Writer mahoday ye kahani kabhi puri hogi ya nahi agar nahi to hume aades de hum pura karndete haiUpdate 3-
abhi ke ghar pe . . . . . . .
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abhi:- mummy kitni der aur lagegi? mai to kab ka ready ho gaya hoon, 7 baj gaye hai, aunty aur rahul humara wait kar rahe honge jaldi karo na . . . . .
vanita:- ha raaja aati hoon thoda wait karo.
abhi:- man me(in auraton ko ready hone me itni der kyun lagti hai yaar)
itne me vanita apne kamre se bahar aati hai
abhi jab use dekhta hai to dekhta hi rah jata hai....
vanita bhi abhi ke is tarh khud ko dekhne se sharma jati hai
vanita:- raja aise kya dekh raha hai, mai thik to lag rahi hoon na?
abhi kuch nahi bolta aur bas use dekhe jata hai..
vanita:- bol na kaisi lag rahi hoon mai?
abhi:- ekdam kadak..........
abhi ko ekdam se apni galti ka ehsas hota hai ki ye usne kya keh diya..
abhi:- sorry mom vo galti se nikal gaya..
vanita:- aaj kal bohot shararti ho gaya hai tu ha.. ab chale nahi to der ho jayegi..
abhi:- ha ha chalo.....
abhi ki to mano jaan gale tak aa gayi thi.
abhi gadi nikalta hai aur vo rahul ke ghar ki aur nikal padte hai
raste bhar me abhi sirf vanita ko hi dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ye use kya ho raha hai apni mom ko dekh ke vo itna exite kyun ho raha hai? use khud bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, phir usne socha"chalo rahul ke ghar ja hi raha hoon to usise puch lunga, ek vohi hai jo meri help kar sakta hai"
aur thodi hi der me vo dono rahul ke ghar pe pohonch jate hai......
rahul ke ghar pe . . . . .
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rahul:- mummy abhi aur aunty aate hi honge aap ready hui ya nahi?
savita:- haa beta aa rahi hoon.....
itne me door bell bajti hai . . rahul ko lagta hai abhi aur aunty aaye honge..
lekin cake ka order diya tha to cakewala cake leke aay tha
aur rahul cake leke bill payment kar deta hai aur cake rakhne ke liye kichen ki aur jata hai..
itne me savita ready ho kar bahar aati hai
savita:-
rahul:- wow mummy you looking stunning....
savita:- thank you dear... vanita aur abhi nahi aaye abi tak?
rahul:- nahi aate hi honge.
savita:- ok tab tak tu juice ka intezam kar.
rahul:- ohk mummy
tab tak door bell bajti hai aur savita door kholti hai
abhi savita ko dekh ke hairan reh jata hai, uske dimag me abhi apni maa ke khayal aana shuru hi hue the ki savita ne bhi usme petrol daal diya
vanita:- happy b'day didi..
savita:- thank u so much dear...
aur vo dono gale lagti hai
vanita:- abhi tu wish nahi karega aunty ko???
abhi jaise sapne se jaag gaya ho..
abhi:- ha ha kyun nahi..... Happy B'day aunty...
aur vo bhi savita ke gale lag jata hai
aur gale lagte hi use savita ke bade boobs chubhne lagte hai aur vo phir exite hone lagta hai
savita bhi use pyar se gale lagati hai kyunki vo bhi abhi se rahul jitna hi pyar karti hai
savita:- thank you my hero...
itne me rahul bhi aa jata hai aur vanita ko black saree me dekh ke chounk jata hai
vanita:- kaise ho rahul?
rahul:- bas mai thik hoon aunty aap kaise ho?
vanita:- mai bhi bilkul thik hoon....
rahul:- kya baat hai aunty aaj aap aur mom kis pe bijli girane wali hai???
vanita:- are aisi koi baat nahi hai tum bas you hi humari tarif kar rahe ho..
rahul:- are nahi aunty sach keh raha hoon agar ab aap dono bahar jaoge to sach me koi na koi aap dono ko utha ke leke hi jayega, vo bhi humesha ke liye....
vanita aur savita rahul ki is baat pe sharma jati hai
abhi:- yaar abhi party shuru kare, bohot zor ki bhuk bhi lagi hai mujhe...
rahul:- ha ha chal cake leke aate hai...
