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Apne abhi Tak padha ki sare bacho ka shakti parikshan hota hai koi daksh rank ke low level par to koi daksh rank ke medium level par hota hai yaha tak ki shreya bhi daksh rank ke advance level par hoti hai.
Rohan ka rank jas ka tas hi rahta hai yani wo sunya rank ke advance level par hi hota hai jisse wo udas hokar pahadi se niche chhalang laga deta hai aisa manna th ki jo bhi us pahadi se chhalang lagata hai ya to wo mar jata hai aur agar wo jinda bachta hai to bahut takatwar yodha ban ka wapas lautta hai.
Idhar rohan ko waha se jane ke bad Shreya bhi ghar aa jati hai usko khojte huye lekin Rohan Shreya ko ghar par nhi milta hai jisse ghar wale sare pareshan ho jate hai aur rohan ko khojne lagte hai. Idhar pahadi se girne ke bad Rohan ko ek roshani bachati hai aur rohan apna rank par kar ke daksh rank ke medium level par aa jata hai.

Aab aage

(Ab yaha se Rohan ke Jagah mai likhunga)

Mujhe behosh huye yaha 2 din ho gaya tha lekin mujhe abhi tak hosh nhi aaya tha.
Mujhe behoshi ke hi halat me ek awaj sunayi deta hai.

- Kab tak aise behosh rahne ka irada hai ab uth bhi jao agar tum itne me hi har man loge to un buraiyo se kaise ladoge jinse ladne ke liye tumhara janm huya hai.
Mere kan me jab wo awaj padta hai to .

mai had badat huye behoshi ke halat se jag jata hu aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu.
Mai jab aas pass dekhta hu to dekhte hi rah jata hu kyuki mere charo taraf bahut hi sundar drisya tha waha charo taraf aneko prakar ke ped paudhe aur jadi butiya dikhayi deta hai waha par pahad se pani kisi jharne ki tarah niche gir raha tha Jo ek talab ke jaisa bana raha tha.
Waha ke hawao me bhi sudh aur shaktishali ghani spritual energy bahut hi jyada matra me bah raha tha.
Kanchanpur me jo shaktiya 1 sal me hasil hota wo yaha ke spritual shaktiyo ke karan 3 ya 4 mahine me hi hasil ho jata.

Mai- (darte huye) ye ye ye mai kaha aa gaya mai to us pahadi se niche kuda tha kahi mai mar to nhi Gaya.
Nhi nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mai mar nhi sakta mujhe abhi bahut kuchh hasil karna tha mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar yodha banna hai mai aise kaise mar sakta hu..

Mai abhi apne me hi bole jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe fir awaj sunayi deti hai.

Awaj- Nhi abhi tum mare nhi ho tum abhi bhi jinda hi ho.
Mai- kkkk kon hai kon bal raha hai samne aa kar bat karo aise mujhe darao nhi samjhe

Awaj- Hahahah tum itna me hi dar gaye agar chhoti chhoti bato me hi darte rahe to ek takatwar yodha kaise banoge.
Aur waise bhi tum mujhe nhi jante lekin mai tumhe achhe se janta hu tumhe mujhse darne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Mai- Dddd Dekho mujhe Aisa majak pasand nhi hai tum jo koi bhi ho samne aa jao.

Awaj- Mai koi majak nhi kar rha hu thik hai agar tum mujhe dekhna hi chahte ho to ye lo.

Itna bol kar awaj chup ho gaya aur waha par ek roshani ka gola prakat huya Jise dekh kar mai aur dar gaya.

Mai- mmm maine tumko samne aane ko bola aur tum mere samne ye roshani kyu le aaye.

Awaj- Ye roshani hi mai hu aur mera yahi rup hai mai tridevo ke shakti dwara janma hu mai nirankar hu Mera koi aakar nhi mai is dharti par sirf aur sirf tumhari madad karne ke liya aaya hu isliye tum mujhse daro nhi.

Mai- achha to tum meri madad karne ke liye aaye ho lekin mai tumhara biswas kaise karu.

Roshani- Tum khud socho ki agar mujhe tumhe koi nuksan hi pahuchana hota to mai tumhe bachata hi kyu tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itne uche pahad se gir kar apne aap bach gaye.

Uski bat sun kar mai sochne lagta hu ki ye bat to sahi hi bol raha hai agar mai us pahadi se itna niche girta to Mera chatni ban jata.
Ab mujhe us Roshani par Biswas hone laga tha isliye mai usse bola.

Mai- Woh.. to tumne mujhe bachaya tha sukriya mujhe bachane ke liye.

Roshani- Mai tumhe kaise nhi bachata akhir mera janm tumhara madad karne ke liye hi to huya hai.

Mai- Lekin mere hi madad karne ke liye kyu mai koi khash to hu nhi na hi mere pass jyada shaktiya hai mai to 4 salo ek hi level par atka huya hu.

Roshani- Tum kya ho ye tum nhi jante isliye tum aisi bate kar rahe ho
Jante hi tumhara janm is duniya me kisi mahatvapurn karya karne ke liye huya hai aur isiliye mujhe tumhari madad ke liye bheja gaya hai

Mai- kya mai ye jan sakta hu ki aisa kon sa mahatvapurn karya hai jiske liye mera janm huya.

Roshani- Nhi abhi bas tumko itna janna jaruri hai ki tumhe bahut mehnat karni hai kyuki jo karya tumhe karna uske liye tumhe bahut Takatwar banne ke jarurat hai samjhe.

Mai- Achha wo sab to thik hai lekin mai tumhe kis name se bulai aur waise kya tum hamesha hi aise roshani hi ban kar rahoge ya tumhara koi rup bhi hai.

Roshani- Nhi Mera koi rup to nhi hai lekin mai jaisa chahu waisa rup bana sakta hu.
Aur Mera koi name nhi hai tumhi mujhe koi name dedo.

Mai- To Thik hai tum pahle apna rup kisi insan ki tarah bana lo.
Aur tumhare Roshani me Surya ke bhati tez hai isliye mai tumhe surya kah kar bulaunga.

Fir Roshani ne ek Insan ka rup taiyar kiya jo kuchh had tak mere rup se milta julta tha aur uski umra bhi mere karib hi lag raha tha.

Surya- Achha hai mujhe ye name pasand aaya waise ab tumhe thoda apne shaktiyo ko dekh lena chahiye tum jiske liye is pahadi se kude the wo safal raha.

Surya muskurate huye mujhse bola fir mai Surya ke bat sun kar apne shaktiyo ko dekhta hu aur dekhte hi chauk jata hu fir thodi der bad khushi se nachne lagta hu.

Mai- Are wah mai to safal raha mai ab daksh rank me pahuch gaya hurrrre... Ab mujhe koi zero bol ke dikhaye ab mai bhi kanchanpur wale ko dikha dunga ki ye Rohan bhi kisi se kam nhi hai.

Mujhe itna khush dekh kar surya apna sar hilane laga aur bola.

Surya- Tumhe itna khush hone ki jarurat nhi hai kyuki tumhe agar ABISIYA PLANET ka sabse Takatwar yodha banna hai to tumhe SUPREME Yodha banna hoga.

Mai- Ye supreme yodha kya hota hai Maine aaj tak to Aisa name kabhi nhi suna.

Surya- Kya tumne kabhi supreme level ke bare suna hai.
Mai- Nhi mai nhi janta ki ye supreme level kya hai.
Surya- Thik hai mai batata hu supreme level ke bare me.
Ye to sare log jante hai ki is abisiya planet me kul 9 rank hai

Sunya rank
Daksh rank
Srijankar rank
Samrat Rank
Heaven Rank
Nirwan rank
Sant rank
Demi God Rank
God Rank

Aur in Sare 9 ranko me 3 level hota hai Low level Medium level aur Advance level.

