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Erotica Hawas Ka Ghulam

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Rocksanna999

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Rock bhai update kab Dena hai ye bata do yaar....!?????
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Sakshi itna bol kar paayal ka haath pakad kar aarti Aur kaamya ke saath aarti ke room ki aur chali jaati hai aur babu bhi ek pal ko wahi thehra rehta hai lekin agle hi pal chup chaap aage badh jata hai saakshi ke piche-piche.

ab aage...


(Ye seen vartmaan ka hai. Is se pehle ki ghatna aage update mei padhe ==>>)

Babu darwaaje par khade-khade sabhi ladkiyon ko hawas bhari nazroon se dekh raha tha ki tabhi babu ke kaanon mei saleem ki kahi baaten gunjne lagti hai. saale chahe jo maje karna lekin kisi bhi chori ko chodna mat. Halanki babu kaafi nashe mei tha saath hi vigora bhi le rakha tha lekin babu saleem chacha ko bahut manta tha. Isliye wo kisi bhi haal mei saleem chacha ki baat nhi taalta tha.

Babu abhi asmanjs mei tha ki kya kare aur kya nhi ki tabhi sakshi babu ko ungli se ishara karte huye apni aur bulati hai.


Sakshi- hey you. come on beby we wanna have some fun.

Babu padha likha tha aisa nhi tha ki anpadh tha. Lekin wo is kahani ke hisaab se bilkul unpadh ganwaar raha. Isliye use sakshi ki baat samajh to aagyi lekin usne aise react kiya jaise usne kuch samjha hi na ho. Babu ke aise reaction par sakshi bistar se uth kar babu ka haath pakad kar use bistar par le jaati hai.


Sakshi babu ko dhakka dekar bed par gir deti hai. babu ke girte hi aarti aur kaamya bed k eek side mei ho jaati hai. aur paayal babu ke pass jakar babu ke sine ko apne naajuk komal aur chote-chote haathon se sehlane lagti hai.


Babu ko paayal ke haath jab apne sine par mehsus hote hai to use aisa lagta hai jaise koi pankh lekar uski chaati par fira raha ho aur use gudgudi kar raha ho. Babu abhi paayal ke haathon ke naajuk sparsh mei hi khoya hua tha ki sakshi ne babu ke lund ko ek dum se muh mei le liya aur use chusne lagi. Babu sakshi ke is hamle ka jawab payal ko kiss karte huye deta hai.


Paayal ki nazar babu ke muscular body ko scan karte huye niche jaati hai jaha wo sakshi ko babu ka lund chuste huye dekhti hai. lund chuste-chuste sakshi ki nazar paayal se milti hai. paayal sakshi ko dekh kar muskurane lagti hai. babu ke lund ki chusaayi kaafi lambe samay se chal rahi thi. isliye ab babu sakshi ki chusaayi jyada der tak bardasht nhi kar sakta tha.


Wahin dusri aur saleem anjali ke upar chadh kar apni qmar se taabad tod jhatke laga raha tha. Saleem ka lund anjali ki bacchedaani ko sidhe thod raha tha. Jis se anjali ko aisa lagta tha jaise koi use andar se cheer raha ho . uppar wala hi jaane anjali ka kitni dafa paani nikla. ek to masti upar se nasha chut kala khunta gada aur upar buddha saleem chadha.







Anjali- aaaah aaah aahh hmmm ohhhhh noooo.

Saleeee.aarrrr hhmmhmm ummu umm hnnn hnn

Saleem- tune bola nahi bol na apni nandon ki chut dilwayegi na mujhe.

Anjali ki aankhen masti mei band thi. uski chut suj rakhi thi. chut ke aas pass halka-halka khun laga hua tha aur saathi anjali ki chut ka paani bhi beh raha tha. Anjali puri tarah se aanand ke saagar me dubi huyi thi ki saleem ke sawal ne anjali ka dhyan apni aur khinch liiya.

