shanka56789
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Good that someone has restarted this story. Excellent bro. Keep it up and take the story forward. Nice updates from you in last week. Keep going.
Just a small suggestion, u can take it or ignore it. Even though madhu starts liking Martin, I feel it would be good if she has that guilt somewhere deep inside her and let her make not to ignore her husband completely. Let her take care of her husband and kid like she used to do earlier and let's not make it a hardcore revenge story. I like the traditional Madhu instead of this revenge taking Madhu. Let Martin start taking the advantage of/ start exploring traditional madhu. It would be exciting.
Will be waiting for your next update eagerly bro. Give the dates for us. There are some good hardcore fans of this story especially, don't disappoint us. Keep pushing yourself and five updates for us.
Just a small suggestion, u can take it or ignore it. Even though madhu starts liking Martin, I feel it would be good if she has that guilt somewhere deep inside her and let her make not to ignore her husband completely. Let her take care of her husband and kid like she used to do earlier and let's not make it a hardcore revenge story. I like the traditional Madhu instead of this revenge taking Madhu. Let Martin start taking the advantage of/ start exploring traditional madhu. It would be exciting.
Will be waiting for your next update eagerly bro. Give the dates for us. There are some good hardcore fans of this story especially, don't disappoint us. Keep pushing yourself and five updates for us.