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nice storyReet nu aavde bond vich jot da lun feel ho rea te age pishe hunda lun reet de bond ch jis kr k reet v heat fad gai c te garm hon lag gai c te reet nu pta he ni lga k oh kdo jhatptondi hoi shant ho k kodi ho k khad gai c te jot pisho ghasse laie ja rha c te ike dm awaaj aun laggi do janniea de jive koi gulla karda turiea ah rha hunda ah ga
Jot nu hosh aaie k koi ah rha ah ga te reet v dr gai k os nu kise ne es halat ch dekh lya ta os de badnami ho jani ah sare pind ch
Reet. Jot mnu shad koi rea ah ga please
Jot v moke de njakat nu dekh de hoie os ne reet de utte digiea hoiea c os to ouper outh da hoiea te dove baha reet de pet nu shad hoiea os ne reet de lakkde thalle bond de side to dove hath nal fad k reet nu pishe nu karta te aap aage nu ho gya te lun ja k poora reet de bond ch lagg gya eve lagg rha c jive reet nu lun te tang lya hove
Reet. De muho siski nikal gai ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Eine nu dove jane hor nede ah jandai ah te jot reet de ghassa la k shad dinda ah ga te reet v hosh ch aundi hoi iko dm ghar wul nu bhaj painde ah gi ta k oh do jane os nu dekh na lain dabbe dabbe paire bhaj painde ah gi te jot tooti hoi gali vich ja k moth maaran lag painda ah ga
Reet ghar wul nu turi ja rahi hundi ah te ik nehra v kafi ho gya hunda os da dil dhak dhak kr rha hunda os de dimaag ch oh he chal rha hunda k jot ne os nal ki kita eine nu ghar ah janda ah ga
Baldev ah gai reet chal putt roti kha la nale tere bapu nu fda de
Rat ho gai km dhanda kra k reet kmre ch son chali gai te pai pai de reet de jot yaad ah gya fer reet nu gusa ah rea c jot de himmat kive hoie os nu jot te gusa bhut ah rea c te eve sochde sochde nu reet nu need ah gai
Subha da time ho gya
Baldev- ve Gurpreet tyaar hoja school ni jana ajj late hoi jana
Gurpreet da ajj school jaan da mood nai c ta oh bhana bna dinda
Nai mummy mera pet dukhi jnda
Baldev ve kahde nal dukhan la lya chal araam karla
Te reet ta tyaar ho v gai c te poori laat bn k school nu tur pai
Dove chittada de hilore marde loka de luna nu khadda karde school nu turi ja rahi c
Te reet da pisha guri te kala kar rahe c jive jive reet de bond matak matak kardi ove ove dova de lun ch agg bhar dindi
Kala bai tu ta swaad lai lya kul keho j lgiea fer
Guri posh na saliea kul da 10 wari moth maar chukiea ah ga te hje v sali de chittad mere lun nu feel ho rahe posh na eina swaad aaiea ah na gul he shad de
Kala lun nu mrode dinda hoiea reet de bond te nigha tikka laie
Guri hun ta sali de lun pa k he saro ga ohna time ni sarna ah ga bss hun ta ehdi fudi ch lun pona he pona ah ga
Waiting for next part .Eine nu school ah gya
Reet class vich chali gai
Aj jot school nhi aaiea hoiea c
Duphaar ho gai te sare jaane haal vich jaan lag gai naatak dekhan hall full hoiea pya c
Sab to end te reet de claas de wari aaie reet de class cho v sare turan lg gai
Navdeep aja hun chaliea sare jaaie jndai ah
Reet chal tu me ah gai bss mada ja he reh gya reet math de swaal ja kad rahi c
Navdeep chal fer jaldi ah jaie
Reet thik ah aah gai bss me
Navdeep v chali gai
Sari class khali ho gai te reet kalli class vich bathi c
Te hall v poora full tight ho gya sabb seeta bathan waliea ruk gaiea c
Guri ta kala pani peen gai hoie c te oh class wul ah rahe c te oudro reet v class cho bhaar nikal k hall wul tur pai reet nu dekh k
Kala eh kive kalli he turi jandi ah gi
Guri chal aja chaliea lagda gai ni haal ch apni qismat nu hahhah
Dove reet de pishe pishe tur pai
Reet chittad matkondi turi jandi c hall ch
Guri reet de bond wul dekh k lun khadda kar lya te lala sitt da turiea ja rea c
