Fantasy INSANE (GOOD AND BAD) (Completed)

[tri20]

Black Bhai aapki new story ka naam bata dena agar aapne new story start Kiya hai toh

 

[दी di]

Black Bhai aapki new story ka naam bata dena agar aapne new story start Kiya hai toh

PUNISHER,,,,,

 

[tri20]

PUNISHER,,,,,

thanks bro for informing me

 

[Black]

Review for entire story :
Story ki shuruaat sadharan tarike se jarur hui ho par hume ye nahi bhulana he ke ye Black the kalua ki story he .
Jaise he story ke main character ka bachpan me he pehla murder ho jata he wo wapas jinda ho jata he
fir rat ko wo nokrani ke sath sota he, firse uska murder hota
tab apni tube jali iske kahi pe dekhela lagta he like 'Edge of tomorrow' me Tom Cruise ki aliens hajar baar gand tod dete he kyonki uske upar kisi alien kaa khun gira tha .
anyways apaan aage gaya jisme use Ana ne Andaman Nicobar le gayi waha Anaa ko sher khaa gaye aur ye mahashay 10 sal jinda rahe .
par jo he wo wapas aaya fir se wahi life-death wala kand shuru
fir humko blackwa ke 100 plots dekhne ko mile khud ka he dada, nana aur kya kya
sahi me kamedy kar di bhai ne , bhayankar wali !
fir jaise taise end update tak humara dimag ne adjust kar liya fir jake asli planner samne aayi
ab na maine Dark series dekhi he na he plot pata he pr end me jo gajab hua usne faad he di
itna sab kand hua ek chutiye senapati ke karan aur usko kuchh na hua wo alag se !
500 saaal intjaar kar ke minakshi chudel ne jo badla liya ye usi ki kahani he
marvelous !

Thakur bhai
Aaj hi idhar aaya
Dekha aapne review diya tha
Padhke khushi hui thank you

 

[Logan(Wolverine)]

Review for entire story :
Story ki shuruaat sadharan tarike se jarur hui ho par hume ye nahi bhulana he ke ye Black the kalua ki story he .
Jaise he story ke main character ka bachpan me he pehla murder ho jata he wo wapas jinda ho jata he
fir rat ko wo nokrani ke sath sota he, firse uska murder hota
tab apni tube jali iske kahi pe dekhela lagta he like 'Edge of tomorrow' me Tom Cruise ki aliens hajar baar gand tod dete he kyonki uske upar kisi alien kaa khun gira tha .
anyways apaan aage gaya jisme use Ana ne Andaman Nicobar le gayi waha Anaa ko sher khaa gaye aur ye mahashay 10 sal jinda rahe .
par jo he wo wapas aaya fir se wahi life-death wala kand shuru
fir humko blackwa ke 100 plots dekhne ko mile khud ka he dada, nana aur kya kya
sahi me kamedy kar di bhai ne , bhayankar wali !
fir jaise taise end update tak humara dimag ne adjust kar liya fir jake asli planner samne aayi
ab na maine Dark series dekhi he na he plot pata he pr end me jo gajab hua usne faad he di
itna sab kand hua ek chutiye senapati ke karan aur usko kuchh na hua wo alag se !
500 saaal intjaar kar ke minakshi chudel ne jo badla liya ye usi ki kahani he
marvelous !

Maine bhi TOM CRUISE KI MOVIE EDGE OF TOMARROW DEKHI hai Jo ki is story me us movie SE kaamyaabi ki probability dekhne ko mili MATLAB us movie me aliens ko haraane ki kitni probabilities hai dekhne ko mili using yeh cheej copy ki gayi ye Maine shuru ke updates me hi dekh liyaa thaa, is story ka naam insane hai aur writer bhi is story ko likhkar kaafi had taken insane banana rahaa.

 

[Logan(Wolverine)]

Nice story but more confusion more illusion ending so poor.

 

[Gaurav1969]

UPDATE 1

Tumhari himmat kaise hui us bastard ko yahan laane ki
Use yahan se bhej do
Isse pehle ki main khud uska gala daba doon

Yeh thi anita chauhaan
Jo Apne pati pe is liye baras rahi thi
Kyunki woh Apne sath ek ladke ko leke aaya tha
Yeh ladka vijay chauhan ka hi tha
Ab aap aisa maan lijiye
Vijay chauhan jo ki jawani se hi ek rangeen
Mijaj ka aadmi tha
Uski zindagi mein kayi ladki aayi
Uske pita is state ke sabse ameer aadmi the
Hua yeh ki jab woh apni maa ke gaon gaye
Apne nana nani ke paas
Toh unhein wahan ek ladki se pyar ho gaya
Us ladki ka naam Shalini tha
Pehli baar vijay ko pyar hua tha
Vijay aur Shalini mein najdeeki badhi
Shalini pregnant ho gayi
Tabhi vijay ke pita ki tabiyat bahut jyada kharab ho gayi
Aur use Apne pita ke paas lautna pada
Jab woh Apne ghar pahunche
Toh unke pita aakhri saansein le rahe the
Unhone vijay se kaha
Ki maine Apne dost ko vachan diya tha
Ki main uski beti ko Apne ghar ki bahu banaunga
Yeh bolke vijay ke pita chal base
Vijay ko majburan anita chaudhry se shaadi karni padi
Shaadi ke 8 mahine ke baad hi
Shakti ka janm hua
Jisse vijay pyar karta tha
Us ladki ke bete ka naam shakti tha
Lekin usi din anita ne bhi ek ladki ko janm diya
Vijay bahut khush hua
Kuchh din use bahut yaad aayi Shalini ki
Lekin uske baad woh use bhool gaya
Isi beech ek saal baad vijay ko judwa beti paida hui
Phone tha
Shalini ki maa ka
Jisne vijay ko bataya
Ki Shalini shakti ko janm dete hue chal basi
Aur ab woh bhi aakhri saansein le rahi hai
Shakti ke maama use nahi apnayenge
Ab tum hi ho
Jo use apna sakte ho

