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Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

Hayaan-Insaan Ya shaitan Story kaisi hai..?


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Asif khan

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Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Kia baat h awesome faight sacne dikhaya h ap ne
 
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Awesome update waiting for next update
 

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Aaj Update Nahi Aayega....
 
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Hayaan

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Hayan said... Kya Khoob Kaha hai..?

@Guruji
बेकद्री के चंद तजुर्बों को अल्फ़ाज़ों में कहा है,
दर्द रुसवाई का जिंदगी में बेइंतेहा सहा है,
वाक़िब हैं रिवाज़ों से दुनियां का यही दस्तूर रहा है,
के दिखाये जब भी ज़ख्म जमाने को तो आवाज़ आई
"क्या खूब कहा है"

Aapki Hazir Jawabi Ka Koi tod Nahin...!!
 
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Vikram singh rana

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Update..No..64*
MeGa..UpDaTe

Abb..Takk...
AadiGuru ke Sab Kuchh Samajha Dene ke Baad,
Mask Man Jakar Haayan Ka Haath Pakad ke Bayein Taraf Let gaya....!!


AadiGuru Maharaj Ne Mantron Ka Uchharan karna Shuru Kar diya....

Fir Dono Ke Paas Jakar Dahina Haath Hayaan ke Maathe oar...
To Bayan Haath Mask Man Ke Mathe ke upar Rakh diya....

AadiGuru Ke Aisa Karte hi...

Ek Saath do Ghatnayein Ghati......??

Abb..Aage...
Hua Ye ki AadiGuru ne Matron ke Jariye Hayaan ke Sharir aur Mask Man ki Aatma ko,
Ek Dusre mein Samahit Karne ki Kriya Prarambh ki..

AadiGuru Ke Aisa Karte hi Hayaan ka to Kuchh Na hau kintu....
Mask Man ki Aatma Dard se Tilmila Uthi...

Mask Man Dard se Chhat-Patane laga...
dhire - dhire Uski Aatma Hayaan ke Sharir mein Samane lagi....
Aur Ant mein Mask Man Ki Atma Ka Astitva Khatm ho gaya......


(Note-Mask Man Ek Aatma thi, Jiska Astitva Hayaan ke Janm ke Samay hua...

Kintu AadiGuru ise Raaz Banakar Rakha....
Jam ke Samay Kyun Nahi details diya...??


Aisa Kyun Kiya Iska Raaz Aage Khulega Details mein...!!)

Dono ka Ek Dusre mein Sama Jane ke Baad Aasman se Ek Black & Wight Energy Ray Aakar Hayaan ke Sharir mein Pravesh kar gayi....

Aur Isi ke Saath Samay Chakra Punah Shuru ho gaya....

Samay Chakra Shuru hote hi Hayaan ko hosh aa gaya aur Uth kar Baith gaya.....

Apne Saamne Chairman2 aur Uske Sathiyon ko dekh kar Uski Aankhein Gusse se Ek dam Laal ho gayi....

Jorr se Dahaadte huye....
Hayaan - Jiss Jiss ko Bhi Apni Jaan Pyari hai,
Yahan se Chala Jaye warna Sirf Uski Laash hi Bachegi...??
(
Pagal to Nahi ho gaya tu..
Yeh Kya Bol Raha hai...??)


Hanste huye....
Chairman2 - Ab Tujhe Kya hua ??
Wo Bacha Kidhar Gaya...??
Kahan Chhupa diya Uss Bache ko....??

Hayaan - Shayad Tumne Meri Chetavani ko Sahi Dhang se nahi liya...
Issiliye Hans Rahe ho..

Abhi bhi waqt hai Chale Jao Sab Yahan se....
Nahi To wo Aa jayega...??

(Main Ready hu Shikar ke liye)

Hanste huye.
Chairman2 - Kaun Aa jayega...??
Wo Bacha.... Nanha Sa.. Pyara Pyara...

Chairman2 ki Batein Sun kar Uske Sabhi Saathi Jorr jorr se hasne lagte hai....

Hayaan - Bass Bahut hua Aa Jao Sabhi ek saath..
Shayad In Sab ko tumhara hi Intezaar hai....??