Lekin ye koi nhi janta ki jab koi Yodha sunya Rank par kar ke Daksh rank me pahuchta hai to uske liye ek aur level ka rasta khul jata hai jo hai supreme level.

Lekin kisi ko ye malum nhi hai ki supreme level bhi hota hai is liye koi bhi isko practice nhi karta aur jo bhi isko practice kar ke supreme level hasil kar leta hai usko sidha swarg se yodha hone ka pahchan milta hai.

Mai- Woh to Aisa hai ab mai samjha ki supreme level kya hota hai.
Lekin iska practice kaise hota hai

Surya- Jab tum daksh rank ke advance level ke pick par pahuch jaoge tab mai tumhe bataunga.
Ab ye tumpe rahega ki tum supreme level hasil kar pate ho ya nhi kyuki Mera Kam sirf tumko rasta dikhana hai aur uspe chalna hai ya na chalna tum par depend karta hai.

Mai- Tum bus mujhe rasta batao mujhe us raste par chalne me chahe jitna bhi kathin parishram karna pade mai karunga aur supreme yodha ban kar dikhaunga.

Surya- Thik hai lekin ek bat yad rakhna agar tum ek bar is raste par nikal gaye to fir wapas nhi mid sakte ho.
Agar tum daksh rank me supreme level hasil kar liya to tumhe har rank me supreme level hasil karna hoga nhi to tumhara Foundation kharab ho jayega aur agar tumhara foundation kharab huya to tum ek aam adami bankar rah jaoge.
Supreme level hasil karna itna bhi asan nhi hai uske liye tumhe bahut dard se gujarna padega to tum taiyar ho supreme yodha banane ke liye.

Mai- Ha mai taiyar hu chahe mujhe jitna bhi dard sahna pade mai supreme yodha ban kar hi rahunga.

Surya- Mujhe tumse yahi umid thi To thik hai fir yaha se nikalne ka rasta dhundho ab hamko wapas Jana chahiye.
Mai Roshani ban kar tumhare sharir me rahunga aur tumhe jab bhi mujhse bate karna ho apne man me bolna mai sun lunga.

Mai- Thik hai

Itna bol kar mai waha se jane laga surya fir se ek Roshani ban kar mere andar sama gaya.

Mai waha charo taraf ghum ghum kar Rasta dhundhne laga lekin mujhe waha se upar Jane ka koi rasta mil hi nhi Raha tha.

Abhi mai waha se kuchh dur hi aaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek gufa dikhayi diya mai us gufa ko dekh kar uske taraf badh gaya.

Thodi der bad mai us gufa ke andar tha us gufa ke andar diwaro par roshani nikalane wala Cristal laga huya tha jisse thoda thoda roshani aa raha tha.

Mai us gufa me andar ki taraf badhe Jaa raha tha aage badhte badhte mai us gufa ke antim chhor par pahuch gaya waha ek kamra jaisa bana huya tha.

Mai us kamre numa gufa me charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuchh najar aaya.

Mai jab waha Jake dekha to wo kisi adami ki kankal thi u
s kankal ke hath me ek talwar thi jisse bahut hi khatarnak energy nikal raha tha.
Jise dekh mai bahut dar gaya
Mujhe darte dekh kar surya bola.

Surya- Kya yar tum bat bat par darte rahte ho ye to sirf ek mare huye adami ka kankal hai.

Mai- Mai dara nhi hu samjha.

Surya- Ha wo to dikh hi Raha hai.

Surya ke bato ko ignore karte huye usse bola

Mai- ye kankal kiska ho sakta hai aur iske hath me jo talwar hai usse to bahut hi shaktishali aur khatarnak energy nikal raha hai.

Surya mere andar se bahar nikal kar us lash ko dekhne laga fir thodi der dekhne ke bad bola.

Surya- Ye lash to kisi samrat rank ke yodha ki hai aur ye talwar bhi rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar hai.
Wah Rohan tere kismat ko bhi kya kahna tumhe to baithe bithaye hi ek samrat rank ke yodha ke lash aur ek rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar bhi mil gaya.

Tum is lash ki andruni aur spritual shaktiyon ko absorb karke aur bhi shaktishali ban sakte ho aur jab us hathiyar ko tum hasil kar loge to apne se Takatwar yodha se bhi lad sakte ho.

Mai Surya ke bat sun kar bahut khush huya aur us hathiyar ko lene ke liye us lash ke pass gaya jaise hi mai us hathiyar ko pakda mujhe ek jhatka laga aur mai udte huye piche ja kar gira.

Mujhe niche girte hi mere muh se ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi jise sun kar surya mujhpe hasne laga.
 
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Apne abhi Tak padha ki sare bacho ka shakti parikshan hota hai koi daksh rank ke low level par to koi daksh rank ke medium level par hota hai yaha tak ki shreya bhi daksh rank ke advance level par hoti hai.
Rohan ka rank jas ka tas hi rahta hai yani wo sunya rank ke advance level par hi hota hai jisse wo udas hokar pahadi se niche chhalang laga deta hai aisa manna th ki jo bhi us pahadi se chhalang lagata hai ya to wo mar jata hai aur agar wo jinda bachta hai to bahut takatwar yodha ban ka wapas lautta hai.
Idhar rohan ko waha se jane ke bad Shreya bhi ghar aa jati hai usko khojte huye lekin Rohan Shreya ko ghar par nhi milta hai jisse ghar wale sare pareshan ho jate hai aur rohan ko khojne lagte hai. Idhar pahadi se girne ke bad Rohan ko ek roshani bachati hai aur rohan apna rank par kar ke daksh rank ke medium level par aa jata hai.

Aab aage

(Ab yaha se Rohan ke Jagah mai likhunga)

Mujhe behosh huye yaha 2 din ho gaya tha lekin mujhe abhi tak hosh nhi aaya tha.
Mujhe behoshi ke hi halat me ek awaj sunayi deta hai.

- Kab tak aise behosh rahne ka irada hai ab uth bhi jao agar tum itne me hi har man loge to un buraiyo se kaise ladoge jinse ladne ke liye tumhara janm huya hai.
Mere kan me jab wo awaj padta hai to .

mai had badat huye behoshi ke halat se jag jata hu aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu.
Mai jab aas pass dekhta hu to dekhte hi rah jata hu kyuki mere charo taraf bahut hi sundar drisya tha waha charo taraf aneko prakar ke ped paudhe aur jadi butiya dikhayi deta hai waha par pahad se pani kisi jharne ki tarah niche gir raha tha Jo ek talab ke jaisa bana raha tha.
Waha ke hawao me bhi sudh aur shaktishali ghani spritual energy bahut hi jyada matra me bah raha tha.
Kanchanpur me jo shaktiya 1 sal me hasil hota wo yaha ke spritual shaktiyo ke karan 3 ya 4 mahine me hi hasil ho jata.

Mai- (darte huye) ye ye ye mai kaha aa gaya mai to us pahadi se niche kuda tha kahi mai mar to nhi Gaya.
Nhi nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mai mar nhi sakta mujhe abhi bahut kuchh hasil karna tha mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar yodha banna hai mai aise kaise mar sakta hu..

Mai abhi apne me hi bole jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe fir awaj sunayi deti hai.

Awaj- Nhi abhi tum mare nhi ho tum abhi bhi jinda hi ho.
Mai- kkkk kon hai kon bal raha hai samne aa kar bat karo aise mujhe darao nhi samjhe

Awaj- Hahahah tum itna me hi dar gaye agar chhoti chhoti bato me hi darte rahe to ek takatwar yodha kaise banoge.
Aur waise bhi tum mujhe nhi jante lekin mai tumhe achhe se janta hu tumhe mujhse darne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Mai- Dddd Dekho mujhe Aisa majak pasand nhi hai tum jo koi bhi ho samne aa jao.