Vijay gaon jaake shakti ko apne sath le aaya
Jab usne shakti ko dekha.toh uski aankho meim ansu aagaye
Shakti kuchh nahi bola
Pehle uski maa use chhod gayi
Aur ab uski naani
Jo use sabse jyada pyar karti thi
Baaki sab toh usse nafrat hi karte the
Uske maa tak use harami kehte the
Shakti ko koi faraq nahi padta tha
Kabhi kabhi kab uski naani use kehti thi
Ki tu apne mama ki baato ka bura mat maana kar
Toh shakti kehta ki agar main harami hoon
Toh log mujhe harami hi kahenge na

Tujhe pata hai ki harami kise kehte hain
Iske jawab meim Shakti ne yahi kaha
Ki agar koi aurat bina shaadi ke maa ban jaati hai
Toh log uske bachche ko harami kehte hain
Jaise ki main


Woh sun raha tha vijay aur uski biwi ladayi kar rahe the
Vijay...anita woh Kahan jaayega
Mere siwa ab uska koi nahi hai
Anita..mujhe kuchh nahi sunna
Woh yahan is chhat ke neeche nahi rahega
Vijay..anita tum samajhti kyun nahi
Main uska pita hoon
Anita...kya aapko uski maa ne bataya tha
Ki woh aapke bachche ki maa banne wali hai

Nahi toh
Vijay bola

Toh phir aap kaise keh sakte hain
Ki woh aapka beta hai
Ho sakta hai
Uski maa ne kahin aur munh kaala karwaya ho
Shalini boli

Shalini
Vijay cheekh pada

Dobara agar tumne yeh bola
Toh main bardasht nahi karunga
Vijay bola

Toh ab tum us bastard ke liye mujhpe hath uthaoge
Main jaa rahi hoon
Apni teeno bachchi ko leke
Apne papa ke yahan
Dobara main tumhari shakal tak nahi dekhungi
Aur na tumhein apni bachchiyo ki dekhne dungi

Yeh sunke vijay ghabra gaya
Shakti se woh aaj hi mila tha
Lekin uski teeno beti uski jaan thi
Jisse woh ek pal bhi door nahi ho sakta tha

Please anu Ek chance de do use
Please mere liye
Itna bada ghar hai humara
Yahin kahin pada rahega
Please jaan mere liye

Duniya mein aise mard bhi hote hain
Jo ek ladki se pyar karte hain
Use pregnant karte hain
Aur uske baad parivar ke naam pe peechha bhi chhuda lete hain

Anita bhi maan gayi
Lekin is wajah se nahi
Ki use shakti pe daya aagayi thi
Ya phir use vijay se pyar tha

Uske man mein kya tha
Yeh vijay jaan hi nahi paaya

lekin mujhe woh apni betiyo ke sath nahi dikhna Chahiye
Anita boli

Nahi dikhega
Vijay bola

Shayad un dono ko pata nahi tha
Ki shakti bahar khada yeh sab sun raha tha
Tabhi vijay room se bahar aagaya

Vijay main tumhein apni betiyo ka haq us bastard ko nahi dene dungi
Mujhe bhi pata hai
Ki tum andar se kitne khush ho
tumhara Ek beta bhi hai
Main use majbur kar dungi
Ki woh yahan se bhaag jaaye
Anita yahi baatein soch rahi thi

Vijay...beta aaj se tum yahin rahoge
Shakti..aap kyun zabardasti mujhe Apne paas rakh rahe hain
Aap mujhe kisi anath ashram mein rakhwa dijiye
Main yeh baat jaanta hoon
Ki aapki patni mujhse nafrat karti hai
Vijay...yeh tum kaisi baatein kar rahe ho
Koi tumse nafrat nahi karta

Shakti kuchh nahi bola
Phir vijay ne ek maid se bola
Ki woh vijay ko uske room mein leke jaaye
Jaise hi maid ne use uska room dikhaya
Shakti ne maid ke munh pe hi gate band kar diya
Yeh dekhke vijay bhi hairan reh gaya

Shakti raat mein soya hua tha
Tabhi koi uske room mein ghusa
Dabe paon
Woh shakti ke bed ki taraf badhne laga
Jaise woh shakti ke bed ke paas pahuncha
Usne ek pillow liya
Aur shakti ke munh pe rakh diya
Shakti chhatpatane laga
Woh hath pair maarne laga
Dheere dheere shakti ke jism se uski jaan nikalti gayi
Aur kuchh hi palo mein shakti
Ki jaan uske jism se nikal gayi

Woh shakhs paaglo ki tarah hanse ja raha tha

Tabhi shakti ki ankh khul gayi
Aur woh jor jor se saansein lene laga
Tabhi shakti ne time dekha
Uski nani aaj hi toh mari thi
Aur ek aadmi use Apne ghar le jaane aaya tha
Jiska naam vijay chauhan tha
Shakti sochne laga
Ki woh yahan kaise aagaya
Woh toh vijay ke ghar pe tha

