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Update 34 ( yeh ehsas kiya hai? )

Previous....

Nani. Vah thik hai...par tu lal kyun padh gaye

Minakshi. Bo..bo...pata nahi..ase hi....


Tabhi Ariyan ata waha ata...hai


Ariyan. Nani bhuk lagi hai bohat...


Minakshi. Arehh. Haa..haa tu baith 10 minute


Ariyan Nani ko gudgudi karte huye

Ariyan. Nani chalo tabtak tv dhakte hai



Continue.....


Ariyan. Nani chalo tabtak tv dhakte hai

( Nani hanste huye )
Nani. Arehhh beta gudgudi mat kar

Minakshi kitchen room se Ariyan ko dhak rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi

Ariyan. Accha thik hai gudgudi nahi karunga ap chalo to sahi....


Ariyan aj Subha se hi Kush tha aur uss bas Masti sujh raha tha

Ariyan aur Nani tv dhakne lage, aur Minakshi kitchen mai par Minakshi ka pura dhiyan bas Ariyan pe tha


Ariyan. Bese Nani ek baat bolu....

Nani. Ha bol

Ariyan. Kuch nahi hehe.....
Ye bolke Ariyan Nani ko fir se gudgudi karne laga

Ye dhak k Minakshi Hans padi,
Minakshi man mei. Ye larka bara badmash ho gaya hai

Nani. Tu na ab mar khayega Ariyan, sataya Mat kar

Ariyan. Arehhh Nani gussa kyun ho rahi, ek hi to Nani hai mera ab usse nahi sata unga ko kise sata unga ha

Ye bol k Ariyan fir se Nani ko gudgudi karne laga....

Minakshi. Ariyan Nani ko sataya mat kar


Ariyan Minakshi ko dhakte huye

Ariyan. Chalo thik hai nahi sata ta

Fir Ariyan ne Minakshi ko dhakte huye nani k galo mai ek pappi di


Minakshi ne dekha Ariyan usse dhakkar Nani k galo pe pappi di

Ye dhak ke Minakshi ko lagta hai ki ariyan vah puppi Nani k gal pe nahi Minakshi k gal pe deta hai...

Minakshi k chehre par ek ajib sa shocked, laija ki smile aa jati hai

Minakshi man Mai. ( Ariyan thodi der phele mere itna karib tha, vah ehsas se pata nahi mujhe kiya huya Maine aankhe band kar liya tha, aur Mai kiya hi karti.. Ariyan mujhe itna pyar bhari najro se dhakta hai mujhe to saram hi aa jata hai uske samne, aur to aur aj Ariyan ka sparsh uska sanse mere honton par...ye ehsaas tha..kiya tha bo ehsas...kiya Ariyan ko bhi mere jesa ehsas hota hai mere karib ake....aur us din cinema hall mei..mera aur Ariyan nak ek dusre se mil gaya tha..par tabhi usse kisi ka call aa jata hai. Aur aj...aj Ariyan mere honton k itna karib tha ki...ki uske hothon mere honton se bas 3 inch dur tha..par tabhi maa ne mujhe bula liya..agar us din Ariyan ka phone nahi bajta...to fir kiya hota, aur aj agar maa ne mujhe nahi bulaya hota to kiya hota....kiya hota)


Nani. Minakshi sabji nahi huya abhi tak. Beta Ariyan ko bhuk lagi hai jaldi kar thoda..


Minakshi. Hahh....haa..hoo...hogaya bas abhi khana lagati hoon ma..ap dono dining table pe baith Joo


Nani. Beti mujhe bhouk nahi hai.. Ariyan tu ja kha le, mai thora so ne jati hoon

Minakshi. Kyun Kiya huya maa khana Kyun nahi khani..

Nani. Rat ko dhang se nind nahi aye....abhi bohat nind aa rahi hai

Minakshi. Accha thik hai maa to ek kam karo..mai khana rakh deti hoon ap k aur papa k liye, papa aye to ap dono kha lena..


Nani. Thik hai, areh ha Ariyan tere Nana ko tujhse kuch kam tha...