Awaj- Mai koi majak nhi kar rha hu thik hai agar tum mujhe dekhna hi chahte ho to ye lo.

Itna bol kar awaj chup ho gaya aur waha par ek roshani ka gola prakat huya Jise dekh kar mai aur dar gaya.

Mai- mmm maine tumko samne aane ko bola aur tum mere samne ye roshani kyu le aaye.

Awaj- Ye roshani hi mai hu aur mera yahi rup hai mai tridevo ke shakti dwara janma hu mai nirankar hu Mera koi aakar nhi mai is dharti par sirf aur sirf tumhari madad karne ke liya aaya hu isliye tum mujhse daro nhi.

Mai- achha to tum meri madad karne ke liye aaye ho lekin mai tumhara biswas kaise karu.

Roshani- Tum khud socho ki agar mujhe tumhe koi nuksan hi pahuchana hota to mai tumhe bachata hi kyu tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itne uche pahad se gir kar apne aap bach gaye.

Uski bat sun kar mai sochne lagta hu ki ye bat to sahi hi bol raha hai agar mai us pahadi se itna niche girta to Mera chatni ban jata.
Ab mujhe us Roshani par Biswas hone laga tha isliye mai usse bola.

Mai- Woh.. to tumne mujhe bachaya tha sukriya mujhe bachane ke liye.

Roshani- Mai tumhe kaise nhi bachata akhir mera janm tumhara madad karne ke liye hi to huya hai.

Mai- Lekin mere hi madad karne ke liye kyu mai koi khash to hu nhi na hi mere pass jyada shaktiya hai mai to 4 salo ek hi level par atka huya hu.

Roshani- Tum kya ho ye tum nhi jante isliye tum aisi bate kar rahe ho
Jante hi tumhara janm is duniya me kisi mahatvapurn karya karne ke liye huya hai aur isiliye mujhe tumhari madad ke liye bheja gaya hai

Mai- kya mai ye jan sakta hu ki aisa kon sa mahatvapurn karya hai jiske liye mera janm huya.

Roshani- Nhi abhi bas tumko itna janna jaruri hai ki tumhe bahut mehnat karni hai kyuki jo karya tumhe karna uske liye tumhe bahut Takatwar banne ke jarurat hai samjhe.

Mai- Achha wo sab to thik hai lekin mai tumhe kis name se bulai aur waise kya tum hamesha hi aise roshani hi ban kar rahoge ya tumhara koi rup bhi hai.

Roshani- Nhi Mera koi rup to nhi hai lekin mai jaisa chahu waisa rup bana sakta hu.
Aur Mera koi name nhi hai tumhi mujhe koi name dedo.

Mai- To Thik hai tum pahle apna rup kisi insan ki tarah bana lo.
Aur tumhare Roshani me Surya ke bhati tez hai isliye mai tumhe surya kah kar bulaunga.

Fir Roshani ne ek Insan ka rup taiyar kiya jo kuchh had tak mere rup se milta julta tha aur uski umra bhi mere karib hi lag raha tha.

Surya- Achha hai mujhe ye name pasand aaya waise ab tumhe thoda apne shaktiyo ko dekh lena chahiye tum jiske liye is pahadi se kude the wo safal raha.

Surya muskurate huye mujhse bola fir mai Surya ke bat sun kar apne shaktiyo ko dekhta hu aur dekhte hi chauk jata hu fir thodi der bad khushi se nachne lagta hu.

Mai- Are wah mai to safal raha mai ab daksh rank me pahuch gaya hurrrre... Ab mujhe koi zero bol ke dikhaye ab mai bhi kanchanpur wale ko dikha dunga ki ye Rohan bhi kisi se kam nhi hai.

Mujhe itna khush dekh kar surya apna sar hilane laga aur bola.

Surya- Tumhe itna khush hone ki jarurat nhi hai kyuki tumhe agar ABISIYA PLANET ka sabse Takatwar yodha banna hai to tumhe SUPREME Yodha banna hoga.

Mai- Ye supreme yodha kya hota hai Maine aaj tak to Aisa name kabhi nhi suna.

Surya- Kya tumne kabhi supreme level ke bare suna hai.
Mai- Nhi mai nhi janta ki ye supreme level kya hai.
Surya- Thik hai mai batata hu supreme level ke bare me.
Ye to sare log jante hai ki is abisiya planet me kul 9 rank hai

Sunya rank
Daksh rank
Srijankar rank
Samrat Rank
Heaven Rank
Nirwan rank
Sant rank
Demi God Rank
God Rank

Aur in Sare 9 ranko me 3 level hota hai Low level Medium level aur Advance level.

Lekin ye koi nhi janta ki jab koi Yodha sunya Rank par kar ke Daksh rank me pahuchta hai to uske liye ek aur level ka rasta khul jata hai jo hai supreme level.

Lekin kisi ko ye malum nhi hai ki supreme level bhi hota hai is liye koi bhi isko practice nhi karta aur jo bhi isko practice kar ke supreme level hasil kar leta hai usko sidha swarg se yodha hone ka pahchan milta hai.

Mai- Woh to Aisa hai ab mai samjha ki supreme level kya hota hai.
Lekin iska practice kaise hota hai

Surya- Jab tum daksh rank ke advance level ke pick par pahuch jaoge tab mai tumhe bataunga.
Ab ye tumpe rahega ki tum supreme level hasil kar pate ho ya nhi kyuki Mera Kam sirf tumko rasta dikhana hai aur uspe chalna hai ya na chalna tum par depend karta hai.

Mai- Tum bus mujhe rasta batao mujhe us raste par chalne me chahe jitna bhi kathin parishram karna pade mai karunga aur supreme yodha ban kar dikhaunga.

Surya- Thik hai lekin ek bat yad rakhna agar tum ek bar is raste par nikal gaye to fir wapas nhi mid sakte ho.
Agar tum daksh rank me supreme level hasil kar liya to tumhe har rank me supreme level hasil karna hoga nhi to tumhara Foundation kharab ho jayega aur agar tumhara foundation kharab huya to tum ek aam adami bankar rah jaoge.
Supreme level hasil karna itna bhi asan nhi hai uske liye tumhe bahut dard se gujarna padega to tum taiyar ho supreme yodha banane ke liye.

Mai- Ha mai taiyar hu chahe mujhe jitna bhi dard sahna pade mai supreme yodha ban kar hi rahunga.

Surya- Mujhe tumse yahi umid thi To thik hai fir yaha se nikalne ka rasta dhundho ab hamko wapas Jana chahiye.
Mai Roshani ban kar tumhare sharir me rahunga aur tumhe jab bhi mujhse bate karna ho apne man me bolna mai sun lunga.

Mai- Thik hai

Itna bol kar mai waha se jane laga surya fir se ek Roshani ban kar mere andar sama gaya.

Mai waha charo taraf ghum ghum kar Rasta dhundhne laga lekin mujhe waha se upar Jane ka koi rasta mil hi nhi Raha tha.

Abhi mai waha se kuchh dur hi aaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek gufa dikhayi diya mai us gufa ko dekh kar uske taraf badh gaya.

Thodi der bad mai us gufa ke andar tha us gufa ke andar diwaro par roshani nikalane wala Cristal laga huya tha jisse thoda thoda roshani aa raha tha.

Mai us gufa me andar ki taraf badhe Jaa raha tha aage badhte badhte mai us gufa ke antim chhor par pahuch gaya waha ek kamra jaisa bana huya tha.

Mai us kamre numa gufa me charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuchh najar aaya.

Mai jab waha Jake dekha to wo kisi adami ki kankal thi u
s kankal ke hath me ek talwar thi jisse bahut hi khatarnak energy nikal raha tha.
Jise dekh mai bahut dar gaya
Mujhe darte dekh kar surya bola.