Uske baad vijay use Apne ghar le gaya
Vijay aur Anita mein wohi baatein ho rahi thi
Jo shakti ko pata thi
Tabhi vijay ne maid ko bola ki woh shakti ko uske room mein leke jaaye
Shakti ko kuchh samajh nahi aaraha tha
Ki uske sath kya ho raha hai
Use yeh sab baatein jaani pehchaani lag rahi thi
Uske baad raat mein shakti ke sath wohi hua
Koi Uske room mein aaya
Aur usne uske munh pe pillow rakh diya
Jiske baad shakti ki ankh khul gayi
Aur woh lambi lambi saansien leke rone laga
Uski ankho se ansu nikalne lage
Lekin phir woh apne aansu pochh liya
Uske sath phir wohi Sab hua
Use yakeen ho gaya
Ki yeh koi sapna nahi hai
Haqeeqat hai
Vjiay ne maid ko bola ki shakti ko room mein leke jaao
Tabhi shakti bol pada
Main akayle nahi sota hoon

Theek hai anju tum shakti ke sath so jaana
Dhyan rahe shakti mera beta hai
Use koi takleef nahi honi chahiye
Vijay bola

Aap chinta mat kijiye sir main baba ka achche se khyal rakhkhungi
Anju boli

Aur phir woh shakti ki taraf dekhke muskura di

Raat hui
Shakti ki ankho se neend gayab ho chuki thi
Use neend nahi aarahi thi
Anju shakti ke bagal mein leti hui thi

Kya hua baba neend nahi aarahi hai
Anju boli

Main aapka baba nahi hoon
Mera naam shakti hai
Shakti bola

Itna gussa kyun
Aisa kyun
Anju boli

Main gussa nahi hoon
Main toh yeh keh raha hoon
Ki aap mujhe mere naam se hi bulaiye
Shakti bola

Itne serious kyun ho
Aap toh itne cute ho
Aapkko hansna khelna Chahiye
Anju shakti ke sar pe hath ferte hue boli

Main aisa hi hoon
Shakti yeh bolke chup ho gaya

Anju shakti ke sar pe hath ferti rahi
Kuchh hi der mein shakti ki aankh lag gayi
Lekin Phir uske sath wohi hua
Aur shakti ki ankh khul gayi
Woh phir apni naani ke Ghar pe tha
Vijay uska wait kar raha tha

Raat hui aaj shakti ne nahi bola
Ki woh akayle nahi soyega
Woh aaj anju ka wait kar raha tha
Uski ankho mein ek jara bhi masumiyat nahi thi
Pata nahi kya soch raha tha woh
Jaise hi anju uske room ka gate kholi
Shakti gate ke peechhe chhipa hua tha
Shakti ne chaaku
Anju ki kamar mein ghusa diya
Anju ki cheekh nikal gayi

Anju zameen pe gid gayi
Aur tadapne lagi
Shakti ne uski kamar se chaaku nikaala
Aur uske seene pe baith gaya
Shakti..kisne bola tha aapko
Mujhe maarne ko
Anju... tadapte hue..kisi ne nahi
Main khud tumhein maarna chahti thi
Main nahi chahti thi
Ki komal baby ka haq vijay babu tumhein dein

Komal vijay ki badi beti thi

Yeh sunke shakti ne woh chaaku anju ki Gardan pe chala diya
Tabhi light on hui
Vijay yeh dekhke shock ho gaya
Vijay ke peechhe Anita bhi aayi
Aur uski cheekh nikal gayi

Anita...tum is paagal ko humari bachchiyo ke sath rakhna chahte ho
Abhi ke abhi ise Police ke hawale karo

Shakti..yeh mujhe maarna chahti thi
Vijay...yeh tumne kya kiya
Agar woh tumhein maarna chahti thi
Toh tum mujhe batate
Shakti...aur aap mera yakeen kar lete
Aap
Jo mard apni jubaan se phir jaaye
Woh mard nahi hota
Aapne meri maa ko pregnant kiya
Aur usse kabhi milne nahi aaye

Yeh sunke vijay ne apna sar neeche kar liya
Anita shakti ko nafrat bhari najro se dekhne lagi
Anita.. khade kyun hain aap
Jaldi se phone kijiye

Shakti..main aapki pehli santaan hoon
Aapka jo bhi hai woh mera hai
Aap mujhe police ke sath bhej dijiye
Lekin aaj se theek 13 saal baad woh mujhe riha kar denge
Uske baad main apna haq wapas lene aaunga

Anita...yeh bastard abhi se apna haq jata raha hai

Vijay bhi Apne aapko rok nahi paaya
Apni biwi ke kehne mein aake
Police ko phone kar diya
Shakti ko jail bhej diya gaya
Lekin wahan toh aur bhi bura haal tha
Wahan ka warden bahut zaalim tha
Woh kisi ko bhi buri tarah se maarta tha
Aaj usne shakti ko bhi buri tarah se maara tha
Kyunki shakti ne uske saamne apni najrein neeche nahi ki thi
Itna maar khaane ke baad
Shakti ne apni najrein neechi nahi ki
Yeh dekhke warden ne apna aapa kho diya
Aur apne dande se Shakti ke sar pe itni jor se maara
Ki shakti ka sar fat gaya
Shakti ne dum tod diya

Aur tabhi shakti ki ankhein khul gayi
Aur shakti phir se
Aaj 12 june tha
Raat mein hi toh uski naani mari thi
Vijay use Apne sath le jane aaya tha

Vijay use leke ghar aagaya
Ab shakti ko pata tha
Ki agar woh akayle soya
Toh anju use maar degi
Uske sath soya tab bhi anju use maar degi

Shakti ko pata tha
Ki vijay kabhi Apne paas se jaane nahi dega
Kyunki Vijay ne uski naani se vaada kiya tha
Aur vijay ne apni maa ki kasam khayi thi
Ki woh shakti ka khyal rakhkhega

Shakti yahan se bhaag bhi nahi sakta tha
Uski naani ne use apni kasam di thi
Ki woh vijay ke sath hi rahega
Aur uski har cheez usse chheen lega
Shakti ki naani ko pata tha
Ki shakti ek normal nahi hai
Matlab shakti har baat samajh jaata tha
Jo ek normal ladke ke liye namumkin tha
Shakti ne soch liya
Ki use anju ko aise maarna hoga
Ki uspe kisi ko shakk na ho
Aur Uske paas
Sirf chaar ghante the
Kyunki theek 10 baje anju uske room mein aane waali thi
Shakti samajhdaar jarur tha
Lekin tha toh
Uski ankho se ansu beh rahe the....

