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ThanksBahut hi badhiya update diya hai Fire Pheonix bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
Nice update.....
Dev ke liye shadi ka rishta aaya hai, ya choti behan gaon aa rahi hai.
Update 4
Nice update
Nice update....
Waiting for next update
Waiting
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Update 4
Mast updateUpdate 3
To aap log sochh rahe honge ki bina intro ke hi story shuru kar di to ab bata dun ye jo ladka ha wo ha apni story ka main protogonist Dev sharma . Ab age ki kahani dev ki jubani
Ye kahani ka intro shuru se hoga lekin jo past ki kahani ha wo 2.5 sal pehle ghati thi dev ke sath to sab age past me us hisab se hogi or jab present me ayegi story to sab samjh jana
Past
Mera naam dev ha . Me bachpan sa hi ek dam normal insan raha hun. Na kisi se ladai jhagda na kisi se dushmani sab chizon ko hamesha positive hi liya ha kabhi bhi negative nahi liya. Or family bhi aisi hi thi meri family me maa thi jo mujhe bahut pyar karti thi papa nahi the unka dehant bahut pehle hi ho chuka tha ek behen ha jo mujhse chhoti ha jiski graduation puri ho gayi ha or wo jald hi ganv aane wali ha. Maa hi thi jinhone hame pal poskar bada kiya kabhi bhi papa ki kami nahi hone di. To me ne bhi soch liya ki maa ko bhi sari khushiyan dunga or ek achhi job karkar unhe sari khushiyan dunga.
Character intro
1. Dev sharama ( main protogonist ) : age 24 years dikhne me gora chitta or height bhi thik thak ha sharir se na to kamjor ha na takatwar ek dam normal insan ye story me kaisa ha ye age pata padega
2. Snjay sharma (father) dead
3. Sumitra sharma ( mother ) apne bachhon se bahut pyar karne wali or unki dekhbal karne wali.
4. Komal sharma (sister) : age 21 years dikhne me behad sundar or akarshak figure 34-30-34 ek bar koi bhi dekh le to ise pana chhahe .ye kaisi ha ye story me pata padega
To ab ate ha story per to hum maharashtra ke ek chhote se ganv se the jyada ameer to nahi the lekin jyada garib bhi nahi the hum middle class family se belong karte the. Hum ganv se the to hamare pas kuchh kheti badi or jamin bhi thi jisse hamari maa ne hame pala. To mene bahut dil lagakar padhai ki or engineering complete karke ek achhi job ke liye apply kar diya or jald hi mujhe ek company me job bhi mil gayi or mujhe work frome home kam karne ke liye mil gaya jisse me ganv me rahkar hi kam kar sakta tha or kabhi kabhi hi company jana padta tha.
Meri life me koi khas dost nahi tha lekin meri jindagi me mera ek khas dost tha jisse me apna bhai manta tha or usse hi me apni sari life ki bate share kiya karta tha or uska naam Aman tha.
Aman : age 24 years dikhne me achha khasa or handsome sharir se bhi majbut. Iski family ka intro past ke bad ayega. Ye story me kaisa ha ye age pata padega
Aman or me bachpan se sath the. aman hamare pados me hi rahta tha. Aman ki family hamare jitni ameer nahi thi. Lekin gareeb bhi nahi thi. Uske bhi papa ka dehant pehle hi ho chuka tha. Uski family me bhi uski maa or uski ek behen ha usse chhoti.
To ab ate han main story per to ajj me subah utha fresh hua or naha dhokar bahar aya to maa ne nashta diya or nashta karke me bahar ghumne gaya to aman mujhe bahar hi mil gaya ajj wo mujhe kuchh udas lag raha tha to mene usse puchha
Mai : kya bat ha yar ajj kuchh udas sa lag raha ha kay bat ha ghar me sab thik thak to ha na
Meri bat sunkaar usne jawab diya
Aman : kya bataun yar meri maa ki tabiyat kharab ha or unhe hospital le jaya gaya ha doctor keh rahe han ki ilaj me kafi kharcha ayega lekin tu to janta ha ki hamare pas itne paise nahi ha ki me unka ilaj achhi tarah se kara sakun bas isliye hi dookhi hun
Mai : Bas itni si bat yar kya me tera dost nahi hun tu to mere bhai jaisa ha ir aunty meri maa jaisi to bhala me kaise unhe is halat me akela chhod sakta hun tu bata mujhe kitne paise chhahiye me dunga tujhe.
Aman : lekin bahi yar me tujhse paise kaise le sakta hun nahi nahi yar me ye nahi le sakta
Uski bat ko bich me katate hue
Mai : dekh ab jyada bol mat aunty bhi meri maa jaisi hi ha to bhala ek beta apni maa ko kaise dukh me dekh sakta ha to jaldi chal hospital . Mere bar bar kehne per wo man jata ha or ham donon hospital aa jate han jahan hum dekhte han ki uski maa ko emerjency ward me rakha ha or uski chhoti behen wahan ro rahi ha jab hum wahan jate han to uski behen hamare pass ati ha or kehti ha
Aman ki behen: bhaiya dekhon na maa ko kya ho gaya ha maa thik to ho jayegi na
Mai: behna tu chinta mat kar sab thik ho jayega or fir mai aman ko paise de deta hun jise wo doctor ko deke uski maa ka ilaj karwa deta ha. In sab me mujhe bahut time lag gaya tha to mene ghar per bata diya ki me kaha hun to maa ko bhi chinta nahi hui
Sham tak aman ki maa ko hosh aa jata ha sab unse milte han fir me bhi unse milta hun wo to mujhe bar bar shukriya kahe jaa rahi thi lekin mene keh diya ki aunty ye to mera farz tha uske bad me unse milke ghar ke liye nikal raha hota hun to aman mere pas ata ha or kehta ha
Aman: shukriya yar tera ye ahsan me jindagi bhar yad rakhunga tune meri bahut badi madat ki.
Mai: abe kya ahsan laga rakha ha wo meri bhi maa ha samjh gaya to isme koi ahsan ki bat nahi ha achha ab me chalta hun meri maa mera wait kar rahi hogi
Fir me ghar jaa raha tha is bat se anjan ki meri maa mere liye ek surprise tayyar karke bethi thi to batao kya hoga dev ke liye surprise
So that's for today guys janta hun late hun uske liye sorry lekin kya kare hamre idhar tempreture 48 degree tak jaa chuka th ab kuchh kam hua ha to rahat mili ha or ab health me bhi sudhar ha agar update pasand aye to like kar dena or comment bhi kar dena jald milenge naye update ke sath tab tak bye bye
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