Surya- Kya yar tum bat bat par darte rahte ho ye to sirf ek mare huye adami ka kankal hai.

Mai- Mai dara nhi hu samjha.

Surya- Ha wo to dikh hi Raha hai.

Surya ke bato ko ignore karte huye usse bola

Mai- ye kankal kiska ho sakta hai aur iske hath me jo talwar hai usse to bahut hi shaktishali aur khatarnak energy nikal raha hai.

Surya mere andar se bahar nikal kar us lash ko dekhne laga fir thodi der dekhne ke bad bola.

Surya- Ye lash to kisi samrat rank ke yodha ki hai aur ye talwar bhi rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar hai.
Wah Rohan tere kismat ko bhi kya kahna tumhe to baithe bithaye hi ek samrat rank ke yodha ke lash aur ek rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar bhi mil gaya.

Tum is lash ki andruni aur spritual shaktiyon ko absorb karke aur bhi shaktishali ban sakte ho aur jab us hathiyar ko tum hasil kar loge to apne se Takatwar yodha se bhi lad sakte ho.

Mai Surya ke bat sun kar bahut khush huya aur us hathiyar ko lene ke liye us lash ke pass gaya jaise hi mai us hathiyar ko pakda mujhe ek jhatka laga aur mai udte huye piche ja kar gira.

Mujhe niche girte hi mere muh se ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi jise sun kar surya mujhpe hasne laga.
Yeh achcha huwa Rohan ki madad kerne ab surya uske rahega
Dekhte h yeh Samrat ki talwar ko kaise rohan sambhal pata h
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Apne abhi Tak padha ki sare bacho ka shakti parikshan hota hai koi daksh rank ke low level par to koi daksh rank ke medium level par hota hai yaha tak ki shreya bhi daksh rank ke advance level par hoti hai.
Rohan ka rank jas ka tas hi rahta hai yani wo sunya rank ke advance level par hi hota hai jisse wo udas hokar pahadi se niche chhalang laga deta hai aisa manna th ki jo bhi us pahadi se chhalang lagata hai ya to wo mar jata hai aur agar wo jinda bachta hai to bahut takatwar yodha ban ka wapas lautta hai.
Idhar rohan ko waha se jane ke bad Shreya bhi ghar aa jati hai usko khojte huye lekin Rohan Shreya ko ghar par nhi milta hai jisse ghar wale sare pareshan ho jate hai aur rohan ko khojne lagte hai. Idhar pahadi se girne ke bad Rohan ko ek roshani bachati hai aur rohan apna rank par kar ke daksh rank ke medium level par aa jata hai.

Aab aage

(Ab yaha se Rohan ke Jagah mai likhunga)

Mujhe behosh huye yaha 2 din ho gaya tha lekin mujhe abhi tak hosh nhi aaya tha.
Mujhe behoshi ke hi halat me ek awaj sunayi deta hai.

- Kab tak aise behosh rahne ka irada hai ab uth bhi jao agar tum itne me hi har man loge to un buraiyo se kaise ladoge jinse ladne ke liye tumhara janm huya hai.
Mere kan me jab wo awaj padta hai to .

mai had badat huye behoshi ke halat se jag jata hu aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu.
Mai jab aas pass dekhta hu to dekhte hi rah jata hu kyuki mere charo taraf bahut hi sundar drisya tha waha charo taraf aneko prakar ke ped paudhe aur jadi butiya dikhayi deta hai waha par pahad se pani kisi jharne ki tarah niche gir raha tha Jo ek talab ke jaisa bana raha tha.
Waha ke hawao me bhi sudh aur shaktishali ghani spritual energy bahut hi jyada matra me bah raha tha.
Kanchanpur me jo shaktiya 1 sal me hasil hota wo yaha ke spritual shaktiyo ke karan 3 ya 4 mahine me hi hasil ho jata.

Mai- (darte huye) ye ye ye mai kaha aa gaya mai to us pahadi se niche kuda tha kahi mai mar to nhi Gaya.
Nhi nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mai mar nhi sakta mujhe abhi bahut kuchh hasil karna tha mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar yodha banna hai mai aise kaise mar sakta hu..

Mai abhi apne me hi bole jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe fir awaj sunayi deti hai.

Awaj- Nhi abhi tum mare nhi ho tum abhi bhi jinda hi ho.
Mai- kkkk kon hai kon bal raha hai samne aa kar bat karo aise mujhe darao nhi samjhe

Awaj- Hahahah tum itna me hi dar gaye agar chhoti chhoti bato me hi darte rahe to ek takatwar yodha kaise banoge.
Aur waise bhi tum mujhe nhi jante lekin mai tumhe achhe se janta hu tumhe mujhse darne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Mai- Dddd Dekho mujhe Aisa majak pasand nhi hai tum jo koi bhi ho samne aa jao.

Awaj- Mai koi majak nhi kar rha hu thik hai agar tum mujhe dekhna hi chahte ho to ye lo.

Itna bol kar awaj chup ho gaya aur waha par ek roshani ka gola prakat huya Jise dekh kar mai aur dar gaya.

Mai- mmm maine tumko samne aane ko bola aur tum mere samne ye roshani kyu le aaye.

Awaj- Ye roshani hi mai hu aur mera yahi rup hai mai tridevo ke shakti dwara janma hu mai nirankar hu Mera koi aakar nhi mai is dharti par sirf aur sirf tumhari madad karne ke liya aaya hu isliye tum mujhse daro nhi.

Mai- achha to tum meri madad karne ke liye aaye ho lekin mai tumhara biswas kaise karu.

Roshani- Tum khud socho ki agar mujhe tumhe koi nuksan hi pahuchana hota to mai tumhe bachata hi kyu tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itne uche pahad se gir kar apne aap bach gaye.

Uski bat sun kar mai sochne lagta hu ki ye bat to sahi hi bol raha hai agar mai us pahadi se itna niche girta to Mera chatni ban jata.
Ab mujhe us Roshani par Biswas hone laga tha isliye mai usse bola.

Mai- Woh.. to tumne mujhe bachaya tha sukriya mujhe bachane ke liye.

Roshani- Mai tumhe kaise nhi bachata akhir mera janm tumhara madad karne ke liye hi to huya hai.

Mai- Lekin mere hi madad karne ke liye kyu mai koi khash to hu nhi na hi mere pass jyada shaktiya hai mai to 4 salo ek hi level par atka huya hu.

Roshani- Tum kya ho ye tum nhi jante isliye tum aisi bate kar rahe ho
Jante hi tumhara janm is duniya me kisi mahatvapurn karya karne ke liye huya hai aur isiliye mujhe tumhari madad ke liye bheja gaya hai

Mai- kya mai ye jan sakta hu ki aisa kon sa mahatvapurn karya hai jiske liye mera janm huya.

Roshani- Nhi abhi bas tumko itna janna jaruri hai ki tumhe bahut mehnat karni hai kyuki jo karya tumhe karna uske liye tumhe bahut Takatwar banne ke jarurat hai samjhe.

Mai- Achha wo sab to thik hai lekin mai tumhe kis name se bulai aur waise kya tum hamesha hi aise roshani hi ban kar rahoge ya tumhara koi rup bhi hai.

Roshani- Nhi Mera koi rup to nhi hai lekin mai jaisa chahu waisa rup bana sakta hu.
Aur Mera koi name nhi hai tumhi mujhe koi name dedo.

Mai- To Thik hai tum pahle apna rup kisi insan ki tarah bana lo.
Aur tumhare Roshani me Surya ke bhati tez hai isliye mai tumhe surya kah kar bulaunga.

Fir Roshani ne ek Insan ka rup taiyar kiya jo kuchh had tak mere rup se milta julta tha aur uski umra bhi mere karib hi lag raha tha.

