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Update 19
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Apne abhi Tak padha ki Rohan apne pariwar ko bachane waha par aa gaya.
Wo jaise hi waha par aaya to use dekh kar sare log ascharya chakit ho gaye kyuki jo ladka ek machhar bhi nhi mar sakta tha wo shamshera ka war rok diya.
Idhar birendra ne jaise hi apne bete ko dekha wo khusi se rone laga uske aankho se aansu barish ki tarah bahne laga fir wo bhagte huye jakar apne bete se mila aur usse puchha ki tum itne din se kaha gayab ho gaye the hamne tumko kaha kaha nhi dhundha aansu to Rohan ke aankho me bhi aa gaye the lekin wo muskurate huye bola ki ye sab bate bad me karenge pahle dushmano ko safaya karte hai fir Rohan aur birendra apne rayjada pariwar ke yodhao ke sath dushmano par tut pade.
Rohan shamshera ke sath lad raha tha aur birendra Ranjit ke sath dono taraf se bahut hi bhayankar yudh huya lekin akhari me sare Dushman mare gaye Rohan bhi shamshera ko mar giraya lekin in sab me ek mehra pariwar ka elder bachane me kamyab ho gaya.
Aab aage
Aab dono pariwaro ka ladayi khatam ho gaya tha is ladayi me mehra pariwar ka khatma kar diya gaya tha.
Halaki is ladayi ke chalte mere pariwar ko bhi bahut nukshan uthana pada tha.
Mere pariwar se bhi bahut sare yodha mare gaye the abhi mere pariwar me matam chhaya huya tha.
In sab se alag mehra pariwar ko jo elder yaha se bach kar bhagne me kamyab ho gaya tha wo bahut ghayal ho gaya tha lekin wo apne jhakhmo ka parwah na karte huye sidhe mehra pariwar ke haweli me jata hai aur rounak ko aur pariwar ke bacho aur mahilao ko le kar waha se nikal jata hai.
Ranjit mehra pahle se hi sara intjam kar ke rakha tha ki agar wo kahi ye yudh har gaya to apne pariwar ke aurato aur bacho ko yaha se rakshit nikal sake.
Mehra pariwar ke elder mehra pariwar ke haweli me jakar sare mahilaon ko sari bate batata hai jise sun kar sari mahilayen rone lagti hai lekin elder sare logo ko samjha bujha kar waha se lekar gupt rup se dusre sahar ke liye nikal jata hai aur wo jate jate apne man me ek pratigya karta hai.
Elder- (apne man me)- Rayjada pariwar mai ye kasam khata hu ki jabtak mai tumhare pariwar ke ek ek adami aurat aur bacho ko maut ke ghat na utar diya tab tak mai is sahar me apna pair nhi rakhunga.
(Apne aap se) Mujhe pahle apne sare jhakhmo ko thik karna hoga aur fir madad ke liye bhediya dal ke pass Jana hoga unlogo ko jab ye pata chalega ki unka chota leader Shamshera ko rayjada pariwar walo ne mar diya hai to wo rayjada pariwar ke sare log ko mar denge.
Lekin usse pahle mujhe apne jhakhmo ko thik karna hoga.
Idhar ladayi khatam hone ke bad baba mere pass aaye aur mujhe apne gale se laga liya aur garv se bole.
Birendra- Mujhe tum par garv hai mere bete tune Aaj hamare pariwar ko nast hone se bacha liya jab wo Shamshera is ladayi me bhag liya to mai ye man liya tha ki ab mera pariwar khatam ho jayega.
Mai- ye mera pariwar hai aur mere rahte huye mere pariwar par koi ankh bhi nhi utha sakta agar koi aisi himakat ki to uska mai aankhe nikal lunga.
Birendra- wo sab to thik hai lekin mujhe ye samajh me nhi aa raha hai ki tum itni jaldi itne Takatwar kaise ho gaye jab tum yaha se gaye the to sunya rank par the lekin wapas laute to srijankar rank me ho.
In 6 mahino me tumhare andar 2 ranko ka uchhal kaise aa gaya.
Mai- Baba aap abhi ye sab chhodiye pahle aap yaha se sare lasho ko hatwaiye fir Ghar ke andar chal kar mai apko sari bate bataunga.
Birendra-( kuchh sochte huye) achha thik hai chalo.
Iske bad baba apne admiyo ko bol kar sari lasho ko antim sanskar karwaya aur fir mere sath haveli ke andar aa gaye.
Mai jaise hi haveli me inter kiya shreya bhagte huye mere pass aayi aur rote huye mere chhati par muke marne lagi fir mere gale se lag gayi.
Jab mai waha us ladayi me aaya tha tabhi sainiko ke dwara maa aur Shreya ko pata chal gaya tha ki mai laut aaya hu.
