna chahte the.

Yuxi ne Kabir se kaha.

"Hame raat hone se pehle Tianyue Pass tak pohochna hoga. Agar ham raat hone se pehle Pass mei enter kar gaye toh 4th elder brother ko mil sakte hai. Ab tak vo Tianyue Pass mei honge. Waha se ham Yunvu City tak jaane ke liye troops ko arrange kar sakte hai."

Jab Kabir aur Yuxi waha se nikle the us jagah par kuch der baad 2 aur groups aa gaye.

Unmei se ek ne aaspas dekhte hue kaha.

"Lagta hai yaha par kuch der pehle kaafi intense fight hui hai. Saath hi Group one ke Chief ke saath unke 20 disciples bhi maare gaye hai. Hame is baat ko leader chief ko jaldi se jaldi report karna hoga."

"Kya yeh possible ho sakta hai ke Martial Market Bank ke masters Yunvu Commandery ke branch person ko bachane ke liye yaha aaye ho ?"

"Nahi Martial Market Bank ke masters ko yaha aane ke liye kaafi time lag sakta hai."

Tabhi ek elderly person ne apne aaspas carefully dekh kar kaha.

"Dekho! Jin 2 logo ne Yunvu Commandery ke Martial Market Bank ke branch person ko bachaya hai vo Second Level Savage Beasts par ride karte hue aage jaa rahe hai. Footprints ko judge karte hue mein yeh keh sakta hu ke vo dono Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai."

"Vo Tianyue Pass ki taraf badh rahe hai ?"

Us elderly person ne aage dekhte hue kaha.

"Haa! Chalo agar ham abhi nikle toh shayad ham unhe bich raaste mei pakad sakte hai."

"Vo jaldi se jaldi Tianyue Pass pohoch kar apne aap ko safe karna chahte honge."

Iske baaf vo dono group jaldi se Tianyue Pass ku taraf badh gaye.

Yaha Kabir aur Yuxi ne Tianyue Pass mei enter kar liya tha. Kyo ki Yuxi Princess thi toh Kabir ko bhi koi problem nahi hui enter karne mei.

Waha par Unhe 4th Prince bhi mil gaya tha. Usne aage aa kar Military Camp chala gaya tha aur waha se 5,000 elite troops ko lakar Duke Mansion ko safe kar liya tha.

Sabhi commands 4th Prince de raha tha. Vo apne enemy ke tremendous power ko underestimate nahi kar sakte the. After all Heaven Realm jaise warrior ko unhone heavily injured kiya hua tha.

Tianyue Pass par jis general ko stationed kiya hua tha uska naam Yuchan tha. Vo Yunvu Commandery ke top warriors mei se ek tha. Jo puri tarah se Yunvu Commandery ko loyal tha.

Although Yuchan ka cultivation abhi tak Heaven Realm mei nahi pohocha tha phir bhi uske paas ek 8th Level Genuine Martial Arm tha jiske wajah se uske paas Heaven Realm warrior jitni power thi.

Important baat yeh thi ke Tianyue Pass ke aaspas kaafi sare arrays ko setup kiya hua tha. Ek baar arrays ko open kar diya toh usse koi bhi nahi nikal sakta tha. Even Heaven Realm ke Strongest warrior ko bhi in arrays ke help se mara jaa sakta tha.

Kabir ne Yuchan ko kuch nahi bataya ke vo Duke Mansion mei kyo ruke hai. Usne usse jo bhi kar raha tha karne diya. Kabir ko pata tha ke aaj raat rk blood battle zaroor Tianyue Pass ke paas hone wali hai.

Yuchan kaafi cautious person tha. Usne Kabir aur uske achievements ke baremei saath hi vo Yunvu Commandery kr Warriors ki jo help Martial Market School mei kar raha tha uske baremein suna hua tha. Isliye usse laga ke Square Commandery usse hunt kar rahi hai. Iske wajah se 4th Prince aur 9th Princess ne usse yaha laya hua hai.

Is ke wajah se uske kuch logo ko bheja Yunvu Palace taaki vo 4th Prince, 9th Princess hai saath Kabir ko escort karne ke liye kisi Martial Arts Master ko bheje.

