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Incest Himmat-wala (incest .. adultery .. action .. thriller) (Completed)

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dono ladkiyan apni payari payari aasnu bahati ankhon se mujhe dekhne lagi . unke masoom chehre par aasnu baahti ankhen kuch zayada hi saj rahi thee . main un ke paas ja kar beth gaya ... un dono ne maa ki taraf dekha to maa boli..

maa .... daro nahi beti ye mera beta hai ... priya ka bhai aur aaj se tum dono ka bhi .. is se daro mat. main poori koshish karoongi. tum dono ko apne se alag na hone doon.. "wo dono hamari jitni samjhdar to nahi thi"

phir se maa ke kehne par un ke aansu se sane chehre par kuch shaanti aa gai .. maine un dono ka ek ek haath pakad liya ... aur un ki ankhon me dekhte huye pyar se bola .

vijay ... daro nahi sab theek ho jaye ga. kya tum dono mujhe apna bhai banao gi.

dono ne khushi khushi sar hila diya .. phir maine un ka darr kuch kam karne ke liye unse baat karne laga ..

vijay .... acha tum dono ke naam kya hai..

ek boli... mera naam jhanvi hai ..

aur mera naam naam shuruti hai ... dono ne apna apna naam bataya ..

vijay ... bohat hi payare naam hain tum dono ke

dono .... thanks you bhai .. aap bohat ache hain

muujhe dono se baat karna acha lag raha tha ...kuch der dono se baat karne ke baad main bahar aa gaya ...

agle din maa ne pata nahi kya kiya. ke rekha baai ne dono ladkiyon ko maa ke handover kar diya... maa ne dono ladkiyon ko nachne aur gaana sikhane ki training deni shuru kar di... mujhe bhi is par koi aitraz nahi tha ... seekhne aur dhanda karne me farq hai ... wo naach aur gaana seekhti rahengi to rekha baai kuch nahi bole gi... maa ne ye baat jhanvi aur shuruti ko samjha di thi.. wo dono to maa ki koi baat taalti hi nahi thi.. main maa aur priya ki tarha janvi aur shuruti se kam hi baat karta tha.... rekha baai mera zayada lagaao dekh kar kahi mujhe unse ya unko mujh se door na karde. yahi darr rehta tha mujhe gar waqt...

waqt kabhi thehra hai na thehre ga. mera waqt bhi kisi tez raftaar train ki tarha bhaagne laga. dekhte hi dekhte main saal ka ho gaya...

maa ki khoob-soorti waisi ki waisi hi thi. pata nahi kaise itne dukh me hone ke bawjood bhi maa ka shabaab waise ka waisa hi tha ... abhi tak ma ka danka poore baazar me zoor-o-shor se bajta tha.. door door se tamash-been maa ke naach aur unki awaz ki kashish me bawale ho kar aate rehte the ... bagga ke ilawa kisi aur ne kabhi kothe pe aa kar danga karne yaa maaa ko haraas karne ki koshish nahi ki ...

rekha baai apne kothe ke saath saath apne illegal kaamon me aage hi aage badhti ja rhi thi ...

bagga ne kai baar kothe par halla machane aur maa ko uthane ki koshish ki... do baar khud aaya apne kai aadmiyon ko le kar... us ke aadmi tamash-been ban kar maa ko uthane ki koshish me maare gaye... lekin bagga apni beiizati bhool nahi paaya tha .. rekha baai ne bhi tang aa kar us ke shehar me hi usay bohat nuqsan ponchaya ... us ke kai adde tabah karwa diye lekin bagga kabhi hath nahi laga.

rekha baai ne bagga ko barbad karne ki thaan li thi.. rekha baai ke aadmiyon ne bagga ki talash me us ke 80% se zayada adde tabah kar diye ....

aaj se teen mahine pehle bagga ke achanak kothe par hamle me us ke saare aadmi maare gaye... wo khud bhi maara jaata lekin police aa gai ... wo bagga ko pakad kar le gai ... rekha baai bagga ko jaan se maarna chahti thi ... lekin bagga bhi kam nahi tha.. usne in do saloon me mumbai me apni kuch bade logon se jaan pehchan bana li thi... is liye rekha baai bagga ko qatal karne me nakaam rahi.

