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 BeFore reading story read this..

Episode start on page 11

Ye story ab fir se shuru ho Rahi hai matlab restart.. isliye pehle wali episode delete kar di hai.

1. Story ab bachpan se start hogi.

2.is story me all tyoe sax hoga sath me khun kharaba bhi... interfaith ko chhodkar...all type x story ki mang hai.

3. Story read karne se pehle ye baat dhyan rakhna story adultery hai jisme main bhi adultery hi hai.

4. Story kisi samaj culcutr dharm ke against nahi hai ...fir bhi kisi ki gaon jale to DM me I will edit .

5.yadi story band hoti hai is site par to mujhe pm karna mai dusri site ke bare me bata dunga jahan ye story running milegi.


6.agar support karna hai to end Tak karna.

7.story me bhut se main character super heroes hai . kisi ek ko importance nahi di jayegi.



 
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Episode 2.
Aaj jot Singh darinde ko apni ankho se dekh raha tha...darkar jot Singh ki pant gili ho jati hai......


gusse me moko body se nikalkar jot ki taraf badhta hai darkar piche hote hue jot Singh diwar se Jaa lagta hai..


next continue.......


Jot : Mainu maaf kar de mainu ni mara una nu puspindar ne mareya...


moko : oye pajee kadi has bhi Liya kar....moko ghambhirta se bola.


agle hi pal moko ka hath chalta hai ...


hath aage badhne se pehle hi jot Singh ko Dil ka daura padta hai ..

wo ankhe bahar liye dono hatho se apna dil thame moko ko dekhne lagta hai....jot ko apne kiye sare pap yaad ane lage jaswinder ke sath milkar usne bhut se khun rape kiye they...wo janta pap ki saja itni bhayank hoti hai to wo kabhi pap nahi karta.....lekin ye to bas arambh tha uski saja ka.





khrrrrr....chaku chala aur jot ki gardan kat kar gir gayi....


itne me sab basement me agaye moko gayab ho chuka tha...




jot ki lash dekh kar titto harleen bilakh bilakh kar rone lagte hai...




moko apne room me aakar ab naha raha tha...












jhanvi : tumhe samjh me nahi aata....uske liye military ki zarurat padegi...


jaswinder : chup kar ladki ..



titto : daddy wo sahi keh Rahi hai ..hame police ko bulana hoga..

jaswinder : pahanchod sabse pehle police hame pakdegi...chup karke Bai Jaa..



harleen : ab ham kya karenge..


jaswinder : subah Tak ka intezar subah hote hi ham yahan se nikal chalenge...abhi ke liye sub gun Lelo ..ham uska intezar karenge..


upar aakar sab gun liye moko ka intezar karne lagte hai....


sab andar se buri tarah bhaybhit they...


jhanvi : ye dekho...jhangi sidio par tapakte hue khun ko dikhate hue boli..

jhanvi : wo upar hai ..


jhanvi ki baat sun jaswinder gun liye upar ki taraf daud laga deta hai...


room me akar dekhta hai ab moko ka koi saman room me nahi hai...






moko diwar par khada hota hai...uske hath me arrow hoti hai....aur uska nishana titto....




khaannnnnnn....


kanch todte Hue ek arrow akar titto ke sine se bahar nikal jati hai...titto ko chikhne ka bhi mauka nahi milta..



Dhammmmmm....aur besuddh hokar titto jameen par gir jata hai.


jashan : tittooo...chikhte hue jashan titto ke pass ati hai aur use tham ke rone lagti hai...


awaj par jaswinder upar se bhagta hua aata hai.....



apne bete ki dardnaak maut dekh wo bhi tadap uthta hai...use titto ki maut se jyada apni bari ka dar lag raha tha....




titto ko diwar ki aad me karke baap beti dono titto ko pakad kar rone lagte hai...



jhanvi : wo khel Raha hai...pehle wo torcher karega fir dardnaak maut dega...bachna hai to army ko bulao...


harleen : ye sahi keh Rahi hai....hame yahan se bhagna hoga....


jaswinder : chup karke hai jaa..



harleen : mai teri gulam nahi hon....


jaswinder : sali mujh se jaban ladayegi..

harleen : kutte mar yahi...wo jate hue boli..


jhanvi : mai bhi chalti hon...




dono motel se bahar aakar chupte hue nikalne lagti hai....



udhar jaswinder jashan bhi gun liye moko ko dhundne lagte hai....






chalte hue jashan aur jaswinder lakdi ke bridge par aa jate hai..


dhaye dhaye....

jaswinder hadbadahat me idhar udhar golian chala raha hota hai.


jashan : daddy chalte hai yahan se..uske baad tum aur mai apas me pati patni ki tarah rahenge.

jaswinder : wo hame Jane dega tab na...jashan ye Maro ya Maaro ka muqabla hai...use mare Bina ham yahan se nahi nikal sakte...

jashan : galti tumhari hai...tumhari lalach dekho hame Kahan le ayi sab mar gaye... Sher bante they ... kehte they Mera koi kuch nahi bigad payega..ye bhul gaye Sher ke liye bhi shaba Sher hota hai ..



jaswinder: ho gayi galti...





