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Hero ki yaddast kab aani chahiye? / Story other characters ke perspective se bhi chale.

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  • Yes other characters ke perspective se

  • Main character aur writer ke perspective se

  • Writer ko gali Dene wala mc hai

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  • Hard-core

  • Only romance

  • Only cheating

  • Cheating+ cuckolding

  • Favourite character ( bhairav

  • Bhisma

  • Anamika ,sanvi ,jhanvi

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 BeFore reading story read this..

Episode start on page 11

Ye story ab fir se shuru ho Rahi hai matlab restart.. isliye pehle wali episode delete kar di hai.

1. Story ab bachpan se start hogi.

2.is story me all tyoe sax hoga sath me khun kharaba bhi... interfaith ko chhodkar...all type x story ki mang hai.

3. Story read karne se pehle ye baat dhyan rakhna story adultery hai jisme main bhi adultery hi hai.

4. Story kisi samaj culcutr dharm ke against nahi hai ...fir bhi kisi ki gaon jale to DM me I will edit .

5.yadi story band hoti hai is site par to mujhe pm karna mai dusri site ke bare me bata dunga jahan ye story running milegi.


6.agar support karna hai to end Tak karna.

7.story me bhut se main character super heroes hai . kisi ek ko importance nahi di jayegi.



 
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Maine ye movie nhi dekhi rendomly pics daal di...pics ka abhi chunav bhi nahi kiya....

Apni taraf se hero heroines ki pics chaho to bata do.

Vaise ye dono actor actress bhi ache lag rahe hai
 
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Maine ye movie nhi dekhi rendomly pics daal di...pics ka abhi chunav bhi nahi kiya....

Apni taraf se hero heroines ki pics chaho to bata do.

Vaise ye dono actor actress bhi ache lag rahe hai
Vro main hero heroine ke liye best ha ye donon
 
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Bhai please Aisa Mt karo bo bali story mast thi mene Aaj Tak aisi story nhi padha please man jao na usko pura kar do

:congrats: For starting new story thread.....

Gazab ki creativity hai Bhai aap ne

Congratulations for your new story

Bhai yar just abhi hospital se lota hoon or tum ne or gum de diya yar please us story ke sath aisa mat karo use pura karo yar please please kitna man tha sare raj janne ka or tum naraj ho gaye Please aisa mat karo

Welcome bhai new story

To everyone, readers as well writers


Readers
भाई लोग, स्टोरी स्टोरी होती है, आप उससे रिलेट कर सकते हो, पर उसे सच मान कर मत बैठो, और राइटर को अपने हिसाब से ही लिखने दो, हां कुछ बुरा लगे वो बोलो, अपने व्यूज रखो, लेकिन राइटर को गाली देना? ये क्या बिहेवियर है? ऐसा लगता है जैसे आप लोग शायद अपने टीचरों को भी कूट आते होंगे, अगर आपके हिसाब से क्वेश्चन पेपर नही आता होगा। यहां मार नही सकते तो गाली देने लगते हो? दूसरा, बहुत एक्सपेक्टेशन न कभी रियल लाइफ में किसी से रखो न इस नकली दुनिया में, स्टोरी पसंद नही आई, चुपचाप निकल जाओ, अच्छी लगी, लेखक की हौसलाफजई करो, मगर उसके पिछवाड़े में ही मत घुस जाओ हौसलाफजाई के चक्कर में।

Writers
भाई आप लोग कहानी का कॉन्सेप्ट जब खुद सोचते हो तो कहानी को अपने हिसाब से ही लिखो, कोई रीडर कुछ बोल दिया उस हिसाब से चेंज कर दिया, फिर आगे खुद ही कन्फ्यूज हो जाओ कि अब कैसे आगे बढ़ाएं इसको, क्या ही रायता फैला दिया सजेशन के चक्कर में।

Hope this story will go smooth.

Best of luck Creepy story for this venture :congrats:

Sahi kaha ek reader bus apna point of view rakh sakta ha lekin kuchh log to dhamki dene per utar ate han ki aisa mat karo waisa mat karo jaise story unhone ho likhi ho

Asa kya Kiya Bhai?? Tum wo sympathy for feminist brother wali ki baat kr rhe kya,,, aapko hmesha apne liye helikhna chahiye apne hisab se,, kyuki ye bhi ek creation he h,,, agr apne kuchh alag likh kr rkha ho uska toh please mujhe bhej dena pr mujhe toh phr bhi kafi shi lga sb,... Aur problem kya ho gyi???

Bro horror ha to ghost wagera bhi honge ya nahi ya fir psycho wala horror ha jisse sab darte han lag to waise hi raha ha aisa psychological drama padhne me maja to ayega

Congratulations for new story bro :congrats:

Vro yar jaldbazi me end mat kar dena please chhahe to break deke 2nd part ke liye rakh dena sympothy wali ki tarah please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Bro...please
Wo story bhi complete karo
Apne hisab se likho

Yeh pics Hollywood movie nocturnal animals SE ki gayi hai





Directed by
Tom Ford
Screenplay byTom Ford
Based onTony and Susan
by Austin Wright
Produced by
  • Tom Ford
  • Robert Salerno
Starring
CinematographySeamus McGarvey
Edited byJoan Sobel
Music byAbel Korzeniowski
Production
companies
Fade to Black Productions
Artina Films[1]
Distributed byFocus Features (United States)
Universal Pictures[2] (International)
Release dates
  • September 2, 2016 (Venice)
  • November 18, 2016 (United States)
Running time116 minutes[3]
CountryUnited States
LanguageEnglish
Budget$22.5 million[4]
Box office$32.4 million[5]


Susan Morrow owns an upscale Los Angeles art gallery. Her current show involves a presentation of overweight majorettes dancing vigorously while naked. Susan receives a manuscript for a novel written by her estranged ex-husband Edward Sheffield along with an invitation for dinner during Edward's upcoming visit to Los Angeles. Upset by her deteriorating marriage to unfaithful businessman Hutton Morrow, Susan becomes consumed by the novel, which is dedicated to her and named Nocturnal Animals after Edward's nickname for her.

In this novel, Tony Hastings is a family man who runs afoul of three local troublemakers – Ray Marcus, Lou, and Turk – during a road trip through West Texas. After being forced off the road, Tony is powerless to stop Ray and Turk from kidnapping his wife, Laura and their daughter, India, leaving him with Lou, who forces him to drive Ray's car to the end of a road where he is abandoned. Tony manages to evade Ray and Lou when they return looking for him and makes his way to a nearby farmhouse to call the police.

Detective Roberto "Bobby" Andes is assigned to the case and with Tony, discovers the bodies of Laura and India near an abandoned shack, where they had been raped and murdered. Tony is wracked with guilt. He is contacted by Andes a year later and is asked to identify Lou, who was caught in a botched robbery and is charged as an accomplice in Laura and India's murders.

Turk has been fatally shot in the same robbery, leaving Ray as the last culprit to be brought to justice. Andes arrests Ray but is forced to release him as they have only circumstantial evidence of his involvement. On the verge of retirement and having been diagnosed with terminal lung cancer, Andes decides to take matters into his own hands. Although Tony is initially less than fully aware of Andes' plan, he goes along with it. The two abduct Ray and Lou. Andes shoots Lou dead when he attempts to flee, but Ray escapes.

Tony tracks down Ray to the shack where Laura and India were killed. Ray admits to raping and murdering Tony's wife and daughter, calling him weak. Tony fatally shoots him but is blinded when Ray hits him on the head with a fire poker. Tony stumbles outside, shoots himself in the abdomen after falling on his gun, and dies.

Shocked by the dark content and raw emotion of the novel, Susan reminisces about meeting Edward in college and their blossoming relationship, which Susan's domineering mother Anne Sutton objected to, claiming that Edward was not worthy of Susan's affections and that because of his romantic world view, he lacked the drive to achieve his goals; Susan ignored her mother's objections, eventually marrying Edward.

After finding further evidence of Hutton's extramarital affair, Susan resumes her reading of the manuscript and begins to recall her troubled marriage to Edward, which was strained by her frustration with his fledgling career and her dismissive attitude towards his literary aspirations. Edward still loves her and attempts to repair their relationship, but Susan is already involved with Hutton and divorces Edward. She chooses to abort her pregnancy with Edward's child and marry Hutton.

In the present day, Susan finishes reading the novel and arranges a meeting with Edward at a restaurant. Edward does not show up, and Susan waits alone as the restaurant empties.


Susan Morrow owns an upscale Los Angeles art gallery. Her current show involves a presentation of overweight majorettes dancing vigorously while naked. Susan receives a manuscript for a novel written by her estranged ex-husband Edward Sheffield along with an invitation for dinner during Edward's upcoming visit to Los Angeles. Upset by her deteriorating marriage to unfaithful businessman Hutton Morrow, Susan becomes consumed by the novel, which is dedicated to her and named Nocturnal Animals after Edward's nickname for her.

In this novel, Tony Hastings is a family man who runs afoul of three local troublemakers – Ray Marcus, Lou, and Turk – during a road trip through West Texas. After being forced off the road, Tony is powerless to stop Ray and Turk from kidnapping his wife, Laura and their daughter, India, leaving him with Lou, who forces him to drive Ray's car to the end of a road where he is abandoned. Tony manages to evade Ray and Lou when they return looking for him and makes his way to a nearby farmhouse to call the police.

Detective Roberto "Bobby" Andes is assigned to the case and with Tony, discovers the bodies of Laura and India near an abandoned shack, where they had been raped and murdered. Tony is wracked with guilt. He is contacted by Andes a year later and is asked to identify Lou, who was caught in a botched robbery and is charged as an accomplice in Laura and India's murders.

Turk has been fatally shot in the same robbery, leaving Ray as the last culprit to be brought to justice. Andes arrests Ray but is forced to release him as they have only circumstantial evidence of his involvement. On the verge of retirement and having been diagnosed with terminal lung cancer, Andes decides to take matters into his own hands. Although Tony is initially less than fully aware of Andes' plan, he goes along with it. The two abduct Ray and Lou. Andes shoots Lou dead when he attempts to flee, but Ray escapes.

Tony tracks down Ray to the shack where Laura and India were killed. Ray admits to raping and murdering Tony's wife and daughter, calling him weak. Tony fatally shoots him but is blinded when Ray hits him on the head with a fire poker. Tony stumbles outside, shoots himself in the abdomen after falling on his gun, and dies.

Shocked by the dark content and raw emotion of the novel, Susan reminisces about meeting Edward in college and their blossoming relationship, which Susan's domineering mother Anne Sutton objected to, claiming that Edward was not worthy of Susan's affections and that because of his romantic world view, he lacked the drive to achieve his goals; Susan ignored her mother's objections, eventually marrying Edward.

After finding further evidence of Hutton's extramarital affair, Susan resumes her reading of the manuscript and begins to recall her troubled marriage to Edward, which was strained by her frustration with his fledgling career and her dismissive attitude towards his literary aspirations. Edward still loves her and attempts to repair their relationship, but Susan is already involved with Hutton and divorces Edward. She chooses to abort her pregnancy with Edward's child and marry Hutton.

In the present day, Susan finishes reading the novel and arranges a meeting with Edward at a restaurant. Edward does not show up, and Susan waits alone as the restaurant empties.


Susan Morrow owns an upscale Los Angeles art gallery. Her current show involves a presentation of overweight majorettes dancing vigorously while naked. Susan receives a manuscript for a novel written by her estranged ex-husband Edward Sheffield along with an invitation for dinner during Edward's upcoming visit to Los Angeles. Upset by her deteriorating marriage to unfaithful businessman Hutton Morrow, Susan becomes consumed by the novel, which is dedicated to her and named Nocturnal Animals after Edward's nickname for her.

In this novel, Tony Hastings is a family man who runs afoul of three local troublemakers – Ray Marcus, Lou, and Turk – during a road trip through West Texas. After being forced off the road, Tony is powerless to stop Ray and Turk from kidnapping his wife, Laura and their daughter, India, leaving him with Lou, who forces him to drive Ray's car to the end of a road where he is abandoned. Tony manages to evade Ray and Lou when they return looking for him and makes his way to a nearby farmhouse to call the police.

Detective Roberto "Bobby" Andes is assigned to the case and with Tony, discovers the bodies of Laura and India near an abandoned shack, where they had been raped and murdered. Tony is wracked with guilt. He is contacted by Andes a year later and is asked to identify Lou, who was caught in a botched robbery and is charged as an accomplice in Laura and India's murders.

Turk has been fatally shot in the same robbery, leaving Ray as the last culprit to be brought to justice. Andes arrests Ray but is forced to release him as they have only circumstantial evidence of his involvement. On the verge of retirement and having been diagnosed with terminal lung cancer, Andes decides to take matters into his own hands. Although Tony is initially less than fully aware of Andes' plan, he goes along with it. The two abduct Ray and Lou. Andes shoots Lou dead when he attempts to flee, but Ray escapes.

Tony tracks down Ray to the shack where Laura and India were killed. Ray admits to raping and murdering Tony's wife and daughter, calling him weak. Tony fatally shoots him but is blinded when Ray hits him on the head with a fire poker. Tony stumbles outside, shoots himself in the abdomen after falling on his gun, and dies.

Shocked by the dark content and raw emotion of the novel, Susan reminisces about meeting Edward in college and their blossoming relationship, which Susan's domineering mother Anne Sutton objected to, claiming that Edward was not worthy of Susan's affections and that because of his romantic world view, he lacked the drive to achieve his goals; Susan ignored her mother's objections, eventually marrying Edward.

After finding further evidence of Hutton's extramarital affair, Susan resumes her reading of the manuscript and begins to recall her troubled marriage to Edward, which was strained by her frustration with his fledgling career and her dismissive attitude towards his literary aspirations. Edward still loves her and attempts to repair their relationship, but Susan is already involved with Hutton and divorces Edward. She chooses to abort her pregnancy with Edward's child and marry Hutton.

In the present day, Susan finishes reading the novel and arranges a meeting with Edward at a restaurant. Edward does not show up, and Susan waits alone as the restaurant empties.