(Ab Kahi Tumne Mere Dil ki baat)

Hayaan ki Batein Sunkar, Chairman2 idhar Udhar Dekhne lagta Hai...
Par Use koi Nahi dikhayi deta hai....

"Yaha Ho Kya Raha hai..
Kahi Ye nakab posh Pagal to Nahi gaya....??
Na Jane Kisse Batein Kar Raha hai...??""

Hayaan Kuchh bolta Usse pahle hi...
Chairman2 ka mobile bajne lagta hai....

Chairman2 - Ha Boss kahiye...
Sab thik to hai na...??

Dusri taraf se............

Dusri Taraf ki Batein sun kar Chairman2 Gusse se tilmila uthta hai....
Mobile ko Jorr se Jameen mein Patak deta hai...

Muskurate huye....
Hayaan - Kya hua Bahrupiye...??
Boss ki Band Baj gayi kya...??

Chairman2 - Apni Karni par Bahut ghamand hai na....

Aisi Maar Marunga ki Tujhe Teri Nani Yaad Aa jayegi....!!

Gusse se Chillate huye....
Hayaan - Bahut Badi Bhool Kar di Tune meri Nani ki Yaad Dila kar...

Aa Jao Sab Ke Sab Ek Saath.....

Chillate huye....
Chairman2 - Bhoonj do ise Goliyon se....
Dhayan Rahe Iska Chehra Na Kharab ho...??
Hamein Wapas Jana hai Turant.....

Chairman2 Ka Aadesh Milte hi...
Sabhi Gundey Ek Saath Hayaan Par Goliyan Dagna Shuru kar det hai...

Charon taraf se Tabad tod Firing shuru ho jati hai....
Jiss Jagah Par Hayaan khada tha Dhuan Chha jata hai....

Dhire Dhire Dhuan Chhatne lagta hai....
Par Ye Kya Hayaan Waha Par Nahi tha....

Chairman2 - Kaha Gaya Wo...
Dekho Yahi Kahin Hoga Bhagne na Paye...
Mujhe Uska Sar Lakar do....
Boss Ko Gift mein dena hai....

""Idhar Kya Dekhte ho..
Main to Tumhare Peechhe Khada hu..""

Hayaan Ki Awaaz Sunkar Chairman2 Peechhe Mud kar dekhne ko hota hai Ki Tabhi....

Ek Jorr Dar Punch uske Jabde mein Padta hai....
Kat kat ki Awaaz hoti hai..
Aur Chairman2 wahin Jameen par Aundhe muh Girr padta hai....
Muh se khoon Ka Favvar foot Oada...
daant tootkar Wahin Bikhar Gaye..

Chairman2 ki Yeh Halat dekh kar Sabhi Gundey Hayaan ki Taraf Bhagte hai...

Lets Start Fight....
Ab Kahani Hayaan Ki Jubani....

10 gundey speed se bhagte huye meri taraf aaye Aur Jaise hi Mujhe Marne ko Huye....
Maine Tezzi se Sabko Ek Ek Kick Jad di...

Jitni Speed se meri Taraf aaye usse dugna Teji ke Saath Peechhe Apne Sathiyon ke upar Ja Gire.....

Sabhi Dard Se karahne lage.....

Maine Bhi Der na Karte huye Unke upar Toot Pada Aur Laat ghunso ki Bauchhar kar di....

Kat... Katt... Kadak... Dhammmm...
Bas Aise hi Awaaz aati Rahin....
Salon Ka Mar Mar Ke Kachumar Nikalne laga...
Sab ki Haddi Pasli tod di...

Abhi Mai Unko Peet hi Raha tha ki Tabhi Mujh par Kisi me Peechhe Se Waar kiya...
Main Udta hua door Ja Gira.....

Chairman2 - Bass Bahut hua... Chuha Billi ki Ladai...
Ab Tujhe dikhata hu main Kya kar sakta hu...

Main Apni Jagh se Khada hote huye...
Tu Bolta jyada hai...
Karta kam Hai...

Are Aaa Na....

