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Kuchh der bad maine apne bag se jo thoda bahut khane ke liye Laya tha maine khaya Aur phir Main let gaya, mujhe Dard Ke Karan Nind bhi Badi jaldi hi aa Gai aur main so gaya.........
AB AAGE...............................
Subah Meri Aankh Chudiyon ke chah chahane aur Jungle Ke Shor Se khula aur main Achanak se uth Baitha, Raat Mujhe Aisi Neend Aayi ki mujhe koi bhi Sudh Budh na rahi, Maine Apni Nazre Ghuma kar Dekhi to subah ho chuki thi, Ab mujhe Aage nikalna tha.
Lekin vahan se nikalne se pahle maine Bans ke pedon se ek lachila Danda Katkar Apne liye Hathiyar Banaya aur ek ka Bhala Banaya, Taki Jungle Mein Mere Liye Koi Khatra Ho To Main usse Samna kar Sakun, aapko to pata hi hai Chandra Lathi Kitna Achcha chalata hai.
Uske bad Mein Aage badh gaya, Yahan per Pani Kahin bhi nahin tha aur Agar Main nadi tak Wapas Jata to bahut time lag jata, isliye maine abhi aage badhane ka hi Faisla Kiya, Chalte Chalte aisa lag raha tha jaise main Rasta bhatak Gaya Hun, Charon Taraf sirf ped Dikhai de rahe the Koi Rasta samajh Nahin aa raha tha.
Phir maine Naksha nikal kar ke dekha To Mujhe vahan se Uttar Disha Mein Chalte hue Ek Pahadi Tak Jana Tha, Kitna Ajeeb tha Jungle Ke Andar Pahadi, main uske Aage badhane Laga, Mujhe Aage badhate Hue Kafi Samay ho gaya tha, Ab To Suraj bhi Sar Tak Aane Laga tha.
Main abhi Aage Badh hi raha tha, aisa lag raha tha jaise Koi Mere Piche Piche chal raha ho, ya phir Koi Mera Picha kar raha hai, Jaise hi main Piche mud kar dekhta mere ko koi bhi nahin Dikhai deta, Mein Aage badhane Lagta To Aisa Lagta Jaise Mere kadmon se koi Kadam milate Hue chal raha hai.
Main Usko Apne dimag se jhatak kar Aage badhane Laga, Maine Socha Shayad Jungle Hai vaham ho raha hoga, patton ke hilne se.
"he he he he he he bahut Dinon bad fir se koi Aaya Hai, lagta hai yah bhi Usi Ki lalach Mein Aaya Hai, bahut Samay se mans nahin khaya vah bhi insani mans, aaj to Dawat Hai Dawat hai he he he he he he.
Chalte Chalte aakhirkar main use Pahadi Tak pahunch gaya, dopahar ho chuka tha Aur Main Kafi thak gaya tha, Maine Dekha us Pahadi se Jharna Gir raha tha, Maine vahin per Kuchh der thaharne Ka Faisla Kiya aur fresh hone Ka socha, Maine Pathar per Apna bag Rakh Diya aur apne kapde utaar kar Mein jharne Mein Kud Gaya.
Bahut hi Thanda pani tha aur swachh bhi bahut sukun mil raha tha, maine acche se nahaya aur aur phir Bahar aa Gaya, Maine Apne kapde pahne aur Usi Pathar per Kuchh der baith Gaya, main Aage badhane ke liye nakshe Mein phir Dekha, Mujhe ek surang Se Gujarna Tha Jo ki issi Pahadi Ke Andar Se jata tha.
Ek Gufa thi Jo is Pahadi ke dusri Taraf nikalati Thi, Ek Taraf Se dusri Taraf jane ke liye Mujhe use Gufa Ke Andar Se Gujarna Tha, Abhi Mein Baitha hua nakshe ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga ki Mere Piche koi hai, is bar maine Apna Nishana Lagane ka Socha.
maine Apna Haath Badha kar dheere se us Bans ke Bhale ko Utha liya, aur Badi furti ke sath me Ghuma kar us bhale Ko jidhar se Awaaz aa rahi thi Udhar mara, lekin maine Bahut Der kar diya tha jo bhi vahan tha vah Ja chuka tha, Mujhe Koi Nahin Dikha To Main Apna Bhala Wapas se nikal liya jo ek ped me dhas gaya tha, aur vahan se Aage badh gaya.