Saleem- bol na jaan.



Anjali- ( muskuraate huye sirf itna hi bol paati hai.) hmmm

Saleem- aise nhi jaan khul kar bolo ab to. Ab kya sharmana. Hum dono ne sharm ke baandh bahut pehle tod diye. Ab koi bhi sharm ki deewar hum dono ke bich mei nhi rehni chahiye.

Anjali- aaah haaa haaa (jor jor se saans lete huye) haa di…la … u…ungi

Saleem- pakka wada?

Anjali- pakk… pakk. [pak. pakka waaaadaaaaa. aaaah ohhh dheere- dheere please.



Saleem anjali ke muh se pakka waada sun kar jor jor se anjali ki chudaayi karne lagta hai.

Andar jaha anjali ke room mei anjli bekhauf saleem se chudwa rahi thi aur saleem ek baajaru randi ki tarah anjali ko chod raha tha wahi pooja siddiyan chad kar anjali ke room ke pass pahunch gayi thi.


(Yaha par mei aap sabhi ko ye baat pehle hi bata dena chahta hun ki pooja is rrom par tab pahunchi thi jab sabhi ek dusre ke kapde utaarne mei lage the aur pooja saleem aur anjali ka hawala dekar waha se bach nikli thi. is baat se lekar jab babu sakshi , adit ke saath paayl aur aarti aur kaamya ke aarti ke room ki aur badh kar aarti ke room ke darwaaje par khada rehta hai is beech yahi koi 15- 20 minute ka samay hai jiski baat mei aap logo ko bata raha hun)


Pooja jaise hi room ke paas gayi to halki-halki aahhhh oghhhh hmmm uuummmu uhhhnmm jaisi aawaje aa rahi thi.

Pooja ek kheli khaayi ladki thi. to use aawajon se hi andaaja hogaya tha ki andar chudaayi chal rahi hai. pooja waha se waapas ghumne lagi. Tabhi ek baar firse wahi ek jagha ruk kar man hi man sochne lagti hai.

Pooja(man me)- bhabhi to khul kar chudaayi ke maje le rahi hai kam se kam bhi 20-25 minute to lengi hi. Abhi 2 hi kadam chali thi ki ruk kar. lekin…? Bhabhi chud kis se rahi hai. aarti bol rahi thi ki uske bhaiya to baahar gaye huye hai. kahin saleem chacha… oh my god.

pooja apna mobile nikal kar jaldi se waapas darwaje ke pass jaati hai. pooja darwaaje ko halka sa jor lagati hai to darwaja halki cheeeeeeeeennnnn karta hua khulta hai wo to accha hua ki pooja ne bahut hi kam dhaaka lagaya tha darwaje ko warna jyada aawaj karta.mushkil se 4 ungal bhi darwaja nhi khula tha ki anjali aur saleem ki taabad tod chudaayi ki aawajen bahar aane lagi wo bhi full form me.







pooja clear sun sakti thi saleem ki hnnn hnnn hmm haaaa ki aawaje, anjali ki ummm ohhhh aaaah cchha hccahahc chacha … budddhe dhi--- dheere-dheere. kameeney. ohh mmmy g go god. to ek taraf gili chut mei jaate salem ki lund ki aawaj pach pacch, thaap thaap thaap(jab saleem ki jaanghen anjali ki inner jaanghon se takraati) to chrrrrr mrrrrr chrrrr mrrr anjali ke bed ki aawaj jaise koi tufaan aa raha ho.



Pooja ki chut ye saari aawajen sunkar hi gili ho gayi thi. andar anjali ek baar fir se jhad jaati hai. lekin saleem ek pal bhi nhi rukta aur wo anjali ko lagatar chode jar aha tha. Anjali vigora ke nashe mei is qdar paagal ho gyi thi ki itni lambi chudaayi ke baad uski chut andar se chil gayi hai use is baat ki bhi parwaah nhi thi. wo to bus saleem ke saath apne charm such ka bhog kar rahi thi.


