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Naughtyrishabh

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#UPDATE 64

Or isi bhich mujhe karan ke maan ki baat pata chali ki wo kya chahta hai or chandani ke maan ki baat bhi, maine apne ass paas jitne log the dost yaa dushman sabke maan ko padha tha.

or unki maan ki baate janne ke baad maine kuchh faishla liya.

Ab Aage...........................

" Mere bachche mujhe mukti dilao, mujhe shanti nahi mili aaj tak, main bas tumse ummid lagaye baitha hun, jab tak mera sapna, meri khwaish puri nahi hogi tak tak mujhe shanti nahi milegi mere bachche, tum hamare gaon phir se basaoge mere bache, tumko hamre devta ko azaad karana hoga me bete, azaad karana hoga, azaad karana hoga........."

"Main karanuga Baba main karaunga" babaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Main need me so raha tha tabhi mujhe ye khawab aaya yaa phir koi sach me mujhse baat kar raha tha pta nahi, lekin unki aawaz me bahut karuna or yaar bhara tha.

Jaise jaise wo aawaz mujhse door jaa rahi thi mujhe bechaini or ghabrahat ho rahi thi, or achanak hi main uth baitha, mera pura sharir paseene se tarbatar tha.

Main uth kar pani piya or phir bistar par baith kar aaj ke iss sapne ke bare me sochne laga.

Main;-(man me) Aaj phir waisa hi kuchh dekha maine, jaise ki ush din dekha tha jane ye kiski aawaz thi, wo kya chahte hain mujhse, ye kis gaon ke bare me baat kar rahe the, or aisa koun devta hai jo kaid me haior bhala koi devta ko kaise kaid kar sakta hai.

Aise hi na jane kitne anginat sawal the mere man me lekin unka jawab koi naa tha, or na hi koi aisa tha jo mere in sawalon ke jawab de sakta tha, phir main in baato ko bhul kar sone ki koshish karne laga.

Wahi dusri taraf

ab thik ho gaya tha or action me bhi aa gaya tha, usko talash thi chinkara ki, jo jane kahan phir gayab ho gaya tha.

Aaj vijay or pandey dono gast par nikale the, wo chinkara ki talash kar rahe the apne aas paas ke ilakon me, lekin unko koi safalta nahi mili abhi tak, chinkara kya uska ek suraj tak inke hath nahi aaya tha.

Inki talash inko aaj waha tha le gai jis raste ke bargad ke ped par wo pret rahta tha, ye sab jangal khet or aas pass jitne bhi chhupne ke thikane the, sabki chhan been kar rahe the.

Ussi chakkar me ye log uss gaon ki taraf jaa rahe the jo ujad chuka tha, ab wahan kuchh tha to bas khandar tute fute makan, or bhooto ka adda.

Pandey:- Sir main aapko samjha raha hun aap wahan jane ka kasht naa kare, kahi aapko kuchh ho gaya to....

Vijay:- To kya hua pandey ji ab talash me nuikle hain to yaha bhi dekh len.

Pandey:- Sir ye jagah bhooto ka dera hai aap samjh nahi rahe, yaha koi insaan aane ki himmat nahi karta, aap wahan maat jaiye.

Vijay:- Pandey ji ye savb afwah hai or kuchh nahi aap bhi chalana mere sang, mujhe to lagta hai wo chinkara yahi chhipta hai, or usi ne ye sab afwah udhai hai taki koi yahan naa aaye.

Pandey:- Sir bahaduri or bewakufi me kuchh to antar hota hai, main ye nahi kahta ki aap bahadur nahi lekin.....

Vijay:- Pandey tumko pata hai naa tum kisse baat kar rahe ho.

Pandey:- Sorry sir lekin main yaha ka rahnee wala hun iss ilake ke bare me main behtar janta hun, Yaha se aaj tak koi wapas nahi aaya, meri baat maan lo sir.