Ariyan. Mai Nana ko call kar k puch leta hoon


Nani. Thak hai..mai ja rahi hoon


Fir Ariyan ne call lagaya Nana ko.

Ariyan. Hello Nana

Nana. Ariyan uth gaya hai tu

Ariyan. Ha abhi thodi der pehle hi..par ap kaha ho..aur Nani ne bola ap ko kuch important kam tha

Nani. Ha...tere as-pas Minakshi beti aur Tera Nani to nahi hai na


Ariyan. Nahi hai ap boliye...


Nani. Ariyan Minakshi ko bahar mat aane de na


Ariyan series ho kar. Kyun Nana kiya huya


Nani. Abhi nahi rat mai bata unga


Ariyan. Baise bhi mai aj maa ko bharar nahi Jane seta kyun ki unhe kal rat ko bukhar aya tha na...par ap abhi kaha ho.

Nana. Abhi mai bahar hoon..chalo mai rakhta hoon Ariyan Sam ko baat baat karenge


Ariyan ne call cut Kiya

Minakshi. Kis ka call tha Ariyan

Ariyan kuch sochte huye. Vah choriye ap ye boliye ap ko to bukhar tha na, to ap Kyun khana banane gaye

Minakshi. Kyun ki mujhe mere betu k liye khaana Bana na accha lagta hai


Ariyan. Par maa ap ko bukhar hai pata hai na..

Minakshi. Ha baba ha pata hai par abhi mujhe thik mahsus ho raha hai beta

Ariyan. Par...

Minakshi. Choup raho ok, pehele khana Khalo chalo

Fir Minakshi ne Ariyan ko khana diye aur khud bhi baith gaye Ariyan k pass


Minakshi. Ye dekho tumhari favourite masala chicken, matar Panir ki sabji aur ye rahi salad

Ariyan. woooo bohat swadisht lag raha hai......

Minakshi. Bate baad mai pehele kha lo chalo chalo

Ariyan. Par ma kiya jarurat thi ap ko itna Sara khana bana k liye

Minakshi. Maine mere Ariyan k liye khana banaya is Mai jarurat ki kiya baat hai

Ariyan Minakshi ko dhakte huye
Ariyan. Ap ko pata hai na ap ko ye sab karne ki koye jarurat nahi, maine Nani ne kam se kam 100 bar bol chuka hoon ki khana banane ke liye ek maid rakh lete per ap mante hi nahin

Minakshi. Kyu ki Mujhse mere Ariyan k liye khana banana accha lagta hai, aur rahi baat maid rakhne ki to sunlo mere rehte tum kisi aur ka banaya huya kyun khaoge.
Minakshi ab Ruth kar. Ha agar tumhen mera banaya khana accha nahi lagta to mar Khao rakh ko koye maid

Ariyan. Areh ap to Ruth gaye...mujhe to bas ap ka banaya huya khana hi accha lagta hai

Minakshi. Ha ha pata hai..maska mat maro...chalo khao ab

Ariyan. Ye kiya maa..ap ka khana kaha hai

Minakshi. Tum Khao lo fir mai kha lungi

Ariyan. Asa nahi chalega...chaliye mu kholiye

Minakshi. Tum khalo fir mai kha lungi na

Ariyan. Aisa hai to fir mai bhi baad mai kha lunga...

Ab Minakshi Kiya hi karti

Minakshi. Accha thik hai lao....

Ariyan ek hat se Minakshi k chehre ko thora upar karta hai aur uss ka ek ungli Minakshi k gal pe aur dusri hat Se minakhi ko ek nivala khilata hai..... Minakshi bas Ariyan ko pyar bhari najro se dekhe ja rahi thi


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Ariyan. Chaliye khaea

Minakshi khati hai...

