Nice storyUpdate- 3
Yahan Ashok ek bunglow me sofe par baitha daaru pee raha tha woh akela nahi tha uske saath ek aurat bhi thi jo uske liye daaru ke peg bana raha thi....
"Itne saalon tak tum kahan gayab thi meri jaan"
"Lambi kahani hai Ashok chhodo"
Sheela (Kanika mom)-
Ye Ashok ke bachpan ki girlfriend hai, inki age 47 saal hai, figure 38-36-42, ye ek high class randi hai, ye randiyon ke kothe par paida hui thi, Ashok jab pehli baar kothe par gaya tha toh usne sabse pehle sheela ko hi choda tha aur phir ye chudai ka silsila chalta raha aur dono ko pyar ho gaya.
"sheela tum jabse mili ho meri baat ka jawab hi nahi de rahi ho"
"Ashok tum toh mere piche hi pad gaye ho"
"Meri jaan tum itne saal gayab thi, mujhe pata bhi nahi chala tum kaisi ho aur kahan ho?"
"Ashok mai ek randi hoon aur tumhe meri jaisi randi se dur rehna chahiye lekin tum ho ki maan nahi rahe ho"
"Tum jo bhi ho mai tumse tab bhi pyar karta tha aur ab bhi pyar karta hoon"
"Ashok jab tumhari Gayatri se shaadi hone wali thi toh mujhe meri maa ne kuch paison ke liye ek minister ko bech diya tha aur tabse mai uske liye hi kaam karti hoon"
"Kya"
"woh toh tum mujhe us din movie theatre me dikh gaye nahi toh hum shayad kabhi nahi milte"
"us din meri aur Gayatri ki 26th anniversary thi, mai apni wife ko movie ke liye laya tha lekin tumhare sath us din jo aadmi tha woh kaun tha?"
"woh aadmi us minister ka beta tha, dekho Ashok tum mujhse dur raho please, agar tum mere sath rahoge toh tum aur tumhari family mushkil me aa jayegi"
"woh minister kaun hai?"
"Tumhe ye sab janna sahi nahi hai, woh bahut bada aadmi hai aur mai uske liye kaam karti hoon, uske clients ko khush karna aur bhi bahut se illegal kaam karti hoon"
"Sheela tum mujhe 26 saal baad mili ho aur ab mai tumhe khud se dur nahi jaane dunga"
"Pagal mat bano Ashok tumhari itni khoobsurat wife hai phir bhi meri jaisi randi ke piche pade ho"
"Haan maanta hoon Gayatri tumse khoobsurat hai lekin tum mera pehla pyar ho aur ab mai tumhe apne aap se dur nahi kar sakta, tumhe nahi pata mai kitna tadpa tha tumhare liye"
"Mai bhi tumse aaj bhi pyar karti hoon Ashok isliye tumhare bhale ke liye bol rahi hoon"
"agar baat sirf tumhari hoti toh shayad mai tumse dur ho jaata lekin baat humari bacchi kanika ki hai"
"maine Kanika ko kisi bhi cheez ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di hai, tum uski chinta mat Karo"
"woh meri bhi bacchi hai mera khoon hai, tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho"
"Aisi baat hai toh mujhe ek biwi ka darja de sakte ho, kya mujhe apne ghar me rakh sakte ho bolo"
"Tum ye kya keh rahi ho, aisa mai nahi kar sakta"
"Toh phir mujhe aur Kanika ko bhool jao Ashok waise bhi mai tumhare saath nahi aana chahti kyunki mujhe tumhari aur tumhari family ki parwah hai, mai aise logon ke beech fas chuki hoon jahan se mera nikalna namumkin hai"
"Tum chinta mat karo mai tumhe is daldal se nikaal kar rahunga"
Kuch time dono daaru Peete hai phir Ashok sheela ko apne baajuon me uthkar room me le jaata hai....
yes, agree..lekin yeh writer kahaniyaan beech mein hi chhod dete hain..hope is story mein waisa nahi hoga aur story poora hoga Tyler herroMaine apki pahle bhi kahaniyan padhi hai.
Aap bahut achche writer ho.
Is kahani se bhi mujhe utni hi asha hai.
nice intro..!!Ye kahani poori tarah se kalpnik hai jiska kisi bhi vyakti vishesh se koi sambandh nahi hai aur is kahani me pariwarik rishton ke beech vasna ko darshaya gaya isliye jisko bhi aisi kahaniyan pasand nahi hai woh turant wapas chale jaye....