Surya- Achha hai mujhe ye name pasand aaya waise ab tumhe thoda apne shaktiyo ko dekh lena chahiye tum jiske liye is pahadi se kude the wo safal raha.

Surya muskurate huye mujhse bola fir mai Surya ke bat sun kar apne shaktiyo ko dekhta hu aur dekhte hi chauk jata hu fir thodi der bad khushi se nachne lagta hu.

Mai- Are wah mai to safal raha mai ab daksh rank me pahuch gaya hurrrre... Ab mujhe koi zero bol ke dikhaye ab mai bhi kanchanpur wale ko dikha dunga ki ye Rohan bhi kisi se kam nhi hai.

Mujhe itna khush dekh kar surya apna sar hilane laga aur bola.

Surya- Tumhe itna khush hone ki jarurat nhi hai kyuki tumhe agar ABISIYA PLANET ka sabse Takatwar yodha banna hai to tumhe SUPREME Yodha banna hoga.

Mai- Ye supreme yodha kya hota hai Maine aaj tak to Aisa name kabhi nhi suna.

Surya- Kya tumne kabhi supreme level ke bare suna hai.
Mai- Nhi mai nhi janta ki ye supreme level kya hai.
Surya- Thik hai mai batata hu supreme level ke bare me.
Ye to sare log jante hai ki is abisiya planet me kul 9 rank hai

Sunya rank
Daksh rank
Srijankar rank
Samrat Rank
Heaven Rank
Nirwan rank
Sant rank
Demi God Rank
God Rank

Aur in Sare 9 ranko me 3 level hota hai Low level Medium level aur Advance level.

Lekin ye koi nhi janta ki jab koi Yodha sunya Rank par kar ke Daksh rank me pahuchta hai to uske liye ek aur level ka rasta khul jata hai jo hai supreme level.

Lekin kisi ko ye malum nhi hai ki supreme level bhi hota hai is liye koi bhi isko practice nhi karta aur jo bhi isko practice kar ke supreme level hasil kar leta hai usko sidha swarg se yodha hone ka pahchan milta hai.

Mai- Woh to Aisa hai ab mai samjha ki supreme level kya hota hai.
Lekin iska practice kaise hota hai

Surya- Jab tum daksh rank ke advance level ke pick par pahuch jaoge tab mai tumhe bataunga.
Ab ye tumpe rahega ki tum supreme level hasil kar pate ho ya nhi kyuki Mera Kam sirf tumko rasta dikhana hai aur uspe chalna hai ya na chalna tum par depend karta hai.

Mai- Tum bus mujhe rasta batao mujhe us raste par chalne me chahe jitna bhi kathin parishram karna pade mai karunga aur supreme yodha ban kar dikhaunga.

Surya- Thik hai lekin ek bat yad rakhna agar tum ek bar is raste par nikal gaye to fir wapas nhi mid sakte ho.
Agar tum daksh rank me supreme level hasil kar liya to tumhe har rank me supreme level hasil karna hoga nhi to tumhara Foundation kharab ho jayega aur agar tumhara foundation kharab huya to tum ek aam adami bankar rah jaoge.
Supreme level hasil karna itna bhi asan nhi hai uske liye tumhe bahut dard se gujarna padega to tum taiyar ho supreme yodha banane ke liye.

Mai- Ha mai taiyar hu chahe mujhe jitna bhi dard sahna pade mai supreme yodha ban kar hi rahunga.

Surya- Mujhe tumse yahi umid thi To thik hai fir yaha se nikalne ka rasta dhundho ab hamko wapas Jana chahiye.
Mai Roshani ban kar tumhare sharir me rahunga aur tumhe jab bhi mujhse bate karna ho apne man me bolna mai sun lunga.

Mai- Thik hai

Itna bol kar mai waha se jane laga surya fir se ek Roshani ban kar mere andar sama gaya.

Mai waha charo taraf ghum ghum kar Rasta dhundhne laga lekin mujhe waha se upar Jane ka koi rasta mil hi nhi Raha tha.

Abhi mai waha se kuchh dur hi aaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek gufa dikhayi diya mai us gufa ko dekh kar uske taraf badh gaya.

Thodi der bad mai us gufa ke andar tha us gufa ke andar diwaro par roshani nikalane wala Cristal laga huya tha jisse thoda thoda roshani aa raha tha.

Mai us gufa me andar ki taraf badhe Jaa raha tha aage badhte badhte mai us gufa ke antim chhor par pahuch gaya waha ek kamra jaisa bana huya tha.

Mai us kamre numa gufa me charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuchh najar aaya.

Mai jab waha Jake dekha to wo kisi adami ki kankal thi u
s kankal ke hath me ek talwar thi jisse bahut hi khatarnak energy nikal raha tha.
Jise dekh mai bahut dar gaya
Mujhe darte dekh kar surya bola.

Surya- Kya yar tum bat bat par darte rahte ho ye to sirf ek mare huye adami ka kankal hai.

Mai- Mai dara nhi hu samjha.

Surya- Ha wo to dikh hi Raha hai.

Surya ke bato ko ignore karte huye usse bola

Mai- ye kankal kiska ho sakta hai aur iske hath me jo talwar hai usse to bahut hi shaktishali aur khatarnak energy nikal raha hai.

Surya mere andar se bahar nikal kar us lash ko dekhne laga fir thodi der dekhne ke bad bola.

Surya- Ye lash to kisi samrat rank ke yodha ki hai aur ye talwar bhi rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar hai.
Wah Rohan tere kismat ko bhi kya kahna tumhe to baithe bithaye hi ek samrat rank ke yodha ke lash aur ek rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar bhi mil gaya.

Tum is lash ki andruni aur spritual shaktiyon ko absorb karke aur bhi shaktishali ban sakte ho aur jab us hathiyar ko tum hasil kar loge to apne se Takatwar yodha se bhi lad sakte ho.

Mai Surya ke bat sun kar bahut khush huya aur us hathiyar ko lene ke liye us lash ke pass gaya jaise hi mai us hathiyar ko pakda mujhe ek jhatka laga aur mai udte huye piche ja kar gira.

Mujhe niche girte hi mere muh se ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi jise sun kar surya mujhpe hasne laga.
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Apne abhi Tak padha ki sare bacho ka shakti parikshan hota hai koi daksh rank ke low level par to koi daksh rank ke medium level par hota hai yaha tak ki shreya bhi daksh rank ke advance level par hoti hai.
Rohan ka rank jas ka tas hi rahta hai yani wo sunya rank ke advance level par hi hota hai jisse wo udas hokar pahadi se niche chhalang laga deta hai aisa manna th ki jo bhi us pahadi se chhalang lagata hai ya to wo mar jata hai aur agar wo jinda bachta hai to bahut takatwar yodha ban ka wapas lautta hai.
Idhar rohan ko waha se jane ke bad Shreya bhi ghar aa jati hai usko khojte huye lekin Rohan Shreya ko ghar par nhi milta hai jisse ghar wale sare pareshan ho jate hai aur rohan ko khojne lagte hai. Idhar pahadi se girne ke bad Rohan ko ek roshani bachati hai aur rohan apna rank par kar ke daksh rank ke medium level par aa jata hai.

Aab aage

(Ab yaha se Rohan ke Jagah mai likhunga)

Mujhe behosh huye yaha 2 din ho gaya tha lekin mujhe abhi tak hosh nhi aaya tha.
Mujhe behoshi ke hi halat me ek awaj sunayi deta hai.