rekha baai ko bada ghussa aaya.. lekin rekha baai ke partners ne usay thanda kar diya kyunki bagga ke relations bhi ache the...

bagga ka case chala aur usay 6 saal ki jail ho gai ...

priya jhanvi aur shuruti me bada change aa raha tha. un ke badan ki rangat din-ba-din ujli hoti ja rahi thi... un ke pahaadon ki uthaan to aisi badhti ja rahi thi .. jaise khaya piya sab khaas un ke pahaadon ko lag raha ho.. abhi un ki umar inti zayada bhi nahi thi ... priya saal ki thi to jhanvi aur shuruti saal ki thee... lekin un ke chuche kisi 18 saal ki ladki ke jaise bade bade dikhne lage the...

kothe ke mahol me rehte kisi ki sharam baaki nai rehti.. maine maa ko kai baar nanga dekha tha. kai baar maa ki chudaai bhi dekhi thi . sach kahoon to maa ke jaisi aaj tak mujhe koi nahi dikhi. yahan an-ginat kothe hain aur un kohton par an-ginat ladkiyan hain sab ki sab apsarayen hain har koi ek doosre se badh kar khoob-soorat hai.. agar kothe ki khoob-soorat ladkiyon ko kisi world beauty contest me khada kar diya jaye to bila muqabla hi sab ki sab jeet jayen... akhir poore desh se khoob-soorti ko dhoond dhoond kar aghwa kar ke yahan kothon ki zeenat banaya jaata hai . kothe aise hi to abad nahi rehte in kothon ke jaisi khoob-soorti kahan..

to main baat kar raha tha maa ke narm-o-nazuk sharir aur khoob-soorti ki inteha ke baare me. miane maa ko kai baar chudte dekha.. maa ki siskiyan meri rag rag me rach chuki thee.. maa kabhi bhi apni khushi se nahi chudi lekin abb lund ki musalsal maa ki chut me aamd-o-raft ho aur maa ko maza na aye ye kasie ho sakta hai. chudaai se pehle aur baad me maa ko acha nahi lagta tha... lekin lambi chalne wali chudaai se maa ka control apne aap par nahi rehta tha... kuch waqt ke liye maa bhi chudaai ke maze me doob jaati...

pata nahi main ye sab kyun bata rha hoon.. apni maa ki aisi feeling aur chudaai ki yaadein mujhe apne dil me rakhni chahiye.. lekin aap reader se insaaf karna bhi zaroori hai jo aisi man pasand aur suroor me lipti batoon ka intezar karte rehte hain...

jis raat maa ki chudaai hoti thi us raat ki agli suba maa bohat udaas hoti..halanke chudaai se tabiat khil uthti hai.lekin maa majboor hai na is liye udas rehti hai. main maa ka chehra dekhta maa mujhse nazren chura leti ...

main bata raha tha kothe par rehte sharam khatam ho jaati hai.. mujhe bhi kisi se sharam nahi aati thi lekin main besharam bhi nahi tha.. maine apni maa priya ya jhanvi aur shuruti ko baar-ha nagna dekha tha.. lekin un ke nange angon ko dekh kar mujhe kabhi bhi bad feeling nahi aai.. halanke aas paas ke kai kothon par mojood ladke jo meri hi age ke the wo thodi si age me hi har kaam kar chuke the.. lekin main un sab se alag tha.. mujhe aurat ki majbooriyon ka ahsaas tha mera sirf ek hi maqsad tha apni maa aur behno ko yahan se nikal ek safe zindagi dena...

maa bhi ajeeb thi apni marzi se kabhi bhi nahi chudi lekin apne aap ko inta maintain kiye rehti thee ke kya bataaon ..

jaise koi athra saal ki ladki apne sapno ke raajkumar ke intezar me ho aur us ke saath future me hone wali chudaai ki tayaari ke liye apne sab khaas parts jaise boobs nipple chut gaand ka khayal rakhti ho..