Great storyline Black chacha...
Shakti ka character jabardast hai .just started reading

 

[Gaurav1969]

UPDATE 7


Are o sambha yeh launda kaunsi bhasha bol raha hai
Gabbar hanste hue bola


Aaj itne saalo mein pehli baar use kisi ne pela tha


Lekin shakti babu ka toh kuchh aur plan tha
Shakti babu apni kamar se gun nikaal liye
Aur isse pehle koi kuchh samajh paata
Pel diye do goli
Gabbar singh ke maathe mein
Gabbar singh ki hansi
Cheekh ke sath gayab hui


Suwwar ke bachcho


Bas itna hi bol paaya tha gabbar Singh
Sambha aur birju ko yakeen ho gaya
Ki koi gabbar singh ko pel gaya
Shakti ki ek khasiyat thi
Woh marne se pehle sochta nahi tha
Aur maarne se pehle toh bilkul nahi sochta tha


Dhaniram ki ankhein chaundhya gayi
Aur woh chilla pada


Gabbar singh maara gaya bhaiyo
Ab uske chamche bache hain


Yeh sunte hi saare gaon waale Apne ghar se bahar aagaye
Sambha samajh chuka tha
Ki gabbar ke marne ke baad
Gaon walo ka dar khatam ho gaya hai
Aur gaon waale the kayi sau
Gaand kholke maarenge


Isi liye sambha pehle bhaaga
Use dekhke baaki sab bhi bhaagne lage
Lekin Shakti ko jitne ko maarne ka mauka mila
Shakti ne 5 daaku ko pel diya


Sambha birju aur baaki do daaku bache the
Jo bhaagne mein kamyab ho gaye
Gaon waale yeh sab dekhke hairan the


Tabhi dhaniram ne aisa kuch bola
Ki shakti ki jhantein sulag gayi


Beti radha damad ji ke pair chhu lo


Aapka dimag toh sahi hai
Shakti ghurte hue bola


Dekhiye baabuji aap ne gabbar ko marke meri beti ko bachaya hai
Mujhpe bada upkaar kiya hai
Lekin jis waqt aapne mere saamne meri beti ke sharir ko sparsh kiya
Usi waqt se aap Uske Pati ho Gaye
Yahi humari parampara hai
Dhaniram Bola


Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho
Ek mard hoke apni beti ko daaku ko saunp rahe the
Parampra my ass
Main toh nahi kar raha shaadi
Shakti bola


Tabhi usmein se ek aadmi aage badhke aaya
Jo us gaon ka mukhiya tha


DEKHIYE babu ji
Shaadi toh aapko karni padegi
Kyunki ab yeh Apne maa baap ke ghar nahi reh sakti
Ya toh ise aap apna lijiye
Ya phir ise yeh gaon chhodke jaana hoga
Mukhiya bola


Shakti kuchh bolta usse pehle hi radha uske pair pakad li


Babu ji agar aap mujhse shaadi nahi kar sakte
Toh mujhe bhi goli maar dijiye
Radha rote hue boli


Shakti jhatke se peechhe hat gaya


Aap samjho na main aisa nahi kar sakta
Main yahan kuchh din ke liye aaya hoon
Uske baad main chala jaaunga
Shakti bola


Radha rote hue uth gayi
Aur shakti ki taraf dekhne lagi


Ek ladki ko aapki tarah hi ek ladke ne nahi apnaya tha
Us ladki ko gaon se jaana pada
Aur raaste mein use daaku ne utha liya
Aur uski izzat loot ke use maar diya
Agar aap chahte hain
Ki mere sath bhi yeh ho toh theek hai
Main ja rahi hoon
Talab mein dubke apni jaan dene
Radha boli


Shakti ko pata tha
Ki use wapas jaana hi hoga
Aur uske peechhe mein agar radha ko kuch ho Gaya toh


shakti aage badha
Aur radha ko Apne seene se laga liya


Yeh dekhke saare gaon waalo ghum Gaye


Main karunga aapse shaadi
Aisi baatein mat kijiye
Shakti bola


Tabhi ek aurat boli
Shakuntala tera damad toh bada behsaram hai


Bahadur bhi toh hai
Jis gabbar singh ko police nahi pakad paayi
Us gabbar singh ko babu ji ne ek jhatke mein maar diya
Dusri aurat boli


Radha andar jaa
Dhaniram bola


Uski baat sunke radha ghar mein bhaag gayi
Tabhi radha ki saheliya
Uske paas aagayi
Radha tera pati toh filmo ka hero lagta hai
Kad dekha hai
Tu toh uske kandhe tak bhi nahi aati hai


Kaash gabbar singh ne mujhe pukaara hota
Toh baabuji mujhe bachate
Aur phir aaj unse meri shaadi hoti
Dusri saheli boli


Yeh sunke radha ka man kiya
Ki woh use jhaadu se maar maar yahan se bhaga de


Dekho toh kaise ghur rahi hai humein
Are radha rani koi tujhse tere babuji ko nahi chheen raha hai
Woh tere hi rahenge
Teesri saheli boli


Idhar humare dead king pehli baar marke pachhta rahe the


Dhaniram Shakti ki Taraf dekha
Damad ji dahej mein. Mere paas dene ke liye
Bas ek beegha zameen hai
Aadha main aaapko de dunga
Agar aap ko koi aitraaj na ho toh


