Uzumaki_07
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Sbb toh best story hundi c punjabi section di starting vich plot v vadia c story v te characters te focus v proper dita jnda c
Hun tah sbb toh fuddu story bnn gyi eh bina koi sir pair toh character add hoyi jnde te koi plot nhi story da…eh story simr de viah te end ho jani chahidi c vadia rehndi c story but story nu stretch krn de chakr vich bund hi maar lyi puri story di…bada dukh lggda eh dekh k.. kyu ki apni punjabi stories bot thodi ne jo vadia nikldia ne te eh story bot hi vadia c…
Eh koi hate nhi kr reha mein bss eh story di ah condition dekh k dukh lgga…meri ek hi request aa es nu end krdo te agar mnn hain koi new story start krdo…
Hun tah sbb toh fuddu story bnn gyi eh bina koi sir pair toh character add hoyi jnde te koi plot nhi story da…eh story simr de viah te end ho jani chahidi c vadia rehndi c story but story nu stretch krn de chakr vich bund hi maar lyi puri story di…bada dukh lggda eh dekh k.. kyu ki apni punjabi stories bot thodi ne jo vadia nikldia ne te eh story bot hi vadia c…
Eh koi hate nhi kr reha mein bss eh story di ah condition dekh k dukh lgga…meri ek hi request aa es nu end krdo te agar mnn hain koi new story start krdo…