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Story ki female lead kise hona chahiye???

  • Shanaya

    Votes: 23 76.7%
  • Ishita

    Votes: 11 36.7%
  • Jahnvi

    Votes: 7 23.3%

  • Total voters
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"yaar shanaya you slapped that poor guy?? " Pooja shocked thi

"light le le, ye log hote hi hai chance maarne wale" shanaya boli

"I don't know, seems like he tried to save me or something" Pooja boli

"Rehne de Pooja, waise admission kab karenge??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kya kehti hoon thoda ghoom lete hai shahar" Pooja boli

"mai Tokyo se yahan ghoomne nahi aayi Pooja" shanaya boli to pooja chup ho gayi

"waise ek round to maar hi sakte hai jab tak hamara school admission na ho raha ho" shanaya ne muskurate hue bola to pooja khush ho gayi

Shanaya ne Pooja ki aur dekha, cousin thi Pooja aur ekdum bacchi thi, use in sab se door rakhna hoga
Lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki wo us maksad ko poora nahi karegi jiske liye wo aayi hai yaha

"a gaya police station" Pooja boli

Shanaya ne bina hichkichaye police station par entry maar li

inspector santosh kuch files padh hi rahe the ki...

"sir mujhe ek aadmi ke missing hone ka Fir likhana hai" Shanaya bol padi

Santosh ne ek nazar dekha ladki ko,aur fir doosri ladki ko

"sir" Shanaya boli

"Haan, kiski??" poocha santosh ne

"uska Naam yank kon, yahan ka nahi hai tokyo ka hai aur..."

"ek minute ek minute, aap kehna chahti hai wo Indian hai hi nahi??" santosh ne poocha..

"yes sir wo Japanese hai" Shanaya boli

"aap usko kaise jaanti hai" santosh ne poocha

"close friend hoon uski" Shanaya boli

"us yank kon ya jo bhi hai, uska koi rishtedar??" santosh ne poocha..

"sir pehle aap fir to likhiye" Shanaya irritate ho rahi thi

Santosh ne ek nazar Shanaya ko dekha aur fir Fir likhne laga, Shanaya use details deti rahi

"last location agar yahi hai madam to fir hame ab tak kuch to mil Jaana chahiye tha" santosh bola

"wahi Keh rahi hoon sir, please kuch kijiye" Shanaya boli

"ye sab abhi tak unclaimed hai yaar, fenk de" ek constable ko baat karte dekh Shanaya ne halka sa ignore Kiya ki tabhi uski aankhen badi ho gayi aur wo daud kar wahan chali gayi

"y ye..." Shanaya bas itna bol paayi, ye to... Ye to usne gift....

"shanaya??" Pooja ne kandhe par haath rakha to shanaya foot foot kar rone lagi

Santosh sirf dekh raha tha, wo kuch kar nahi sakta tha

Ek lighter, aur ek photo jo aadhi jal chuki thi

"wo zinda to hai na Pooja??" shanaya ne poocha

"zaroor hoga, itni jaldi haar mat Maan yaar" Pooja boli

Shanaya kuch nahi boli bas dekhti rahi un saman ko
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"football match ke dono team aamne Saamne" baldev bola

"aaj hoga us harami karan ka the end" prakash bola aur sab hasne lage

Match shuru hua aur karan midfield se daudta hua aaya aur na sirf ball baldev se cheena balki us ball ko pass kiya Daniel ko

Daniel ne diya kingshuk ko aur kingshuk ne maara shot

Ball goli ki raftaar se gayi

GOALLLLLLLLLLL

"kar kya rahe ho??" levelfield ke principal ne ek nazar kingshuk ki aur dekh kar kaha

"KINGSHUK??" lagbhag Chilla uthi jahnvi
Use vishwas nahi ho rha tha jo wo dekh rahi thi

Kingshuk ne ek nazar dekha jahnvi ko, lekin fir andekha kar diya

Baldev aur prakash jee Jaan se try kar rahe the, lekin ek goal bhi nahi kar pa rahe the

Tabhi ball fir se gayi Daniel ke pass aur fir use pass kiya kingshuk ki taraf aur ek head maara kingshuk ne

GOALLLLLLLLLL

levelfield ke players lachar dikh rahe the aur gurukul ke defence tak bhi nahi pohunch pa rahe the jabki do goal maar chuka tha kingshuk

Tabhi ball Daniel ke pass gayi aur usne karan ko pass kiya, karan ne dekha sally use dekh rahi hai to anan fanan me wo baldev ko ball pass kar baitha

Kingshuk bijli ki tarah gaya aur baldev se ball cheen kar khud use le gaya aur kab tak defenders kuch kar paate...