Tabhi sarpanch aage badhke bola
Damad ji in daaku ko aap thaane leke jaaiye
Sarkar insabpe inaam rakhkhi hai
Aur gabbar singh pe toh poore 50000 hain


Shakti... mujhe kahin nahi jaana hai
Aap sab inhein leke jao
Aur inaam le lo
Aur saare gaon waale mein barabar se baant dena


Gaon waalo ko yakeen nahi hua
Ki shakti ne 50000 ka inaam lene se mana kar diya


Us time ka pachas hazaar aaj ke time mein dus lakh ke barabar tha
Chaho toh google kar lo
Gaon waale shakti ko ajeeb najro se dekh rahe the


Sarpanch jee aap gaon waalo ke sath in daaku ko thane leke jaiye
Hum baabuji aur radha ki Shaadi ka intezaam karte hain
Mukhiya bola


Uske baad sarpanch chala gaya
Aur phir mukhiya ne shakti ko kisi ke Ghar pe rukwa diya
1980 ke hisaab se yeh gaon tha bahut gareeb
Shakti apna sar pakadke baith gaya
Use samajh nahi aaraha tha
Ki usne jo kiya
Woh sahi kiya ya galat
Shakti ke gun mein abhi bhi 7 bulkets bachi thi
Shakti ne gun ki nali Apne munh mein rakh di


Agar Apne aapko maar doon
Toh mujhe shaadi nahi karni padegi
Aur main shayad wapas chala jaun
Lekin agar main is baar sachmein mar gaya toh
Radha ka kya hoga
Jis tarah main 40 saal peechhe chala aaya hoon
Kahin phirse main 40 saal peechhe chala gaya toh
Radha ka kya hoga
2020 mein mere liye kuchh bacha nahi tha
Isi liye mujhe wahan jaane ka koi shauk nahi tha
Abhi shakti yeh sab soch hi raha tha
Ki use kisi ke aane ki aahat hui
Aur usne gun chhipa di
Sarpanch shakti ke liye kapda leke aaya tha


Shakti ne mana kar diya
Kyunki uska dimaag abhi kharab hua pada tha
Main toh kehta hoon
Pel de saari gaon ki aurto ko
Waise bhi gaon ki aadhi ladki tujhpe fida ho chuki hai
Oh sorry main toh bhool hi gaya
Ki shakti mujhe sun nahi sakta
Betichod writer mujhe mera guest appearance chahiye story mein
Warna andar se kholke baja dunga
Ok ok story


Jaise hi sarpanch gaya
Shakti ne phir se gun ki nali Apne munh mein daal li
Woh khudko maar sakta tha
Lekin bas use yahi khyal rok raha tha
Maine Anita chauhan se sab kuchh cheeen liya
Agar main yahan rehta hoon
Toh main apni maa ko marne se bacha sakta hoon
Apne papa ko marne se bacha sakta hoon
Lekin shakti ne ek jhatke mein gun apne munh mein daala aur trigger daba Diya
Lekin yeh kya Shakti abhi wohin pe tha
Usne apni watch mein time dekha
Toh subah ke 10 hi baje the
Aur 10 bajke 5 minutes pe usne apne aapko goli maaro thi


Fuck
Shakti ke munh se yahi nikla
Uske marne se dobaara din nahi shuru hua
Balki woh 5 minute peechhe chala gaya


Shakti frustrated ho chuka tha
Isi liye woh thodi der ke liye let gaya


2020


Wohin dusri taraf Anita komal aur vijay shocked ho chuke the
Shakti unke saamne se kahin gayab ho chuka tha
Komal gun ko ek taraf fenk di
Aur Apne room mein jaake rone lagi
Anita aur Vijay dono ki gaand fat chuki thi


Randeep singh jab unse milne aaye
Toh shakti unhein nahi mila
Usne vijay se puchha
Ki shakti kahan hai


Vijay je koi jawab nahi diya
Kya batata woh randeep singh ko
Shakti uske saamne khudko goli maara
Aur phir gayab ho gaya


Randeep singh ka dimaag kharab ho chuka tha
Ki shakti kahan chala gaya


1980
4 baje
Shakti aur radha ki shaadi ho gayi
Na chahte hue bhi
Use karna hi pada
Saari rasmo ko nibhane ke baad
Ab baat thi
Ki shakti aur radha rahenge kahan
Lekin tabhi mukhiya bola
Ki uska ek aur ghar hai
Jise woh sajwa chuka hai
Ladki sab radha ko le gayi
Tabhi sarpanch shakti ke paas aagaya


Damad ji taari peete ho ki nahi
Sarpanch bola


Nahi
Shakti bola


Kya baat hai radha beti badi kismat waali hai
Jo use aap jaisa pati mila
Waise aap karte kya hain
Sarpanch bola


Main fauji hoon
Shakti bola


Use aur kuchh sujha hi nahi
Sarpanch yeh sunke Khush ho gaya
Woh sochne laga
Ki shakti ke rehte hue
Ab koi bhi daaku
Uske gaon mein qadam Nahi rakhkhenge
Aur Rakh bhi liya
Toh shakti unhein maar daalega
Radha ko le jaake
Ek room mein baitha diya gaya
Shaam hote hi
Shakti ko bhi jaana pada
Kyunki sab use ghur ghur ke dekh rahe the
Shakti jaise hi kamre mein ghusa
Radha use bed pe baithi hui mili


Saala aaj jindagi mein pehli baar kisi aur ki suhagrat mante hue dekhunga
Lekin yeh kya ho raha hai
Yeh betichod toh bed ke side karwat leke so gaya
Saara mood kharab kar diya
Ab kya kare
Maine kaha tha
Zabardasti ka maut se mat khel
Fat gayi na gaand
Apni hi **++++ se shaadi karni padi na