Shreya jab se suni thi ki mai wapas aa gaya hu tabse wo mujhse milne ke liye bechain thi lekin baba ka adesh tha ki koi bhi mahal se bahar nhi nikalega is liye wo mayusi me rote huye waha mera intjar kar rahi thi aur yahi hal waha maa ka bhi tha.
Lekin jab unlogo ne suna ki mai shamshera se ladayi kar raha hu to wo dar gayi thi lekin fir bad me pata chala ki mai shamshera ko mar diya to pahle to dono aacharya huyi lekin fir bad me kushi se uchhalane lagi.
Abhi shreya mere gale se lagi huyi thi aur jor jor se roti ja rahi thi mere aankho se bhi aansu nikalne laga tha.
Mai- Bas bas ab aap chup ho jaiye dekhiye ab mai aa gaya na ab aap royengi to mai bhi rone lagunga aur mai rote huye bilkul acha nhi dikhta aur waise aap bhi rote huye achhi nhi lagti hai.
Shreya- ( mere chhati par marte huye aur rote huye) Tumhe majak sujh raha hai yaha meri jan jaa rahi thi mai tumko kaha kaha nhi dhundha mai yaha tumhare liye kitni pareshan thi.
Akhir tum itne din se gayab kaha the maine sare jagah tumhe khoj liya lekin tum kahi nhi mile.
Mai- Bata raha hu aap Pahle sant ho jaiye aur mujhe abhi maa se mill lene dijiye iske bad mai aplogo ko sari bate bataunga ki mai itne din se kaha gayab tha aur kya kar raha tha.
Shreya- Thik hai tum jakar maa se mil lo lekin yad rakhna mujhe sab kuchh janana hai.
Mai- Thik hai.
Fir mai maa ke pass chala gaya maa bhi ro ro kar apni aankhe lal kar li thi aur unka sehat bhi sahi nhi lag raha tha aisa lag raha tha ki wo kitne hi dino se kuchh bhi khayi na hai.
Mai apni maa ke aisi halat dekh kar rone laga aur unke gale lag gaya jo maa abhi tak chup chap thi aur keval aansu baha rahi thi wo mere gale lagte hi jor jor se rone lagi aur rote rote bol rahi thi.
Rohini- Tum kaha chale gaye the tumne hamare bare me thoda bhi nahi socha ki tumhari maa tumhare bina kaise hogi ye aankhe tumhe dekhne ke liye tadap gayi thi.
Tumse Aisa kyu kiya kyu hamlogo ko chhod kar gaye
Maa aise hi rote rote na Jane kya kya bole jaa rahi thi fir mai maa ko chup karate huye bola.
Mai- Maa aab aap sant ho jaiye ab mai aa gaya hu na ab mai aapko chhod ka kahi nhi jaunga aur agar Jana bhi pada to apko bata kar jaunga thik hai ab aap sant ho jaiye.
Bahut samjhane ke bad maa akhir ka sant ho gayi lekin abhi bhi subak rahi thi mai abhi chain ka sans le hi Raha tha ki tabhi shreya bol padi.
Shreya- Ab to tum sab se mil liye ab to batao ki tum itne din se kaha gayab the aur tumhare pass itni shakti kaha se aayi ki tum shamshera jaise yodha ko hara diye.
Yaha se jab tum gaye the tab to tum sunya rank par the aur aaye to srijankar rank par ho tum in 6 mahino me aisa kya kiya ki tumhari shakti itni badh gayi.
Mai- pahle aap sant to ho jaiye iske bad mai apko sab bata raha hu.
Darasal maine yaha aane se pahle hi soch liya tha ki mujhe kya bolna hai kyuki mai unlogo ko sach to bata nhi sakta tha.
Mai- To suniye...
Huya kuchh aisa tha ki mai jab shakti parikshan diya to Mera rank pahle jaise hi tha mere rank me koi badalav nhi huya tha is liye mai udas ho gaya aur apne aap ko sant karne ke liye mai jangal me chala gaya wahi jangal me ek pahad ke uper udas baitha tha aur soch raha tha ki mai itna mehnat karta hu fir bhi mera rank nhi badh raha hai.
Mai waha udasi se baithe huye yahi sab soch raha tha ki tabhi mujhe waha kisi ke awaj sunayi di.
Jab mai palat kar dekha to waha ek budha adami waha par ek lath ke sahare khade the wo mere pass aakar bole.
Beta mai bahut din se kuchh khaya nhi hu kya tum mere khane ke liye kuchh laa sakte ho.
Mai udas man se hi bola thik hai mai lekar aata hu.
Fir mai jangal me gaya aur kuchh phal tod kar lekar aa gaya aur wo phal us budhe adami ko de diya fir wo budha adami phal khate huye mujhse puchha ki tum is tarah se udas kyu ho to mai hichkichate huye sari bat bata diya.
