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Thriller HEART TRANSPLANT

Story ki female lead kise hona chahiye???

  • Shanaya

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  • Ishita

    Votes: 11 36.7%
  • Jahnvi

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  • Total voters
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Swaraj

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Hero is becoming more and more interesting. Seems to be a journey of looser becoming winner at last.....
As usual the story has unique style of our great author Swaraj (i.e slowly opening like blossoming of the beautiful petals of a flower).....
Thanks bro,
Hero in this story is a bit typical weak student, his goodness and his resistance against evil will make him rise at the top
Keep supporting
 

Shetan

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UPDATE 1
"move move move move move" nurse ne gala faad kar chillaya, stretcher le jana wo bhi itne bheed me......

"will he survive??" doosre nurse ne stretcher ke saath daudte hue bola

Chillane wali nurse chup thi, situation haath ke bahar thi
Patient ko jald se jald lekar Jaana bhi shayad bekar hai kyunki patient ka survival percentage bilkul zero hai

"KYA HUA MERE Bete KO?? " awaz door se a rahi thi ek aurat ki jo shayad maa thi is shaks ki

"sorry madam emergency hai" bol nurse ne aage jaane se rok liya aur stretcher emergency room me le gayi
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"koi to raasta hoga, koi to??" kanishk bol utha, isme request kam thi bheek zyada tha

"sorry kanishk, isme mujhe koi. breakthrough nahi mil raha hai, mai koi help nahi kar paunga" doctor ramya boli

"lekin ramya tum meri bohut achi friend ho yaar, is situation me agar tum kuch nahi kar paayi to koi kuch nahi kar payega" kanishk bola

"dekho kanishk, hum doctors ki bhi limitations hai, aur tum yahan ke best heart speciality hospital me khade ho, I don't think ki India me isse acha hospital milega tumhe" Dr ramya fir boli

"I'm not here to discuss about hospital, I'm here to discuss about my son damn it" kanishk ke sabr ka baandh toot raha tha

"waise last aur final option hai" ramya boli

"wo kya??" kanishk ne poocha

"Dr prasad, heart specialist. Australia me bade Naam hai unke. Aisa koi case nahi hai jise unhone handle nahi kiya ho?? And luckily wo India me hai aur wo bhi isi shahar me" ramya boli

"kya wo kingshuk ko theek kar sakte hai??" kanishk ne utsukta se poocha. Ramya ke baaton se Ummed ki asha nazar aayi kanishk ko

DHADAMMMMM

"deepti??" ramya hairan thi deepti ko dekh kar, baal idhar udhar kapde jaise taise pehen kar aayi thi, college ki Jaan thi deepti, lekin industrialist kanishk se shaadi kar apna career khatam kiya tha usne

"please ramya, please bol do ki kingshuk ko kuch nahi hoga, please please please" deepti rote hue ramya ke paas gayi

"deepti please apne aap ko sambhal lo agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk apne chair se uth deepti ko sambhal kar bola

"kya bigada tha usne kanishk??? Uska ek pair bhi sahi nahi hai, partial handicapped hai kingshuk" deepti ka rona jaari tha

"kuch nahi hoga kingshuk ko kuch bhi nahi" kanishk bola

"usne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kiya kingshuk, kya bhagwan unpe barasta hai jo kamzor hai??" deepti ke is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha kanishk ke paas

"deepti, maine Dr prasad ko mail kar diya hai, abhi ke abhi pohunch rahe hai hospital me

" please deepti kisi tarah mere bete ko bacha lo, mai tumse bheek mangti hoon "deepti ramya ke pair me gir gir gayi

" sab theek ho jaega deepti, sab theek ho jaega "bol roti hui deepti ko apne seene me rakh kar uske sar par haath ferne lagi ramya
New topic intrasting...
 

king cobra

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"Dr wo nahi Maan raha" sister ne Dr mani se bola

"Arey kuch bhi karke usko bhagao" Dr mani bheek mangne lage

"Arey itna kya ho gaya Dr??" sister ne fir poocha

"theek hai bhej do" Dr mani haar gaye, sister ko history sunane se behtar us chokre ko bulana sahi laga

Dr mani shahar ke naami psychiatrist me se ek the aur Dr ramya ke suggestion par hi kingshuk wahan gaya tha

"bolo" Dr mani ne hot bag apne sar par rakha hua tha

"a Arey sir??? Aapki tabiyat to theek hai??" kingshuk ne poocha

Ullu ka pathha, gadhe ki dum. Agar senior Dr ramya ka reference nahi hota to.....

Dr mani ko gussa aane laga lekin wo dikhana nahi chahte the

"Dr wo...." kingshuk ne bolna shuru kiya

"kingshuk tum kitna dete ho fees ek visit ke liye??" Dr mani ne poocha

"1000 sir" kingshuk bola

"aur mai 1500 deta hoon doosre psychiatrist ko tumhare jaane ke baad" Dr mani bole

"lekin kyun sir??" maasomiyat se poocha kingshuk ne

"subah shaam wahi sawal karoge ki tumhara dimag tumse baat karta hai, dil ki dhadkane badhne ke baad tumhe kuch yaad nahi rehta aur teen logo ko tumne maar bhagaya" Dr mani bolte gaye

"poora sach hai sir" khush ho gaya kingshuk

"tumhara poora test kiya maine kingshuk, kuch bhi problem nahi hai tum me" Dr mani bole