waise hi maa bhi rakhti thi... maine jab bhi maa ko nanga dekha... apni maa ki chut ke laboon ko hamesha apas me mila hua dekha har chudaai ke baad maa apni chut ki aise care karti jaise koi apni laadli beti ke naaz nakhre uthata hai.. maa ke itne saalon tak chudne ke baad bhi maa ki chut har dam tight hi rehti thi... shayad maa future me kisi ke liye apne aap ko bacha kar rakhna chahti ho .. agar aisa hai to mujhe nahi pata kis ke liye...

abb jab main 25 age me hoon aur maa ki un dino ki yaadon me khoya hua hoon... to mann hi nahi bhar raha dil chah raha hai maa ki tareef karte karte story ki saari update bhar doon.. maa ki khoob-soorti aur un ke sharir ki quality ke baare me sab bata doon lekin sab kuch abi nahi bata sakta... wo tab bataonga jab maa mere lund se chud rahi hogi... abhi bohat der hai us se pehle meri teen titliyan mujhe nahi chhodne wali..."all reader just imagine karen "

kaisa manzar hoga wo jab mera jaisa ladka bada hoga.. jo chudaai ka shoq nahi rakhta aur meri titliyan mujhe chudaai ke liye force karengi... ya shayad tab tak waqt mujhe chudaai ka chaska laga de...

maine introduction me kuch special detail nahi maa ke ilawa kisi ki ...

maa ki khoob-soorti ka thoda sa detail intro maine de diya hai

ab meri baaki ki teeno titliyon ka intro na do to ziyadti hogi..

akhir-kaar kahani ke hero ki behne hain sab se zayada haq un ka hi banta hai..
incest kahani me maa aur behno ko chodne se badh kar maza bhi kahi aur nahi milta naa...

maine maa ki tareef to kar di abb aati hai baari meri titlion ki

to main bata raha tha ke maine teeno titliyon kokai baar nanga dekha tha mere saamne kapde badalna un ke liye aam baat thi.. bara aur panty badalna bhi aam baat hai un ke jism ke har ang ko main kareeb se dekh chuka hoon. un ke gaand aur chut ko dekh aur touch kar chuka hoon lekin vasna main nahi .. abhi tak mere andar vasna nahi bedaar hui thi.. itna to mera control tha khud par...

priya to mere hathon me badi hui usay to main shuru se aksar nanga dekhta aa raha hoon. waqt ke saath saath priya ke badan me jo jo tabdeeliyan aati ja rahi thee sab mere saamne hi the..

jhanvi aur shuruti shuru shuru me mere saamne kapde badalte huye jhijhak feel karti thee lekin priya ko dekh kar aur mujhe dekh kar apni jhijhak khatam kardi .shuruti aur jhanvi ko meri ankhon me kabhi bhi gandgi nazar nahi aai is liye jald hi wo mere saamne kuhl gai... shuruti aur jhanvi jab yahan laai gai thee to un ke boobs chote chote the lekin priya ke tab bhi un dono se bade the...

do saal itni speed se nahi guzre jitni speed se priya shuruti aur jhanvi badi hoti gai un teeno ke boobs aur gaand ki uthaan bohat hi ghazab naak hoti ja rahi thee..

baaki ki tareef meri titliyon ki baad me..

(mujhe lagta hai kahi main underage rules ke khilaf to nahi jara...)

rekha baai teeno ladkiyon ko dekh kar maa se bohat khush thee ke maa ne teeno ladkiyon ki achi care ki hai ...

ab aage batata hoon

ye do saal bagga ke musalsal hamlon ki waja se tention me hi guzar gaye .. main kuch bhi nahi kar paya... main apne aap ko is kabil nahi bana paaya. ke main apni maa aur behno ke liye kuch kar sakoon ...

bagga ke jail jane ke baad kuch sakoon hua.. lekin jaane kyun mujhe ye sakoon kuch acha nahi lag raha tha jaise toofan se pehle ki khamoshi hoti hai.. toofan ke ane par achanak se jab ye khamoshi toot'ti hai to sab kuch barbad kar ke rakh deta hai.. mujhe bhi ye khamoshi kuch aisi hi lag rahi thi.

