Fantasy Hay Ye Jindagi........ Sabkuch
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Ye kahani ek aese ladake ki hain jise jindagi ne mushkilo ki aese rah par chalayi jahan use wo koun Hain iska hi mayane uske liye khatm ho gaya.
Wo to khud ko khojta Raha aur jindagi us kahin ore hi pahuchati rhi magar kahate hain na jab kuch man se khojo to mil hi jata hain us bhi mil gayi Jo wo khoj Raha tha, lekin jab wo apni khoj Tak pahucha to uski duniya palat gayi kyoki uski jiwan me aesi ghatnaye ghat chuki thi jisne uski khoj ke mayaney hi badal diye.
Apni pahchan us tab mili jab us pahchan se wo bahut aage nikal aaya, Jo uske sath bit Chuka tha usne uski pahchan ko mitane ke liye majboor kar diya, lekin wo apni pahchan ko ek bar sabit karna chahata tha magar uski pahchan uska sabkuch chhin sakti thi kaiyo ki jindagi dav par lag sakti jindagi ke is mushkil fasale ko kaise usane liye aur uske bad kya kya hua yehi ye kahani hain. Ye kahani waha se shuru hogi Jahan wo apni pahchan kho chuka hain.
Pahchan khone ke bad use mili ek nayi pahchan aur wo jab apni nayi pahchan ko man lagkar jine laga to use pta chala ki wo uski pahchan hain hi nhi. Isake bad usane shuru ki apni pahchan ki khoj.
Pahchan ke is khoj pe jab wo nikala to jindagi use nayi nayi rang dikhane lagi aur wo in naye rango apne ander bharate Gaya. In naye rangon ke sath ek din uski khoj pahuchi uske asali pahchan ke manjil par Jahan pahuch ke use pta chala ki wo to bahut khoj badal aaya pichhe apni pahchan ko khojate khojate.
Pahachan ke khoj ke is safar ko maine naam diya hai Hay Ye Jindagi...
Aayi ye main lekar chalati hoon apko is safar pe.
Ye kahani ek aese ladake ki hain jise jindagi ne mushkilo ki aese rah par chalayi jahan use wo koun Hain iska hi mayane uske liye khatm ho gaya.
Wo to khud ko khojta Raha aur jindagi us kahin ore hi pahuchati rhi magar kahate hain na jab kuch man se khojo to mil hi jata hain us bhi mil gayi Jo wo khoj Raha tha, lekin jab wo apni khoj Tak pahucha to uski duniya palat gayi kyoki uski jiwan me aesi ghatnaye ghat chuki thi jisne uski khoj ke mayaney hi badal diye.
Apni pahchan us tab mili jab us pahchan se wo bahut aage nikal aaya, Jo uske sath bit Chuka tha usne uski pahchan ko mitane ke liye majboor kar diya, lekin wo apni pahchan ko ek bar sabit karna chahata tha magar uski pahchan uska sabkuch chhin sakti thi kaiyo ki jindagi dav par lag sakti jindagi ke is mushkil fasale ko kaise usane liye aur uske bad kya kya hua yehi ye kahani hain. Ye kahani waha se shuru hogi Jahan wo apni pahchan kho chuka hain.
Pahchan khone ke bad use mili ek nayi pahchan aur wo jab apni nayi pahchan ko man lagkar jine laga to use pta chala ki wo uski pahchan hain hi nhi. Isake bad usane shuru ki apni pahchan ki khoj.
Pahchan ke is khoj pe jab wo nikala to jindagi use nayi nayi rang dikhane lagi aur wo in naye rango apne ander bharate Gaya. In naye rangon ke sath ek din uski khoj pahuchi uske asali pahchan ke manjil par Jahan pahuch ke use pta chala ki wo to bahut khoj badal aaya pichhe apni pahchan ko khojate khojate.
Pahachan ke khoj ke is safar ko maine naam diya hai Hay Ye Jindagi...
Aayi ye main lekar chalati hoon apko is safar pe.
Jai Kamdev
Dosto kahani plot mere dimag me clear hain magar aap logon ka suggestion bhi chahati hoon ki story me kaise kaise rang dekhna chahege
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Update 2
"Main tumhe kuch nhi hone duga, tum mera hath mat chhodna..."
Ek ladka pahadi ek side me letkar ladki hath pakade hua tha aur ladki pahadi se latki huyi thi, dophar ka samay tha. Pahadi ke niche Nadi barsat pani se bhare hone ke karan tez bahaw me bah raha tha.
Tej dhoop ke karan dono ki hatheli paseene se bhig chuki thi.
Ladki: mujhe dar lag rha hain tum upar khichane ki koshis Karo.
Ladka: main puri koshish kar rha hoon magar main apko uth nhi pa rha hoon upar ki taraf.
Ladki: mujhe pta hain main tumse badi hoon aur abhi tumhari Umar kya hain.. main ab nhi bachungi.
Ladka: aesa na bolo..
Ladka apni bat Puri karta usase pahle hi paseene ke karna dono ka slip kar jata hain aur ladki Pani me gir ke doob jati hain. Dekhate dekhate Pani kantej bahaw use Baha le jata hain.