Susan Morrow owns an upscale Los Angeles art gallery. Her current show involves a presentation of overweight majorettes dancing vigorously while naked. Susan receives a manuscript for a novel written by her estranged ex-husband Edward Sheffield along with an invitation for dinner during Edward's upcoming visit to Los Angeles. Upset by her deteriorating marriage to unfaithful businessman Hutton Morrow, Susan becomes consumed by the novel, which is dedicated to her and named Nocturnal Animals after Edward's nickname for her.

In this novel, Tony Hastings is a family man who runs afoul of three local troublemakers – Ray Marcus, Lou, and Turk – during a road trip through West Texas. After being forced off the road, Tony is powerless to stop Ray and Turk from kidnapping his wife, Laura and their daughter, India, leaving him with Lou, who forces him to drive Ray's car to the end of a road where he is abandoned. Tony manages to evade Ray and Lou when they return looking for him and makes his way to a nearby farmhouse to call the police.

Detective Roberto "Bobby" Andes is assigned to the case and with Tony, discovers the bodies of Laura and India near an abandoned shack, where they had been raped and murdered. Tony is wracked with guilt. He is contacted by Andes a year later and is asked to identify Lou, who was caught in a botched robbery and is charged as an accomplice in Laura and India's murders.

Turk has been fatally shot in the same robbery, leaving Ray as the last culprit to be brought to justice. Andes arrests Ray but is forced to release him as they have only circumstantial evidence of his involvement. On the verge of retirement and having been diagnosed with terminal lung cancer, Andes decides to take matters into his own hands. Although Tony is initially less than fully aware of Andes' plan, he goes along with it. The two abduct Ray and Lou. Andes shoots Lou dead when he attempts to flee, but Ray escapes.

Tony tracks down Ray to the shack where Laura and India were killed. Ray admits to raping and murdering Tony's wife and daughter, calling him weak. Tony fatally shoots him but is blinded when Ray hits him on the head with a fire poker. Tony stumbles outside, shoots himself in the abdomen after falling on his gun, and dies.

Shocked by the dark content and raw emotion of the novel, Susan reminisces about meeting Edward in college and their blossoming relationship, which Susan's domineering mother Anne Sutton objected to, claiming that Edward was not worthy of Susan's affections and that because of his romantic world view, he lacked the drive to achieve his goals; Susan ignored her mother's objections, eventually marrying Edward.

After finding further evidence of Hutton's extramarital affair, Susan resumes her reading of the manuscript and begins to recall her troubled marriage to Edward, which was strained by her frustration with his fledgling career and her dismissive attitude towards his literary aspirations. Edward still loves her and attempts to repair their relationship, but Susan is already involved with Hutton and divorces Edward. She chooses to abort her pregnancy with Edward's child and marry Hutton.

In the present day, Susan finishes reading the novel and arranges a meeting with Edward at a restaurant. Edward does not show up, and Susan waits alone as the restaurant empties.

Nocturnal animals ( nishachar janvar/ raat ko jaagne waale jaanwar) SE hai, movie ke hero jack gynellhall ( Edward ) jiski biwi raat Jo jaagti thi ( Susan/ Amy Adams) jiske upper Edwards new novels likha unme gunde badmaash bhi raat ko apne ghinaune/boore kaam karte the,

Us movie me Edward apni biwi Susan SE badla let's hai use is cheek ka ehsaas dilaa kar ki wah kisi daur SE gujra 19 saal tak usne uske pyar/ yaad me bitaaye, Susan apne ex-husband ko city ke sabse mehange restaurant me SE ek me bulaati hai, isse pataa lagta hai ki wah abhi bhi nahi badli Jo ki Edward ke liye wah restaurant affordless hota hai in dono me me abhi bhi status ka bahut baad antar hai is wajeh SE edwardcus restaurant nahi aa pata.
Gyx fast episode is 0osted
 
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Maine ye movie nhi dekhi rendomly pics daal di...pics ka abhi chunav bhi nahi kiya....

Apni taraf se hero heroines ki pics chaho to bata do.

Vaise ye dono actor actress bhi ache lag rahe hai


Edward ( Jake gynellhaal ) ka positive role hota hai aur uski biwi Susan ( Amy Adams) ka thoda negative role hota hai unke beech pehle date hoti hai aur shaadi ki baat par Susan ki maa USKE khilaaf jaati hai kyunki Edward ki nimn darje ki post hoti hai USKE baawjood bhi Susan Edward SE shaadi kar leti hai magar kuchh samay baad dono me tanaav hone lagta hai dono ke status ko lekar Susan kehti hai wah achhi job kare aur apne uper books ( novels ) na likhe kisi aur ke uper likhe , Susan baad me edward SE cheat karti hai, aur chori-chhipe apna bachha girwaa deti hai jiska baap Edward hota hai yeh baat Edward ko pataa lag jaati hai kyunki wah sahi hospital me hota hai, USKE baad unme talaaq ho jaata hai, Susan jisse date kar rahi thi using se shaadi kar leti hai wah kaafi aamir businessman hota hai, baad me USKE ek ladki paid a hoti hai kuchh saal baad Susan ka husband bhi Susan ko cheat karta hai baahar kisi ladki SE affair karke , Susan ki zindagi me kuchh bhi achha nahi chal rahaa hota hai, phir use kahi SE ek novel ( nocturnal animals ) Jo Susan ko dedicate hota hai milta hai jise USKE ex-husband ne banana hota hota hai apni 19 saal ki lagan par jiske padhkar Susan ko phir SE Edward me interest ( love) paida hone lagta hai
Us novel me main villain ka role Aaron Taylor Johnson new nibhaaya Jo raah chalte logo ka rasta rokta hai apne group ke jariye unhe torture karta hai aur badi bedardi SE maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai,
 
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Episode 1st

chapter : 1 ( no one alive)


ambulance aur police ke siren baj rahe they..

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charo taraf police ambulance khadi thi.

Har taraf khun aur body parts bikhre pade they..

policewalo ko sirf ek ladki Zinda mili thi jiske jism par halki kharoche thi..


do nurses us ladki ko ambulance ke pass lakar uske bandage lagate hue use check karne lagti hai kahi use aur chote to nahi aayi...




asp sir...4 bodies mili hai ab tak..ek hawal dar chikhte hue bola...3 male ek female


asp sir ek ya do bodies yahan hai inke body parts ...aaaahhh .. kehte khete dusre hawaldar ki vomit ho gayi..
bodies ka haal aesa tha hawaldar sure nahi ho paa Raha tha wo ek hai ya do..


asp : sabhi bodies yahan le aao..jinke parts bikhre hai wo nurses utha lengi..




kehkar policewala us ladki ki taraf chal Diya Jo Zinda bachi thi...



sirrrrr....ek body aur mili hai...lekin ye Zinda hai..asp ko piche se awaj aayi jis par wo ruk gaya..

hawaldar aur nurses stacher par body lekar asp ke pass aane lagte hai...tabhi jiska ilaj ho raha tha wo ladki stacher par pade aadmi ko dekhti hai...



jhatke se wo ambulance se gir jati hai...hath pair uske buri tarah se kanpne lagte hai..pareshani ke bhao uske chahere par aa jate hai...









mai kon hon aur stacher par leta wo shaksh kon hai jise dekh mera dil buri tarah se dhadakne laga mere pair kanpne lage...



ye janne ke liye aapko kuch samay piche Jana hoga...











shaher se door ek farm house par.


shaher se door ek posh ilake ke ek Ghar me 2 behad sundar ladkiyan door kholkar sar bahar nikal kar jhankti hai..


kisi ko na pakar dono bahar aa jati hai...

dono ki halat bhut kharab thi Marne pitne ke nishan nahi they lekin unke kapde bhut gande they...


koi nhi hai yahi mauka hai yahan se nikalne ka himmat Karo... pehli ladki ne kaha jiski awaj kanp Rahi thi..


dusri ladki sar hilati hai...aur dono bad hawasi se bhagne lagte hai.....



Ghar ke charo or ped hi ped they.....


pehli ladki : yahan se 500 MTR ki duri par road hai kisi ati jati gadi se ham lift le lenge...

dusri ladki : wo hame is jungle se nahi nikalne dega...



daro mat Nancy....







aaaaaaahhhh....bhagte hue hi Nancy ka pair ek trap me fas jata hai jiske blade uske pair me ghus jate hai....




aaaaaahhhhh....aaahhhhhhh...dard se nancy buri tarah se kanpne lagti hai...


nancy is tarah dekh pehli ladki uske pass baithkar hadbadahat me uske pair se trap nikalne lagti hai...




nancy : tum jaoooo...jaoooo...januuu...sirf ek mauka hai mai na sahi tum nikal jao yahan se..
nancy ki chikh par janu nam ankho se khadi hoti hai bhagne lagti hai....





Ye Nancy thi jisse mai ab se 6 mahine pehle Mili thi...jab wo mujhe kidnap karke laya tha...hamari batein ek kamre ke upar lagi window se hoti thi ham dono ne Aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekha tha..aur mauka Milne par ham dono bhag liye..Jo samay hame baten karne ka milta usme aksar ham dono yahan se bhagne ka plan karte they...



bhagte hue mai bar bar piche niche daye baye sab taraf dekh rahi thi...wo kaisa hai use mujhse achhi tarah kon Jaan sakta tha..
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aaaaaaahhh...



Bhagte hue ek trap me mera pair fasa aur mai ek ped se ulti latak gayi....


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ped me lage trap me latke hue mai use khichne ki kosish karne lagi...rassi meri takat se jyada majboot thi...




aaaaaaaaaaaaa....Kai kosisho ke baad jhanjhalahat me mai buri tarah chikhne lagi....




kisi ko apni or badta dekh mai latke hue hi hilne lagi....



Kuch sonchkar Hilte hue mai jis tree par latki uske pass Jane lagi...kisi tarah Maine use pakda aur fir..apne nakhun se mai ped par likhne lagi.........




jhanvi is alive.....





itne me wo mere pass agaya.....



















agle din.....usi jagah par....ek aurat aur uska beta bhedo ko ghas khilane ke liye late hai...
aurat : sambhal kar bahar bahar ho charana inhe..aage bhalu hai...
aurat ki baat sunkar baccha bhedo ko hankta hua aage badh jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........kuch dekh kar baccha chikh marta hai aur uski maaa bhagte hue aati hai......
kuch der baad usi jagah par police ki bhari nafri hoti hai.....
saher me pichle 6 mahino se lapata ladki jhanvi ka surag Mila tha ..ek ped par likha tha jhanvi is alive....
bar bar ek ladki ped ko dekhti aur uski ankho me ansu aa jate....


ye jhanvi ki bahan thi jo din raat ek kiye 6 mahino se apni bahan ko dhund rahi thi.....



Sir aage ek ghar hai...ek hawaldar ki awaj par wo ladki ped ke pass se hatkar hawaldar ke ishare ki taraf chal deti hai...



aage aakar wo dekhti hai Ghar jala hua hai......

bhut si jali lasho ki haddiyan padi thi....




policewala : in haddio ko forensic lab bhej do.......

jali haddio ko dekh kar wo ladki sadme se wahi gir jati hai....















I had a dream, I was seven
Climbin' my way in a tree
I saw a piece of Heaven
Waitin' in patience for me, dah
And I was runnin' far away
Would I run off the world someday?
Nobody knows, nobody knows
And I was dancing in the rain
I felt alive and I can't complain
But no, take me home
Take me home where I belong
I can't take it anymore...



car me song sunte hue ek aadmi aur ek ladki kahi Jaa rahe they....

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ladki ke chahere par ek gehri udasi thi use dekhne se aesa lag raha tha jaise usne jine ki khwahish hi chhod di hai.



wo bilkul shant baithi thi car me...



kuch der driving ke baad car ruki...aur aadmi car se bahar nikla....


car se nikal kar wo ek grocery shop se chips cold drinks lekar fir car me aata hai Sara saman ladki ko dekar wo fir driving karne lagta hai....




ladki : ham kaha Jaa rahe hai....

Ladka : kisi hotel me stay karenge..uske bad dekhunga aage kya karna hai...

ladki : ek saal se mai apni maa behno se nahi mili...Aaj bahar nikle hai ...isi bahane mai unse milna chahti hon.


ladke ne koi jawab nahi Diya...



ladki : aapko mujhse pyar nahi...aap ke liye wahi hai sab kuch....


ladka : Nancy...kyo zidd kar Rahi ho..



nancy : sirf ek baar milna hai uske baad fir kabhi nahi milungi...10 minutes me wapas aajaungi..


admi : adress...ladke ke face par smile dekh khush hokar Nancy uske kandhe ko chum leti hai....




fir Nancy adress batane lagi ladka udhar hi jata Raha...





dophar me wo dono ek bahut bade mahal ke samne khade they...



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Ghar bahar se dekhne par aesa lag raha tha jaise kisi king ka mahal ho..

Nancy car se nikal kar darwaze par aati hai..




watchman : kon kisse milna hai...


nancy : uncle it's me Nancy....


ye sunte hi watchman kursi se gir jata hai.


khud ko sambhal kar wo jaldi se door kholta hai fir chikhta hua andar ki taraf badh jata hai...ek mini car me dusre gurds Nancy ko bitha kar ghar ke andar le jate hai...















30 minutes baad Nancy bhagte hue Ghar ke andar se aati hai...mini car se utarkar wo bahar aati hai fir car me baith jati hai....









nancy ke aate hi car fir chalne lagti hai...







admi : tumne 10 minutes ke liye kaha tha.

nancy : ji Ghar bada hai to Ane Jane me 20 minutes lag gaye....



kehte hue Nancy apna sar admi ke sar par rakh leti hai...




nancy : aap apna asli naam batao na mujhe har baar taal dete ho....




admi : mujhe yaad nahi...


nancy : please bata do...aur Nancy pyar se us admi ke sar me ungliyan ferne lagti hai....



admi : moko...


nancy :ye nahi asli naam bataye..


moko : yaad nahi....



nancy : mooh kholo....


moko : kya hai...

itne me Nancy apni mutthi me se ek sweet ka piece nikal ke hath moko ki ankho ke aage kar deti hai....




nancy : mai layi apke liye jhuti nahi hai...


moko ke mooh kholne par Nancy adha sweet uske mooh me rakh deti hai...adha bachne par hath piche kar leti hai..


nancy : ye mai kha lon..


moko : haa....


nancy : aap kitne achhe ho ...aur Nancy fir kandhe par sar rakh kar ankhe band kar leti hai....









