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Adultery Hawas aur Badla (completed)

Jaguaar

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writer ji ham asha karte hai ki aapki next story romantic theam per ho jo bilkul saaf suthri ho kyoki romantic story hame jayeda pasand aati hai ham umeed karte hai aap jald se jald new story start karoge thanks itni achhi story likhne ke liye
Agar romantic theme par start kiya toh woh ekdum saaf hogi. Without sex.
 

Jaguaar

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Awesome story bro ekdm jabardast ummeed krta hu iska second part jrur ayega kyuki sam ki powers me potential hai ek earth level threat se deal krne ka yha uske threats sirf family country mtlb thoda limited the but uski powers and capability usse jyada hai to ummeed krunga ki next part iska jald ayega aur usme World level threat hoga aur mja ayega aur sam deepak aur shanya ki science inventions ki mdad se aur powerful bnega aur in sab se deal krega aur duniya ko bachaega


Overall very very nice story
Thank you

Aur jaisa aapne bola hai maine waisa kuch socha nhi hai. But who knows the future
 

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Marcus: Tujheee Harish ke baare mein kaisee pata chalaaa.

Sam: Humhe shaqq toh thaa hiii aur confirm tab hua jab tune woh shopper rakha. Parr humhe yeh nhi pata chala Harish Uncle ne waisee kyooo kiyaa. Kyo woh tera saath de rahe hai. Jabki unhone ne hi mujhe yeh powers di hai. Phir meri behen Riya ne mujhe ek movie ke baare mein bataya jisme villain ek hero ko maarke uski jagah leta hai dusre hero ko maarne aata hai. Par dusra heri pehchan jaata hai kyoki pehle hero ke body mein ek aisa mark tha jo villain nhi janta tha.

Usi ke madad se humhe Harish Uncle ki asliyat pata chaliii. Humhare Harish Uncle ke pairr mein ek stitch ke mark hai par tere pairr mein aisa kuch nhii.

Aur aaj subah tu Deepak ke wajah se jo girne wala tha woh humara plan tha jo successfully complete huaa. Phir humne tere Airport wala plan dekha usko samjha aur uski dhajiiya udaai.

Marcus: Bahotttt achheeee. Parrrr tu mujhe nhiii marr payegaaaaa. Agar tune mujheee maara toh teri pyaarri dost Shanaya ki maa ke gale mein jo locket bomb hai usko blast kar dungaa. Aur yeh woh locket utaregi nhi kyoki uske pati ki aankhri nishani hai.

Maya: Kyaaaaaaa.

Shanaya: Mommmmm. Don’t worry. Aur tu harami chall teri ichha bhi puri karrr.

Marcus Shanaya ke iss arguments se hairan hojaata hai.

Shanaya: Kyaaa huaa daba naaa.

Shanaya uske kareeb jaake khanjarr uskee dono haatho mein ghusaa deti haii. Woh dard se chillane aur tadpne lagta haiiii.

Shanaya: Tere uss locket bomb ko humne kabkaa destroyyy kardiyaa haiiii.

Marcus: Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Kaiseeeeeeeeee. Uskeeee baareeee meinnn toh mereeeee aurrrr Rajeevvvv ke alawaaa koiiii nhiiii jantaaa thaaaa.

Rajeev: Aurrrrr maineeeee yehhhhh baaattttt sapneeee meinnnn bhiiiii apneeee mannn meinnn nhiii sochiiii.

Sam: Yaad haiiii mainn tujheee apnee saath markettt legaya thaa. Aur baar baar tere pitt meinnn haathh deee raha thaaa.

Marcus hairani se Sam ko dekhta rehta hai.

Sam: Usi waqt maineee ek chotaa sa microphone tere uss jackettt meinnn laga diyaa. Aur main tere se thoda sa durrr hua thaa. Aur tune iss harami ko call kiyaa thaa. Tab tune apne yeh masterplan bataya tha ke agar tu kabhi fhass gaya toh kaiseee bachegaaa.

Marcus shockkk meinnn sabbbb suntaaa rehtaaa haiiii. Usko lag raha thaa uskaa khelll isbaar koi nhiii bigaad payegaa. Parrr Sammm ne aajjj uskaa sabbb bigaad diyaaa.

Sam: Maineee kaha thaaa aaj teraaa khelll khatammmmmmmm. Vishal Bhaiyaaa iss Rajeev ko aap le lijiyeee.

Vishal Rajeev ko pakadta hai aur usko andhadhunn maarne lagta hai. Uske dono haath pairon ko todd detaa detaa haiii. Uske sir ko pakad ke paas padhe lohe ke saliye se fhodd deta haiii. Phir aakhir mein uski gardan ko 180° ghuma deta haiiii. Yeh Vishal ka ek style tha.

Sam: Mahi Riti Neha Didi Soniya didi. Unn aadmiyon ko aaplog dekhiyee.