Wahi Tianyue Pass mei ek mansion tha jo roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Tabhi us mansion mei ek maid ek shaks ko andar lekar jaa rahi thi jine golden mask pehna hua tha. Vo shaks ek house mei ghus kar ek pavilion ke samne aa kar ruk gaya.

Us shaks ne apne face se mask hataya aur uska old hua face samne aa gaya. Agar abhi Kabir uske samne hota toh vo is shaks ko zaroor pehchan leta. Uske past life is shaks ke saath uske kaafi saare battles hue the. Iska naam tha Hanlin. Yeh ek shopkeeper tha King Pavilion ka.

Ek 7 string instrument ko apne samne rakh kar ek kaafi khusbsurat lady usse play kar rahi thi. Yeh thi King Pavilion ki owner Mina. Jab Hanlin ne enter kiya tha tab usne ek kaafi beautiful tune ko play kiya tha.

Usse disturb karne ke bajaye Hanlin ne pavilion ke bahar wait karna thik samjha.

Kuch der baad jo beautiful music abhi waha play ho raha tha vo ruk gaya.

Mina ne apne fingers ko ek silk ke clothe se clean kiya aur Hanlin se pucha.

Mina-Kya vo Martial Market Bank ka branch person mara gaya ?

Mina ka aawaz kaafi soft, low aue attractive tha baki logo ke liye.

Hanlin ne jaldi se usse reply kiya.

"Chief us Branch person ko kisi ne....Kisi ne bacha liya hai."

Is baat par Mina ne haste hue kaha.

Mina-Ohh! Aisa koun aa gaya hai jo Moon Worship Demonic Sect jise marna chahta hai usse bacha liya hai ?

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Agar hamari information sahi hui toh us branch person ko 9th Princess aur us Kabir ne bachaya hai. Abhi vo 4th Prince ke saath Duke Mansion mei hai."

Mina-9th Princess ? Kabir ?

Hanlin ko pata tha ke Mina is Kabir aur saath hi is 9th Princess mei kaafi interested hai. Toh usne aage kaha.

"Chief, 9th Princess Yuxi aur Kabir jo Tiny World se aaya hua hai. Group one ke Chief aur unke 20 disciples ko akele Kabir ne maar diya hai."

Jab Mina ne yeh suna ke Masters of branch gang ki Kabir ne akele maar diya hai is baat usse bilkul bhi gussa nahi aaya. Iske opposite usne smile kiya aur aage kaha.

Mina-Ahh! Yeh Kabir toh mere expectations se bhi upar nikla. Usse Is world mei aaye hue kuch hi waqt hua hai aur itne kam time mei uske paas itni power hai ke vo Earth Realm warriors ko maar sakta hai.

Mina ki is baat par Hanlin ne kaha.

"Martial Market School ke news ko dekhe toh Kabir ne Four Campus New Student's Martial Competition mei first position hasil ki hui hai. Saath hi vo Martial Market School ke history ka sabse top Spiritual Power Genius hai. Sirf itna hi nahi balki yeh tak kaha jata hai ke Luo Su tak Kabir ko same realm mei beat nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kaafi surprise tha Kabir ke achievements aur uske Chief ke usmei badh rahe interest ko dekh kar.

Hanlin ne aage kaha.

"Toh kya hame usse advance mei hi maar dena chahiye yaa ham usse pursued kare he join karne ke liye ?"

Mina apni jagah se khadi hui aur pavilion ke ek window samne aa kar upar aasman mei dekhte hue kehne lagi.

Mina-Nahi! Lady Saint ki jaan bas chuki hai usmein. Upar se usne mujhe yeh tak message bheja hai ke kuch bhi ho jaaye usse aur uske logo ko protect karna hai.

"Well ab jab Lady Saint ne yeh command di hai toh hame usse offend na karna ho sahi hoga. Waise bhi vo yaha Yunvu Commandery mei aa kar is situation ki toh change nahi kar sakta hai."

Hanlin kuch der ke liye ruka aur phir usne aage kaha.

"Par phir bhi hame is branch person ko marna hi hoga ? Agar hamne usse nahi mara toh vo hamare liye khatra ho sakta hai. Upar se vo Master of Heaven Realm hai."