Chhote maalik aap yahan hain
Hum kabse aapko dhund rahe hain
Thakur sahab aapko bula rahe hain
Shakti ne us aadmi ko ghurke dekha
Use kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya
Ki kya ho raha hai
Behenchod agar main Lucifer Nahi rehta
Toh mera dimaag bhi kharab ho jaata



Us aadmi ne jab dekha
Ki shakti use ghur raha hai
Toh uski gaand fat gayi
Shakti aaspaas dekh raha tha
Use samajh mein hi nahi aaraha tha
Ki yeh ho kya raha hai
Usne bilkul ek gaon waale ki Tarah kapde pehne hue the


Chhote maalik
Bade maalik aapko bula rahe hain
Mahurat ka waqt nikla ja raha hai
Pandit ji aapko bula rahe hain
Aur yeh aapke kapdo ko kya hua


Tum mujhe jaante ho
Shakti bola


Yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain
Partap chauhan hain
Thakur arvind chauhan ke ek laute bete
Sukhiram bola


Shakti ka sar dard kar raha tha
Woh kuchh bhi karne ki haalat mein nahi tha
Aisa lag raha tha
Ki woh abhi chakkar khaake gid jaayega


Sukhiram use leke mandap ki taraf chala gaya
Shakti ko kuchh pata nahi chal raha tha
Ki uske sath kya ho raha hai
Behenchod bechare ki ek aur shaadi karwa di
Aur bechare ko pata hi nahi chala
Jaise hi pandit ne bola
Ki aaj se aap dono pati patni hain
Shakti dhadam se gid pada
Aur jab shakti ki ankh khuli
Toh ek anjaan ladki ko dekhke
Woh shocked reh gaya
Woh anjaan ladki dulhan ke kapdo mein thi
Aur ro bhi rahi thi
Saala isko bin maange hi boor mil rahi thi
Aur betichod writer mujhse mehnat karwata tha


Ab aap kaise hain
Aapko pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi
Ladki rote hue boli
Uska naam rukmani tha


What the fuck
Tum ho kaun
Shakti chaunkte hue bola


Yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain
Main aapki patni hoon
Rukmani
Rukmani boli

Yeh sunke shakti ka sar jhan jhana gaya


No
No
No
This is fucking insane
Shakti jhunjlate hue bola


Tabhi rukmani shakti ke maathe pe hath rakhke dekhne lagi
Ki kahin use bukhaar toh nahi hai


Shakti usse door ho gaya
Aur apni gardan hilane laga
Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
Ki uske sath yeh kya ho raha hai


Aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain
Pitaji ne toh kaha tha.ki main aapko Pasand hoon
Rukmani udas hote hue boli


Taareekh kya hai
Shakti bola


Aapko hua kya hai
Kahin sharab toh nahi peeya hai aapne
Rukmani boli


Jitna puchha hai utna batao
Shakti ghurte hue bola


Rukmani ghabra gayi


Jee 12 june hai
Rukmani boli


Saal kaunsa hai
Shakti bola


1975
Rukmani boli


Ŵhat
What
What
Shakti yeh bardasht nahi kar paaya
Aur usne mehsus kiya ki uski gun abhi bhi uski kamar mein hi hai
Usne gun nikaala
Rakhkha kanpatti pe
Rukmani ki cheekh nikal gayi
Daba diya trigger usne
Lekin jab uski aankh khuli
Toh rukmani uske paas baithi thi
Shakti ka dimaag kharab ho chuka tha....




Lo ji ab apni +++++ se bhi shaadi kar liye
Apne dead king surma bhopali
Kya lagta hai bhai log
Kaun hai rukmani
aur radha kaun hai
Story kaisi hai neeche comments mein batao
Dimaag ka dahi ho raha hai ki nahi....

Dimag chud gya writer sahab ... ab hang maar raha hai

 

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Dimag chud gya writer sahab ... ab hang maar raha hai

 

[Gaurav1969]

UPDATE 10


Shakti paaglo ki tarah cheekh raha tha
Anjali aur komal ghabra gayi
Tabhi ek nurse aayi
Aur shakti ko injection de diya
Behoshi ka
Shakti sapno mein khota chala gaya
Radha usse jhagda kar rahi thi
Ki main apni beti ka naam Shalini rakhkhungi
Lekin shakti apni beti ka naam meera rakhna Chahta tha
Phir dono ne tay kiya
Woh use dono naam se bulayenge
Shakti ki ankho se ansu nikalne laga
Shakti wait karta raha ki
1982 se jab woh 1975 mein pahunche
Toh woh wapas radha ke paas chala jaayega
Lekin aisa kuchh bhi nahi hua
Kisi ne use 1982 mein maar diya
Aur woh 1975 mein pahunch gaya
Phir usi maskman ne use 1977 mein maar diya
Aur woh 2022 mein aagaya
Har Samay mein do saal beet chuke the
Shakti ko rukmani se do bete hue
Bade ka naam Vijay tha
Aur chhote ka naam ajay


Wohin radha se shakti ko ek beta paida hua
Jiska naam deepak tha
Aur dusri beti jo meera thi
I mean Shalini


Kehne ka matlab hai
Uske bete aur beti ne milke use paida kiya
Lekin yeh toh namumkin hai


Jab shakti ko hosh aaya
Toh uske hath pair bandhe hue the
Doctor uske saamne khada tha


