Fantasy Hay Ye Jindagi........ Sabkuch
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Thank youfor the story ma'am plot to Jabardast lag rha hai or aapka narration bhi kabil-e-tarif hai...
Ab Raghav ko aese sapane kyo aate hain, sapane wali ladki aur Tamanna se kya rishta hain sab aane wale update me PTA chalega bus aese sath Bane rahiye....
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Bahut kam log e is form par jo apni story puri karte ye ya time to time update dete he. Hum to bs apse itni hi request kar sakte he ke s kahani ko adhura na chode or week me 3 update to km se km de sake. Story plot to achha he or suruaat bhi suspens se apne ki he but age kya hoga ye to story or ane wala wkt hi bataye ga
Update 3
Raghav gym me pahuch kar wohi Bane washroom me fresh hokar apne exercise me lag gaya 2 hrs Tak jamkar pasina bahane ke baad Raghav gym se nikal kar sidhe kitchen me chala gaya use pta tha uske Jane ke bad Tamanna wohi bed pe so gayi hogi jo ki uski roj ki adat thi, isliye usane bhi apne roj ki routine ko follow karte huye. Apne black coffe aur Tamanna ke liye chay bana kar dono hathon me so cup pakade huye apne bedroom ki taraf bad gaya.
Jaisa use pta tha Tamanna usake bed pe sakun se so rhi thi. Chay ko side table pe rakhkar usane Tamanna ke forehead PE kiss jisase Tamanna ke chehere pe ek muskan tar gayi aur isane ankhe khol di.
Tamanna: thank you Raghav meri subah ko roj ki tarah khushgawar banane ke liye.
Tamanna ki bat sunkar usake chehere pe muskan tair gayi.
Raghav: thank you kis bat ki Tamanna is makan me ham dono ke alawa Hain koun to ek dusare ka khyal to hame rakhna padega.
Tamanna bister uthkar baithate huye: bat to tumhari bhi sahi lekin main aaj sabkuch janana chahati hoon, Main pichale ek sal se tumhare sath hoon aur aaj ye mere samane tumhe 4 bar sapna aaya hain. Main tumhe janti kitna hoon mujhe sab janana hain
Raghav: main tumhe sab bataouga Tamanna magar pahle naha dho le vaise bhi aaj Sunday Hain kahin Jana to Hain nhi to Aram se fresh hokar breakfast pe sari bat karte hain lekin main abhi tumko itna hi bataouga jitna jaruri Hain aur sath sath ke tumhare bare me bhi sabkuch janana chahuga ki tum us situation me kaise pahuchi kya gujari Hain tumhare sath kyoki mujhe lagta ab tum bhi sambhal chuki aur un pareshaniyo se bahar aa gayi ho jo tumane jhele Hain to Aaj ham dono apna atit ek dusare ko sunayege.
Tamanna Raghav ki bat sunkar thoda hadbadai to magar khud pe kabu pakar boli "manjoor hain vaise to wo sab dukhdayi hain magar main apne dil bat tumhe batana chahati hoon ki kya gujara hain mere sath to thik chalo 7 baj gaye hain 1 hrs bat milate hain kitchen aur breakfast taiyar karte hain.
Ye bol Tamanna muskurate huye bister se uthakar Raghav ke pas gayi aur uske gal pe kiss kar ke apne room se bahar nikal gayai.
"Pagal ladki" ye bol kar Raghav bhi muskurata hua bathroom ki taraf nikal gaya.
*******
Ek dusare shahar me ek adami phone pe.
Adami: Boss us ladki is shahr se namo nishan gayab Hain hamne shahar ka chapa chapa chhan mara magar wo ladki is shahar me kahin bhi nhi Hain.
Boss: to usko jamin kha gaya asaman nigal Gaya. Kamin pta nhi kaise hotal ke kamare bhag nikali.
Adami: boss jaisa aapne khabar uske gayab hone ki di hamane har jagah cctv check kar dali, ek sal pure shahar ka Kona Kona, kothe, hospital aur bar kuch bhi nhi chhoda magar iska kuch pta nhi chal raha hain.
Boss: us samay footage ab bhi tum logo ke pas Hain.
Adami: ha boss, ham Kai bar dekh chuke magar koi clue nhi mil Raha Hain.
Boss: ek kam karo wo shahar chhodo aur adde pe aao ham ek bar fir se sare footage dekhate hain kyoki Jo footage mere pas thi wo laptok sath hi khatm ho gaya.
Adami: okay boss.
Wo phone kat ke apni car ko lekar shahr se bahar jane wale raste pe nikal gaya.