Charo ladkiyan unn aadmiyon ke paas jaati hai pehle unke haath pairr todte hai phir unke lund mein laat maarke unka lund ko destroy kardete hai. Phir unki guns se hi unko maar dete hai.

Sam: Mahi Riti Neha Didi Soniya Didi Vishal Bhaiyaa. Aaj aakhri baar aaplogo ka promise todd raha hu. Aaplog sabko leke yaha se bahar jaaiyeee. Pleaseeeeeee.

Yeh 5 jan samaj jaate hai Sam ab kya karegaaa. Isiliye yeh 5 jan sabko jabardasti bahar le jaate hai. Unke jaate hi Sam ne Marcus ko andhadunn maarna start kiyaaa. Apne puri taqat se usko maarta hai.

Marcus: Dard se tadapte huee. Aaaahhhhhhh Saaammmmmmmm mujheeee maaffff kardeeeee mujhseeee galtiiii hogyiiiiii. Saaammmmmmm pleaseeeee mujheeee chorerdeeee mainnnn maafiii maangtaaaa huuuuu mainnn yehhh sabbbbb chorre dungaaaa. Mujheeee chorree deeeee.

Sam: Uske haatho ko pakad kee. Inhi haatho se tune Mahi Riti aur Neha didi ko maara thaa. Yehhh bolll uskee dono haatho ko uske jism se ukhadd fhektaaa hai.

Marcus gaanddd faaddd kee chillaneee lagtaaa haiiii.

Marcus: Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii chorrrrrrrrrr doooooooooo mujheeeeeeeeeeeeee maaaaafffffffffff karddoooooooo.

Sam ke sir mein ek shaitaan sawaar hogya thaa.

Sam uske dono kaan ko pakadta hai aur khinchhh kee Ukhad fhektaaa haiiii.

Marcus phirrr seee chikhhh padhtaaa haiii.

Sam uske jabdee mein puri taqat se ek ghusaa maarta hai jisse uska jabdaa toot gaya aur saare daant toot gayeee. Phirr uskaa jeebh pakad ke khinchhh detaa haiiii.

Marcus chikhte hue behoshhh hojaata hai. Sam usko hosh mein laata hai.

Woh ro ro ke Sam se maafi maange ki koshish karta hai.

Sam uske lund ko pakad ke kaat deta hai aur uss jagah ek khanjar ghusaa deta hai. Phirr uski gaand mein khanjar ghusa ke chirrr detaaa haiii.

Marcus ab chikhhh bhiii nhiii pataa. Par uskooo mauttt bhii nhii aarahi thiii.

Woh dard se behosh hotaa Sam usko hosh mein laata. Phir uske pairon ko ukhadd ke ke fhekk deta hai.

Sam ka pura shareer khoon se bhigg chukaa thaa. Sam ek khanjar leke uske shareer se saare organs nikalta hai.

Sam: Kaisaaa laggg raha haiii Marcusss. Abbbb pata chala jab tu logo ke saath aisaa kartaa thaaa tohhhh.

Marcus bas uskooo dekhtaaa rehtaa hai aur boltaa uskooo mauttt de deee.

Sam: Mauttt dungaaa tujheee parr sabsee bhayanakkkk. Teriii haddiyon ki raakh bhi nhi milegiii kisiko. Tu tadapte hue maregaa. Har pal apni maut ko apne aankho ke saamne dekhegaa.

Sam: Lucyyy(Sam ka naya AI)

Lucy: Yess Sirr.

Sam: Koii aisaaa volcano dundho jo active ho. Aur usme aisi jagah ho jaha isko rakhaa jaa sakee aur har pal apni maut ko apnee aankho se dekheee. Par ek time aane mein mareeee.

Lucy woh search karti hai.

Lucy: Milgaya Sirr. Uss Valcono mein har 3 din baad Lavaa badhta hai aur uparr aata haii. Aur waha pe ek jagah Lava jamm ke ek baithne ki jagah ki tarah hogaya hai. Aur aaj waha lava badhne wala hai. Raat ki taraf.

Sam: Greattttt. Tum mujhe waha teleport karnaa. Main usko jaisee hi waha baithaunga thik tabhi tum mujhe kisi beach mein teleport karnaa.

Lucy: Okkk Sirrr.

Sam: Dekhnaa 1 second ki bhi deri hui main bhi jal jaungaa. Phir Sam Marcus ko pura behosh karta hai. Lucyyy readyyy.

Lucy: Yes Sirrr.

Sam Marcus ko pakadta hai aur bolta hai Nowwwwww.

Lucy sang sang Sam ko uss valcono mein teleport karti hai Sam usko waha pe baithta hai aur second mein hi Sang sang waha se gayab hoke ek beach mein jaata hai.

