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Stroy kesa lag Raha hai jarur batao
 

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Bhai bahut achhi theme hai story ki.. lekin bahut khinch rahe.. is me NANA - NANI ki kahani jaisa feel hota. Mana ye love story hai, lekin romance itna dhire ho raha ki readers bore ho rahe....
Bro agar tumhen hilana Hai to porn dhak ke hila lo/ fingaring karlo

Ye love/action/thriller story hai koye lust stroy nahi, aur story abhi bus shuru hi Hui Hai.....

Incest relationship me sab kuch itni jaldi nahi hota.

Jo bhi hoga sab dhire dhire maje se hoga
 

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Dear readers ek baat bata du update 28 ready hai, per gifs dhundh raha hun isliye let ho raha hai to thoda intezar Karna
 

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Me. Sach mein Nani khana to achcha banaa

Minakshi. Haa ma sach mai

Nana. Han khana to achcha hai per khana banane wali thodi teekhi hai

Ye sun k hum 3 has pade



Continue.......


Minakshi khana kha rahi thi aur ariyan ko dhak rahi thi aur unke man Mai kiya chal rahi hai sirf bo hi Jane


Me. Bese Nani ap to khana accha banati ho par mujhe maa k hat khana jiyada acccha lagata hai

Minakshi ariyan k mu se ye sun k bohat Khush ho jati hai..apni tarif sunkar thora Sharma jati hai aur ariyan ko dhak k smile deti hai


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Ariyan ( me) man hai. Inki smile to dekho kitni Piyari lagti hai...

Maa. Itni acchi lagti Hai mere hath ka banaya hua khana to chalo kal main tumhari favourite khana banaungi

Me. Rahane do maa abhi ke liye, abhi to aap bukhar Ho, think ho jao fir kabhi....ok


Thodi der baad sab ka khana ho jata hai

Nani. Beti tum Jake so jayo main bartan dho dungi

Minakshi. Thik hai maa


Me. Nani.. maa ko thora garam dhudh do, bukhar mai garam dudh khana accha hota hai

Nani. Ha laye....

Nana. Chalo thik hai mai sone ja raha hoon


Nani. Beta dudh gas per Chadha Diya Hai, main bartan manjne ja rahi hu tum Minakshi ko garam dudh de bena

Nana Nani dono hi chale gaye abhi dining table per ham donon maa bete ek dusre k samne baithe Hain....



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Me. Kiya huya ap ko, kiya dhak rahi ho ap

Maa. Umm hmm kuch nahi

Me. Kuch to....

Maa. Hmm

Me. Kiya...?

Maa. Bas soch rahi Hun

Me. Kiya soch rahi ho ap

Maa. Yehi ki tu kitna bara ho Gaya hai ab to tu mere care bhi karne laga hai, halaki care to mujhse karni chahiye Teri


Me. Isme kiya bari baat baat hai har beta apni maa ka care karta hai..aur ap bhi to mera care karti ho...

Maa. Haa fir bhi

Me. Kiya

Maa. Tu nahi samjhe ga ariyan tu nahi samjhe ga

Fir dono hi silent ho gaye, na ariyan ne kuch bola na Minakshi ne sirf dono ek dusre ki ankhon mai Dhak rakhe the, mano Minakshi Apne ankhon se kuchh bata rahi thi aur ariyan Minakshi ki ankhon mai se us na kahi baat ko samajh ne ki koshish kar raha hai par dono hi apne mu se ek shabd bhi nahi bola, mano abhi sannata chha raha hai


Iss sannata ko todta Huye Nani ka awaaz aaya


Nani. Ariyan Kya kar raha hai, dudh ubal ke gir raha hai uska ghand yahan Tak a Gaya, gas off kar de jaldi
( Ab Nani ko kiya pata ubal dudh mai nahi kahi aur ubal a raha hai)

Ariyan ( me). Huuu...haa..haa..bo abhi gas off karta hoon


Minakshi man Mai. Ye kiya ho jata hai mujhe jab bhi akela hota hun ariyan k sath mano samay dhime ho jati hai,... Dhime..nahi nahi..samay ruk sa jata hai...asa kyu hai..asa kyun hota hai


Fir mai ek kaanch ki glass mai dudh leke maa pas jata hoon


Me. Ye lo maa dudh pilo

Mera ye baat sunke maa Hans pari aur meri taraf dhak k boli

Maa. Tu jab chota tha tab mai tujhe ase hi apni du..uuuuu (Minakshi inta bolte hi saram k mare chup ho gaye)

