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[Yasasvi3]

Update 6
Update 7 is also posted to padho or bato kaisa h

 

[Yasasvi3]

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat-
Someone - are dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h
Her wife- Ghar chalo tum

Ye h ek chhota sa teaser... kahani sham tak aayagi.. with the first update of story....soory see kya hota h kaisan likh pati hujitna tha na matlab jaha se likh rahi hu ....uska aadhar likha h but form my end mene uska duble to likh diya h so update bhi bada hone wala h....hope aap sab nirash nahi honge

 

[Yasasvi3]

Let's see....means aapne pahle bhi story likhi hain maine to nahi dekha abhi tak.

Dekhna bhi mat....ha aachi thi but me because of work problem yaar nahi kar pati....same abhi bhi h isliye updates ki guarantee nahi li

For starting new story thread....

Thanks my all time supporter.....aap or me hi shyad sabse phala like bhi aapka Mila tha meko thanks (meri id ka phala like)

Congratulations to writers FaM...

Thanks for welcoming..

Madam ji 2nd story ki badhaiyan
1st per to hum aa na sake

Ummid ha ye wali chal padegi

Are Maan lo ki ye phali h ( maths students should be understood )

 

[Yasasvi3]

Update 1​

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat ho rahi thi.

Someone :- aree.dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum(bagal me baithi apni Biwi se)to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h

His wife :- Ghar chalo tum

Someone (others) :-:are yaaro dekho guy's ye to uper se leke niche tak pure brands ki dukaan h dukaan Zara gucchi bhai kya kya phana h be kon ho sakti h ye?

Per tabhi uska sathi bolta h :- yaar wo cute to h hi. ek dam princess ki trh. me iske pass gaya tha abhi jaankari bana ne per isne to ek dam ignore kar diya yaar dil ke tukde nahi chote chhote mitthi ke kan(dust particles ) bana diye.


Mmi......

(Tabhi ek awaz aati h.....ye kon bola be ya boli?)

Mmi mmi bhar dekho....wo kya h?

(Ek pyari si cute si ladki ne ye bola)


Badal h beta wo

ye sabd usi ladki ke the jiski itne samay se charcha ho rahi h ab Jake inke muh se kuch nikala.

Bachhi- Mmi kya papa meko apanayengey?

Ladki - Ha ha kyu nahi meri baby.tum ko koi kese nahi apnayaga? Tum jesi sweet or cute baby girl ko bhala koi kese na bol sakta h ? Aaja Mera baccha mma ki goad me soja

Ladki - okk mma

( Ye h choti si cute baby jiska name h yashasvi [ it's not me.aasan laga isliye likha h])

Bachi ke sone ke baad wo ladki sochti h- {kash me kabhi tumse dur hi na hoti to aaj ye sab na hota}

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Wahi unknown time unknown
please ( ye purani baat h )
Dhamke ho rahe the bahot sare......boom......

Nahiiiii......asa nahi .....ho sakta.....akhir me hu kyu?.....kya main prem ke is kasht ke kaaran marane ja raha hoon?.....akhir me hu kyu ...nahi.... bilkul nahi........(Ye ek ek bhot hi sakati sali vyakti tha )

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Gill family ka ghar.....(Gill ke Punjabi cast h Jaat hi hote h may be but is se koi fark nahi padegaa khani me )

Ek Banda bathroom me bathtub me naha raha tha ki tabhi uske phone pe kisi ka phone aaya h or wo bolta h:-

Dekho tension na lo me me sab theek kar dunga ...dekho jab bank Wale aayange to me Ghar ke piche se satak lunga . Tu bas dekhta ja mera plan. Chalo karakhta hu faltu tension nahi lene ka.Huh...

Itne me bathtub ke pass ek hair dryer Rakha hota hai wo plag mein Laga hota hai wo ludhak ke Pani mein gir jata hai aur vah ladka vahi baat kab main bada bada tadapne lagta hai.....
Aur tab sunai deti hai bahut hi dardnak aur khaufna cheekheain .....( aap imagine kar sakte ho aise time mein jab Banda baathtab mein pada Ho usko bijali ke current ke jhatake lag rahe ho plus pani ke andar current ka prabhav bahut jyada hota hai jis Karan ashanniye pida hoti h)
Or wo mar jata h uska sarrir bilkul kala pad jata h jo aam tor pe current lagne per hota h per tabhi.....