Pooja ne jaldi se apna mobile ka camera on kar ke andar room mei niche se mera matlab darwaja jo aangan ki side se mobile ko alag alag angel se ghuma kar video banae lagi lekin kya faayda tha. Saleem aur anjali dono chudaayi missinery position me kar rahe the to video mei dono ka hi chehra nhi aa raha tha.


Tabhi saleem apna camera lekar anjali ka video banane lagta hai. anjali aankhen band kiye huye saleem ke har dhakke par aahen bhar rahi thi aur saleem anjali ka video bana raha tha. Aur baahr beti pooja saleem aur anjali ka video bana rahi thi.

Saleem- jaan idhar dekho.


Anjali bahut hi halke se apni aankhen kholti hai. anjali jaise hi apni aankhen kholti hai to saleeem ko apna video banate dekhti hai.

Anjali apna chehra chipate huye.


Anjali- please don’t. mera matlab mat banao na video wo sab to kar rahi hun jaisa aapne kaha.

Saleem- pehle waada kar ki tu meri ghulam aur mei tera ghulam hun.

Anjali- waada kiya.


Saleem- aise nhi apna haath hata kar muskurate huye bolo.

Anjali acche se jaanti thi ki Buddha abhi to jidd karega hi baad mei ye video delete karwa hi legi.

Anjali aaram se apna haath hata kar bolti hai.

Anjali- pakka wada. Aaj se mei aapki ghulam aur aap mere ghulam.

Jab anjali ye baat bol rahi thi tab sleem hole-hole apna lund anjali ki chut se nikal kar waapas andar daal raha tha jis kaaran se anajli ke chehre par jo lajjat ke bhaav (expression) aa rahe the wo bhi saleem ke video mei record ho rahe the.

Saleem- fir baadme apne wade se kabhi mukregi to nhi na.

Anjali- nhi. kabhi nhi.


Saleem- apni nandon ki chut mujhe dilwaaogi.

Anjali saleem ke is sawal se buri tarah Sharma jati hai.

Ab anjali ko bhi yun chudaayi ke time baate karna pasand aa raha tha kyu ki suraj to kabhi anjali se chudaayi ke time baate karta nhi tha.

Anjali hanste huye.

Anjali- ha ha ha kyu nhi meri sari nando ki chut tumhe dilwaungi.

Saleem- agar aisa nhi kiya to.


Anjali thoda soch kar

Anjali- meine wada kiya na to pura zarur karungi fir bhi agar aisa nhi hua to tum jaisa kahoge mei waisa hi karungi.

Saleem ab apna video bana na band kar deta hai lekin baahar baithi pooja muskura padti hai. wo saari baate ab bhi video me record kar rahi thi.

Saleem apna phone band karke door apne kapdo par fenk deta hai aur jaise hi anjali ke upar jhukta hai saleem ki nazar dressing table ke mirror par padti hai jaha wo pooja ko apna aur anjali ka mms banate dekh leta hai.


Ek baar to saleem ki gaand phat jaati hai lekin agle hi pal kuch soch kar saleem bed par karwat badal leta hai. saleem ke aisa karte hi saleem ka lund anjali ki chut se pukkk ki aawaj ke saath baahar ajata hai.

Anjali ke sharir mei ek baar fir se dard ki lehar daud jaati hai.

Ab saleem anjali ki qmar pakad kar darwaaje ki taraf anjali ka muh kar deta hai aur use apne lund par bithane lagta hai. anjali bhi se chudaayi ki aag mei jal bhun rahi thi to usne khud hi saleem ka lund pakad kar apni chut ke muh par set kar diya.

Pooja anjali ka muh darwaje ki aur dekh kar piche ho jaati hai aur mobile ko usi angel par pakde rehti hai taaki anjali ka chehra bhi saaf-saaf video mei aaye.