Bridge ke niche Pani me chupa moko dono ki batein sun Raha tha....

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tairte hue wo bridge se nikalta hai...

agle hi pal uski arrow ka nishana jashan hoti hai...




arrow jashan ke gale ke aar paar ho jata hai..



dhaye dhaye dhaye...

moko ko dekhte hi jaswinder us par firing start kar deta hai....


sari golian khatm hone par jaswinder moko se bachkar bhagne lagta hai...



use apni beti ki bhi parwah nahi hoti ki wo use mud kar dekh ke.....




bhagte hue use harleen aur jhanvi milti hai....


jaswinder : harleen ..mujhe bacha le usne jashan ko maar diya.... jaswinder harleen ke aage gidgidata hua chikha....






harleen : jaswinder tu to bahut bada Gunda hai na...kisi ka bhi rape kar dena kisi ko bhi maar dena tere liye aam baat hai ....bata ab Kaha gaya Tera wo ghamand...

harleen ki jali Kati batein sun dahade Marta hua jaswinder ek taraf ko daud laga deta hai...






Jaswinder: aaaa ..aaahhh...
samne kisi ko dekh jaswinder bhagte hue hi gir jata hai....



uske samne moko khada tha....




moko ko dekh jaswinder hath jod leta hai....



kharrrrr....agle hi pal jaswinder ki ungliyan kat kar gir jati hai.....




jaswinder : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh..... jaswinder buri tarah dard me dakarne lagta hai......


moko uski unglian utha kar uske aage kar deta hai...



moko : kha ise.....


moko ko dekh usme naa kehne ki himmat nahi hoti..mooh laga kar wo apni ungliyan khane lagta hai....



agle hi pal moko uske ek pair par knife chala deta hai...jisse uska pair kat kar alag ho jata hai...


jaswinder : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...ulti karta hua jaswinder buri tarah se chikhne laga....


uski chikhe us ilaqe me gunj rahi thi....


pair utha kar moko uska behta khun khule jaswinder ke mooh me dalne lagta hai.....



khoon khatm ho jane par..moko apna chaku jaswinder ke gale par rakh deta hai....


kharrrrr...kharrrrr...

dhire dhire karte hue moko uski gardan utar deta hai.....










Harleen : hame bhi bhagna chahiye... jaswinder ko dekh harleen boli....

dono parking lot me khadi thi...


jhanvi : Maine kaha na wo khel raha hai...ham nahi bhag sakte...kuch kar sakte hai to bas uske Ane ka intezar...



harleen : ye psycho kon hai....


jhanvi : pata nahi...


harleen : tum kaise mili usse....


jhanvi : kidnap Kiya tha usne mujhe 6 mahine pehle...


harleen : usne tumhe mara nahi....


jhanvi : nahi....wo pyar karta hai mujhe....


jhanvi ka jawab sun harleen ko bachne ka ek rasta dikhai deta hai...der kiye bina wo jhanvi par gun taan deti hai..

harleen : tum mujhe bachaogi usse....





jhanvi : dhokebaz..gusse me jhanvi chikhi..


harleen : meri jagah hoti to tum bhi yahi karti .



tabhi dono ko gadio ki taraf se awaj aati hai...

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moko gadio ke upar khada tha...uske pair ke niche ek rassi thi...


harleen : mujhe Jane de warna iska bheja uda dungi....
wo jhanvi ko aage karte hue boli....


moko khamosi se use dekh raha tha...




harleen : Jane de mujhe warna mai...

uski baat puri hone se pehle moko apne pair ke niche dabi rassi chhod deta hai...



dhayeee.....


ek goli chalti hai aur harleen ke sar fat jata hai.....



jhanvi dar aur khauf se kanpne lagti hai.....





jhanvi : sabko to maar chuke ho ab mujhe bhi maar do haiwan....


Jhanvi use dekh chikhte hue boli...


gadio par se kud kar moko jhanvi ki taraf badhne lagta hai...

use dekh jhanvi bhi man me sonch leti hai maregi lekin moko se dare Bina...




moko : Nancy mujhe chhod gayi...moko ki madhyam si awaj ayi.


jhanvi : tumhari wajah se Mari hai wo..ab mujhe bhi maar do...Kam se kam tumhari kaid se to mukti milegi..mai nahi darti tumse samajh Gaye tum ..

kehte hue jhanvi ankhe band kar leti hai...usne apna ant sonch liya tha.
moko : yahi Ada to mujhe tumhari pasand hai...

moko ne pyar se kaha..lekin jhanvi ke Kano me uske shabd zahar ki tarah ghul rahe they..


