Dosto meri pichhli story adhuri rahne ke baad maine soch liya tha ki ab main koi aur story start nahi karungi lekin abhi is forum par kuchh aisa ho raha hai jo mujhe achha nahi lag raha hai Dr. Chutiya gaye aur unke sath sath is forum par bahut si story ke writer bhi sath chhod gaye to mujhe laga ki shayad mujhe kosish karni chahiye isliye main ek nayi story start kar rahi hu jo meri nahi hai but main use mere andaaz me likhungi aur ummid karti hu ki ye aapko bhi pasand aayegi bahut se dosto ko yahi lagega ki main ek baar phir sabko ullu bana-ne ja rahi hu lekin plz mera yakeen kare is baar MANHOOS jaisa nahi hoga, phir bhi main aap sabke comments ka intzaar karungi yadi aap sabke comments positive rahe to hi ye story shuru hogi warna SIRAJ PATEL sahab hai na close karne ko.
Ab bas aapke comments ka intzaar hai
OK to mat padhoTumhari story ki hame koi zarurat nnahi hai.
Bhaar main jao tum aur timhari story
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nice start
thanksFor starting new story thread
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Dosto meri pichhli story adhuri rahne ke baad maine soch liya tha ki ab main koi aur story start nahi karungi lekin abhi is forum par kuchh aisa ho raha hai jo mujhe achha nahi lag raha hai Dr. Chutiya gaye aur unke sath sath is forum par bahut si story ke writer bhi sath chhod gaye to mujhe laga ki shayad mujhe kosish karni chahiye isliye main ek nayi story start kar rahi hu jo meri nahi hai but main use mere andaaz me likhungi aur ummid karti hu ki ye aapko bhi pasand aayegi bahut se dosto ko yahi lagega ki main ek baar phir sabko ullu bana-ne ja rahi hu lekin plz mera yakeen kare is baar MANHOOS jaisa nahi hoga, phir bhi main aap sabke comments ka intzaar karungi yadi aap sabke comments positive rahe to hi ye story shuru hogi warna SIRAJ PATEL sahab hai na close karne ko.
Ab bas aapke comments ka intzaar hai
Dekhte hai dost lekin pahle ye story ho jane do phir manhoos ko bhi aage badhati huAB LIKHNE KA SOCH HI LIYA HAI TO "MANHOOS" KO BHI COMPLETE KAR HI DO
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