Abhi anjali ne saleem ka lund apni chut ke muh par rakha hi tha ki saleem ne ek jor daar jhatka maara aur aadha lund anjali ki chut mei ghappp se ghus gaya. anjali ki taange kaamp gayi. Dard se anjali puri ki puri kaamp rahi thi. is position mei anjali ko aisa lag raha tha jaise koi uski chut ke raaste se jabardasti andar ghus raha ho.


Abhi anjali sambhal bhi nhi paayi thi ki saleem ne ek aur jor daar jhatkaa maara aur lund sidha anjali ki bacchedaani par laga. Anjali kaampte huye jhad gayi. anjali ke jhadte hi anjali ki chute k baar fir se andar tak chikni aur gili ho gayi.

Bus ab aur kya chahiye tha saleem ko saleem niche se taabad tod dhakke maarne laga abhi fir se koi mushkil se 1.30 minute hi gujara hoga ki anjali ka pura badan fir se akadne laga aur anjali apni qmar hilate huye jhad ne lagi.



Anjali kareeban 20-25 second tak jhadti rahi ab saleem ek baar firse bina anjali ko sambhalne ka moka diye puri taakat se dhakka maar raha tha. Saleem ka har dhakka anjali ki bacche daani ko thok raha tha. Anjali ko yakeen nhi ho paa raha tha ki wo saleem ki aisi chudaayi bardasht kar pa rahi hai aur kisi buddhe mei aisa stamina ho sakta hai. piche 1 ghante se saleem uski bina ruke chudaayi kar raha tha jisme wo naa jane kitni baar jhad chuki thi. ab to anjali ki chut mei jalan ho rahi thi. aur saleem tha ki rukne ka naam bhi nhi le raha tha. Abhi fir se mushkil se 2.30 ya 3 minute hi huye the ki anjali puri tarah se kaamp jaati hai aur fir ek jhatke se apni qmar upar utha deti hai. kaafi der tak anjali jhadti rehti hai.






itni baar jhadne ke kaaran anjali ke sharir mei kaafi kamjori aa gayi thi. anjali ki chut buri tarah se suj gayi thi.

Itni chudaayi ke baad ab saleem ka lund bhi halki-halki jalan karne lag gaya tha. Ab saleem bhi apna maal chodna chahta tha. ab saleem ne anjali ko bistar par ulta patak kar piche se uski chut mei taabad tod jhatke maarne laga.









kareeb 2-3 minute baad anjali fir se jhad rahi thi lekin saleem ne uske jhadte huye bhi chudaayi nhi roki ab saleem khud bhi apne antim charam sukh ki aur badh raha tha. Dekhte hi dekhte saleem ne pure jor se apni qmar ka jhatka diya aur saleem ka lund anjali ki bacche daane ke muh se bhid kar apna maal khaali karne laga. Itna jyada maal ki anjali ki chut puri tarah se bhar gayi aur itna gaadha maal ki wo aasani se behte huye baahar bhi nhi aa raha tha. Saleem ne 3-4 dhakke aur maar kar apna pura lund anjali ki chut mei khaali kar diya.



Pooja saleem ki aisi chudaayi dekh kar dang reh gyi, pooja ko bhi yakeen nhi ho raha tha ki ek buddhe ne acche-acche jawan londo ko kahin piche chod diya tha. Aisi chudaayi to koi randiyon ki bhi nhi kar sakta tha.


Saleem kuch der anjali par pada raha aur jaise hi saleem ne apna lund baahar nikala anjali ki chut khuli ki khuli reh gyi yahi koi 1-1.5 inch tak anjali ki chut apna muh khole apni gehraayi dikha rahi thi. saleem ka sara maal anjali ki chut mei sama gaya. Mushkil se 2-3 bunde riste huye baahar chut ki deewaron par lagi wo bhi anjali ki chut ke paani me mix hokar patla ho gaya to.





