Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

[amita]

sach mein enjoyable update
Ha ha ha ha ha ha
Anaya sahi toh kah rahi hai.. jab kand ho jata hain uske baad aata hain gyan baatne.. ab free mein gyan koun baatein aajkal
are yaar koi is kabeer ko niklao is kahani se...
Ohh... sorry sorry.. main galat bol gayi yaar...koun kehta kand nahi karta.. bilkul sahi samay ka upyog kar ke kand jo kare..
Lo kar diya kand.. Hayaan aur maskman ko ek kar diya

Khair dekhte hain yeh naya Hayaan kya kya kand karta hain...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill Hayaan ji...

Shaandar review

 

[Rajthehunterr]

Ghjab bro kya update hai mask man abb hayaan bn chuka hai anaaya problem mai hai abb Nani ki death ho chuki hai abb dekhna hai ki hayaan kya waps se apna astitwa prapt kr pata hai ya hmesha mask man bn jayaga aur kya hoga jbb ananyaa aur zin hayaan urf mask man ke samne aayange keep going bro
Keep updating
Waiting for the next update!!??

 

[amita]

Ghjab bro kya update hai mask man abb hayaan bn chuka hai anaaya problem mai hai abb Nani ki death ho chuki hai abb dekhna hai ki hayaan kya waps se apna astitwa prapt kr pata hai ya hmesha mask man bn jayaga aur kya hoga jbb ananyaa aur zin hayaan urf mask man ke samne aayange keep going bro
Keep updating
Waiting for the next update!!??

Good review

 

[Asif khan]

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Hayaan]

bhai maja a Gaya Sare update main padh Liye hi aise hi Kahani Lagte Ho bus Kuchh doubt se jo ki Sare clear Ho Gaye waiting for next update

Welcome bro in my thread...

Bahut Khushi huyi Jankar ki Apko story Pasand aa Rahi hai....
Thanks Fo reading and Supports..

Bas aise hi Saath Bane Rahe....

 

[Hayaan]

wonderfull update lekin ab kya hoga hayaan ke andar saitani aatma ghus gayi ab to kya hayaan ab saitaan ban jayega

Thanks Rahul Sir Ji...
For Continue Reading and Wonderful Supports..

Dekhiye Aage Aage kya hota hai...??
Bas ause hi Saath Bane rahe...

 

[Hayaan]

Awesome update
Kahi pariyo ke rani ke garbh ko meera me sthanantran to nahi kiya ja hai.

Thanks Sir Ji...
For Continue reading and Awesome Supports..

Bas aise hi Saath bane rahe..

 

[amita]

Congratulations for Sticky Thread

 

[Hayaan]

Hmmmm
Very good update
Well written and described

Mujhe Anaya wala part kaafi achcha laga.....Hayaan ka bhi thik tha.....

ACTUALLY Anaya ne jo bhi kaha dekha jaaye to wo sab chij sahi hai....har tarah se.....

Guru kabhi bhi time par ya kuch galat hone se Pahle kabhi nahi aaya....hamesha Indian police ki tarah last mai hee ata hai.....

Hero or mask man ke character mai Abhi bhi kuch loops hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks

Anaya Wala Part mere se Sahi Likhte ban Raha...
But Hayaan Wale Part ko Sahi se nahi Describe kar pa Raha...
Shayad isiliye Loop ho ja Rahe hai...

Thanks For Suggestion Fir Bhi koshoah karunga...
Ki Khamiyon ko sudhar saku...
Aur Kuchh Behtar Pesh karun.



Thanks Sir Ji....
For Beautiful Review....

But jahan Tak Mujhe Lag Raha hai..
Aapne Dusre thread Par Comment Kar diya hai... By Mistakes.??

Dekhiye Shayad Writer Sahab Ko Koi Aitraaz na ho jaye....