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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.I Am Back by kingbaby [Ep.10.01]
Abb Age :-
Ravi chala hi ja raha tha vah pahadi ki tarf badh raha tha................. vah jakar ek tille par baith gaya.............
“bhai..................” jagat abhi kuchh kahane hi wala tha ki ravi ne kaha “nahi jagat nihi kuchh mat kaho kya tumhe lagta hai ki jo baate badi ma ne kaha sach lagata hai matlab ki jo saks kisi dusare ke vas me ho to vah apane malik ki jagah mere se pyar se nahi rahega.................................................................
“nahi....................... lekin ye sochane ke liye tum jinda hi bachoge nahi....................” tabhi ek aawaj unaki kano me padi.................
“kaun hai........................ kaun hai yaha.............” ravi ne idhar udhar dekhate huye kaha
“tum mere bare me na hi jano to achha hai kyoki tum mera samana nahi kar sakte ho mujhe pata hai ki tumhari shaktiya tumhare pass nahi hai........................................ ha agar tum bachana chahate ho to tum apane ghutane par baithkar great king veer ki gulami savikar karo” us anjan aawaj ne kaha
“jagat abb tum hi sambhalo ise............. mera to dimag hi kharab hai..................... ” ravi ne jagat se kaha
“abbe ho kaun be tum samane to aa usake baad baat karenge samjhe” ravi ki baat sunate hi jagat ne kaha
“dikhai to tum nahi de rahe ho kaun ho tum....................... vaise bhi aaj agar ravi gulami kabul nahi karega to isak marana tay hai samjhe” us anjan aawaj ne kaha .....................( jagat tab hi dikhayi ya phir usaki aawaj sunayi dega jab ravi chahega nahi to kisi ko bhi nahi to us aawaj ko bhi dikhayi nahi dikhai de raha tha.........................................
“lambi lambi fekana chhodo aur ye batao ki ho kaun tum” Ravi ne kaha abhi ravi aage kuchh kahata ki tabhi usake aage ek prakash prakt huaa aur teji se usame se ek teer bahar nikala aur ravi ya jagat ko kuchh samjh aata ki usase pahale hi vah teer ravi ke seene me aakar lag gaya jisase use behad hi bhayankar dard utha aur vah chilla utha................................................................ maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............................................................................................
“kya huaa beta..........................” tabi ravi ko aisa laga ki usaki ma ki yah aawaj thi usaki aakhe khul gayi usane dekha ki vah to aabhi ma ke god me hi so raha hai........................................ “o................... tere ki mai sapana dekh raha tha.......................... kitana bhayanak sapana tha yah to” ravi apane hi sar par hath marate huye budbudaya...............................................
“kya huaa ravi tu kuchh bol kyo nahi raha hai...................” ma ne mujhase phir se puchha
“kuchh nahi ma kuchh nahi mai sapana dekh raha tha jisase mai dar gaya tha bas ek sapana tha ma.....................” ravi ne kaha
“abb thik ho...................” ma ne pyar se mere sar hath ferate huye puchha
“ha ma thik hu mai bahar se aata hu........................ chalo jagat chale......................... aata hu ma aabhi 7:00pm ho raha hai mai 8:00pm tak aa jaunga..................... abbe chal na tu kyo aise dekh raha hai jaise main..............................” mai kahate kahate ruk gaya abb samjh me aaya ki mai kya bol raha hu aur sone par suhaga ye ho gaya ki maine jagat ko chalane ke liye khichh to vah table se takra gaya aur table par rakha gilass tann ki aawaj ke sath niche gir gaya........................... (yaha jagt apani pardarshita wala shakti active nahi kiya tha isiliye vah table ke aar paar nahi ho paya) ravi ki ma use dekhane lagi jaise puchh rahi ho ki kisase baat kar raha hai.............. aur kaun hai jisase yah baat kar raha hai....................
“kuchh nahi ma............. mai bhi kitana pagal hu apane aap se hi baate karana laga” maine badi laparwahi se ma ko jawab diya.................
“beta mai teri ma hu............... maine hi tujhe paida kiya hai................ to beta jo baate hai vah kya tum bata rahe ho.............. ya nahi..........................” ma ne kaha
aab mai sochane laga ki mai kya karu mai ma se jhuth bhi nahi bolana chahta tha phir maine tay kiya ki ma ko kuchha sachchai bata dena chahiye ...........................................................