Pandey:- maaf kar do sir main nahi jane wala kabhi bhi, ek katre se to bach gaye hain hum kyoki wo din me kuchh nahi karta, lekin jis jagah aap jana chahte hain waha se koi kabhi nahi lauta.

Vijay:- Thik hai tum uss area se door hi rahana main akele hi jaunga.
**********************

Ham sab tifeen time me bhojnalay me baithe the or baate kar rahe the, jahan main prince or prity the, lekin aaj kal chandani or uske dost bhi hamare hi sath rahne lage the, jab bhi wo log aate hamare sath aa ke baith jate.

Abhi bhi wo sab aaye or hamare sath baith gaye jisse humne apni baate bich me hi chhod di.

Sunanda:- Hello everyone kaise ho sab.

Prity/prince:- we are fine, thank you, how about you all?

All:- we are fine too.

Main:- ye aap sabhi log kya angrezi me gitarpitar kar rahe ho hame bhi btao.

Meri baate sun sare hasne lage.

sunanda:- are humne kaha sab kaise hain bas, aapko naa english jaldi sikh leni chahiye aaj ke time me aisa koun hai jise thodi bahut english nhi aati.

Waise main samajh to gaya tha, lekin ab sabke samne itna jaldi to nahi bol sakta tha naa.

Main:- Han aap sahi kah rahi ho, mujhe bhi sikhni hai, aap hi sikha do.

Rekha:- Are chandani aapko sikha degi, ye achha bolti hai or sikha bhi jaldi degi.

Main uski taraf dekhne laga to wo bhi mujhe hi dekh rahi thi, maine koi jawab nahi diya to prity bol padi.

Prity:- Koi nahi bhai main aapko ab pakka sikha dungi.

Main:- thik hai.

abhi maine itna hi kaha tha ki naa jane mujhe kya ho gaya, mujhe bechaini si chhane lagi, or aisa lag raha tha ki garmi badh gai ho, meri ankhe band ho rahi thi,main apne shirt ke buttun kholene laga upar ke.

Tabhi mujhe chakkar aane laga, main wahan se khada hoke class me jane laga, sab mujhe aise khade dekh mujhe hi dekhne lage, main abhi apna pahla kadam badhata ki wahi table par geer gaya or behosh ho gaya.

Prity:- Bhai ..... bhai... bhai aapko kya ho gaya.

Sab mujhe aise geerte dekh sab sab ghabra gaye.

prince:- Bhai utho bhai kya hua aapko...

Prity:- Prince jaldi pani laa Chhite maar muh pe.

prince bhag ke pani laya or chhite mare lekin mujhe hosh nahi aaya, tab mujhe wahan se utha kar acharya ke kaksh me le gaye or wahin lita diya.

Sabko chinta hone lagi thi tifeen bhi khatam ho gaya to acharya ne sabko claass me bhej diya, prity or prince to jana nahi chahte the.
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Pandey:- Sir aap ek baar or soch lijiye, bahut khatra hai.

Vijay:- tum chinta mat karo kuchh nahi hoga main bas abhi aaya.

Vijay uss gaon me yaa phir kah lo khandar me chala gaya or pandey uss gann ke bahari seema me hi ruk gaya.

Uss gaon me ek ajeeb si shanti thi koi chidiya tak nahi thi wahan, Uss area ko bans se ghera gaya tha jise hata-te hue vijay uske andar jane ke liye aage badha.

Wahi main behosh tha lekin main aisa mahsus kar raha tha ki apne sharir se bahar hun, Mere samne phir wahi chamkili roshni hui or phir aawaz aai.

Roshni:- Chandra putra tumko use rokna hoga, wo maut ke muh me jaa raha hai, use roko ye sirf tum hi kar sakte ho?

main:- Aa aap koun ho, or mujhe aap dikhte kyon nahi, aap mere bare me kya janete ho mujhe sab janna hai, main to abhi apne vidyalay me tha phir yahan kaise aa gaya.