Reet hall ch gai ta dekhiea hall poora full hoiea pya ah ga guri te kala v reet de pishe hall ch wad gai hall vich pehla wang he desk te kuj bathe hoie c te deska de pishe bheed ch munde khade hoie c te kuj k kudiea v khadiea hoiea c navdeep haal de baar to doosre side te kaani te desk te bathi c te reet ne os kol jana c pr pishe jaan nu koi jgaah nai c reet kand de nal nal ho k tur pai te pishe he guri reet de nal tur pya te kala v kandh nal v munde khade c reet mundea nal lag de ta ohna de luna da bura haal kar dindi eve kardi kardi reet haal de pishe ponch gai te fer hun ta soukha he c kyo sarea da moh doosre side c es lai reet mundiea de pith nu thoda thaka dindi hoi navdeep wali chond te poch gai pr navdeep bench te bathi c te bench te bathan nu jgaah nai c te age 6-7 class de munde khade c te navdeep kol jan nu jgaah nahi c es kar k reet outhe chond te he khad gai te bilkul pishe reet de ah k guri khad gya te nal he kala bheed pishe poori c es kar k reet jithe khadi c outhe kise da chond te dhayaan nahi c janda reet da nal dea de reet wul niga nai c guri reet to gith k de doori te khada c
Eine nu naatak start. Ho gya te sab da dhayaan nataak wul ho gya kale da v reet v naatak dekhan lag gai par guri da dhayaan ta reet de bond te tikiea hoiea pya c jo k poori bhaar nu nikli pai c os de samne he te os da lun khada kar rahi c guri de pant he paie hoie c underwear nai paiea hoiea c reet de gol gol chittad dekh k guri da lun poori lift chak chukiea c te poori sabal ban k reet de bond to aadhi k gith de doori te c jmaah siddha khada c te bilkul reet de dove cihittada de centere vich c guri de lun nu reet de bond da swaad lag chukiea c sher de muh nu khoon lagan wali gul ho chuki c te hun oh bass ohna chir ni rukan wala c jina time oh reet de fudi de vich enter ni ho jada ah
Guri ne pasa asa dekhiea kise da v dhayaan os wul nahi c te ik oh bilkul chond ch khade c baqiea de pith c ohna wul te ik bheed bht jayda c
Guri holi holi age nu wadh gya guri da lun hun reet de waddi gol gol bond to bss do oungala de doori te c guri holi j hor age hoiea guri de lun ne reet de bond oupero kmeej nu touch kita te mada ja hor age hoiea ta guri nu ike dm lgiea jive swarg vich poch gya hove guri da lun reet de dove chittada de center ch line te lag gya c
Te reet nu kuj aavde bond te chub da hoiea feel hoiea te os ne pishe mud k dekhiea pishe guri khada c os nu pehla ni pta c k pishe guri ah ga reet nu smj ah gai guri ah ga eh os nu guri te bhut gusa chadiea pr oh kuj bol ni sakdi c reet ne guri wul ghoor k dekhiea pr guri ne ago smile kr diti reet thoda ja age nu ho k khad gai jis nal guri touch na kare os nu pr guri kithe rukan wala c guri fer age nu ho gya te fer reet de bond te lun lah ta reet hun age nu nai ho sakdi c kyo k age v munde khade c te hor age hon de jgaah nai c te na he os jgaah to oh hor jgaah hil sakdi c jina time natak chal rha kyo j oh hil de ta teachara ne onu ladna c ga reet de bond te guri da lun chub rha c te reet nu gusa bhut ah rha c te naatak ta hje chaliea he c reet nu smj ni ah rahi c oh ki kare reet ne fer guse nal pishe nu dekhiea guri ne reet nu aakh mari te smile kiti reet ne guse ch guri nu holi dene kha piche nu ni hti da tere to jo k sirf guri nu he sune
Guri meri jaan pishe ta kandh ah gi os nal ta lgiea khada te thoda age nu ho k reet de kn wul nu ho k boliea j pishe hutt gya fer swaad kive aao
Reet nu eh sun k guri te bhut gusa aaiea pr hun oh fas chuki c kuj ni kar sakdi c
Os ne guri nu guse ch bekoof ja na hove eve kehde age nu muh kar lya te hun oh bss naatak khatam hon da wait karn lgi
Pr guri lai ta ajj golden chance c
Guri da lun thoda ja reet de bond ta lga hoiea c oune nal he guri nu bhut mza ah rea c pr guri da lun hor tadd vich ah gya guri nu hor saroor chadan lg gya reet de wul dekh dekh k sire de ran aj guri de age khadi c jis nu pind da har munda aavde lun te bathon nu firda c