Characters of the family-
Ashok (dad)-
Ye ek businessman hai, inki age 48 saal hai, lund 6.5 inches lamba 2.5 inches mota, rang koyle jaisa hai, dekhne me military ke retired officer lagte hai, daaru peene me inka koi mukabala nahi aur jo kehte hai woh karke dikhate hai.
Gayatri (mom)-
Ye ek ngo chalati hai, inki age 46 saal hai, figure 46-36-46, rang doodh jaisa hai, dekhne me thodi moti hai ya aisa bhi keh sakte hai ki gadraye jism ki maalkin hai, apne pati aur baccho se sabse jyada pyar karti hai aur bahut sanskari aurat hai halanki sheher me rehne se modern ho gayi hai.
madhuri (sister)-
Ye ek doctor hai, iski age 26 saal hai, figure 36-26-36, rang apni maa ke jaisa hai, dekhne me hollywood ki koi actress lagti hai, Indian culture ko follow karti hai, ye janwaron se bahut pyar karti hai aur isko akele rehna bahut pasand hai.
Shilpa (sister)-
Ye ek fashion designer hai, iski age 24 saal hai, figure 34-26-36, rang apni maa aur didi ke jaisa hai, dekhne me bahut hot hai, western culture ko follow karti hai, doston ke saath party karti hai, nashe bhi karti hai, ladko ko tease karna isko bahut pasand hai.
Sandy (me)-
Ye college me padhta hai, iski age 20 saal hai, lund 8 inches lamba 3 inches mota, ye ek basketball player hai, rang apne baap ke jaisa hai, college me iske dost saand kehte hai, iske baare me aapko kahani me pata chal jayega.
Ye toh hue hero ki family ke members, ab baaki ke side characters....
Jai (sandy ke college ka basketball captain)
Abhi (vice captain)
Akash (sandy ka dost)
Kanika (college slut)
Baaki ke characters saath ke saath introduce karunga....
nice update..!!Update- 1
sandy college ke 1st year me hai, chemistry (hons.) se b.sc kar raha hai, padhai likhai me average hai, isne 12th class tak ki padhai boarding school me ki hai, aisa nahi hai ki ye akela boarding school me padha hai balki family me sabhi log boarding school me padhe hai, school ki padhai complete karne ke baad iska admission sheher ke hi college me hua hai sports quota se.
Sandy apni bike se college ja raha hota hai aur baarish hone lagti hai....
"Yar ek toh waise bhi late ho gaya hoon aur ye baarish bhi hone lagi"
Kuch time baad sandy college pahunch jaata hai lekin uske poore kapde geele ho chuke the woh classroom me enter hota hai toh sabhi ladkiyan usko dekhti reh jaati hai, sandy bahut handsome aur charming bilkul nahi tha woh dekhne me average type ladka tha but bahut hatta katta tha ya aisa bhi keh sakte hai ki kasarati jism ka maalik tha isliye college ki ladkiyan uske upar fida ho gayi thi....
sandy classroom me enter karke sabse piche wali seat par baith jaata hai jahan uska dost akash baitha tha, akash bachpan se sandy ka dost hai woh sandy ke saath boarding school me bhi padhta tha, akash padhai likhai me bahut intelligent hai aur apni duniya me rehta hai bahut gumsum sa, akash bahut gora chitta hai, chasma lagata hai aur ye bhi basketball khelta hai....
"saale aaj phir late ho gaya"
"Yar late night soya tha, subah sota reh gaya"
"raat me kya kar raha tha jo subah itni late utha"
"Video chat kar raha tha, kal raat ek Russian ladki ke saath maine bahut masti ki"
"Yar tu ye virtual duniya se kab bahar aayega, isme tujhe kya maza aata hai"
"Jo bhi hai tere jaise porn dekhkar hilata toh nahi hoon"
Tabhi classroom me ek ladki ki entry hoti hai jo ki senior thi....
"kya maal hai yar, ye pat jaye toh maja aa jayega"
"Saale madarchod ye meri didi hai"
"Kya?"
