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Agar aap nahi maan rahe ho toh sample hi bhej deta hun par yeh kisi update ka part haiWaiting bhiyaji
Agar aap nahi maan rahe ho toh sample hi bhej deta hun par yeh kisi update ka part haiWaiting bhiyaji
Mast update h bhaiPrabha jhoot me gusse se boli ," Kyonki aap mujhe pyar nahi karte? Aap sirf Meena di, Neha di aur Dolly di ko pyar karoge ...... buhhhhhhhh ..... Kya mein itni badsurat hun ki aap ne ek sec bhi mujhe pyar se nahi dekha buhhhhhhhh".
Aryan ke liye comparison word hi nahi tha par apni choti si chuhiya bhen ki lalkaar suni thi to roote huye bola," 1 din ki thi jab tujhe machine me dekha, meri mummy ( Nirmala) bahot dukhi thi, saare parivaar waale dukhi the ki tu nahi bachegi par ush din bhi sabko bola tha phir apni Nirmala mummy ka doodh piya joh tujhe peena chahiye tha. Aaj tak toh teri baat taali nahi par agar Vishaka ki jidd hai toh pehli baar naa bol raha hun".
Prabha jhat se Aryan se lipat ke godi me chad uska poora chehra choomte huye bole jaa rahi thi ," Bhai Bhai Bhai Bhai ..... mein sirf aapse pyar karti hun bas mujhe apna lo nahi toh mein jee nahi ...... "
Aryan ne uski baat poori hi nahi hone di jabki usko bola gaya tha Prabha ko mat choomna khaaskar labon par..... Magar dono bhai bheno ne choomte huye aur ek doosre se lipat ke jharne me chalangh laga di.....
Ishliye Meena bolti thi Prabha ko aane do woh sab Aryan se karwa legi.
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Rani Hema ne jawab diya ," Aryan se beta sirf Vishaka hi paa sakti hai kyonki meri di huyi shakti se baaki sab putriyan hi janam lengi par chinta kyun karti ho woh poore Patalok ka Raja banega aur uski bhene usko madad hi karengi kyonki yeh Aryan ke khoon me hai ".
Rani Pushplata ," Lekin aapki beti Maya ya meri choti bhen Swarna jeevat nahi bachengi aur na hi Prabha ?"
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Yeh do alag part hain par mix ho gaye joh pehle se 8 episode baad aata .....
Ishliye bol raha hun bas 2 din
Koi bat ni bhai ap aram se sub set kro update hm wait krlenge bs story bich me mt chodna yrDoston abhi bhi uljha huya hun ..... Kuch parts agle updateson ke bhi idhar udhar mix ho gayen hain ..... Bas ek do din aur lagenge Update dene me kyonki mujhe last diya Update hi poora nahi laga.
Story ko aage badhane ke liye thoda motivation lack kar raha hun apni side se, aap sabka toh itna pyar mila hai ki words me bayan nahi kar sakta.
Haan story rokne ka vichaar mujhe kayi baar aa jata hai ki seedhe last part me le jaun aur story third person Rati sunaye apne pichle janam me jodkar .....
Thoda work stress aur family commitments bhi hain uper se mein IPL follower bhi hun toh Updates kam hi likha hun aur problems jaada liya hun.
Koshish rahegi yahin se story ka Update aaye kuch kamiyan dikhengi backup na hone ke karan par aap log mention karna.
Bas 2 din aur do mujhe rectify ke liye .
Dhanyawad
No way ...Doston agar aapko story pasand nahi aa rahi hai ya boring lag rahi hai toh mein yahin stop kar deta hun aur aapke liye nayi story likhkar post karne ki koshish karunga bas mere agle 60 se jaada likhe update waste hi honge....
Inh Updates ko Kaala Yodha story me add kar dunga
Aapko jitna time chahiye aap le le but ye story jaroor complete kare pls...Doston abhi bhi uljha huya hun ..... Kuch parts agle updateson ke bhi idhar udhar mix ho gayen hain ..... Bas ek do din aur lagenge Update dene me kyonki mujhe last diya Update hi poora nahi laga.
Story ko aage badhane ke liye thoda motivation lack kar raha hun apni side se, aap sabka toh itna pyar mila hai ki words me bayan nahi kar sakta.
Haan story rokne ka vichaar mujhe kayi baar aa jata hai ki seedhe last part me le jaun aur story third person Rati sunaye apne pichle janam me jodkar .....
Thoda work stress aur family commitments bhi hain uper se mein IPL follower bhi hun toh Updates kam hi likha hun aur problems jaada liya hun.
Koshish rahegi yahin se story ka Update aaye kuch kamiyan dikhengi backup na hone ke karan par aap log mention karna.
Bas 2 din aur do mujhe rectify ke liye .
Dhanyawad
Take ur own time mahibhai...Prabha jhoot me gusse se boli ," Kyonki aap mujhe pyar nahi karte? Aap sirf Meena di, Neha di aur Dolly di ko pyar karoge ...... buhhhhhhhh ..... Kya mein itni badsurat hun ki aap ne ek sec bhi mujhe pyar se nahi dekha buhhhhhhhh".
Aryan ke liye comparison word hi nahi tha par apni choti si chuhiya bhen ki lalkaar suni thi to roote huye bola," 1 din ki thi jab tujhe machine me dekha, meri mummy ( Nirmala) bahot dukhi thi, saare parivaar waale dukhi the ki tu nahi bachegi par ush din bhi sabko bola tha phir apni Nirmala mummy ka doodh piya joh tujhe peena chahiye tha. Aaj tak toh teri baat taali nahi par agar Vishaka ki jidd hai toh pehli baar naa bol raha hun".
Prabha jhat se Aryan se lipat ke godi me chad uska poora chehra choomte huye bole jaa rahi thi ," Bhai Bhai Bhai Bhai ..... mein sirf aapse pyar karti hun bas mujhe apna lo nahi toh mein jee nahi ...... "
Aryan ne uski baat poori hi nahi hone di jabki usko bola gaya tha Prabha ko mat choomna khaaskar labon par..... Magar dono bhai bheno ne choomte huye aur ek doosre se lipat ke jharne me chalangh laga di.....
Ishliye Meena bolti thi Prabha ko aane do woh sab Aryan se karwa legi.
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Rani Hema ne jawab diya ," Aryan se beta sirf Vishaka hi paa sakti hai kyonki meri di huyi shakti se baaki sab putriyan hi janam lengi par chinta kyun karti ho woh poore Patalok ka Raja banega aur uski bhene usko madad hi karengi kyonki yeh Aryan ke khoon me hai ".
Rani Pushplata ," Lekin aapki beti Maya ya meri choti bhen Swarna jeevat nahi bachengi aur na hi Prabha ?"
_______________
Yeh do alag part hain par mix ho gaye joh pehle se 8 episode baad aata .....
Ishliye bol raha hun bas 2 din
Bhai pasand ki kya baat karte ho hum log to fan hai is story keDoston agar aapko story pasand nahi aa rahi hai ya boring lag rahi hai toh mein yahin stop kar deta hun aur aapke liye nayi story likhkar post karne ki koshish karunga bas mere agle 60 se jaada likhe update waste hi honge....
Inh Updates ko Kaala Yodha story me add kar dunga