Fantasy INSANE {{{ All Hell Will Break Loose}}}
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ALL HELL WILL BREAK LOOSE
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental....
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental....
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UPDATE 1
Ajay jiski age 20 saal thi
bed pe leta hua tha
tabhi woh bed se neeche utarke khada hua
uski aankhein band hi thi
woh dheere dheere chalte hue
room ke gate tak pahuncha
room ka gate usne khola
aur phir room se bahar nikal gaya
uska room first floor pe tha
neeche 4 rooms the
ek mein uske dada champak daadi champa rehte the
dusre mein uski mom mohini dad mohan
teesre mein uska bada bhai aryan aur bhabhi aryanshi
aur chauthe mein uski badi behen jaya
jo aryan se chhoti
aur usse badi thi
ajay kitchen mein pahuncha
usne sabse bada chaaku utha liya
sabse pehle woh apne dada daadi ke room ke paas gaya
usne ek hath se gate kholne ki koshish ki
lekin gate andar se lock tha
usne apni jeb se ek key nikaala
key nikaalke usne room ka gate khola
aur phir woh room ke andar pahuncha
uske dada daadi gehri neend mein soye hue the
dono ek hi blanket mein soye hue the
ajay apne dada ke paas pahuncha
aur usne apne dada ki gardan pe woh chaaku rakh diya
aur phir khachaak
uske dada ki gardan dhad se alag ho gayi
khoon poore bed pe fail gaya
tabhi ajay ki dadi ki aankh khul gayi
usne dekha ajay ki aankhein band hai
aur phir usne dekha
apne pati ki taraf
jiska sar dhad se alag tha
ajay ki daadi cheekhti
usse pehle hi ajay ne uski gardan pe vaar kar diya
ajay ne apni daadi ka bhi wohi haal kiya
jo usne apne dada ka kiya tha
subah jab mohini apni saas ko uthane ke liye uske room mein ghusi
mohini ki cheekh nikal gayi
mohini ki cheekh sunke
mohan aryan aur aryanshi teeno room ke andar panunche
andar ka nazara dekhke
sabke hosh udd gaye
aur sab rone lage
fut fut ke
aryan ne thodi himmat dikhayi
aur police ko phone kar diya
kuchh der mein police aagayi
inspector ka naam bhi ajay tha
usne sabka bayan darj kiya
tabhi ajay ki najar
camera pe padi
jo chaaro taraf lagi hui thi
har room ke saamne ek camera laga hua tha
jo poore gorund floor ko cover karta tha
ajay..camera on hai
aryan..jee sir
ajay..aapne cctv check ki
aryan..nahi sir
hum mein se kisi ne check nahi kiya
phir inspector ajay recording dekhne laga
recording room first floor pe tha
jahan ajay ka bhi room tha
poora set up dekhke inspector ajay hairan tha
use yeh samajh nahi aaraha tha
ki aakhir itne bade set up ki kya jarurat hai
shaam 6 baje se subah ke 6 baje tak ki usne recording dekh li
lekin chamapk aur champa ke room mein gate se koi nahi gaya
koi bhi nahi
upar se room mein ek bhi window nahi thi
inspector ajay ka dimaag kharab ho gaya
saala andar koi gaya nahi
andar se bahar koi aaya nahi
toh khoon kisne kiya
si neelam ka bhi yahi haal tha
neelam..sir khoon kaise hua
yeh samajh mein nahi aaraha hai
ab dono ek dusre ko toh maar nahi sakte
inspector ajay..room mein jarur koi na koi khufiya raasta hoga
aur phir saare police waale champak ke room mein pahunche
room ko unhone poori tarah se chhaan maara
ek ek jagah unhone chhaan maari
lekin koi suraag nahi mila
inspector ajay..aisa ho nahi sakta
aisa nahi ho sakta
raasta hona chahiye