GOALLLLLLLLLLLLL

Hattrick tha kingshuk ke liye, karan ne sar jhuka liya

Referee ne whistle maari aur gurukul ne match jeet liya tha

Principal gusse se ja chuke the ground ke bahar

"irade theek nahi lag rahe hai kingshuk, kalti maarte hai" Dan Bola

"nahi Dan, face karenge" kingshuk bola

"lekin kingshuk unke Saamne hum.."

"do you trust me Dan??" kingshuk ne poocha aur change karne chala gaya

Dan has pada, kingshuk ka Saath diya hai. Peeche mud nahi sakta

"Sally ko dekha??" karan ne poocha

A gaya sarfira, Dan ne socha tabhi usne ek ladki ko aate dekha

"excuse me?? Kingshuk...." ladki utna bol paayi

"aap..." Dan ne ladki ko dekhte hue bola

"jahnvi Naam hai mera" ladki boli

"oh..... Kingshuk change karne gaya hai" Dan bola

"u uska pair..." janvi boli

"Haan suna kuch issues the, lekin jab se uska heart transplant hua tab se koi problem nahi hai" dan bola

"matlab samjhi nahi" jahnvi ne poocha

"wo a raha hai usi se pooch lijiye, I have to move" bol Dan bhi change karne gaya

Jahnvi kingshuk ke paas a rahi thi lekin jahnvi ko dekh kar andekha kar kingshuk aage badh gaya
Aur Ab ye new character Shanaya kaun hai aur kya importance hone wala hai
Levelfield ke against kingshuk ke hattrick goal se gurukul match Jeet gya

Bhai km se Kam update me kuch tick kar dijiye ye no ka update hai pta hi nhi chlta Naya update kaun sa hai daily visit nhi kar pata forum
 

Swaraj

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अरे वाह
किंग्सुक और शनाया के बीच का रिश्ता तीखा होगा क्यूंकि दोनों का स्कुल जो अलग होने वाला है
जबरदस्त
Thanks bro,
Aapne sahi kaha, shanaya ke past le bagair story samajh me nahi aayegi, wo jald aayega Saamne
Saath rahiye
 

Swaraj

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इस बार अपनी कहानी मे थोड़े थोड़े करके इतने ट्विस्ट पैदा कर दिए है कि समझना बहुत ज्यादा मुश्किल हो गया है।
चार्ल्स ने जिस व्यक्ति को मारकर जापान मे अंडरवर्ल्ड की बादशाहत पाई , वो व्यक्ति इंडिया मे किंगशुक के जिस्म मे आ बैठा है।

लेकिन शनाया नाम की लड़की जो वहीं से विलोंग्स करती है जहां बिग बॉस को मारा गया था , इंडिया पढ़ाई करने आती है और एक शख्स यांक केन की गुमशदगी की केस फाइल थाने मे कराती है।
जिस तरह शनाया का इमोशनल रवैया था , वो उस लड़के की बहन लगी। शायद चार्ल्स ने बिग बॉस के साथ उसके लड़के को भी जान से मरवा दिया हो।
मुझे विश्वास है शनाया ही किंगशुक की नायिका है।


दीप्ति जैसी खुबसूरत और अच्छी लड़की की भी पहली शादी फेलयर हो गई थी। यह भी एक खुलासा है कि आखिर हुआ क्या था ! कौन था वो लड़का ?

जाह्नवी अवश्य पहले किंगशुक के अपंग का मजाक उड़ाती होगी इसीलिए किंगशुक ने उसे कोई भाव नही दिया।

एक चीज तो किंगशुक अच्छी तरह समझ गया होगा कि उसके शरीर के अंदर किसी और व्यक्ति की आत्मा भी निवास कर रही है। अब तो बिग बॉस की आत्मा उससे बाते भी करने लगी है।

लेवलफिल्ड स्कूल और गुरूकुल का प्रतिस्पर्धा भी अब लगता है कि बिग बॉस के पास्ट से जुड़ा हुआ है। शायद बिग बॉस जरूर इंडियन रहा होगा या चार्ल्स का कोई कनेक्शन इन स्कूल से रहा होगा।

बहुत सस्पेंस खड़ा कर दिए है आपने स्वराज भाई। पर मजा भी खूब आ रहा है। देखते हैं सच्चाई क्या है !