Guri paira to holi j kar k age ho gya pr guri ne bond pishe nu kar lai ta k lun reet de pehla wali jgaah te he rahe hun guri da haal bura ho gya guri nu lun nu hor age nu thak ta te reet de bond ch khub gya reet aavde bond guri da lun poora chub da feel ho rha c te reet nu gusa he gusa chad rea c guri te pr oh kuj ni kar sakdi c
Guri da lun reet de bond te khub gya guri nu poora swaad ah rea guri ove he khada rea guri de lun ch poori agg bhar chuki c te hawas nal pagal ho chuka c te poora he age nu ho gya te guri da lun reet de chittada ch poora khub gya te gol gol chittad pasiea to guri nal toch hon lag gai
Reet dea aakha khadiea ho gaiea reet nu eve lga jive guri ne reet nu lun te tang lea hove reet nu guri te poora gusa chad gya te guse nal pishe nu mud k dekha ta guri de face te poori hawas tapak rahi c
Reet tere to pishe ho k ni khadi da poore guse ch
Guri ne smile dinde hoie jwaab vich ik ghassa mariea reet de
Reet nu huka wajiea pr reet hun buri tra fass gai c reet ne chupi vich he behtri samji te age nu muh kar k khad gai te naatak mukan da intyaar krn lgi te guri ta pagal hoiea pya c guri da lun reet de dova chittada vich kubiea pya c guri lun nu thoda ja pishe karda te fer age kar dinda te eve kar k reet de ghasse marne start kar ditte holi reet nu gusa v bhut ah rea c pr oh na chonde hoie v garm ho rahi c guri da lun os de bond ch ragad kha k reet nu garm kar rha c
nice updateEine nu school ah gya
Reet class vich chali gai
Aj jot school nhi aaiea hoiea c
Duphaar ho gai te sare jaane haal vich jaan lag gai naatak dekhan hall full hoiea pya c
Sab to end te reet de claas de wari aaie reet de class cho v sare turan lg gai
Navdeep aja hun chaliea sare jaaie jndai ah
Reet chal tu me ah gai bss mada ja he reh gya reet math de swaal ja kad rahi c
Navdeep chal fer jaldi ah jaie
Reet thik ah aah gai bss me
Navdeep v chali gai
Sari class khali ho gai te reet kalli class vich bathi c
Te hall v poora full tight ho gya sabb seeta bathan waliea ruk gaiea c
Guri ta kala pani peen gai hoie c te oh class wul ah rahe c te oudro reet v class cho bhaar nikal k hall wul tur pai reet nu dekh k
Kala eh kive kalli he turi jandi ah gi
Guri chal aja chaliea lagda gai ni haal ch apni qismat nu hahhah
Dove reet de pishe pishe tur pai
Reet chittad matkondi turi jandi c hall ch
Guri reet de bond wul dekh k lun khadda kar lya te lala sitt da turiea ja rea c
Reet hall ch gai ta dekhiea hall poora full hoiea pya ah ga guri te kala v reet de pishe hall ch wad gai hall vich pehla wang he desk te kuj bathe hoie c te deska de pishe bheed ch munde khade hoie c te kuj k kudiea v khadiea hoiea c navdeep haal de baar to doosre side te kaani te desk te bathi c te reet ne os kol jana c pr pishe jaan nu koi jgaah nai c reet kand de nal nal ho k tur pai te pishe he guri reet de nal tur pya te kala v kandh nal v munde khade c reet mundea nal lag de ta ohna de luna da bura haal kar dindi eve kardi kardi reet haal de pishe ponch gai te fer hun ta soukha he c kyo sarea da moh doosre side c es lai reet mundiea de pith nu thoda thaka dindi hoi navdeep wali chond te poch gai pr navdeep bench te bathi c te bench te bathan nu jgaah nai c te age 6-7 class de munde khade c te navdeep kol jan nu jgaah nahi c es kar k reet outhe chond te he khad gai te bilkul pishe reet de ah k guri khad gya te nal he kala bheed pishe poori c es kar k reet jithe khadi c outhe kise da chond te dhayaan nahi c janda reet da nal dea de reet wul niga nai c guri reet to gith k de doori te khada c
Eine nu naatak start. Ho gya te sab da dhayaan nataak wul ho gya kale da v reet v naatak dekhan lag gai par guri da dhayaan ta reet de bond te tikiea hoiea pya c jo k poori bhaar nu nikli pai c os de samne he te os da lun khada kar rahi c guri de pant he paie hoie c underwear nai paiea hoiea c reet de gol gol chittad dekh k guri da lun poori lift chak chukiea c te poori sabal ban k reet de bond to aadhi k gith de doori te c jmaah siddha khada c te bilkul reet de dove cihittada de centere vich c guri de lun nu reet de bond da swaad lag chukiea c sher de muh nu khoon lagan wali gul ho chuki c te hun oh bass ohna chir ni rukan wala c jina time oh reet de fudi de vich enter ni ho jada ah
