Thriller Hotel Royal Palace (Completed)

[Rahul]

wonderfull update bhai ji

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB

 

[Adirshi]

Agla update aaj shaam ko

 

[Chinturocky]

Behtareen thriller story hai. Kya aapne hi EK QTARA ISHQ likhi thi. Agar ha to please ek aur romantic story likhe. Wo kamal ki love story thi.

 

[Adirshi]

Pahla murder to mil gaya... Doosra kon tapak gaya .... Ladki kon thi ye bhi pata na chala mere ko laga tha ki iss ladki ke sath elu elu karega apn ajit ... Par ladki ke to chitde udd gaye
Ajit pe chali goliyon ka raaz bhi samne aa gaya hai.... Gajab ka gunfight likha bhai
Aab police investigation aur 2nd murder ka dekhna hai... Inn sab ke beech uss hotel malik ko to bhool hi gaye... Usne milne bulaya tha ajit ko vo bhi bilkul time pe....
Awesome update Waiting for more

sabra mere dost dusre khoon ka bhi jald hi pata chalega aur ladkiya to aur bhi hai kahani main aap bas aise hi sath bane rahiye

 

[Adirshi]

First congrats bro for new story..mystery story. Matlb suspense with thrill.. Sahi hai.
Bas bhai kuch words padhne mai samj nhi aa rha , uspe dhayan de lo
like-sarkar ke dhorno. Ye dhorno kya hota hai.

thank you bhai

sarkar ke dhoran yani goverment policy yaha reservation system se iska arth lagaya ja sakta hai ki uski wajah se ajit ke junior bhi usse aage nikal gaye

 

[Adirshi]

Awesome update.
Ummid ke wo ladki hamlawaro ke goli ka shikar ho gayi . Ajeet bhi baal baal bacha . Hamlawar bhi hath se nikal gaya tagdi planning se kiya gaya tha. Par ek baat khatak rahi hai lamba kaha wo sawaym milne wala tha ajit se aur ajit waha hai ye usko hi pata tha . Ye gjatna jaha huyi waha pahle aisi ghatna na hoti thi to kisi bade shadyantra ki boo aa rahi hai

dekhte hai aage ki aapki soch kitni sahi hoti hai

 

[Adirshi]

wonderfull update bhai ji

Thank you bhaiji

 

[Adirshi]

SuperB

thank you

 

[Adirshi]

agla update kuch hi palo main