Bhai me koi zyada tarif ya aisa kuch nahi kar raha bas mere dil me jo he wahi kehna chah raha hu. You know jab me Xforum par aya to mujhe kuch samajh nahi raha tha ke Xforum par stories kese explore kare... Fir 1 hi din thoda samay nikal kar dekhne laga... Tab mujhe ye Hindi section dikhayi diya fir samajh aya ke is section me stories post hoti he, mene kuch padhi or firse stories explore karta gaya aise hi mujhe Ishq He Tumse story nazar ayi, mene jab aapke Updates padhe to mujhe sachme ye story kafi pasand ayi. Or ye akeli story thi jispe mene apna pehla Comment kiya tha, mujhe laga ke me koi zyada comments nahi karunga, lekin story ne mujhe comments karne par majbur kar diya.
Qaatil ji, aapka bahut bahut shukriya ke aapne ek aise Prefix ko jise ek taboo samjha jata he, use itne pyaare dhang se dikhaya. Really great job bhai, yes kamiya reh gayi hongi, lekin me ise kami nahi kahunga kyu ke i can understand as a new Writer kafi galatiya ho jati he lekin samay ke chalte usi galatiyo se aap sikhte ho, jo aapne sikha... Kyu ke ek galati jo story me lag rahi thi wo tha elaboration... But aapne kuch dino ka break liya or uske baad jese hi aye sabse pehli chiz jo improve hui wo thi Update length... Or usi se pata chal raha tha ke aapne elaboration par kaam kiya he, yes uske baad bhi kuch jaga par laga ke wo kami thi but your overall work was insane
Without a vulgarity, sirf ek pure love ke saath aapne ye story likhi jo mujhe to sachme bahut pasand ayi. As i said earlier ke Incest me ye dikhana kafi challenging hota he ke character ko us se pyaar kese hua jo aapne Virat ke through dikhaya, lekin ek baat jo mujhe acchi lagi wo thi ke aapne Virat ko bas utne hi time tak nahi rakha, aapne uski bhi story ko Complete kiya or uski story bhi kafi sense bana rahi thi. I love the Aarav's words "humari kahani kuch panno me samane wali nahi he"
Ishq He Tumse 2 ka besabri se intezar hoga bhai ❤
Or ha next Story ka title or Poster ekdum zabardast lag rahe he, dekhte he story kesi hogi eagerly waiting for your next Story bhai.
