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UPDATE 1
"move move move move move" nurse ne gala faad kar chillaya, stretcher le jana wo bhi itne bheed me......
"will he survive??" doosre nurse ne stretcher ke saath daudte hue bola
Chillane wali nurse chup thi, situation haath ke bahar thi
Patient ko jald se jald lekar Jaana bhi shayad bekar hai kyunki patient ka survival percentage bilkul zero hai
"KYA HUA MERE Bete KO?? " awaz door se a rahi thi ek aurat ki jo shayad maa thi is shaks ki
"sorry madam emergency hai" bol nurse ne aage jaane se rok liya aur stretcher emergency room me le gayi
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"koi to raasta hoga, koi to??" kanishk bol utha, isme request kam thi bheek zyada tha
"sorry kanishk, isme mujhe koi. breakthrough nahi mil raha hai, mai koi help nahi kar paunga" doctor ramya boli
"lekin ramya tum meri bohut achi friend ho yaar, is situation me agar tum kuch nahi kar paayi to koi kuch nahi kar payega" kanishk bola
"dekho kanishk, hum doctors ki bhi limitations hai, aur tum yahan ke best heart speciality hospital me khade ho, I don't think ki India me isse acha hospital milega tumhe" Dr ramya fir boli
"I'm not here to discuss about hospital, I'm here to discuss about my son damn it" kanishk ke sabr ka baandh toot raha tha
"waise last aur final option hai" ramya boli
"wo kya??" kanishk ne poocha
"Dr prasad, heart specialist. Australia me bade Naam hai unke. Aisa koi case nahi hai jise unhone handle nahi kiya ho?? And luckily wo India me hai aur wo bhi isi shahar me" ramya boli
"kya wo kingshuk ko theek kar sakte hai??" kanishk ne utsukta se poocha. Ramya ke baaton se Ummed ki asha nazar aayi kanishk ko
DHADAMMMMM
"deepti??" ramya hairan thi deepti ko dekh kar, baal idhar udhar kapde jaise taise pehen kar aayi thi, college ki Jaan thi deepti, lekin industrialist kanishk se shaadi kar apna career khatam kiya tha usne
"please ramya, please bol do ki kingshuk ko kuch nahi hoga, please please please" deepti rote hue ramya ke paas gayi
"deepti please apne aap ko sambhal lo agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk apne chair se uth deepti ko sambhal kar bola
"kya bigada tha usne kanishk??? Uska ek pair bhi sahi nahi hai, partial handicapped hai kingshuk" deepti ka rona jaari tha
"kuch nahi hoga kingshuk ko kuch bhi nahi" kanishk bola
"usne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kiya kingshuk, kya bhagwan unpe barasta hai jo kamzor hai??" deepti ke is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha kanishk ke paas
"deepti, maine Dr prasad ko mail kar diya hai, abhi ke abhi pohunch rahe hai hospital me
" please deepti kisi tarah mere bete ko bacha lo, mai tumse bheek mangti hoon "deepti ramya ke pair me gir gir gayi
" sab theek ho jaega deepti, sab theek ho jaega "bol roti hui deepti ko apne seene me rakh kar uske sar par haath ferne lagi ramya
"move move move move move" nurse ne gala faad kar chillaya, stretcher le jana wo bhi itne bheed me......