abb maine thaan liya tha ke boht waqt barbaad kar liya ab kuch karna chahiye. yahan reh kar main kuch nahi kar sakta tha.. mujhe yahan se jaana hoga kisi doosre door daraz ke shehar me. wahan se kuch ban kar lauton. yahan reh kar main kuch nahi ban paonga.

waqt muthi me band ret ki tarha mere hath se nikalta ja raha tha.. pehle hum teen the abb paanch hog aye the. akhir mere hi kehne par maa ne jhanvi aur shuruti ko yahan par rakha tha.. jhanvi aur shuruti mujhse ek saal badi thee aur priya ek saaal choti. priya ki itni tention nahi jitni abb mujhe jhanvi aur shuruti ko le kar hone lagi thi...

main aksar aisi hi socho me gum rehne laga. maa mujhse poochti tum aaj kal kin socho me gum ho. abb maa ko kya batata sab to jaanti thi phir bhi pochti rehti thi.

ek baat aur bata doon maa ko mujh par aur mera jo unse pyar hai us par poora bharosa tha. lekin main unko yahan se nikal kar le jaonga ispar yakeen nahi tha maa ko. meri poori zindagi yahin pe guzar gai thi. maine inti maar khai thi ke daring aur zidd mere andar koot koot kar bhari hui thi. lekin har jagah zidd aur daring kaam nahi aati. banda aleka ho to har kisam ke khatre me kood sakta hai lekin agar us ke saath narm-o-nazuk badan wali aurtein hoon to faqat daring kaam nahi aati. daring ke saath taqat aur zahanat bhi honi zaroori hoti hai.
aur ladne ka fun to lazmi hona chahiye..

inti si age me main ye sab baatein seekh gaya tha. lekin koi raasta nazar me nahi tha. rasta dikhane wala chahiye ya khud dhoondna chahiye. yahan kothe par reh kar to mujhe na to koi rasta dikhane wala mil sakta tha. na main khud dhoond sakta tha. mujhe yahan se bhagna hoga. lekin phir mere peeche agar kuch ho gaya to. kahin rekha baai ne maa ya meri behno me se kisi ko kahi bech diya to. mera city chhod kar jana kis kaam ka. aisi hi baatein mera damag kharab karti rehti thi.

badi himmat aa gai thi mujh me main kisi se darta nahi. dard ko bardasht karne ki to mujhe adat si ho gai thi. rekha baai se poora shehar darta tha. lekin main nahi. mujhe agar rekha se darr tha to apni aur behno ko le kar tha. rekha baai un ke saath kuch na kar de bas uahi darr tha.

mazeed ek mahina isi socho me guzar gaya. kya karoon bhagon ya na bhaagon .

yahan reh kar apni maa aur behno ki zindagi bhi barbad hote nahi dekh sakta tha aur yahan se jane ke baad peeche jaane kya ho ye darr bhi tha .

ek mahine me itna damag kharab hua. ke poocho hi matt.. damag ki maa hi chud gai thi....

isi stress me main bimar ho gaya

ek hafte tak bistar par pada raha. maa aur behne mera khayal rakhti rahi. lekin mere dard ko kaise jaan paati .

jab meri bimari chali gai to main ek baar phir se khud ko mazboot banane laga. mujhe yahaan se jaana ho ga jo hoga dekha jayega shayad bhagwan aur waqt ne mere baare kuch acha soch rakha ho.

maine mann bana liya mujhe jaana hai to jaana hai. abb aur kuch nahi sochna. mere irade ko ek din rekha baai ne pakka kar diya...

priya ke badhti umar us ke shabaab ke charche maa ki tarha hi bazaar me har kisi ki zaban par hone lage. oppar se kambakht priya khoob-soorat to thi hi naach aur awaz me muaamle me maa se bhi do haath aage nikal gai. rekha baai ko maa ke baad priya ki shakal me apne kothe ka future nazar aane laga..

ek din wo aisi hi baaten maa se kar rahi thi.. maa bechari rekha baai ki haan me haan milaye ja rahi thi.. rekha baai bohat khush thi.. saali ko tamash-beeni ka kuch zayada hi nasha tha. ladkiyon ka mujra karana usay bohat pasand tha. pata nahi haramzaadi ne itna paisa kama kar kahan le jane the...