Chairman2 meri Taraf tezi se bhagta hua aata hai...
Aur Achanak hi uska Haath Ek Talwar mein Badal Jata hai....

Mere Kandhe mein Cut Marta hua Aage Nikal Jata hai..
Fir Achanak Palat kar Mere Pair par Bhi Cut Maar deta hai....

Mere Kandhe Aur Jaangh se Khoon Risne lagne Lagta hai...

( Dard hota hai Be..
Bachon ki tarah Maar Kha raha hai....
Abhi Tujhe Bahut Kuchh Sikhana Padega...)


Main bhi Turant Palat Kar uska Haath Pakad leta hu....
Jisse chairman2 Jameen par girr padta gai....

Main Uske Dahine Haath ko dono Haath se Majbooti Se Pakad leta hu aur Apne Pair ko Uske Chhati mein Rakh kar....
Tezi Se Uske Haath ko marod deta hu..

Chairman2 ki Cheekh nikal Jati hai....

Main Yahan Nahi Rukta...
Fir jorr se Jheekte huye Haath ko Dhad se alag kar deta hu....

(Ab sahi hai...Dusra bhi Ukhaad be...)

Main Dusra Haath bhi Ukhadne wala tha ki Tabhi Peeche Se Firr Kisi ne Mujh par war kiya....

Main Peechhe Muda aur Sabko Utha utha kar Patakne laga...


(Chutiya hai kya..??

Yeh tere dushman hai, Teri Nani Ma ke Qatil... Kya Tu inhe aise hi chhod dega...??)

Main - Tu Chup Rah..
Maine Tujhe Pahle hi Kaha hai,
Main Ahinsawadi hu..
Main kisi ki Jaan Nahi le Sakta..
Bas Unki Karni Ka dand de raha hu....


( Hehhe hee Thik hai, Tujhe Jo bhi karna hai Kar,
Ab Agar Ek Aur bhi War Mujhpar hua,
To Main Apne Aape Se Bahar ho jaunga....
Fir Tu mujhe Nahi Rok Payega....??)


Main bhi Ab Ek Dam Hoshiyari se Khud ko Bachate huye...
Sab Ka Kaam Tamam karne laga......

1,2,3,4,5,6,.........Ek ek Karke Sabhi mar kha kha Kar Idhar udhar girne lage....
jitne bhi Gundey the sabhi Iss waqt Jameen par Lete dard se Karah Rahe the.....

Tabhi Chairman2 Jorr se Chillaya....
Bas bahut jee liya tu,
Ab Tujhe marne se koi Nahi bacha sakta.....

Main bhi Uski taraf dekh kar muskurane laga....

Sala Mutant ki Aulad Fir se thik ho gaya....
Iss bar Lagta hai Iski Gardan hi todni padegi.....??

Itna bolne ke Baad Chairman2 Ne Apni Aakhein Band Kar li...
Aur Apne Dono Hathon Ko Aasman Ki Taraf Utha diye....

Aisa karte hi Achanak Waha Par khade Bizli ke Khambon se Current ka Pravah Chairman2 ke Sharir ki Taraf Hone laga.....

Dhire dhire uske Sharir Poori tarah se Ek Prakar Electric Source bana Gaya...

Fir Achanak hi uska Sharir do bhagon mein bant gaya...

Main to Ekdam Shock ho gaya...
Uski Kabliyat aur Energy ko dekh kar....

Tabhi Mujh par dono Taraf se Aag aur Electric Rays se hamla hone lage...

Main bhi Ready tha
Main Khud ko Uske Hamle se bachane laga....

Par Jyada Der tak khud ko Uske Khatarnak Waar se Nahi Bacha Paya....

Electric Rays ne mujhe Apne Chapet mein Le liya.....
Mujhe apne Sikanje mein Kasti Chali Gayin

iss hamle se meri Body mein Aag Lag gayi....
Mere Saare Kapde Jalne lage....

Main Jyada der tak khud ko Rok Nahi Paya....
Mera Kabu Khud Par Chhotne laga....
Aur Ek Tezz Dhamak hua....

Aur Main Udta hua Door Jakar Girr pada....