4 ghante drive ke baad gadi rukti hai...ek motel me..




moko : ssshhh...kuch kha lo bhuk lagi hogi tumhe...


moko ki awaj par Nancy ankhe kholti hai....

fir uth kar uske sath chal deti hai...


andar akar dono ek table par baith jate hai...






samne hi tv chal raha tha...jis par news chal Rahi thi...


repoter : pichle 6 mahine se lapata jahnvi Sharma ke sign jungle ke pass ek Ghar se mile ...lekin jhanvi sharma ka koi pata nahi...us jagah ki chhan bin karne par police ko 50 se jyada Sadi Hui jali lashe mili hai....jhanvi ki talash abhi jari hai...aur us khuni kidnapper..



nancy : yahan se kahi aur chale..


moko : nahi.....


sir order...waiter menu rakhte hue bola...


moko : stay karne ke liye rooms mil jayenge yahan...


waiter : nahi....full hai abhi....


moko : let's go...aur dono uth jate hai..


waiter : order to de de...dono ke uthne par waiter ki tone badal gayi..

ignore karke dono aage badhe to waiter unke aage agaya...


waiter : yahan baith kar ac khane ke bhi paise lagte hai...chal baithne ke paise de fir nikal..


nancy : please jao yahan se...no...no..waiter se kehkar Nancy moko ka hath pakad kar ankho se naa me gardan hilane lagti hai....


moko ki jeb se paise nikal kar Nancy waiter ko upar fek deti hai...fir moko ka hath pakde aage badh jati hai...




dono drive karte hue fir chalne lagte hai....




kuch duri par hi unhe ek aur motel dikhta hai.....
















kuch din pehle......





6 log isi motel me aate hai...motel ko ek ladki aur uske grand paa chala rahe hote hai....aur ek waiter rakha hota hai... Dono ne khana serve karne ke liye...ceff ka kaam dada poti milkar karte they dono is motel ke sahare hi ji rahe they...


ittefak se us din motel me koi nahi thahera tha...jab wo 6 log motel.me.rukne aaye..


jaswinder singh.inka leader tha.

harleen ek ladki thi...30 saal ki....

jaswinder ka ek bhai tha pushpinder Singh...Jo dekhne me kisi danav ki tarah lagta tha uski hight 9 feet ke kareeb thi...


jot Singh jaswinder ka friend tha.


titto jaswinder ka ladka tha..


jashanveer jaswinder ke beti thi...

ye sab police se bachkar bhag rahe they...ye sab chor they..inhone chori ke dauran ek family ko hi maar diya tha..

police se bachte hue ye yahan khane khane aye they...





khana khane ke baad waiter bill lekar Aya to ye motel ki jankari lene lage..



jaswinder : kitne log thahere hai yahan.

waiter : ji abhi to koi nahi...


jaswinder : kon kon kaam karta hai yahan..


waiter : mai didi aur dada ji..


jaswinder : teen hi log ho..


waiter : ji...ab bill...


jaswinder sari jankari nikal kar sabko dekhta hai...sabka ishara pate hi usne waiter se kaha.

jaswinder : tum jao abhi ham rukne ke liye room lenge tabhi bill bhar denge..

waiter : thik hai ji...abhi didi se kehta hon..tab tak mai room saaf kar deta hon... kehkar waiter chala jata hai...






Ye sab chalte hue counter par aate hai jahan motel Malkin inhi ka wait kar rahi hoti hai..

waiter : didi wo aa rahe hai tab tak mai Pancho room saaf kar deta hon...waiter jate hue bola.


ladki : suno Malik room number 47 se 50 teen ko saaf kar do..

waiter : thik hai didi..kehta hua wo chala jata hai.




jaswinder pushpinder jot Singh harleen ye charo counter par aate hai jashanveer motel.ke bahar dekhne jati hai...aur titto uske ishare ka wait kar raha hota hai...






ladki : sir aapke hue 3 hajar rupey..


jaswinder ladki ki baat sunkar hasne lagta hai.


jot Singh ladki ki khubsurti dekh hatho ko malne lagta hai...


itne me titto jashan ke aane par motel ka door band kar deta hai...aur board tang deta hai off ka....



jaswinder : Maine sirf 5 rupey ke liye pehla khun Kiya tha tujhe lagta hai mai tujhe teen hajar dunga...hahahahahah... jaswinder ke sath uske sabhi sathi hasne lagte hai...



waiter : gate kyo band kar rahe ho tum....dada jii...dada jiiii....


harleen : sun ladki ham kuch din yahan rukenge..tab tak tu free khana free rehne ka intezam karegi...


jaswinder : nahi....ab ye motel hamara hoga.....


dada ji : kon ho tum sab..


ladki : dada ji police ko bulaye...


dhammmm...itne me jaswinder ke ishare par pushpinder bhari bharkam counter utha ke fekte hue ladki ke dada ko pakad leta hai...


harleen : ye mat karo ...iski zarurat nahi hai ...

call kar rahi ladki ko bhagte hue jot Singh pakad leta hai...


bhatt...phone chhin kar jot singh use diwar me maar kar fod deta hai....


ladki ko pakde hue hi jot Singh uske boobs janwaro ki tarah nochne lagta hai.....




harleen : ruk jao jot Singh...


jaswinder : lene do maje vaise bhi inhe marna hi hai...jab tak koi jugad nahi ho jati ham yahi rahenge..aur uske liye in dono ka marna zaruri hai...


kutto chhod do meri poti ko ...


chatttt...budhe admi ke virodh karne par pushpender uski gardan ko Tod deta hai....


nahiiiiiiiiiiiii.....apne dada ke ludakte jism ko dekh ladki Dil kharas chikh maarti hai aur pathar ki Murat ban jati hai....


ladki ko beshudd dekh jot singh uske kapde fadne lagta hai.....

ye dekh pushpinder ladki par Pani Marta hai jisse wo hosh me ATI hai to dekhti hai uske jism par ek bhi kapda nahi.....

fir ladki ko pakad kar bari bari se teeno uska rape karne lagte hai ....



Mooh daba hone ke karan uski ghuti ghuti chikhe nikal Rahi thi...



jaswinder : chal tu bhi aa ja puttar apne tatto da pani nikal le..

jashan ko dekh Titto naa me Inkar kar deta hai....


jaswinder : tu mujh par nahi gaya hai kutte pata nhi kis ka liya randi ne....



didi...sabhi room ki safai kar....didi.




samne ka manzar dekh waiter wahi ruk jata hai..aur chikhte hue ladki ko bachane ke liye bhagta hai...

kutttooooo......





pushpinder apne pass ate hi use gardan se pakad leta hai....


dhammmm...fir hawa me utha kar...farsh par maar deta hai...force jyada hone par waiter ka sar fatt jata hai....


dhammmmmm...agle hi pal pushpinder ek laat waiter ke sar par Marta hai...aur waiter ka sar crush ho jata hai ...


malikkk....apne waiter ko marte dekh ladki ki akhiri awaj nikalti hai aur uski bhi jaan nikal jati hai......







sab ke marne ke baad raat me wo log motel ke piche ke jungle me sabhi lasho ko dafna dete hai...


raat me hi sari safai karke wo log motel ko kiraye ke liye khol dete hai.



jaswinder : harleen jashan tum dono cooking karogi ..pushpunder tu room me hi rehna ..titto tu ab se waiter ..aur jot tu bahar guard ka kaam karega..


titto : ye sab kyo kar rahe ho daddy .

jaswinder : jab tak ham yahan hai Ane wale customers ko lootenge hahahah..



Harleen : marna mat warna problem ho jayegi..




jaswinder : hahaha kuch nhi hoga yahan dur dur tak koi Ghar nahi hai ....chalo lag jao sab kaam par....aese hi motel chalate hue unhe 5 din ho gaye they..

















dhammm dhammmm.....dono ke piche car bajti reh jati hai aur Nancy moko motel me jane ke liye aage badh jate hai...




andar aakar dono ek Khali table par baith jate hai....

ikka dukka hi customer they Jo kha rahe they..



dono ke baithte hi titto order lene ke liye aa jata hai...


moko : order do...


nancy italion aur Chinese food order karti hai....




kuch der baad titto order lekar ata hai..

moko : yahan stay karne ke liye room mil jayega...


titto : mil jayega...


moko : thik hai......


khana khane ke baad moko uth gaya..



moko : bacha hua khana use de aao tab tak mai room ke liye baat karta hon...










counter par aakar moko khada ho jata hai..

jaswinder andar khana bana rahi jashan ki gand masal raha hota hai...jise moko dekh leta hai aur well Baja deta hai...


bhagta hua jaswinder counter par aata hai..


jaswinder : dasso ..


moko : double bad room chahiye....


jaswinder : ek raat ka 5 hajar...



Moko : 15 din ka ..


jaswinder : 75 hajar..

moko : room ki saaf safai karao mai car se paise lekar ata hon....


kehkar moko car me ata hai...fir car me se paise nikalta hai..




moko : ho gaya..


nancy : ji ho gaya....




moko : yahi ruko mai car park karke ata hon...




moko car lekar chala jata hai...


piche Nancy reh jati hai ...


gate par khada jot singh Nancy ki khubsurti dekh aahein bharne lagta hai....


control na karte hue wo chalta hua Nancy ke pass aa jata hai...aur apna hath Nancy ke chutro par rakhne wala hota hai ki itne me jaswinder aakar uska hath pakad leta hai..


jaswinder : kya kar Raha hai khotey...badi party hai thoda wait kar ye bhi mil jayegi tujhe....khichta hua jaswinder jot ko le jata hai.....










kuch der baad moko aata hai aur uske sath Nancy andar badh jati hai..


fir moko rent pay karta hai...


jaswinder : titto sir nu room che lejaa..


titto : sir mere sath aao...

key lekar titto dono ko ek room me Lata hai...fir chhodkar chala jata hai..


room me ate hi...moko nahane ke liye washroom me ghus jata hai...

jab bahar ata hai to dekhta hai...nancy apni Patti utar Rahi hai...




ye dekh moko Patti utar kar apne bag se new Patti malham laga kar pair me Patti band deta hai..


nancy : sorry mai uski baton me akar apne hi chot maar baithi...


moko : ab dard to nahi ho raha...



Nancy: mujhe dard feel nahi hota...acha mai naha lon..


moko ke sar hilane par Nancy kapde lekar washroom me ghus jati hai.


kuch der baad towel me Nancy naha kar aati hai...


nancy ko towel me dekh moko use bad par patak deta hai....

galo ko chumte hue moko Nancy ki towel kholne lagta hai....tabhi kuch yaad aane par moko Nancy par se uth jata hai....



nancy : naraj ho aap mujhse..


moko : nahi....


moko ka jawab sun Nancy kapde pahan kar let jati hai....


thake hone ki wajah se dono ki aankh lag jati hai...









raat 9 baje dono ki aankh khulti hai....


mooh hath dhokar dono niche aate hai..niche staff aur un dono ke siwa koi nahi tha..
fir titto ko order dete hai..order aane par dono khane lagte hai.....












khate hue jot Singh Nancy ko ghurr Raha hota hai...Nancy ko dekhte hue jot ka ling akadne lagta hai ye dekh wo pant ke upar se hi apne ling ko masal deta hai.....




ab jot Singh Nancy ko pane ke liye pagal ho Gaya tha.....







wo chalte hue jaswinder ke pass aata hai....isharo se wo Nancy ki taraf ishara karta hai...jis par jaswinder use ankhe dikhate hue rukne ka ishara karta hai....


daal na galte dekh jot puspindar ke room me ghus jata hai...


jot : bahar ek bhut chikni maal aayi hai aur tu yahan baitha hai....

puspinder : kon ...


jot : gate se jhank kar dekh....


jot ki baat sunkar pushpindar jaise hi door se jhank kar Nancy ko dekhta hai to wo bhi Nancy ki sundarta me kho jata hai...




puspindar : ye mujhe chahiye...


jot : kha lene de..mere ishare par bahar AA Jana....


kehta hua jot room se nikal jata hai....








khane ke baad moko khana lekar hotel se bahar nikal jata hai...Nancy apne room ki taraf Jane lagti hai....





moko ke nikalte hi jot pushpinder ko awaj lagata hai....Jo jot ke bulane ka hi intezar kar Raha tha....





Jaswindar: tu manega nahi...

jot : nahi...aur jot kamini hasi hasne lagta hai.....


jaswinder : ja puspinder le AA una nu tehkhane vich....titto tu bhi iske naal Jaa kahi ye pagal use maar na de...kehte hue jaswinder aur puspindar harleen jashan ko liye...tehkhane ki taraf badh jate hai...






room me ghus Rahi Nancy ko puspindad akar pakad leta hai aur Nancy sawal bhari najro se use dekhne lagti hai...

Pushpindar : chal hamare sath warna yahi Mari jayegi...rape karunga Tera wo alag.....

kuch kahe Bina Nancy unke sath chal deti hai.....hairat ki baat thi Nancy ki ankho me ek pal ke liye bhi dar nahi dikha tha..titto pushpindar ko...










moko jab parking se hotel me ate hai to dekhta hai...motel ki light band hai....


light chali gayi hogi sonch kar moko room me ata hai to dekhta hai room me Nancy nahi hai...ye dekh wo wapas niche aata hai....




room me kahi light nhi they...ek khidki se roshni ate dekh moko udhar hi chal deta hai...

door utha kar moko dekhta hai niche sidhiyan hai jo basement ki taraf ja rahi thi....






niche akar moko dekhta hai...

niche hotel staff...Nancy ko staff kursi par bitha ke rassio se bandh rahe hai..


jaswindar : aaja Tera hi intezar tha...Jaa jot le AA isnu....


chaku dikhate hue jot moko ke pass ata hai....idhar titto nancy ke gale par chaku rakh leta hai...



jot piche aakar moko ki peeth par chaku rakhe use age ke liye badhane lagta hai.....




fir ek chair par moko ko bitha kar titto jot milkar use rassi se bandh dete hai.




jaswinder : thand rakh...pushpindar ko Nancy ki taraf badhte dekh jaswinder use rok deta hai....


jaswinder : iske pass bahut sare paise hai....

titto : kaise pata daddy...


jaswinder : rent lene ke liye ye car se paise nikal kar laya tha..