Mr shakti kya aap baat kar sakte hain
Doctor bola


Lakwa nahi maara hai meri jubaan ko
Shakti bola


Ab aap kaisa feel kar rahe hain
Doctor bola


Main tumhari shakal dekh raha hoon
Bikul manhoos lag rahe ho tum
Shakti bola


Uski baat sunke doctor shakti ko ghurne laga


Humne aapki body ko scan kiya
Aapke jism pe itne nishaan kyun hai
Aur ek nishaan toh bilkul taaza hai
Doctor bola


Doctor Apne kaam se kaam rakhkho main koi paagal nahi hoon
Jo tumne mujhe is tarah se baandh rakhkha hai
Mujhe khol do
Warna kutte ki maut maarunga
Shakti bola


Doctor ek najar shakti ko dekha
Uske baad use khol diya
Shakti wahan se bahar nikal gaya


Tabhi use bahar baithi anjali aur komal dikhi
Komal ko dekhte hi use yaad aaya
Ki komal ajay ki beti hai
Matlab uski poti
Bahut ajeeb situation thi
Shakti ke liye


Anjali aake seedha shakti se lipat gayi
Shakti ne koi response nahi diya


Ab kaise hain aap
Anjali boli


Shakti ne koi jawab nahi diya
Aur wahan se aage badhne laga
Tabhi komal ne uska hath pakad liya


Kya chal raha hai tumhare dimag mein
Komal boli


Mera vishwaas karogi
Agar main batau toh
Shakti bola


Shayad kar loon
Bata do
Bhale main pehle jaisi bhi rahi hoon
Lekin ab main tumhein apni family maanti hoon
Komal Apne ansu pochhte hue boli


Mujhe bhi jaan na hai
Ki aakhir tere sath kya hua
Anjali boli


Chalo dono kisi ekaant jagah pe
Shakti bola


Aur ab woh teeno ek ekant jagah pe baithe the


Phir Shakti ne un dono ko apni poori kahani bata di
Kitni baar woh mara tha
Kin kin logo ne use maarne ki koshish ki thi
Aur ab woh seedha 2020 se gayab hoke
2022 mein kaise pahunch gaya


Uski baat sunke anjali aur komal dono ek dusre ko dekhne lagi


Komal ne anajli ko ankho se ishaara kiya


Toh tumhare kehne ka matlab hai
Ki past mein jaake
Tumne do ladkiyo se shaadi ki
Unse tumhein chaar bachche hue
Vijay aur ajay
Aur ek taraf deepak aur Shalini
Vijay ne shalini ko pregnant kar diya
Aur Phir tum paida hue


Yeh kya dimaag kharab karne waali story suna rahe ho
Anjali jhujla gayi


Sunke tumhara dimaag itna kharab ho gaya
Toh socho mera kya man kar raha hoga
Shakti bola


Toh kehne ka yeh matlab hai.ki dad
I mean tumhare dad ko bhi usi maskman ne maara tha
Komal boli


Haan usi madarchod ne maara tha
Shakti bola


Yeh gaali kabse dene lage tum
Anjali boli


Do saal gaon mein tha
Gaon waalo ke sath rehke seekh hi gaya
Shakti bola


Tum theek toh ho
I mean agar yeh sab sach hai
Toh tum normal kaise ho
Komal darte hue boli


Jis din woh mujhe mil gaya
Us din main use woh maut dunga
Ki maut bhi kaanp uthegi
Shakti bola


Aur uske bolne ke andaz se hi
Anjali aur komal ki gaand fat gayi

And now
The dimaag ka dahi time

Tabhi ek ladki aake shakti se lipat gayi
Aur uske chehre ko betahasha chumne lagi
Shakti shocked reh gaya
Aur usne us ladki ko dhakka de Diya
Tabhi us ladki pe shakti ki najar padi
Yeh koi aur nahi anushka thi
Devraj singh ki ek lauti beti


Lekin yeh kya aaj toh woh poore kapdo mein thi
Shakti use gusse se ghurne laga


Anushka ki aankho mein aansu aagaye


Yeh kya behuda harkat hai tumhari
Sharam nahi aati tumhein
Shakti gusse mein bola


Behuda harkat
Yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain
Main aapki wife hoon
Anushka rote hue boli


Yeh sunke shakti ka dimaag ghum gaya


What the fuck
Maine tumse shaadi kab ki
Dimaag toh kharab nahi hai tumhara
Shakti tilmilate hue bola


Anushka Anjali aur komal ki taraf dekhi
Un dono ne apna sar jhuka liya


Kya aap yeh bhi bhool gaye
Ki yeh dono bhi aapki wife hai
Aapne hum teeno se shaadi ki hai woh bhi ek sath


Aur tabhi anushka apna mobile nikaal li
Aur usmein kuchh photos the
Woh un photos ko shakti ko dikhane lagi
Shakti ka sar chakra gaya
Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha
Ki yeh sab sach hai
Shakti dulha bana hua tha
Aur Uske sath Anushka anjali ek aur ladki khadi thi
Woh bhi dulhan banke
Shakti ne anushka ke hath se mobile le liya
Aur saare photos dekhne laga


Kisi photo mein ansuhka uske sath thi
Kisi photo mein Anjali
Aur kisi photo mein woh ladki.jiski shakal aaj tak shakti ne nahi dekhi thi


Shakti jhunjla gaya
Kyunki un sab photo mein woh bahut khush tha
Tabhi woh sab photos aayi
Jismein shakti un teeno ko honto pe kiss kar raha tha
Lekin un photos mein us anjaan ladki ki jagah komal thi
Shakti ke hath se mobile chhut gaya
Uske hath kaanpne lage
Jaise hi uski najar un teeno pe padi
Uska dimaag kharab ho gaya


Yeh jarur ko sapna hai
Main sapna dekh raha hoon
I am dreaming
Aur Dulhan banke koi aur ladki hai
Kiss komal ko kar raha hoon
Yeh kya chod faila rakhkha hai
Shakti Apne baal nochte hue bola