Roshni:- Putra abhi in bato ka wakt nahi hai, warna anarth ho jayega, agar tumne kuchh naa kiya to baht se bhavishya badal jayege.

Main:- thik hai kintu kaise or kise rokna hai main to kuchh janta bhi nahi?

Roshni:- Putra abhi tum kya ho iska tumko swayam hi gyat nahi, ab meri baat dhayan se suno tumko abhi isi samay dhayan me baithna hai or uss gaon ko smaran karna hai, koi uske andar praves kar raha hai use roko apne kawachh ke madhyam se anytha uski mrityu nishchit hai.

main:- Thik hai main aisa hi karunga kintu koun saa gaon or kise roku?

Roshni:- ush gaon kaa naam hai trigunpur, ab tum ye karya purn karo.

Itna kah kar wo roshni gayab ho gai, main abhi usse or bhi baate janna chahta tha kintu ye to, khair main jhat se dhayan awashthe me baith kar uss gaon ka smarn kiya.

jaise hi main usko yaad kiya mujhe ek bahut bada jhakta laga, wo bijli wala nahi, ashchary wala, ye wahin gaon tha jo mujhe sapne me dikha tha.

jab main wahan dekha to koi vyakti uske andar pravesh kar raha tha, or main saaf dekh raha tha wahan bhooto or dayan chidailo ka basera tha.

Uss vyakti ne bans ke ghere ko hata kar jaise hi praves kiya maine prashtuti ki madad se waha ek majboot kawachh ka nirman kar diya ab koi bhi kabhi bhi bina meri ijajat ke iske andar praves nahi kar sakta tha.

Jo bhi yaha praves karta usko bijli ke zordar jhatke lagte, or thik ais hi vijay ke sath hua jaise hi usne praves ki or andar jana chaha, waha vishfot hua or vijay udta hua pichhe geer gaya or behoshs ho gaya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thank you
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar
 

Aryanv

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#UPDATE 64

Or isi bhich mujhe karan ke maan ki baat pata chali ki wo kya chahta hai or chandani ke maan ki baat bhi, maine apne ass paas jitne log the dost yaa dushman sabke maan ko padha tha.

or unki maan ki baate janne ke baad maine kuchh faishla liya.

Ab Aage...........................

" Mere bachche mujhe mukti dilao, mujhe shanti nahi mili aaj tak, main bas tumse ummid lagaye baitha hun, jab tak mera sapna, meri khwaish puri nahi hogi tak tak mujhe shanti nahi milegi mere bachche, tum hamare gaon phir se basaoge mere bache, tumko hamre devta ko azaad karana hoga me bete, azaad karana hoga, azaad karana hoga........."

"Main karanuga Baba main karaunga" babaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Main need me so raha tha tabhi mujhe ye khawab aaya yaa phir koi sach me mujhse baat kar raha tha pta nahi, lekin unki aawaz me bahut karuna or yaar bhara tha.

Jaise jaise wo aawaz mujhse door jaa rahi thi mujhe bechaini or ghabrahat ho rahi thi, or achanak hi main uth baitha, mera pura sharir paseene se tarbatar tha.

Main uth kar pani piya or phir bistar par baith kar aaj ke iss sapne ke bare me sochne laga.

Main;-(man me) Aaj phir waisa hi kuchh dekha maine, jaise ki ush din dekha tha jane ye kiski aawaz thi, wo kya chahte hain mujhse, ye kis gaon ke bare me baat kar rahe the, or aisa koun devta hai jo kaid me haior bhala koi devta ko kaise kaid kar sakta hai.

Aise hi na jane kitne anginat sawal the mere man me lekin unka jawab koi naa tha, or na hi koi aisa tha jo mere in sawalon ke jawab de sakta tha, phir main in baato ko bhul kar sone ki koshish karne laga.

