Thriller HEART TRANSPLANT

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[Swaraj]

Thanks bro

 

[edm_rahul_rockk]

Dard Leke Hi Insaan Strong Banta Hai Waise Hi Lag Raha Hai ,Karan Ke Marne Ke Baad Kingsuk Apni Galtiyo Se Sikhega ,Jyada Strong Banne Ki Koshish Karega
Update Der Aaye Durust Aaye
Superb Update

 

[Swaraj]

Dard Leke Hi Insaan Strong Banta Hai Waise Hi Lag Raha Hai ,Karan Ke Marne Ke Baad Kingsuk Apni Galtiyo Se Sikhega ,Jyada Strong Banne Ki Koshish Karega
Update Der Aaye Durust Aaye
Superb Update

Thanks bro,
Next update ek emotional note ke saath Kingshuk me change layega, story intense hogi halki si aur kingshuk ki takkar hogi Tyson ke saath,
Saath rahiye

 

[edm_rahul_rockk]

Thanks bro,
Next update ek emotional note ke saath Kingshuk me change layega, story intense hogi halki si aur kingshuk ki takkar hogi Tyson ke saath,
Saath rahiye

Jaroor Sath Rahega Bhai Apke Saare Story Padh Chuka Hoon.
Yeh Bhi Padh Lenge

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

करण की शहादत होने वाली ही है। अभिमन्यु और अर्जुन के एग्जाम्पल से ऐसा ही लगा कि कुछ पल का ही मेहमान है करण।
बहुत दुखद घड़ी होगी जब यह खबर उसके परिवार और उसकी प्रेमिका शैली के संज्ञान मे आयेगा।
स्वराज भाई , आप ने कहा नेक्स्ट अपडेट बहुत ज्यादा इमोशनल होगा। लेकिन मै तो करण की मृत्यु और उसके बाद की घटनाक्रम, घर , परिवार , बंधु के बारे मे सोचकर अभी से इमोशनल होने लगा।

जाह्नवी शायद अब तक अक्षय कुमार के चरित्र से वाकिफ नही हो पाई है। उसे सच का आईना तो दिखाना चाहिए था। वैसे अक्षय के साथ बढ़िया सलूक किया किंगशुक ने।

ईशिता का किरदार कभी नरम तो कभी गरम जैसा है। पर है शानदार। लड़की दिल की बुरी नही है। किंगशुक के प्रति खयालात वही कभी नरम कभी गरम जैसा ही है।

बेहतरीन अपडेट स्वराज भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग
और जगमग जगमग।

 

[Vk248517]

"Haan mai" kingshuk bola

"m mera koi haath nahi in sab me mai..."

"pata hai mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ki jahnvi ke liye tujhse acha ladka nahi mil sakta tha" kingshuk baatein karte hue hospital ke bed ke next bed table se ek steel ka jug utha liya

"dekho kingshuk m maine kuch nahi kiya maine kuch nahi kiya" akshay kaampne laga

"jab jahnvi mujhe chod kar gayi tab mujhe dukh hua tha akshay, bohut. Apne apahij hone par afsos hua tha aur socha tha ki levelfield jaisa school me padhne ke liye mujhe jo bhi sacrifice dena hai wo dena hoga, levelfield se aage kabhi socha nahi tha maine" kingshuk us steel ke jug ko Saamne wash basin me khali karta gaya

"lekin mere life ka turning point wo tha jab mere heart ko change kiya gaya, uske wajah se mujhe karan jaisa dost mile jiski baatein kadwi hai, sally jaisi saaf suthri dil ki ladki jo hamesha bhaiyya bhaiyya karti rehti hai, Daniel jaisa hamesha Saath khade rehne wala dost, aur gurukul jaisa school "kingshuk khada hua aur tuk tuk dekhne wale akshay ke paas gaya

" tune mujhe toda to toda, mere doston par haath uthaya, aur mai ye bardasht nahi kar sakta "bol kingshuk ne plaster wale pair ke plaster ko faadne laga

" nahi kingshuk, doctor ne bola hai ki is pair me wapas chot lagne par wo permanently damage ho jaega "akshay gidgida raha tha

" as if I care?? "bol akshay ne wo steel ka jug uthaya akshay ke muh me kapda thoos diya

THANNNNNN

THANNNNNNN

THANNNNNNN.......

Kingshuk Vaar pe Vaar kar raha tha aur akshay ki aankhen badi hoti gayi, muh se goo goo ki awazein aane lagi

Kingshuk ne muh me thoose kapde ko hata diya

"bol gopal, karan aur Daniel ke peeche kiska haath hai??"