"Ye meri didi hai kamine madarchod"
"Gaandu mujhe nahi pata tha lekin maal toh hai "
Kamya (akash sister)-
Ye college ke final year me hai, iski age 23 saal hai, figure 32DD-26-34, ye college ki female basketball team ki captain hai, ye bahut strict hai aur kisi se matlab nahi rakhti hai aur madam ko boxing bhi aata hai isliye college me koi boyfriend bhi nahi hai.
Kamya sabko bolti hai ki kal se inter college basketball tournament start ho rahe hai isliye aaj evening me trials hai jo koi bhi interested hai aa sakta hai aur itna kehke woh chali jaati hai.
College ki chutti me akash aur sandy college ke basketball court par aa jaate hai
Ek ladki thi jo basketball court ke piche ek chair par baith ke notebook me names likh rahi thi jo ladke trails ke liye aaye the, akash apne dost sandy ka name likha deta hai.
Kanika (college slut)-
Ye college ke final year me hai , iski age 26 saal hai, figure 32-26-34, chudai ki bhookhi hai , nashe karti hai aur paise ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai....
Basketball court par do ladke trials le rahe the,
"trials dene andar jao" kanika bolti hai
Sandy trials dene ke liye andar court par aa jaata hai aur line me khada ho jaata hai....
"chalo sab ek-ek karke lay-up lo" pehla ladka bolta hai
Jai-
Ye college ke final year me hai iski age 26 saal hai, ye garam dimaag ka hai ya aisa kahe ki bail hai aur ye college ki men's basketball team ka captain hai....
Kuch ladke lay-up lete hai par tabhi sandy ka chance aata hai woh lay-up ki jagah seedhe dunk maar deta hai aur ye dekh ke sabhi ki gaand bhi fat jaati hai....
Tabhi dusra ladka aata hai aur sandy ko dhakka dekar bolta hai "saale show-off kar raha hai"
Abhi-
Ye college ke final year me hai, iski age 24 saal hai, ye bahut chalak hai isko jahan apna matlab dikhta hai wahan muh maarta hai, ye college ki basketball team ka vice captain hai....
"Sir mere liye ye bilkul normal hai"
"madarchod tu kaun hai jo tere liye ye aam baat hai?" Jai bolta hai
"Sir ye u-19 Indian team ka captain reh chuka hai, Sandeep name toh suna hoga sir" akash bolta hai
Akash ki baat sunkar jai aur abhi ek dusre ko dekhkar apni thook gatakte hai
"iska toh bas name suna tha sir aaj dekh bhi liya, iske team me aane se kya pata kuch chamatkar ho jaye" abhi jai ko bolta hai
"saale teri baat toh bilkul theek hai lekin isko thoda dhamka kar rakhna aakhir isko bhi pata chalna chahiye ki hum iske senior hai" jai abhi se bolta hai
"sir ne tujhe team me select kar liya hai, kal subah 7 bje match hai, time par aa jaana"
"Thank you so much sir"
Phir sandy aur akash basketball court ke bahar aate hai, tabhi sandy ki nazar Kanika par padti hai jo badi ada se sandy ko dekhti rahi hoti hai, sandy uske upar itna gaur nahi karta aur akash ke sath college se bahar nikal jaata hai....
"woh ladki kaun thi jo name likh rahi thi?"
"abe woh college ki randi hai, uska name Kanika hai"
"jo bhi hai par saali dekh toh aise rahi thi jaise mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi"
"us ladki se dur rehna yar woh theek nahi hai"
"Tujhe pasand toh nahi aa gayi saale"
"Kuch bhi"
"Tujhe toh aisi hi ladkiyan pasand hai na"
"sach kahu toh kanika maal toh hai"
"phir uske upar try maar na"
"par saali randi hai"
"toh accha hai na, kaam hua aur kaam khatam aur kya chahiye"
Phir dono apni bikes ke ghar chale jaate hai....
nice update..!!Update- 2
Yahan Gayatri apne office ke cabin me baithi thi aur kuch soch rahi thi, Gayatri ki shaadi ko 26 saal se jyada ho chuke the aur woh bahut khush rehti thi lekin apni 26th anniversary ke baad woh bahut uljhan me rehne lagi thi iski wajah uska pati Ashok tha jisko lekar woh aksar chinta me rehti thi, Gayatri ko aisa lagta tha jaise Ashok usse kuch chhupa raha hai.