Fir jhanvi ko dekhte hue moko gun nikal leta hai...

moko : pyaar insan ko bhikari bana deta hai apne pyaar ko pane ke liye insan kisi bhi had tak gir sakta hai ..I love you I love you more than myself...jhanvi..mujhe apna lo...

kehte hue moko gun jhanvi ke aage kar deta hai....ye wo shabd they jinhe jhanvi pichle 6 mahino se sunti aa rahi thi....


jhanvi : kaise bharosa Karu..

moko ankho se gun ki taraf ishara kar deta hai...

moko : ya to mere sath chalo ya fir mujhe maar ke mukt ho jao....

jhanvi dhire dhire hath badhate hue gun utha leti hai...

agle hi pal jhanvi gun moko par taan deti hai..


jhanvi : tum mere liye mar bhi jaoge na tab bhi tumse pyar nahi karungi....jhanvi apni fingar gun par rakhte hue boli..

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moko : mai yaad nahi tumhe bhisma..... tumhara


dhaye....


dhammmmm.




Moko kuch keh pata usse pehle goli chali aur moko zameen se Jaa laga..







bhisma naam sunkar jhanvi ko kuch yaad ata hai lekin wo dhyan nahi deti..


moko ke Marne par use afsos nhi ho raha tha...Balki is jagah se use dar lag raha tha..


bhagte hue wo motel me aati hai aur telephone se sabse pehle call apni didi ko karti hai...



jhanvi : didi...

jhanvi...udhar se shock bhari awaj ayi..


jhanvi : ha sanvi di..ye mai hon..

sanvi : jhanvi kaha ho tum..


jhanvi : didi mai maharastra se 160 k.m door ek motel me hon...abhi abhi mujhse ek khun ho gaya...


sanvi : kiska khun..



jhanvi : jisne mujhe kidnap Kiya use maar diya maine.

sanvi : janu dhyan se suno...police ko ye baat pata nahi chalni chahiye..


jhanvi : didi mujhe dar lag raha hai lasho ko dekh kar.....jhanvi kanpti awaj me boli...


sanvi : janu call karke police ko bulao...mai bhi yahan se nikal kar aa rahi hon..






uske baad jhanvi ledline se sidha police ko call karti hai..






present... chapter two.( The beginning of coma)







jhanvi 's perspective...


police use lekar aayi...aur nurses ne use ban me stecher par lita diya.



Mera Dil dhak dhak kar raha tha...agar wo Zinda reh Gaya to is baar wo mujh par koi mercy nahi karne wala tha...




mere aur Nancy ke bhagne ka dosh bhi usne mujh par daal Diya tha....aur 24 ghanto se jyada samay ke liye mujhe dikki me band kar Diya tha..



nurses uski body ko first aid dekar van le jane ke liye ready ho gayi thi..

mujhe raste me hi khatm karna tha use..aur policewalo ke sawalo se bhi bachna tha..








itne me police aayi mujhse puchtach karne ke liye....


police ko dekhte hi mai shock me rehne ka dikhawa karne lagi...





policewala : ise bhi le jao...shock se nikal aye fir isse puch tach karenge...






nurses mujhe bhi stecher par uske barabr me lita kar ban aage badha deti hai....




ass pass dekhne ke liye maine halki si aankh kholi...to nurses mere pass hi baithi thi...unki maujudgi me mai use nuksan nahi pahucha sakti thi....







hospital akar nurses use ot me le gayi...uske barabr wale room me lakar unhone mujhe lita diya....





Kai dino se thik se na so pane ke karan bistar par lette hi meri aankh lag gayi..













agli subah mai 12 baje jagi....





mujhe jagta dekh nurses ne dekh liya aur police ko inform kar diya...


nurse : ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho...

uski baton ko mai samajhne ki acting karne lagi mooh khol ke...paglo ki tarah..




nurse : nashta karogi...bhuk se Mera bura haal tha lekin maine khud par control Kiya...aur vaisa hi use reaction diya..








itne me police bhi agayi jinke sath meri didi bhi thi.....




mujhe dekhte hi wo mujhse lipat kar rone lagi...





mai unse bhut si baten karna chahti thi lekin sabki maujudgi me kuch bol na payi....





itne me doctor agaya jo mera checkup karne laga..






doctor : ye abhi shock me hai statement aap baad me lena...usne mera check up karne ke baad kaha..

policewala: shock se pehle hame inki call mili thi..



doctor : hota hai aesa patients ke sath..



Policewala : thik hai inhe hosh me lao...


kehta hua wo chala gaya....



sabke jate hi mai didi se lipat kar rone lagi.




sanvi : chup ho Jaa meri Jaan ab mai agayai hon na.


mai : aap khud ro Rahi ho...


sanvi : kya bataun tumhare bagair kya haal ho gaya tha mera...jina bhul gayi thi...tumhare photos lekar yahan wahan thokre khati fir rahi thi..


mai : oh meri pyari didi...aur mai unhe kaskar hug kar li...




kisi ki ahat par ham alag ho gaye...


nurse breakfast lekar ayi thi...


khana dekh kar meri bhuk apne aap khatm ho gayi...


sanvi : mujhe do mai khila dungi... tary dekar nurse chali gayi




tray lekar didi mujhe khilane lagi..


sanvi : kisne kidnap Kiya tha tumhe..




mai : didi sab baad me bataungi...wo mere barabar wale room leta hai uska ilaaj ho raha hai...wo bhut khatarnak hai didi...wo Bach Gaya to hame Zinda nahi chhodega wo psychopath hai...



sanvi : tum Khao mai dekh kar aati hon...





tray mujhe thama kar didi chali gayi..




ham dono ki duniya ek dusre me basti hai....hachpan me hi hamare parents separate ho Gaye they...