अद्भुत अपडेट स्वराज भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड एमेजिंग।
Thanks bro,
Shanaya aur marne wale aadmi ka relation, aur wo kaise mili usse sab pata chalega dheere dheere, kingshuk ke saath bas ek hi frame me aayi hai shanaya jahan usne thappad maara tha. Abhi kingshuk ke saath Filhal to mulakat nahi hogi lekin Haan, agle kuch updates me shanaya ka past Saamne aayega aur Charles ke saath levelfield ka connection bhi Saamne aayega
Deepti ka role thoda peeche rahega abhi. Nanaji ka role active rahega
Story thriller hai dost aur suspense ke bina story me maza nahi aayega, Saath rahiye sab dheere dheere saaf hota jayega
 

Swaraj

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Aur Ab ye new character Shanaya kaun hai aur kya importance hone wala hai
Levelfield ke against kingshuk ke hattrick goal se gurukul match Jeet gya

Bhai km se Kam update me kuch tick kar dijiye ye no ka update hai pta hi nhi chlta Naya update kaun sa hai daily visit nhi kar pata forum
Thanks bro,
Shanaya female lead hai, ya yun kahiye story ki heroine,
Updates ke baare me aapka sujhav acha laga, air ye bhi acha laga ki aap story se jude hue hai, apna review dete rahiye
 

king cobra

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Agar update yun hi slow rahe to unna maja noi aayega bhai
 

Tiger 786

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"react kyun nahi kiya??" kingshuk apna gaal pakadte hue bola, kambakht ladki ka haath tha ya hathoda,

Koi awaz nahi aayi

Kuch der baith kar kingshuk uth kar jaane laga ki tabhi kuch ladke ladkiyan ek Saath group banakar park me baith kar cigarettes pee rahe the

Kingshuk wahan jaane hi laga ki

"EK DO SE KYA HOGA KINGSHUK?" awaz aayi

"lekin ye to galat hai aise Park me nahi kar sakte" kingshuk bola

"GALAT HAI KINGSHUK, LEKIN JAB BURE LOG APNI GALAT NIYAT SE DUNIYA PAR RAJ KARNA CHAHTE HO TO KOI KYA KARE" awaz boli

"lekin police??? government kyun kuch nahi karti" kingshuk ne poocha

"TUM BOHUT CHOTE HO YE SAB SAMAJHNE KE LIYE" awaz boli

"ek baat batao koun hai wo jo raaj karna chahta hai??" kingshuk ne poocha to koi jawab nahi mila

"JIS LADKI NE THAPPAD MAARA USKA BURA NA MANNA KINGSHUK, USNE BOHUT KUCH KHOYA HAI" awaz boli

"mera dimag fat jayega mujhe kuch samajh me nahi a raha hai" kingshuk bola to awaz hasne laga

"TUM DIL KE BOHUT SAAF HO KINGSHUK IS GANDGI KO TUM HI SAAF KAR SAKTE HO" awaz bola

"wo sab theek hai lekin abhi bhook lagi hai" bol kingshuk jog karta hua ghar jaane laga

Use pata nahi tha door ye sab ek ladki dekh rahi thi badi badi aankhon se

"k kingshuk daud raha hai?? U uska pair kab theek hua??" ladki ke aankhon me hairat tha

"jahnvi wo loser kingshuk nahi ho sakta hai, uski body dekhi tune. Koi athlete hai shayad, body dekh kar lag raha hai gym bhi Jaata hoga" ladka bola

"lekin mujhe kingshuk hi dikha akshay..." jahnvi boli

"Rehne do yaar chalo kahin coffee maar kar aate hai" akshay bola aur jahnvi chali gayi uske Saath lekin mud kar ek baar dekh zaroor liya kingshuk ko
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"papa aapko mera jawab maalum hai" deepti boli

"meri wasiyat par tumhara bhi utna hi haq hai jitna baakiyon ka hai" nanaji bole

"papa kanishq ke rehte aapko fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai" deepti boli

"mai tera gunahgaar hoon beta, kanishq teri pasand thi mujhe maaloom tha. Fir bhi..." sar jhula liya nanaji ne

"wo sab Rehne dijiye papa, shayad mera taqdeer hi waisa tha" deepti boli

"teri pehli shaadi ka tootne ka Dard samjh sakta hoon beta.."