us din rekha baai ke priya bare irade jaan kar main andar tak hill gaya matlab 6 saal. phir priya bhi yahin reh kar maa ki tarha chud jayegi.

main bahar apne dost paanwale ke paas chala gaya usse kuch baat cheet hui. ek baar phir se mumbai se door kaun kaun se shehar hain us par baat ki. maine apne dost ajit bhai ko bhi abhi tak nahi bataya tha ke main aajkal kya soch raha hoon .

us se detail le kar main ghar aa gaya .

kuch der baad main maa ke kamre main gaya to maa kamre me nahi thi. meri titliyan khana kha rahi thee. main bhi un ke saath hi beth gaya wo mujhe khana khilane lagi sab baari baari mujhe khila rahi thee. hamara pyar har guzarte din ke saath badhta hi ja raha tha. thodi der lagi khana khatam hua sab ne bartan side hata mujhe khana shuru kar diya. ye un ki routine me shamil ho gaya tha jab bhi teeno mujhe ek sath milti mujhe pakad kar meri haalat kahrab kar deti. choom choom kar mere gaal geele kar deti teeno thodi si hi age me bohat bigad gai the.. wo sab kuch mere saath karti jin ki detail abhi nahi bata sakta. kahin phirse wahi underage rules ke against na jaye. lekin itna bhi nahi. jo aap soch rahe hain sirf masti aur is se badh aur kuch nahi(is masti me full nudity bhi shamil hai) wo teeno to mere saath bohat kuch karna chahti thi lekin me is kaam se door tha. pata nahi teeno aaps me kuch zayada karti thee ya nahi. lekin mere saath limit me rehti thi raat to yahan humen ek saath sone ki ijazat nahi thi mera kamra hamesha hi alag rehta tha. aur waisi bhi wo raat der dhande me maa ke sath masroof rehti thee.. wo naach seekh rahi thee. tamash-beeno ke samne nachti nahi thee. lekin abb pichle kuch mahino se wo bhi haal me beth'ti thee rekha baai ke sakht orders the. akhir future me rekha baai ko in teeno ko bhi apne saath apne dhande pe lagana tha to taining ka ye bhi ek hissa tha.. roz raat ko haal me rehna.

masti me mere kadpe ke saath saath apne kapde bhi utaar deti thi. lekin aaj nai kyunki darwaza khula tha koi bhi kisi bhi waqt aa sakta tha. miane un teeno ko side hataya. maa ka poocha kahan hai .

priya ... bethi ho kisi ke paas itni to ladkiyan hain yahan pe..

maine aap ko ek baat nahi bataai jahan jitni ladkiyan hain hamari un se baat cheet hoti rehti hai meri bhi kai ladkiyon se baat cheet hai kuch zayada badi age ki bhi hai. un ke sath bhi baat cheet hoti rehti hai lekin maine un ka zikr story main nahi kiya. un ka zikr is story me zarooti nahi is liye maine un ka zikr nahi kiya aur waesi bhi un ke zikr se story aur lambi ho jati aur un ka story se koi lena dena bhi nahi... ye matt sochna aap log ke maine apni maa aur behno ki madad ke liye apni itni feeling share ki hain to us ko bhi is daldal se nikalne ke baare maine koi bat kyun nahi ki.

hum paanch hain humen apni aap ko is daldal se nikalne ke liye najane kitne papad belne padenge. main apni maa aur behen ko hi yahan s e sarfe nikal kar le jaaon ye bhi bohat badi baat hai. baaki sab ko is daldal se nikalne ke liye ye koi fantasy story nahi hai ke hero ek chutki bajaye aur poora ka poora kotha apni jaga se invisible ho kar fantasy hero ke basement me muntqil ho jaye.

sorry its not possible here.
i can't save other women or girls.

agar waqt ne saath diya aur kuch karne ke kaabil hua. to mujhe jahan jahan kothe nazar aye ujaad kar rakh doonga. aur kothe ko chalane waliyon ko main maaronga nahi un ka wo hashar karoonga ke jab tak zinda rahengi. wo yahi sochti rahengi ke is janam me unho ne kothe pe dhande ka karobaar kar ke apne is janam ki sab se badi galti kardi.
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kuch der aise hi sochte-2 guzar gai. maa bhi ab behtar lag rahi thi.