Sepretion ke baad mom ne kisi aur se vivah kar liya...hame apne sath le gayi thi wo...apne husband ka bartav dekh unhone hame bachpan me hi alag kar diya.
..ham wapas dad wale Ghar me agaye...


uske baad ek dusre ka sahara ham dono they...mom hame dekhne aati...kaam samjhati hamari education ka khyal mom ne hi rakha ...ek din wo ayi to unka pet Fula hua tha...uske baad 6 mahine tak wo Milne nahi aayi...ham bhi fir unke Bina jina seekh Gaye...


hame bada hota dekh mom ka ana na ke barabar ho gaya tha wo bas fees bagairah kharche ke liye paise Dene hote to hi aati thi.warna nahi...



Mera ek chhota bhai bhi tha ...jise pop apne sath le gaye they...


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meri didi sanvi ... Age 25 hight 5'9
didi airhostess hai didi ka ek casino bhi hai Mumbai me.. job ke sath sanvi di multiple business bhi karti hai..
didi married hai unke husband ki death ho gayi hai...dekhne me didi bahut attractive hai badan kasa hua hai...gym karke body ko didi ne aur sexy bana li...jo bhi didi ko dekhe bas dekhta hi reh jaye..didi ka figure 36.34.36 hai...red lips didi ke chahere par gulab ki tarah dikhte rang didi ka white hai...cahere par working woman wala tej hai..













jhanvi 22 saal ki ek khubsurat ladki .

abhi study kar rahi hai..vaise to hacker hai lekin Aaj kal jhanvi ka ye dhanda band chal Raha hai..ek baar arrest bhi ho gayi thi scam me .tab se police Nazar rakhne lagi hai kaam dham na hone par social media se paise kamati hai... Jhanvi dikhne me bhut Sundar hai...gol sa chahere nili ankhe..face par bholapan jo kisi ka bhi man moh le...rose ki tarah red lips..bhara hua sharir hight apni bahan jaisi... figure bhi baisa hi hai..jhanvi mba kar rahi hai..



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Bina parents ke ji kar ham dono behno ne ek baat Jani is duniya me rehna hai to paise kamao...us din se hamne apna focus sirf paiso par rakha...









Tray rakh kar mai didi ka wait karne lagi...


maine sonch liya tha kaise bhi karke Aaj raat moko ko maar dungi...taki wo wapas mere piche na aaye....uska aana ham dono behno ke liye kaal tha...jo karna tha mujhe Aaj raat hi karna tha...






chrrrrr.....

darwaze ki ahat par maine samne dekha didi agayi thi...unke chahere ka rang uda hua tha...


pass akar wo baith gayi...


mai : kya hua didi ..unhe khamosh dekh Maine pucha...didi ki ankhe bhi nam thi...


sanvi : bhisma yaad hai janu...


mai : janti hon wahi hai ...



chatakkkkk....mere jawab par didi ne mujhe ek zor ka thappad mara...


sanvi : ye jante hue bhi tumne apne Bhai ko mara....didi ke lehje me kadwahat agayi thi mere liye ..




mai : so what...wo psycho hai...usne na jane kitne logo ko mara hai...mujhe kaid Kiya....wait....apko kaise pata wo bhisma hai...kya ye wahi hai jisse aapne apne husband ko marwaya...



jawab diye Bina didi window ke pass khadi hokar bahar dekhne lagi....




sanvi : Maine bhut pap kiye hai...ab mujhe mere Bhai ki qatil na banao..




mai : mere Dil me uske liye koi feelings nahi hai...aapko chunna hoga...wo ya mai....



sanvi : don't test me... janu... please..





mai : didi samjhti kyo nahi aap...wo haiwan hai...wo Zinda raha to sabse pehle wo hame marega...uske baad na jane kitne hi masoomo ko....


fir mai motel me jo hua wo batane lagi..



sanvi : tumhe marna hota to wo pehle hi mar Diya hota...janu...usne tumhe gun di..


mai : didi wo sanki hai...uski tarafdari band karo...mai jail me rehna gawara kar lungi lekin use Zinda nahi chhod sakti....mujhe lagta hai apne faisla kar liya...jao apne bhai ke pass... chaho to mujhe bhi police se pakadwa do ....ek baat yaad rakhna mai use subah ka suraj nahi dekhne dungi...agar aap mere raste me ayi to Mai khud ko shoot kar lungi..


sanvi : shut up janu...uske sar me ghao hai aur wo coma me hai....aur tum use Marne ki baat kar Rahi ho...




mai : Aaj se hamara rishta khatm didi..tum bhi mom ki tarah ho...


didi ke pass se hatkar chup chap mai apne bad par akar let gayi....






sanvi : tum janti ho na Mai tumse kitna pyar karti hon...kuch der baad didi mere pass akar sar par hath ferte hue boli...