Guri ne pasa asa dekhiea kise da v dhayaan os wul nahi c te ik oh bilkul chond ch khade c baqiea de pith c ohna wul te ik bheed bht jayda c
Guri holi holi age nu wadh gya guri da lun hun reet de waddi gol gol bond to bss do oungala de doori te c guri holi j hor age hoiea guri de lun ne reet de bond oupero kmeej nu touch kita te mada ja hor age hoiea ta guri nu ike dm lgiea jive swarg vich poch gya hove guri da lun reet de dove chittada de center ch line te lag gya c
Te reet nu kuj aavde bond te chub da hoiea feel hoiea te os ne pishe mud k dekhiea pishe guri khada c os nu pehla ni pta c k pishe guri ah ga reet nu smj ah gai guri ah ga eh os nu guri te bhut gusa chadiea pr oh kuj bol ni sakdi c reet ne guri wul ghoor k dekhiea pr guri ne ago smile kr diti reet thoda ja age nu ho k khad gai jis nal guri touch na kare os nu pr guri kithe rukan wala c guri fer age nu ho gya te fer reet de bond te lun lah ta reet hun age nu nai ho sakdi c kyo k age v munde khade c te hor age hon de jgaah nai c te na he os jgaah to oh hor jgaah hil sakdi c jina time natak chal rha kyo j oh hil de ta teachara ne onu ladna c ga reet de bond te guri da lun chub rha c te reet nu gusa bhut ah rha c te naatak ta hje chaliea he c reet nu smj ni ah rahi c oh ki kare reet ne fer guse nal pishe nu dekhiea guri ne reet nu aakh mari te smile kiti reet ne guse ch guri nu holi dene kha piche nu ni hti da tere to jo k sirf guri nu he sune
Guri meri jaan pishe ta kandh ah gi os nal ta lgiea khada te thoda age nu ho k reet de kn wul nu ho k boliea j pishe hutt gya fer swaad kive aao
Reet nu eh sun k guri te bhut gusa aaiea pr hun oh fas chuki c kuj ni kar sakdi c
Os ne guri nu guse ch bekoof ja na hove eve kehde age nu muh kar lya te hun oh bss naatak khatam hon da wait karn lgi
Pr guri lai ta ajj golden chance c
Guri da lun thoda ja reet de bond ta lga hoiea c oune nal he guri nu bhut mza ah rea c pr guri da lun hor tadd vich ah gya guri nu hor saroor chadan lg gya reet de wul dekh dekh k sire de ran aj guri de age khadi c jis nu pind da har munda aavde lun te bathon nu firda c
Guri paira to holi j kar k age ho gya pr guri ne bond pishe nu kar lai ta k lun reet de pehla wali jgaah te he rahe hun guri da haal bura ho gya guri nu lun nu hor age nu thak ta te reet de bond ch khub gya reet aavde bond guri da lun poora chub da feel ho rha c te reet nu gusa he gusa chad rea c guri te pr oh kuj ni kar sakdi c
Guri da lun reet de bond te khub gya guri nu poora swaad ah rea guri ove he khada rea guri de lun ch poori agg bhar chuki c te hawas nal pagal ho chuka c te poora he age nu ho gya te guri da lun reet de chittada ch poora khub gya te gol gol chittad pasiea to guri nal toch hon lag gai
Reet dea aakha khadiea ho gaiea reet nu eve lga jive guri ne reet nu lun te tang lea hove reet nu guri te poora gusa chad gya te guse nal pishe nu mud k dekha ta guri de face te poori hawas tapak rahi c
Reet tere to pishe ho k ni khadi da poore guse ch
Guri ne smile dinde hoie jwaab vich ik ghassa mariea reet de
Reet nu huka wajiea pr reet hun buri tra fass gai c reet ne chupi vich he behtri samji te age nu muh kar k khad gai te naatak mukan da intyaar krn lgi te guri ta pagal hoiea pya c guri da lun reet de dova chittada vich kubiea pya c guri lun nu thoda ja pishe karda te fer age kar dinda te eve kar k reet de ghasse marne start kar ditte holi reet nu gusa v bhut ah rea c pr oh na chonde hoie v garm ho rahi c guri da lun os de bond ch ragad kha k reet nu garm kar rha c