Saleem anjali ke upar se uth kar dekha to anjali gehri gehri saans lete huye aadhi behoshi ki haalat mei padi thi. anjali itna jyada jhad chuki thi ki usme uthne ki taakat bhi nhi thi yahan tak ki anjali waha padi –padi neend ke aagosh mei chali gayi.


Saleem apna lund anjali ki bra se ponch deta hai aur fir saleem waha rakha ek glass paani ka pi kar apne kapde pehanne lagta hai. pooja ko jab is baat ka ehsaas hota hai ki saleem baahar aane wala hai to wo jaldi se apna mobile waha se hata kar dheere-dheere siddiyon se utar kar niche aajati hai. pooja niche aakar dekhti hai ki baahar bau ek kamre ke darwaaje par khada hai. pooja jaise hi babu ki aur badhne lagti hai saleem piche se pooja ke pass pahunch jata hai aur pooja ka muh band karke use fir se upar lejata hai. upar ek store room tha usme le jakar saleem pooja ke haath se uska mobile cheen leta hai.


Pooja- ye kya badtameeji hai. mera phone do.

Saleem- jyada naatak mat kar warna teri ma chod dunga. Saali chutiya samjhi hai kya. tu meri aur anjali ki chudaayi ka video bana rahi hai ye mei pehle se hi jaanta tha jab se tu us room ke pass niche baith kar mobile se video bana rahi thi. isi liye to anjali ko meine tere taraf muh karke chudaayi ki. Taaki video accha ban sake.

Pooja saleem ki baaten sun kar shock ho jati hai.

Pooja; lekin…

Saleem- lekin wekin chod pehle tu tere mobile ka lock khol aur wo video mujhe bhej. aur sun jaisa mei kahu waise hi karti rehena tu bahut aage jaayegi warna tujhe yahi chod kar ek aur mms banaunga aur use desh videsh ke saare internet par dalwadunga.

Pooja jo ab tak dari huyi thi. achanak se muskurate huye saleem ke piche ki aur aajati hai dheere-dheere chalte huye.

Pooja- are mere sher mei to tu kahega waisa karti rahungi lekin agar tu waisa karega jaisa mei kahun to tujhe itni chut dilwaungi na to anjali bhabhi ki nandon ko bhul jaayega.


Saleem pooja ki aur dekhta hai. saleem pooja ki baat sun kar samjh to gaya tha ki ye bhi behanchod koi drame baaj chokri hai. lekin ye sala maajra hai kya. Ye saali kya chahti hai.

Saleem- accha sacch me… lekin mei tujh par kaise yakeen karu…
 

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Saleem pooja ki aur dekhta hai. saleem pooja ki baat sun kar samjh to gaya tha ki ye bhi behanchod koi drame baaj chokri hai. lekin ye sala maajra hai kya. Ye saali ky achahti hai.

Saleem- accha sacch me… lekin mei tujh par kaise yakeen karu…

ab aage...

Saleem Pooja ko yakeen dilane ko bolta hai jiske baad pooja saleem ko kuch batati hai. pooja ke sab kuch bata den eke baad pooja apne mobile se video saleem ke mobile me transfer karke apne mobile se delete kar deti hai.

Saleem wo video liye ek jagha khade khade pooja ki kahi baton ko sochne lagta hai ki tabhi aarti ke kamre se halki halki hasne ki aur aahon ki aawaj aati hai jo saleem ko uske khyalon se baahar lekar aaa jati hai. pooja saleem ko akela chod kar aarti ke room mei chali jaati hai. aarti ke room mei jaakar pooja dekhti hai ki aditi , aarti aur kaamya teeno neend ke aagosh mei be khabar soyi padi wahi dusri aur jaha paayl aur babu usi bed par ek dusre ko kiss kar rahe the sakshi babu ke seene se khel rahi thi. tabhi saleem us room mei aajaata hai. saleem pooja ki aur dekh kar halki si smile karta hai jise pooja apne liye green signal samajhti hai ki ab saleem pooja ke saath hai.


