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story - 4 - gaon ka safar part-1

-papa mujhe nahi jana hai, please aap log chale jao na,

-nahi ravi, tum abhi tayyar ho, hum aaj saam ko nikalenge, e ji sunte ho, aap tayyar hona suru karo,

ravi yadav ek kafi sehari ladaka tha, lekin uska parivar pure gaon ke log the, uske riste me lagne wale chacha ke shadi me pura pariwar gaon jane ka faisala kiye hue tha, ravi aur uski badi behan neelum yadav suru se hi khilaf thi, aur khabar sunane ke baad se hi apni mummy kavita yadav se jid kar rahe the nahi jaane ke liye, lekin jiase hi un dono ke papa, sunil singh yadav joki greater noida me police inspector ka prabhar sambhalate the, ghar pahunche, ravi ki behan pehale hi darr se chup ho gayi, aur sunil ne ravi ki ek baat nahi mani,

sham ko pura pariwar saman pack kar ke train pe sawar ho jata hai, sunil bachpan se gaon me pala badha aur naukari ke wajah se noida rahata hai, usi gaon ki mitti se kafi pyar tha, wahin uski patni kavita ek chote sahar se thi, dono ki shadi ke baad hi sunil ka naukri lag jata hai, aur wo sehar chale jaate hain,

sunil ek hatta katta mard tha, uski uchai karib sadhe 6 feet thi, aur uska sarir kisi body builder ki tarah tha, chust durust, wahi kavita uski patni ek bahut hi kamuk aurat thi, bilkul kisi khai ghode jaisi,

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kavita

sayad yahi wajah tha ki sunil thoda apne kismat ko kosata tha, kyuki uske beta beti naa to baap pe gaye the aur naa maa pe, naa to uski beti uski patni jaisi khubsurat thi, aur naa uska beta uske jaise sarir wala, uski beti kamsekam padhai me tez tarrar thi jispe use kafi fakr tha, lekin sunil apne bete ke liye bahut hi jyada chintit tha, na wo padhai me achcha tha, naa khel kood me, sirf din raat mobile chalana, aur ghar me pade rahna, uske entrance exam me jab sunil ne -25 dekha tha to use dil ka dauda sa pad gaya tha, upar se kavita ravi ko hamesha sunil se bachate rahati, sunil ko suru-suru aisa laga ki uska beta ladakio ke chakkar me aisa haal kiye hue hai, kuch saal sunil ke bhi badbad hue the laundiabazi karane me, lekin uska beta ravi wahan bhi fail tha, sunil ravi ko ek ssamridh isnaan ke roop me dekhana chahta tha lekin uske sapane usi ka beta tod raha tha, use aisa lag raha tha ki gaon ki badlaw ravi pe achcha asar dalegi, sunil ka ek aur maqsad tha gaon jaane ka aur wo thi uski purani aag, jo use pata chala tha ki gaon aa rahi hai,

wahi ravi ek aisa ladaka tha jisko kabhi bookh tak nahi lagi jindagi me, uske paas kisi cheez ki kami nahi thi, yahi ek wajah tha uske aslipan ka, ravi ka dimag sirf aur sirf mobile me laga rahata tha, use aur kisi cheez se matlab nahi tha, jahan sahar ke ladake ladiya patane ke taur tarike dhoondhate the, wo mobile pe game ka file dhoondhata tha, ravi koi genious nerd bhi nahi tha, aur use padhai me bilkul man nahi lagata tha, use gaon jaane ka bilkul man nahi tha,

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-nikki

sunil ki beti nimisha urf nikki ek kafi padhane me tez tarrar ladaki thi, usne pichale saal hi neet ka exam me top 100 rank laya tha, sunil ki beti sunil ke dil ki chand thi, aur apne mummy kavita ki chandani, wo abhi medical ki padhai kar rahi thi, nimisha dikhane me buri nahi thi, lekin use ek bahut insecurity tha kyuki sabhi log use uski maa se tulana karane lagate the, aur agar kavita 10 me 9 thi to nikki bhi 7.5 jarur thi, lekin maa se tulana ki wajah se wo bahut cheepa ke rahati thi, usne apni mummy ke samane kai baar in baton ki wajah se anshu bahaye hain, uski mummy kavita ki to rani thi nikki lekin duniya ko kaun samjahye, is kharab tulana me uske papa bhi shamil the, lekin sunil bakio ki tarah dil ki baat muh pe nahi lata tha, medical collage me jaane ki baad nikki kafi nikharane lagi thi, pehale to collage me use koi uski mummy se tulana nahi karata tha, jis se uska confidence naturally badha, aur uske is atmsvisvas ki wajah tha mohammad rizwan ahmed, uska boy friend, usne use convecation me approach, suru me to nikki ko yakin hi nahi aaya ki koi use pasan bhi kar sakta hai, lekin dheere dheere wo dono couple ban gaye, aur pichale ek saal se the, nikki yon rup se sakriye thi, jiska andaza ghar walon ko nahi tha, aur gaon se wo baat bhi nahi kar pati, isi liye wo gaon nahi jana chahti thi,