Yeh aap gaali kabse dene lage
Woh bhi itni gandi
Anushka boli


Pehle meri baat ka jawab do
Ki yeh ladki aur komal


Woh toh shaadi ke din komal ne duplicate mask pehen rakhkha tha
Jisse kisi ko na pata chale
Ki aap apni behen se hi shaadi kar rahe hain
Anushka boli


Chutiya samjha hai kya
Tum dono maan bhi gayi
Waah what a understanding
For your kindly information
This is 2022
Ek se jyaada shaadi allowed nahi hai
Aur maine teen kar li
Waah
Aur tum teeno tayyar bhi ho gayi
Anushka the perfect bitch
Anjali the foul mouth bitch
Komal the arrogant bitch


Abhi shakti ne yeh bola hi tha
Ki woh teeno shakti ko ghur ghur ke dekhne lagi
Use ehsaas hua
Ki woh kya bol gaya


Woh teeno use ghur ghur ke dekh rahi thi


Aapko jo bolna hai boliye
Lekin ab ghar chaliye


Anushka shakti ka hath pakadte hue boli


I am sorry
Maine bad language use kiya
Lekin sachmein mera koi screw dheela nahi hai
Ab main jaa raha hoon
Mujhe us bastard ko dhundna hai
Main ab chalta hoon
Shakti yeh bolke khada ho gaya


Tabhi anjali ne uska hath pakad liya


Dekho shakti agar tum mujhe chhodke gaye
Toh kasam hai mujhe mere pyar ki
Main sucide kar lungi
Kyunki dadaji ab nahi rahe
Jab main 5 saal ki thi
Toh papa mummy bhi chali basi
Ek tum hi ho
Jiski wajah se main jee Rahi hoon
Ab agar tum mujhe chhodke jaaoge
Toh mujhe majburan sucide karna padega
Anjali yeh bolke chup ho gayi


Uska itna lamba chowda bhashan sunke
Shakti ki hawa nikal gayi
Kyunki shakti ko pata tha
Ki Anjali bhi bilkul usi ki tarah hai
Jo bolti hai woh karti hai
Chahe uska anjaam hi kyun na ho
Bachpan mein shakti ki ek ungli toot gayi thi
Anjali ne bhi apni ungli tod li
Taaki use bhi pata chale
Ki shakti Kaisa feel kar raha hai


Shakti ke paas koi aur raasta nahi tha


Dekho main chalunga tumhare sath rahunga bhi tumhare sath
Lekin mujhe tum mein se koi bhi touch nahi karega
Warna main chala jaaunga
Shakti bola


Ok
Hum mein se koi tumhein touch nahi karega
Komal boli


Baaki dono ne apna sar haan mein hila diya


Kuchh der baad shakti apne ghar mein tha
Usi ghar mein jismein uska bachpan beeta tha
Chaaro taraf uski aur un teeno ki Shaadi ki photo deewaar pe latak rahi thi


Abhi woh hall mein baitha hi tha
Ki neha aur nisha uski dono chhoti behne usse aake lipat gayi
Shakti phir shocked ho gaya


Bhaiya kahan the aap
Aapko pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi
Aapki wajah se subah se maine kuchh nahi khaya
Neha boli


Maine bhi
aap bahut bure hain
Ab kabhi aapse baat nahi karungi
Nisha boli


Shakti phirse confused ho gaya
Uska dimaag kharab ho chuka tha


Lekin phir usne socha
Inki kya galti hai


Kuchh kaam tha
Isi liye bahar gaya tha
Ab kabhi bina inform kiye nahi jaaunga
Shakti bola


Yeh sunke woh dono uske gaal pe kiss kar di
Nisha...bhabhi bahut bhukh lagi hai
Kuchh bana dijiye na please


Abhi banati hoon
Anushka yeh bolke kitchen mein chali gayi


Neha..aap kyun khadi hain
Mere liye aap hi toh banaogi
Ya phir ab aap mujhse pyar nahi karti
Anjali...jaa rahi hoon
Tune tu mujhe Pareshaan kar rakhkha hai
Khud banane aata hai
Tab bhi mere hath se banwake khati hai
Neha...aap bhi toh didi ke hath se banwa ke khati ho
Anjali...jaa rahi hoon taane mat maar


Yeh bolke Anjali bhi kitchen mein chali gayi
Tabhi shakti ne komal ki taraf dekha


Ajay kahan hai
Shakti ne puchha


Yeh sunke komal use ghurne lagi


Tumhein yaad nahi hai
Komal boli


Kya Yaad nahi hai
Shakti bola


Mummy ne pehle ajay ko goli maari
Aur phir khud sucide kar li
Komal boli


Yeh sunke shakti ki ankho mein ansu aagaye
Ek taraf vijay ke khoon mein ajay ka hath tha
Dusri Taraf ajay uska apna beta tha
Jise sirf ek baar usne apni god mein liya tha
Kya laudr jaisi kismat likhi hai
Betichod writer ne
Saala kuchh pal ki khushi deta hai
Aur phir chheen leta hai
Abe agar main Lucifer nahi rehta
Toh sachmein mera fuse bhi udd jata...

Writer sahab konse nashe karke baithe the jo aapke uchh koti ke mastishk mein ye uchh koti ki story ke idea aaye the. Yaar readers pe to reham khaate sala hang maar raha hai brain.
Shakti 1975 mein rukmani se shadi kiya jisse usne uske hi baap ko paida kiya phir 1980 mein radha se shadi karke apni hi maa ko paida kiya .
Sala is maskman ko isi loop mein daal dena bhopdi ke ne sabki maar rakhi hai