"Hahahahahahahaha bahut acche bahut acche is Khel Mein bahut maja aa raha hai, main Tumhara Shikar Karunga aur tum mujhe hi Apna Shikar banana chahte ho, ek bhukhe ka uske bhojan par sabse pahla adhikar hota hai, waise bhi tum wahan maar hi jaige, isse achha main hi tumko maar kar apna bhojan bna lun hahahahahahahaha."
Main vahan se Aage badhta Gaya lekin mujhe Gufa Kahin Bhi Dikhai Nahin de rahi thi, isliye main uski Talash Mein laga hua tha, lekin koi bhi surag nahin mil raha tha, Maine phir se nakshe ko nikal kar Dekha To Mujhe ab Samajh Me Aaya ki, ki yah Gufa us jharne ke pass Se Hi Jaati Hai.
uss hharne Ke Piche chupi hui thi vah gufa, main wapas se mudkar Usi jharne ke pass pahuncha aur uss Gufa ko dhundhne laga, Mujhe vah Gufa jharne Ke Piche se andar jaati Hui Dikhai Di, main uss Gufa ke Dwar per pahuncha to Andar dekhne per Aisa pratit ho raha tha jaise andar bahut Hi Andhera Ho,
Isliye maine apni torch nikal liya Apne bag se aur aage badh gaya, Jaane Kitni lambi surang Thi Aur Kitna der Mujhe lagna Tha bahar jaane me, Aage badhate Hue mujhe kuchh Aadha Ghanta hua tha ki, Aisa Laga Jaise Kisi Ne mere upar chalang Mari Ho, Jiski vajah se main niche munh ke bal Gir Gaya.
Jab Maine Piche mud kar Dekha To vahan Koi Nahin Dikhai Diya, torch Mere Hath se chhut chuki thi Jiski vajah se vah bhi band ho gai Thi, Aur andhere Mein Mujhe Kuchh Bhi Dikhai Nahin de raha tha, Main Apne najron ko idhar udhar Ghuma kar dekh raha tha, Lekin vahan per To Kuchh Bhi dikhna Namumkin tha.
Main Jaise hi Khada hua fir se Kisi Ne mere upar chhalang Lagai, aur is bar Mujhe Aisa Laga Jaise Kisi Ne koi nukili chij Mere Peeth Mein Chhubha Di Ho, aur ek Jalan ka Ehsas Hua Mujhe, Main dubara Se Khada Hua aur is bar Mein Satark ho Gaya.
Main:- kaun hai Samne Kyon Nahin Aata, Aise kayron Ki Tarah vaar karna Shobha Nahin deta hai?
Unknown:- hahahahahahaha kayar hahahahahaha kayar nhi main to shikari hun or apne bhojan ka shikar karna koi kayarta nhi hai hahahahahahahaha.
Main:-(man me) shikari or shikar, ye kiski baat kar raha hai? Kya ye mujhe shikar samajh raha hai, or khud ko shikari, iski to abhi btata hun koun kiska shikar hoga.
Main:- agar itne hi bade shikari hote to aise andhere me or aise pith pichhe se vaar naa kar amne samne se vaar karte to tab pata lagta koun kiska shikar karta?
Unknown:- Hahahahahaaha bolo or bolo waise bhi tum marne hi jaa rahe ho, agar main tumko maar kar kha jau to galat kya hai, bhukhe ka uske bhojan pe prathan adhikar hota hai.
Main:- Tumhara kahne ka matlab kya hai ki main marne jaa raha hun, or tumko kaise pata main kis liye yaha aaya hun.