sahi se check karo
neelam..sir 3 baar check kar chuke hain
inspector ajay apna sar khujane laga
saala yeh ho kya raha hai
jab koi andar gaya nahi
bahar aaya nahi
toh khoon kisne kiya
aur phir inspector ajay chala gaya
poora din beet gaya
aur raat bhi beet gayi
mohan aur mohini
dono apne apne room mein ankh band karke lete hue the
kyunki unki aankho se neend koso door thi
unke man mein bhi yahi sawal tha
ki uske mata pita ko kisne maara
aur sabse bada sawal kaise
room ke andar koi nahi gaya
bahar koi nahi aaya
koi khufiya raasta nahi
jaya apne room mein baithi
apne dada aur daadi ki photo dekhke ro rahi thi
use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
ki uske dada daadi use chhodke chale gaye
uske dada aur daadi usse kitna pyar karte the
uska kitna khyal rakhte the
mera naam ajay hai
jab main bahut chhota tha
tab mere saamne kisi ne meri mom ka rape kiya
aur phir unhein maar diya
mujhe yaad hai
sab yaad hai
usne meri mom ko maar diya
tabhi kuchh der baad ek shaksh room mein
aaya
aur mera hath pakadke mujhe apne sath le gaya
main nahi jaanta tha ki woh kaun hai
naam kya hai tumhara
ek doctor baithi thi
usne saamne baithe ek ladke se uska naam puchha
jo cigarette pee raha tha
pehle apna bataiye
lakda bola
mera naam doctor ramika hai
ab tum apna naam batao
mera naam ajay hai
ladke ne bola
ramika..ajay kya
ajay..ajay sharma
ramika..tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai
yeh sunke ajay Hansne laga
buri tarah se hansne laga
ramika..hans kyun rahe ho
ajay hanste hue.. doctor mera ek question hai
ramika..puchho
ajay..agar bhai behen ek dusre ke sath sex karte hain
toh apna kaisa opinion dengi
yeh question sunke ramika
chaunk gayi
aaj tak usse kisi ne bhi aisa sawal nahi kiya tha
20 saal ho gaye the
ramika.. tum yeh Kyu puchh rahe ho
ajay..aap meri baat ka jawab dijiye
phir main aapki baat ka jawab dunga
ramika..galat sahi ka mujhe nahi pata
lekin bhai behen ek dusre ke baare mein aisa feel nahi kar sakte
agar woh ek dusre ko aisi haalat mein bhi dekh lein
jis haalat mein unhein ek dusre ko nahi dekhna chahiye
ajay.. suppose kijiye
ki mere do bachche hain
ek beta aur ek beti
main dono ko bachpan se leke jawani tak kapde nahi pehenne deta hoon
dono ek dusre ko humesha nanga hi dekhte hain
ek dusre ke sath nanga hi sote hain
unke beech koi bhi doori nahi hoti
jo honi chahiye
yeh bolke ajay chup ho gaya
ramika..tumhara sawal kya hai
pehle mujhe yeh toh batao
ajay.. matlab bhai behen ke beech sex ho jaata hai
toh ismein galti kiski hai
ramika.. father ki
ajay..kaun Father
ramika..tum
tumhari galti se yeh sab hoga
ajay..aur aapki najar mein
main kaisa insaan hua
ramika..tum ek menat ill insaan ho
tumhein treatment ki jarurat hai
ajay..aisa kya
ramika..tumne mujhe bataya nahi
ki tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai
ajay..dada daadi mom dad bhaiya bhabhi
didi aur main
ramika..kya tum mujhe unka naam bata sakte ho
ajay hansne laga
buri tarah se hansne laga
phir se
ramika..ab main kya joke maar diya
ajay..jahan tak mujhe yaad hai
mere dada daadi ab is duniya mein nahi hain
unka kisi ne khoon kar diya
aur abhi is waqt
main apne room mein apne bed pe soya hua hoon
ramika..aisa Kyu
ajay..hmm sochne dijiye
are haan main.coma mein hoon na
pichhle 15 saalo se....