- Kab tak aise behosh rahne ka irada hai ab uth bhi jao agar tum itne me hi har man loge to un buraiyo se kaise ladoge jinse ladne ke liye tumhara janm huya hai.
Mere kan me jab wo awaj padta hai to .

mai had badat huye behoshi ke halat se jag jata hu aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu.
Mai jab aas pass dekhta hu to dekhte hi rah jata hu kyuki mere charo taraf bahut hi sundar drisya tha waha charo taraf aneko prakar ke ped paudhe aur jadi butiya dikhayi deta hai waha par pahad se pani kisi jharne ki tarah niche gir raha tha Jo ek talab ke jaisa bana raha tha.
Waha ke hawao me bhi sudh aur shaktishali ghani spritual energy bahut hi jyada matra me bah raha tha.
Kanchanpur me jo shaktiya 1 sal me hasil hota wo yaha ke spritual shaktiyo ke karan 3 ya 4 mahine me hi hasil ho jata.

Mai- (darte huye) ye ye ye mai kaha aa gaya mai to us pahadi se niche kuda tha kahi mai mar to nhi Gaya.
Nhi nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mai mar nhi sakta mujhe abhi bahut kuchh hasil karna tha mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar yodha banna hai mai aise kaise mar sakta hu..

Mai abhi apne me hi bole jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe fir awaj sunayi deti hai.

Awaj- Nhi abhi tum mare nhi ho tum abhi bhi jinda hi ho.
Mai- kkkk kon hai kon bal raha hai samne aa kar bat karo aise mujhe darao nhi samjhe

Awaj- Hahahah tum itna me hi dar gaye agar chhoti chhoti bato me hi darte rahe to ek takatwar yodha kaise banoge.
Aur waise bhi tum mujhe nhi jante lekin mai tumhe achhe se janta hu tumhe mujhse darne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Mai- Dddd Dekho mujhe Aisa majak pasand nhi hai tum jo koi bhi ho samne aa jao.

Awaj- Mai koi majak nhi kar rha hu thik hai agar tum mujhe dekhna hi chahte ho to ye lo.

Itna bol kar awaj chup ho gaya aur waha par ek roshani ka gola prakat huya Jise dekh kar mai aur dar gaya.

Mai- mmm maine tumko samne aane ko bola aur tum mere samne ye roshani kyu le aaye.

Awaj- Ye roshani hi mai hu aur mera yahi rup hai mai tridevo ke shakti dwara janma hu mai nirankar hu Mera koi aakar nhi mai is dharti par sirf aur sirf tumhari madad karne ke liya aaya hu isliye tum mujhse daro nhi.

Mai- achha to tum meri madad karne ke liye aaye ho lekin mai tumhara biswas kaise karu.

Roshani- Tum khud socho ki agar mujhe tumhe koi nuksan hi pahuchana hota to mai tumhe bachata hi kyu tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itne uche pahad se gir kar apne aap bach gaye.

Uski bat sun kar mai sochne lagta hu ki ye bat to sahi hi bol raha hai agar mai us pahadi se itna niche girta to Mera chatni ban jata.
Ab mujhe us Roshani par Biswas hone laga tha isliye mai usse bola.

Mai- Woh.. to tumne mujhe bachaya tha sukriya mujhe bachane ke liye.

Roshani- Mai tumhe kaise nhi bachata akhir mera janm tumhara madad karne ke liye hi to huya hai.

Mai- Lekin mere hi madad karne ke liye kyu mai koi khash to hu nhi na hi mere pass jyada shaktiya hai mai to 4 salo ek hi level par atka huya hu.

Roshani- Tum kya ho ye tum nhi jante isliye tum aisi bate kar rahe ho
Jante hi tumhara janm is duniya me kisi mahatvapurn karya karne ke liye huya hai aur isiliye mujhe tumhari madad ke liye bheja gaya hai

Mai- kya mai ye jan sakta hu ki aisa kon sa mahatvapurn karya hai jiske liye mera janm huya.

Roshani- Nhi abhi bas tumko itna janna jaruri hai ki tumhe bahut mehnat karni hai kyuki jo karya tumhe karna uske liye tumhe bahut Takatwar banne ke jarurat hai samjhe.

Mai- Achha wo sab to thik hai lekin mai tumhe kis name se bulai aur waise kya tum hamesha hi aise roshani hi ban kar rahoge ya tumhara koi rup bhi hai.

Roshani- Nhi Mera koi rup to nhi hai lekin mai jaisa chahu waisa rup bana sakta hu.
Aur Mera koi name nhi hai tumhi mujhe koi name dedo.

Mai- To Thik hai tum pahle apna rup kisi insan ki tarah bana lo.
Aur tumhare Roshani me Surya ke bhati tez hai isliye mai tumhe surya kah kar bulaunga.

Fir Roshani ne ek Insan ka rup taiyar kiya jo kuchh had tak mere rup se milta julta tha aur uski umra bhi mere karib hi lag raha tha.

Surya- Achha hai mujhe ye name pasand aaya waise ab tumhe thoda apne shaktiyo ko dekh lena chahiye tum jiske liye is pahadi se kude the wo safal raha.

Surya muskurate huye mujhse bola fir mai Surya ke bat sun kar apne shaktiyo ko dekhta hu aur dekhte hi chauk jata hu fir thodi der bad khushi se nachne lagta hu.

Mai- Are wah mai to safal raha mai ab daksh rank me pahuch gaya hurrrre... Ab mujhe koi zero bol ke dikhaye ab mai bhi kanchanpur wale ko dikha dunga ki ye Rohan bhi kisi se kam nhi hai.

Mujhe itna khush dekh kar surya apna sar hilane laga aur bola.

Surya- Tumhe itna khush hone ki jarurat nhi hai kyuki tumhe agar ABISIYA PLANET ka sabse Takatwar yodha banna hai to tumhe SUPREME Yodha banna hoga.

Mai- Ye supreme yodha kya hota hai Maine aaj tak to Aisa name kabhi nhi suna.

Surya- Kya tumne kabhi supreme level ke bare suna hai.
Mai- Nhi mai nhi janta ki ye supreme level kya hai.
Surya- Thik hai mai batata hu supreme level ke bare me.
Ye to sare log jante hai ki is abisiya planet me kul 9 rank hai

Sunya rank
Daksh rank
Srijankar rank
Samrat Rank
Heaven Rank
Nirwan rank
Sant rank
Demi God Rank
God Rank

Aur in Sare 9 ranko me 3 level hota hai Low level Medium level aur Advance level.

Lekin ye koi nhi janta ki jab koi Yodha sunya Rank par kar ke Daksh rank me pahuchta hai to uske liye ek aur level ka rasta khul jata hai jo hai supreme level.

Lekin kisi ko ye malum nhi hai ki supreme level bhi hota hai is liye koi bhi isko practice nhi karta aur jo bhi isko practice kar ke supreme level hasil kar leta hai usko sidha swarg se yodha hone ka pahchan milta hai.

Mai- Woh to Aisa hai ab mai samjha ki supreme level kya hota hai.
Lekin iska practice kaise hota hai

Surya- Jab tum daksh rank ke advance level ke pick par pahuch jaoge tab mai tumhe bataunga.
Ab ye tumpe rahega ki tum supreme level hasil kar pate ho ya nhi kyuki Mera Kam sirf tumko rasta dikhana hai aur uspe chalna hai ya na chalna tum par depend karta hai.

Mai- Tum bus mujhe rasta batao mujhe us raste par chalne me chahe jitna bhi kathin parishram karna pade mai karunga aur supreme yodha ban kar dikhaunga.

Surya- Thik hai lekin ek bat yad rakhna agar tum ek bar is raste par nikal gaye to fir wapas nhi mid sakte ho.
Agar tum daksh rank me supreme level hasil kar liya to tumhe har rank me supreme level hasil karna hoga nhi to tumhara Foundation kharab ho jayega aur agar tumhara foundation kharab huya to tum ek aam adami bankar rah jaoge.
Supreme level hasil karna itna bhi asan nhi hai uske liye tumhe bahut dard se gujarna padega to tum taiyar ho supreme yodha banane ke liye.