"will he survive??" doosre nurse ne stretcher ke saath daudte hue bola
Chillane wali nurse chup thi, situation haath ke bahar thi
Patient ko jald se jald lekar Jaana bhi shayad bekar hai kyunki patient ka survival percentage bilkul zero hai
"KYA HUA MERE Bete KO?? " awaz door se a rahi thi ek aurat ki jo shayad maa thi is shaks ki
"sorry madam emergency hai" bol nurse ne aage jaane se rok liya aur stretcher emergency room me le gayi
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"koi to raasta hoga, koi to??" kanishk bol utha, isme request kam thi bheek zyada tha
"sorry kanishk, isme mujhe koi. breakthrough nahi mil raha hai, mai koi help nahi kar paunga" doctor ramya boli
"lekin ramya tum meri bohut achi friend ho yaar, is situation me agar tum kuch nahi kar paayi to koi kuch nahi kar payega" kanishk bola
"dekho kanishk, hum doctors ki bhi limitations hai, aur tum yahan ke best heart speciality hospital me khade ho, I don't think ki India me isse acha hospital milega tumhe" Dr ramya fir boli
"I'm not here to discuss about hospital, I'm here to discuss about my son damn it" kanishk ke sabr ka baandh toot raha tha
"waise last aur final option hai" ramya boli
"wo kya??" kanishk ne poocha
"Dr prasad, heart specialist. Australia me bade Naam hai unke. Aisa koi case nahi hai jise unhone handle nahi kiya ho?? And luckily wo India me hai aur wo bhi isi shahar me" ramya boli
"kya wo kingshuk ko theek kar sakte hai??" kanishk ne utsukta se poocha. Ramya ke baaton se Ummed ki asha nazar aayi kanishk ko
DHADAMMMMM
"deepti??" ramya hairan thi deepti ko dekh kar, baal idhar udhar kapde jaise taise pehen kar aayi thi, college ki Jaan thi deepti, lekin industrialist kanishk se shaadi kar apna career khatam kiya tha usne
"please ramya, please bol do ki kingshuk ko kuch nahi hoga, please please please" deepti rote hue ramya ke paas gayi
"deepti please apne aap ko sambhal lo agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk apne chair se uth deepti ko sambhal kar bola
"kya bigada tha usne kanishk??? Uska ek pair bhi sahi nahi hai, partial handicapped hai kingshuk" deepti ka rona jaari tha
"kuch nahi hoga kingshuk ko kuch bhi nahi" kanishk bola
"usne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kiya kingshuk, kya bhagwan unpe barasta hai jo kamzor hai??" deepti ke is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha kanishk ke paas
"deepti, maine Dr prasad ko mail kar diya hai, abhi ke abhi pohunch rahe hai hospital me
" please deepti kisi tarah mere bete ko bacha lo, mai tumse bheek mangti hoon "deepti ramya ke pair me gir gir gayi
" sab theek ho jaega deepti, sab theek ho jaega "bol roti hui deepti ko apne seene me rakh kar uske sar par haath ferne lagi ramya
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Please guys, agar is story me response nahi aayega to story continue nahi kar paunga
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kyu pareshan ho purane dost hain na aapke sath continue rakhiye story log khud judte jayegen
king cobra
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kisi bhi kimat par use bachane ke liye uske mom dad taiyaar hain ummid hai kaamyaab hongen
Bhai nayi story ke liye congrats... But meri ek sikayat hai... Lagbhag 4 sal hone ko hai mai aapko janta hu aur aapki story padh rha hu aur pichle 2 sal se mai agent 3 ka wait kar rha jb se agent 2 khatm hui hai.... Aur lagbhag har nyi story ke suruaat me request bhi kiya hu agent 3 ke liye but mujhe bs nirasha hi hath lagi hai....... Mera yakin maniye readers jitna intejaar agent 3 le liye kar rhe hai utna shayad hi kisi story ke liye kar the ho.... Baki jo bhi aapki story aati hai use bs man bahlane ke liye padh lete hai but intejaar sbko agent 3 ka hi hai..... To meri aapse ye aakhri baar request hai ki aap ho sake to is story ke sath sath agent 3 bhi suru kr dijiye.... Aur aap dekhiye readers ki line lag jayegi waha.... Baaki writer aap hai kb kya likhna hai aap decide karo
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Thanks bhai aap jaise kuch readers hai jinhone abhi tak Saath diya hai aur dete rahenge
Baat wahi hai ki reviews aur likes ke bina likhne ka Josh nahi aata
Aise hi support karte rahiye
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Thanks bro,
Kingshuk ka character build up me time lagega, ek normal sa seedha saada ladka hai kingshuk, uski ye haalat kaise hui wo aage pata chalega
Saath rahiye
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Thanks bro,
Sabse pehle maafi mangna chahunga ki mai aap logo ko disappoint kiya,
Baat ye hai ki mai agent 3 ke liye kai Saare plots dekh raha hoon lekin ending dhamake daar honi chahiye isliye time le raha hoon, trust me us story ko beech me nahi chodna chahta isliye poora crystal clear karna chahta hoon ki main villain kise banana hai aur male lead ke saath kise rakhna hai, female lead koun hogi aur side roles koun karenge
Heart transplant ke baad bodyguard 2 likhna tha lekin aap logo ke request ke chalte agent 3 ko hi shuru karna padega
Is story ko bhi please pyaar dijiye, kyunki kingshuk ka character sabse alag tarah ka hoga
Saath rahiye
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