"aap rest kijiye mujhe kuch kaam hai" deepti ne apne papa ki baat Kaat di

Tabhi kingshuk haanf kar dakhil hua

"Arey hero??" nanaji muskuraye

"pranaam" bol kingshuk ne pranaam kiya

"beta ek baat batao, wo jo tumne CM ke baare me kaha tha wo tukka tha ya..." nanaji muskurate hue bole

"ye common sense hai nanaji, iske liye koi rocket science ki padhai nahi karni, padti" kingshuk ne apna bag rakh kar bola

Nanaji ne kingshuk ki aur dekha, use bilkul bhi parwah nahi tha ki usne kya Kiya aur uske us CM wale faisle ki wajah se kitna bada issue solve hua

"waise beta tumne future ke baare me kya socha" nanaji je poocha

"future me to bohut kuch karna hai nanaji, bohut kuch" kingshuk bola

"waise ek baat to hai mai chahta hoon ki tum mere group me shamil ho jao" nanaji bole to kingshuk has pada

"baad me dekhenge, waise nanaji aap trustee hai na gurukul ke??" kingshuk ne poocha

"Haan beta, usi ka to rona hai. School me donate karke kuch fayda nahi hua, balki sirf nuksaan ho raha hai" nanaji bole

"I can help" kingshuk bola

"kaise??" nanaji hairan the, ye ladka kya tha aur kya ho raha hai??

"abhi kuch nahi bataunga, abhi mujhe nipatna hai levelfield se, lekin agar aap chahte hai ki gurukul top me rahe to mai jo karun ya bolu, aap mujhse sawal nahi karenge" kingshuk bola

"agar tum galat hue to??" nanaji ne poocha

"to ainda na aapko koi advice doonga na kabhi aapke group me entry lunga" kingshuk ne aankhon me aankhen rakh kar bola

"hmm theek hai, tumhe jo support chahiye batate rehna" nanaji bole aur chale gaye

Kingshuk Muskuraya, tabhi usne dekha deepti dekhe ja rahi thi kingshuk ko

"m mujhe bhook lagi hai maa" kingshuk jhat se kamre me gaya bol kar
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"chutiye..... Bhosdi ke maar khakar a gaye??"

"sorry baldev bhai wo boxer tha aur Humne use kam aanka" prakash sar jhuka kar bola

"sun be chomu, I don't care about you or that bastard gopal, mujhe is ladke ke baare me poora details chahiye"baldev bola

" wo gurukul me padhta hai baldev bhai, suna hai yahan ke kuch losers wahan apna admission wahin lekar bas gaye "ek ladka bola

"hmm interesting, ye baat pehle kyun nahi batai" baldev ne poocha

"pehle dhyan nahi diya, lekin ab us ladke ko chodna nahi hai baldev bhai" prakash bola

"kutte ki tarah kutai karenge, jaise us kingshuk ka kiya tha" baldev has kar bola

"suna hai gym ja raha hai, body bana raha hai" prakash bola

"karne do bechare ko, agar isse uski aag kam ho to yahi sahi hai" baldev bola to sab hasne lage

"next football match a raha hai wahin sabko kootna hai" baldev bola

"sahi hai" prakash bola aur hasne laga

"gopal, kingshuk aur wo ladka bachega nahi baldev bhai" ek ladka bola

"football match bhi harenge aur pitenge bhi saale" baldev bola aur sab hasne lage
Awesome update
 

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"yaar shanaya you slapped that poor guy?? " Pooja shocked thi

"light le le, ye log hote hi hai chance maarne wale" shanaya boli

"I don't know, seems like he tried to save me or something" Pooja boli

"Rehne de Pooja, waise admission kab karenge??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kya kehti hoon thoda ghoom lete hai shahar" Pooja boli

"mai Tokyo se yahan ghoomne nahi aayi Pooja" shanaya boli to pooja chup ho gayi

"waise ek round to maar hi sakte hai jab tak hamara school admission na ho raha ho" shanaya ne muskurate hue bola to pooja khush ho gayi

Shanaya ne Pooja ki aur dekha, cousin thi Pooja aur ekdum bacchi thi, use in sab se door rakhna hoga
Lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki wo us maksad ko poora nahi karegi jiske liye wo aayi hai yaha

"a gaya police station" Pooja boli

Shanaya ne bina hichkichaye police station par entry maar li

inspector santosh kuch files padh hi rahe the ki...

"sir mujhe ek aadmi ke missing hone ka Fir likhana hai" Shanaya bol padi

Santosh ne ek nazar dekha ladki ko,aur fir doosri ladki ko

"sir" Shanaya boli

"Haan, kiski??" poocha santosh ne

"uska Naam yank kon, yahan ka nahi hai tokyo ka hai aur..."

"ek minute ek minute, aap kehna chahti hai wo Indian hai hi nahi??" santosh ne poocha..

"yes sir wo Japanese hai" Shanaya boli

"aap usko kaise jaanti hai" santosh ne poocha

"close friend hoon uski" Shanaya boli

"us yank kon ya jo bhi hai, uska koi rishtedar??" santosh ne poocha..