"mai nahi bol sakta" akshay bola

Kingshuk haath uthane hi wala tha ki

"we wait wait wait, gopal ko bacha sakte ho, uske liye tumhe school me aayi nayi ladki ishita se baat jarni hai, help leni hai" akshay bola aur kuch batata gaya

Kingshuk ne jug fenk diya aur apni muthhi kas li usne aur akshay ke face par Vaar karne laga

DHAD

DHAD

DHAD

khoon se haath bheeg gaya aur akshay kab ka behosh ho gaya pata nahi lekin kingshuk ruka nahi

"HAAN AUR MAARO USE KHATAM KARO USE"

awaz aane lagi uske dimag me aur aur kingshuk aur kroor ho gaya uska har Vaar tod raha tha akshay ko apahij bana raha tha poora

"STOP IT" darwaza khula aur Saamne jahnvi khadi thi jo daud kar akshay ke paas gayi

"bach gaya to fir wapas aunga" kingshuk jaate hue bola

"tum aise nahi the kingshuk??" jahnvi rote hue boli

"hum badalte hai jahnvi, har koi badalta hai, dhoka aur fareb Saath me zindagi me mile seekh hame badal deti hai" bol kingshuk ne bina jahnvi ko dekhe hospital ke bahar nikal kar chala gaya

-----------------------------------------------------------------"Parivar ki naak katayegi ye"
"maa ko kha gayi, pata nahi ab kise khayegi"
​

Kaamp gayi ishita ye sab soch kar, abhi bhi, abhi bhi wahi sab baatein, wahi sab sapne, socha tha ki un sab se peecha chootega, lekin wahi baldev, wahi gang war aur wahi life for se???

Lekin lekin, achanak se wo ladka takraya. Kya Naam tha uska??? King.... King.. Shul??? Nahi kingshuk, achanak se takraya aur usne use thappad hi maar diya

Ahhhh apne haathon se apna chehra chupa liya ishita ne, kitna cute kitna handsome aur kitna innocent sa hai

Nahi nahiiiiiiii ye sab kya soch rahi hai, kahan uska posh aur royal family aur kahan gali mohalle ka wo kingshuk, ishita bhi na kya kya soch leti hai...

THAK THAK

khidki se knock aaya tha aur ishita darne wali ladkiyon me se nahi thi

Usne khidki khol diya aur.

THAPP

"thanks" bola kingshuk ne

"how dare you bastard" ishita zor se boli to kingshuk ne uske muh par apna haath rakh diya

"shhh please yaar co operate karo" kingshuk dheere se bola to ishita ne kingshuk ka haath Kaat diya

"Ahh ye kya tha??" fusfusaya kingshuk ne

"how dare you enter my room" ishita ne poocha

"mujhe help chahiye ishita, please" kingshuk bola

"aur mai kyun help karne lagi ek anjane bandar ka??" ishita boli

"kyunki ye sab ek hi school se hai, jahan tum padti ho, please uske badle jo bologi wo karunga" kingshuk bola

"OK, hmm theek hai, kya karna hai??" ishita ne poocha

Kingshuk ne poori baat batayi gopal ko lekar

"ek shaks theek kar sakta hai, lekin help ke badle mujhe kya milega??" ishita ne poocha

"jo bologi wo" kingshuk bola

"hmm theek hai,chalo jao ab" ishita boli

Kingshuk jaane laga

"sambhal kar Jaana, mera matlab mujhe kya tum jaise Jaana Hai jao idiot" itra kar badi ada ke saath ishita boli

Girls hostel se chupte chupate kingshuk bahar aaya ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga

"kingshuk bhaiyya, please jaldi aayiye karan..." rote hue sally boli

"kya hua karan ko" kingshuk Darte hue bola

"doctor ne jawab de diya, uske ribs toot kar uske lungs aur heart me ghus chuke hai" sally rote hue boli

"kuch nahi hoga use, mai abhi a raha hoon" kingshuk bola

"kuch kijiye bhaiyya" sally rote hue boli

"i'll be there as fast as I can" kingshuk bola aur bhaagne laga

"NIYATI" awaz goonjne lagi kingshuk ke dimag me

"shut up shut up shut up" kingshuk Chillane laga

Baarish girne lagi aur bijli bhi chamakne lagi, lekin kingshuk hospital ki aur bhaga ja raha tha

"NIYATI SE AAP BHAAG NAHI SAKTE KINGSHUK"..

"maine kaha shut the fuck up"

"mahabharat me abhimanyu ke shahadat ke baad hi arjun ne hahakar macha diya Tha kingshuk, abhimanyu mohra tha mahabharat me, yahan mohra karan hai. Uske baad hi tum azaadi ke saath sabko lapete me loge kingshuk, karan ka marna zaroori hai"

"stop it you bastard stop it"

"NIYATI KO KOI NAHI ROK SAKTA"

Kingshuk roye ja raha tha, karan na raha to Sally toot jayegi, toot jayegi​

Nice updates

 

[king cobra]

very nice but painful update

 

[Dark angel]

Nice going keep it up

 

[Ramesh628]

Bahut hi sandar update hai bhai
Waiting next