vijay .... baaji rone se kya hoga agar himmat na ki to baaki ki zindagi bhi aise hi rote guzar jayegi. pehle aap akeli thi aur koi aap ka sahara nahi ban paaya tha. is liye aap yahan majboor ho kar khud ko barbad hone se bacha na paai.

lekin abb main hoon na aap ke saath. hum dono ko mil kar priya, shuruti aur jhanvi ko yahan se nikalna hai. baaji aap sun rahi hain na meri baat. kuch saal aur bardasht karlo. bhagwan ne chaha to hum yahan se nikal jayenge. koshish karne se hi kuch ho sakta hai. aapko himmat rakhni chahiye.

main yahan se jane ke baad ajit bhai se aap sab ki khariyat janta rahoonga.
kabhi bhi agar meri zaroorat padi to main aa jaonga. lekin mera jaana zaroori hai. aap apne dil ko mazboot bana len.

maa meri sun khush bhi thi. udaas bhi thi. darri hui bhi lag rahi thi. ek saath rehne se hosla mitla rehta hai. mere jaane se wo akeli pad jayegi. yahi soch us ki himmat tootne lagti thi............

"ek thandi gehri saans lete huye maa ne mujhe gale laga liya aur lagi mere poore chehre ko choomne. kuch der aise hi mere chehre ko choomne ke baad maa mujhse alag hui. unki aankhen phir se nam ho gai thee...... "

maa ..... 14 saal ho gaye hian vijju beta dukh dard jhelte jhelte sehte sehte andar se khokhli ho gai hoon (ik gehri saans lete huye) kuch saal aur sahi. tu ja mera beta, jaa aur "himmat-wala" ban kar aa hum sab tera intezar karenge. hum sab ki duayen tere saath hain. lekin beta har dum apna khayal rakhna ye kabhi na bhoolna ke tu yahan hum sab ko is qaid me chhod kar ja raha hai. agar tujhe kuch hua to tere saath saath 4 aur bhi marengi ye yaad rakhna.
hum sab saath hain to zinda hain.....warna zindagi me aur kuch hai nahi hamara.

abb mujh me aur bolne ki himmat nahi hai. abb apni behno ko tujhe khud hi sambhalna hoga. main nahi unse bat kar sakti. priya ka kya haal hoga. jab usay tere jaane ka pata chalega. tu khud hi un teeno se baat kar.

maa ne teeno billiyon ko mere hawale kar diya aur main maa ka chehra dekhne laga. maa ka chehre par jo kuch der pehle jo dard aur mujhse bichdne ke bhav the abb teeno billiyon ko "maine manana hai" is baat ko le kar sharart ke bhav dikh rahe the. main itni jaldi maa ke chehre ke bhav badalte dekh heran reh gaya. par maa ko to dard sehne ki adat pad chuki thi. unke liye khud ko control karna bhi aata tha. wo abb ankhon me sharat liye mujhe dekh rahi thi. main bhi hadbada gaya.

vijay ... baaji main un teeno se kaise baat karoonga. wo aap ki baat jaldi samajh jati hain. mujhse ye hona mushkil hai. please aap meri help karden unko manane me.

maa ..... (hanste huye)na na ye tera kaam hai tu khud hi kar. bohat der ho gai hai abb tu ja kar kundi khol de kisi ko koi shak na ho jaye. tu yahan se khamoshi se jana kisi ko bhanak na padne dena.

phir maine door ki kundi khol bahar chala gaya. apni billiyon se phir kabhi kisi munasab time dekh kar baat karne ka soch kar main bazaar ke liye nikal gaya.

aaj bohat din ke baad mujhe apne andar ka mahol kuch halka phulka sa lag raha tha. maa se apne jaane ki baat karna aasan nahi tha. maa maan bhi gai thi. mere jaane ke liye. aur maa ne khud ko sambhal bhi liya tha. aaj bohat din baad mujhe bazaar ke mahol me ghutan kuch kam mehsoos ho rahi thi.