Mina-Chodo usse. Waise bhi hamne Martial Market Bank ke half industries ko hamare saath merge kar diya hai saath hi ham Yunvu Commandery ke finances tak ko control karne lag gaye hai. Toh bache final phase un Black Market walo par chod dete hai. Is sab mei sabse difficult baat yeh hai ke us Yuchan ke saath deal karna. Uske paas Induced Air Pearls. Is liye hamara is sab mei risk lena necessary nahi hai.

Hanlin ne apne sir ko haa mei hilaya aur kaha.

"Agar aisi baat hai toh ham stand by ho kar hone wale show ko dekhnege. Agar Black Market aur Tianyue Pass ke guards ke bhich lose-lose situation hui toh kuch bhi improve nahi hoga.

...

Duke Mansion, Tianyue Pass.

Branch person ko heal karne ke liye Kabir ne kuch logo ko Black Pill buy karne ke liye bhej diya tha. Yeh ek 4th Level Healing Pill thi jiski price usse 600,000 Silver Coins tak dene pad gayi thi.

Black Pill lene ke baad Branch person ki injury visible speed se heal hone lag gayi thi. Jaha sir par bones break hue the waha par new bones banna start ho gaye the. Even uske broken haat ke injury ke aaspas bhi new skin banna start ho gayi thi.

Kuch der baad Branch person ko hosh aata hai. Vo uth kar baith jata hai par vo abhi bhi weak tha.

External injury ko compare Internal injury ke saath compare kare toh Internal injury External injury jitne fast heal nahi hoti hai.

Itne der se branch person ki aankhe close hone ke wajah se apne aankho ko open karne ke baad usse kaafi roshni mei blur sa dikh raha tha. Uske samne ek familiar shadow khadi thi aur uske saath koi aur bhi khada tha jo uski taraf apni back karke tha. Un dono ko dekhte hue us branch person ne halke se kaha.

"Excuse me, kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ke mein kaha hu ?"

Yuxi branch person ke samne aati hai aur usse kehti hai.

"Branch person aap ko hosh aa gaya. Koun the vo jinhone aap par attack kiya tha ?"

Branch person ne jab Yuxi ke aawaz ko suna tab unhe hase ya roye yeh samajh nahi aa raha tha. Unhone ek gehri saans chodi aur kaha.

"Kya yeh 9th Princess hai jinhone mujhe bachaya hai. Kuch months pehle mein ne yeh bilkul bhi nahi socha tha ke aap bhi kabhi meri jaan ko bacha sakte hai."

Branch person kaafi tired dikh raha tha par vo Master of Heaven Realm tha vo bhi kaafi strong cultivation ke saath iske wajah se vo jaldi hi bed par se uth kar khada ho gaya. Even serious injury hone ke baad bhi.

Apne Genuine Qi ko body mei kuch der circulate karne ke baad branch person ko kuch had tak better feel hone lag gaya tha. Suddenly uske face ke expressions kaafi serious ho gaye. Uske is serious expressions ke wajah se room ka atmosphere bhi intense ho gaya tha.

Usne Yuxi ko dekh kar kaha.

"Yunvu Commandery mei jitney bhi Martial Market Bank ke industries hak unhe corrupt kar diya gaya hai. Martial Market Bank ke 10,000 ke upar important members ko maar diya gaya hai. Saath hi 3,800 shops kahi aur merge ho gaye hai. Wahi sabhi mines, pastures aur bank ko kisi ne thug liya hai. Yeh hamare liye ek heavy loss hai. Current time mei Martial Market Bank ka Yunvu Commandery ke economy ke upar se control completely chala gaya hai. Upar se hamne jis foundation ko Yunvu Commandery mei banane ke liye hundreds of years lagaye the vo ek raat mei kahi gayab si ho gayi. Mein is sab ke liye guilty person aur is sab ke liye mein khud hi responsible hu."
Very nice very good awesome interesting update
 

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Me new hu aur ye kahani mujhe itni achi lagi ki maine 7 din me ye kahani complete pad li matlab jaha tak writer kahani likh chuke hain. Mast likha doctor sahab ne ya me kahana chahunga ke writer-doctor Jai sutar ji ki sochne ki level kaaafi high hain kya writer bata sakte hain ki kahani kitni % likh chuke hain aur ek sikayat bhi karni thi ki jab Kabir ki family ka background aisa hain to voh jab Kabir se mile to har baat par shock kyu ho rahe the.
 
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