Jot : to ise maar ke paise nikal lenge car se..


jaswinder : Maine dekhi iski car isne paise kahi chupa diye hai...puspinder iska mooh to khol..


jaswinder ka order sun puspindar aate hi moko ke mooh par ek zordar panch Marta hai....


jaswinder : dhire maar kahin mar na jaye....

panch se moko ki ankhe nichi nahi hoti wo still pushpinder ki ankho me dekh raha hota hai...jise dekh puspunder ko jhatka lagta hai...ye pehli baar tha ki uske panch se ab tak koi Zinda tha...



puspinder : mooh khol sale...


khacchhhhh.....

moko ke reaction na Dene par puspinder ko apni beijjati mehsus Hoti hai..jot se chaku lekar wo moko ke kandhe me ghused deta hai....


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moko dard me ek karahat bhi nahi nikalta hai...still puspinder ko ghurta rehta hai..



jaswinder : bata de paise kaha hai warna iski izzat tere samne lutenge... kehte hue wo Nancy ke boobs par hath rakhne lagta hai.



moko : chhod de use....


jaswinder : sale mujhe aankh dikhayega....



chatakk chatakkk....chatakkkkk....moko ko dikhate hue jaswinder Nancy ko marne lagta hai....



Ting....itne me motel ki ring bajti hai..


jaswinder : is samay kon marne Aya yahan.


jaswinder harleen jashan jot ko apne sath aane ka ishara karta hai...titto aur puspinder niche hi reh jate hai..
titto ka chaku still Nancy ke gale par rakha hota hai ..




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Pitne ki wajah se Nancy ki ankho se ansu nikal rahe hote hai...rote hue wo moko ko dekhte hue apni purani zindagi yaad karne lagti hai...



puspinder : sale mooh khol apna....


Nancy : hamara sath yahi Tak ka tha...is jahan me na sahi agle Jahan me ham milenge...ye kehte hue ...nancy khud hi apni gardan par chaku ragad deti hai...




moko : noooooooooo........Nancy ki sanso ko tutta dekh moko chikh padta hai....

titto Nancy ko Marta chhod puspendra ko aage karte hue khud basement se bahar ki taraf daud laga deta hai.

rassi khol kar moko bhagta hua Nancy ki taraf badhta hai ki itne me chaku liye pushpinder moko ke aage aa jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaa.....ek hi punch se pushpinder diwar se Jaa lagta hai uska knife wahi gir jata hai....
moko Nancy ko dekhte hue ghutno par baith ke uske sar ko tham leta hai....




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Nancy ka jism sakit padh gaya tha....moko ki ankhe nam ho gayi thi....
Udgiyaun...itne me upar se goli chalne ki awaj aati...


aaahhh....khud ko jhadte hue pushpinder uthta hai....



puspinder ki awaj par moko gusse me sar utha ke use dekhta hai.....



khannnnnnn...pass pade knife ko moko pushpinder ki taraf fek deta hai....


knife utha ke puspinder bhagte hue marne moko ki taraf badhta hai....



dhammmmmm....


itne me ek punch pushpinder ki thodi par padta hai aur uske dant mooh se nikal kar bahar ko girte hai.....




chaku uske hatho se chhut jata hai....




......chaku par pair padhne se chaku uchal kar moko ke hath me aata hai....


kharrrrr...kharrrr.....kharrr...

chaku pakadte hi....moko puspinder ke hatho me ghusane lagta hai....jahan jahan moko knife maar Raha tha wahan wahan se khun ke fabbare nikal rahe they......





kharrrrrrrrrrr....fir moko pushpinder ko bich me se cheer deta hai.....








upar ek customer Aya tha...jise jaswinder maar ke use loot leta hai...


Jaswinder : us sale ki car ko achi tarah se check karke AA dekh paise wahi hoge....jashan tu uske room me rakhe saman me dekh....harleen jot ko liye jaswinder tehkhane me aata hai...


tehkhane me Nancy ki body aur bhut sa khun pada hota hai.....

puspinder moko dono gayab they....samne ki diwar Tuti padi thi....


jaswinder : ye kaise hua....

sab chup they...aur hairan bhi...

jaswinder sabko liye us diwar ki taraf chal deta hai...















tittto....car me akar car check karne lagta hai.....kuch na pakar wo dikki me hole se jhankta hai..


titto : aaaahhh...ek aankh dekh kar titto ..dar se gir jata hai..


thappp thapppp...

ki itne me dikki andar se bajne lagti hai...


darte hue titto dikki kholta hai..



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dikki khulne par titto dekhta hai Dikki me ek behad sundar ladki bandhi padi hoti hai..




titto : tu kon hai..


mooh bandha hone ke karan ladki kuch bol nahi pati wo kholne ka ishara karti hai ...ye dekh titto apna chaku nikal kar ladki ko darate hue use dikki se nikalne me help karta hai...


fir use piche se pakad kar khachidte hue motel ke andar le jane lagta hai....



Itne me harleen jashan Jaswinder jot jungle se puspinder ko utha late hai...Jo ab sirf body thi...

jaswinder sahit ab sabke face ke rang ud gaye they...sab ek dusre ka chahera dekh rahe they...sabke chahro par dar dikh raha tha..






andar lakar titto ladki ko kholne me uski help karne lagta hai....



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khulte hi ladki lambi lambi sanse lene lagti hai....



titto : kon hai tu...




khulte hi meri sans me sans aayi...


mai : mai kaha hon...

Mumbai se 400k.m door...




mai : tum kon ho..


mai titto hon...aur ye mere
..wo basement se nikalte upar aa rahe logo ko dekh bola..apne bare me bata kar wo un logo ke bare me batane laga...



jaswinder : tu kon hai ladki...


mai : wo kaha hai...


jaswinder : kon wo .kiski baat kar Rahi hai tu....


mai : wo jo mujhe yahan laya..


jashan: sali...sidhi tarah batati hai ya tujhe Marun..wo mera sar table par jhukate hue boli..


titto : ye uski car me Mili...


jaswinder : tujhe kidnap Kiya tha usne..


mai : ha 6 mahine pehle..


titto : daddy puspinder uncle kaha hai..



jot : mere dost ko maar diya usne...kehte hue jot fut fut kar rone lagta hai...


titto : kya.....bhagte hue titto basement ki taraf daud laga deta hai..

andar akar dekhta hai andar puspender ki body padi hai jise dekh wo foot foot kar rone lagta hai...


jot : o sala kitthe gaya.

gusse me jot chikha...




un logo ko rota chhod meri najar nancy par padi...


mai : ye kisne kiyaaa....mai chikh padi...


mai : tumne bahut badi galti kar di hai..


jaswinder : chal.use upar dhundte hai... Ise sath le le...



jot Singh ko chhod kar ham sab upar agaye they...


harleen : tu kya janti hai uske bare me..

mai : tumne mara us ladki ko..


titto : Maine bas chaku rakha tha usne khud hi apni gardan par fer liya..




mai : Jaan pyari hai to police ko call Karo....warna tum me se yahan se koi Zinda nahi bachega... kehte hue mai ledline talash karne lagi...ek jagah dekhne par mai bhagkar ledline ke pass ayi..




dhammmmm...Maine jaise hi number dial Kiya... jaswinder ne phone tod diya.,
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
jot ki cheekh par ham sab niche bhage....
niche jab...jot singh pushpinder ki body se lipte ro Raha hota hai tab pushpinder ka sharir hilne lagta hai...
dekhte hi dekhte pushpinder uth ke baith jata hai.....
jot hairani se dekhte hue darkar piche ho jata hai...

chrrrrrrr... tabhi puspinder ki body chirne lagti hai....
uske andar se moko khun me nahaya hua nikalta hai...
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Aaj jog Singh darinde ko apni ankho se dekh raha tha...darkar jot Singh ki pant gili ho jati hai......
gusse me moko body se nikalkar jot ki taraf badhta hai darkar piche hote hue jot Singh diwar se Jaa lagta hai..


























O Bhai sahab kya superb update Diya hai
 
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Episode 1st

chapter : 1 ( no one alive)


ambulance aur police ke siren baj rahe they..

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charo taraf police ambulance khadi thi.

Har taraf khun aur body parts bikhre pade they..

policewalo ko sirf ek ladki Zinda mili thi jiske jism par halki kharoche thi..


do nurses us ladki ko ambulance ke pass lakar uske bandage lagate hue use check karne lagti hai kahi use aur chote to nahi aayi...




asp sir...4 bodies mili hai ab tak..ek hawal dar chikhte hue bola...3 male ek female


asp sir ek ya do bodies yahan hai inke body parts ...aaaahhh .. kehte khete dusre hawaldar ki vomit ho gayi..
bodies ka haal aesa tha hawaldar sure nahi ho paa Raha tha wo ek hai ya do..


asp : sabhi bodies yahan le aao..jinke parts bikhre hai wo nurses utha lengi..




kehkar policewala us ladki ki taraf chal Diya Jo Zinda bachi thi...



sirrrrr....ek body aur mili hai...lekin ye Zinda hai..asp ko piche se awaj aayi jis par wo ruk gaya..

hawaldar aur nurses stacher par body lekar asp ke pass aane lagte hai...tabhi jiska ilaj ho raha tha wo ladki stacher par pade aadmi ko dekhti hai...



jhatke se wo ambulance se gir jati hai...hath pair uske buri tarah se kanpne lagte hai..pareshani ke bhao uske chahere par aa jate hai...









mai kon hon aur stacher par leta wo shaksh kon hai jise dekh mera dil buri tarah se dhadakne laga mere pair kanpne lage...



ye janne ke liye aapko kuch samay piche Jana hoga...











shaher se door ek farm house par.


shaher se door ek posh ilake ke ek Ghar me 2 behad sundar ladkiyan door kholkar sar bahar nikal kar jhankti hai..


kisi ko na pakar dono bahar aa jati hai...

dono ki halat bhut kharab thi Marne pitne ke nishan nahi they lekin unke kapde bhut gande they...


koi nhi hai yahi mauka hai yahan se nikalne ka himmat Karo... pehli ladki ne kaha jiski awaj kanp Rahi thi..


dusri ladki sar hilati hai...aur dono bad hawasi se bhagne lagte hai.....



Ghar ke charo or ped hi ped they.....


pehli ladki : yahan se 500 MTR ki duri par road hai kisi ati jati gadi se ham lift le lenge...

dusri ladki : wo hame is jungle se nahi nikalne dega...



daro mat Nancy....







aaaaaaahhhh....bhagte hue hi Nancy ka pair ek trap me fas jata hai jiske blade uske pair me ghus jate hai....




aaaaaahhhhh....aaahhhhhhh...dard se nancy buri tarah se kanpne lagti hai...


nancy is tarah dekh pehli ladki uske pass baithkar hadbadahat me uske pair se trap nikalne lagti hai...




nancy : tum jaoooo...jaoooo...januuu...sirf ek mauka hai mai na sahi tum nikal jao yahan se..
nancy ki chikh par janu nam ankho se khadi hoti hai bhagne lagti hai....





Ye Nancy thi jisse mai ab se 6 mahine pehle Mili thi...jab wo mujhe kidnap karke laya tha...hamari batein ek kamre ke upar lagi window se hoti thi ham dono ne Aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekha tha..aur mauka Milne par ham dono bhag liye..Jo samay hame baten karne ka milta usme aksar ham dono yahan se bhagne ka plan karte they...



bhagte hue mai bar bar piche niche daye baye sab taraf dekh rahi thi...wo kaisa hai use mujhse achhi tarah kon Jaan sakta tha..
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aaaaaaahhh...



Bhagte hue ek trap me mera pair fasa aur mai ek ped se ulti latak gayi....


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ped me lage trap me latke hue mai use khichne ki kosish karne lagi...rassi meri takat se jyada majboot thi...




aaaaaaaaaaaaa....Kai kosisho ke baad jhanjhalahat me mai buri tarah chikhne lagi....




kisi ko apni or badta dekh mai latke hue hi hilne lagi....



Kuch sonchkar Hilte hue mai jis tree par latki uske pass Jane lagi...kisi tarah Maine use pakda aur fir..apne nakhun se mai ped par likhne lagi.........




jhanvi is alive.....





itne me wo mere pass agaya.....



















agle din.....usi jagah par....ek aurat aur uska beta bhedo ko ghas khilane ke liye late hai...
aurat : sambhal kar bahar bahar ho charana inhe..aage bhalu hai...
aurat ki baat sunkar baccha bhedo ko hankta hua aage badh jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........kuch dekh kar baccha chikh marta hai aur uski maaa bhagte hue aati hai......
kuch der baad usi jagah par police ki bhari nafri hoti hai.....
saher me pichle 6 mahino se lapata ladki jhanvi ka surag Mila tha ..ek ped par likha tha jhanvi is alive....
bar bar ek ladki ped ko dekhti aur uski ankho me ansu aa jate....


ye jhanvi ki bahan thi jo din raat ek kiye 6 mahino se apni bahan ko dhund rahi thi.....



Sir aage ek ghar hai...ek hawaldar ki awaj par wo ladki ped ke pass se hatkar hawaldar ke ishare ki taraf chal deti hai...



aage aakar wo dekhti hai Ghar jala hua hai......

bhut si jali lasho ki haddiyan padi thi....




policewala : in haddio ko forensic lab bhej do.......

jali haddio ko dekh kar wo ladki sadme se wahi gir jati hai....