"...........shayad mere jaane ka waqt aa gaya tha.............."

main chalte huye ajit bhai ki dukaan par chala gaya. is waqt wo akela hi tha apni dukaan par. miane ye moka sahi jaana aur ajit bhai ki dukaan ke andar chala gaya. ajit bhai mujhe dukan me dekh khush ho gaye.

ajit bhai.... arre bijay aaj kuch khaas hai kya bohat badla badla lag rha hai.

vijay ....... haan ajit bhai aaj sach me kuch badla hua hai.

ajit bhai.... mujhe bata, sab theek to hai naa..

vijay ....... han ajit bhai sab theek hi hai. kuch baat karni thi aap se.

ajit bhai ... haan haan bolo, kya kehna hai. mujhe bataao.

vijay ....... ajit bhai ek kaam tha aapse. kaise kahoon kaam ajeeb bhi hai, aur khatarnaak bhi...

ajit bhai ... aisi kya baat ho gai, tu aaj badi ajeeb ajeb batein kar raha hai,baat ko ghuma mat seedhe seedhe bol, kaisa kaam, aur kaisa khatra...

vijay ....... (dheeme lehje me ) ajit bhai main yahan se nikalne ki soch raha hoon .

ajit bhai ... (shocked) kyaaaaaaa

vijay ....... ajit bhai please apni awaz dheemi rakaho marwao gay kya...

ajit bhai ... (awaz down) haan kyun jana chahta hai aur kahan jana chahta hai .

vijay ....... ajit bhai aap to sab jaante hain meri maa aur behne yahan kitni majboor hain. maa ye sab majboori me kar rahi hai. aur abb to priya bhi badi ho rahi hai. agar maine kuch na kiya to priya ko bhi rekha baai barbaad kar degi..

(thoda sa detail intro ajit bhai ke baare me...)

ajit bhai ki zindagi bhi achi nahi guzri hai jab wo 15 saal ke the. to in ke chacha ne inke maata pita ko maar kar ajit bhai ko ghar se nikal diya tha.
ajit bhai ke pita ke paas 30 acre zameen thi. us zameen ke laach me ajit bhai ke chacha ne ajit bhai ke maata pita ko maar diya tha. in ki ek behen bhi thi jis ki age us time 13 sal thi. jab ajit bhai ko ghar se nikala gaya tha, tab ajit bhai ki behen ghar me nahi thi wo apni saheli ke ghar gai hui thi. ajit bhai dar-ba-dar bhatakte huye mumbai pohnch gaye, yahan reh kar khud ko kaabil banaya aur 20 saal ki age me apne ghar gaye, to pata chala ke us ke chacha to kab ke ghr aur zameen bech kar kahin chale gaye, ajit bhai ko apni behen ka bohat gham tha, 2 saal tak kai shehron me dhoondte rahe,lekin behen nahi mili, thak haar kar phir se mumbai a gaye, aur inki zindagi me maalti naam ki ladki aa gai wo bhi be-sahara thi to, dono ne shadi karli, tabse wo yahi reh kar life guzar rahe hai,)


ajit bhai (paanwala) age: 35 saal
maalti (wife) age: 34 saal
shikha beti age: ....
roopa beti age: ....
raaj beta age: ....

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ajit bhai ... (kuch der mujhe dekhte rahe) "bole" maine khud se kai bar socha tha tumse ye baat karon lekin darr lagta tha kahin kisi ko bhanak bhi pad gai to rekha baai mujhe aur meri family ko maar de gi. is liye darta tha tumse baat karte huye. sach kahoon to mujhe tum ko dekh kar kabhi bhi nahi laga tu yahan ki zindagi ka hissa ban sakta hai. is liye sochta tha ke tum ko kuch aur karne ka mashwara doon lekin dar lagta hai tha. abb tu khud hi yahan se jaana chahta hai to is se achi baat kya hogi. lekin tere jaane ke baad teri maa aur behne un ka kya hoga.

vijay .... abb jaana to hai hi aur jaana zaroori bhi hai. jaaon ga nahi to kaabil kaise banoon ga. aur kaabil nahi bana to maa aur behne rull jayengi.
is liye himmat to karni padegi naa. baaki sab bhagwan jane.

agar bhagwan ne hum sab ki zindagi aise hi sisakte kuchalte huye likhi hai. to hum kya kar sakte hain. aur bhi najane kitni zindagiyan yahan sisak sisak kar khatam ho gai. aur kai yahan par apni saanson ki dor thamne ka intezar kar rahi hain.

lekin maine abhi himmat nahi haari, abhi meri saansein chal rahi hain....