“ma vo baat ye hai ki............................... hamara kaalu tha na to vah ek kiutta nahi tha.....................” ravi ne kaha
“achha to kya vah ghoda tha.............................”ma ne kaha
“aare nahi ma pahale puri baat sunliya karo” ravi ne kaha
“ha to bata na puri baat.......................” ma ne kaha
“jagat aa jaoo................................” maine jagat ko kaha vah ma ko dikhai dene laga ma use dekhakar dar gayi................... ye.........ye..to
“yah ek jinn hai ma...... jisaka mai malik hu.................... aur yahi hamara kaalu hai” ravi ne kaha
abb mai ma ke pass chala gaya
“jinn....................... malik................ ye sab kaise huaa aur.... aur yah kaalu kaise huaa..... aur tu malik to chirag kaha hai tere pass jara dikhana” ma ne puchha
“ma baat ye hai ki.....................maine sari bate bataa diya jo baba ne bataya tha......................... to yahi baat hai aur maine ise srap se mukt karaya isliye mai isaka malik huaa” maine ma ko puri baat batate huye kaha
“to ye baat hai mai bhi dar hi gayi thi khamkha................................... vaise sach me tum ek jinn ho............ ya phir dono milakar mujhe bewakuf bana rahe ho” ma ne kaha
“ji mai ek jinn hi hu aur ravi bhai ne jo kaha hai vah sab sach hai” jagat ne mundi jhukate huye kaha
“kya sach me yah ek jinn hai ravi ya fir tu mrtr sath majak kar raha hai” ma ne fir puchh
“aree nahi ma ye dekho isake niche isake pai nahi hai dekho...................... aur isi ke chalte mai aisa ho gaya hu isai ne aur isake pitaji ne mujh dar se mukt karaya hai” maine ma se kaha
“kya isane.................... bahut bhaut dhanywad jo.............” ma ne jagat ke hath jod liye
“nahi nahi aap ye kya kah rahi hai mere malik ki ma.............. mai to inaka gulam hu aur apane malik ki sahayata karana mere dharm hai to aap mere aage hath na jode” jagat ne fauran ma ke hath pakad liye
“jagat bhai maine tujhe bhai mana hai na ki gulam to tum bhi aaj se ma ko ma hi kahoge samjhe..................... abb koi baat mahi chalo mujhe tumse jaruri baat karana hai aate hai ma..........................” maine ma se kaha aur bina ma ke baat sune mai bahar nikal gaya aur jagat fir se gayab ho gaya...................... bahar badi ma, dadi, ya fir buaa nahi thi to mai baki sabko andekha karate huye bahar ki or nikal gaya.......................................
aaj hi ke din (kahani me) subah ke 10:00am delhi ke top 3 ke ek collage me:-
Aaj delhi me badal chhaye huye the yah halki halki dhup khili huyi thi.............................
Halki dhup me collage ground me gunit rastogi jisake pita the shankar rastogi (DIG) apane dosto ke sath baitha huaa tha aur apane dosto ke sath yaha vaha ki bate karate huye lambhi lambhi frnk raha tha (gunit rastogi ek bade baap ka bigada huaa aulad tha lekin achha banane ka dikhawa bahut achhi tarah se kar leta hai isake baare me isake best friends ko chhodakar koi nahi janta)...................
gunit apne dosto ke sath baitha bate fek raha tha ki tabi usaki najar collage gate par padi to vaha usaki aakhe jaise jam hi gayi kyoki...................................................................
halki nile rang ki ek behad hi kubsurat range ki suit me apane reshami baalo me hath ferate huye koi aa rahi thi.............. usake chehare par padati halki dhup aur usake mathe par lal rang ke chhoti si bindi kya gajab hi kar rahe the................. vah chalate huye gunit ke pass aa gayi aur use avoid karate huye dusari tarf apane dosto ke pass chali gayi................. jab gunit ke pass se gujari to usake muh se nikala “komal”........................
[ komal mathur D/o kamlanath mathur (cm) isake pariwar ka intro unake samy aane par, ]
Gunit komal ko kai baar prapose kar chuka tha lekin har baar komal use mana kar deti.................... usaka har baar jawab rahata ki usaka boyfriend hai lekin gunit ko viswas hi nahi hota tha kyoki komal ko aaj tak kisi ladake ke sath ya fir baat karate huye nahi dekha tha (komal ke bhai aur bahan ko chhodalkr) halanki komal ka sach me koi boy friend nahi tha vah isiliye yah sab karti ki koi use pareshan na kare.........................................