I had a dream, I was seven
Climbin' my way in a tree
I saw a piece of Heaven
Waitin' in patience for me, dah
And I was runnin' far away
Would I run off the world someday?
Nobody knows, nobody knows
And I was dancing in the rain
I felt alive and I can't complain
But no, take me home
Take me home where I belong
I can't take it anymore...



car me song sunte hue ek aadmi aur ek ladki kahi Jaa rahe they....

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ladki ke chahere par ek gehri udasi thi use dekhne se aesa lag raha tha jaise usne jine ki khwahish hi chhod di hai.



wo bilkul shant baithi thi car me...



kuch der driving ke baad car ruki...aur aadmi car se bahar nikla....


car se nikal kar wo ek grocery shop se chips cold drinks lekar fir car me aata hai Sara saman ladki ko dekar wo fir driving karne lagta hai....




ladki : ham kaha Jaa rahe hai....

Ladka : kisi hotel me stay karenge..uske bad dekhunga aage kya karna hai...

ladki : ek saal se mai apni maa behno se nahi mili...Aaj bahar nikle hai ...isi bahane mai unse milna chahti hon.


ladke ne koi jawab nahi Diya...



ladki : aapko mujhse pyar nahi...aap ke liye wahi hai sab kuch....


ladka : Nancy...kyo zidd kar Rahi ho..



nancy : sirf ek baar milna hai uske baad fir kabhi nahi milungi...10 minutes me wapas aajaungi..


admi : adress...ladke ke face par smile dekh khush hokar Nancy uske kandhe ko chum leti hai....




fir Nancy adress batane lagi ladka udhar hi jata Raha...





dophar me wo dono ek bahut bade mahal ke samne khade they...



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Ghar bahar se dekhne par aesa lag raha tha jaise kisi king ka mahal ho..

Nancy car se nikal kar darwaze par aati hai..




watchman : kon kisse milna hai...


nancy : uncle it's me Nancy....


ye sunte hi watchman kursi se gir jata hai.


khud ko sambhal kar wo jaldi se door kholta hai fir chikhta hua andar ki taraf badh jata hai...ek mini car me dusre gurds Nancy ko bitha kar ghar ke andar le jate hai...















30 minutes baad Nancy bhagte hue Ghar ke andar se aati hai...mini car se utarkar wo bahar aati hai fir car me baith jati hai....









nancy ke aate hi car fir chalne lagti hai...







admi : tumne 10 minutes ke liye kaha tha.

nancy : ji Ghar bada hai to Ane Jane me 20 minutes lag gaye....



kehte hue Nancy apna sar admi ke sar par rakh leti hai...




nancy : aap apna asli naam batao na mujhe har baar taal dete ho....




admi : mujhe yaad nahi...


nancy : please bata do...aur Nancy pyar se us admi ke sar me ungliyan ferne lagti hai....



admi : moko...


nancy :ye nahi asli naam bataye..


moko : yaad nahi....



nancy : mooh kholo....


moko : kya hai...

itne me Nancy apni mutthi me se ek sweet ka piece nikal ke hath moko ki ankho ke aage kar deti hai....




nancy : mai layi apke liye jhuti nahi hai...


moko ke mooh kholne par Nancy adha sweet uske mooh me rakh deti hai...adha bachne par hath piche kar leti hai..


nancy : ye mai kha lon..


moko : haa....


nancy : aap kitne achhe ho ...aur Nancy fir kandhe par sar rakh kar ankhe band kar leti hai....









4 ghante drive ke baad gadi rukti hai...ek motel me..




moko : ssshhh...kuch kha lo bhuk lagi hogi tumhe...


moko ki awaj par Nancy ankhe kholti hai....

fir uth kar uske sath chal deti hai...


andar akar dono ek table par baith jate hai...






samne hi tv chal raha tha...jis par news chal Rahi thi...


repoter : pichle 6 mahine se lapata jahnvi Sharma ke sign jungle ke pass ek Ghar se mile ...lekin jhanvi sharma ka koi pata nahi...us jagah ki chhan bin karne par police ko 50 se jyada Sadi Hui jali lashe mili hai....jhanvi ki talash abhi jari hai...aur us khuni kidnapper..



nancy : yahan se kahi aur chale..


moko : nahi.....


sir order...waiter menu rakhte hue bola...


moko : stay karne ke liye rooms mil jayenge yahan...


waiter : nahi....full hai abhi....


moko : let's go...aur dono uth jate hai..


waiter : order to de de...dono ke uthne par waiter ki tone badal gayi..

ignore karke dono aage badhe to waiter unke aage agaya...


waiter : yahan baith kar ac khane ke bhi paise lagte hai...chal baithne ke paise de fir nikal..


nancy : please jao yahan se...no...no..waiter se kehkar Nancy moko ka hath pakad kar ankho se naa me gardan hilane lagti hai....


moko ki jeb se paise nikal kar Nancy waiter ko upar fek deti hai...fir moko ka hath pakde aage badh jati hai...




dono drive karte hue fir chalne lagte hai....




kuch duri par hi unhe ek aur motel dikhta hai.....
















kuch din pehle......





6 log isi motel me aate hai...motel ko ek ladki aur uske grand paa chala rahe hote hai....aur ek waiter rakha hota hai... Dono ne khana serve karne ke liye...ceff ka kaam dada poti milkar karte they dono is motel ke sahare hi ji rahe they...


ittefak se us din motel me koi nahi thahera tha...jab wo 6 log motel.me.rukne aaye..


jaswinder singh.inka leader tha.

harleen ek ladki thi...30 saal ki....

jaswinder ka ek bhai tha pushpinder Singh...Jo dekhne me kisi danav ki tarah lagta tha uski hight 9 feet ke kareeb thi...


jot Singh jaswinder ka friend tha.


titto jaswinder ka ladka tha..


jashanveer jaswinder ke beti thi...

ye sab police se bachkar bhag rahe they...ye sab chor they..inhone chori ke dauran ek family ko hi maar diya tha..

police se bachte hue ye yahan khane khane aye they...





khana khane ke baad waiter bill lekar Aya to ye motel ki jankari lene lage..



jaswinder : kitne log thahere hai yahan.

waiter : ji abhi to koi nahi...


jaswinder : kon kon kaam karta hai yahan..


waiter : mai didi aur dada ji..


jaswinder : teen hi log ho..


waiter : ji...ab bill...


jaswinder sari jankari nikal kar sabko dekhta hai...sabka ishara pate hi usne waiter se kaha.

jaswinder : tum jao abhi ham rukne ke liye room lenge tabhi bill bhar denge..

waiter : thik hai ji...abhi didi se kehta hon..tab tak mai room saaf kar deta hon... kehkar waiter chala jata hai...






Ye sab chalte hue counter par aate hai jahan motel Malkin inhi ka wait kar rahi hoti hai..

waiter : didi wo aa rahe hai tab tak mai Pancho room saaf kar deta hon...waiter jate hue bola.


ladki : suno Malik room number 47 se 50 teen ko saaf kar do..

waiter : thik hai didi..kehta hua wo chala jata hai.




jaswinder pushpinder jot Singh harleen ye charo counter par aate hai jashanveer motel.ke bahar dekhne jati hai...aur titto uske ishare ka wait kar raha hota hai...






ladki : sir aapke hue 3 hajar rupey..


jaswinder ladki ki baat sunkar hasne lagta hai.


jot Singh ladki ki khubsurti dekh hatho ko malne lagta hai...


itne me titto jashan ke aane par motel ka door band kar deta hai...aur board tang deta hai off ka....



jaswinder : Maine sirf 5 rupey ke liye pehla khun Kiya tha tujhe lagta hai mai tujhe teen hajar dunga...hahahahahah... jaswinder ke sath uske sabhi sathi hasne lagte hai...



waiter : gate kyo band kar rahe ho tum....dada jii...dada jiiii....


harleen : sun ladki ham kuch din yahan rukenge..tab tak tu free khana free rehne ka intezam karegi...


jaswinder : nahi....ab ye motel hamara hoga.....


dada ji : kon ho tum sab..


ladki : dada ji police ko bulaye...


dhammmm...itne me jaswinder ke ishare par pushpinder bhari bharkam counter utha ke fekte hue ladki ke dada ko pakad leta hai...


harleen : ye mat karo ...iski zarurat nahi hai ...

call kar rahi ladki ko bhagte hue jot Singh pakad leta hai...


bhatt...phone chhin kar jot singh use diwar me maar kar fod deta hai....


ladki ko pakde hue hi jot Singh uske boobs janwaro ki tarah nochne lagta hai.....




harleen : ruk jao jot Singh...


jaswinder : lene do maje vaise bhi inhe marna hi hai...jab tak koi jugad nahi ho jati ham yahi rahenge..aur uske liye in dono ka marna zaruri hai...


kutto chhod do meri poti ko ...


chatttt...budhe admi ke virodh karne par pushpender uski gardan ko Tod deta hai....


nahiiiiiiiiiiiii.....apne dada ke ludakte jism ko dekh ladki Dil kharas chikh maarti hai aur pathar ki Murat ban jati hai....


ladki ko beshudd dekh jot singh uske kapde fadne lagta hai.....

ye dekh pushpinder ladki par Pani Marta hai jisse wo hosh me ATI hai to dekhti hai uske jism par ek bhi kapda nahi.....

fir ladki ko pakad kar bari bari se teeno uska rape karne lagte hai ....



Mooh daba hone ke karan uski ghuti ghuti chikhe nikal Rahi thi...



jaswinder : chal tu bhi aa ja puttar apne tatto da pani nikal le..

jashan ko dekh Titto naa me Inkar kar deta hai....


jaswinder : tu mujh par nahi gaya hai kutte pata nhi kis ka liya randi ne....



didi...sabhi room ki safai kar....didi.




samne ka manzar dekh waiter wahi ruk jata hai..aur chikhte hue ladki ko bachane ke liye bhagta hai...

kutttooooo......





pushpinder apne pass ate hi use gardan se pakad leta hai....


dhammmm...fir hawa me utha kar...farsh par maar deta hai...force jyada hone par waiter ka sar fatt jata hai....


dhammmmmm...agle hi pal pushpinder ek laat waiter ke sar par Marta hai...aur waiter ka sar crush ho jata hai ...


malikkk....apne waiter ko marte dekh ladki ki akhiri awaj nikalti hai aur uski bhi jaan nikal jati hai......







sab ke marne ke baad raat me wo log motel ke piche ke jungle me sabhi lasho ko dafna dete hai...


raat me hi sari safai karke wo log motel ko kiraye ke liye khol dete hai.



jaswinder : harleen jashan tum dono cooking karogi ..pushpunder tu room me hi rehna ..titto tu ab se waiter ..aur jot tu bahar guard ka kaam karega..


titto : ye sab kyo kar rahe ho daddy .

jaswinder : jab tak ham yahan hai Ane wale customers ko lootenge hahahah..



Harleen : marna mat warna problem ho jayegi..




jaswinder : hahaha kuch nhi hoga yahan dur dur tak koi Ghar nahi hai ....chalo lag jao sab kaam par....aese hi motel chalate hue unhe 5 din ho gaye they..

















dhammm dhammmm.....dono ke piche car bajti reh jati hai aur Nancy moko motel me jane ke liye aage badh jate hai...




andar aakar dono ek Khali table par baith jate hai....

ikka dukka hi customer they Jo kha rahe they..



dono ke baithte hi titto order lene ke liye aa jata hai...


moko : order do...


nancy italion aur Chinese food order karti hai....




kuch der baad titto order lekar ata hai..

moko : yahan stay karne ke liye room mil jayega...


titto : mil jayega...


moko : thik hai......


khana khane ke baad moko uth gaya..



moko : bacha hua khana use de aao tab tak mai room ke liye baat karta hon...










counter par aakar moko khada ho jata hai..

jaswinder andar khana bana rahi jashan ki gand masal raha hota hai...jise moko dekh leta hai aur well Baja deta hai...


bhagta hua jaswinder counter par aata hai..


jaswinder : dasso ..


moko : double bad room chahiye....


jaswinder : ek raat ka 5 hajar...



Moko : 15 din ka ..


jaswinder : 75 hajar..

moko : room ki saaf safai karao mai car se paise lekar ata hon....


kehkar moko car me ata hai...fir car me se paise nikalta hai..




moko : ho gaya..


nancy : ji ho gaya....




moko : yahi ruko mai car park karke ata hon...




moko car lekar chala jata hai...


piche Nancy reh jati hai ...


gate par khada jot singh Nancy ki khubsurti dekh aahein bharne lagta hai....


control na karte hue wo chalta hua Nancy ke pass aa jata hai...aur apna hath Nancy ke chutro par rakhne wala hota hai ki itne me jaswinder aakar uska hath pakad leta hai..


jaswinder : kya kar Raha hai khotey...badi party hai thoda wait kar ye bhi mil jayegi tujhe....khichta hua jaswinder jot ko le jata hai.....










kuch der baad moko aata hai aur uske sath Nancy andar badh jati hai..


fir moko rent pay karta hai...


jaswinder : titto sir nu room che lejaa..


titto : sir mere sath aao...

key lekar titto dono ko ek room me Lata hai...fir chhodkar chala jata hai..


room me ate hi...moko nahane ke liye washroom me ghus jata hai...

jab bahar ata hai to dekhta hai...nancy apni Patti utar Rahi hai...




ye dekh moko Patti utar kar apne bag se new Patti malham laga kar pair me Patti band deta hai..


nancy : sorry mai uski baton me akar apne hi chot maar baithi...


moko : ab dard to nahi ho raha...