Unknown:- hehehehehehe tumhare jaise lalchi bahut aaye yaha or mare gaye uss kunve tak pahunch pana namumkin hai, kuchh ko wahan pahunchne se pahle mare gaye kuchh pahunch kar mare gaye, or kuchh mere bhojan ban gaye hahahahahahahahaha jaise ki aaj tum banoge, bade dino ke baad phir koi uski talash me yaha aaya hai hehehehehehe.
Main:- Uchit kaha tumne lekin iss baar kuchh ulat hoga, iss tumhara shikar hoga wo bhi mere hatho, isliye main tumhe savdhan kar raha hun, mere raste se hat jao or mujhe jane do, nhi to uske anjam ke liye taiyar ho jao.
Unknown:- hahahahahahaha tum mera shikar karoge bache, jitani tumgari umra hai usse dus guna shikar kita hai maine apne jeevan kar me, tum mujhe maroge hahahahahahaha.
Main:- Unche bol naa bolo agar ujala hota to abhi bta deta ki koun kya hai, hat jao mere rashte se nhi to.
Itna bol kar maine apne hath se agni paida ki or uska gola hawa me chhod diya, or dekhne laga koun hai wo, jidhar se aawaz aa rahi thi palat ke dekha to sirf do ankhe jo gole ki roshni me chamak rahi thi dikhai di.
Main:- Ye kya ye kaisi ankhe hai iski, ye.. Ye koi insan hai danav hai yaa koi janwar, aisi ankhe to... To bas bhediye ki hoti hai, to kya ye bhediya hai?
Tabhi wah gurrata hua aage roshni me aaya, jise dekh kar bhai ek pal ko to meri bhi fat gai, ab bhai zindagi me pahli baar aisi koi chiz dekhi thi to fatni to thi hi, or upar se wo bolta bhi tha...........
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thank you.
Kuchh der bad maine apne bag se jo thoda bahut khane ke liye Laya tha maine khaya Aur phir Main let gaya, mujhe Dard Ke Karan Nind bhi Badi jaldi hi aa Gai aur main so gaya.........
AB AAGE...............................
Subah Meri Aankh Chudiyon ke chah chahane aur Jungle Ke Shor Se khula aur main Achanak se uth Baitha, Raat Mujhe Aisi Neend Aayi ki mujhe koi bhi Sudh Budh na rahi, Maine Apni Nazre Ghuma kar Dekhi to subah ho chuki thi, Ab mujhe Aage nikalna tha.
Lekin vahan se nikalne se pahle maine Bans ke pedon se ek lachila Danda Katkar Apne liye Hathiyar Banaya aur ek ka Bhala Banaya, Taki Jungle Mein Mere Liye Koi Khatra Ho To Main usse Samna kar Sakun, aapko to pata hi hai Chandra Lathi Kitna Achcha chalata hai.
Uske bad Mein Aage badh gaya, Yahan per Pani Kahin bhi nahin tha aur Agar Main nadi tak Wapas Jata to bahut time lag jata, isliye maine abhi aage badhane ka hi Faisla Kiya, Chalte Chalte aisa lag raha tha jaise main Rasta bhatak Gaya Hun, Charon Taraf sirf ped Dikhai de rahe the Koi Rasta samajh Nahin aa raha tha.
Phir maine Naksha nikal kar ke dekha To Mujhe vahan se Uttar Disha Mein Chalte hue Ek Pahadi Tak Jana Tha, Kitna Ajeeb tha Jungle Ke Andar Pahadi, main uske Aage badhane Laga, Mujhe Aage badhate Hue Kafi Samay ho gaya tha, Ab To Suraj bhi Sar Tak Aane Laga tha.
Main abhi Aage Badh hi raha tha, aisa lag raha tha jaise Koi Mere Piche Piche chal raha ho, ya phir Koi Mera Picha kar raha hai, Jaise hi main Piche mud kar dekhta mere ko koi bhi nahin Dikhai deta, Mein Aage badhane Lagta To Aisa Lagta Jaise Mere kadmon se koi Kadam milate Hue chal raha hai.
Main Usko Apne dimag se jhatak kar Aage badhane Laga, Maine Socha Shayad Jungle Hai vaham ho raha hoga, patton ke hilne se.