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Nice startUpdate1
Intro:-
1.Abhi
2.Vanita(Mother Of Abhi)
3.Rahul
4.Savita(Mother Of Rahul)
Yeh 5saal pehle ki baat hai jab mai 20 saal ka tha aur college me padhta tha aur mera bachpan ka dost thajiska naam rahul tha, Hum dono ek dusre pe jaan dete hai aur humare family ka bhi relation acha hai. ahum sabhi tyohar ek saath manate hai, kabhi rahul ke ghar pe ya kabhi mere ghar pe. hum ek dusre se har baat share karte the, kisi bhi ladki ya aunty ke bare me hum non-veg bate karte the, lekin hum ne kabhi ek dusre ki mummy ke bare me kuch galat nahi socha.
Humari moms housewifes thi isiliye jyadatar saree hi pehanti thi aur hum dono ke papa MNC me kaam karte the isliye wo bhi bohot ache dost the aur humesha 2-3 months ke liye out of country hi rehte the,isliye humari moms akeli reh jaati aur ek dusre se hi gappe ladati aur ghumne bhi jaati. hume kabhi aisa nahi laga ki hame mummy ke liye kuch karna chahiye, kyunki humne kabhi unki taraf us nazar se dekha hi nahi tha.
Phir ek din mere ek dost ne mujhe aur rahul ko ek site dikhayi jisme beta aur maa ki chudai ki story thi, pehle to mujhe acha nahi laga lekin rahul bahot dilchaspi leke vo story padh raha tha. Baad me maine use pucha
me:- kya tujhe story pasand aayi
R:- haa bohot, kyun tujhe nahin aayi
M:- nahin yaar maa-beta aur chudai ye baat mujhe kuch achi nahi lagi.
R:- are yaar vo to sirf fantacy hai mere bhai, tu sirf enjoy kar
M:- thik hai
Ye to sirf humari humari moms ki taraf badhne ki starting thi, aage aage dekhiye hoa hai kya???
Rahul's mom- savita
Abhi's mom- vanita
Sorry dosto maine aapko meri mummy aur rahul ki mummy ki figure to batayi hi nahi
Vanita:- 34-32-42
Savita:- 40-30-38
Nice startUpdate 4-
Phir rahul cake lekar ata hai aur abhi colddrinks leakar ata hai, aur un dono ki khubsurat mummiyaan sofe par aram se baithi thi........
rahul aur abhi cake leke aate hai aur candles lagane me lgte hai ki , itne me savita ka phone bajne lagta hai.........
yaha par mai aapko bata doon ye phone savita ke husband, matlab rahul ke papa ka tha aur unka naam hai ramesh......
savita:- hello.....
Ramesh:- Happy B'day To my sweet wife....
savita:- ab kam se fursat mili hai kya aapko? jaiye mai aapse baat nahi karti..
Ramesh:- are darling naraz kyun hoti ho aaj to khushi ka din hai na....
savita:- isliye naraz hoon kyunki aaj ke din bhi aap yaha par nahi hai, kya mere b'day ke din bhi aapko time nahi hai? maine aapko 1 month pehle hi kaha tha na time nikalne ke liye, phir bhi aap nahi aaye.
Ramesh:- are meri jaan aise gussa mat karo, mai nahin hoon to kya hua rahul,vanita bhabhi aur abhi sab hai na vaha par.
savita- ha lekin kya sab aapki kami puri kar sakte hai kya yaha par?
Ramesh ko samajh ata hai savita kis bare me bol rahi thi.
Ramesh:- are meri jaan mai next week aaunga to har kami puri kar dunga bas
savita:- (khush hote hue) sach aap agle hafte aane wale hai??
Ramesh:- haa meri darling, agle hafte aaunga to 10 din rukunga aur tumhe humare bedroom se bahar jane hi nahi dunga ok...
savita sharma jati hai..
savita:- dhat... kya aap bhi....
Ramesh:- acha thik hai.... rahul kaha hai usse to baat karao.
savita:- ji abhi deti hoon..
rahul:- hi dad kaise ho aap??