Saleem jor se darwaje se bolta hai. ye sab kya ho raha hai. babu ek dum se chonk kar Darwaje ki taraf dekhta hai wahi paayal aur sakshi ekdum se saleem ko dekh kar dar jaati hai aur aarti ki chaadr mei wahi khud ko chipaane ki koshish karti hai lekin ek chadar me kahan 5-5 ladkiya aa sakti thi.

Aur pooja saleem ko dekh kar darne ka naatak karti hai.

Babu-- chacha aap yaha.


Saleem- chataaakkkkkk (babu ke gaal par jhaapad maar kar) bhoshdike tujhe bola tha na kuch bhi.

Babu saleem ke achanak chaante se itna bokhla jaata hai ki saleem par chillate huye bolta hai.

Babu- to kahan kiya kuch…. Pehle jaan to lo hua kya hai kya nhi.

Tabhi saleem ek aur jhaaapad babu ke gaal par maar deta hai. tab babu rone lag jata hai…


Babu- chacha aaj tak kabhi kuch aapki marji ke khilaaf kuch kiya hai kya jo aaj karunga. Aapko babu apne babu par itna bhi bharosa nhi raha.

Saleem halke se jakar babu ke kaan mei kuch bolta hai jab saleem babu ke kaan mei kuch bol raha tha tab sakshi , paayal aur pooja teeno niche gardan kar ke chaadar mei muh chipa rakhi thi.

Saleem apni baat khtam kar ke jor se chillata hai.


Saleem- dafa ho ja maadarjaat nhi to tera khoon kardunga mei.


Babu- chup chaap bina kuch bole pair patakta hua waha se chala jata hai. jaate-jaate jor se darwaja band karta hai.


Saleem; aur tum teeno.


Saleem ka itna bolna hi tha ki pooja beech mei bol padti hai.


Pooja- Hume maaf kardo chacha… aage se hum aisi galti nhi karengi.

Saleem; behan chod aage se nhi to kya fir piche se karogi….

Pooja- nhi nhi chacha aaj ke baad hum esi galti fir kabhi nhi karenge.


Saleem- magar aaj to karogi na.


Pooja- ji nhi chacha


Saleem- thoda sa paas mei ja kar pyaar se fir puchta hai, KAROGI NA…


Pooja, paayal, aur sakshi teeno ek saath- nhi chacha.


Saleem- jor se chilla ta hua bolta hai. bola naa aj karogi….


Pooja- darne ka naatak karte huye paayal aur sakshi ki taraf dekhti hai.


Fir saleem ko bolti hai. chacha hum kuch bhi karenge bus aap humare parents ko kuch bhi mat kehna.


Saleem- man me(are behanchod ye to meine socha hi nhi tha, iski maa ki ladki tej bhi hai aur thukayi waali bhi chalo kyu na thoda sa maza liya jaaye. saleem firr kuch soch kar muskurata hua sakshi ke pass jata hai.)


Saleem- suno tum teeno khadi ho jaao. aur ye batao. ye baaki ki teen abhi uthi kyu nhi. mere itna tej chillane ke baad bhi,,?

Pooja- ji wo… wo…



fir saleem ko pooja ki baaat yaad aajati hai ki kaise usne aur aditi ne milkar kaamya aur aarti ko sulane ka plan banaya tha.


Saleem- acha wo sab chod soti hai to sone de. ab tum teeno ko mera ek kaam karna padega.


Teeno ek saath kya. hum karenge.


Saleem- mera loda shaant karna padega.


Teeno sharm se niche dekhne lagti hai. lekin paayal dar jaati hai aur rone lagti hai…


Saleem- chalo khadi ho jao…


Saleem itna bolkar tino ladkiyon ke pass jaane lagata hai ki paayal rone lag jaati hai. uske chehre se hi saaf pata chal raha tha ki paayal is waqt bahut dari huyi hai. sakshi aur pooja dono paayal ko chup karane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Jab saleem paayal ko ghabrate huye aur rote huye dekhta hai to saleem ka dimaag khrab ho jata hai.