Phir waha pe samundar mein doobki laga ke apne shareer mein rakhe khoon ko puri taraf saaf karta hai aur apni family ke paas teleport hota hai jo waha uska intezaar kar rahe thee.

Ritika Mahi Neha aur Soniya Sam ko dekhte hi uskee galeee laggg jaate haiii.

Charo: Tumm thikkk honaaaa.

Sam: Main bilkulll thikkk huuuu. Chalooo abbb gharrr chalteee haiii.

ग्रेट ,बहुत दर्दनाक मौत दी है मार्कस को सैम ने , वोल्कानो में छोड़ के आ गया सैम उसको .
 
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Neha aur Soniya toh Sam se alag hojaati hai par Mahi aur Ritika Sam ko nhiii chortiii.

Sam: Lucy ek baar mein kitne jan ko teleport karsakti ho.

Lucy: Sir 8 jan.

Sam: Maa Maya Aunty Papaji Mummyji Aunty(Rishi Mom) Uncle( Rishi Dad) Sanjana Aunty Ashok Uncle aapsab pehle chaliyeee.

Phir sab Sam ko pakad lete hai. Sam sab ko leke ghar teleport hota hai phir waha wapas aata hai.

Sam: Deepak Shanaya Rishi Natasha Vishal Bhaiya Soniya Didi Neha Didi aapsab chaliyeee.

Phir Sam sabko leke waha se nikalta hai aur wapas waha aata hai.

Ab bas Mahi aur Ritika hi bache thee.

Sam: Ab bolo kyaaa huaaa.

Dono Sam ke galee lag jaate hai aur ronee lagte hai.

Sam: Kyaaaa huaaaa meriii jaannn tumdonoo rooo kyooo rahi hooo.

Dono: Tumhari gairhazri mein family ki jimedaari humari thiii par hum woh jimedaari nhiii nibhaa paayeee. We are sorryyy.

Sam: Meriii taraffff dekhoo.

Dono roteee huee Sammm ki tarafff dekhteee haiii.

Sam unki aankho se aansu saaf karta hai.

Sam: Tumm dono ko aisaa kyooo laga mainn tumdono se naraz hojaunga yaa gussa hounga. Tum dono meriii zindagiii ho. Tum dono ne kuch galat nhiii kiyaaa. Mujhe pata hai mere jaane ke baad kya hua aur kaisee huee. Kaiseee Marcus ke aadmi ne bahar khade guards aur Agents ko maara. Phir ghar mein aaye. Vishal bhaiya tum dono ne Soniya didi ne Deepak Rishi ne mukabla kiya. Par jab unlogo ne Riya aur Ritu ko pakad liya tab tumlog kuch nhi kar paayee. Aur phir unlogo ne Vishal Bhaiya Deepak aur Rishi ko maara bhi.

Dono: Par humneee......

Sam unke hontho pe haath rakh kee. Tumdono ne apni jimedaari humesha puri nibhayi hai aur mujhe mere pyaar pe garvvv hai. Isiliye ab yeh sab matt sochoo. Ab humari zindagi se saari musibate khatam hogyii hai. Ab sirf khushiyan hi khushiyan hai.

Dono: Hmmmm.

Phir Sam unko waha pe khadee hokee hi unkoo kiss karna start kardiyaa. Woh dono bhi uska saath deti hai.

Thodi der baad Sam unko leke bhi ghar teleport hota hai.

Ghar mein sab Sam ka hi intezaar kar rahe thee. Doctor Harish Uncle Vishal Deepak aur Rishi ka treatment kar raha tha jo lucy ne bula liya thaa.

Jaise hi sab Sam ko dekhte hai usko pakad lete hai aur sawaal pe sawaal puchna start kardete hai.

Sam unko shanti se baithata hai phir unke jitne bhi sawaal theee sabke jawaab deta hai par utna hi batata hai jo batane layak thaa.

Sab koi bass shockkk theeee. Unko pata hi nhi tha unke naak ke neeche kitna kuch chal raha tha.

Sam: Ab aap sab se request hai yeh sab jo kuch bhi hua hai usko apne dimaag se nikal dijiye aur apni zindagi normal tarike se jeeye. Maanta hu yeh possible nhi hota. Par koshish kijiyegaa.

Sab kuch nhi bolte bas haa mein gardan hila dete hai.

Sablog baate kar rahe the tabhi waha Neha behosh hojaati hai.

Sablog Neha ko aisee behosh hote dekh shockk hojaate hai.

Vishal: Nehaaaaaaa.

Vishal jaldi se Neha ko apni godd mein uthata hai aur sofe mein sulata hai. Mahi Neha ka sir apni godd mein le leti hai.

Vishal: Nehaaa utho na Nehaaa. Nehaa kyaaa hua haiii.

Mahi: Didiii uthooo naa.