Me. Kiya huya ap itna Hans kyun rahi ho

Maa. Naa....nahi. nahi kuch nahi


Me. Thik hai chalo ab dudh pilo


Minakshi apna sar utha kar ariyan ki ankhon mai dhakte huye boli. Ab jab tum dudh laye hi ho to mujhe pila bhi do

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(Bese Minakshi Ariyan ko tu kar k hi baat karti hai, par jab bhi Minakshi ko ariyan pe bohat jiyada pyar aa raha hota hai tab tum karke baat karti hai)


Minakshi ne inti piyar se strong emotions k sath boli ariyan kese mana kar sakta tha

Update 28 (B) aj rat 10 baje post karunga
 
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Minakshi apna sar utha kar ariyan ki ankhon mai dhakte huye boli. Ab jab tum dudh laye hi ho to mujhe pila bhi do

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(Bese Minakshi Ariyan ko tu kar k hi baat karti hai, par jab bhi Minakshi ko ariyan pe bohat jiyada pyar aa raha hota hai tab tum karke baat karti hai)


Minakshi ne inti piyar se strong emotions k sath boli ariyan kese mana kar sakta tha


Me. Lo maa apna mu kholo



Minakshi ariyan ki taraf dhakti huyi mu kholti hai

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Ariyan Minakshi ko ase khule mu dhak ke kuch ajib se felling ho raha hai

Ariyan man Mai. Kitni Sundar lag rahi ho ap abhi, apki ankhe jese kisi Nadi ka pani jesa chanak. Apki honth jese gulab ki pankhudiyan. Aur ye ap ka khula huya mu kitni cute ho ap ma


Maa. Kiya huya pilao dudh

Me. Huh.. haa

To fir mene ma ko Dudh pilaya


Minakshi ariyan ki taraf dhak ke dudh piti rahi


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Minakshi muskurate huya. Thank you


Ariyan. Hogay, ab ap jaaiye so jaaiye


Minakshi. Hmm tum v so jayo

Minakshi. Good night beta sweet dreams

Ariyan. Good night maa

Minakshi sone chali Gaye

Tabhi Nani aa gaye bartan manjh k

Nani. Minakshi sone chai gaye

Ariyan. Ha abhi hi gaye vah. Ap bhi ja k so jao

Nani. Ha..tu bhi so ja

Ariyan. Main v thora dudh pike so jaunga

Nani. Chal baith mai lati hoon

Ariyan. Areh Nani nahi ap jao mai le lunga

Nani. Thik hai good night

Ariyan. Ha good night

Nani chai gaye..fir ariyan baith gaya chair pe

Ariyan man Mai. Ye ajib si felling Kiya hai..aj maa ko dhakke mujhe ye kiya ho Raha hai..vah aj inti cute lagrahi thi unki aankh unka honth unka bo khula huya muu mano kisi kayamat ki tarha..itni khubsurat.. aur jab me unhe dudh pila raha tha tab vah mujhe kisi bacche ki tarha lag rahi thi.. itni piyari koye kese ho sakta hai

Ye sab sochte sochte ariyan ka najar samne pari glass par gaye


Ariyan. Ye glass......isme to lipstick ki dag lagi hai..ye to maa ki lipstick ki dag hai

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Aur ariyan k face pe ak smile a jati hai

Usne turant hi glass ko apne nak k pass le aya aur jaha lipstick ka dag tha waha sungne laga

Ariyan. Ummmahhh strawberry hhhhhh strawberry jesa kushbu umm

Fir ariyan glasses ko chum liye jaha lipstick ka dag tha

Ariyan. Mmm sweet hhhh... kunti sweet hai uhmmm ye lipstick itni sweet hai na jane unka honth kitna sweet hoga


Ariyan ghari dekha to abhi rat k 11 bak chuke tha aur bo sone k liye apne room jana laga uske hat mai wahi glass tha...


Ariyan bed pe so Jaya ya kahu sone ki kosis kar raha tha par usse nind nahi a rahi thi....


Ariyan ki ankhon k sab bas Minakshi ka chehra

Ariyan yab karne lage Minakshi ko

Ariyan. Kitni khoobsurat chehara unka



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Unki ankhe jese kayamat
Aur unka honth jese gulab ki Komal pankhuria

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Ariyan ye sab sochte sochte uske sharir Mai kuchh hone laga uska hat uske land pa chala gaya....


Ariyan. Ye kiya ye mera abhi khara kyu ho gaya


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Aur ariyan apna land sahlane lagta hai


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Ariyan kuch der asehi sahlane k bad jhat se apna hat land se hataya

Ariyan. Chi chi chi..ye mai kiya kar raha tha chii..aur bo bhi chi chi chi...... Unko bukhar hai aur mai ye sab chi....