Ladka: Nhi.....
Tabhi light on hoti hain aur ek ladki bed ke pas aakar.
Ladki: Aaj fir wohi sapna aaya.
Ladka pure paseene se bhiga hua dar aur dukh dono uske chehere pe.
Ladka: ha Aaj fir wohi spna aur har bar ki tarah ham dono me kya rishta Hain uska kya naam Hain ham dono ne uska jikar nhi kiya. Ek bat Maine aaj gaur ki.
Ladki: kya bat..?
Ladka: Ye bat Tamanna ki jo sapne meri age hain us age pe mere sath aesi koi ghatna nhi ghati hain aur dusari sapane Maine aur us ladki ne jaise kapade pahan rakhe the ham dono bade Ameer family ke lag rahe the. Magar jo Umar meri sapne me hain us samay maa jinda thi aur hamari aesi halat nhi thi main vaise kapade pahan saku.
Tamanna: Sapna hain kyo sach se campare kar rhe ho.
Ladka: Tamanna sapne random aate hain magar pichle 6 salo se March, June, September aur December me thik 9 tarikh ko aa rha hain magar kyo ye nhi samajh me aa rha hain. Kya lena dena hain mera isase mujhe ye nhi samajh me aata hain.
Tamanna: Koi bat nhi Raghav, dekho 4 AM ho gaye to tum gym jao ham ispe din me Aram se batein karege.
Raghav: Tum shi kahati ho...
Ye kahate huye Raghav bister se uthkar gym ke liye nikal gaya aur ladki soch me doobate huye Raghav ke bister let gayi.
"Main tumhe kuch nhi hone duga, tum mera hath mat chhodna..."
Ek ladka pahadi ek side me letkar ladki hath pakade hua tha aur ladki pahadi se latki huyi thi, dophar ka samay tha. Pahadi ke niche Nadi barsat pani se bhare hone ke karan tez bahaw me bah raha tha.
Tej dhoop ke karan dono ki hatheli paseene se bhig chuki thi.
Ladki: mujhe dar lag rha hain tum upar khichane ki koshis Karo.
Ladka: main puri koshish kar rha hoon magar main apko uth nhi pa rha hoon upar ki taraf.
Ladki: mujhe pta hain main tumse badi hoon aur abhi tumhari Umar kya hain.. main ab nhi bachungi.
Ladka: aesa na bolo..
Ladka apni bat Puri karta usase pahle hi paseene ke karna dono ka slip kar jata hain aur ladki Pani me gir ke doob jati hain. Dekhate dekhate Pani kantej bahaw use Baha le jata hain.
Ladka: Nhi.....
Tabhi light on hoti hain aur ek ladki bed ke pas aakar.
Ladki: Aaj fir wohi sapna aaya.
Ladka pure paseene se bhiga hua dar aur dukh dono uske chehere pe.
Ladka: ha Aaj fir wohi spna aur har bar ki tarah ham dono me kya rishta Hain uska kya naam Hain ham dono ne uska jikar nhi kiya. Ek bat Maine aaj gaur ki.
Ladki: kya bat..?
Ladka: Ye bat Tamanna ki jo sapne meri age hain us age pe mere sath aesi koi ghatna nhi ghati hain aur dusari sapane Maine aur us ladki ne jaise kapade pahan rakhe the ham dono bade Ameer family ke lag rahe the. Magar jo Umar meri sapne me hain us samay maa jinda thi aur hamari aesi halat nhi thi main vaise kapade pahan saku.
Tamanna: Sapna hain kyo sach se campare kar rhe ho.
Ladka: Tamanna sapne random aate hain magar pichle 6 salo se March, June, September aur December me thik 9 tarikh ko aa rha hain magar kyo ye nhi samajh me aa rha hain. Kya lena dena hain mera isase mujhe ye nhi samajh me aata hain.
Tamanna: Koi bat nhi Raghav, dekho 4 AM ho gaye to tum gym jao ham ispe din me Aram se batein karege.
Raghav: Tum shi kahati ho...
Ye kahate huye Raghav bister se uthkar gym ke liye nikal gaya aur ladki soch me doobate huye Raghav ke bister let gayi.
Xabhi
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for the story ma'am plot to Jabardast lag rha hai or aapka narration bhi kabil-e-tarif hai...
Xabhi
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Iska mtlb kya hai comment karne hai ya nhi karne??
Xabhi
"Injoy Everything In Limits"
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Ek ladka jo kisi ladki ka hath thame use bchane ki Kosis kr rha hai pahadi se neeche nadi me na girne dene ki pr bcha nhi pata or Uski nind khul jati hai, oh to yah ek sapna dekh rha tha or uska naam raghav hai...
Ek ladki Jiska name Tamanna hai vo raghav ki koi apani family member lagti hai, kya hai raghav ke in sapno ka raaj kyo aata hai usko ye 9 tarikh ko hi kyo aate hai in 3 mahino me akhir aisa kya hua tha uske sath... Dekhenge next update me... Superb update jabarjast suruvat Ruby ji
Koi comment nhi aaya tha update one pe