"lekin.." kingshuk bolte bolte ruk gaya
Dr mani uske pair pakad kar baithe the

"please kingshuk please, itna torture bardasht nahi kar sakta, please yahan aana band karo" Dr mani bole

"Arey kya kar rahe hai doctor??" kingshuk chair par Chad gaya lekin Dr mani fir bhi uska pair pakde rahe

"nahi mai nahi chodunga, jab tak tum yahan aana band nahi kar dete mai tumhara pair nahi chodunga" Dr mani bole

"theek hai lekin pair to chodiye" kingshuk bola

Dr mani ne pair chod diya kingshuk ka, ek lambi Saans li kingshuk ne aur udaas hokar jaane laga

"are you sure ki Dr ki mera reports theek hai??" kingshuk ne poocha to Dr mani fir se pair pakadne ke liye daud aaye aur kingshuk bhaag gaya cabin se

Nahi, kingshuk chup to Filhal nahi baith sakta use police ko batana hi hoga ki galti uski thi aur usne teen logo ko mara tha,

POLICE STATION NOIDA

"ye sab kya hai inspector santosh??? Teen logo ko kisi ne aise maara ki hospitalized karna pada" ACP jayant ne poocha

"Kamaal hai sir?? Jab wo teeno ne pareshan kar rakha tha poore police department ko tab to kisi ne unki khair nahi poochi, aur aaj jab unka kisi ne band baja diya tab sabko lag rahi hai" inspector santosh haste hue bola

"please santosh, kanoon ka kaam agar har koi karne lage to go gaya, kanoon bhi koi cheez hai, court hai, hearing hai, justice hai" jayant bola

"sir aapko sab pata hai, kitne court kitne justice aur kitne hearing me criminals ko saza mili??khair mai dekh lunga aage, jai hind" salute karke chala gaya inspector santosh lekin jayant ko uski baat chalni kar gayi

Ips karke kya kar liya jayant ne?? Uska Sapna tha ki criminals ko jail bhijwayega aur shahar ko crime free karega.
Isliye ias na karke Ips liya usne, lekin jabse join kiya tha usne tab se usne bas yahi dekha ki criminals kaise kanoon se khilwad karte hai kuch honest log hai department me jaise santosh jo apne vardi ke mar tak sakta hai aur hai kuch rishwat khor jo kanoon ko itna neeche girate hai ki....
Lekin aajtak jin ladko ko koi thappad tak nahi maar paaya un ladko ko koun itni be rehmi se maar sakta hai???

GYM
"MUJHE AUR STRONG BANNA HAI" kingshuk bola trainer ko
Aur trainer dekhta raha

"itna stress bhara exercise kyun??" trainer ne poocha

Kyunki un sab se nipatne ke liye kaafi nahi hai,dhadakte hue dil ke saath kingshuk ne socha

"DOST IN SABKE BINA TUM DUNIYA SE NAHI JEET PAOGE" fir se wahi awaz kingshuk ne ab sochna band kar diya, ye baat sach hai ki heart transplant ke baad uska pair theek ho gya aur wo strong ho gaya
Lekin ye karna zaroori hai kya???

"lekin s studies??" kingshuk ne shayad pehli baar baat kiya us awaz se

"WO BHI SAHI HO JAYEGA, BAS TUM AAGE CHALTE JAO" awaz boli

"ready??" trainer ne poocha aur kingshuk ne Haan me sar hilaya

Aur kamar tod session hone laga

TADDD

"wah finally Vaar kar hi liya" John boxing karte hue bola

"aaj without head gear ke karna hai" bol kingshuk ne headgear utaar diya

DHAMMMM

TADDDDDDD

THAKKKKKKK

Ek ghante baad

"wah?? Teen Vaar kar diye aaj" John bol kar chala gaya

"aah..." kingshuk bola, poora chehra sooj gaya tha

"Baap re head gear kyun utara" trainer ne poocha

Kingshuk kya Bolta, us kambakht Awaaz ne kaha tha aisa karne ko??

Lekin maa se kya kahega wo???
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TOKYO
"today yank kon is no more, please pay your respect"

Baarish tez ho rahi thi aur sab kaale coat pehen kar khade ho gaye the

"russia, South America, Mexico, Africa, India, Middle East...." bole ja raha tha shaks ki use rok diya ek buddhe ne jo wheelchair par tha

"i know you have killed him Charles, you want to take up his position and now you are doing bad things drugs, porn, animal poaching and child abuse"

CHATAKKKKK

sabko chaukante hue ek thappad laga us buddhe ko aur maarne wala tha...

"Charles hate too much blabbering" Charles bola

"after yank kon only I am eligible to take the post of global gangster" Charles bola aur Saare black coat waale jhuk gaye

"ha ha ha ha ha ha, I'm the king" Charles bola aur pagalon ki tarah hasne laga
ye apna hero pareshan hai uske andar ek aatma ghus gayi hai super power wali bahut maja aane wala hai bas writer bhai roj update do hame please sir
 

Rubyr

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Bahut hi jabardast update aur lagta hai kingshuk apne andar ke insaan ke saath jujh raha hai magar thoda bahut uss andar wale bande ke saath adjust karna bhi sikh raha hai aur akhri mein bhi pata chal gaya ki woh andar wala banda koi aira gaira nahi global gangster tha toh ummid hai ki international level action aage dekhne ko milega.
 
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