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Bhai aap tik kah rahe ki yadi koi insan pahchnte hai to jarur kosis karega vo kisi ko chodta nahiRahul ka Boss MEHTHA RACHNA ko na Pahchane, ye ho hi nahi sakta hai,
aur Mehtha ko RACHNA ko CHODNE me bahut Maja aaya tha to wo Phir se aage bhi RACHNA ko CHODTA rahna Chahega,
Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki sirf RACHNA ke mana kar dene se Mehtha man jayega.
MEHTHA chahe to kabhi bhi RAHUL ko Tour par bhejkar, Work Load badhakar, Promotion cancel karne ki Dhamki dekar ya Pareshaan karke ya Emotionaly blackmail karke aage bhi Kabhi bhi RACHNA ko CHODTA Rahega,
Ha, Aapki Story hai to Aap Story me kuch bhi dikha sakte hai ki sab MARD RACHNA ki bat man kar Sudhar gaye,
Par Story me RACHNA ko CHODNE wala har MARD ya na Chod pahe wala ( Sunil) RACHNA se itna Prabhawit hue hai ki koi bhi MOUKA milne par Phir se RACHNA ko Jarur CHODNA chahega.
itne Logo se CHUDNE ke bad phir unhi Logo ke aas-pas rahne se kabhi na kabhi RACHNA ko kisi na kisi se CHUDTE hi rahna padega,
isse Behtar yahi hoga ki RACHNA Rahul ko chod kar Mrs PATEL (NRI) ke sath rahe, Qki PATEL ke liye RACHNA sirf HAWAS puri karne ka Sadhan nahi hai balki PATEL RACHNA ko Dil se Pasand karta hai tabhi to itni Badi RAKAM bina kisi Swarth ke RACHNA ko de raha tha.
Ye bhi ho sakta haiWaise ye bhi ho skta hi ki archana aur rahul hmesa ke liye city chod kr chele jaye.....q ki ab tk khani me jitni hawesh rahul ki thi utni he rachna ki....
Or patel ke sath jana hota rachna ko to vo kab ka ja chuki hotiAur Mr. Mhta ki bhi utni he hawesh thi....waise peon bhi saccha pyar krta tha rachna se ...but ye sub acche end nhi ho skte kisi story ke....
u r absolutely right......yhi shi way ho skta hi ki unko apni apni geltiyo ki giltl ho .,aur accept kre jaise rachna ne kiya....rahul bhi kre...yhi best end ho skta hi story ka.....baaki update me dekhte hi...Bhai aap tik kah rahe ki yadi koi insan pahchnte hai to jarur kosis karega vo kisi ko chodta nahi
Or rachna bhi mana nahi kar payegi
Par aap ko age pata chalega ki kya hota hai
Kiyo ki mehtha ko abhi tak ye nahi pata ki rachna rahul ki wife hai
Pahle mere dost use pata to chalne dijiye
Ye bhi ho sakta hai
Par ye hoga ki nahi abhi to rahul ka pirmosan hona hai to dekhte hai
Abhi sab se badha sawal to ye hai ki Rahul party me le ja raha hai rachna
Or vo kese kya karega ki mehtha ko pata na chale
Kiyo rahul me vo hawas thi
Par kahani ki suruat me dono hasbend wife bahut payar karte hai
Or vo payar abhi bhi usi tarh se hai
Bas vo bhatak chuke hai
Es ka matlab ye nahi hai ki vo sudhar na sake
Or patel ke sath jana hota rachna ko to vo kab ka ja chuki hoti
Par ek pati patni ki kosis hoti hai ki mere pati ya patni sahi raste par aa jye
Yadi esi bat na ho to jab tak story us mukam par na pauch jye jaha dono ko khas log na mil jye
Tab tak story chalti rahti hai
Are aap to story end karva rahe hai dear kya aap logo ko naya tuest nahi chahiyeU
u r absolutely right......yhi shi way ho skta hi ki unko apni apni geltiyo ki giltl ho .,aur accept kre jaise rachna ne kiya....rahul bhi kre...yhi best end ho skta hi story ka.....baaki update me dekhte hi...