mai : ha lekin apne use chuna...aap samajhti kyo nahi ...wo Zinda raha to hame nahi chodega...
sanvi : deal karogi...
mai sawal bhari najro se unhe dekhne lagi...
sanvi : uske thik hone ke baad Mai usse bat karungi...
Mai : wo nahi manega didi...wo sanki hai...mai chikh padi...

sanvi : nhi mana to mar dungi ...
jhanvi : kaise belive Karu ..
sanvi : Mai usse baat karungi aur tum gun liye chhup Jana...
didi hath badhate hue boli..
mai : no cheating...mai hath milate hue boli...jis par didi ne sar hila diya...
sanvi : uska bachna yahan mushkil hai...mai Germany le Jaa Rahi hon use..tum chalogi... ofcourse chalogi...
Mera jawab sune Bina wo call karne lagi....
mai sar pakad kar baith gayi....
20 minutes baad wo aayi...


sanvi : Maine intezam kar liya hai....ham aaj rat niklenge...tum bhi police ko statement de do..


mai : itna bataya hai to ye bhi bata do statement me kya bolna hai...Maine kuch ulta sidha bol ke apke Bhai ko fasa diya to mujhe dosh na dena...



sanvi : utha lo mera fayda...wakt Aya to double fayda uthaungi tumhara....











kuch der baad mai police ke samne baithi thi....



policewala: aap kab kidnap Hui thi ...


mai : ji...6 mahine pehle...


policewala : un logo ko janti ho jinka khun hua wahan .. kyoki hamne malum Kiya us motel ko ek dada poti chala rahe they...kya us psycho ne unhe mara..



mai : mai nahi janti...jab mai uske sath gyi thi tab onwer wo mare hue log they..jinhe us psycho ne mara..


policewala : un logo par khun chori ke kai mukadme chal rahe they...acha batao...wo ladki kon hai jiska gala kata hua tha motel ke basement me uski lash mili hai hame..


mai : use bhi wo psycho mujhse pehle kidnap karke laya tha...uska naam Nancy tha iske siwa kuch nahi janti uske bare me ..


policewala : us psycho ka kya hua...jiska treatment ho raha hai wo kaun hai...



mai : wo mera bhai hai...wo mujhe dhundte hue agaya tha...tab wo psycho un logo ko mar raha tha ..bhai ne use shoot Kiya to bhagte hue usne bhai ko badle me shoot Kiya jisse bhai ki ye halat ho gayi ..kehkar mai rone ki acting karne lagi...



sanvi : bas kare sar...ye abhi abhi shock se nikli hai....


policewala : aap kaha rehti ho...


sanvi : Mumbai lonavala..

policewala : hawaldar madam ka adress likho ...

fir didi hawaldar ko adress batane lagi..


Policewala : touch me rehna aage bhi apki zarurat pad sakti hai is case me..
Maine sar hilaya..

sanvi : mai Europe Jaa Rahi hon apne Bhai ko lekar uske treatment ke liye wahan se aane ke baad hi ham apki koi help kar payenge...



policewala : na madam jab Tak ye case solve nhi ho jata tab Tak aap ye shaher chhod kar nahi Jaa sakti...



sanvi : itne logo ko usne mara ...meri bahan ko kidnap kar le gaya..tab tum se kuch nahi hua...aur jab meri bahan Bach gayi hai to tum ham par pawandi laga rahe ho...

policewala : kya karu madam majburi hai..


sanvi : fir mere lior se baat hogi tumhari...aur shayad tumhari majburi ko mai door kar dun ye naukri chhin kar...


policewala : acha jaye aap ilaj karaye apne bhai ka...wahan se ate hi sabse pehle mujhe inform karna..
didi ko gusse me dekh policewala naram padte hue bola..


didi ne sar hila diya....






usi raat mai didi...aur moko ham teeno Germany ke liye nikal gaye....




ek bade hospital me moko ka ilaj chala...





ek mahine tak mai Germany ghumti rahi didi moko ki dekhbhal ke liye hospital me rehti ...



didi us par pani ki tarah Paisa baha rahi thi....jise dekh mere tan badan me aag lag jati....






Do mahine lagatar ilaj chalne ke baad moko ne ankhe kholi....










Agle din didi ne mujhe use dekhne ke liye bulaya...






jab mai uske ward me dakhil Hui to dekha wo leta hua chhat ko ghur raha hai...


mai sath pistal layi thi..isliye maine kaha..




mai : didi shuru ho jao mai chhup rahi hon...


sanvi : mere sath aao...hath pakad kar didi ne mujhe uske samne lakar khada kar diya...


moko : didi ye kon hai...mujhe dekh moko me kaha.