Nancy: mujhe dard feel nahi hota...acha mai naha lon..


moko ke sar hilane par Nancy kapde lekar washroom me ghus jati hai.


kuch der baad towel me Nancy naha kar aati hai...


nancy ko towel me dekh moko use bad par patak deta hai....

galo ko chumte hue moko Nancy ki towel kholne lagta hai....tabhi kuch yaad aane par moko Nancy par se uth jata hai....



nancy : naraj ho aap mujhse..


moko : nahi....


moko ka jawab sun Nancy kapde pahan kar let jati hai....


thake hone ki wajah se dono ki aankh lag jati hai...









raat 9 baje dono ki aankh khulti hai....


mooh hath dhokar dono niche aate hai..niche staff aur un dono ke siwa koi nahi tha..
fir titto ko order dete hai..order aane par dono khane lagte hai.....












khate hue jot Singh Nancy ko ghurr Raha hota hai...Nancy ko dekhte hue jot ka ling akadne lagta hai ye dekh wo pant ke upar se hi apne ling ko masal deta hai.....




ab jot Singh Nancy ko pane ke liye pagal ho Gaya tha.....







wo chalte hue jaswinder ke pass aata hai....isharo se wo Nancy ki taraf ishara karta hai...jis par jaswinder use ankhe dikhate hue rukne ka ishara karta hai....


daal na galte dekh jot puspindar ke room me ghus jata hai...


jot : bahar ek bhut chikni maal aayi hai aur tu yahan baitha hai....

puspinder : kon ...


jot : gate se jhank kar dekh....


jot ki baat sunkar pushpindar jaise hi door se jhank kar Nancy ko dekhta hai to wo bhi Nancy ki sundarta me kho jata hai...




puspindar : ye mujhe chahiye...


jot : kha lene de..mere ishare par bahar AA Jana....


kehta hua jot room se nikal jata hai....








khane ke baad moko khana lekar hotel se bahar nikal jata hai...Nancy apne room ki taraf Jane lagti hai....





moko ke nikalte hi jot pushpinder ko awaj lagata hai....Jo jot ke bulane ka hi intezar kar Raha tha....





Jaswindar: tu manega nahi...

jot : nahi...aur jot kamini hasi hasne lagta hai.....


jaswinder : ja puspinder le AA una nu tehkhane vich....titto tu bhi iske naal Jaa kahi ye pagal use maar na de...kehte hue jaswinder aur puspindar harleen jashan ko liye...tehkhane ki taraf badh jate hai...






room me ghus Rahi Nancy ko puspindad akar pakad leta hai aur Nancy sawal bhari najro se use dekhne lagti hai...

Pushpindar : chal hamare sath warna yahi Mari jayegi...rape karunga Tera wo alag.....

kuch kahe Bina Nancy unke sath chal deti hai.....hairat ki baat thi Nancy ki ankho me ek pal ke liye bhi dar nahi dikha tha..titto pushpindar ko...










moko jab parking se hotel me ate hai to dekhta hai...motel ki light band hai....


light chali gayi hogi sonch kar moko room me ata hai to dekhta hai room me Nancy nahi hai...ye dekh wo wapas niche aata hai....




room me kahi light nhi they...ek khidki se roshni ate dekh moko udhar hi chal deta hai...

door utha kar moko dekhta hai niche sidhiyan hai jo basement ki taraf ja rahi thi....






niche akar moko dekhta hai...

niche hotel staff...Nancy ko staff kursi par bitha ke rassio se bandh rahe hai..


jaswindar : aaja Tera hi intezar tha...Jaa jot le AA isnu....


chaku dikhate hue jot moko ke pass ata hai....idhar titto nancy ke gale par chaku rakh leta hai...



jot piche aakar moko ki peeth par chaku rakhe use age ke liye badhane lagta hai.....




fir ek chair par moko ko bitha kar titto jot milkar use rassi se bandh dete hai.




jaswinder : thand rakh...pushpindar ko Nancy ki taraf badhte dekh jaswinder use rok deta hai....


jaswinder : iske pass bahut sare paise hai....

titto : kaise pata daddy...


jaswinder : rent lene ke liye ye car se paise nikal kar laya tha..




Jot : to ise maar ke paise nikal lenge car se..


jaswinder : Maine dekhi iski car isne paise kahi chupa diye hai...puspinder iska mooh to khol..


jaswinder ka order sun puspindar aate hi moko ke mooh par ek zordar panch Marta hai....


jaswinder : dhire maar kahin mar na jaye....

panch se moko ki ankhe nichi nahi hoti wo still pushpinder ki ankho me dekh raha hota hai...jise dekh puspunder ko jhatka lagta hai...ye pehli baar tha ki uske panch se ab tak koi Zinda tha...



puspinder : mooh khol sale...


khacchhhhh.....

moko ke reaction na Dene par puspinder ko apni beijjati mehsus Hoti hai..jot se chaku lekar wo moko ke kandhe me ghused deta hai....


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moko dard me ek karahat bhi nahi nikalta hai...still puspinder ko ghurta rehta hai..



jaswinder : bata de paise kaha hai warna iski izzat tere samne lutenge... kehte hue wo Nancy ke boobs par hath rakhne lagta hai.



moko : chhod de use....


jaswinder : sale mujhe aankh dikhayega....



chatakk chatakkk....chatakkkkk....moko ko dikhate hue jaswinder Nancy ko marne lagta hai....



Ting....itne me motel ki ring bajti hai..


jaswinder : is samay kon marne Aya yahan.


jaswinder harleen jashan jot ko apne sath aane ka ishara karta hai...titto aur puspinder niche hi reh jate hai..
titto ka chaku still Nancy ke gale par rakha hota hai ..




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Pitne ki wajah se Nancy ki ankho se ansu nikal rahe hote hai...rote hue wo moko ko dekhte hue apni purani zindagi yaad karne lagti hai...



puspinder : sale mooh khol apna....


Nancy : hamara sath yahi Tak ka tha...is jahan me na sahi agle Jahan me ham milenge...ye kehte hue ...nancy khud hi apni gardan par chaku ragad deti hai...




moko : noooooooooo........Nancy ki sanso ko tutta dekh moko chikh padta hai....

titto Nancy ko Marta chhod puspendra ko aage karte hue khud basement se bahar ki taraf daud laga deta hai.

rassi khol kar moko bhagta hua Nancy ki taraf badhta hai ki itne me chaku liye pushpinder moko ke aage aa jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaa.....ek hi punch se pushpinder diwar se Jaa lagta hai uska knife wahi gir jata hai....
moko Nancy ko dekhte hue ghutno par baith ke uske sar ko tham leta hai....




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Nancy ka jism sakit padh gaya tha....moko ki ankhe nam ho gayi thi....
Udgiyaun...itne me upar se goli chalne ki awaj aati...


aaahhh....khud ko jhadte hue pushpinder uthta hai....



puspinder ki awaj par moko gusse me sar utha ke use dekhta hai.....



khannnnnnn...pass pade knife ko moko pushpinder ki taraf fek deta hai....


knife utha ke puspinder bhagte hue marne moko ki taraf badhta hai....



dhammmmmm....


itne me ek punch pushpinder ki thodi par padta hai aur uske dant mooh se nikal kar bahar ko girte hai.....




chaku uske hatho se chhut jata hai....




......chaku par pair padhne se chaku uchal kar moko ke hath me aata hai....


kharrrrr...kharrrr.....kharrr...

chaku pakadte hi....moko puspinder ke hatho me ghusane lagta hai....jahan jahan moko knife maar Raha tha wahan wahan se khun ke fabbare nikal rahe they......





kharrrrrrrrrrr....fir moko pushpinder ko bich me se cheer deta hai.....








upar ek customer Aya tha...jise jaswinder maar ke use loot leta hai...


Jaswinder : us sale ki car ko achi tarah se check karke AA dekh paise wahi hoge....jashan tu uske room me rakhe saman me dekh....harleen jot ko liye jaswinder tehkhane me aata hai...


tehkhane me Nancy ki body aur bhut sa khun pada hota hai.....

puspinder moko dono gayab they....samne ki diwar Tuti padi thi....


jaswinder : ye kaise hua....

sab chup they...aur hairan bhi...

jaswinder sabko liye us diwar ki taraf chal deta hai...















tittto....car me akar car check karne lagta hai.....kuch na pakar wo dikki me hole se jhankta hai..


titto : aaaahhh...ek aankh dekh kar titto ..dar se gir jata hai..


thappp thapppp...

ki itne me dikki andar se bajne lagti hai...


darte hue titto dikki kholta hai..



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dikki khulne par titto dekhta hai Dikki me ek behad sundar ladki bandhi padi hoti hai..




titto : tu kon hai..


mooh bandha hone ke karan ladki kuch bol nahi pati wo kholne ka ishara karti hai ...ye dekh titto apna chaku nikal kar ladki ko darate hue use dikki se nikalne me help karta hai...


fir use piche se pakad kar khachidte hue motel ke andar le jane lagta hai....



Itne me harleen jashan Jaswinder jot jungle se puspinder ko utha late hai...Jo ab sirf body thi...

jaswinder sahit ab sabke face ke rang ud gaye they...sab ek dusre ka chahera dekh rahe they...sabke chahro par dar dikh raha tha..






andar lakar titto ladki ko kholne me uski help karne lagta hai....



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khulte hi ladki lambi lambi sanse lene lagti hai....



titto : kon hai tu...




khulte hi meri sans me sans aayi...


mai : mai kaha hon...

Mumbai se 400k.m door...




mai : tum kon ho..


mai titto hon...aur ye mere
..wo basement se nikalte upar aa rahe logo ko dekh bola..apne bare me bata kar wo un logo ke bare me batane laga...



jaswinder : tu kon hai ladki...


mai : wo kaha hai...


jaswinder : kon wo .kiski baat kar Rahi hai tu....


mai : wo jo mujhe yahan laya..


jashan: sali...sidhi tarah batati hai ya tujhe Marun..wo mera sar table par jhukate hue boli..


titto : ye uski car me Mili...


jaswinder : tujhe kidnap Kiya tha usne..


mai : ha 6 mahine pehle..


titto : daddy puspinder uncle kaha hai..



jot : mere dost ko maar diya usne...kehte hue jot fut fut kar rone lagta hai...


titto : kya.....bhagte hue titto basement ki taraf daud laga deta hai..

andar akar dekhta hai andar puspender ki body padi hai jise dekh wo foot foot kar rone lagta hai...


jot : o sala kitthe gaya.

gusse me jot chikha...




un logo ko rota chhod meri najar nancy par padi...


mai : ye kisne kiyaaa....mai chikh padi...


mai : tumne bahut badi galti kar di hai..


jaswinder : chal.use upar dhundte hai... Ise sath le le...



jot Singh ko chhod kar ham sab upar agaye they...


harleen : tu kya janti hai uske bare me..

mai : tumne mara us ladki ko..


titto : Maine bas chaku rakha tha usne khud hi apni gardan par fer liya..




mai : Jaan pyari hai to police ko call Karo....warna tum me se yahan se koi Zinda nahi bachega... kehte hue mai ledline talash karne lagi...ek jagah dekhne par mai bhagkar ledline ke pass ayi..




dhammmmm...Maine jaise hi number dial Kiya... jaswinder ne phone tod diya.,
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
jot ki cheekh par ham sab niche bhage....
niche jab...jot singh pushpinder ki body se lipte ro Raha hota hai tab pushpinder ka sharir hilne lagta hai...
dekhte hi dekhte pushpinder uth ke baith jata hai.....
jot hairani se dekhte hue darkar piche ho jata hai...

chrrrrrrr... tabhi puspinder ki body chirne lagti hai....
uske andar se moko khun me nahaya hua nikalta hai...
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Aaj jog Singh darinde ko apni ankho se dekh raha tha...darkar jot Singh ki pant gili ho jati hai......
gusse me moko body se nikalkar jot ki taraf badhta hai darkar piche hote hue jot Singh diwar se Jaa lagta hai..


























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Episode 1st

chapter : 1 ( no one alive)


ambulance aur police ke siren baj rahe they..

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charo taraf police ambulance khadi thi.

Har taraf khun aur body parts bikhre pade they..

policewalo ko sirf ek ladki Zinda mili thi jiske jism par halki kharoche thi..


do nurses us ladki ko ambulance ke pass lakar uske bandage lagate hue use check karne lagti hai kahi use aur chote to nahi aayi...




asp sir...4 bodies mili hai ab tak..ek hawal dar chikhte hue bola...3 male ek female


asp sir ek ya do bodies yahan hai inke body parts ...aaaahhh .. kehte khete dusre hawaldar ki vomit ho gayi..
bodies ka haal aesa tha hawaldar sure nahi ho paa Raha tha wo ek hai ya do..


asp : sabhi bodies yahan le aao..jinke parts bikhre hai wo nurses utha lengi..




kehkar policewala us ladki ki taraf chal Diya Jo Zinda bachi thi...



sirrrrr....ek body aur mili hai...lekin ye Zinda hai..asp ko piche se awaj aayi jis par wo ruk gaya..

hawaldar aur nurses stacher par body lekar asp ke pass aane lagte hai...tabhi jiska ilaj ho raha tha wo ladki stacher par pade aadmi ko dekhti hai...



jhatke se wo ambulance se gir jati hai...hath pair uske buri tarah se kanpne lagte hai..pareshani ke bhao uske chahere par aa jate hai...









mai kon hon aur stacher par leta wo shaksh kon hai jise dekh mera dil buri tarah se dhadakne laga mere pair kanpne lage...



ye janne ke liye aapko kuch samay piche Jana hoga...











shaher se door ek farm house par.


shaher se door ek posh ilake ke ek Ghar me 2 behad sundar ladkiyan door kholkar sar bahar nikal kar jhankti hai..


kisi ko na pakar dono bahar aa jati hai...

dono ki halat bhut kharab thi Marne pitne ke nishan nahi they lekin unke kapde bhut gande they...


koi nhi hai yahi mauka hai yahan se nikalne ka himmat Karo... pehli ladki ne kaha jiski awaj kanp Rahi thi..


dusri ladki sar hilati hai...aur dono bad hawasi se bhagne lagte hai.....



Ghar ke charo or ped hi ped they.....


pehli ladki : yahan se 500 MTR ki duri par road hai kisi ati jati gadi se ham lift le lenge...

dusri ladki : wo hame is jungle se nahi nikalne dega...



daro mat Nancy....







aaaaaaahhhh....bhagte hue hi Nancy ka pair ek trap me fas jata hai jiske blade uske pair me ghus jate hai....




aaaaaahhhhh....aaahhhhhhh...dard se nancy buri tarah se kanpne lagti hai...


nancy is tarah dekh pehli ladki uske pass baithkar hadbadahat me uske pair se trap nikalne lagti hai...




nancy : tum jaoooo...jaoooo...januuu...sirf ek mauka hai mai na sahi tum nikal jao yahan se..
nancy ki chikh par janu nam ankho se khadi hoti hai bhagne lagti hai....





