bhut zabardast but story main apni gand dekha k na bhag jana jesy baki sab karty hain
Pahle to apko badhai Accha start kara aur apki ye pahli story hai... Maine abhi ise padna shuru kara hai... Aur yahi tak padi....Update 6
Ting tong ting tong bail baj rahi thi ….
Ganesh ne bail suni to wo ghabra gaya usko laga kahi police to nahi aa gayi usne shabana ko hilaya jo ki lagbhag behoshi ki halat me thi ..
G..are uth Sali dekh kaun aaya hai darwaze par kaun ho sakta hai
Shabana bhi hosh me aayi aur usne bhi bail ki awaz suni …shabana ghabrate hue apni salwar pahan ne lagi Ganesh bhi uski salwar pahen ne me madat karne laga shabana ne salwar pahan kar burqa niche liya jisse uski phati salwar ka pata nahi chala..
G..kaun ho sakta hai bata
S..Dheemi awaz me shayad mere shauhar honge wo isi waqt aate hai ..
G..dekh Sali agar tere pati ko kuch bataya to uski lash giregi samjhi
Shabana kuch nahi boli wo ladkhadate hue darwaze ki taraf gayi usne darwaza khola samne Afzal ko dekh kar uske jan me jan aayi…
A..kya hua shabana darwaza kholne me itni der kar di aur tumhara chehra aesa kyu hai jaise tum roi ho
S..wo mai..mai.. itna bolkar shabana khayalo me kho gayi
Shabana ko laga kyu na Afzal ko sab bata du .. fir use ganesh ka wo bhayanak kala badbudar chehra nazar aaya aankho ke samne aur uske hath ka wo chaku …
A..kya hua shabana kaha kho gayi ….
S.. wo mai ..mai.. meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi hai isliye so gayi thi
A.. chalo DR.ke pas jate hai
S.. nahi uski koi zaroorat nahi aap fresh ho jaye mai chai lati hu
Shabana ko ladkhadata chalta dekh Afzal ne kaha
A..kya hua shabana aesa kyu chal rahi ho kya jyada tabiyat kharab hai
S.. nahi halki se kamjori hai thik ho jayegi
Kya bolti bechari abhi abhi 10inch ka kala naag uski chut me ghusa tha Afzal nahi aata to uski choot ki band baj jati aaj ….ganesh chup kar shabana aur afzal ki bate sun raha tha ..afzal ke bathroom me jate hi ganesh store room me chala gaya..
Ganesh ke chehre par ek ghinauni smile aa gayi usko shabana ne apne pati se jo bacha liya tha
Afzal fresh ho kar aaya tab tak shabana ne burqa utarkar apni phati hua salwar change kar li thi
Afzal ne chai pi kuch bate ki aur TV par news channel on kar ke news dekhne laga..
Shabana ne socha apne shauhar ko bata deti hu kyu mai akele ye bhoj ye taqleef sahu jo hoga dekha jayega aakhir wo mere shauhar meri hifazat uski zimmedari hai..aur us kamine ne fir se meri izzat lutni chahi to mai kya karungi Afzal bhi kahega bad me mujhe kyu nahi bataya…
Chalo mai Afzal ko bata deti hu jo hoga dekha jayega …jaise hi shabana Afzal ke pas gayi jo TV dekh raha tha news channel waha jate hi TV par dikhayi diya ussse shabana ki aankhe fati ki fati rah gayi news me News Anchor bata raha tha ..Shaher ke sabhi logo savdhan ye jo tasveer aap dekh rahe hai ye Ek bhayanak mujrim hai jo jail se bhaga hua hai police usko dhund rahi hai aap logo ka police ko support cahyiye ye aapko jaha bhi dikhe is helpline no.par call kare ye behad khatarnak mujrim hai jispar 13 qatal aur 8 balatkar ke jurm hai aap apne ghar me satark rahe ..
Naam .Ganesh urf ganya age 55 rang kala hight 5.10
Shabana ka to hal bura ho gaya ye news dekh kar Afzal ko jo batane ki himmat karke aayi thi wo ab khatam ho gayi thi usne socha use bhi jyada khatarnak criminal ko usne apne ghar me panah de di thi majburi me shabana me to jaise jaan hi nahi bachi thi
A.. aao shabana accha hua tum aa gai mai tumhare pas hi aa raha tha
S.. kyu kya hua Afzal
A..News dekhi tumne hamare shaher me koi darinda mujrim ghus aaya hai mai to din bhar office me rahta hu tum ghar ko acchae se band kar ke raha karo hume koi risk nahi leni
S..G maine bhi news dekhi ..shabana aesa kahte waqt uski juban uska sath nahi de rahi thi usko lag raha tha jaise usko chakkar aa jayega
S..mai Hoshiyar rahungi aap fikar na kare
A.. ok jaan khana nikalo mujhe bhook lagi hai
S..G abhi lagati hu
Dono ne khana khaya aur kuch der bad shabana dari dari ghar ke kaam kar ke bedroom me jakar sone lagi waha Afzal all ready leta hua tha …shabana ko laga Afzal ko bata hi deti hu kab tak ye bhoj mai sahu…
S..Afzal mai tumse kuch kahna chahti hu
A. ha bolo jaan kya hua
S..shabana ne rote rote sab bate Afzal ko bata di aur sukun mehsus kiya..