Uska zakhm bhar gaya tha...maine uske jis jagah goli mari thi wahan se uska Zinda bachana namumkin tha lekin wo Bach Gaya tha....



sanvi : ye bhi tumhari didi hai....




didi ki baat sun usne Mera hath pakad liya...aur mujhe apne pass bithane laga...




ye dekh Maine jhatke se apna hath chudaya..fir sawal bhari najro se didi ko dekhne lagi...




sanvi : iski yaddast chali gayi hai...ise pichla kuch yaad nahi .. doctors ne bhi confirm Kiya hai...


mai : aur aap iske natak ko sach Maan gayi...didi iske liye doctor ko dhoka dena koi badi baat nahi hai...ye bhut chalak hai...


didi se kehkar mai use pakad kar uthane lagi....


mai : chal uth sale...tujhe kya laga tha tere is natak ko mai sach Maan lungi...


moko : aaaaaaaaa...didi ye maar rahi...

Use bacho ki tarah rota dekh mere hath se uska hath chhut gaya....aur hairani se mera mooh khul gaya...


sanvi : ssssshhhh...nahi maregi ye didi tumhe...Ghar chalkar mai ise marungi...


moko rote hue didi ke kapdo se ansu pochne laga...


sanvi : tumne fir meri dress gandi kar di...

moko : nahi ki didi...


sanvi : abhi ki tumne dekho ye tumhari naak aur ye tumhare tears ...dekho red se white ho gayi....didi nishan dikhate hue boli....



didi ko gusse me dekh wo darkar diwar me mooh chupa kar khada ho gaya...



sanvi : jhanvi tumne hamare bhai ko dekha...abhi to yahi tha...kaha chala gaya wo...chhote Bhai....chhote bhai ...kaha chupe ho tum....jhanvi batao na hamara Chhota bhai kaha hai....





mai : shut up didi...


sanvi : ab yakin hua...

maine koi jawab nahi Diya...


sanvi : moko mai Jaa Rahi hon jaldi se bahar ajao...


jana nahi....didi...mai aa raha hon..wo ankho se hath hatakar hamari taraf palatte hue bola...fir akar didi se chipat gaya...


sanvi : bhai apne kapde utaro...

moko : mujhe nhi nahana...mujhe nahi nahana..


sanvi : sssshhh...nahi nehlaungi...bas kapde utaro...


dekhte hi dekhte usne ulte sidhe kapde hamare samne utar diye ..


ham dono behno ne ankhe band kar li....






sanvi : jaldi se pahan lo...didi ankhe band kiye hue hi boli...



moko : thik hai didi....




sanvi : jao ab tum bad par let jao...mai abhi doctor se baat karke ayi...







mere hath pakde didi ward se nikal ayi....




sanvi : ab bhi kuch kehna hai...jis moko ko tum janti ho wo aesa hi tha...kya wo kabhi tumhare samne nanga hua...




mai 6 mahine moko ki kaid me rahi ek din bhi maine use nude to door underwear me bhi nahi dekha tha...apni ijjat ki hifajat wo ladkio se jyada karta tha...abhi jo maine dekha us par mai believe nahi kar paa Rahi thi lekin ye sach tha...






mai : didi ye hua kaise....


sanvi : yaddast Jane ke baad uski halat bacho jaisi ho gayi hai... doctors ne jaan hi badi mushkil se bachai uski...ab uska ilaj nahi ho sakta.. doctors ne yaddast Ane ke zero percent chances bataye hai...janu ham bachpan me sath na reh sake...lekin kismat ne hame ek mauka aur diya hai sath rehne ka ..to ab apna faisla batao kya karna hai...


Kuch kahe Bina mai moko ke room me agayi...





wo leta hua tha...



pehle to use dekh mujhe gussa ata tha lekin ab hasi aa rahi thi...


pass akar Maine jag uthaya....


sanvi : no januuuu....

chappppppp....

agle hi pal Maine Pani se bhara jug us par daal diya....




moko : aaaaaaaaaaaa....


wo chikhte hue uchal pada...

mai : jo apko sahi Lage....khilkhilate hue mai room se bhag gayi ...


sanvi : januu tumhe chodungi nahi mai.....piche se didi chillate hue boli..










ek week ham Germany me aur ruke fir wapas Mumbai agaye.....









2 mahine pehle....









nh 25 par bane motel highway par hue narsanhar me mile mratak me se ab tak 2 ladkio ki pehchan nahi ho payi hai...wo ladkiyan ye rahi...agar aap jante ho to apne nazdiki police station me jakar...

ek aurat sofe par baithi tv dekh rahi hoti hai ki itne me repoter reporting karte hue do photos screen par dikhati hai... pehli photo harleen ki hoti dusri..Nancy ki...


nancy ko dekhte hi sadme se wo aurat sofe par hi beshosh ho jati hai....






use behosh dekh bahut naukar chakar akar use kisi tarah hosh me late hai...hosh me ate hi wo foot foot kar rone lagti hai....



thoda sambhalne par...wo kisi ko call laga deti hai....





aurat : hello akshita...Nancy ....apni beti ka naam lete hi wo aurat foot foot kar rone lagti hai.....















kuch din baad wahi policewala ek ghar me baitha hota hai...ek ladki jiske sath bhut se bodyguards hote hai wo police walo se puch tach kar rahi hoti hai...






ladki : tum sale thulle kisi kaam ke nahi ho...akshita mam ko gussa agaya to wardi ke sath sath tumhari khal bhi utar jayegi...


policewala : mam wo dono behne Europe ki kisi country me gayi hai...unke ate hi ham unhe apse Mila denge...




kis country me gayi hai..room me ek mithi si awaj ayi..