Uper ki light bhi jal bujh rahi hoti h (flickering)}

Tabhi Achanak us ladke ki Aankhen khulati hai aankhon mein alag hi Tej hota hai .. wo bolta h-

"2000 saal pure 2000 saal"Pure ke pure 2000 saal baad aaj Jake ek nayi suruwaat hui h ek dam nyi suruwaat...ha ha ha

Main the great Yash ......ek vilakshan pratibha ka dhanee hoon jisane gu yuaan sootr kee rachana kee aur amaron ka abhootapoorv maarg khola - mujhe logon ke beech draigan devata ke roop mein jaana jaata tha........
lekin mere charam aarohan ke dauraan mainne apana saara pyaar kho diya.....
main is vyakti ke shareer par kabza karana chaahata tha, lekin mainne nahin socha tha ki vah itanee jaldee mar jaega - yah us vyakti jitana achchha nahin hai jo abhee bhee jeevit hai.
Jo bhi ho me kafi Lucky tha jo aaj tak jinda hu itne bade hadse ke baad bhi ..mujhe ab waps suru se suru karna padega .....
lekin mainne apanee clivention ke 200 saal mein kabhee bhee pyaar nahin kiya; mujhe koee chinta nahin thee, aur mainne apana poora dhyaan Saktio par kendrit kiya - pyaar kya hai, aur ise kaise samajha ja sakata hai?

Wo ye sab soch raha hota h ki tabhi darwazae ki ghanti bajati h....ting tong.....

Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?

Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..


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Dekho boss ye tha phala update...likes ki fikar nahi feedback ki tension h so please aap sab milke bataye kisi ne bata bhi Diya to waps bato ki kami kidhar h

 

[Yasasvi3]

INDEX ​

Update 4 is on air.....chalo padho or bato kaisa h?....plus important baat ab se ek update aayga bada ....1 ya 2 din se...baki aap logo ki demand pe depend karaga...or suggestion dijiye aacha bura jo bhi ho.... please bato dosto

 

[dev61901]

Update 1​

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat ho rahi thi.

Someone :- aree.dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum(bagal me baithi apni Biwi se)to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h

His wife :- Ghar chalo tum

Someone (others) :-:are yaaro dekho guy's ye to uper se leke niche tak pure brands ki dukaan h dukaan Zara gucchi bhai kya kya phana h be kon ho sakti h ye?

Per tabhi uska sathi bolta h :- yaar wo cute to h hi. ek dam princess ki trh. me iske pass gaya tha abhi jaankari bana ne per isne to ek dam ignore kar diya yaar dil ke tukde nahi chote chhote mitthi ke kan(dust particles ) bana diye.


Mmi......

(Tabhi ek awaz aati h.....ye kon bola be ya boli?)

Mmi mmi bhar dekho....wo kya h?

(Ek pyari si cute si ladki ne ye bola)


Badal h beta wo

ye sabd usi ladki ke the jiski itne samay se charcha ho rahi h ab Jake inke muh se kuch nikala.

Bachhi- Mmi kya papa meko apanayengey?

Ladki - Ha ha kyu nahi meri baby.tum ko koi kese nahi apnayaga? Tum jesi sweet or cute baby girl ko bhala koi kese na bol sakta h ? Aaja Mera baccha mma ki goad me soja

Ladki - okk mma

( Ye h choti si cute baby jiska name h yashasvi [ it's not me.aasan laga isliye likha h])

Bachi ke sone ke baad wo ladki sochti h- {kash me kabhi tumse dur hi na hoti to aaj ye sab na hota}

___________________________________

Wahi unknown time unknown please ( ye purani baat h )
Dhamke ho rahe the bahot sare......boom......

Nahiiiii......asa nahi .....ho sakta.....akhir me hu kyu?.....kya main prem ke is kasht ke kaaran marane ja raha hoon?.....akhir me hu kyu ...nahi.... bilkul nahi........(Ye ek ek bhot hi sakati sali vyakti tha )