Ajay jiski age 20 saal thi
bed pe leta hua tha
tabhi woh bed se neeche utarke khada hua
uski aankhein band hi thi
woh dheere dheere chalte hue
room ke gate tak pahuncha
room ka gate usne khola
aur phir room se bahar nikal gaya
uska room first floor pe tha
neeche 4 rooms the
ek mein uske dada champak daadi champa rehte the
dusre mein uski mom mohini dad mohan
teesre mein uska bada bhai aryan aur bhabhi aryanshi
aur chauthe mein uski badi behen jaya
jo aryan se chhoti
aur usse badi thi
ajay kitchen mein pahuncha
usne sabse bada chaaku utha liya
sabse pehle woh apne dada daadi ke room ke paas gaya
usne ek hath se gate kholne ki koshish ki
lekin gate andar se lock tha
usne apni jeb se ek key nikaala
key nikaalke usne room ka gate khola
aur phir woh room ke andar pahuncha
uske dada daadi gehri neend mein soye hue the
dono ek hi blanket mein soye hue the
ajay apne dada ke paas pahuncha
aur usne apne dada ki gardan pe woh chaaku rakh diya
aur phir khachaak
uske dada ki gardan dhad se alag ho gayi
khoon poore bed pe fail gaya
tabhi ajay ki dadi ki aankh khul gayi
usne dekha ajay ki aankhein band hai
aur phir usne dekha
apne pati ki taraf
jiska sar dhad se alag tha
ajay ki daadi cheekhti
usse pehle hi ajay ne uski gardan pe vaar kar diya
ajay ne apni daadi ka bhi wohi haal kiya
jo usne apne dada ka kiya tha
subah jab mohini apni saas ko uthane ke liye uske room mein ghusi
mohini ki cheekh nikal gayi
mohini ki cheekh sunke
mohan aryan aur aryanshi teeno room ke andar panunche
andar ka nazara dekhke
sabke hosh udd gaye
aur sab rone lage
fut fut ke
aryan ne thodi himmat dikhayi
aur police ko phone kar diya
kuchh der mein police aagayi
inspector ka naam bhi ajay tha
usne sabka bayan darj kiya
tabhi ajay ki najar
camera pe padi
jo chaaro taraf lagi hui thi
har room ke saamne ek camera laga hua tha
jo poore gorund floor ko cover karta tha
ajay..camera on hai
aryan..jee sir
ajay..aapne cctv check ki
aryan..nahi sir
hum mein se kisi ne check nahi kiya
phir inspector ajay recording dekhne laga
recording room first floor pe tha
jahan ajay ka bhi room tha
poora set up dekhke inspector ajay hairan tha
use yeh samajh nahi aaraha tha
ki aakhir itne bade set up ki kya jarurat hai
shaam 6 baje se subah ke 6 baje tak ki usne recording dekh li
lekin chamapk aur champa ke room mein gate se koi nahi gaya
koi bhi nahi
upar se room mein ek bhi window nahi thi
inspector ajay ka dimaag kharab ho gaya
saala andar koi gaya nahi
andar se bahar koi aaya nahi
toh khoon kisne kiya
si neelam ka bhi yahi haal tha
neelam..sir khoon kaise hua
yeh samajh mein nahi aaraha hai
ab dono ek dusre ko toh maar nahi sakte
inspector ajay..room mein jarur koi na koi khufiya raasta hoga
aur phir saare police waale champak ke room mein pahunche
room ko unhone poori tarah se chhaan maara
ek ek jagah unhone chhaan maari
lekin koi suraag nahi mila
inspector ajay..aisa ho nahi sakta
aisa nahi ho sakta
raasta hona chahiye
sahi se check karo
neelam..sir 3 baar check kar chuke hain
inspector ajay apna sar khujane laga
saala yeh ho kya raha hai
jab koi andar gaya nahi
bahar aaya nahi
toh khoon kisne kiya
aur phir inspector ajay chala gaya
poora din beet gaya
aur raat bhi beet gayi
mohan aur mohini
dono apne apne room mein ankh band karke lete hue the
kyunki unki aankho se neend koso door thi
unke man mein bhi yahi sawal tha
ki uske mata pita ko kisne maara
aur sabse bada sawal kaise
room ke andar koi nahi gaya
bahar koi nahi aaya
koi khufiya raasta nahi
jaya apne room mein baithi
apne dada aur daadi ki photo dekhke ro rahi thi
use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