Raghav gym me pahuch kar wohi Bane washroom me fresh hokar apne exercise me lag gaya 2 hrs Tak jamkar pasina bahane ke baad Raghav gym se nikal kar sidhe kitchen me chala gaya use pta tha uske Jane ke bad Tamanna wohi bed pe so gayi hogi jo ki uski roj ki adat thi, isliye usane bhi apne roj ki routine ko follow karte huye. Apne black coffe aur Tamanna ke liye chay bana kar dono hathon me so cup pakade huye apne bedroom ki taraf bad gaya.
Jaisa use pta tha Tamanna usake bed pe sakun se so rhi thi. Chay ko side table pe rakhkar usane Tamanna ke forehead PE kiss jisase Tamanna ke chehere pe ek muskan tar gayi aur isane ankhe khol di.
Tamanna: thank you Raghav meri subah ko roj ki tarah khushgawar banane ke liye.
Tamanna ki bat sunkar usake chehere pe muskan tair gayi.
Raghav: thank you kis bat ki Tamanna is makan me ham dono ke alawa Hain koun to ek dusare ka khyal to hame rakhna padega.
Tamanna bister uthkar baithate huye: bat to tumhari bhi sahi lekin main aaj sabkuch janana chahati hoon, Main pichale ek sal se tumhare sath hoon aur aaj ye mere samane tumhe 4 bar sapna aaya hain. Main tumhe janti kitna hoon mujhe sab janana hain
Raghav: main tumhe sab bataouga Tamanna magar pahle naha dho le vaise bhi aaj Sunday Hain kahin Jana to Hain nhi to Aram se fresh hokar breakfast pe sari bat karte hain lekin main abhi tumko itna hi bataouga jitna jaruri Hain aur sath sath ke tumhare bare me bhi sabkuch janana chahuga ki tum us situation me kaise pahuchi kya gujari Hain tumhare sath kyoki mujhe lagta ab tum bhi sambhal chuki aur un pareshaniyo se bahar aa gayi ho jo tumane jhele Hain to Aaj ham dono apna atit ek dusare ko sunayege.
Tamanna Raghav ki bat sunkar thoda hadbadai to magar khud pe kabu pakar boli "manjoor hain vaise to wo sab dukhdayi hain magar main apne dil bat tumhe batana chahati hoon ki kya gujara hain mere sath to thik chalo 7 baj gaye hain 1 hrs bat milate hain kitchen aur breakfast taiyar karte hain.
Ye bol Tamanna muskurate huye bister se uthakar Raghav ke pas gayi aur uske gal pe kiss kar ke apne room se bahar nikal gayai.
"Pagal ladki" ye bol kar Raghav bhi muskurata hua bathroom ki taraf nikal gaya.
*******
Ek dusare shahar me ek adami phone pe.
Adami: Boss us ladki is shahr se namo nishan gayab Hain hamne shahar ka chapa chapa chhan mara magar wo ladki is shahar me kahin bhi nhi Hain.
Boss: to usko jamin kha gaya asaman nigal Gaya. Kamin pta nhi kaise hotal ke kamare bhag nikali.
Adami: boss jaisa aapne khabar uske gayab hone ki di hamane har jagah cctv check kar dali, ek sal pure shahar ka Kona Kona, kothe, hospital aur bar kuch bhi nhi chhoda magar iska kuch pta nhi chal raha hain.
Boss: us samay footage ab bhi tum logo ke pas Hain.
Adami: ha boss, ham Kai bar dekh chuke magar koi clue nhi mil Raha Hain.
Boss: ek kam karo wo shahar chhodo aur adde pe aao ham ek bar fir se sare footage dekhate hain kyoki Jo footage mere pas thi wo laptok sath hi khatm ho gaya.
Adami: okay boss.
Wo phone kat ke apni car ko lekar shahr se bahar jane wale raste pe nikal gaya.
Main story Puri karogi ye nhi apni dono purani story bhi bus ab aap log sath Bane rahe main week 3-4 update Dene ki koshis karungi.
Jai Kaamdev
Xabhi
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Kon hai ye boss, Kon si ladki ko dhundh rha hai kya kiya tha usne or uska laptop kaise kharab hua aise Bahut se sawalo ke sath suru ki ye kahani Dekhte hai Kis mode pr lekr jayegi...
Raghav Jim karne baad apne or tamanna ke liye coffee bna use jgata hai jo uske hi bed pr so gyi thi, Kon hai ye tamanna kya kahani hai iske past ki or Vo raghav se kaise mili aise dhero anbujhe sawalo ko apne andar samete hmare writer ki kalam... Sandar update Ruby ji
Update 3 post kar diya hain padiye aur apne bahumulya sujhav dijiye