"he he he he he he bahut Dinon bad fir se koi Aaya Hai, lagta hai yah bhi Usi Ki lalach Mein Aaya Hai, bahut Samay se mans nahin khaya vah bhi insani mans, aaj to Dawat Hai Dawat hai he he he he he he.
Chalte Chalte aakhirkar main use Pahadi Tak pahunch gaya, dopahar ho chuka tha Aur Main Kafi thak gaya tha, Maine Dekha us Pahadi se Jharna Gir raha tha, Maine vahin per Kuchh der thaharne Ka Faisla Kiya aur fresh hone Ka socha, Maine Pathar per Apna bag Rakh Diya aur apne kapde utaar kar Mein jharne Mein Kud Gaya.
Bahut hi Thanda pani tha aur swachh bhi bahut sukun mil raha tha, maine acche se nahaya aur aur phir Bahar aa Gaya, Maine Apne kapde pahne aur Usi Pathar per Kuchh der baith Gaya, main Aage badhane ke liye nakshe Mein phir Dekha, Mujhe ek surang Se Gujarna Tha Jo ki issi Pahadi Ke Andar Se jata tha.
Ek Gufa thi Jo is Pahadi ke dusri Taraf nikalati Thi, Ek Taraf Se dusri Taraf jane ke liye Mujhe use Gufa Ke Andar Se Gujarna Tha, Abhi Mein Baitha hua nakshe ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga ki Mere Piche koi hai, is bar maine Apna Nishana Lagane ka Socha.
maine Apna Haath Badha kar dheere se us Bans ke Bhale ko Utha liya, aur Badi furti ke sath me Ghuma kar us bhale Ko jidhar se Awaaz aa rahi thi Udhar mara, lekin maine Bahut Der kar diya tha jo bhi vahan tha vah Ja chuka tha, Mujhe Koi Nahin Dikha To Main Apna Bhala Wapas se nikal liya jo ek ped me dhas gaya tha, aur vahan se Aage badh gaya.
"Hahahahahahahaha bahut acche bahut acche is Khel Mein bahut maja aa raha hai, main Tumhara Shikar Karunga aur tum mujhe hi Apna Shikar banana chahte ho, ek bhukhe ka uske bhojan par sabse pahla adhikar hota hai, waise bhi tum wahan maar hi jaige, isse achha main hi tumko maar kar apna bhojan bna lun hahahahahahahaha."
Main vahan se Aage badhta Gaya lekin mujhe Gufa Kahin Bhi Dikhai Nahin de rahi thi, isliye main uski Talash Mein laga hua tha, lekin koi bhi surag nahin mil raha tha, Maine phir se nakshe ko nikal kar Dekha To Mujhe ab Samajh Me Aaya ki, ki yah Gufa us jharne ke pass Se Hi Jaati Hai.
uss hharne Ke Piche chupi hui thi vah gufa, main wapas se mudkar Usi jharne ke pass pahuncha aur uss Gufa ko dhundhne laga, Mujhe vah Gufa jharne Ke Piche se andar jaati Hui Dikhai Di, main uss Gufa ke Dwar per pahuncha to Andar dekhne per Aisa pratit ho raha tha jaise andar bahut Hi Andhera Ho,
Isliye maine apni torch nikal liya Apne bag se aur aage badh gaya, Jaane Kitni lambi surang Thi Aur Kitna der Mujhe lagna Tha bahar jaane me, Aage badhate Hue mujhe kuchh Aadha Ghanta hua tha ki, Aisa Laga Jaise Kisi Ne mere upar chalang Mari Ho, Jiski vajah se main niche munh ke bal Gir Gaya.
Jab Maine Piche mud kar Dekha To vahan Koi Nahin Dikhai Diya, torch Mere Hath se chhut chuki thi Jiski vajah se vah bhi band ho gai Thi, Aur andhere Mein Mujhe Kuchh Bhi Dikhai Nahin de raha tha, Main Apne najron ko idhar udhar Ghuma kar dekh raha tha, Lekin vahan per To Kuchh Bhi dikhna Namumkin tha.