Sam: Doctorrrrrrrr. Jaldiii seee meriiii didi koo dekhiye naaa kyaaa huaa haiiii.

Doctor Neha ko check karta hai. Aur khush hoke bolta hai.

Doctor: Mr. Vishal congratulations aap papa banne wale hai. Aapki wife pregnant hai.

Vishal: Jo bhi ho par meri Neha ko hua kya hai woh behosh kyo hogyiiii.

Sablog doctor ki baat sunkeee uchaallll padhteee haiiii.

Doctor: Mr. Vishal. Aapne shayad meri baat thikkk se suni nhiii. Maine kaha aap papa banne wale hai yeh pregnant hai isiliye yeh behosh hogyiiii haiii.

Vishal: Khush hoke. Whatttttttttttttttttt. Kyaa kyaaa aap sachhhh bolll raheeee haiiiii. Mainnn mainnn papaaa banne wala huuuu.

Doctor: Haaaa. Yeh 1 month pregnant hai. Congratulationsssss.

Vishal: Soniyaaaaaa Sammmm sunaaa tumlogoo neee main mainnn papa banneeee wala huuuuu.

Sam: Congratsss bhaiyaaaaa.

Soniya: Congratsss bhaiiiiiii.

Vishal: Tum dono ko bhiii congratsss aakhir tumdono mama aur buaa banne waleee hoooo.

Sab Vishal ko badhaiii dete haiiii. Sabbb bahottt khushhhh theeeee.

Vishal Neha ko uthake bedroom mein sula deta hai. Sam bhi jaake apne haath se goli chupke se nikalwa leta hai jisse kisi ko uske baare mein pata nhi chala.

Thodi der baad Nehaa ko hoshhh aata haiii.

Neha: Aaahhhh meraaa sirrrr.

Vishal: Nehaaaaaaaa.

Neha: Vishallll meraaa sirr dardd kar raha haiii.

Vishal: Tum behosh hokee girr gayii thiii.

Neha: Haa yaad haiii. Parr huaa kyaa haiii.

Vishal jaake Neha ko galeee laga letaa haiii.

Vishal: Aaajjj mainnn bahottt khushhh huu Nehaaa. Aaj tumnee mujhee merii zindagii ki sabsee badiii khushiii diii haiii. I Loveee Youu Nehaaa. I Lovee youu sooo muchhhh.

Neha: I Lovee Youuu Tooo Vishalll. Parr huaa kyaa haiii.

Vishal: Tummmm mummaa banne waliiii hooo aur mainnn papa banne wala hu.

Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uske ankho mein aansu aajate hai.

Neha: Tumm tummm sachh kehhh raheee hooo Vishallll.

Vishal: Haaaa Nehaaaa. Mainnn sachhh kehhh raha huuuu. Tumm maaa banne waliii hoo.

Neha Vishal ke galeee laggkeee roneee lagtiiii haiiiii.

Neha: Thank You Vishallll Thankkk youuu so muchhhh mujheeee itniii badiii khushiii dene ke liyeeee. I loveee youuu Vishallll. I loveee youuuu.

Vishal: I Lovee youuu toooo meriiii jaaannn.

Phir thodi der woh log galee lagee rehtee haiii phirr baharrr aate haiii.

Sablog Neha ko congratulate karte hai. Neha bahot khush thi. Sirf Neha hi nhi baaki sab bhii bahot khush theee.

Thodi der baad Neha ko duaye dekhe Rishi ke Mom Dad waha se chale jaate hai. Rishi aur Natasha wahi rukhte hai. Abhay aur Ragini bhi chale jaate hai par Ritu ko wahi chore dete hai.

Sangeeta: Aajj see tumm koii kaam nhiii karogiii. Ladkiyonnn dekhnaa yehhh koiii kaam naa kareee.

Sab: Thikkk haiiii.

Neha: Parr Maaa abhii 1 month hi huaa hai. Abhi kar saktiii huu naa.

Sangeeta: Nhiii bolaaa naaa. Jao jaake aaram karooo sabloggg.

एक गुड न्यूज मिल गई सबको की नेहा प्रेगनेंट है एक मंथ से ,
सारे दुश्मन मारे जा चुके है .
सैम के पास नया AI भी है .
 
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बेहतरीन रचना ,,,, बहुत शानदार तरीके से खत्म की स्टोरी,,,,,, खास तौर पर लगातार अप्डेट्स,,,,,,, मेरे पास एक बेहतरीन स्टोरी की रूपरेखा हाज़िर है मेरा मतलब पहले एक दो अप्डेट्स,,,, पर मैं अभी अपनी पुरानी स्टोरी को टाइम नही दे पा रहा हु तो चाहुगा की तुम उसे अपने तरीके से लिखो,,, यदि इच्छुक हो तो मुझे pm करो।।। Jaguaar
 
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