_________________________________________

Gill family ka ghar.....(Gill ke Punjabi cast h Jaat hi hote h may be but is se koi fark nahi padegaa khani me )
Ek Banda bathroom me bathtub me naha raha tha ki tabhi uske phone pe kisi ka phone aaya h or wo bolta h:-
Dekho tension na lo me me sab theek kar dunga ...dekho jab bank Wale aayange to me Ghar ke piche se satak lunga . Tu bas dekhta ja mera plan. Chalo karakhta hu faltu tension nahi lene ka.Huh...
Itne me bathtub ke pass ek hair dryer Rakha hota hai wo plag mein Laga hota hai wo ludhak ke Pani mein gir jata hai aur vah ladka vahi baat kab main bada bada tadapne lagta hai.....
Aur tab sunai deti hai bahut hi dardnak aur khaufna cheekheain .....( aap imagine kar sakte ho aise time mein jab Banda baathtab mein pada Ho usko bijali ke current ke jhatake lag rahe ho plus pani ke andar current ka prabhav bahut jyada hota hai jis Karan ashanniye pida hoti h)
Or wo mar jata h uska sarrir bilkul kala pad jata h jo aam tor pe current lagne per hota h per tabhi.....
Uper ki light bhi jal bujh rahi hoti h (flickering)}

Tabhi Achanak us ladke ki Aankhen khulati hai aankhon mein alag hi Tej hota hai .. wo bolta h-

"2000 saal pure 2000 saal"Pure ke pure 2000 saal baad aaj Jake ek nayi suruwaat hui h ek dam nyi suruwaat...ha ha ha
Main the great Yash ......ek vilakshan pratibha ka dhanee hoon jisane gu yuaan sootr kee rachana kee aur amaron ka abhootapoorv maarg khola - mujhe logon ke beech draigan devata ke roop mein jaana jaata tha........
lekin mere charam aarohan ke dauraan mainne apana saara pyaar kho diya.....
main is vyakti ke shareer par kabza karana chaahata tha, lekin mainne nahin socha tha ki vah itanee jaldee mar jaega - yah us vyakti jitana achchha nahin hai jo abhee bhee jeevit hai.
Jo bhi ho me kafi Lucky tha jo aaj tak jinda hu itne bade hadse ke baad bhi ..mujhe ab waps suru se suru karna padega .....
lekin mainne apanee clivention ke 200 saal mein kabhee bhee pyaar nahin kiya; mujhe koee chinta nahin thee, aur mainne apana poora dhyaan Saktio par kendrit kiya - pyaar kya hai, aur ise kaise samajha ja sakata hai?

Wo ye sab soch raha hota h ki tabhi darwazae ki ghanti bajati h....ting tong.....

Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?
Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..


........
........
........
Dekho boss ye tha phala update...likes ki fikar nahi feedback ki tension h so please aap sab milke bataye kisi ne bata bhi Diya to waps bato ki kami kidhar h

Badhiya awesome update

 

[dhalchandarun]

Update 1​

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat ho rahi thi.

Someone :- aree.dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum(bagal me baithi apni Biwi se)to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h

His wife :- Ghar chalo tum

Someone (others) :-:are yaaro dekho guy's ye to uper se leke niche tak pure brands ki dukaan h dukaan Zara gucchi bhai kya kya phana h be kon ho sakti h ye?

Per tabhi uska sathi bolta h :- yaar wo cute to h hi. ek dam princess ki trh. me iske pass gaya tha abhi jaankari bana ne per isne to ek dam ignore kar diya yaar dil ke tukde nahi chote chhote mitthi ke kan(dust particles ) bana diye.


Mmi......

(Tabhi ek awaz aati h.....ye kon bola be ya boli?)

Mmi mmi bhar dekho....wo kya h?

(Ek pyari si cute si ladki ne ye bola)


Badal h beta wo

ye sabd usi ladki ke the jiski itne samay se charcha ho rahi h ab Jake inke muh se kuch nikala.

Bachhi- Mmi kya papa meko apanayengey?

Ladki - Ha ha kyu nahi meri baby.tum ko koi kese nahi apnayaga? Tum jesi sweet or cute baby girl ko bhala koi kese na bol sakta h ? Aaja Mera baccha mma ki goad me soja

Ladki - okk mma

( Ye h choti si cute baby jiska name h yashasvi [ it's not me.aasan laga isliye likha h])

Bachi ke sone ke baad wo ladki sochti h- {kash me kabhi tumse dur hi na hoti to aaj ye sab na hota}

___________________________________

Wahi unknown time unknown please ( ye purani baat h )
Dhamke ho rahe the bahot sare......boom......