Ariyan letke upar fan ki taraf dekhte hue kuchh soch mai duba huya tha...... suddenly uske ankhon se pani girne laga


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Ariyan. Mujhe aj bhi bo din yaad hai maa jab mai class 7 mai parta tha mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.... mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.....papa daru pike apko unke sath room k andar le gaya tha aur darwaza band kar diya tha.. mujhe aj bhi yaad hai...mai darvaje ko Jor jor se maar raha tha bol raha tha ki darvaja kholo darvaja kholo... Chachi ne mujhe darvaja se khinch kar lai aur mujhe chup karane lagi...par usdin mujhe ap ki Chik ti huye sisKariya sunai di aur choum ne ki awaz Sara Ghar gunj raha tha aur....aur mera dil..mera dil us din Tut kar bikhar Gaya. jitni bar aapki Siskariyan ka awaaz mere kan Mai aya utni bar mera dil tut ta gaya,
Mai usdin kinta roya, hazaro bar ap ko pukara maa maa darwaza kholo....kholo darwaza..papa darwaza kholo...par nahi ap ne darwaza nahi khola.........

I...I hate you.....I hate you maaa..I hate you...... Mai nafrat karta hu ap se...haaaa Mai nafrat karta hoon apse...bohat nafrat krta hu.....
main kitna bhi Piyar karu apse, kitna bhi care karu ap ka sab mera dikhava hai.. kyunki main aapko kasht nahin Dena chahta... Per sach to yahi Hai ki use din ke bad main aapse nafrat karta hun bahut jyada nafrat............Ghin aati Hai mujhe aapse maa, haa ghin ata hai..........jab jab mai ap ko touch karta hu ya ap mujhe touch karti ho tab tab mujhe ghin aata hai... Bhale hi kuchh samay ke liye mujhe pyar mahsus hota Hai kuchh Ajeeb sa mahsus hota Hai per jab bhi us din ki baat mujhe yad aata Hai mujhe ghin aata hai aapse...

GHIN ATA HAI


Fir ariyan Bina awaje kiye rone lagta hai itna rota hai uska pillow bhi gila ho jata hai...rote rote thak har k ariyan so jata hai.....






Ab chal te hai Minakshi k room Mai



Rat k 12:30 baje the....


Minakshi gehri nind Mai thi vah kuch saona dhak rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi...

Minakshi sapne mei dhak Rahi thi...

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chota sa Ariyan Minakshi k godi mai aur Minakshi chota ariyan ko apne sine se laga k dudh pila Rahi thi......
Chota ariyan ka piyara chera dhak k Minakshi muskurate huye chota ariyan se puchta hai.

Minakshi. Tum mujhse kitna piyara karte ho

Chota ariyan apni tuti futi awaj mai Mai bolta hai. Bohat piyal kalta hun


Minakshi chota ariyan ka tuti futi awaj mai jawab sunkar Hans ti hai aur chhote Ariyan ka balon mein piyar se haat sahlane lagti Hai...

Chota ariyan. Maa piyal kiya hota hai


Minakshi muskurate huye bolti hai. Piyar bo hota hai jo mai tumse karti hoon aur tum mujhse karte ho, tum jab bare ho jayoge tab tum samajh jaoge piyar kiya hota hai.


Chota ariyan. Maa mai jab Bala ho jaunga tab bi apka duddu piyunga
( Chota ariyan bahut hi masoomiyat se bolata hai)


Ye sun ke Minakshi jor se Hans parti hai



Tabhi suddenly chota Ariyan ab bara ho gaya

Aur Minakshi apne sapne mai bade ariyan ko shikayat kar rahi thi

Minakshi. Tum bade ariyan ho na

Ariyan. Ha


Minakshi. Tum mujhe chote Ariyan jesa Piyar kyun nahi karte ho

Ariyan. Mai ap se piyar karta hoon

Minakshi. Nahi tum juth bol rahe ho

Ariyan. .....

Minakshi. Tum chote ariyan ki tarha piyar nahi karte

Ariyan. ......

Minakshi. Tum mujhe ab Piyar se chute bhi nhi ho, kitne sal beet Gaya Hai tumne mujhe pyar se touch kiya nahi



Ariyan. To ap ko pata chal gaya

Minakshi. .......