"sir pehle aap fir to likhiye" Shanaya irritate ho rahi thi

Santosh ne ek nazar Shanaya ko dekha aur fir Fir likhne laga, Shanaya use details deti rahi

"last location agar yahi hai madam to fir hame ab tak kuch to mil Jaana chahiye tha" santosh bola

"wahi Keh rahi hoon sir, please kuch kijiye" Shanaya boli

"ye sab abhi tak unclaimed hai yaar, fenk de" ek constable ko baat karte dekh Shanaya ne halka sa ignore Kiya ki tabhi uski aankhen badi ho gayi aur wo daud kar wahan chali gayi

"y ye..." Shanaya bas itna bol paayi, ye to... Ye to usne gift....

"shanaya??" Pooja ne kandhe par haath rakha to shanaya foot foot kar rone lagi

Santosh sirf dekh raha tha, wo kuch kar nahi sakta tha

Ek lighter, aur ek photo jo aadhi jal chuki thi

"wo zinda to hai na Pooja??" shanaya ne poocha

"zaroor hoga, itni jaldi haar mat Maan yaar" Pooja boli

Shanaya kuch nahi boli bas dekhti rahi un saman ko
-------------------------------------------------------------------
"football match ke dono team aamne Saamne" baldev bola

"aaj hoga us harami karan ka the end" prakash bola aur sab hasne lage

Match shuru hua aur karan midfield se daudta hua aaya aur na sirf ball baldev se cheena balki us ball ko pass kiya Daniel ko

Daniel ne diya kingshuk ko aur kingshuk ne maara shot

Ball goli ki raftaar se gayi

GOALLLLLLLLLLL

"kar kya rahe ho??" levelfield ke principal ne ek nazar kingshuk ki aur dekh kar kaha

"KINGSHUK??" lagbhag Chilla uthi jahnvi
Use vishwas nahi ho rha tha jo wo dekh rahi thi

Kingshuk ne ek nazar dekha jahnvi ko, lekin fir andekha kar diya

Baldev aur prakash jee Jaan se try kar rahe the, lekin ek goal bhi nahi kar pa rahe the

Tabhi ball fir se gayi Daniel ke pass aur fir use pass kiya kingshuk ki taraf aur ek head maara kingshuk ne

GOALLLLLLLLLL

levelfield ke players lachar dikh rahe the aur gurukul ke defence tak bhi nahi pohunch pa rahe the jabki do goal maar chuka tha kingshuk

Tabhi ball Daniel ke pass gayi aur usne karan ko pass kiya, karan ne dekha sally use dekh rahi hai to anan fanan me wo baldev ko ball pass kar baitha

Kingshuk bijli ki tarah gaya aur baldev se ball cheen kar khud use le gaya aur kab tak defenders kuch kar paate...

GOALLLLLLLLLLLLL

Hattrick tha kingshuk ke liye, karan ne sar jhuka liya

Referee ne whistle maari aur gurukul ne match jeet liya tha

Principal gusse se ja chuke the ground ke bahar

"irade theek nahi lag rahe hai kingshuk, kalti maarte hai" Dan Bola

"nahi Dan, face karenge" kingshuk bola

"lekin kingshuk unke Saamne hum.."

"do you trust me Dan??" kingshuk ne poocha aur change karne chala gaya

Dan has pada, kingshuk ka Saath diya hai. Peeche mud nahi sakta

"Sally ko dekha??" karan ne poocha

A gaya sarfira, Dan ne socha tabhi usne ek ladki ko aate dekha

"excuse me?? Kingshuk...." ladki utna bol paayi

"aap..." Dan ne ladki ko dekhte hue bola

"jahnvi Naam hai mera" ladki boli

"oh..... Kingshuk change karne gaya hai" Dan bola

"u uska pair..." janvi boli

"Haan suna kuch issues the, lekin jab se uska heart transplant hua tab se koi problem nahi hai" dan bola

"matlab samjhi nahi" jahnvi ne poocha

"wo a raha hai usi se pooch lijiye, I have to move" bol Dan bhi change karne gaya

Jahnvi kingshuk ke paas a rahi thi lekin jahnvi ko dekh kar andekha kar kingshuk aage badh gaya
Shanaya jise dund rahi hai uska sharir to Gaya par uski atma to kingshuk ke andar hai😂😂
 

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Thanks bro,
Shanaya female lead hai, ya yun kahiye story ki heroine,
Updates ke baare me aapka sujhav acha laga, air ye bhi acha laga ki aap story se jude hue hai, apna review dete rahiye
Thank you for clearing this point. Story padhne mein clarity rahegi. Otherwise reading your stories are a great exercise for the brain:confuse:
 