Nahiiiii......asa nahi .....ho sakta.....akhir me hu kyu?.....kya main prem ke is kasht ke kaaran marane ja raha hoon?.....akhir me hu kyu ...nahi.... bilkul nahi........(Ye ek ek bhot hi sakati sali vyakti tha )

_________________________________________

Gill family ka ghar.....(Gill ke Punjabi cast h Jaat hi hote h may be but is se koi fark nahi padegaa khani me )
Ek Banda bathroom me bathtub me naha raha tha ki tabhi uske phone pe kisi ka phone aaya h or wo bolta h:-
Dekho tension na lo me me sab theek kar dunga ...dekho jab bank Wale aayange to me Ghar ke piche se satak lunga . Tu bas dekhta ja mera plan. Chalo karakhta hu faltu tension nahi lene ka.Huh...
Itne me bathtub ke pass ek hair dryer Rakha hota hai wo plag mein Laga hota hai wo ludhak ke Pani mein gir jata hai aur vah ladka vahi baat kab main bada bada tadapne lagta hai.....
Aur tab sunai deti hai bahut hi dardnak aur khaufna cheekheain .....( aap imagine kar sakte ho aise time mein jab Banda baathtab mein pada Ho usko bijali ke current ke jhatake lag rahe ho plus pani ke andar current ka prabhav bahut jyada hota hai jis Karan ashanniye pida hoti h)
Or wo mar jata h uska sarrir bilkul kala pad jata h jo aam tor pe current lagne per hota h per tabhi.....
Uper ki light bhi jal bujh rahi hoti h (flickering)}

Tabhi Achanak us ladke ki Aankhen khulati hai aankhon mein alag hi Tej hota hai .. wo bolta h-

"2000 saal pure 2000 saal"Pure ke pure 2000 saal baad aaj Jake ek nayi suruwaat hui h ek dam nyi suruwaat...ha ha ha
Main the great Yash ......ek vilakshan pratibha ka dhanee hoon jisane gu yuaan sootr kee rachana kee aur amaron ka abhootapoorv maarg khola - mujhe logon ke beech draigan devata ke roop mein jaana jaata tha........
lekin mere charam aarohan ke dauraan mainne apana saara pyaar kho diya.....
main is vyakti ke shareer par kabza karana chaahata tha, lekin mainne nahin socha tha ki vah itanee jaldee mar jaega - yah us vyakti jitana achchha nahin hai jo abhee bhee jeevit hai.
Jo bhi ho me kafi Lucky tha jo aaj tak jinda hu itne bade hadse ke baad bhi ..mujhe ab waps suru se suru karna padega .....
lekin mainne apanee clivention ke 200 saal mein kabhee bhee pyaar nahin kiya; mujhe koee chinta nahin thee, aur mainne apana poora dhyaan Saktio par kendrit kiya - pyaar kya hai, aur ise kaise samajha ja sakata hai?

Wo ye sab soch raha hota h ki tabhi darwazae ki ghanti bajati h....ting tong.....

Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?
Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..


........
........
........
Dekho boss ye tha phala update...likes ki fikar nahi feedback ki tension h so please aap sab milke bataye kisi ne bata bhi Diya to waps bato ki kami kidhar h

Hmmmm wonderful 2000 pahle ki story Yash and Yashasvi very nice....dragon ka role nice....aapne kis app Kahan par story likhti ho jaise ki main yahi par private section me likhta hoon.

 

[Yasasvi3]

agla update jab mera man hoga ya fir kal to jaroor se bataiye apne vichaar is khani ko lekar.....amm photo ya gif ki jaroorat h ya nahi?

 

[dhalchandarun]

agla update jab mera man hoga ya fir kal to jaroor se bataiye apne vichaar is khani ko lekar.....amm photo ya gif ki jaroorat h ya nahi?

Abhi to nahi hai photo ya gifs ki jarurat.

 

[dhalchandarun]

agla update jab mera man hoga ya fir kal to jaroor se bataiye apne vichaar is khani ko lekar.....amm photo ya gif ki jaroorat h ya nahi?

Aapne to Yashaswi ko cutie bana diya wow khud ki tarif khud hi kar lo...

 

[dhalchandarun]

Update1 aa gaya h padho or rewies do pyare pyare

2Nd bhi likh diya gaya h bolo kab dala jaye

Evening me 8 pm ke baad abhi kuchh der padhne Diya jaye isi update ko thoda time lekar update dijiye mere jaisa jaldbazi mat kijiye.