Shabana ki bate sunte hi Afzal ki aankho me khoon utar aaya wo ghusse se store room ki taraf bada shabana bhi rote rote uske piche bhagi
A.. aaj us kamine ki mai jaan lekar rahunga usne tumhare jo kiya uska badla lunga
S.Ruk jayiye wo bahot khatarnak hai uske pas chaku bhi hai wo mujrim hai aap uska samna nahi kar sakte
A..jo kuch bhi hoga dekha jayega aaj mai usko nahi chodunga
Itna kahte hi Afzal ne store room ka darwaza khola jo bunglow ke niche tahkhane jaise room me tha
Darwaza khulte hi Ganesh ek phati hue chadar par soya hua tha aur wo darwaze ki awaz se uth gaya Afzal ne jate hi us par attack kiya lekin Afzal galat sabit hua ganesh ek peshewar mujrim tha usne Afzal ko ek hi war me patak diya jisse Afzal zakhmi hua Afzal ke girte hi ganesh uske sine par chad ke baith gaya…ye nazara shabana dekh rahi thi usme bhi himmat aayi usne bhag kar ganesh ke balo ko pakda ganesh ne ek hi zhatke me shabana ko dhakka diya wo dur ja giri …..
Ab ganesh ka gussa satwe aasman par tha usne apne pass ka chaku nikala aur Afzal ke sine me ghusa diya khoon ka fawwara utha aur Afzal ki cheekhh nikal ka rah gayi …
Ye dekh kar Shabana ne zor se Chekha Afzallllllllllllllll ……
A.. kya hua jaan tum nind me kyu cheekhi kya koi bura sapna dekha
S. man me ya khuda ye EK sapna tha shukar hai mai ganesh ke khilaf nahi ja sakti
Writer ki ek prob hoti hai jo mere sath bhi hai... Jab story likhte hai to sex hota hai ap ne agar jaise shabana ki life ka pahle introduction diya hota aur seduce banaya hota to ap se koi parshan nahi karta..... Aur ap jo likhna chahate hai.. Aur likh bhi rahe hai magar bich mai aisa koi cmmt aata hai... Ki ap story ko mod dete hai... Apne jo shuru mai socha hai likhte jao itna lamba padne ke bad sex nahi hua... Woh isliye ap likhte likhte aur logo ke cmmt pad kar story change kar dete hai... Jaise mere sath nazbeen bahak gayi... Intzar... Aur Iran ki kahani mai hua tha par maine jaldi us par focas kar ke kahani ko loose hone nahi diya.... Phir bhi apke pass lagatar cmmt Aa rahe hai.... Ye apke liye bahot khushi ki baat hai.....Dost main aap say agreed hun is matter main lakin kya hay kay Aurat khas tur pay yaha sub continent kee aurtoo main aak musla hay khoof or apni ezat kay hawa is kahani main Ganesh nai sub say pahlay uss koo sadeed khoof say jasay demagi or jismani tuur pay maflooj kurdeya thaa apnay soher kee jaan kaa khoof apni jaan ka khoof apni ezat kaa khoof woo kuch sochnay sumhjnay say hee mazoor huu gai pher uss nay aak dum trak budla or uss say naram lahjay main pass aakay uss kay khoof koo apni aak turha say dosti say budla or yea bhi jutata raha kay uss kee zaat say Shabana ko koi khatra nahi hay soo bunyadi tur pay woo sara waqt aak gharaloo aurat kay zahun say kheltay huway us ko apnay muqsad kay leya estamal kur raha hay maray khyal say jasay uss nay is new update main keya kay uss kee humdardi hasil kee bhai aurto kee kum eqli or bharosa kurnay kee adat is main sub say bara factor hay dekhay aagay kya huta hay
Kya bhai.... Ab ye nai id.... Mujhe shak to hua ki xossip wale lion hi ho.... Lekin story nahi padhi apki.... To yakin nahi hua.....Writer ki ek prob hoti hai jo mere sath bhi hai... Jab story likhte hai to sex hota hai ap ne agar jaise shabana ki life ka pahle introduction diya hota aur seduce banaya hota to ap se koi parshan nahi karta..... Aur ap jo likhna chahate hai.. Aur likh bhi rahe hai magar bich mai aisa koi cmmt aata hai... Ki ap story ko mod dete hai... Apne jo shuru mai socha hai likhte jao itna lamba padne ke bad sex nahi hua... Woh isliye ap likhte likhte aur logo ke cmmt pad kar story change kar dete hai... Jaise mere sath nazbeen bahak gayi... Intzar... Aur Iran ki kahani mai hua tha par maine jaldi us par focas kar ke kahani ko loose hone nahi diya.... Phir bhi apke pass lagatar cmmt Aa rahe hai.... Ye apke liye bahot khushi ki baat hai.....
bhut zabardast but story main apni gand dekha k na bhag jana jesy baki sab karty hain
Writer ki ek prob hoti hai jo mere sath bhi hai... Jab story likhte hai to sex hota hai ap ne agar jaise shabana ki life ka pahle introduction diya hota aur seduce banaya hota to ap se koi parshan nahi karta..... Aur ap jo likhna chahate hai.. Aur likh bhi rahe hai magar bich mai aisa koi cmmt aata hai... Ki ap story ko mod dete hai... Apne jo shuru mai socha hai likhte jao itna lamba padne ke bad sex nahi hua... Woh isliye ap likhte likhte aur logo ke cmmt pad kar story change kar dete hai... Jaise mere sath nazbeen bahak gayi... Intzar... Aur Iran ki kahani mai hua tha par maine jaldi us par focas kar ke kahani ko loose hone nahi diya.... Phir bhi apke pass lagatar cmmt Aa rahe hai.... Ye apke liye bahot khushi ki baat hai.....