Swaraj

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"kya re bohut charbi Chad gayi hai teri
??" akshay tha wo kingshuk ne dhyan nahi diya aur apna football kit ko kit bag me rakh kar taiyyar ho gaya

"sunai nahi diya kya re" akshay bola aur apne haath se kingshuk ke sar ke peeche maar baitha

Kingshuk dar gaya, uske dil ki dhadkanein badhne lagi thi, kambakht akshay sambhal nahi payega agar kingshuk ka dil uske sharir par haavi go gaya to

"akshay please chale jao warna mai control nahi kar paunga, match ke liye aaya tha wo jeet gaya, mera kaam poora hua" kingshuk bola

"saale kisko dhamki de raha hai be langde" bol akshay ne haath chalaya

SWOOOOOOSHHHH

THAPPPP

akshay ki aankhen badi ho gayi, uske haath ko apni mutthi me pakad liya tha kingshuk ne

KARRRDDDD

"MUMMYYYYYYYYYYY" Akshay chilla utha, uske haath ko apne muthhi me aisa dabaya kimgshuk ne ki ungliyan to tooti, Saath me angootha bhi dislocate ho gaya

"apni aukaat dekh kar pange liya kar loser" kingshuk bola aur muskurane laga

Akshay roansa hokar dekhne laga kingshuk ko aur usse door jaane laga

"kya hua loser?? Fatt gayi??? Kyun jahnvi lagane nahi deti kya??" kingshuk ne massomiyat se poocha to sab tahake maar kar hasne lage

Akshay ne aas Paas dekha, kingshuk aur akshay ko ghere hue students akshay ki bezzati ka maza le rahe hai

"mujhe to lagane diya tha loser?? Tujhe nahi diya??" kingshuk ne fir massomiyat se poocha

"m madarchod....." khoon ke aansu liye akshay daud kar aane laga kingshuk ke paas

Kingshuk hat gaya aur apna pair aage kar diya akshay ke saamne

THADDDD

muh ke bal gira akshay

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA

charo aur thahako ki awaz aane lagi, kingshuk bhi muskura raha hai, akshay fir utha aur gusse se dauda aaya kingshuk ke paas aur usne apna haath ghumaya

SWOOOOOOSHHHH

Kingshuk hat gaya aur apna haath usne ghumaya

THUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP


akshay ki aankhen badi ho gayi aur uske muh se laar girne lagi

Kingshuk ka haath abhi bhi akshay ke pet me tha

"ari o laila?? Apne majnu ko lete jao" kingshuk ne haste hue door khadi shocked jahnvi se bola

Jahnvi sar jhuka kar aayi aur akshay ko sahara dekar aage badh gayi

Thahako ki awaz ke beech jahnvi ne ek nazar kingshuk ki aur dekha, kahan gaya wo Bholapan?? Wo saadgi?? Wo pyaari si muskurahat??
Ye to koi raavan has raha tha jaise Keh raha ho ki poori duniya kuch ukhad nahi sakti mera, kya ye sachmuch kingshuk hai???

"jitni baar Saamne aayega utni baar pitega saala" kingshuk ne jahnvi ko suna kar bola

"this was uncalled for kingshuk bhaiyya" Sally ki awaz thi ye

"matlab wo jo kare wo kare, aur hum??" karan bola

"kingshuk bhaiyya karan to nasamajh hai lekin aap ye kaise kar sakte hai??" sally ne poocha

"Sally unhone provoke kiya tha" Daniel Saamne aaya

Sally kuch nahi boli bas chali gayi sabko ek nazar dekh kar

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NIGERIA

"we wanted to do business with you sir" Charles bola

"who ask you??? How you enter??" nigerian chief ne apne aadmiyon ko dekha

"relax chief, we wanted to do business instead of yang tok, he's no more" Charles muskura kar bola to chief ke isharon se uske aadmiyon ne guns nikal liye

"get out before I shoot" Nigerian chief bola

"but.." Charles bolne laga

"out I say" chied chilla utha

Charles aur uske aadmi bahar a gaye, Charles ka chehra gusse se laal tha

"aisa yank ke rehte kabhi nahi hua??"