Ariyan. Ha mai apse piyar nahi karta Mai nafrat karta hoon ap se

Minakshi. Nahi...nahi.. ye sach nahi hai


Ab ariyan gayab ho gaya

Minakshi. Kaha chale gaye ariyan...... ARIYAN


Minakshi ki nind ab tut cuki thi vah pasine se pura bhi chuka tha aur Jor jor se se ro rahi thi, rote rote....jorse Chikh kar

Minakshi. ARIYAAANNNNNNNN






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Minakshi apna sar utha kar ariyan ki ankhon mai dhakte huye boli. Ab jab tum dudh laye hi ho to mujhe pila bhi do

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(Bese Minakshi Ariyan ko tu kar k hi baat karti hai, par jab bhi Minakshi ko ariyan pe bohat jiyada pyar aa raha hota hai tab tum karke baat karti hai)


Minakshi ne inti piyar se strong emotions k sath boli ariyan kese mana kar sakta tha


Me. Lo maa apna mu kholo



Minakshi ariyan ki taraf dhakti huyi mu kholti hai

images-3

Ariyan Minakshi ko ase khule mu dhak ke kuch ajib se felling ho raha hai

Ariyan man Mai. Kitni Sundar lag rahi ho ap abhi, apki ankhe jese kisi Nadi ka pani jesa chanak. Apki honth jese gulab ki pankhudiyan. Aur ye ap ka khula huya mu kitni cute ho ap ma


Maa. Kiya huya pilao dudh

Me. Huh.. haa

To fir mene ma ko Dudh pilaya


Minakshi ariyan ki taraf dhak ke dudh piti rahi


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Minakshi muskurate huya. Thank you


Ariyan. Hogay, ab ap jaaiye so jaaiye


Minakshi. Hmm tum v so jayo

Minakshi. Good night beta sweet dreams

Ariyan. Good night maa

Minakshi sone chali Gaye

Tabhi Nani aa gaye bartan manjh k

Nani. Minakshi sone chai gaye

Ariyan. Ha abhi hi gaye vah. Ap bhi ja k so jao

Nani. Ha..tu bhi so ja

Ariyan. Main v thora dudh pike so jaunga

Nani. Chal baith mai lati hoon

Ariyan. Areh Nani nahi ap jao mai le lunga

Nani. Thik hai good night

Ariyan. Ha good night

Nani chai gaye..fir ariyan baith gaya chair pe

Ariyan man Mai. Ye ajib si felling Kiya hai..aj maa ko dhakke mujhe ye kiya ho Raha hai..vah aj inti cute lagrahi thi unki aankh unka honth unka bo khula huya muu mano kisi kayamat ki tarha..itni khubsurat.. aur jab me unhe dudh pila raha tha tab vah mujhe kisi bacche ki tarha lag rahi thi.. itni piyari koye kese ho sakta hai

Ye sab sochte sochte ariyan ka najar samne pari glass par gaye


Ariyan. Ye glass......isme to lipstick ki dag lagi hai..ye to maa ki lipstick ki dag hai

images-5


Aur ariyan k face pe ak smile a jati hai

Usne turant hi glass ko apne nak k pass le aya aur jaha lipstick ka dag tha waha sungne laga

Ariyan. Ummmahhh strawberry hhhhhh strawberry jesa kushbu umm

Fir ariyan glasses ko chum liye jaha lipstick ka dag tha

Ariyan. Mmm sweet hhhh... kunti sweet hai uhmmm ye lipstick itni sweet hai na jane unka honth kitna sweet hoga


Ariyan ghari dekha to abhi rat k 11 bak chuke tha aur bo sone k liye apne room jana laga uske hat mai wahi glass tha...


Ariyan bed pe so Jaya ya kahu sone ki kosis kar raha tha par usse nind nahi a rahi thi....


Ariyan ki ankhon k sab bas Minakshi ka chehra

Ariyan yab karne lage Minakshi ko

Ariyan. Kitni khoobsurat chehara unka



images-6

Unki ankhe jese kayamat
Aur unka honth jese gulab ki Komal pankhuria

images-7


Ariyan ye sab sochte sochte uske sharir Mai kuchh hone laga uska hat uske land pa chala gaya....


Ariyan. Ye kiya ye mera abhi khara kyu ho gaya


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Aur ariyan apna land sahlane lagta hai


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Ariyan kuch der asehi sahlane k bad jhat se apna hat land se hataya

Ariyan. Chi chi chi..ye mai kiya kar raha tha chii..aur bo bhi chi chi chi...... Unko bukhar hai aur mai ye sab chi....


