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Story ki female lead kise hona chahiye???

  • Shanaya

    Votes: 23 76.7%
  • Ishita

    Votes: 11 36.7%
  • Jahnvi

    Votes: 7 23.3%

  • Total voters
    30

Swaraj

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जब कोई कहानी महीनेभर - सालभर तक रुकने के बाद फिर से शुरू होता है तो रीडर्स के लिए उस कहानी के पात्रों का नाम या घटनाक्रमों को याद रखना थोड़ा-बहुत मुश्किल होता ही है ।
यहां भी लगभग कुछ कुछ ऐसा ही हाल है लेकिन कोई बात नही , कुछेक अपडेट के बाद सबकुछ याद आ ही जाना है ।

किंगशुक ने एक गद्दार - उदय भास्कर - को आखिरकार सलटा ही दिया । वैसे सच तो यह है कि उदय भास्कर किंगशुक से ज्यादा यांग कोन का कसूरवार था ।
इस अपडेट का सबसे फनी लम्हा था फाइटिंग के दौरान डेनियल का शनाया को भाभी कहना और रोहित का इशिका को भाभी कहना । ठीक ही तो कहा दोनो ने । हमे जरा भी आपत्ति नही है अगर किंगशुक इन दोनो हसीनाओं से विवाह करता है । आखिर किंगशुक स्वयं दोहरी जिंदगी जी रहा है । किंगशुक के अंदर का दिल- जो यांक कोन के शरीर से ट्रांसप्लांट किया गया था - ही तो उसे मार्गदर्शन कर रहा है । :D

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट स्वराज भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।
Thanks bro,
Shanaya yank kon ke close thi isliye uski maturity level kaafi high hai Janki shanaya abhi bhi kingshuk ki tarah innocent hai.rohit ishika ki tarafdari kar raha tha kyunki do o ek hi school aur ek hi class me the jabki dan ne shanaya ko bohut baar kingshuk se baat karte hue paaya tha,dekhte hai aakhir me kya hota hai
Saath rahiye
 

Swaraj

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शनाया बच गई आखिर, और यंग कोन का रूप भी सामने आ गया।

इधर इशिका और शनाया को लेकर पूरी मंडली में कन्फ्यूजन है, कि उनकी भाभी आखिर है कौन दोनो के में से।

वेलकम बैक स्वराज भाई। लेकिन इतना लेट लेट करोगे तो कहानी याद नही रहेगी
Thanks bro
Jaisa maine kaha tha ye story kisi aur writer se match kar rahi thi isliye rokna pada mujhe,lekin ab kuch changes kar story ko update kar raha hoon,
Saath rahiye
 

Naik

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Bike apne speed ke saath ek sunsaan building ki aur ja rahi thi aur usne baitha shaks ka dil dhadakte ja raha tha

“Shanaya ko kuch hoga to nahi??”awaz ne poocha

“Kuch nahi “bol bike rok aage badhne laga kingshuk

“A Gaya maaro Saale ko”ye awaz ek aadmi ki aayi Jo bohut se logo ke saath khada ho gaya

kingshuk ke apni muthhi bheench li aur

THAK DHADD TADAAK

kingshuk vaar par vaar kar raha tha lekin log kuch zyada hi the aur us par haavi ho rahe thi tabhi Dan,yuvraj,rohit,waseem aur vidyut a gaye the bikes lekar

“Kingshuk tu ja hum in chutiyo ko sambhal lenge “yuvraj bola aur rohit ne apna hockey stick nikala aur sab toot pade

Ek bhishan yudhh ho raha tha lekin koi police nahi thi na koi rokne wala

“Kidhar hai shanaya bhabhi bol??”dan ne poocha ek gunde ko maarte hue

“Bhabhi to ishika hai”rohit bola usi gunde ko laat maarkar

“Are nahi shanaya hai kingshuk ki”Dan ne samjhaya

“Abey nahi ishika hai”rohit bola

“Are bas karo dono,uday bhai wahan hai terrace me”gunda pit kar bolne laga

“KINGSHUK UDAY TERRACE ME HAI”chilla kar dan bola

Kingshuk seediyon se hota hua seedha terrace me Gaya Jahan shanaya dikha jo chair se bandhi hui mili use

“Kingshuk ??”shanaya boli Jo had se zyada kamzor lag rahi thi

“Welcome kingshuk”Uday bola

Kingshuk ne dekha uday saamne khada tha

“Shanaya ko jaane se uday “kingshuk bas itna bola

“Fight me hara de aur lekar ka”Uday bola

SWOOOOOSH

Kick se hat Gaya uday aur

DHAMMMMMMMM

Ek punch ne kingshuk ko door fenk diya

“Get up and fight”uday bola

Kingshuk utha aur

THADDDDDDD

Ek punch sar par aur isse pehle wo sambhalta

DHAMMMMMMMMMM

Ek punch pet me aur kingshuk wahi let gaya

“Uday jaane de kingshuk ko,mujhe maar de lekin use jaane de”kamzor ho chuki shanaya boli