Ye Nancy thi jisse mai ab se 6 mahine pehle Mili thi...jab wo mujhe kidnap karke laya tha...hamari batein ek kamre ke upar lagi window se hoti thi ham dono ne Aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekha tha..aur mauka Milne par ham dono bhag liye..Jo samay hame baten karne ka milta usme aksar ham dono yahan se bhagne ka plan karte they...



bhagte hue mai bar bar piche niche daye baye sab taraf dekh rahi thi...wo kaisa hai use mujhse achhi tarah kon Jaan sakta tha..
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aaaaaaahhh...



Bhagte hue ek trap me mera pair fasa aur mai ek ped se ulti latak gayi....


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ped me lage trap me latke hue mai use khichne ki kosish karne lagi...rassi meri takat se jyada majboot thi...




aaaaaaaaaaaaa....Kai kosisho ke baad jhanjhalahat me mai buri tarah chikhne lagi....




kisi ko apni or badta dekh mai latke hue hi hilne lagi....



Kuch sonchkar Hilte hue mai jis tree par latki uske pass Jane lagi...kisi tarah Maine use pakda aur fir..apne nakhun se mai ped par likhne lagi.........




jhanvi is alive.....





itne me wo mere pass agaya.....



















agle din.....usi jagah par....ek aurat aur uska beta bhedo ko ghas khilane ke liye late hai...
aurat : sambhal kar bahar bahar ho charana inhe..aage bhalu hai...
aurat ki baat sunkar baccha bhedo ko hankta hua aage badh jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........kuch dekh kar baccha chikh marta hai aur uski maaa bhagte hue aati hai......
kuch der baad usi jagah par police ki bhari nafri hoti hai.....
saher me pichle 6 mahino se lapata ladki jhanvi ka surag Mila tha ..ek ped par likha tha jhanvi is alive....
bar bar ek ladki ped ko dekhti aur uski ankho me ansu aa jate....


ye jhanvi ki bahan thi jo din raat ek kiye 6 mahino se apni bahan ko dhund rahi thi.....



Sir aage ek ghar hai...ek hawaldar ki awaj par wo ladki ped ke pass se hatkar hawaldar ke ishare ki taraf chal deti hai...



aage aakar wo dekhti hai Ghar jala hua hai......

bhut si jali lasho ki haddiyan padi thi....




policewala : in haddio ko forensic lab bhej do.......

jali haddio ko dekh kar wo ladki sadme se wahi gir jati hai....















I had a dream, I was seven
Climbin' my way in a tree
I saw a piece of Heaven
Waitin' in patience for me, dah
And I was runnin' far away
Would I run off the world someday?
Nobody knows, nobody knows
And I was dancing in the rain
I felt alive and I can't complain
But no, take me home
Take me home where I belong
I can't take it anymore...



car me song sunte hue ek aadmi aur ek ladki kahi Jaa rahe they....

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ladki ke chahere par ek gehri udasi thi use dekhne se aesa lag raha tha jaise usne jine ki khwahish hi chhod di hai.



wo bilkul shant baithi thi car me...



kuch der driving ke baad car ruki...aur aadmi car se bahar nikla....


car se nikal kar wo ek grocery shop se chips cold drinks lekar fir car me aata hai Sara saman ladki ko dekar wo fir driving karne lagta hai....




ladki : ham kaha Jaa rahe hai....

Ladka : kisi hotel me stay karenge..uske bad dekhunga aage kya karna hai...

ladki : ek saal se mai apni maa behno se nahi mili...Aaj bahar nikle hai ...isi bahane mai unse milna chahti hon.


ladke ne koi jawab nahi Diya...



ladki : aapko mujhse pyar nahi...aap ke liye wahi hai sab kuch....


ladka : Nancy...kyo zidd kar Rahi ho..



nancy : sirf ek baar milna hai uske baad fir kabhi nahi milungi...10 minutes me wapas aajaungi..


admi : adress...ladke ke face par smile dekh khush hokar Nancy uske kandhe ko chum leti hai....




fir Nancy adress batane lagi ladka udhar hi jata Raha...





dophar me wo dono ek bahut bade mahal ke samne khade they...



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Ghar bahar se dekhne par aesa lag raha tha jaise kisi king ka mahal ho..

Nancy car se nikal kar darwaze par aati hai..




watchman : kon kisse milna hai...


nancy : uncle it's me Nancy....


ye sunte hi watchman kursi se gir jata hai.


khud ko sambhal kar wo jaldi se door kholta hai fir chikhta hua andar ki taraf badh jata hai...ek mini car me dusre gurds Nancy ko bitha kar ghar ke andar le jate hai...















30 minutes baad Nancy bhagte hue Ghar ke andar se aati hai...mini car se utarkar wo bahar aati hai fir car me baith jati hai....









nancy ke aate hi car fir chalne lagti hai...







admi : tumne 10 minutes ke liye kaha tha.

nancy : ji Ghar bada hai to Ane Jane me 20 minutes lag gaye....



kehte hue Nancy apna sar admi ke sar par rakh leti hai...




nancy : aap apna asli naam batao na mujhe har baar taal dete ho....




admi : mujhe yaad nahi...


nancy : please bata do...aur Nancy pyar se us admi ke sar me ungliyan ferne lagti hai....



admi : moko...


nancy :ye nahi asli naam bataye..


moko : yaad nahi....



nancy : mooh kholo....


moko : kya hai...

itne me Nancy apni mutthi me se ek sweet ka piece nikal ke hath moko ki ankho ke aage kar deti hai....




nancy : mai layi apke liye jhuti nahi hai...


moko ke mooh kholne par Nancy adha sweet uske mooh me rakh deti hai...adha bachne par hath piche kar leti hai..


nancy : ye mai kha lon..


moko : haa....


nancy : aap kitne achhe ho ...aur Nancy fir kandhe par sar rakh kar ankhe band kar leti hai....









4 ghante drive ke baad gadi rukti hai...ek motel me..




moko : ssshhh...kuch kha lo bhuk lagi hogi tumhe...


moko ki awaj par Nancy ankhe kholti hai....

fir uth kar uske sath chal deti hai...


andar akar dono ek table par baith jate hai...






samne hi tv chal raha tha...jis par news chal Rahi thi...


repoter : pichle 6 mahine se lapata jahnvi Sharma ke sign jungle ke pass ek Ghar se mile ...lekin jhanvi sharma ka koi pata nahi...us jagah ki chhan bin karne par police ko 50 se jyada Sadi Hui jali lashe mili hai....jhanvi ki talash abhi jari hai...aur us khuni kidnapper..



nancy : yahan se kahi aur chale..


moko : nahi.....


sir order...waiter menu rakhte hue bola...


moko : stay karne ke liye rooms mil jayenge yahan...


waiter : nahi....full hai abhi....


moko : let's go...aur dono uth jate hai..


waiter : order to de de...dono ke uthne par waiter ki tone badal gayi..

ignore karke dono aage badhe to waiter unke aage agaya...


waiter : yahan baith kar ac khane ke bhi paise lagte hai...chal baithne ke paise de fir nikal..


nancy : please jao yahan se...no...no..waiter se kehkar Nancy moko ka hath pakad kar ankho se naa me gardan hilane lagti hai....


moko ki jeb se paise nikal kar Nancy waiter ko upar fek deti hai...fir moko ka hath pakde aage badh jati hai...




dono drive karte hue fir chalne lagte hai....




kuch duri par hi unhe ek aur motel dikhta hai.....
















kuch din pehle......





6 log isi motel me aate hai...motel ko ek ladki aur uske grand paa chala rahe hote hai....aur ek waiter rakha hota hai... Dono ne khana serve karne ke liye...ceff ka kaam dada poti milkar karte they dono is motel ke sahare hi ji rahe they...


ittefak se us din motel me koi nahi thahera tha...jab wo 6 log motel.me.rukne aaye..


jaswinder singh.inka leader tha.

harleen ek ladki thi...30 saal ki....

jaswinder ka ek bhai tha pushpinder Singh...Jo dekhne me kisi danav ki tarah lagta tha uski hight 9 feet ke kareeb thi...


jot Singh jaswinder ka friend tha.


titto jaswinder ka ladka tha..


jashanveer jaswinder ke beti thi...

ye sab police se bachkar bhag rahe they...ye sab chor they..inhone chori ke dauran ek family ko hi maar diya tha..

police se bachte hue ye yahan khane khane aye they...





khana khane ke baad waiter bill lekar Aya to ye motel ki jankari lene lage..



jaswinder : kitne log thahere hai yahan.

waiter : ji abhi to koi nahi...


jaswinder : kon kon kaam karta hai yahan..


waiter : mai didi aur dada ji..


jaswinder : teen hi log ho..


waiter : ji...ab bill...


jaswinder sari jankari nikal kar sabko dekhta hai...sabka ishara pate hi usne waiter se kaha.

jaswinder : tum jao abhi ham rukne ke liye room lenge tabhi bill bhar denge..

waiter : thik hai ji...abhi didi se kehta hon..tab tak mai room saaf kar deta hon... kehkar waiter chala jata hai...






Ye sab chalte hue counter par aate hai jahan motel Malkin inhi ka wait kar rahi hoti hai..

waiter : didi wo aa rahe hai tab tak mai Pancho room saaf kar deta hon...waiter jate hue bola.


ladki : suno Malik room number 47 se 50 teen ko saaf kar do..

waiter : thik hai didi..kehta hua wo chala jata hai.




jaswinder pushpinder jot Singh harleen ye charo counter par aate hai jashanveer motel.ke bahar dekhne jati hai...aur titto uske ishare ka wait kar raha hota hai...






ladki : sir aapke hue 3 hajar rupey..


jaswinder ladki ki baat sunkar hasne lagta hai.


jot Singh ladki ki khubsurti dekh hatho ko malne lagta hai...


itne me titto jashan ke aane par motel ka door band kar deta hai...aur board tang deta hai off ka....



jaswinder : Maine sirf 5 rupey ke liye pehla khun Kiya tha tujhe lagta hai mai tujhe teen hajar dunga...hahahahahah... jaswinder ke sath uske sabhi sathi hasne lagte hai...



waiter : gate kyo band kar rahe ho tum....dada jii...dada jiiii....


harleen : sun ladki ham kuch din yahan rukenge..tab tak tu free khana free rehne ka intezam karegi...


jaswinder : nahi....ab ye motel hamara hoga.....


dada ji : kon ho tum sab..


ladki : dada ji police ko bulaye...


dhammmm...itne me jaswinder ke ishare par pushpinder bhari bharkam counter utha ke fekte hue ladki ke dada ko pakad leta hai...


harleen : ye mat karo ...iski zarurat nahi hai ...

call kar rahi ladki ko bhagte hue jot Singh pakad leta hai...


bhatt...phone chhin kar jot singh use diwar me maar kar fod deta hai....


ladki ko pakde hue hi jot Singh uske boobs janwaro ki tarah nochne lagta hai.....




harleen : ruk jao jot Singh...


jaswinder : lene do maje vaise bhi inhe marna hi hai...jab tak koi jugad nahi ho jati ham yahi rahenge..aur uske liye in dono ka marna zaruri hai...


kutto chhod do meri poti ko ...


chatttt...budhe admi ke virodh karne par pushpender uski gardan ko Tod deta hai....


nahiiiiiiiiiiiii.....apne dada ke ludakte jism ko dekh ladki Dil kharas chikh maarti hai aur pathar ki Murat ban jati hai....


ladki ko beshudd dekh jot singh uske kapde fadne lagta hai.....

ye dekh pushpinder ladki par Pani Marta hai jisse wo hosh me ATI hai to dekhti hai uske jism par ek bhi kapda nahi.....

fir ladki ko pakad kar bari bari se teeno uska rape karne lagte hai ....



Mooh daba hone ke karan uski ghuti ghuti chikhe nikal Rahi thi...



jaswinder : chal tu bhi aa ja puttar apne tatto da pani nikal le..

jashan ko dekh Titto naa me Inkar kar deta hai....


jaswinder : tu mujh par nahi gaya hai kutte pata nhi kis ka liya randi ne....



didi...sabhi room ki safai kar....didi.




samne ka manzar dekh waiter wahi ruk jata hai..aur chikhte hue ladki ko bachane ke liye bhagta hai...

kutttooooo......





pushpinder apne pass ate hi use gardan se pakad leta hai....


dhammmm...fir hawa me utha kar...farsh par maar deta hai...force jyada hone par waiter ka sar fatt jata hai....


dhammmmmm...agle hi pal pushpinder ek laat waiter ke sar par Marta hai...aur waiter ka sar crush ho jata hai ...


malikkk....apne waiter ko marte dekh ladki ki akhiri awaj nikalti hai aur uski bhi jaan nikal jati hai......







sab ke marne ke baad raat me wo log motel ke piche ke jungle me sabhi lasho ko dafna dete hai...


raat me hi sari safai karke wo log motel ko kiraye ke liye khol dete hai.



jaswinder : harleen jashan tum dono cooking karogi ..pushpunder tu room me hi rehna ..titto tu ab se waiter ..aur jot tu bahar guard ka kaam karega..


titto : ye sab kyo kar rahe ho daddy .

jaswinder : jab tak ham yahan hai Ane wale customers ko lootenge hahahah..



Harleen : marna mat warna problem ho jayegi..




jaswinder : hahaha kuch nhi hoga yahan dur dur tak koi Ghar nahi hai ....chalo lag jao sab kaam par....aese hi motel chalate hue unhe 5 din ho gaye they..

















dhammm dhammmm.....dono ke piche car bajti reh jati hai aur Nancy moko motel me jane ke liye aage badh jate hai...




andar aakar dono ek Khali table par baith jate hai....

ikka dukka hi customer they Jo kha rahe they..



dono ke baithte hi titto order lene ke liye aa jata hai...


moko : order do...


nancy italion aur Chinese food order karti hai....




kuch der baad titto order lekar ata hai..

moko : yahan stay karne ke liye room mil jayega...


titto : mil jayega...


moko : thik hai......


khana khane ke baad moko uth gaya..



moko : bacha hua khana use de aao tab tak mai room ke liye baat karta hon...










counter par aakar moko khada ho jata hai..

jaswinder andar khana bana rahi jashan ki gand masal raha hota hai...jise moko dekh leta hai aur well Baja deta hai...


bhagta hua jaswinder counter par aata hai..


jaswinder : dasso ..


moko : double bad room chahiye....


jaswinder : ek raat ka 5 hajar...



