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Erotica Hawas Ka Ghulam
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Sorry guys I already share plot of the story with someone but after knowing all the upcoming story he never replied thats why I closed it here to write it in different direction. Now on I will complete either बर्बादी को निमंत्रण or The Magic Mirror after that I will finish this one.
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Raj Choudhary
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ok dost toh jaldi bas is story ko aage badhaiye kyuki ese to klpd ho jata he haha
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Anjali phone ko dekhte huye vichaar karti hai... Abhi anjali apne vicharon se baahar nikli hi thi ki ghar ke door ki bell bajti hai.
Anjali sidiyan utarti huyi niche aati hai…
anjali dekhti hai ki saleem chacha door open karne gaye huye hai.
Darwaja jaise hi khulkta hai. kamya bhabhi bolte huye anjali ke gale lagti hai…
Lekin thodi der mei use pata chal jata hai ki wo uski bhabhi nhi balki saleem chacha hai.
Kamya thoda asehaj mehsus karti hai aur niche garden karti huyi aage chali jaati hai…
kaamya do kadam aage nikalti hai ki piche mud kar saleem ki aur dekhti hai jo is waqt kaamya ki gaand ko ghur kar dekh raha tha...
wahi kamya ke saath aayi baahar khadi aarti muh khole khadi thi. ye sab itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko samajhne mei bhi nhi aaya.
Aur jaise hi aarti ko samjh aata hai ki kaamya ne buddhe saleem ko jor se hug kiya hai wo shaitaan hi muskaan uske chehre par aajati hai
Wahi anjali ye sab dekh kar apni jagh murat bani khadi thi…
anjali ke manobhaav aise the ki wo unhe kisi ko samjha bhi nhi paati. samjhati kaise khud samajhti to samjha paati.
Jaha ek aur anjali ko kaamya par saleem chacha ke gale lagne par gussa tha wahi dusri aur jalan thi ki aakhir saleem chacha kaamya ko kyu pyaar karte hai…
Tabhi saleem apna gala saaf karte huye aarti se bolta.
Saleem- aap andar nhi aayengi kya?
(saleem ye sab bol kar waapas mahol normal kar deta hai.)
Anjali- are aarti baahar kyu khadi ho? Aao andar aajao. apna hi ghar hai sasural nhi hai.
Aarti sharmati huyi andar aa jati hai. wahi kamya aur anjali dono ek dusre ko taali dete huye hansne lagti hai…
Anjali- accha kaamya ye to batao tum itna khus kyu thi jo aate hi mere gale lag jaane waali thi… aur apne kandhe se kaamya ke kandho ko ek halka sa dhakka maarti hai.
Kaamya Sharma jaati hai.
Kaamya- bhabhi wo bhaiya ka phone aaya tha. Bol rahe the ki wo nhi aa payenge. wo Sunday tak waha se rawana honge.
Anjali- isme itni khushi ki kya baat hai?
Aarti- bhabhi kitni bholi ho. ye party karna chahti hai yahan par… who bhi HARDCORE party. with mask and dancing.
Anjali- chonkne ka muh banate huye paagal hai kya. tere bhaiya jaan se maar daalenge……
Kaamya- tabhi to khush hun won nhi aa rahe to hum party aaram se kar sakte hai.
Aarti- haa bhabhi kaafi din hohgye meine bhi party nhi ki hai. pehle hostel mei to apne friends ke saath khub party ho jaati thi. but ab nhi.( apna sad sa face bana leti hai)
Anjali- party to thik hai lekin hardcore party?
Aarti- ek din ki to baat hai…
Kaamya- pleaseeee bhabhi maan jao na.
Anjali- ( kuch der sochti hai lekin fir bolti hai ) thik hai lekin koi bhi unknown person nhi aayega party mei.
Kaamya- only friends pakka.
Aarti- yes only friends.
Anjali- ok aur ye mask wask kuch nhi aur na hi koi ladka aayega party me?
Aarti- bhabhi mask party couple wagaira karte hai. but hum logo ne socha jo couple dance hoga usme hum ise use karenge.
Anjali- nhi bilkul nhin party karenge lekin normal....
Kaamya anjali ke kandho ko pakad kar use sidiyon se side mei karti hai…
Kaamya- oh ho bhabhi kitne sawal puchti ho. ab no lekin wekin… hum party ki taiyaari karte hai… chalo aarti.
Aarti- yea sure babe…hehehehe (dono behne khilkhilate huye upar chali gayi)
Tabhi saleem piche se anjali ko bolta hai
Saleem- madem?
Anjali ek dum se darti huye piche ghumti hai…?
Anjali- ab kya hai kaka?
Saleem- ji wo chaay….
Anjali tea cups ko dekhti hai aur fir saleem ki aur dekhti hai. aur ek cup utha kar use thank you bolti hai.
Tabhi saleem bolta hai.
Saleem- madem please meri madad karne ke bare mei ek baar sochiye to sahi?
Anjali abhi ek ghut bhi chaay nhi pi thi ki usne saleem ki baat sun kar use gussa aagya.
Anjali- tumm…
Tabhi upar se aawaj aati hai…
Bhabhi…
Saleem- chudwaogi kaamya ko mujhse?
Anjali. haaa
Anjali- what?
Bhabhi yaha aayi ye.
Saleem tum aaogi aaj chudwane.
Anjali- (reply to kaamya )aati hun..... (Reply to saleem) shut up?
Anjali- aarti aa rahi hun please ruko.
Saleem- aapne dono wade kiye hai mujhse please jaldi se pure kar dijiye.
Anjali- meine kab…. Tabhi anjali ko abhi haal hi mei huye conversation yaad aate hai aur naa chahte huye bhi muskura padti hai.
Saleem anjali ka haath pakad kar.
Saleem- thank you madem aapki ye muskurahat dekhne ke liye aankhen taras gayi thi. aur thank you mujhe maaf karne ke liye.
Anjali- its ok ab jaao aur apna kaam karo. aisa keh kar anjali upar aarti ke paas jaane lagti hai.
Wahi saleem kitchen mei aaakar khana paka ne lagta hai.
Aaj saleem ne pure khaane mei hakeem ki di huyi dawa milayi thi…
Saleem ka intezar hai mujhe
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Hi desi lugai
Saleem ka intezar hai mujhe
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