Ramesh:- yes son mai maje me hoon, tum batao padhai kaisi chal rahi hai? exams kab hai?
rahul:- ha dad meri padhai achi chal rahi hai, aur parso se mere aur abhi ke exams hai..
Ramesh:- ok ok achi padhai karna, baad me to bas holidays hai maje karne ke liye.
rahul:- haa dad, aap kab aa rahe ho?
Ramesh:- beta mai next week aa raha hoon, tumhari mummy ko bata diya hai maine.
rahul:- ok dad
Ramesh:- beta zara vanita aunty ko phone dena to....
rahul:- ji dad.
vanita:- Ji bhaisahab boliye kaise he aap, ye kaise hai,unse boliye kabhi call bhi kiya kare, kaam kaise chal raha hai?
Ramesh:- ji bhabhiji sab thik chal raha hai aur ramesh bhi thik hai aur mai use aap ka message de dunga, aap kaisi hai?
vanita:- ji bas maje me hun aap kab aa rahe hai?
Ramesh:- bas agle hafte aa raha hoon..
vanita:- are vah ye to achi baat hai, kitne din ka program hai?
Ramesh:- jyada nahi bas 10 dino ke liye aa raha hoon.
vanita:- chalo achi baat hai savita didi bhi khush ho jayegi aapke aane par...
Ramesh:- aap fikr mat kijiye mai shubhash se bhi bol dunga ke aakar aapko bhi khush kar de..
vanita:- kya bhaisahab aap bhi
Ramesh:-acha mujhe abhi kaam hai to mai baad me baat karunga.. bye
vanita:- thik hai bhaisahab bye..
aur phir sab milkar savita ka b'day celebrate karte hai...
savita aur vanita bedroom me baith ke gappe lada rahe the..
aur yaha hall me rahul aur abhi apni baate kar rahe the..
rahul:- yaar aaj to maja aa gaya, mummy ka b'day bhi achi tarah se ho gaya aur papa ke aane ki khabar bhi mil gayi.
abhi:- haa achi baat hai..
rahul ko abhi kuch pareshan lagta hai.
rahul:- kya hua bhai kuch problem hai kya? aise gumsum kyun hai?
abhi:- yaar ek baat batani thi tujhe...
rahul:- ha bol na
abhi:- yaar samajh nahi aa raha kaise kahu
rahul:- jo bhi hai bindhanst bol
abhi:- aaj subah se ajeeb feeling aa rahi hai yaar
rahul:- kya hua tabiyat to thik hai?
abhi:- ha yaar, lekin jab se humne vo maa-beta ki story padhi hai mujhe kuch acha nahi lag raha yaar
rahul:- matlab, tu kya kehna chahta hai
abhi:- mai jab bhi mom ko dekhta hoon alag he feel man me aati hai, aisa lagta hai unko bas dekhte rahu unse har waqt chipke rahu unhe pyar karu, pata nahi aisa kyun lag raha hai mujhe
rahul:- acha to ye baat hai, kuch nahi ye bas teri fantacy hai yaar aur tu sirf vo story padhke ye sab bol raha hai
abhi:- nahi ye sirf meri fantacy nahi hai, ye shayad kuch aur bhi hai
rahul:- kuch aur matlab?
abhi:- shayad pyar......
rahul:- What? ye kya bol raha hai tu?
abhi:- pata nahi yaar but jab bhi mom ko dekhta hoon mujhe bhi aisi feeling aati hai jaise mai kisi jawan ladki ko dekh raha hoon..
rahul:- lekin hum jo apni moms ke bare me soch rahe hai kya vo galat nahi hai?
abhi:- mujhe pata hai ye galat hai, par mai kuch nahi kar sakta jab bhi unhe dekhta hoon bas kho jata hoon...
rahul:-yaar tu sach me pagal ho gaya hai..
abhi:- dekh mujhe jo feel hota hai vo maine tujhe bata diya ab tu iska solution bata.
rahul:- tune problem hi aisa bataya hai ki mai kya solution batau samajh nahi aa raha, lekin tu chinta mat kar mai koi na koi solution dhund lunga ok.
abhi:-ok.