Bhai main carector nhi chuda hota to story move on ho skti thi....but ub move on me boring ho jayegi jo mujhe legta hi......ye u bhi first story hi aapki...to next start kro....q ki saari curiosity main carector ke according ghumti hi ....jisme ab tk rachna ko rundi bnwa diya....baaki aap pr hi story kaise move krti hiAre aap to story end karva rahe hai dear kya aap logo ko naya tuest nahi chahiye
Kya aap sabhi ko lagta hai ki ye story end ka best samay hai
Acctul me aapko rachna ko romance krwana tha nakhra krwana tha....chudai last hoti hi.....uska mza aleg hota....but ab wo nhi bcha to is type ki new story ....long si likhoAre aap to story end karva rahe hai dear kya aap logo ko naya tuest nahi chahiye
Kya aap sabhi ko lagta hai ki ye story end ka best samay hai
Acctul me aapko rachna ko romance krwana tha nakhra krwana tha....chudai last hoti hi.....uska mza aleg hota....but ab wo nhi bcha to is type ki new story ....long si likho
Bese aap ne story ko sahi pahchana mene story yahi tak sochi thiAcctul me aapko rachna ko romance krwana tha nakhra krwana tha....chudai last hoti hi.....uska mza aleg hota....but ab wo nhi bcha to is type ki new story ....long si likho
Nhi bhai likho aisi he kuch.....but main carector ko bcha kr rkho ye curiosity bni rhti hi kb hoga iska udghtan...hn aur uska sudhrna special hona chiye...dekhte hi kaisa specialBese aap ne story ko sahi pahchana mene story yahi tak sochi thi
Bas last 3 update hi hai
Bese me es ko age badhane ki socha bhi par esa mumkin nahi hai
Kiyo ki es ke sare log sudhar chuke hai
Or jyada dikhana matlab bebuki hogi
Ab es me Rahul hi bacha hai
Par use bhi gilti hone laga hai
Par puri tarah se kese tik hoga
Ye aap ko kuch special hi hona chaiye na dost
Abhi tak story ko aap logo ne bahut pasand kiya
To mera bhi manna ye hi ki kisi lekhak ko usi hisab se end dena chaiye jaha tuest khatam hone bala ho
Ese me ho sakta hai ki us lekhak ki story supar dupar hit ho
Meri story me galtiya bhi thi
Saspens bhi
Jo aap logo ne galtiya batai mene use thik karne ki kosis ki
Or dusri bat dost me ye pahli or akhri story hai
Es ke bad me koi story nahi likhuga
Ye to mene bethe bethe
Likh dala kabhi socha nahi tha ki me likh pauga
Bese aap ne story ko sahi pahchana mene story yahi tak sochi thi
Bas last 3 update hi hai
Bese me es ko age badhane ki socha bhi par esa mumkin nahi hai
Kiyo ki es ke sare log sudhar chuke hai
Or jyada dikhana matlab bebuki hogi
Ab es me Rahul hi bacha hai
Par use bhi gilti hone laga hai
Par puri tarah se kese tik hoga
Ye aap ko kuch special hi hona chaiye na dost
Abhi tak story ko aap logo ne bahut pasand kiya
To mera bhi manna ye hi ki kisi lekhak ko usi hisab se end dena chaiye jaha tuest khatam hone bala ho
Ese me ho sakta hai ki us lekhak ki story supar dupar hit ho
Meri story me galtiya bhi thi
Saspens bhi
Jo aap logo ne galtiya batai mene use thik karne ki kosis ki
Or dusri bat dost me ye pahli or akhri story hai
Es ke bad me koi story nahi likhuga
Ye to mene bethe bethe
Likh dala kabhi socha nahi tha ki me likh pauga
Ji bilkul par mene story yahi tak sochi thi to carector ko sahi raste par lana hi tik haiNhi bhai likho aisi he kuch.....but main carector ko bcha kr rkho ye curiosity bni rhti hi kb hoga iska udghtan...hn aur uska sudhrna special hona chiye...dekhte hi kaisa special
Me aap ko dhaynbad karna chaugaWaise Story likhna ya Na likhna, ye Aapka Niji Faisla hai,
par Aapka Story Likhne ki Shaili bahut Aachi hai, agar Aapko thik lage aur Samay ho to aage bhi Story likhna Jari rakhe.