"jab tak saans tab tak aas"

mian jaaon ga yahan se wapis aane ke liye dekhte hain bhagwan ne mere aur meri family ke liye kiya likh rakha hai...

ajit bhai aap apna mobile number kabhi band mat karna. main aap se raabte me rahunga. yahan kuch bhi gadbad ho to aap mujhe bana dena. aur haan ajit bhai bhabhi ka number bhi mujhe de do, kabhi aap ka number band hua to main bhabhi ke numbar par call kar lunga...

ajit bhai .... chal theek hai jitna mujhse hua utna main karoonga.

vijay ...... ajit bhai kisi ko pata na chalne dena mera aap se raabta hai, warna rekha baai ka kuch pata nahi maa aur meri behno ke sath kya kare. aur aaap ke liye khatra ho sakta hai, ho sakta hai mere jaane ke baad wo aap se ye poochhen ke main kahan gaya hoon..

ajit bhai ... main sawdhan rahunga tum bhi koi plan bana kar niklo yahan se aise hi na bhaag jana.

vijay ...... kuch na kuch to sochna padega. acha abb main chalta hoon.

ajit bhai se baat karke acha bhi laga aur darr bhi, yahan se jaana asaan nahi tha mere peeche reh jaane walon ke liye situation achi nahi thi, ajit bhai ke liye bhi khatra ho sakta tha. kahi main apne chakkar me ajit bhai ki khush-haal family ke liye khatra na jaon. ye sab bhi ho sakta tha, rekha baai koi aam aurat to thi nahi aur na hi usay kisi par daya aati thi. agar usay zara bhi bhanak pad gai ke ajit bhai mere baare kuch jante hain. to rekha baai ajit bhai to kutton ke aage daal degi.


aise hi sochta hua main apne daldali thikane par pohnch g
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bhai log bohat mehnat karni padhti hai update ko likhne me ....... aur jis tarha ki ye story hai ...
khud wroter ko bhi rona pad jata hai .... jab writer story ke character me khud ghus nahi jaaata .. tab tak wo wo sahi se scene ko create nahi kar satka..

maine apni poori koshish ki hai update ko aap sab ke liye special banane ki ....
abb pata nahi main kitna kaamiyaab hua hoon......ye to aap hi bata sakte hain...
appke keemti replies ka wait rahega......


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Bhai ek dum faadu update diye hain ye bs yaar afsos is baat ka tumhare sath nahi chal paya q ki main late aaya ๐Ÿ˜”aur story complete hain ab ๐Ÿ˜” aur bhai bhut he shaandar update hain apke maja aa gaya padh ke ab to aage ke liye control nahi ho raha hain kaise vo marega sabko kaise bachayega I hope shayad uski behno ko vo sab na sahena pade jo uski maa ne saha hain
 
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Bhai ek dum faadu update diye hain ye bs yaar afsos is baat ka tumhare sath nahi chal paya q ki main late aaya ๐Ÿ˜”aur story complete hain ab ๐Ÿ˜” aur bhai bhut he shaandar update hain apke maja aa gaya padh ke ab to aage ke liye control nahi ho raha hain kaise vo marega sabko kaise bachayega I hope shayad uski behno ko vo sab na sahena pade jo uski maa ne saha hain
Thanks Bhai......๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
ise jaldi khatam kar len bhai.. fir isi story ke jaisi ek dusri story bhi shuru kiye kuch din hue han.. abhi uski 5 updates hi post hui han... HIMAMT WALA ke liye aap mere sath nahi jud paaye to kya hua bhai... TAWAIFZADA jo keh isse bhi badhkar hai, uske sath jud sakte han ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™โค๏ธโค๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ
 

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