Thriller Haveli - The Deadly Mistry (Completed)

[MOHD shahbaz]

Bhai ek keemat Zindagi Ki harshit bhai ki hi story h completed wo post kr do

 

[softheart]

Started reading

 

[pako]

Bhai jab story puri nahi he to title me complete kyu dala, dimag ka dahi Ho jata he suspense me reh ke

 

[harshit1890]

Ye story complete nahi hai

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Anky@123]

Bhai to ye adhi hai abhi, puri story nahi hai kyun ki ye mene hi likhi hai :P

Bhai mene kafi serch kiya magar kahi bhi puri story nahi mili. Aap ne shandar story likhi h ab itna pad liya h to puni pade mina man nahi man raha hai ,aap se help ki gujarish h .. agar aap keval short me bhi bata de ki iske aage kya hua to bhi bahut meharbani hogi ..aapke ans ki pratiksha me

 

[harshit1890]

Bhai mene kafi serch kiya magar kahi bhi puri story nahi mili. Aap ne shandar story likhi h ab itna pad liya h to puni pade mina man nahi man raha hai ,aap se help ki gujarish h .. agar aap keval short me bhi bata de ki iske aage kya hua to bhi bahut meharbani hogi ..aapke ans ki pratiksha me

Pata nahi kahani kis jagah end hui mujhe ab yaad nai aur pdf hai nai varna de deta

 

[Anky@123]

Ok Harshit bhai ,dekhiyega kahi koi jugad ho jaye to ?

 

[harshit1890]

Is story ke original writer Harshit1890 hain .
Thanx to Harshit bhai for such an epic story .
enjoy the thrill.

kahani puri tarah se yaad nahi lekin end yaad hai vo bata deta hun:

Rama ne haveli mein khun nahi kiya tha balki rama ko to khud tejasveer ne mara tha kyun ki usne sanjana par hamla kiya tha.
Haveli mein us din marne walli vo aurat thi jiske sath Mahaveer jabardsti kar raha tha yani vo aurat jisko Rama ne mahaveer ke pas bheja tha. Vo admi jisko tesjaveer ne mahaweer se pitte hue dekha tha vo uska pati tha jiska usne adha chehra jala dia tha. Us din haveli mein khoon us aurat jahan tak naam yaad hai shayad manju tha usne kiya tha kyun ki mahaveer ne uski beti bhi apne bistar par kehne ki baat kahi thi. Isliye usne aur uske pati ne mil kar haveli ke logon ko mara jiske piche mahaweer ki sabse badi galti ki vo manju ko haveli ke kufia raste se le jaya karta tha isliye manju us din usi raste se ayi aur usne sabhi ko zehar sungha kar mar dala.

Aur rashi baat unki beti ki to vo beti Mayuri hai jisne ant mein sabko maar dala aur mayuri ko usne naam yaad nahi aa raha jo aage chal kar kahani mein vikrant ke sath sambhandh bana leti hai.

Kahani ke bich mein bahut kuch hua par end yahi tha.

 

[harshit1890]

Ok Harshit bhai ,dekhiyega kahi koi jugad ho jaye to ?

end mne pichle post mein bataya bhai. Par kahani ka jugad nahi hua mere pas