.itne me ek pario jaisi Sundar ladki room me dakhil hoti hai...jiski ankhe ro rokar suj gayi hoti hai.....


ladki : akshita mam...akshita ko dekhte hi ladki ke sath respect me policewale bhi khade hone lagte hai....




unhe khada hote dekh ladki hath se baithe rehne ka ishara karti hai...


policewala : mam aap kahe to unka ghar todkar information nikal len..




akshita : aesa Kiya to aage se wo hamari help nahi karengi...tum unke bare me ass pass pata karo...unka nature kaisa hai unka behaviour kaisa hai..agar suspecious lage to unke ghar me ghus Jana...tumhare sath chhaya rahegi...


policewala : okay mam...


akshita ke ishare par policewale chale jate hai....





chhaya : mam hamne der kar di warna bhut se evidence hame mil jate...wo psycho farar ho gaya...us ladki ke statement me pata chala wo pehle Mumbai Maharashtra ke border par bane junglo ke pass ek ghar me rehte they...dono bhagi to police ke dar se usne Ghar change kar diya...dono ko lekar wo us motel me aya tha fir wahan usne katle aam machaya aur farar ho gaya..


chhaya ki baat sun akshita kuch kahe Bina aage badh jati hai....


leaving room se guzarte hue uski najar diwar par lagi ek photo par jati hai aur uske kadam ruk jate hai...



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niharika......

khaccchhh....


Apni bahan ki photo usi ne khichi thi..
Ujade se lamhon ko aas teri
Zakhmi dilon ko hai pyaas teri
Har dhadkan ko talash teri
Tera milta nahi hai pata
Khaali Khali aankhein khud se sawaal karein
Aman ki cheekh behaal karein
Behata lahu fariyaad kare
Tera mit.ta chala hai nishaan



apni bahan ko yaad karke uski ankhe behne lagti hai...







akshita ke dad duniya se jate hue apne bacho ko ek airlines company de Gaye they...


hajaro caroro ki Malkin akshita..


akshita ki family me kul Char log hai..


Akshita ki mom...sandhya...


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age 41 dikhne me bilkul young...ameeri ne jawan kar rakha hai... husband ki death ke baad apna business sambhalti hai..



sabse badi beti akshita...

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age 22 hight 5'11

dikhne me behad sundar study ke baad apne bhai ke sath apni airline company ko sambhal Rahi hai...



Niharika age 19

niharika ab is duniya me nahi hai.



ajit age 19
ajit niharika ka judwa bhai hai.. business se ji churata hai business apni bahan ko saunp khud ayyashi karta firta hai...


chhaya akshita ki personal secretary hai.












ghanto akshita niharika ko ghurti rahi..



thak Jane par akshita farsh par baith jati hai...





mam upar baith jaye...ek lady servent ne kaha..

jawab na milne par wo Sandhya ke pass ati hai...






beta ...chalo utho yahan se... Sandhya akshita ka sar sehlate hue boli..



akshita : mom......mujhe meri bahan ke pass Jana hai....mom...meri bahan mujhe chhod gayi...mom...


ek business woman jiske hajaro employee ho wo bacho ki tarah bilakh bilakh kar ro Rahi thi....














Guard ne gate khola aur hamari car andar gayi..

sanvi : ye Ghar hai hamara..didi car se utarte hue boli..





moko : sach me didi ye to bahut sundar hai....




mai : didi iska koi naam rakh lete hai..


sanvi : koi hai mind me..


mai : dev kaisa rahega...


sanvi : acha hai...


sanvi : suno bhai tumhara naam hai dev...bhulna nahi...


dev : thik hai didi..




welcome mam....hamari mad hamare pas ate hue boli..



mai : Seeta Bai...Aaj se tumhari chutti..


seeta : kyo madam mai khana acha nahi banati kya...ya mai honest nahi .

sanvi : kya hua janu...


mai : aesi baat nahi hai seeta...hame free me ek mad mil gayi hai...isliye Aaj bhar raho kal apna boria bistra bandh Lena...

seeta : thik hai madam...sad face banate hue wo chali gayi...





sanvi : ye mad tumhe kab mili..


mai : wo dekho jo ghas kha Raha hai...gardan me ghas kha rahe dev ko dekh mai boli...

sanvi : this is not fair janu..


mai : everything is fair love and war didi...kehte hue mai apna saman lekar andar badh gayi...


sanvi : dev...ghas khana band Karo...


dev : didi ye mithi hai...


sanvi : aao tumhe wheat grass ka juice pilati hon...


jate hue mujhe un dono ki awaj ayi...