ki uske dada daadi use chhodke chale gaye
uske dada aur daadi usse kitna pyar karte the
uska kitna khyal rakhte the
mera naam ajay hai
jab main bahut chhota tha
tab mere saamne kisi ne meri mom ka rape kiya
aur phir unhein maar diya
mujhe yaad hai
sab yaad hai
usne meri mom ko maar diya
tabhi kuchh der baad ek shaksh room mein
aaya
aur mera hath pakadke mujhe apne sath le gaya
main nahi jaanta tha ki woh kaun hai
naam kya hai tumhara
ek doctor baithi thi
usne saamne baithe ek ladke se uska naam puchha
jo cigarette pee raha tha
pehle apna bataiye
lakda bola
mera naam doctor ramika hai
ab tum apna naam batao
mera naam ajay hai
ladke ne bola
ramika..ajay kya
ajay..ajay sharma
ramika..tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai
yeh sunke ajay Hansne laga
buri tarah se hansne laga
ramika..hans kyun rahe ho
ajay hanste hue.. doctor mera ek question hai
ramika..puchho
ajay..agar bhai behen ek dusre ke sath sex karte hain
toh apna kaisa opinion dengi
yeh question sunke ramika
chaunk gayi
aaj tak usse kisi ne bhi aisa sawal nahi kiya tha
20 saal ho gaye the
ramika.. tum yeh Kyu puchh rahe ho
ajay..aap meri baat ka jawab dijiye
phir main aapki baat ka jawab dunga
ramika..galat sahi ka mujhe nahi pata
lekin bhai behen ek dusre ke baare mein aisa feel nahi kar sakte
agar woh ek dusre ko aisi haalat mein bhi dekh lein
jis haalat mein unhein ek dusre ko nahi dekhna chahiye
ajay.. suppose kijiye
ki mere do bachche hain
ek beta aur ek beti
main dono ko bachpan se leke jawani tak kapde nahi pehenne deta hoon
dono ek dusre ko humesha nanga hi dekhte hain
ek dusre ke sath nanga hi sote hain
unke beech koi bhi doori nahi hoti
jo honi chahiye
yeh bolke ajay chup ho gaya
ramika..tumhara sawal kya hai
pehle mujhe yeh toh batao
ajay.. matlab bhai behen ke beech sex ho jaata hai
toh ismein galti kiski hai
ramika.. father ki
ajay..kaun Father
ramika..tum
tumhari galti se yeh sab hoga
ajay..aur aapki najar mein
main kaisa insaan hua
ramika..tum ek menat ill insaan ho
tumhein treatment ki jarurat hai
ajay..aisa kya
ramika..tumne mujhe bataya nahi
ki tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai
ajay..dada daadi mom dad bhaiya bhabhi
didi aur main
ramika..kya tum mujhe unka naam bata sakte ho
ajay hansne laga
buri tarah se hansne laga
phir se
ramika..ab main kya joke maar diya
ajay..jahan tak mujhe yaad hai
mere dada daadi ab is duniya mein nahi hain
unka kisi ne khoon kar diya
aur abhi is waqt
main apne room mein apne bed pe soya hua hoon
ramika..aisa Kyu
ajay..hmm sochne dijiye
are haan main.coma mein hoon na
pichhle 15 saalo se....
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Bhai ye sb ho kya raha hai. Matlab shock pe shock. Room m gya but camera m kuch nahi. Murder hua but koii saboot nahi forced choro kisi entry k v koii saboot nahi. Ladka samne h fr v coma me hai. Sala chal kya raha h. Ye pagla personality disorder ka mareez to nahi h na ya sala bhoot woot h. Bhai pls post more updates.
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black bhai es new story ke liye ..... Es pure Update ne dimag hila ke rakh diya kya ho raha kyo ho rha hai kaise ho rha kuch pta nhi chla ... par mja bahut aya
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Ye baklol bhai ki story hai.......Sorrry........ I mean black bhai ki....... Daredevil ke 23rd me jhalak dikhaya tha yaha ab puri story chalu ho gai......... Ye to pahle wale insaane se bhi jyda lag raha hai.......... Isme aage kya hoga koi soch nhi sakta...... Mubarak ho nayi aai hai story....... Bola tha pahle sab complete karunga tab koi or likhunga....