Ariyan letke upar fan ki taraf dekhte hue kuchh soch mai duba huya tha...... suddenly uske ankhon se pani girne laga


tear-glowing



Ariyan. Mujhe aj bhi bo din yaad hai maa jab mai class 7 mai parta tha mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.... mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.....papa daru pike apko unke sath room k andar le gaya tha aur darwaza band kar diya tha.. mujhe aj bhi yaad hai...mai darvaje ko Jor jor se maar raha tha bol raha tha ki darvaja kholo darvaja kholo... Chachi ne mujhe darvaja se khinch kar lai aur mujhe chup karane lagi...par usdin mujhe ap ki Chik ti huye sisKariya sunai di aur choum ne ki awaz Sara Ghar gunj raha tha aur....aur mera dil..mera dil us din Tut kar bikhar Gaya. jitni bar aapki Siskariyan ka awaaz mere kan Mai aya utni bar mera dil tut ta gaya,
Mai usdin kinta roya, hazaro bar ap ko pukara maa maa darwaza kholo....kholo darwaza..papa darwaza kholo...par nahi ap ne darwaza nahi khola.........

I...I hate you.....I hate you maaa..I hate you...... Mai nafrat karta hu ap se...haaaa Mai nafrat karta hoon apse...bohat nafrat krta hu.....
main kitna bhi Piyar karu apse, kitna bhi care karu ap ka sab mera dikhava hai.. kyunki main aapko kasht nahin Dena chahta... Per sach to yahi Hai ki use din ke bad main aapse nafrat karta hun bahut jyada nafrat............Ghin aati Hai mujhe aapse maa, haa ghin ata hai..........jab jab mai ap ko touch karta hu ya ap mujhe touch karti ho tab tab mujhe ghin aata hai... Bhale hi kuchh samay ke liye mujhe pyar mahsus hota Hai kuchh Ajeeb sa mahsus hota Hai per jab bhi us din ki baat mujhe yad aata Hai mujhe ghin aata hai aapse...

GHIN ATA HAI


Fir ariyan Bina awaje kiye rone lagta hai itna rota hai uska pillow bhi gila ho jata hai...rote rote thak har k ariyan so jata hai.....






Ab chal te hai Minakshi k room Mai



Rat k 12:30 baje the....


Minakshi gehri nind Mai thi vah kuch saona dhak rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi...

Minakshi sapne mei dhak Rahi thi...

(Flashback/Black and white)

chota sa Ariyan Minakshi k godi mai aur Minakshi chota ariyan ko apne sine se laga k dudh pila Rahi thi......
Chota ariyan ka piyara chera dhak k Minakshi muskurate huye chota ariyan se puchta hai.

Minakshi. Tum mujhse kitna piyara karte ho

Chota ariyan apni tuti futi awaj mai Mai bolta hai. Bohat piyal kalta hun


Minakshi chota ariyan ka tuti futi awaj mai jawab sunkar Hans ti hai aur chhote Ariyan ka balon mein piyar se haat sahlane lagti Hai...

Chota ariyan. Maa piyal kiya hota hai


Minakshi muskurate huye bolti hai. Piyar bo hota hai jo mai tumse karti hoon aur tum mujhse karte ho, tum jab bare ho jayoge tab tum samajh jaoge piyar kiya hota hai.


Chota ariyan. Maa mai jab Bala ho jaunga tab bi apka duddu piyunga
( Chota ariyan bahut hi masoomiyat se bolata hai)


Ye sun ke Minakshi jor se Hans parti hai



Tabhi suddenly chota Ariyan ab bara ho gaya

Aur Minakshi apne sapne mai bade ariyan ko shikayat kar rahi thi

Minakshi. Tum bade ariyan ho na

Ariyan. Ha


Minakshi. Tum mujhe chote Ariyan jesa Piyar kyun nahi karte ho

Ariyan. Mai ap se piyar karta hoon

Minakshi. Nahi tum juth bol rahe ho

Ariyan. .....

Minakshi. Tum chote ariyan ki tarha piyar nahi karte

Ariyan. ......

Minakshi. Tum mujhe ab Piyar se chute bhi nhi ho, kitne sal beet Gaya Hai tumne mujhe pyar se touch kiya nahi



Ariyan. To ap ko pata chal gaya

Minakshi. .......

Ariyan. Ha mai apse piyar nahi karta Mai nafrat karta hoon ap se

Minakshi. Nahi...nahi.. ye sach nahi hai


Ab ariyan gayab ho gaya

Minakshi. Kaha chale gaye ariyan...... ARIYAN


Minakshi ki nind ab tut cuki thi vah pasine se pura bhi chuka tha aur Jor jor se se ro rahi thi, rote rote....jorse Chikh kar

Minakshi. ARIYAAANNNNNNNN






Dear readers,
comments karo, aap logon ka comment Se hi motivation milta Hai story likhane ka.
Puri tarah romance se bhara hua hai
Bas aise hi likh te raho
Maza aagaya
Kabhi kabhi aise kahani padhne ko milta hai
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