Minakshi. Tum bhi to khao, aur batao kaisa bana hai khana

Ariyan ne jis hat se Minakshi ko khilaya tha Ariyan ne ushi ungli ko chus kar chat ta hai


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Ariyan ko ye karte Dhak Minakshi chouk jati hai uss k badan mai kuch hone lagta hai


Ariyan. Ummm bahut tasty hai khana

Minakshi. Tum..tum ne..tum ne mera jutha..jutha kha liya

Ariyan. Ha to iss mai kiya

Minakshi bas Ariyan ko Gour se Ariyan dhak rahi thi

Ariyan. Baise bhi maa ka jutha...jutha nahi hota, Amrit hota hai

Ariyan se ye sun Minakshi ko Ariyan pe bohat pyar aa raha hota hai par ab uske dill mai wahi ajib sa feeling hone lagti hai


Asehi Ariyan ne Minakshi ko khilaya aur khud bhi kha liya....


Ariyan dakar marte huye. AaaAwooo bahh aj lagta hai kuch jiyada hi kha liya, bohat accha khana bana tha maa

Minakshi dhire se Barbara te hue. Asi body bana rakhe ho to bhouk to jiyada lage ga hi..
Aur Minakshi thora muskura ti hai


Ariyan. Huh? Ap ne abhi abhi kuch kaha kiya?

Minakshi. Na...na..nahi..bo..tum yahi baitho mai... Plate rakh ke aati hun

Fir Minakshi plates rakh ke ati hai aur Ariyan k pass baith jati hai


Ariyan. Maa aj ap bahar mat jana

Minakshi. Kyun Kiya huya...aj to mujhe office Jana hoga..usse pehle mujhe pados wali aunty se bhi milna hai

Ariyan. Nahin aj ap kahi nahi jayoge

Minakshi. Par Ariyan office to Jana hoga na.

Ariyan. Nahi bola na nahi, maine ap ko kal raat hi bata diya tha jab tak ap ka bukhar puri tarha thik nahi hota ap ghar se bahar nahi jayoge..


Minakshi. Par office....


Ariyan. Main hu, aur Nana abhi office hi gaye h sayad..kuch jaruri Kam hoga to bah call kar lenge, ap chinta mat karo


Minakshi. Par.....

( Minakshi ye bolte bolte ruk gaye, Minakshi n socha ki aj office nahi jana to aj sara din vah Ariyan k sath rahe sakti hai, aur Ariyan aj school nahi jayega Kyunki school k liye time bhi kab ka nikal chuka hai, fir bhi vah Ariyan se puchti hai)

Minakshi. Ariyan tum school nahi jayoge aj

Ariyan. Nahi ab kaise..jane ka time to kab ka nikal Chuka hai....aj main Sara din Ghar pe hi rahunga

Ye sunke Minakshi khous ho jati hai

Minakshi. Ariyan kal na...kal na thik se nind Puri nahi huye to soch rahi hoon ki abhi thoda so lu...

Ariyan. Ha mujhe bhi nind Pura nahi aya..thik hai ap so jao...mai v Jake sota hoon

Fir dono utha kar sone k jate hai...

Minakshi dhakti hai Ariyan khoud k kamre Mai ja raha hai.. Minakshi ko kiya huya vah bhi Ariyan k piche piche uske kamre mai aa jati hai...

Ariyan. Ap yaha...

Minakshi. Bo..mai..mujhe..bo..mai
( Bechari Minakshi Kiya hi bolti..usse khud pata nahi kyu Ariyan k Piche piche usske room Mai aa gaye)


Ariyan. Ap ko fir se bukhar aa raha hai?


Minakshi. Bo..mai...haa..mujhe abhi bukhar aa Raha hai

Ariyan. Yeha baitho, ye batao ap ne mediacins li hai

Minakshi apna sar niche jhuka leti hai

Minakshi. Bo..mai bhool gaye thi

Ariyan Thora serious bhav se bola. Ap ko bukhar hai, tabiyat thik nahi hai apki, asi tabiyat mai bhi ap ne khana banaya, aur medicine bhi nahi liya...

Minakshi Ariyan ka baat sunke apna sar niche jhukaye rahi hai ase mano ussne kuch bada gunah kar diya ho

Ariyan. Ap ne medicine nahi liya, aur ap ye baat abhi mujhe bata rahi hoo, agar maine nahi pucha hota to kiya hota? Kiya huya boliye Choup kyun hai ap

Minakshi sar jhuka k dhimi awaz mai bolti hai. Sorry..bo.. sorry

Fir Ariyan madicine aur pani laya

Ariyan. Mu kholiye
Ariyan ne Minakshi ko medicine khila diya..