Use is tarah dekh mujhe pichle 8 mahine pehle ke zakhmo par marham lagta mehsus hua..






andar akar mai thakan se chur hote hue sofe par dher ho gayi...

germany me thi to thand se bura haal tha yahan aate hi garmi se....








itne me didi Kai bag lekar andar ayi...


fir fridge me se wheat grass ki bottle kholkar dev ko de deti hai...



dev : didi ye acha...



sanvi : ha Sara pi lo...


mai : thak gayi ho didi to ise anath ashram chhod aoo..


sanvi : janu pitayi kar dungi dubara aesa kaha to..



mai : ha bhai mil gaya to bahan ki kise kadr....






sanvi : dev aao tum ab thoda Aram kar lo....didi ke bulane par wo juice pita chal diya...


sanvi : Aaj mere room me so jao kal tumhaara room ready ho jayega...


dev : didi khana do..


sanvi : seeta kuch khane ka lekar aao...


seeta : taja Bana rahi hon memsab...



sanvi : chalo jakar let jao...


dev : khana...khana...




sanvi : janu...fridge me sweet pada hai iske liye laa de.. fir ise davai bhi Deni hai...


mai : anath ashram...


sanvi : just shut up...you are mad totally mad..didi jate hue boli...


fir sweet ke boxes lakar didi ne uske pass rakh diye...


sanvi : Khao ise ab...


hontho par jeev ferta hua wo Tut pada..



didi room ke andar badh gayi...





mai : kutte kha le sab free ka maal...


meri baat sun wo aur mujhe dikha dikha ke khane laga..


mai : tu yahan se bhag kyo nahi jata..mere tano ka bhi tujh par fark nahi padta...



Use meri baten samajh me nahi AA Rahi thi wo bas khane par consiontreat kiye hue tha....


use khata dekh mere mooh me bhi pani agaya...


mai : ek black jamun ka piece lekar aa..

mere kehne par usne mooh dusri taraf ghuma liya..


mai : kamine ye teri samajh me agaya..abhi batati hon tujhe...

sofe se uthkar mai chalte hue uske pass ayi...

ek black jamun ka piece utha kar maine uske sar par ek teap maar di...



mai : khane ki baten kitna samjhta hai kutte...


dhammmmm....

Mai Jane ke liye mudi hi thi ki usne black jamun ka sishe ka box fek kar Tod diya...waki ke boxes pair se markar fek diye.


mai : kutte.....

chatakkk chatakkk...


mai : ye kon saaf karega kutte...ek to khane ko don upar se feke bhi tu..

Palat kar mai use marne lagi....




wo dahade mar mar kar rone laga...



sanvi : janu kya hua ye kyo ro raha hai ye kaisi awaj thi...


mai : mai is kutte ko ananth ashram le jaa rahi hon...

itne me didi towel me lipti bahar agayi..



sanvi : kyo ro rahe ho dev...ye kaise tuta....


mai : ek black jamun liya to isne dabba fek diya....


dev : janu didi ne mara....


sanvi : had hai janu...chalo aao tumhare kapde change kar don...




dev : wo do Mera...

wo kamina mere hath me pakda Balck jamun dekh bola...


sanvi : do janu tumhare liye aur la dungi..vaise bhi tum nahi khati ho..



mai : kitna kamina hai re tu aede....tu ye sab samajhta hai..


sanvi : do ise...

didi ke kehne par maine jamun uske hath me rakh diya ...didi use pakad kar andar le gayi





































































































































Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Creepy story bhai....
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Asa kya Kiya Bhai?? Tum wo sympathy for feminist brother wali ki baat kr rhe kya,,, aapko hmesha apne liye helikhna chahiye apne hisab se,, kyuki ye bhi ek creation he h,,, agr apne kuchh alag likh kr rkha ho uska toh please mujhe bhej dena pr mujhe toh phr bhi kafi shi lga sb,... Aur problem kya ho gyi???
Tum chale gye they vro is story se
 

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Bhai story ka name kyon change kar diya
Koi naam bhi nahi sujh Raha tha acha isliye badal diya.
Ye acha nahi laga to koi naam suggest kar do
 

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Congratulation for NEW STORY CREEPY BRO

FULL OF CRIME, THRILLING, ACTION PACKED REVENGEFULL PREVIOUS 2 UPDATES

VAISE NOCTURNAL ANIMALS AUR NO ONE ALIVES DONO HOLLYWOOD MOVIES FLOP HO GAYI MAGAR NOCURNAL ANIMALS NOVEL PAR BASED THI ISLIYE THODI DEkHNE LAAYEK HAI.

 

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Koi naam bhi nahi sujh Raha tha acha isliye badal diya.
Ye acha nahi laga to koi naam suggest kar do

Story ka title
Pehli baat story kis tareh ki hai yeh surf writer ko hi maloom hai to wahi bataa Sakta hai

Vaise is story me kaafi villains ( negative role characters hai) to nocturnal animals bhi un par fit baiththa hai
Magar mere hisaab SE ek aur kaafi had tak hai fifty shades of darker movievka title hona chahiye.
 
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Story ka title
Pehli baat story kis tareh ki hai yeh surf writer ko hi maloom hai to wahi bataa Sakta hai

Vaise is story me kaafi villains ( negative role characters hai) to nocturnal animals bhi un par fit baiththa hai
Magar mere hisaab SE ek aur kaafi had tak hai fifty shades of darker movievka title hona chahiye.
Hindi meaning btao
 
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