Main Jaise hi Khada hua fir se Kisi Ne mere upar chhalang Lagai, aur is bar Mujhe Aisa Laga Jaise Kisi Ne koi nukili chij Mere Peeth Mein Chhubha Di Ho, aur ek Jalan ka Ehsas Hua Mujhe, Main dubara Se Khada Hua aur is bar Mein Satark ho Gaya.
Main:- kaun hai Samne Kyon Nahin Aata, Aise kayron Ki Tarah vaar karna Shobha Nahin deta hai?
Unknown:- hahahahahahaha kayar hahahahahaha kayar nhi main to shikari hun or apne bhojan ka shikar karna koi kayarta nhi hai hahahahahahahaha.
Main:-(man me) shikari or shikar, ye kiski baat kar raha hai? Kya ye mujhe shikar samajh raha hai, or khud ko shikari, iski to abhi btata hun koun kiska shikar hoga.
Main:- agar itne hi bade shikari hote to aise andhere me or aise pith pichhe se vaar naa kar amne samne se vaar karte to tab pata lagta koun kiska shikar karta?
Unknown:- Hahahahahaaha bolo or bolo waise bhi tum marne hi jaa rahe ho, agar main tumko maar kar kha jau to galat kya hai, bhukhe ka uske bhojan pe prathan adhikar hota hai.
Main:- Tumhara kahne ka matlab kya hai ki main marne jaa raha hun, or tumko kaise pata main kis liye yaha aaya hun.
Unknown:- hehehehehehe tumhare jaise lalchi bahut aaye yaha or mare gaye uss kunve tak pahunch pana namumkin hai, kuchh ko wahan pahunchne se pahle mare gaye kuchh pahunch kar mare gaye, or kuchh mere bhojan ban gaye hahahahahahahahaha jaise ki aaj tum banoge, bade dino ke baad phir koi uski talash me yaha aaya hai hehehehehehe.
Main:- Uchit kaha tumne lekin iss baar kuchh ulat hoga, iss tumhara shikar hoga wo bhi mere hatho, isliye main tumhe savdhan kar raha hun, mere raste se hat jao or mujhe jane do, nhi to uske anjam ke liye taiyar ho jao.
Unknown:- hahahahahahaha tum mera shikar karoge bache, jitani tumgari umra hai usse dus guna shikar kita hai maine apne jeevan kar me, tum mujhe maroge hahahahahahaha.
Main:- Unche bol naa bolo agar ujala hota to abhi bta deta ki koun kya hai, hat jao mere rashte se nhi to.
Itna bol kar maine apne hath se agni paida ki or uska gola hawa me chhod diya, or dekhne laga koun hai wo, jidhar se aawaz aa rahi thi palat ke dekha to sirf do ankhe jo gole ki roshni me chamak rahi thi dikhai di.
Main:- Ye kya ye kaisi ankhe hai iski, ye.. Ye koi insan hai danav hai yaa koi janwar, aisi ankhe to... To bas bhediye ki hoti hai, to kya ye bhediya hai?
Tabhi wah gurrata hua aage roshni me aaya, jise dekh kar bhai ek pal ko to meri bhi fat gai, ab bhai zindagi me pahli baar aisi koi chiz dekhi thi to fatni to thi hi, or upar se wo bolta bhi tha...........
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thank you.
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update
Tiwari baba ...
Kiy Bhai ..pehle v wo book ke liye koi aachuka hai gjbb..ye Kon SA janwar ya haiwan hai jisse apne hero ko ek pal ke liye fat gai Bhai..
Bhai story bahut slow ho gai hai plzz daily update Diya kro
Tiwari baba ...
Kiy Bhai ..pehle v wo book ke liye koi aachuka hai gjbb..ye Kon SA janwar ya haiwan hai jisse apne hero ko ek pal ke liye fat gai Bhai..
Bhai story bahut slow ho gai hai plzz daily update Diya kro
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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Aage ka intjaar
Bahut khoob superb.
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