Wahi dusri taraf

ab thik ho gaya tha or action me bhi aa gaya tha, usko talash thi chinkara ki, jo jane kahan phir gayab ho gaya tha.

Aaj vijay or pandey dono gast par nikale the, wo chinkara ki talash kar rahe the apne aas paas ke ilakon me, lekin unko koi safalta nahi mili abhi tak, chinkara kya uska ek suraj tak inke hath nahi aaya tha.

Inki talash inko aaj waha tha le gai jis raste ke bargad ke ped par wo pret rahta tha, ye sab jangal khet or aas pass jitne bhi chhupne ke thikane the, sabki chhan been kar rahe the.

Ussi chakkar me ye log uss gaon ki taraf jaa rahe the jo ujad chuka tha, ab wahan kuchh tha to bas khandar tute fute makan, or bhooto ka adda.

Pandey:- Sir main aapko samjha raha hun aap wahan jane ka kasht naa kare, kahi aapko kuchh ho gaya to....

Vijay:- To kya hua pandey ji ab talash me nuikle hain to yaha bhi dekh len.

Pandey:- Sir ye jagah bhooto ka dera hai aap samjh nahi rahe, yaha koi insaan aane ki himmat nahi karta, aap wahan maat jaiye.

Vijay:- Pandey ji ye savb afwah hai or kuchh nahi aap bhi chalana mere sang, mujhe to lagta hai wo chinkara yahi chhipta hai, or usi ne ye sab afwah udhai hai taki koi yahan naa aaye.

Pandey:- Sir bahaduri or bewakufi me kuchh to antar hota hai, main ye nahi kahta ki aap bahadur nahi lekin.....

Vijay:- Pandey tumko pata hai naa tum kisse baat kar rahe ho.

Pandey:- Sorry sir lekin main yaha ka rahnee wala hun iss ilake ke bare me main behtar janta hun, Yaha se aaj tak koi wapas nahi aaya, meri baat maan lo sir.

Pandey:- maaf kar do sir main nahi jane wala kabhi bhi, ek katre se to bach gaye hain hum kyoki wo din me kuchh nahi karta, lekin jis jagah aap jana chahte hain waha se koi kabhi nahi lauta.

Vijay:- Thik hai tum uss area se door hi rahana main akele hi jaunga.
**********************

Ham sab tifeen time me bhojnalay me baithe the or baate kar rahe the, jahan main prince or prity the, lekin aaj kal chandani or uske dost bhi hamare hi sath rahne lage the, jab bhi wo log aate hamare sath aa ke baith jate.

Abhi bhi wo sab aaye or hamare sath baith gaye jisse humne apni baate bich me hi chhod di.

Sunanda:- Hello everyone kaise ho sab.

Prity/prince:- we are fine, thank you, how about you all?

All:- we are fine too.

Main:- ye aap sabhi log kya angrezi me gitarpitar kar rahe ho hame bhi btao.

Meri baate sun sare hasne lage.

sunanda:- are humne kaha sab kaise hain bas, aapko naa english jaldi sikh leni chahiye aaj ke time me aisa koun hai jise thodi bahut english nhi aati.

Waise main samajh to gaya tha, lekin ab sabke samne itna jaldi to nahi bol sakta tha naa.

Main:- Han aap sahi kah rahi ho, mujhe bhi sikhni hai, aap hi sikha do.

Rekha:- Are chandani aapko sikha degi, ye achha bolti hai or sikha bhi jaldi degi.

Main uski taraf dekhne laga to wo bhi mujhe hi dekh rahi thi, maine koi jawab nahi diya to prity bol padi.

Prity:- Koi nahi bhai main aapko ab pakka sikha dungi.

Main:- thik hai.

abhi maine itna hi kaha tha ki naa jane mujhe kya ho gaya, mujhe bechaini si chhane lagi, or aisa lag raha tha ki garmi badh gai ho, meri ankhe band ho rahi thi,main apne shirt ke buttun kholene laga upar ke.