Ariyan. Ap yehi so jaaiye

Ye bol k Ariyan room se nikal ne lagta hai, ye dhak Minakshi bol padti hai

Minakshi. Kaha ja rahe ho?

Ariyan. Ap yaha so jaenge to mai ap k kamre mai ja k so jata hoon

Minakshi. Nahi tum yehi so jao mere pas kal rat ki tarha

ariyan kuch bole uske pehle hi Minakshi bol padti hai

Minakshi. Kal rat tum....tum mere pass the...isliye..mujhe bohat sukoon bhari nind aye kal....pata hai tumhe kal tum kitne saalon baad mere sat soye....pura 5 sal..pata nahi kyun tum mujhse itna dur dur rehne Lage, ab to tum bas mujhe se zaroorat ke alava jiyada baat bhi nahi karte...aur na hi mujhse pyar, mujhe abhi bukhar hai isliye...bass iss liye tum mujhse baate karte ho mujhe pyar dikhate ho par mujhe tum ye man se nahi karte, kyun dur hone lage ho Tum mujh se akhir kyun Ariyan kyun, kiya dosh hai mera kyun si galti ho gaye mujhse Ariyan kyun si galti haaaa kyun si.......

Ye bol k Minakshi rone lagi


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Minakshi ka bola huya har shabd Ariyan k Dil main jata hai Ariyan ko bhi bohat rona ata hai par vah rota nahi

Ariyan Minakshi k samne baith kar uske hat pakar ta hai

Ariyan. Ap roya mat, ap ko to pata hai ap roti ho mera dil Mai Dard ho hai

Minakshi. Mera huk mat chino.....mera Mera hak mat chino Ariyan

Minakshi ye bolte hi room Mai sannata cha gaya.....
Ariyan bas Minakshi k aankhon se girta huya aansu ko dhak raha tha..aur Minakshi Ariyan ko dhak k usske jabab ka intezar kar rahi thi


Ariyan uthta hai aur Minakshi ko bed 🛏️ pe leta deta aur bas itna hi bolta hai

Ariyan. Mai yehi so raha hoon ap k sath

Bas aur kiya Minakshi itne mai hi khous ho jati hai...

Ariyan room ka darwaja lock kar k Minakshi k bagal Mai dusri taraf karwat badal k let jata hai...

Minakshi dhakti hai Ariyan usse k bagal Mai par dusri taraf karwat lege so jata hai,

Minakshi Ariyan ko piche hug karta hai aur bolti hai..

Minakshi. Mujhse kabhi bhi dur mat hona beta...kabhi nahi

Itna bolte hi Minakshi k aankhe se aansu girne lagta hai par mu se koye awaj nahi karti

Udhar Ariyan apne man mein bol raha tha...

Ariyan man Mai. Pyar to mai aj bhi ap se baisa hi karta hoon jaisa bachpan Mai KARTA tha maa.....mai dur dur reh ta hoo ap se..iss ka karan ap hi ho....aj ap ko rona aa raha hai ap ko dard ho...aur uss di...tab to mai chota tha na maa..uss din mere chota sa dill mai kinta Dard huya vah ap souch bhi nahi sakti

Ariyan k aankhon Mai se aansu girne lage aur ussne bhi koye awaj nahi kiya


Ariyan,Minakshi dono hi ro rahe the koye bhi awaz na karke..dono ko hi pata nahi ki pass wala insan kitna dard mai hai kitna ro rahe hai..na Minakshi ko pata hai na Ariyan ko...
Par dono k dill mai ek ehsaas hai, kiya hai vah ehsas

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wah! kya ek ashadaran aur ekdom mind blowing kahaani hai yah!
bahut achi writings and descriptions! bahut khub.
agla update ki liye intizar.
 
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very very nice.......................................................................................................................................................
 
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