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Update 12


Team # angles # la intro

Team angles me 12 ladkiyan he jisme se 10 anath he vakt ki satai or samaj ke mardon ke julm sehchuki he enhone bhot taklifhe jheli he or jo 2 boss he vo es team ki racheta he.

Charlies angles movie ne boss ke dimag me ek chap chod di or unhone bhi than liya ki vo bhi ek team banayegi or uska natija aaj team angles he.

Boss or sb ka intro bad me pata chalega.

Rat gehri ho chali thi or sab apne apne malsad ke liye nikal chuke the apne tai sthan ki tarafh.

Vithal doc pe phonch gays tha jahan 5 aadmi or the kyunki estaraf koi aata nahi tha to vo befikar tha lekin use nahi pata tha ki aaj uski mot bhi uske piche piche yahan aajayegi.

Vithal: sab fhel jav vese to koi tensan nahi he lekin fhirbhi kuch gadbad lage to sabko alart kardena.

Vithal kuch jyada hi ovar confidanc tha.

Vahi veer or bantu bhi vahin the or vithhal ke sab aadmiyon ko chupte huve dekh liya tha.

Bantu: bachi yar vithhal ne to hamara kaam aasan kardiya.

Veer: vithhal kuch jyada hi syana he lekin usko uski syanpati le dubegi.

Vahin angles ki team taiyar thi 2 ladkiyan rod pe gadi liye huve khadi thi or bonet khula huva tha dekhne vale ko esa lage ki unki gadi bigdi huvi he or baki 5 ladkiyan chup gai thi vahan pedo ke piche apni apni gun lekar jispe sailencar laga huva tha.

Karib 20 minit ke intejar ke baad cantenar unki tarafh aata huva dikha vese to andhera tha lekin hadlight se pata chal raha tha ki koi bada vahan he do ladkiyan jo rod pe thi vo alart hogai or jese hi gadi najdik aayi unko hath dokhake rukne ka esara kiya truk me 5 gunde the jisme 2 poche the cantenar me or 3 aage cabin me the jese hi unki najar durse hath hilati ladkiyon pe padi or sathme khadi gadi pe bhi unke aankho me chamak aagai.

G1: bhai vo dekh 2 ladkiyan.

G2 : pata he bhosdike dikhrahi he.

G3: bhai rokne ke liye bol rahi he.

G1 : to rok na sale kya mast maal lag rahi he.

G3: lekin kuch gadbad huvi to vithhal bhai hame jhinda nahi chodenge.

G2:kya be gandu har vakt teri gand fhati rehti he sale 2 ladkiyan he or ham 5 he saliyo ko utha lenge mal phoncha ke inke sath rat rangin karenge.

G2: bhai yar mere lund ki bat chinli tune to.

G1: hup bhosdike or tu gadi rok.

Jese hi cantenar gadi ke pas aaya draivar joki g3 tha usne breck lagadi lekin ladki yan vo bhi andhere sunsan elake me 3no ke manme lalach aagaya or 3no niche utre.

G1: han ji madam kya problam he.

L2: bhaiya gadi kharab hogai he kuch help kardo.

L2 ne ye badi najakat se bola tha jiske 3no ke man me laddu fhutne lage unlogo ne ye bhi nahi socha ki etni rat ko es sunsan jagah pe akeli 2 ladkiya kya kar rahi he unpe havas savar thi.

G2: janeman bhai kyu bolti he.

Abhi aage kuch bolta ki chub ki aavaj aayi or tino vahi dher hogaye unke mathe ke bicho bich ched hogaye the.

L1: good sot frends.

Tabhi cantenar ka piche ka get khula or ek aavaj niklo.

Phoncgaeeè.

Or vo bhi niche gire unki baat puri hone se pehle 2 goli aake lagi vo niche gire bichare piche bethe the lekin jab gadi ruki to unhe laga ki phonch gaye or jese hi get kholkar bolte unka kam tamam.

L1: angles chalo niklo yahan kabhi bhi ripotrs or police aati hogi gadi rukte hi boss ne dono jagah khabar dedi thi.

Bolke usne gadi ka bonet bandh kiya or sabhi ladkiyan fhatafhat gadi me bethkar nikal gai.

Thodi derme vahan reportars ki entri hogai.

Re: breaking news....rod pe ek cantenar mila he jisme 50 ladkiyan he or sabhi behos he or yahan 5 lase bhi he sayad en ladki yon ko bahar bheja jaraha tha dehvyapar ke liye lekin kisine enka mansuba nakam kardiya kon he ye log or ladki yan kidharse he ye police tehkikat ke bad pata chalega.

Vahan police bhi phonch chuki thi or sab tapas chal rahi thi.




Dusri tarafh

Vithhal ke 5 aadmi alag alag jagah pe chup gaye the or bantu or veer chupkese jake 5ka kaam tamam kar chuke the or vithhal ensab se bekhabar cantenar ki rah dekhraha tha utne me uska fhone baja.

Vithhal: hello bhai abhi tak cantenar phoncha nahi he.

Lekin vithhal ko samne se galiyan sunne ko mili.

Birju: madarchod mene tujhe bola tha dhyan rakhna bhosdike sara mal pakda gaya or vo 5 chutye bhi mare gaye.

Birju ki baat sunke vithhal sadme me aagaya or jorse bola.

Vithhal: kya lekin kese bhai police ko kese pata chala.

Birju: bhosdike jyada bol mat or jaldi se vahan se nikal police sayad vahan bhi phonch jaye.

Etna bolke birju ne call kat diya lekin jo vithhal bola tha vo veer or bantu ne sun liya tha or unhe andaja hogaya tha esliye vo bhi vahan se nikal gaye.

Raste me bantu bola.

Bantu: bachi kya bat he hamari police ekdam active hogai he.

Me : nahi yar ye police ka kam nahi he sayad koi or he.

Bantu: jo bhi ho apna kam aasan kardiya.




Vahin gharpe mom ko nind nahi aarahi thi unko bar bar veer ki yaad aarahi thi bhot der tak jab nind nahi aayi to vo uthke veer ke room me phonchi or etfhak se aaj veer room lock karna bhol gaya tha .

Mom ne veer ka darvaja khat khataya.

Lekin andar se koi aavaj nahi aayi to unhone hendal ghumaya dor khul gaya.

Mom ne andar aake dekha to koi nahi tha to unhome aavaj lagai

Mom: veer kahan ho tum.

Lekin koi javab nahi mom ne Boston bhi chek kiya vahan bhi koi nahi tha.

Mom (khud se)kahan chala gaya ye ladka etni raat ko.

Vo aage kuch bolti ke unke piche se koi aavaj aayi to unhone ghom ke dekha or unki aankhe herat se badi hogai.

Tow team # angel # sabko thonk ker ladkiyon bacha lia bagair kisi ki nazer aaye
Lekin veer or bantu n vithal ko kyon chod dia use bhi thonk dena chahiye
Kon peeche se aa gaya jisse maa ji ki aankhe hairat se badi ho gayi
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

 

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

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