Uday Muda aur apna ek haath shanaya ke gardan par rakh diya

“Maar de mujhe aur mujhe uske paas pohuncha de”bol muskurate hue shanaya ne apni aankhen band kar di

“Wahi karunga saali ,pehle tu jaaegi fir ye ladka”bol apne haath ki pakad mazboot kar diya uday ne

Tabhi uske haath par kisi ne haath rakha us wo pakad itni mazboot thi ki uday ki pakad dheeli ho gayi

“Uday bhaskar tujhe maine hi banaya tha na??aaj tujhe mai hi mitaunga “bol kingshuk ne apni muthhi kasi aur

DHAMMMMMMMM

Bijli ke speed me punch maara aur door ja Gira

Uth khada hua uday aur saamne ladkhadate hue kingshuk ko maarne ke liye muda hi tha ki

THADDDD KHATTTTTT

vaar me itni foorti thi itni jaan thi ki uday pit raha tha

Saamne ek lohe ka sariya utha liya aur

THANNNNNNNNNN

Uday ka haath toot chuka tha

“Peeth ka chura bhoola nahi hoon “kingshuk bol

“Koun hai tui?”badi badi aankhon se dekhte hue Uday ne poocha

“Yank kon,Tera baap “bol kingshuk ne fir sariya hawa me lahraya aur

THANNNNNNNNN

Is baar doosra haath

“Jhoot jhoot tu tu kingshuk hai”uday apne aap ko peeche karte hue bola

“Kingshuk ya yank kon mai kuch bhi ho sakta hoon koi bhi ho sakta hoon “kingshuk bola lohe ka sariya ko lekar peeche sarakte hue uday ke paas jaakar

“Mujhe maarne ke baad tu bhi nahi bachega Saale”uday bola

“Dekhenge “bol hawa me lehraya sariya ko aur uday ne aankhen band kar di

KHACHHHHHH

Kingshuk bhi iske baad wahi dhapp se let Gaya aur behosh ho gaya
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“congratulations dost ek ka safaya ho gaya “

“HAAAAAH”uth gaya kingshuk apne aap ko hospital ke bed me paaya aur khushi,deepti aur kingshuk use ghere hue the

“Ab kaise ho kingshuk sahab???”inspector santosh muskurate hue daalhil hua

Kingshuk chup raha

“Sir please meta bhai pehle hi trauma me hai use aur pareshan mat kijiye “khushi boli

“Mai sirf duty kar raha hoon madam,doctors ne laga hai behoshi se uthne ke baas I can interrogate “santosh bola to chup ho gayi

“Chal khushi “bol deepti khushi aur kanishk bahar chale gaye

“Hmm kafi chot lagi hai tumhe,kamal hai Har waqt sahi waqt par theek ho jaate ho “Santosh bola

“Kya kare sir aap log a jaate hai na bachane ke liye “kingshuk muskurate hue bola

Kuch der ke liye statue ban gaya santosh lekin fir sambhal kar poochtaach karne laga

“ matlab tüm us building ke saamne bike se gire the aur itni chot aayi “santosh bola

“Hmmm”kingshuk bola

“Kamal hai fir bhi itni chot aayi”santosh bola

“Pata hota itni poochtaach hogi to cctv lagwa seta aapke liye”kingshuk bola

“You….”santosh ke sabr ka imtihan ho raha tha .lekin isse aage kuch nahi kar şakta tha wo jaate jaate muda wo

“Waise shanaya next waale kamre me hai,abhi better hai”bol inspector chala gaya

“Ab kaise ho??”ishika flowers ke saath aayi thi

“Oh ishika pehle se kaafi better hoon”kingshuk bola

“Kya zaroorat thi hero banne ki?”ishika ne poocha

“Mere liye fikr karne ke liye thanks ishika lekin mai……”

“F fikr k koun fikr kar raha tha,m mai bas ek vice captain ke haisiyat se tumhe dekhne aayi thi”bol gusse se bahar chali gayi ishika

Kingshuk mushkil se uth paaya apne bed se aur seedha bagal wale kamre me jaane laga.

Tabhi uske gale ke paas ek surgery knife mehsoos hua use

“Koun ho tum?”shanaya ne poocha kingshuk ko
Bahot badhiya shaandar update bhai
Tow kingshuk ne bacha lia shanaya ko lekin uday ka kia huwa sirf behosh hi huwa tha yaa fir mar gaya ya maar dia kingshuk
Baherhal ab Ishika ko kia hoga Jo surgery knife kingshuk ki gardan per rakh dia aise bhi tow pooch sakti thi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shaandar lajawab update bhai
 
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