Jise sun kar budha adami bola bas itni si bat ke liye udas ho agar tumhe mujhpe biswas hai to tum mere sath 6 mahino ke liye chalo mai tumhe in 6 mahino me bahut kuchh sikha dunga.
Fir mai kuchh der sochta raha aur fir budhe adami ke sath chala gaya wo koi budha adami nhi balki ek sidh purush the.
Unhone mujhe in 6 mahino me bahut kuchh sikhaya mera rank badhaya aur ab mai ek chemist bhi hu mai abhi rank 2 tak ke dava bana sakta hu.
Mera bat sun kar sab aacharya chakit ho gaye waha todi der tak santi chhayi rahi fir us santi ko bhang karte huye shreya boli.
Shreya- Kya sach me tum rank 2 tak ka dava bana sakte ho tum jhuth to nhi bol rahe ho na.
Mai- Nhi mai jhuth nhi bol raha hu mai sach me rank 2 tak ka dava bana sakta hu.
Rohini- Wo sab to thik hai lekin tum bata ke bhi to Jaa sakte the na hamlog yaha tumhare liye kitni pareshan the.
Mai- Uske liye mafi chahunga maa lekin wo sidh purush mujhse bole ki unke pass yaha rukne ka jyada samay nhi hai is liye mai aplogo ko batane nhi aaya aur unke sath chala gaya.
Birendra- Ye to bahut achha huya wo jarur ko sidh mahatama honge hame jakar unko dhanyabad bolna chahiye
Ek kam Karo Tum mujhe unke pass leker chalo mai khud unko sukriya bolunga.
Mai- Abb ye nhi ho sakta baba kyuki wo to waha se kabka chale gaye honge wo bol rahe the ki wo pura abisiya planet par ghumte rahte hai Aaj yaha to kal kaha honge wo koi nhi janta.
Birendra- wo aisa hai thik hai ab agar wo kabhi bhi tumko mile to hamare taraf se unko sukriya bol dena.
Mai- Thik hai baba.
Birendra- waise tum abhi srijankar rank ke medium level par ho lekin tum itni shakti se shamshera ko kaise hara diye.
Baba ke bat sun kar sab mere taraf dekhne lage kyuki ye bat sab janna chahte the ki akhir mai ek samrat rank ke yodha ko kaise hara paya.
Mai- Baba darasal bat aisi hai ki wo sidh purush ne mujhe ek aisi taknik di hai jisse mai apne se ek rank uper ke yodha ko aram se hara sakta hu lekin wo jab us taknik ko mujhe diye to ek bachan mere se le liye ki mai us taknik ke bare me kisi ko kuchh na batau.
Birendra- wo to ye bat hai thik hai to tumhe apne bachan ka palan karna chahiye tum us taknik ke bare me kisi ko kuchh mat batana
Mai- Jee baba mai kisi ko kuchh bhi nhi bataunga.
Iske bad maa ne mere liye khana mangwaya aur fir mai khana kha ke apne room me chala gaya kyuki mai is yudh ke karan bahut jyada thak gaya tha.
Mai aise hi 2 dino tak aram karte raha jab meri thakan puri tarah se khatam ho gaya to socha ki ab baba se mil kar Srijankar goli unhe de deni chahiye halaki ye rank 2 ki goli thi lekin ise market me kharidna bahut muskil tha kyuki ek to iska rate bahut jyada tha aur dusra ye milta bhi bahut muskil se tha.
Abhi mere pass lagbhag 20 Srijankar goli thi aur 30 andruni goli mai baba ko sirf srijankar goli hi de sakta tha kyuki uska mere pass koi use nhi tha aur andruni goli to mere bahut kam ki thi aur ye andruni goli bhi rank 3 ka tha jo sayad hi kabhi market me dikha ho.
Mai waha se sidha baba ke pass gaya aur unse bola.
Mai- Baba kya aap ye bata sakte hai ki hamare pariwar me kitne aise yodha hai jo abhi daksh rank ke advance level par hai.
Birendra- Ha bata sakta hu lekin tumhe ye kyu janna hai.
Mai- Baba bat aise hai ki mere pass karib 20 srijankar goli hai aur ye goli kisi bhi daksh rank ke advance level ke yodha ko Srijankar rank me jane me madad karta hai.
Meri bat sun kar baba ascharya chakti ho gaye aur haklate huye bole.
Birendra- Kkkkkya bola tumne tumhare pass 20 srijankar goli hai.
Mai- Ha baba apne sahi suna mere pass 20 srijankar goli hai.
Birendra- Lekin ye goli tumhe kaha se mili wo bhi ek ya do nhi pure 20 goli.
Yaha bahut dhundhne ke bad bhi ek goli nhi mil pati hai aur tumhe 20 goli mil gayi kahi tum majak to nhi kar rahe ho.