Tabhi Gayatri ke cabin me ek aurat kuch files lekar aati hai....
Kavita (akash mom)-
Ye widow hai, Gayatri ke ngo me job karti hai, inki age 43 saal hai, figure 40-38-42 hai, Gayatri ki secretary hai, dekhne me bilkul milf lagti hai, isko finance ki bahut acchi knowledge hai aur thodi chaalu type ki aurat hai lekin Dil ki acchi hai....
"Ye kuch files hai, Gayatri papers par tumhare signature chahiye"
Gayatri bina papers padhe signature kar deti hai....
"are atleast papers toh padh lo"
"Koi baat nahi"
"aise kaise koi baat nahi, Gayatri mai tumhe bahut din se notice kar rahi hoon, tumhe kya ho gaya hai?"
"aisi koi baat nahi hai bas thoda sir dard ho raha hai"
"Tum mujhse kuch chhupa rahi ho, dekho Gayatri mai tumhari ek bahut acchi dost bhi hoon, kya baat hai tum bahut din se ajeeb behave kar rahi ho"
"kuch nahi bas"
"Kya bolo toh"
"woh Kavita mai Ashok ko lekar pareshan hoon"
"Ashok ka affair toh nahi chal raha"
"Tum bhi na Kavita, Ashok aisa soch bhi nahi sakte woh baat nahi hai"
"Toh kya baat hai"
"kuch mahine pehle meri aur Ashok ki 26th anniversary thi, achanak Ashok ke behaviour me bahut badlaav aa gaya hai aisa lagta hai jaise woh mujhse kuch chhupa rahe hai"
"Gayatri tumhari shaadi ko 26 saal se jyada ho chuke hai, yar zindagi bhar ke liye koi insaan ek jaisa nahi rehta hai"
"Matlab?"
"Mera matlab hai ki tum jyada mat socho, sabki apni life hoti hai tum Ashok ko thoda privacy do, sab kuch control karne ki koshish mat karo aur thoda time khud ko bhi do"
"Shayad tum theek keh rahi ho lekin ek aurat ki majboori tum nahi samajh sakti"
"Mai bhi ek aurat hoon bhala mai kaise kisi aurat ki majboori nahi samajh sakti aur mere toh pati bhi nahi hai"
"Kavita mai waisi aurat nahi hoon jaisa tum soch rahi ho"
"mai tumhare dard se guzar chuki hoon"
"Matlab?"
"Gayatri ab itni bhi bholi mat bano, it's ok"
"Aisa baat nahi hai, tum kuch jyada soch rahi ho"
"Come on Gayatri it's ok, mere pati nahi hai lekin phir bhi mai itni khush rehti hoon"
"Kaise?"
"Gayatri maine kabhi kuch galat nahi kiya jo bhi kiya bas apni khushi ke liye kiya hai"
"Kavita paheliyan may bujhao"
"Gayatri tumhe toh pata hai ki mere pati nahi hai, apne pati ki death ke baad mai bahut akeli ho gayi thi, dusri shaadi karti toh pata nahi mere baccho ka kya hota aur kisi se affair karti toh apne baccho ki nazar me gir jaati"
"Tumne kuch galat toh nahi kiya"
"Kuch galat nahi kiya Gayatri bas jo kiya apni khushi aur sukh ke liye kiya, kya tum Janna chahogi aur ye tum bhi kar sakti ho apni khushi ke liye"
"Kya? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha"
Tabhi Kavita apna laptop kholti hai aur ek video sexchat website par login karke Gayatri ko dikhati hai....
"Ye kya hai?"
"Gayatri ye ek video sex chat website hai"
"Matlab?"