"sabke Saath chalne wala aadmi tha yank, din ba din ye group khatam hoti ja rahi hai, afganisthan se bhi hum out ho gaye"

Charles sun raha tha sab lekin usne kuch bola nahi, apne zid ke chalte satta usne haasil kar liya lekin ab kya?? Use chalaye kaise????
Uske kai aadmi dheere dheere gang se ya out hue ya maar diye gaye.
Abhi sirf India hi bharosa hai jahan uska drugs chal nikla, India par Filhal apni pakad mazboot rakhni hai

Charles ka sapna poore duniya par raaj karne ka jald poora hoga

"sir that girl..." ek aadmi ne Charles ke kaan me bola

"where is she??" poocha Charles ne

"India, I think she went out for yank tok" aadmi ne jawab biya

"keep an eye on her, I don't want the secrets to be unveiled by that bitch" Charles bola to wo aadmi chala gaya

Sab kuch theek karna hoga, sab kuch apni jagah par rakhna hoga use, Charles ne ek lambi Saans li
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"hat saali" akshay ne dhakka maara jahnvi ko

"akshay kya ho gaya hai tumhe, kyun tum usse bhidne gaye??" jahnvi ne poocha

"kyun gaya?? Teri wajah se gaya saali, na tu baar baar us harami kingshuk ka Naam leti na mai usse bhid Jaata" akshay bola aur apne toote hue ungliyon ka plaster dekhne laga

"akshay he was my past, mai ab usse koi rishta nahi rakhna chahti" jahnvi boli

"bohut ache se pata hai ki tere Saath kya rishta tha uska" jhunjla kar bola akshay

Jahnvi ne nafrat bhari aankhon se dekha akshay ko aur tez kadmon se wahan se nikal gayi

"lekin akele nahi bhidna tha" prakash tha wo

"are prakash??" akshay khush hua prakash ko dekh kar

"baldev bhai ko sab bata diya maine, sabka hisab karenge, lekin uske liye teri help chahiye" prakash bola

"kya help chahiye bata, mai us madarchod kingshuk ko apne pair ke neeche dekha chahta hoon" akshay bola

"jahnvi ka use karna hoga" prakash ne ek kutil muskurahat ke saath bola

"agar jahnvi ka rape bhi karwana pade to karwaunga lekin mujhe us kingshuk ka sar apne pair ke eneche chahiye" akshay gusse se bola

"chal fir mai aage ka plan batata hoon" bol khusur fusur karne laga prakash jise sun kar akshay khush ho raha tha

Do ladkiyon ke kadam principal ke office ke Saamne ruke, usme se ek ladki aage badhi aur usne darwaza khola

"may i come in sir??" ladki ne poocha

"ah shanaya, pooja. Welcome to levelfield" principal muskurate hue dono ka swagat karte hue bola
 
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"kya re bohut charbi Chad gayi hai teri
??" akshay tha wo kingshuk ne dhyan nahi diya aur apna football kit ko kit bag me rakh kar taiyyar ho gaya

"sunai nahi diya kya re" akshay bola aur apne haath se kingshuk ke sar ke peeche maar baitha

Kingshuk dar gaya, uske dil ki dhadkanein badhne lagi thi, kambakht akshay sambhal nahi payega agar kingshuk ka dil uske sharir par haavi go gaya to

"akshay please chale jao warna mai control nahi kar paunga, match ke liye aaya tha wo jeet gaya, mera kaam poora hua" kingshuk bola

"saale kisko dhamki de raha hai be langde" bol akshay ne haath chalaya

SWOOOOOOSHHHH

THAPPPP

akshay ki aankhen badi ho gayi, uske haath ko apni mutthi me pakad liya tha kingshuk ne

KARRRDDDD

"MUMMYYYYYYYYYYY" Akshay chilla utha, uske haath ko apne muthhi me aisa dabaya kimgshuk ne ki ungliyan to tooti, Saath me angootha bhi dislocate ho gaya

"apni aukaat dekh kar pange liya kar loser" kingshuk bola aur muskurane laga

Akshay roansa hokar dekhne laga kingshuk ko aur usse door jaane laga

"kya hua loser?? Fatt gayi??? Kyun jahnvi lagane nahi deti kya??" kingshuk ne massomiyat se poocha to sab tahake maar kar hasne lage

Akshay ne aas Paas dekha, kingshuk aur akshay ko ghere hue students akshay ki bezzati ka maza le rahe hai

"mujhe to lagane diya tha loser?? Tujhe nahi diya??" kingshuk ne fir massomiyat se poocha

"m madarchod....." khoon ke aansu liye akshay daud kar aane laga kingshuk ke paas

Kingshuk hat gaya aur apna pair aage kar diya akshay ke saamne

THADDDD

muh ke bal gira akshay

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA

charo aur thahako ki awaz aane lagi, kingshuk bhi muskura raha hai, akshay fir utha aur gusse se dauda aaya kingshuk ke paas aur usne apna haath ghumaya

SWOOOOOOSHHHH

Kingshuk hat gaya aur apna haath usne ghumaya

THUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP


akshay ki aankhen badi ho gayi aur uske muh se laar girne lagi

Kingshuk ka haath abhi bhi akshay ke pet me tha

"ari o laila?? Apne majnu ko lete jao" kingshuk ne haste hue door khadi shocked jahnvi se bola

Jahnvi sar jhuka kar aayi aur akshay ko sahara dekar aage badh gayi

Thahako ki awaz ke beech jahnvi ne ek nazar kingshuk ki aur dekha, kahan gaya wo Bholapan?? Wo saadgi?? Wo pyaari si muskurahat??
Ye to koi raavan has raha tha jaise Keh raha ho ki poori duniya kuch ukhad nahi sakti mera, kya ye sachmuch kingshuk hai???