Mai- Ha mai taiyar hu chahe mujhe jitna bhi dard sahna pade mai supreme yodha ban kar hi rahunga.

Surya- Mujhe tumse yahi umid thi To thik hai fir yaha se nikalne ka rasta dhundho ab hamko wapas Jana chahiye.
Mai Roshani ban kar tumhare sharir me rahunga aur tumhe jab bhi mujhse bate karna ho apne man me bolna mai sun lunga.

Mai- Thik hai

Itna bol kar mai waha se jane laga surya fir se ek Roshani ban kar mere andar sama gaya.

Mai waha charo taraf ghum ghum kar Rasta dhundhne laga lekin mujhe waha se upar Jane ka koi rasta mil hi nhi Raha tha.

Abhi mai waha se kuchh dur hi aaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek gufa dikhayi diya mai us gufa ko dekh kar uske taraf badh gaya.

Thodi der bad mai us gufa ke andar tha us gufa ke andar diwaro par roshani nikalane wala Cristal laga huya tha jisse thoda thoda roshani aa raha tha.

Mai us gufa me andar ki taraf badhe Jaa raha tha aage badhte badhte mai us gufa ke antim chhor par pahuch gaya waha ek kamra jaisa bana huya tha.

Mai us kamre numa gufa me charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuchh najar aaya.

Mai jab waha Jake dekha to wo kisi adami ki kankal thi u
s kankal ke hath me ek talwar thi jisse bahut hi khatarnak energy nikal raha tha.
Jise dekh mai bahut dar gaya
Mujhe darte dekh kar surya bola.

Surya- Kya yar tum bat bat par darte rahte ho ye to sirf ek mare huye adami ka kankal hai.

Mai- Mai dara nhi hu samjha.

Surya- Ha wo to dikh hi Raha hai.

Surya ke bato ko ignore karte huye usse bola

Mai- ye kankal kiska ho sakta hai aur iske hath me jo talwar hai usse to bahut hi shaktishali aur khatarnak energy nikal raha hai.

Surya mere andar se bahar nikal kar us lash ko dekhne laga fir thodi der dekhne ke bad bola.

Surya- Ye lash to kisi samrat rank ke yodha ki hai aur ye talwar bhi rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar hai.
Wah Rohan tere kismat ko bhi kya kahna tumhe to baithe bithaye hi ek samrat rank ke yodha ke lash aur ek rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar bhi mil gaya.

Tum is lash ki andruni aur spritual shaktiyon ko absorb karke aur bhi shaktishali ban sakte ho aur jab us hathiyar ko tum hasil kar loge to apne se Takatwar yodha se bhi lad sakte ho.

Mai Surya ke bat sun kar bahut khush huya aur us hathiyar ko lene ke liye us lash ke pass gaya jaise hi mai us hathiyar ko pakda mujhe ek jhatka laga aur mai udte huye piche ja kar gira.

Mujhe niche girte hi mere muh se ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi jise sun kar surya mujhpe hasne laga.
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Apne abhi Tak padha ki sare bacho ka shakti parikshan hota hai koi daksh rank ke low level par to koi daksh rank ke medium level par hota hai yaha tak ki shreya bhi daksh rank ke advance level par hoti hai.
Rohan ka rank jas ka tas hi rahta hai yani wo sunya rank ke advance level par hi hota hai jisse wo udas hokar pahadi se niche chhalang laga deta hai aisa manna th ki jo bhi us pahadi se chhalang lagata hai ya to wo mar jata hai aur agar wo jinda bachta hai to bahut takatwar yodha ban ka wapas lautta hai.
Idhar rohan ko waha se jane ke bad Shreya bhi ghar aa jati hai usko khojte huye lekin Rohan Shreya ko ghar par nhi milta hai jisse ghar wale sare pareshan ho jate hai aur rohan ko khojne lagte hai. Idhar pahadi se girne ke bad Rohan ko ek roshani bachati hai aur rohan apna rank par kar ke daksh rank ke medium level par aa jata hai.

Aab aage

(Ab yaha se Rohan ke Jagah mai likhunga)

Mujhe behosh huye yaha 2 din ho gaya tha lekin mujhe abhi tak hosh nhi aaya tha.
Mujhe behoshi ke hi halat me ek awaj sunayi deta hai.

- Kab tak aise behosh rahne ka irada hai ab uth bhi jao agar tum itne me hi har man loge to un buraiyo se kaise ladoge jinse ladne ke liye tumhara janm huya hai.
Mere kan me jab wo awaj padta hai to .

mai had badat huye behoshi ke halat se jag jata hu aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu.
Mai jab aas pass dekhta hu to dekhte hi rah jata hu kyuki mere charo taraf bahut hi sundar drisya tha waha charo taraf aneko prakar ke ped paudhe aur jadi butiya dikhayi deta hai waha par pahad se pani kisi jharne ki tarah niche gir raha tha Jo ek talab ke jaisa bana raha tha.
Waha ke hawao me bhi sudh aur shaktishali ghani spritual energy bahut hi jyada matra me bah raha tha.
Kanchanpur me jo shaktiya 1 sal me hasil hota wo yaha ke spritual shaktiyo ke karan 3 ya 4 mahine me hi hasil ho jata.

Mai- (darte huye) ye ye ye mai kaha aa gaya mai to us pahadi se niche kuda tha kahi mai mar to nhi Gaya.
Nhi nhi aisa nhi ho sakta mai mar nhi sakta mujhe abhi bahut kuchh hasil karna tha mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar yodha banna hai mai aise kaise mar sakta hu..

Mai abhi apne me hi bole jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe fir awaj sunayi deti hai.

Awaj- Nhi abhi tum mare nhi ho tum abhi bhi jinda hi ho.
Mai- kkkk kon hai kon bal raha hai samne aa kar bat karo aise mujhe darao nhi samjhe

Awaj- Hahahah tum itna me hi dar gaye agar chhoti chhoti bato me hi darte rahe to ek takatwar yodha kaise banoge.
Aur waise bhi tum mujhe nhi jante lekin mai tumhe achhe se janta hu tumhe mujhse darne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Mai- Dddd Dekho mujhe Aisa majak pasand nhi hai tum jo koi bhi ho samne aa jao.

Awaj- Mai koi majak nhi kar rha hu thik hai agar tum mujhe dekhna hi chahte ho to ye lo.

Itna bol kar awaj chup ho gaya aur waha par ek roshani ka gola prakat huya Jise dekh kar mai aur dar gaya.

Mai- mmm maine tumko samne aane ko bola aur tum mere samne ye roshani kyu le aaye.

Awaj- Ye roshani hi mai hu aur mera yahi rup hai mai tridevo ke shakti dwara janma hu mai nirankar hu Mera koi aakar nhi mai is dharti par sirf aur sirf tumhari madad karne ke liya aaya hu isliye tum mujhse daro nhi.

Mai- achha to tum meri madad karne ke liye aaye ho lekin mai tumhara biswas kaise karu.

Roshani- Tum khud socho ki agar mujhe tumhe koi nuksan hi pahuchana hota to mai tumhe bachata hi kyu tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itne uche pahad se gir kar apne aap bach gaye.

Uski bat sun kar mai sochne lagta hu ki ye bat to sahi hi bol raha hai agar mai us pahadi se itna niche girta to Mera chatni ban jata.
Ab mujhe us Roshani par Biswas hone laga tha isliye mai usse bola.

Mai- Woh.. to tumne mujhe bachaya tha sukriya mujhe bachane ke liye.

Roshani- Mai tumhe kaise nhi bachata akhir mera janm tumhara madad karne ke liye hi to huya hai.