"Tum toh sach me bahut bholi ho, ye ek video sex chat website hai yahan koi bhi unknown strangers ke sath sex chat kar sakta hai matlab woh sab kar sakta hai jo ki ek pati patni karte hai bas fark itna hai ki yahan mard aur aurat ke beech computer screen hai"
"Yeh galat hai"
"Gayatri kuch galat nahi hai, unknown strangers se baat karo aur isme friend request bhi bhej sakte hai agar membership hoti hai, nudes swap kar sakte hai, video sex kar sakte hai aur bhi isme bahut acche features hai"
"nahi yeh galat hai, mai Ashok ko dhokha nahi dungi"
"Gayatri dhokha toh tab hoga jab tum kisi se real me sex karogi aur yahan tum virtual sex kar rahi ho, tumhari identity safe rehti hai bas iska khyal rakhna ki camera me tumhara face nahi aaye baaki sab kuch safe rehta hai"
"Tum ye sab karke khush kaise reh sakti ho"
"Tum try karke dekho Gayatri phir baat karenge"
Kuch time baad files lekar Kavita cabin se chali jaati hai
nice update..!!Update- 3
Yahan Ashok ek bunglow me sofe par baitha daaru pee raha tha woh akela nahi tha uske saath ek aurat bhi thi jo uske liye daaru ke peg bana raha thi....
"Itne saalon tak tum kahan gayab thi meri jaan"
"Lambi kahani hai Ashok chhodo"
Sheela (Kanika mom)-
Ye Ashok ke bachpan ki girlfriend hai, inki age 47 saal hai, figure 38-36-42, ye ek high class randi hai, ye randiyon ke kothe par paida hui thi, Ashok jab pehli baar kothe par gaya tha toh usne sabse pehle sheela ko hi choda tha aur phir ye chudai ka silsila chalta raha aur dono ko pyar ho gaya.
"sheela tum jabse mili ho meri baat ka jawab hi nahi de rahi ho"
"Ashok tum toh mere piche hi pad gaye ho"
"Meri jaan tum itne saal gayab thi, mujhe pata bhi nahi chala tum kaisi ho aur kahan ho?"
"Ashok mai ek randi hoon aur tumhe meri jaisi randi se dur rehna chahiye lekin tum ho ki maan nahi rahe ho"
"Tum jo bhi ho mai tumse tab bhi pyar karta tha aur ab bhi pyar karta hoon"
"Ashok jab tumhari Gayatri se shaadi hone wali thi toh mujhe meri maa ne kuch paison ke liye ek minister ko bech diya tha aur tabse mai uske liye hi kaam karti hoon"
"Kya"
"woh toh tum mujhe us din movie theatre me dikh gaye nahi toh hum shayad kabhi nahi milte"
"us din meri aur Gayatri ki 26th anniversary thi, mai apni wife ko movie ke liye laya tha lekin tumhare sath us din jo aadmi tha woh kaun tha?"
"woh aadmi us minister ka beta tha, dekho Ashok tum mujhse dur raho please, agar tum mere sath rahoge toh tum aur tumhari family mushkil me aa jayegi"
"woh minister kaun hai?"
"Tumhe ye sab janna sahi nahi hai, woh bahut bada aadmi hai aur mai uske liye kaam karti hoon, uske clients ko khush karna aur bhi bahut se illegal kaam karti hoon"
"Sheela tum mujhe 26 saal baad mili ho aur ab mai tumhe khud se dur nahi jaane dunga"
"Pagal mat bano Ashok tumhari itni khoobsurat wife hai phir bhi meri jaisi randi ke piche pade ho"
"Haan maanta hoon Gayatri tumse khoobsurat hai lekin tum mera pehla pyar ho aur ab mai tumhe apne aap se dur nahi kar sakta, tumhe nahi pata mai kitna tadpa tha tumhare liye"
"Mai bhi tumse aaj bhi pyar karti hoon Ashok isliye tumhare bhale ke liye bol rahi hoon"
"agar baat sirf tumhari hoti toh shayad mai tumse dur ho jaata lekin baat humari bacchi kanika ki hai"
"maine Kanika ko kisi bhi cheez ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di hai, tum uski chinta mat Karo"
"woh meri bhi bacchi hai mera khoon hai, tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho"
"Aisi baat hai toh mujhe ek biwi ka darja de sakte ho, kya mujhe apne ghar me rakh sakte ho bolo"
"Tum ye kya keh rahi ho, aisa mai nahi kar sakta"
"Toh phir mujhe aur Kanika ko bhool jao Ashok waise bhi mai tumhare saath nahi aana chahti kyunki mujhe tumhari aur tumhari family ki parwah hai, mai aise logon ke beech fas chuki hoon jahan se mera nikalna namumkin hai"
"Tum chinta mat karo mai tumhe is daldal se nikaal kar rahunga"
Kuch time dono daaru Peete hai phir Ashok sheela ko apne baajuon me uthkar room me le jaata hai....