Mai- Nhi baba bhala mai apse majak kyu karunga ye sach hai mere 20 srijankar goli hai.
Aur mai ye goli apko de raha hu.
Fir maine apne storage ring se sari srijankar goli nikal kar baba ko de di jaise baba ne mere pass storage ring dekhe wo fir se chauk gaye aur un goliyo ko dekh kar aur bhi chauk gaye apne kapte hath se goli ko pakda aur dhyan se dekhne lage.
Birendra- Ye to sach me Srijankar goli hai tum sach bol rahe the lekin ye goli tumhare pass kaha se aayi aur ye storage ring ye to bahut kimati lagta hai ye tumhare pass kaha se aaya.
Mai- Baba ye sab mere lagan aur kathin parishram se khus ho kar wo sidh purush ne mujhe diya hai.
Ab koi sawal nhi ab aap chup chap ise hamare pariwar ke yodhao ko de dijiye jisse hamari pariwar ke shakti aur bhi badhegi.
Birendra- Ha tumne ye bat sahi bola ab hamara pariwar aur shaktishali ho jayega.
Lekin agar ham aise hi ye goli in logo ko de diya to ye iska mahatva nhi shamjhenge.
Mai- Ha ye to hai achha aap ye bataiye ki kitne aise yodha hai jo abhi daksh rank ke advance level par hai.
Birendra- karib 15 aise hai jo daksh rank ke advance level par hai.
Mai- To aap ek kam kijiye ek pratiyogita rakhiye aur jo bhi i pratiyogita me Frist rank se 10 rank ke bich me aayega aap use ek ek goli de dijiyega.
Isse ye hoga ki goli ke lalach me wo log aur bhi kathin parishram karenge.
Aur ye pratiyogita har 2 mahino ek bar aayojit kijiye aur har pratiyogita jitne wale 10 rank ko aap ye goli dijiyega.
Birendra- Ha ye sahi rahega hame aisa hi karna chahiye lekin ek samasya hai.
Mai- Yahi na ki aur goli kaha se aayega kyuki ye goli to sirf 2 pratiyogita me khatam ho jayenge.
Birendra- Ha yahi samsya hai.
Mai- Mere pass iska bhi upay hai maine apko pahle hi bataya tha na ki Mai rank 2 tak ka goli bana sakta hu to mai is srijankar goli ko banaunga aur sath me ek shaktivardhak pay bhi banaunga jo sunya rank ke yodha ko aage badhne me madad karega aur aap is pratiyogita me sunya rank ka bhi ek pratiyogita rakhiyega aur iska bhi niyam wahi hoga jo daksh rank ke pratiyogita me hoga.
Birendra- Kya....? Sach me tum srijankar goli aur shaktivardhak pay bana sakte ho.
Mai- Aur nhi to kya mai ise jald hi bana kar apko de dunga.
Bus mai jo aushdhi apko likh kar dunga aap use la dijiyega.
Aur ha aap aaj hi ghosna kar dijiye ki 10 din bad pratiyogita rakha jayega.
Birendra- Thik hai mai sari aushdhiyon ki bewastha kar dunga aur mai aaj hi ghosna bhi kar deta hu.
Ye sab bate karne ke bad mai waha se abhyas sthal ki taraf nikal jata hu fir waha jakar shreya jo ki abhyas sthal practice kar rahi thi mai usi ke sath jakar practice karne lagta hu.
Thodi der abhyas karne ke bad mai shreya ke sath Ghar wapas aa jata hu.
Mai- Aap srijankar rank ke low level me kab pahuchi.
Shreya- 3 mahine ho gye mujhe Srijankar rank me pahuche huye lekin ab mera level hi nhi badh raha hai.
Shreya ke bat sun kar mai kuchh sochne laga fir apne storage ring se ek phal nikal kar Shreya ko dete huye bola.
Mai- Aap is phal ko khakar dhyan lagaiye aap medium level par pahuch jayengi.
Shreya- Ye kon sa phal hai aur isme aisi kya khubi hai ki mai ek level aur aage badh jaungi.
Mai- ye kuntal phal hai isme bahut hi jyada matra me spritual energy hota hai.
Fir mai us phal ko shreya ko de deta hu mujhe ye phal usi ghati me mila tha aur mujhe iske bare me jankari surya ne di thi.
Fir mai apne anguthi se rank 3 ka ek bijli mul shakti ka taknik nikal kar Shreya ko deta hu.
Shreya us taknik ko dekh kar ascharya chakti ho jati hai.
Note- Dosto mai mafi chahunga ki maine aplogo ko Sunday ko update dene ka wada kiya tha lekin de nhi paya.
Bat kuchh aisi hai ki mera accident ho gaya tha jiske chalte mere hand me chot lag gaya tha aur doctor ne crack bandage bandh diya tha is liye update nhi likh paya tha.
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