Meri Aisi Halat Dekh kar chairman2 aur Uske bache huye Saathi Apni Jeet ka Jashn Manane lage....


""Itna Asaan Nahi hai Apni Maut ko hara dena....""


Sab Meri Taraf Achambhe se dekhne lage...
Mujhe aur Mere Roop ko Dekh kar Sab Tharr Tharr kampne lage...

Unke chehre se to aisa lag Raha tha Ki Jaise koi Bhoot dekh liya ho...
darr Ke mare Sabki Pant gili ho gayi....

Iss waqt Main apne Devil roop mein aa gaya Tha...
mere Body se aag ki Lapte nikal rahi thi....


Main Apni jagah se Gayab hokar Seedha Chairman2 ke Paas Pahunch Gaya aur Uski Gardan ko Apne Hathon mein Jakad liya....

Main - Mere Mana karne ke baad bhi bhi tune Apni Seemaon ko Ko Langh diya....

Dekh tune mujhe Shaitan Banne Par Mazboor Kar diya....


""Dekh meri Aankhon Mein Tujhe Kya Dikhta hai....??""

Chairman2 ko Jabardasti Apni Aankhon par Dekhne keliye Mazboor Karne laga...

Wah Dard se Chhatpatane laga....
Uski Aankhein Meri Garmi ko Bardasht Na kar saki aur Bah kar Jameen par girr Padi...

Sari Akkad Nikkal Gayi...
aa gaya ghutno par....
Bahut Bolta tha na....
sale ki Dekhne Ke Matra se hi Gotiyan Nikal Kar Bahar aa gayi.
mujhse Raham ki Bheekh Mangne laga....

Tabhi Kisi ne Fir Peeche Se Waar kiya...
Maine Palat Kar Uski Taraf Gusse se Dekha....

Wo Darr ke Mare Peechhe Ja Gira....
Sabhi Mera Roop Dekh kar darr ke mare idhar udhar Bhagne lage...

Chairman2 ko Uthakar Jorr se Patak diya..

"Wo marr Jayega Use Chhod do...."

"
Main Yehi to Chahta hu.. Sabki Maut ""

"Main Tumhein Aisa Nahi Karne Dunga..""

""Tum Mujhe Nahi Rok Sakte...""

Chairman2 ko dono Pair ko Pakadte huye Door Khadi Gadi ke Bonnet Par Fenk Diya....

Aur 1 sec mein hi Uske paas Fir Pahunch gaya......

""Main Tumhein Kisi ki Jaan Lene Nahi dunga....
Main Koi Qatil nahi...""


""Par Mujhe Maja to Jaane lene mein Hi aati hai...""

chairman2 Apne Jakhmon ko bhoolkar Hairan Aur Pareshan ho gaya...

Tum kaun ho..
Ek Taraf to Marte ho..
Fir Dusri Taraf Bachane ki Baat karte ho.....??

Main - Main Sirf Tumhare kiye ki Saja dena Chahta hu...


""Aur Main Tumhari Jaan lena Chahta hu...??""

Ek Baar Fir use Uthakar Gadi Ke glass par Patak diya....

Main - Thoda Rest to lo..
Use Sambhalne ka Mauka to do.....


""Ek Chance to diya yha Bhagne ka....""

Ek baar fir Patak diya....

""Mat maro use.....""

Chairman2 - Jhallate huye...
Main Pagal Ho Jaunga.....
Ye Duja hone ki acting Kyun Kar rahe ho...??
Yahan kki fusra nahi Tum hi akele Sab kar rahe ho...??

Mere Saath Ye Do tarfa Khel Mat khelo..

Khud hi Marte ho...
Khud hi Rahnuma Bante ho.....??

Main - Ye Main Nahi kar Raha....

"
"Yeh Sab tumhari samajh se pare hai...
Ab tu suspense mein hi Marega.....!!
Waise Ye Sahi Kah Raha hai...
Ye mera Kaam hai,
Bahut Chahat thi Na tumhein Mujhse Milne ki...
lekin Afsos mujhe Delhne ke liye ab Teri aankhein Na bachi""


Chairman2 - Mujhe Maut Chahiye....
Mujhe Maar Dalo...
Lekin Aise Mat Tadpao.....