Mai- Lekin mere hi madad karne ke liye kyu mai koi khash to hu nhi na hi mere pass jyada shaktiya hai mai to 4 salo ek hi level par atka huya hu.

Roshani- Tum kya ho ye tum nhi jante isliye tum aisi bate kar rahe ho
Jante hi tumhara janm is duniya me kisi mahatvapurn karya karne ke liye huya hai aur isiliye mujhe tumhari madad ke liye bheja gaya hai

Mai- kya mai ye jan sakta hu ki aisa kon sa mahatvapurn karya hai jiske liye mera janm huya.

Roshani- Nhi abhi bas tumko itna janna jaruri hai ki tumhe bahut mehnat karni hai kyuki jo karya tumhe karna uske liye tumhe bahut Takatwar banne ke jarurat hai samjhe.

Mai- Achha wo sab to thik hai lekin mai tumhe kis name se bulai aur waise kya tum hamesha hi aise roshani hi ban kar rahoge ya tumhara koi rup bhi hai.

Roshani- Nhi Mera koi rup to nhi hai lekin mai jaisa chahu waisa rup bana sakta hu.
Aur Mera koi name nhi hai tumhi mujhe koi name dedo.

Mai- To Thik hai tum pahle apna rup kisi insan ki tarah bana lo.
Aur tumhare Roshani me Surya ke bhati tez hai isliye mai tumhe surya kah kar bulaunga.

Fir Roshani ne ek Insan ka rup taiyar kiya jo kuchh had tak mere rup se milta julta tha aur uski umra bhi mere karib hi lag raha tha.

Surya- Achha hai mujhe ye name pasand aaya waise ab tumhe thoda apne shaktiyo ko dekh lena chahiye tum jiske liye is pahadi se kude the wo safal raha.

Surya muskurate huye mujhse bola fir mai Surya ke bat sun kar apne shaktiyo ko dekhta hu aur dekhte hi chauk jata hu fir thodi der bad khushi se nachne lagta hu.

Mai- Are wah mai to safal raha mai ab daksh rank me pahuch gaya hurrrre... Ab mujhe koi zero bol ke dikhaye ab mai bhi kanchanpur wale ko dikha dunga ki ye Rohan bhi kisi se kam nhi hai.

Mujhe itna khush dekh kar surya apna sar hilane laga aur bola.

Surya- Tumhe itna khush hone ki jarurat nhi hai kyuki tumhe agar ABISIYA PLANET ka sabse Takatwar yodha banna hai to tumhe SUPREME Yodha banna hoga.

Mai- Ye supreme yodha kya hota hai Maine aaj tak to Aisa name kabhi nhi suna.

Surya- Kya tumne kabhi supreme level ke bare suna hai.
Mai- Nhi mai nhi janta ki ye supreme level kya hai.
Surya- Thik hai mai batata hu supreme level ke bare me.
Ye to sare log jante hai ki is abisiya planet me kul 9 rank hai

Sunya rank
Daksh rank
Srijankar rank
Samrat Rank
Heaven Rank
Nirwan rank
Sant rank
Demi God Rank
God Rank

Aur in Sare 9 ranko me 3 level hota hai Low level Medium level aur Advance level.

Lekin ye koi nhi janta ki jab koi Yodha sunya Rank par kar ke Daksh rank me pahuchta hai to uske liye ek aur level ka rasta khul jata hai jo hai supreme level.

Lekin kisi ko ye malum nhi hai ki supreme level bhi hota hai is liye koi bhi isko practice nhi karta aur jo bhi isko practice kar ke supreme level hasil kar leta hai usko sidha swarg se yodha hone ka pahchan milta hai.

Mai- Woh to Aisa hai ab mai samjha ki supreme level kya hota hai.
Lekin iska practice kaise hota hai

Surya- Jab tum daksh rank ke advance level ke pick par pahuch jaoge tab mai tumhe bataunga.
Ab ye tumpe rahega ki tum supreme level hasil kar pate ho ya nhi kyuki Mera Kam sirf tumko rasta dikhana hai aur uspe chalna hai ya na chalna tum par depend karta hai.

Mai- Tum bus mujhe rasta batao mujhe us raste par chalne me chahe jitna bhi kathin parishram karna pade mai karunga aur supreme yodha ban kar dikhaunga.

Surya- Thik hai lekin ek bat yad rakhna agar tum ek bar is raste par nikal gaye to fir wapas nhi mid sakte ho.
Agar tum daksh rank me supreme level hasil kar liya to tumhe har rank me supreme level hasil karna hoga nhi to tumhara Foundation kharab ho jayega aur agar tumhara foundation kharab huya to tum ek aam adami bankar rah jaoge.
Supreme level hasil karna itna bhi asan nhi hai uske liye tumhe bahut dard se gujarna padega to tum taiyar ho supreme yodha banane ke liye.

Mai- Ha mai taiyar hu chahe mujhe jitna bhi dard sahna pade mai supreme yodha ban kar hi rahunga.

Surya- Mujhe tumse yahi umid thi To thik hai fir yaha se nikalne ka rasta dhundho ab hamko wapas Jana chahiye.
Mai Roshani ban kar tumhare sharir me rahunga aur tumhe jab bhi mujhse bate karna ho apne man me bolna mai sun lunga.

Mai- Thik hai

Itna bol kar mai waha se jane laga surya fir se ek Roshani ban kar mere andar sama gaya.

Mai waha charo taraf ghum ghum kar Rasta dhundhne laga lekin mujhe waha se upar Jane ka koi rasta mil hi nhi Raha tha.

Abhi mai waha se kuchh dur hi aaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek gufa dikhayi diya mai us gufa ko dekh kar uske taraf badh gaya.

Thodi der bad mai us gufa ke andar tha us gufa ke andar diwaro par roshani nikalane wala Cristal laga huya tha jisse thoda thoda roshani aa raha tha.

Mai us gufa me andar ki taraf badhe Jaa raha tha aage badhte badhte mai us gufa ke antim chhor par pahuch gaya waha ek kamra jaisa bana huya tha.

Mai us kamre numa gufa me charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuchh najar aaya.

Mai jab waha Jake dekha to wo kisi adami ki kankal thi u
s kankal ke hath me ek talwar thi jisse bahut hi khatarnak energy nikal raha tha.
Jise dekh mai bahut dar gaya
Mujhe darte dekh kar surya bola.

Surya- Kya yar tum bat bat par darte rahte ho ye to sirf ek mare huye adami ka kankal hai.

Mai- Mai dara nhi hu samjha.

Surya- Ha wo to dikh hi Raha hai.

Surya ke bato ko ignore karte huye usse bola

Mai- ye kankal kiska ho sakta hai aur iske hath me jo talwar hai usse to bahut hi shaktishali aur khatarnak energy nikal raha hai.

Surya mere andar se bahar nikal kar us lash ko dekhne laga fir thodi der dekhne ke bad bola.

Surya- Ye lash to kisi samrat rank ke yodha ki hai aur ye talwar bhi rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar hai.
Wah Rohan tere kismat ko bhi kya kahna tumhe to baithe bithaye hi ek samrat rank ke yodha ke lash aur ek rank 3 ke high grade hathiyar bhi mil gaya.

Tum is lash ki andruni aur spritual shaktiyon ko absorb karke aur bhi shaktishali ban sakte ho aur jab us hathiyar ko tum hasil kar loge to apne se Takatwar yodha se bhi lad sakte ho.

Mai Surya ke bat sun kar bahut khush huya aur us hathiyar ko lene ke liye us lash ke pass gaya jaise hi mai us hathiyar ko pakda mujhe ek jhatka laga aur mai udte huye piche ja kar gira.

Mujhe niche girte hi mere muh se ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi jise sun kar surya mujhpe hasne laga.
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