Tabhi mujhe chakkar aane laga, main wahan se khada hoke class me jane laga, sab mujhe aise khade dekh mujhe hi dekhne lage, main abhi apna pahla kadam badhata ki wahi table par geer gaya or behosh ho gaya.

Prity:- Bhai ..... bhai... bhai aapko kya ho gaya.

Sab mujhe aise geerte dekh sab sab ghabra gaye.

prince:- Bhai utho bhai kya hua aapko...

Prity:- Prince jaldi pani laa Chhite maar muh pe.

prince bhag ke pani laya or chhite mare lekin mujhe hosh nahi aaya, tab mujhe wahan se utha kar acharya ke kaksh me le gaye or wahin lita diya.

Sabko chinta hone lagi thi tifeen bhi khatam ho gaya to acharya ne sabko claass me bhej diya, prity or prince to jana nahi chahte the.
**********************

Pandey:- Sir aap ek baar or soch lijiye, bahut khatra hai.

Vijay:- tum chinta mat karo kuchh nahi hoga main bas abhi aaya.

Vijay uss gaon me yaa phir kah lo khandar me chala gaya or pandey uss gann ke bahari seema me hi ruk gaya.

Uss gaon me ek ajeeb si shanti thi koi chidiya tak nahi thi wahan, Uss area ko bans se ghera gaya tha jise hata-te hue vijay uske andar jane ke liye aage badha.

Wahi main behosh tha lekin main aisa mahsus kar raha tha ki apne sharir se bahar hun, Mere samne phir wahi chamkili roshni hui or phir aawaz aai.

Roshni:- Chandra putra tumko use rokna hoga, wo maut ke muh me jaa raha hai, use roko ye sirf tum hi kar sakte ho?

main:- Aa aap koun ho, or mujhe aap dikhte kyon nahi, aap mere bare me kya janete ho mujhe sab janna hai, main to abhi apne vidyalay me tha phir yahan kaise aa gaya.

Roshni:- Putra abhi in bato ka wakt nahi hai, warna anarth ho jayega, agar tumne kuchh naa kiya to baht se bhavishya badal jayege.

Main:- thik hai kintu kaise or kise rokna hai main to kuchh janta bhi nahi?

Roshni:- Putra abhi tum kya ho iska tumko swayam hi gyat nahi, ab meri baat dhayan se suno tumko abhi isi samay dhayan me baithna hai or uss gaon ko smaran karna hai, koi uske andar praves kar raha hai use roko apne kawachh ke madhyam se anytha uski mrityu nishchit hai.

main:- Thik hai main aisa hi karunga kintu koun saa gaon or kise roku?

Roshni:- ush gaon kaa naam hai trigunpur, ab tum ye karya purn karo.

Itna kah kar wo roshni gayab ho gai, main abhi usse or bhi baate janna chahta tha kintu ye to, khair main jhat se dhayan awashthe me baith kar uss gaon ka smarn kiya.

jaise hi main usko yaad kiya mujhe ek bahut bada jhakta laga, wo bijli wala nahi, ashchary wala, ye wahin gaon tha jo mujhe sapne me dikha tha.

jab main wahan dekha to koi vyakti uske andar pravesh kar raha tha, or main saaf dekh raha tha wahan bhooto or dayan chidailo ka basera tha.

Uss vyakti ne bans ke ghere ko hata kar jaise hi praves kiya maine prashtuti ki madad se waha ek majboot kawachh ka nirman kar diya ab koi bhi kabhi bhi bina meri ijajat ke iske andar praves nahi kar sakta tha.

Jo bhi yaha praves karta usko bijli ke zordar jhatke lagte, or thik ais hi vijay ke sath hua jaise hi usne praves ki or andar jana chaha, waha vishfot hua or vijay udta hua pichhe geer gaya or behoshs ho gaya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thank you
Awesome update......
 
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