Main - Tum Bhaag Jao...
Main Ise Rokne ki Koshish Karta hu...

"
"Jisme ho Dum Mujhe Rok ke bataye....""

Tabhi Main Apne Aap Udta hua door Ja Gira...

Fir Ek Pal Mein hi Wapas uske Paas Pahunch gaya...
Aur Ek Jorrdar Punch chairman2 ke Face pe Jad diya....
Dubara Punch marne wala tha ki Mera Haath Ruk Gaya....

Fir Ek thappad Jad diya....

Chairman2 Mujhse Door Bhagne laga.....
Bhagte huye...
Gadiyan Nikalo..
Yeh Pagal ho gaya hai...
Kisi ko Nahi Chhodega....

Bache kuche gundey Gaadiyon ki taraf bhagne lage....

Main - Jaane do unhein,
main in sab ko police ke Hawale karunga....
"
" Maut se bhi koi bhag paya hai Aaj tak....??

Main Ek Ek ko Pakad ke unko Maut Ke Ghaat Utarane laga....

Chairman2 ko Pakad ke Gaadi se Bandh diya....

Aur Sabhi Ghayal Gundon ko utha kar Gaadi mein Daal diya....,,,


Main - Koi akhiri Iksha ho to Kah do....
Kyunki Ab chita ko Agni dene Waqt ho gaya hai....??

""Plz hamein Jalakar mat Maro..
chahe to goli Mar do...
lekin Iss tarah tadapne ke liye mat chhodo....

Main - Thik Hai tum Sab ki Akhiri vinti Manjoor ki Jati hai....

Maine Paas mein Padi Bandook lo Utha liya....
aur sab ke pairon ko Nishana banakar goliyan dagne laga....

Gili Mar mar ke Sabhi ke pairon Ko chhalni kar diya....

Sabhi Dard se chillate huye Raham ki Bheekh Magne lage....
lekin inki sunta bhi kaun..??

Ek Hayaan tha Jo ki Raham dili dikhakar jail le jane ki baat kar raha tha...
Lekin Sabhi ne gussa dila kar use hi Sgant karwa diya...
aur uske raudra Roop ko Jaga diya....!!

Last mein Gadi se petrol nikal kar sab par chhidak diya...
aur ek Aur fire kiya...

Gaadi samet sabhi Aag ki Chapet mein aa gaye....
Aur dard se Tadap tadap kar maut ke mih Oor badhne lage.....

Poore vatavaran mein Chhekhein Goonjti rahin....


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Hmmmm
Good update

Good narration.......max update dono ki baato mai hee nikal gaya....action kaafi kam tha or reason aapne brutal dikhaane ke liye baaki chijo par kam dhyaan diya....

ha lekin un dono ka ak dusre se alag hona or ak dusre ke kaam dakahal dena....kaafi achcha hai.....

Mere kuch sawaal hai.....
Jaise ki.....

1- assal mai hero ke andar kitni personality hai.....
2- agar demon mask Man tha to wo kon hai jo hero ke Janm par ghar ki chat ko tod kar Aasman ki Taraf gaya tha.....
3- kya wo or mask man ak hee hai....
4- jab wo chij jo hero ke Janm par Chhat tod kar bahar nikli thi.....uske baad bhi hero ka demon roop aapne dikhaya tha....jise ki Guru ne hero ke haath mai Dhaka baandh kar....use normal kiya tha....wo kya tha.....
5- agar sab chij ko dhyaan mai rakha jaaye to aisa lagta hai ki hero or uski andar 3 ya 4 person hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks
 
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Guruji

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Aapki Hazir Jawabi Ka Koi tod Nahin...!!
धुन अपनी में ही लगा हूँ, यहाँ मुझे किसी से होड़ नही..
कुछ सलीके हैं सीधे सादे मेरे, जिनमे कोई मरोड़ नही..
हैं टुकड़ों की तमाम कारीगिरी, कुछ भी तो बेजोड़ नही..
शह ऐसी कोई नही क़ायनात में, जिसका कोई तोड़ नही ।।
 
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Black water

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Awesome update bhai
 
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