Moko : 15 din ka ..


jaswinder : 75 hajar..

moko : room ki saaf safai karao mai car se paise lekar ata hon....


kehkar moko car me ata hai...fir car me se paise nikalta hai..




moko : ho gaya..


nancy : ji ho gaya....




moko : yahi ruko mai car park karke ata hon...




moko car lekar chala jata hai...


piche Nancy reh jati hai ...


gate par khada jot singh Nancy ki khubsurti dekh aahein bharne lagta hai....


control na karte hue wo chalta hua Nancy ke pass aa jata hai...aur apna hath Nancy ke chutro par rakhne wala hota hai ki itne me jaswinder aakar uska hath pakad leta hai..


jaswinder : kya kar Raha hai khotey...badi party hai thoda wait kar ye bhi mil jayegi tujhe....khichta hua jaswinder jot ko le jata hai.....










kuch der baad moko aata hai aur uske sath Nancy andar badh jati hai..


fir moko rent pay karta hai...


jaswinder : titto sir nu room che lejaa..


titto : sir mere sath aao...

key lekar titto dono ko ek room me Lata hai...fir chhodkar chala jata hai..


room me ate hi...moko nahane ke liye washroom me ghus jata hai...

jab bahar ata hai to dekhta hai...nancy apni Patti utar Rahi hai...




ye dekh moko Patti utar kar apne bag se new Patti malham laga kar pair me Patti band deta hai..


nancy : sorry mai uski baton me akar apne hi chot maar baithi...


moko : ab dard to nahi ho raha...



Nancy: mujhe dard feel nahi hota...acha mai naha lon..


moko ke sar hilane par Nancy kapde lekar washroom me ghus jati hai.


kuch der baad towel me Nancy naha kar aati hai...


nancy ko towel me dekh moko use bad par patak deta hai....

galo ko chumte hue moko Nancy ki towel kholne lagta hai....tabhi kuch yaad aane par moko Nancy par se uth jata hai....



nancy : naraj ho aap mujhse..


moko : nahi....


moko ka jawab sun Nancy kapde pahan kar let jati hai....


thake hone ki wajah se dono ki aankh lag jati hai...









raat 9 baje dono ki aankh khulti hai....


mooh hath dhokar dono niche aate hai..niche staff aur un dono ke siwa koi nahi tha..
fir titto ko order dete hai..order aane par dono khane lagte hai.....












khate hue jot Singh Nancy ko ghurr Raha hota hai...Nancy ko dekhte hue jot ka ling akadne lagta hai ye dekh wo pant ke upar se hi apne ling ko masal deta hai.....




ab jot Singh Nancy ko pane ke liye pagal ho Gaya tha.....







wo chalte hue jaswinder ke pass aata hai....isharo se wo Nancy ki taraf ishara karta hai...jis par jaswinder use ankhe dikhate hue rukne ka ishara karta hai....


daal na galte dekh jot puspindar ke room me ghus jata hai...


jot : bahar ek bhut chikni maal aayi hai aur tu yahan baitha hai....

puspinder : kon ...


jot : gate se jhank kar dekh....


jot ki baat sunkar pushpindar jaise hi door se jhank kar Nancy ko dekhta hai to wo bhi Nancy ki sundarta me kho jata hai...




puspindar : ye mujhe chahiye...


jot : kha lene de..mere ishare par bahar AA Jana....


kehta hua jot room se nikal jata hai....








khane ke baad moko khana lekar hotel se bahar nikal jata hai...Nancy apne room ki taraf Jane lagti hai....





moko ke nikalte hi jot pushpinder ko awaj lagata hai....Jo jot ke bulane ka hi intezar kar Raha tha....





Jaswindar: tu manega nahi...

jot : nahi...aur jot kamini hasi hasne lagta hai.....


jaswinder : ja puspinder le AA una nu tehkhane vich....titto tu bhi iske naal Jaa kahi ye pagal use maar na de...kehte hue jaswinder aur puspindar harleen jashan ko liye...tehkhane ki taraf badh jate hai...






room me ghus Rahi Nancy ko puspindad akar pakad leta hai aur Nancy sawal bhari najro se use dekhne lagti hai...

Pushpindar : chal hamare sath warna yahi Mari jayegi...rape karunga Tera wo alag.....

kuch kahe Bina Nancy unke sath chal deti hai.....hairat ki baat thi Nancy ki ankho me ek pal ke liye bhi dar nahi dikha tha..titto pushpindar ko...










moko jab parking se hotel me ate hai to dekhta hai...motel ki light band hai....


light chali gayi hogi sonch kar moko room me ata hai to dekhta hai room me Nancy nahi hai...ye dekh wo wapas niche aata hai....




room me kahi light nhi they...ek khidki se roshni ate dekh moko udhar hi chal deta hai...

door utha kar moko dekhta hai niche sidhiyan hai jo basement ki taraf ja rahi thi....






niche akar moko dekhta hai...

niche hotel staff...Nancy ko staff kursi par bitha ke rassio se bandh rahe hai..


jaswindar : aaja Tera hi intezar tha...Jaa jot le AA isnu....


chaku dikhate hue jot moko ke pass ata hai....idhar titto nancy ke gale par chaku rakh leta hai...



jot piche aakar moko ki peeth par chaku rakhe use age ke liye badhane lagta hai.....




fir ek chair par moko ko bitha kar titto jot milkar use rassi se bandh dete hai.




jaswinder : thand rakh...pushpindar ko Nancy ki taraf badhte dekh jaswinder use rok deta hai....


jaswinder : iske pass bahut sare paise hai....

titto : kaise pata daddy...


jaswinder : rent lene ke liye ye car se paise nikal kar laya tha..




Jot : to ise maar ke paise nikal lenge car se..


jaswinder : Maine dekhi iski car isne paise kahi chupa diye hai...puspinder iska mooh to khol..


jaswinder ka order sun puspindar aate hi moko ke mooh par ek zordar panch Marta hai....


jaswinder : dhire maar kahin mar na jaye....

panch se moko ki ankhe nichi nahi hoti wo still pushpinder ki ankho me dekh raha hota hai...jise dekh puspunder ko jhatka lagta hai...ye pehli baar tha ki uske panch se ab tak koi Zinda tha...



puspinder : mooh khol sale...


khacchhhhh.....

moko ke reaction na Dene par puspinder ko apni beijjati mehsus Hoti hai..jot se chaku lekar wo moko ke kandhe me ghused deta hai....


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moko dard me ek karahat bhi nahi nikalta hai...still puspinder ko ghurta rehta hai..



jaswinder : bata de paise kaha hai warna iski izzat tere samne lutenge... kehte hue wo Nancy ke boobs par hath rakhne lagta hai.



moko : chhod de use....


jaswinder : sale mujhe aankh dikhayega....



chatakk chatakkk....chatakkkkk....moko ko dikhate hue jaswinder Nancy ko marne lagta hai....



Ting....itne me motel ki ring bajti hai..


jaswinder : is samay kon marne Aya yahan.


jaswinder harleen jashan jot ko apne sath aane ka ishara karta hai...titto aur puspinder niche hi reh jate hai..
titto ka chaku still Nancy ke gale par rakha hota hai ..




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Pitne ki wajah se Nancy ki ankho se ansu nikal rahe hote hai...rote hue wo moko ko dekhte hue apni purani zindagi yaad karne lagti hai...



puspinder : sale mooh khol apna....


Nancy : hamara sath yahi Tak ka tha...is jahan me na sahi agle Jahan me ham milenge...ye kehte hue ...nancy khud hi apni gardan par chaku ragad deti hai...




moko : noooooooooo........Nancy ki sanso ko tutta dekh moko chikh padta hai....

titto Nancy ko Marta chhod puspendra ko aage karte hue khud basement se bahar ki taraf daud laga deta hai.

rassi khol kar moko bhagta hua Nancy ki taraf badhta hai ki itne me chaku liye pushpinder moko ke aage aa jata hai....
aaaaaaaaaaa.....ek hi punch se pushpinder diwar se Jaa lagta hai uska knife wahi gir jata hai....
moko Nancy ko dekhte hue ghutno par baith ke uske sar ko tham leta hai....




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Nancy ka jism sakit padh gaya tha....moko ki ankhe nam ho gayi thi....
Udgiyaun...itne me upar se goli chalne ki awaj aati...


aaahhh....khud ko jhadte hue pushpinder uthta hai....



puspinder ki awaj par moko gusse me sar utha ke use dekhta hai.....



khannnnnnn...pass pade knife ko moko pushpinder ki taraf fek deta hai....


knife utha ke puspinder bhagte hue marne moko ki taraf badhta hai....



dhammmmmm....


itne me ek punch pushpinder ki thodi par padta hai aur uske dant mooh se nikal kar bahar ko girte hai.....




chaku uske hatho se chhut jata hai....




......chaku par pair padhne se chaku uchal kar moko ke hath me aata hai....


kharrrrr...kharrrr.....kharrr...

chaku pakadte hi....moko puspinder ke hatho me ghusane lagta hai....jahan jahan moko knife maar Raha tha wahan wahan se khun ke fabbare nikal rahe they......





kharrrrrrrrrrr....fir moko pushpinder ko bich me se cheer deta hai.....








upar ek customer Aya tha...jise jaswinder maar ke use loot leta hai...


Jaswinder : us sale ki car ko achi tarah se check karke AA dekh paise wahi hoge....jashan tu uske room me rakhe saman me dekh....harleen jot ko liye jaswinder tehkhane me aata hai...


tehkhane me Nancy ki body aur bhut sa khun pada hota hai.....

puspinder moko dono gayab they....samne ki diwar Tuti padi thi....


jaswinder : ye kaise hua....

sab chup they...aur hairan bhi...

jaswinder sabko liye us diwar ki taraf chal deta hai...















tittto....car me akar car check karne lagta hai.....kuch na pakar wo dikki me hole se jhankta hai..


titto : aaaahhh...ek aankh dekh kar titto ..dar se gir jata hai..


thappp thapppp...

ki itne me dikki andar se bajne lagti hai...


darte hue titto dikki kholta hai..



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dikki khulne par titto dekhta hai Dikki me ek behad sundar ladki bandhi padi hoti hai..




titto : tu kon hai..


mooh bandha hone ke karan ladki kuch bol nahi pati wo kholne ka ishara karti hai ...ye dekh titto apna chaku nikal kar ladki ko darate hue use dikki se nikalne me help karta hai...


fir use piche se pakad kar khachidte hue motel ke andar le jane lagta hai....



Itne me harleen jashan Jaswinder jot jungle se puspinder ko utha late hai...Jo ab sirf body thi...

jaswinder sahit ab sabke face ke rang ud gaye they...sab ek dusre ka chahera dekh rahe they...sabke chahro par dar dikh raha tha..






andar lakar titto ladki ko kholne me uski help karne lagta hai....



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khulte hi ladki lambi lambi sanse lene lagti hai....



titto : kon hai tu...




khulte hi meri sans me sans aayi...


mai : mai kaha hon...

Mumbai se 400k.m door...




mai : tum kon ho..


mai titto hon...aur ye mere
..wo basement se nikalte upar aa rahe logo ko dekh bola..apne bare me bata kar wo un logo ke bare me batane laga...



jaswinder : tu kon hai ladki...


mai : wo kaha hai...


jaswinder : kon wo .kiski baat kar Rahi hai tu....


mai : wo jo mujhe yahan laya..


jashan: sali...sidhi tarah batati hai ya tujhe Marun..wo mera sar table par jhukate hue boli..


titto : ye uski car me Mili...


jaswinder : tujhe kidnap Kiya tha usne..


mai : ha 6 mahine pehle..


titto : daddy puspinder uncle kaha hai..



jot : mere dost ko maar diya usne...kehte hue jot fut fut kar rone lagta hai...


titto : kya.....bhagte hue titto basement ki taraf daud laga deta hai..

andar akar dekhta hai andar puspender ki body padi hai jise dekh wo foot foot kar rone lagta hai...


jot : o sala kitthe gaya.

gusse me jot chikha...




un logo ko rota chhod meri najar nancy par padi...


mai : ye kisne kiyaaa....mai chikh padi...


mai : tumne bahut badi galti kar di hai..


jaswinder : chal.use upar dhundte hai... Ise sath le le...



jot Singh ko chhod kar ham sab upar agaye they...


harleen : tu kya janti hai uske bare me..

mai : tumne mara us ladki ko..


titto : Maine bas chaku rakha tha usne khud hi apni gardan par fer liya..




mai : Jaan pyari hai to police ko call Karo....warna tum me se yahan se koi Zinda nahi bachega... kehte hue mai ledline talash karne lagi...ek jagah dekhne par mai bhagkar ledline ke pass ayi..




dhammmmm...Maine jaise hi number dial Kiya... jaswinder ne phone tod diya.,
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
jot ki cheekh par ham sab niche bhage....
niche jab...jot singh pushpinder ki body se lipte ro Raha hota hai tab pushpinder ka sharir hilne lagta hai...
dekhte hi dekhte pushpinder uth ke baith jata hai.....
jot hairani se dekhte hue darkar piche ho jata hai...

chrrrrrrr... tabhi puspinder ki body chirne lagti hai....
uske andar se moko khun me nahaya hua nikalta hai...
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Aaj jog Singh darinde ko apni ankho se dekh raha tha...darkar jot Singh ki pant gili ho jati hai......
gusse me moko body se nikalkar jot ki taraf badhta hai darkar piche hote hue jot Singh diwar se Jaa lagta hai..


























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