Saleem- behan chod ab ye sareef hone ka naatak mat karo mere saamne. Abhi mere se pehle bhi to us bhoshdike se chudne waali thin na.


Pooja- haan to wo aapki tarah hume force thodena kar raha tha. Bechara chup chaap khada rehta tha yaa pad jata tha.
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Saleem- accha to tum log mujhe pehle bolte ki tumhe ek laash se chudwana hai… behanchod band karo ye naatak warna ghar se teeno ko nangi bhaga dunga.



Saleem ki is dhamki ke baad bhi teeno nhi hilti… pooja aur sakshi niche gardan kiye baithi huyi thi wahin paayal dheere-dheere rote huye subak rahi thi.



Saleem- iski maa ki tum eise nhi maanogi na. jab tak koi aadmi jallad na banjaaye tum ladkiyan bhoshdiki apni taange nhi kholti. ab bhoshdike itni hi der me mere lode mei kya kaante nikal aaye ab to tum tino ko mei pakka chodunga. Tum log abhi bhi uthti ho ya nhi…



Teeno niche gardan kiye baithi rehti hai.



Tab saleem aage badh kar pooja ke saare kapde faad deta hai. pooja ko bhi is baat ki ummeed nhi thi ki saleem uske saath deal hone ke baad eisa kuch karega. Ab to pooja bhi thoda-thoda darne lagi thi.



Saleem pooja ki choti pakad ke kamre se baahar ki aur khinch kar lejane lagta hai aur pooja dard ke mare saleem ko muh se to naa bol rahi thi lekin uske kadam majburan baahar ki aur saleem ke saath chal pade.



Saleem pooja ko baalo se pakad kar baahar ka darwaja kholne hi wala tha ki sakshi aur paayal dono nangi hi bhaag kar saleem ka haath pakad leti hai.



Saakshi- use chod do kameene…



Paayal- hum wahi karengi jot um kaho ge.



Saleem- kyu chod du jaao ro lo aur rolo na. mujhe is tarah se ansuna kardo jaise meri koi aukaat hi nhi. Tum ladkiyon ke is nakhre ne mujhe mere is ghar ka nokar hone ka ehsaas dila diya.



Pooja- maaf kardo chacha. Hum sabhi bacchi hi hai abhi. please maaf kardo.



Saleem- maaf kardu aur jo meri beijati huyi hai uska harjana kya tumhari maa chukaayegi.



Saakshi aur paayal- hum chukaayengi. jaisa aap kahenge hum waise hi karengi.



Saleem- saakshi ke jabde ko haath mei pakadte huye.



Saleem- maadar jaat tu to mujhe kameena bol rahi thin na ab bata ta hu ki kameena kise kehte hai.



Saakshi- mujhe maaf kardo. (ab saakshi ki aankhon se bhi aansu aane lage the)



Saleem- to tum sab taiyaar ho mera loda chusne ke liye.



Teeno mei se koi kuch nhi bolta.



Saleem ek dum se gussa hote huye.



Saleem- iski maa ki chut tum log abhi bhi nhi sudhri na…



Tabhi pooja bolti hai



Pooja- haa hum taiyaar hai…



Saleem- mujhe sawal dohraane ki zarurat na pade aur mei mere sawal ka jawab kisi ek se nhi tum teeno se ek saath sun na chahta hun. Ek dum saaf ki mujhe sunaayi de.



Saleem- thoda jor se aur gusse mei gurrate huye fir se puchta hai.



Saleem- to bolo tum log taiyaar ho mera loda chusne ke liye.



Is baar teeno ladkiyaan ek saath bolti hai haa hum taiyaar hai.



Saleem- kya tum teeno mujhse chudwaane ke liye bhi taiyaar ho.



Firse teeno ka ek saath jawab lekin gardan jhuka kar.