"jitni baar Saamne aayega utni baar pitega saala" kingshuk ne jahnvi ko suna kar bola

"this was uncalled for kingshuk bhaiyya" Sally ki awaz thi ye

"matlab wo jo kare wo kare, aur hum??" karan bola

"kingshuk bhaiyya karan to nasamajh hai lekin aap ye kaise kar sakte hai??" sally ne poocha

"Sally unhone provoke kiya tha" Daniel Saamne aaya

Sally kuch nahi boli bas chali gayi sabko ek nazar dekh kar

-------------------------------------------------------------------
NIGERIA

"we wanted to do business with you sir" Charles bola

"who ask you??? How you enter??" nigerian chief ne apne aadmiyon ko dekha

"relax chief, we wanted to do business instead of yang tok, he's no more" Charles muskura kar bola to chief ke isharon se uske aadmiyon ne guns nikal liye

"get out before I shoot" Nigerian chief bola

"but.." Charles bolne laga

"out I say" chied chilla utha

Charles aur uske aadmi bahar a gaye, Charles ka chehra gusse se laal tha

"aisa yank ke rehte kabhi nahi hua??"

"sabke Saath chalne wala aadmi tha yank, din ba din ye group khatam hoti ja rahi hai, afganisthan se bhi hum out ho gaye"

Charles sun raha tha sab lekin usne kuch bola nahi, apne zid ke chalte satta usne haasil kar liya lekin ab kya?? Use chalaye kaise????
Uske kai aadmi dheere dheere gang se ya out hue ya maar diye gaye.
Abhi sirf India hi bharosa hai jahan uska drugs chal nikla, India par Filhal apni pakad mazboot rakhni hai

Charles ka sapna poore duniya par raaj karne ka jald poora hoga

"sir that girl..." ek aadmi ne Charles ke kaan me bola

"where is she??" poocha Charles ne

"India, I think she went out for yank tok" aadmi ne jawab biya

"keep an eye on her, I don't want the secrets to be unveiled by that bitch" Charles bola to wo aadmi chala gaya

Sab kuch theek karna hoga, sab kuch apni jagah par rakhna hoga use, Charles ne ek lambi Saans li
-------------------------------------------------------------------
"hat saali" akshay ne dhakka maara jahnvi ko

"akshay kya ho gaya hai tumhe, kyun tum usse bhidne gaye??" jahnvi ne poocha

"kyun gaya?? Teri wajah se gaya saali, na tu baar baar us harami kingshuk ka Naam leti na mai usse bhid Jaata" akshay bola aur apne toote hue ungliyon ka plaster dekhne laga

"akshay he was my past, mai ab usse koi rishta nahi rakhna chahti" jahnvi boli

"bohut ache se pata hai ki tere Saath kya rishta tha uska" jhunjla kar bola akshay

Jahnvi ne nafrat bhari aankhon se dekha akshay ko aur tez kadmon se wahan se nikal gayi

"lekin akele nahi bhidna tha" prakash tha wo

"are prakash??" akshay khush hua prakash ko dekh kar

"baldev bhai ko sab bata diya maine, sabka hisab karenge, lekin uske liye teri help chahiye" prakash bola

"kya help chahiye bata, mai us madarchod kingshuk ko apne pair ke neeche dekha chahta hoon" akshay bola

"jahnvi ka use karna hoga" prakash ne ek kutil muskurahat ke saath bola

"agar jahnvi ka rape bhi karwana pade to karwaunga lekin mujhe us kingshuk ka sar apne pair ke eneche chahiye" akshay gusse se bola

"chal fir mai aage ka plan batata hoon" bol khusur fusur karne laga prakash jise sun kar akshay khush ho raha tha

Do ladkiyon ke kadam principal ke office ke Saamne ruke, usme se ek ladki aage badhi aur usne darwaza khola

"may i come in sir??" ladki ne poocha

"ah shanaya, pooja. Welcome to levelfield" principal muskurate hue dono ka swagat karte hue bola
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