Thriller Hotel Royal Palace (Completed)

[Adirshi]

Bhai sabse pahle to maafi chahunga.... Exams ki vajah se aakhiri ke kuch updates pe review nhi de paaya...
For one more successful story.... Aur ye last vali se kahi jyada behtar hai..... Thrill se bharpur this ye story aur beech mein kuch comic scenes ne acha compliment kiya puri story ko...

Vaise ye baat jab regular update padh raha tha tab nhi aayi mere man mein par aab jab 5-6 update ek sath padhe to aisa laga ki agar story ko time based episodes mein likhte to aur jyada maza aata. Matlab ki har event se pahle upar day and time likhte (Aaj kal ye movies and serials mein hota hai jaha pe time limit hoti hai)... For example:- Thursday 12:30 PM (How many hours remaining) and then uske niche event jo event hua hai 12:30 pe vo likhte..
Isse story ke sath sath jo remaining time baar baar dikhta usse bhi additional thrill milta... Aur events ke pahle day time hone pe jo reader ek sath story read karte hai unke liye aasan ho jata hai...

Par jo bhi ho ye ek shaandar classic detective plot pe likhi hui story hai aur aapne iss story ko utna hi acha narrate kiya hai... Bina photos ke bhi puri hotel, anthapur etc etc... ki mere man mein ek clear image banadi hai aapne

Agli story likho tab mujhe ping jarur karna

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai kahani ko itna support karne ke liye aur aapka sujhav jaroor dhayan main rakhunga agli thriller likhte samay air filhal to mohabbatein resume karke use complete karna hai baad main kuch nayi kahani ke bare main sochenge

 

[Adirshi]

update 2 padh liya
ajit ke baare me kuch baate pata chali jese ki sarkari nokri se voh private investigator bana
saath me uske yaha aane ka reason bhi pata chala
aage padhta hu kya hota hai

update 3, jyada toh kuch nahi kahunga
acha update tha
3 updates hone ke baad bhi story me kuch khaas nahi hua, aisa laga maano ek update ek person ka intro dene ke liy hai
lekin ek dilschasp baat bhi hui, lamba ka phone karke ajit ko apne hotel bulana..yeh baat mere samaj me nahi aa rahi hai
yaa toh yaha par kuch jhol hai yaa toh fir kuch aisa hai toh lamba shayad pehle se jaante hai
anyways yeh toh next update me hi pat chalega

Dhanyawaad milan bhai reviews ke liye jyada to nahi kahunga par itna hi jaise jaise aap kahani ko padhenge wo aur samajh main aati jayengi, kuch update aise hai jo jaruri hai par padhne main itna maja na aaye aur kuch main bahut kuch hai....

 

[Adirshi]

Bahot hi shandar suruwat huyi hai kahani ki...
revo kal se
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thank you very much aur revo ka intajar rahega

 

[Adirshi]

Awesome story
no words



we will wait for Ajit Deshmukh

keep writing Keep posting

Thank you so much bhai aur ajit deshmukh jald hi lautega ek naye case ke sath

 

[Naina]

Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye the.. ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...
Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
thrill aur suspense ki anokhi sangam ke sath sath romance ko bhi thodi bahot jagah di hai aapne... kuch cheejo se dhire dhire raaz ka parda hat rahe the par thrill aisi ki akhir tak suspense bane rahe ... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe the .. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi thi.. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu ki sath....
Khair..... Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills....
aise hi likhte rahiye Adirshi ji aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye

 

[Adirshi]

Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye the.. ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...
Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
thrill aur suspense ki anokhi sangam ke sath sath romance ko bhi thodi bahot jagah di hai aapne... kuch cheejo se dhire dhire raaz ka parda hat rahe the par thrill aisi ki akhir tak suspense bane rahe ... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe the .. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi thi.. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu ki sath....
Khair..... Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills....
aise hi likhte rahiye Adirshi ji aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye

Thank You So Much for the review aur aage bhi aisi kahaniya aati rahengi

 

[Milan2010]

update 4, jyada toh kuch nahi tha iss update me
kuch jagah par sentence framing ki galti lagi, uske alawa baaki sab sahi tha
madhuri sen, iske laapata hone ke silsile me ajit ko bulaya gaya hai
let' see aage kya hota hai

 

[Milan2010]

update 5, kaafi thrill bhara update tha..lekin muje aisa laga jese thoda jaldbaazi me likha gaya hai
agar thoda aur details rehti toh yeh abtak ka best update hota
bura naa maanna bhai..muje jo laga voh kaha
anyways yeh ladki kaun thi aur gaadi me murder kiska hua hai..??
4 goliya chali hai..toh ab dekhna yeh hai ki iska kya rahasya hai
aage padhta hu

 

[Milan2010]

update 6
well written updates
toh 2 goli chalne ke hisab toh mil gaya aur khoon usi ladki ka hua yeh bhi use maalum chal gaya
lekin ladki kaun thi aur voh lamba ke bunglow me kyu aayi thi yeh rahashya hai
kahi yeh ladki voh toh nahi jiska pata lagane ajit aaya hai..yaa fir lamba ki gf ya wife...??
ji hisab se voh ladki ajit ko lamba ke baare me bata rahi thi uss hisab se meko kuch gadbad lag rahi hai
aur yeh lamba...yeh muje kuch thik nahi lag raha hai

 

[Milan2010]

update 7
madhuri sen, meko bhi yahi laga tha ki isi ladki ka khoon hua hai
lekin ab sawaal aata hai kyu..??
inspector bhave aur ingle ke saath ajit ki baatchit ko khub ache se darshaya hai
good update