Haa hum taiyaar hai.



Saleem- kya tum taiyaar ho is meri raand banne ke liye.meri rakhel ban ne ke liye.



Is baar teeno sharm se zameen me gad jaati hai aur bolti hai haan hum taiyaar hai.



Saleem- to fir chalo bedroom mei. Aur apni apni wafa daari saabit karo. Aur haan dhyaan rakhna is baar agar koi naatk choda na to pure shaher mei nanga ghumaunga so ala gaur mujh buddhe ko teen randiyon ne chudaayi ke liye nanga kiya ye abhi saari duniya mei faila dunga….



Teeno kuch nhi bolti. Saakshi aur paayal to ab tak ye maan chuki thi ki aaj ki party aur is dasha ka wo khud hi jimmedaar hai. na wo eisi koi shart rakhti aur naa hi baat itna aage badhti.



Saleem teeno ladkiyon ke kandho par haath rakh kar unhe waapas aarti ke bedroom mei le jaata hai.
 

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yeh sab kahani to xossip ke zamane mae bhi pahd li thi ... yaad nahi author kaun tha ... usne kaafi kuch plan kiya tha iss kahani mai ... par kuch readers ki kartooton ke karan usne gusse me kahani ka band baja kar The End kar diya tha ... iss raat ki masti ke baad ... khoon kharaba ... aur The End ... left a bad taste in the mouth ... par jaane se pehale usne un readers ko sabak ke liye aage ke chapters ... jo usne plan kiya tha ... par likha nahi ... unki outline de di thi ... ki dekho ... tumhari kartooton ki vajah se tum log kya kya miss kar rahe ho ...

mujhe asha hai ki woh outline aapke paas hai ... aur app iss kahani ko uske asli anjaam tak le jaoge ... uss khoon kharabe ki taraf nahi ... jo original wirter ne kheej kar likh kar end kiya tha ...
 
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yeh sab kahani to xossip ke zamane mae bhi pahd li thi ... yaad nahi author kaun tha ... usne kaafi kuch plan kiya tha iss kahani mai ... par kuch readers ki kartooton ke karan usne gusse me kahani ka band baja kar The End kar diya tha ... iss raat ki masti ke baad ... khoon kharaba ... aur The End ... left a bad taste in the mouth ... par jaane se pehale usne un readers ko sabak ke liye aage ke chapters ... jo usne plan kiya tha ... par likha nahi ... unki outline de di thi ... ki dekho ... tumhari kartooton ki vajah se tum log kya kya miss kar rahe ho ...

mujhe asha hai ki woh outline aapke paas hai ... aur app iss kahani ko uske asli anjaam tak le jaoge ... uss khoon kharabe ki taraf nahi ... jo original wirter ne kheej kar likh kar end kiya tha ...
Koshish karunga
 
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arre wah ... just checked my archive ... original writer to aap hi ho ... phir to umeed bahut hai ki kahani theek se aage jayegi ... bhai kehana padega ki iss raat ka kya mast varnan kiya tha aapne ... total debauchery ...

waise ... woh outline aapne nahi ... kisi reader ne aapse baat karke post ki thi ... agar aap chahen to wo outline mai aapko dm par bhej sakta houn ... to refresh your memory ... if you need it ...
 
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arre wah ... just checked my archive ... original writer to aap hi ho ... phir to umeed bahut hai ki kahani theek se aage jayegi ... bhai kehana padega ki iss raat ka kya mast varnan kiya tha aapne ... total debauchery ...

waise ... woh outline aapne nahi ... kisi reader ne aapse baat karke post ki thi ... agar aap chahen to wo outline mai aapko dm par bhej sakta houn ... to refresh your memory ... if you need it ...
Ji zarur please mujhe DM kar de
 

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Bhai gajab dhaa diya tumne update deke aur Saleem ki to lottery laga di chooton ki bhut gajab agle hardcore chudai se bhare update ka intzaar hai......
 
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