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कहानी की शुरुआत अच्छी हुई है। थोड़ा ऊँचा और बड़ा फ़ॉंट इस्तेमाल करें ताकि पढ़ने में आसानी हो। वैसे जन्नत और स्वर्ग का एक ही मतलब है। स्वर्ग को उर्दू में जन्नत कहते हैंUPDATE - 5
Dono behan bhai masti mazak karte hue niche pahuche jaha ghar ke sabhi log table ke charo taraf khade the or un sab ke bich me ek dark choclate cake table per rakha hua jis per ravi likha hua tha or bahut hi acha lag raha tha
Ramu- aao ravi beta cake kaato jaldi se taki sab khana khaye phir bahut jor se bhukh lagi hai
madhu- aap ko to har waqt hi bhukh lagi rehti hai
madhu ki baat sunkar sab hasne lagte
ravi bhi apne papa ki baat ko maante hue cake ki taraf jaata hai jaha uske samne vani baithi hui thi ek bahut hi hot dress me jis me se uski adhe se jayda chuchi bahar jhaank rahi thi ravi to kho hi jaata ki tabhi piche se rani boli
Rani- bhai jaldi kaat verna mom pighal kar gir jayega cake per
Ravi bhi baat maante hue jaldi se cake cut karta hai pure hall me jor jor se taliya or Happy Birthday ravi ki awaaze gunz ne lagti wahi ravi pehle apne papa mummy chacha chachi ko cake khilata hai or unka asirwaad leta hai uske baad baari aati uski behno ki jo uske gaalo per cake mal deti hai or ek ek karke gift deti hai jo use bahut pasand aate hai
cake wagerha se nipat kar sab sath me dinnar karke apne room me chale jaate hai jab ki upar chatt ki taraf chala jaata hai jaha halki thand thi kyuki oct ka mahina chal raha tha
ravi yu hi dheere dheere tahal raha tha ki sandhya upar aayi kyuki use neend nahi aa rahi thi wajah to aap logo ko pta hi hai per samne ravi ko dekh kar khush hote hue boli
Sandhya- are ravi tum raat me chatt per kya kar rahe ho
Ravi- kuch nahi didi neend nahi aa rahi thi to socha thodi der tehal lu chatt per waise aap yaha kaise
Sandhya- same bhai mujhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi thi or bta gift kaisa lga tujhe
( uski ankho me dekhte hue jaise puch rahi ho ki tera kya jawaab hai doupher ke swaal per jise ravi bhi samjhte hue bola)
Ravi- kon se wala puch rahi ho didi doupher wala ya abhi jo diya
Sandhya- jo bhi tera mann kare uske bare me bta de maine to tujh per hi chhoda hai
Ravi- hmm to ye baat hai to phir mujhe dono pasand aaye per doupher wala ache se dekh nahi paaya tha esliye kon sa jyada behtar hai ye nahi keh sakta
Sandhya- dekhna kya hai mein to tujhe mehsoos karana chahti hu per abhi tak tera jawaab nahi mila na mujhe
Ravi - abhi bhi jawaab ki jarurat hai kya didi jab apka bhai khud ache se dekh ne ke liye bol raha hai
Sandhaya- tu sach keh raha bhai to bus ek bar bol de ki tune accept kar liya mujhe
Ravi- haa meri pyari didi haa aapki baato per gaur kiya to mujhe sahi lga jis me badnaami ka bhi dar nahi or hum dono ek dusre ki jarurat bhi puri kar sakte hai mein to doupher me hi aane wala tha aap ke pas per chachi ke sath jana pada es liye ab or mat tadpao didi ab to jaldi se jannat ke darshan kara do plz
Sandhaya- ohh mere bhai jannat to kya ab to tujhe swarg ki sair bhi karaungi per pehle to apni ichha puri kar le le dekh jannat ( kehte hi apni t- shirt utha di jis uske mote mote chuche hawa me jhul gaye)
ravi ki to ankh hi bahar ko nikal aayi vo to bus ankhe faade unhe dekhne lga use yu apni chuchiyo ghurte dekh sandhya sharmate hue boli
Sandhya- kaise lage bhai apni didi ke boobs
Ravi- mat pucho didi kitne haseen hai ye per kya mein inhe chhu sakta hu bahut mann kar raha hai
Sandhya- jo tera mann kare vo kar bhai aaj se sab tera hai mera pura jism bus meri tadap mita de ( ragad de inhe masal de bhai or faad de apni behan ki kunwari chut uuuff)
sandhya ki haa sunte hi ravi ne bina ek pal gawaye vo thoos maans ke ball apne hatho me bhar liye jo hatho me bhi nahi aa rahe the or masalte hue bola
Ravi- uuuuufffff didi kitne soft hai ye dil karta hai dabata hi rahu kabhi chhodu
Sandhya- aaaaaahhh bhai aise hi masal bahut tadpi hu mein aise hi jor jor se daba bhai uuufff bahut acha lag raha hai aaaahhhhhh mmmaaaaa mera pyara bhai aaise kitna sakoon mil raha hai aahhh
dono jism ki garmi me pighal ne lage the or es garmi me kab hoth jude pta hi nahi chalakhuli chatt per bina kisi ki parwaah kiye dono ek dusre me sama ne lage the inka bus chalta to abhi chut lund ka sangam kara dete per aaj shayad ye mumkin nahi tha es liye niche kisi ki awaaz se dono jhatke se alag hue or kapde sahi karke apne kamre me jaa kar karwat badalte hue na jaane kab neend ke agosh me chale gaye