Aaj gunit ne jabse use dekha hai usase raha nahi ja raha hai usane aaj tay kar liya tha ki aaj koi na koi wajib jawab komal se lekar hi rahega...............................................
tabhi usake kandhe par ek hath aata hai...................... “bhai aaja abb apani duniya me aaja............................ aur jab tu us ladaki ko dekhata hai to tujhe kya ho jata hai ham to ek rat wale hai......................” gunit ke ek dost ne kaha
“tu nahi samjhega D1.................... mai kyo ise patana chahta hu..........................” gunit ne jawab diya
[gunit ke char dost the charo ko mai D1,D2,D3,D4 likhunga....................]
“aakhir tu isake pichhe itana pada kyo hai chalo Sali ko utha lete hai agar pyar se nahi manegi to” D3 ne kaha
“ha ise uthana antim upay hai...................................... abhi pyar se to pata lu ise kyoki cm ki beti hai maan gayi to maja hi aa jayega........ aaj tak isake jaisi dekhi bhi to nahi thi lekin ye saali hamesha jhut bolati hai ki isaka boyfriend hai lekin hai nahi maine pata kiya hai” gunit ne kaha
“aakhir kab tak tum apani ijjat ko aise nilam karoge bhai...............” D4 ne kaha
“bas do din aur mera barthday aane wala hai us din tak yah nahi mani to barthday gift me tumlogo se mujhe ye chahiye samjhe........................” gunit ne kaha
“ham samjh gaye tu chinta mat kar agar nahhi mani to gift me ham tujhe bhet karenge ise........” sabhi dosto ne apani sahmati se kaha.................................................................................................................................................
Location venam planet :-
Venam grah ke karagar me ek jyoti jal rahi thi lekin vh jyoti bina tel .... rui..... diye ke hi jal rahi thi vah kewal ek jyoti hi thi................ vah jyoti kritika ke pita ki shakti punj thi................... kritika ke pita sachai ke pujari the ek rakshas hote huye bhi ...................................................... vah jyoti kritika ke pita ki shakti punj tha jise koi sacha aur achha ho aur kritika jise apana dil se pati manti ho vahi grahan kar sakta hai hai is shakti punj ko veer ne kai baar use pane ki koshis ki lekin safal nahi ho paya..............................................
Dharti par shahganj me :-
Ravi aur jagat pahadi ki tarf chal rahe the...........................
“jagat maine kuchh dekha jisase mujhe ye lagata hai ki vah aane wala samy ki chetawani hai ya phir kuchh to huaa hai jo samjh nahi aa raha hai ....................” ravi ne kaha
“kya dekha aapne..kyoki jab aap amani ma ke pas so rahe the tab mai haweli ka chakkar laga raha tha aur aapke uathane se pahale hi mai vaha aaya tha.............................” jagat ne kaha
“mai jab ma ke god me soya huaa tha tab mujhe spana aaya ................................................... aur ravi ne jagat ko puri baat bata diya............................................ isaka kya matlab hai aabhi tak mere andar aisa lag raha hai ki vah teer mujhe laga hai aur mujhe dadr mahsus ho raha hai ................................................ lekin kaise mai to ek spana hi dekha tha.........................” ravi ne apane sapane ki baat batate hiye jagat se kaha
“jarur koi sanket hai........ya fir sach me to hamre sath bada game koi khel to nahi gaya ........... lekin kya mujhe to kuchh samjh hi nahi aa raha hai” jagat ne kaha
Location venam grah :-
Rajmahl ke gupt mantrana kaksh me me veer......... ahankar, hawasur, prachand baithe huye jaam lada rahe the .............. inake chehare par ek badi khusi jhalak rahi thi ....................................
“hawasur, aur ahankar tumane aaj ek bada kaam kiya hai tumhe aab isaka inam to jarur milega aaj tumane mujhe khus kar diya hai”.................itana kahakr veer man me sochane laga........... “ bas kritika maan jaye fir mujhe harane wala koi nahi rahega ha mujhe pata hai ki har kisi ka tod hota hai lekin mai kisi se ya phir kisi tuchh se to nahi harunga aur fir usake pita ki bhi shakti punj mujhe mill jayega to mai aur bhi shaktishali ho jaunga lekin nahi kritika pata nahi kis ko apana pati maan chuki hai apana pati................ bas mujhe ek baar pata laga jaye phir mai use kahi se bhi khoj kar nikal lunga aur maar dunga usi ke aakho ke samane ...................................................”
Aage ki kahani agale Ep.10.02 me.............................................................
Bahut khoob superb.