krish1152
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Thanks for your concern . It's a fictional characters story and not related to the any living being , place or time .....
It's just for entertainment and name place time being used for some realistic feeling in the story ......
If you feel anything please tell in details I will explain or remove it , if it is hurting somebody fellings . Otherwise read story and enjoy ......
Next update kab tak aayega, please send it ASAP.
Waiting for next update bhai
Maza aa gya update padh ke
Update 17 jabardast tha . Sarla ke liye Aryan ka Bhai waala bond bahot interesting tha nicely written .
Thanks bhai for your advise .
Kbtk Bhai aayega
Kahbi sabar be karliya Karo Yar.
Woh be insan hai..
Waiting
Suparb update bhai waiting for the next update
Waiting for update bhai
Bhai kuch reader sabar karte hai. Kuch nai.
Is waja se unko bhot jaldi hoti hai..
Yeh nai sohte ke Jo likh rh hai uske time hai ke nai. Bas apna dekhte Hain..
It's ok bro take your time.
We'll manage...
And keep it up....
Agree mahi bhai..
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Agree with u bhai
Bhai aapki story bahut hi uttam chal rahi he. Usame har chiz ek sahi matra me he. Sex thriller comedy romance family darama fight sab kuch sahi he. Aap apne hishab se ise aage bhadayiye. Me sabhi updates par review nahi de pata. Lekin jo update mujhe baht achhe lagte he me unhi par review deta hu lekin like sabko karta hu.
Waiting 4 next update
OK waiting bhai
Intazar rahega bhai update ka
10beja ke bad be ah jye to koi problem nai Bhai.
Boss it's feel like real story I think nobody hurt you carry on. I read many stories on this forum but your story and other story main, mere family & mera gao
Are superb stories.
Dhamaka hone wala he...
Update posed......Waiting
Thanks bhai you understand my problem.Bhai kuch reader sabar karte hai. Kuch nai.
Is waja se unko bhot jaldi hoti hai..
Yeh nai sohte ke Jo likh rh hai uske time hai ke nai. Bas apna dekhte Hain..
It's ok bro take your time.
We'll manage...
And keep it up....
Bhai aapki story bahut hi uttam chal rahi he. Usame har chiz ek sahi matra me he. Sex thriller comedy romance family darama fight sab kuch sahi he. Aap apne hishab se ise aage bhadayiye. Me sabhi updates par review nahi de pata. Lekin jo update mujhe baht achhe lagte he me unhi par review deta hu lekin like sabko karta hu.
Waiting 4 next update
Thanks boss for your appreciation and Avi Bhai ki story Main , meri family Mera gaon was also my one of the favorite story.Boss it's feel like real story I think nobody hurt you carry on. I read many stories on this forum but your story and other story main, mere family & mera gao
Are superb stories.
Your word are very kind and it's mean lot for me that you appreciate my effort ....Of course it is a fictional story and I'm sure no one is hurt. Your story is worth publishing in mainstream. As writer you have done a really good job in balancing storyline.
Kudos to your efforts.