kavita yadav ek bala ki khubsurat aurat thi, uska shadi bina kisi dahej ke hua tha sirf uski khubsurati ki wajah se, jaise kaise khule chini me chinti lagate hain, waise hi kavita naam ke chinni pe kai chinti lage the, aur kavita ne jab se jawani ki angdai li thi uske kai ashiq bane, kavita apna sehad chatwane me kabhi piche nahi hatati thi, shadi se pehale kavita apne school me lund lene ke liye kuthiyat thi, aur kuch aise raaz bhi the jo sayad kavita kisi ko nahi bata sakti thi, jaise kya ravi sunil ka hi beta hai kya, iska jawab to wo khud nahi janati thi, shadi ke baad sunil ke takat ne use apne vas me kar liya tha, sunil jaisa damdar mard lene ke baad kavita ko kisi ki jarurat nahi thi, lekin samay ke sath jaise jaise sunil ka kaam badha, un dono ke bich raat ka khel kam hote gaya, kavita ne mulli, mombatti, aur bahut kuch try kiya lekin sunepan ne uske tang dubara khulwa diye, lekin kavita ek inspector ki bibi aur do bade bachcho ki maa thi, aur wo pehale jaise school ki randi nahi ban sakti thi, isi liye chip chip ka sabke nazaro se bachkar ye sab karati thi, kavita ka umar ke sath uski chut ki bhatti bhi badh gayi thi, aur uska chut ka swas chakhane wale pagal hi ho jaate hain, kuch to abhi bhi use dhoondhane ki kosis karate, kitno ne atm hatya kar liya uski shadi ki baat sun kar, kayi to aaj bhi apni patniyo ko uske yaad me chodate, ye taqat thi kavita ke yon me, lekin sunil nahi sunil khud ek pust mard tha, shadi ke tarikh tay ho jane ke kuch din pekale sunil kavita se milane aaya, aur un dono ka deh ka khel suru ho gaya,

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kavita, unmarried, subah khet me do abhineta se, sam ko hone wale pati se chudane ke samay

aur lab wo apna lawa kavita me pehala dafa dala to kavita us par fida ho gayi, aur wahi use pachatawa hua ki shadi ki tarikh tay ho jaane ke baad bhi wo mela me aaye do nautanki wale se khet me apna bur subah hi marwa li thi, kavita ko gaon se kuch khas jyada moh nahi tha, aur wo apne maike naa ke barabar jaati thi, aur hamesha akela taki sunil ko uska itihas pata nahi chale, usi sahar jyada pasand tha sahuliyat aur gopniyata ki wajah se, wo saharo me asali se gulcharre uda sakti thi, lekin wo sunil ki bat kabhi mana nahi karati thi,

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sab log mughalsarai jaane wale gadi me baith gaye, sunil kam gaon wahan se 10 km hi dur tha, sunil apne pariwar ko gaon ke khisse suna raha tha, jise kavita aur nikki dhyaan se sun rahe the, aur ravi mobile pe busy tha,

-are ravi tum kabhi to free ho, har waqt mobile chalate rahate ho,

-papa aap baat karo na, mera important kam hai,

-ye ladak kya hoga iska, kamsekam dibba check kar liya hai na, saman ki wajah se maine dekha nahi,

-ha papa bhai ne check kar liya tha,

sunil apna sir na me hilata hai,

-achcha sab apna seat pakad lo, nikki, ravi tum upar chadh jana, madam ji aap kahan soyengi,

-ravi ke papa, main niche wala birth le leti hun, waise yahan koi bina ticket wala nahi aayega na,

-are aap kya chinta kar rahi hain ravi ki maa, inspector hun main, ha ha ha,

-hi hi hi,

kavita muska padati hai, ravi abhi apne dosto ke sath group chat kar raha tha, aur nikki apne mobile chipa kar apne boyfriend ahmed se chat kar rahi thi, jo us se nange tasveer mangwane ki kosis kar raha tha, aur kuch pal me nikki man jati hai,

-mummy papa, main toilet se ho aati hun,

-achcha jao, lekin niche mat utarana kafi bheed hai, aur samay ho gaya hai,

-achcha,

nikki jhat se bathroom me apna nanga tasveer lene chali jati hai,

-hello ye seat mera hai,

-kon sa wala,

-wo side wala, baba,

-achcha bhabhi, ye liziye main apna saman niche kar diya,

sunil ke samane ek bengali aurat aayi thi, usne ek ujale rang ka saree pehan rakha tha, kavita ki nazar bhi us aurat pe gayi, wo aurat aaram se baith gayi,

-aap log pura pariwar ho,

-han hum log gaon ko jaa rahe hain,

-achcha, mera bhi emergency asansol jane ka plan ban gaya,

-achcha, aisa to hota hai kabhikabhar bhabhi ji, waise koi aapko chodane nahi aaya,

sunil aur kavita us aurat se batein karane lage, lekin sunil ka nazar us bong aurat ke deep cut wale blouse pe tha, aur wo aurat ne ise pehchan liya tha, aur sunil ko dekh us aurat ka bhi halat thoda patla ho gaya tha, kavita ko is yon akshan ka ahsas ho raha tha, kavita is se thoda andar se chidh gayi, kyuki sunil ne kavita ko pichale 2 mahine se hath nahi lagaya tha,

-achcha apke husband aapke sath nahi hain,

-kya batau behan ji, unko kam se fursat mile tab na,

-aapka awaz bahut meetha hai, bilkul bengali rasgulla jaisa,

-are bhaisab, ham use rosogullo bolate hain,

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sadia ghosh

wo aurat jiska naam sadia ghosh tha, kavita ke nazar se bachcha ke jab wo kuch saman lene ke liye niche jhuki, apna saree apne deep cut wale se hata deti hai, sunil sara signal samajh jata hai,

-are bhabhi, rosogulla khane me to hum mahir hai,

-wo to aapke muh dekhkar hum samajh gaye the bhaisab,

kavita ko bate to ajeeb lagi, lekin abhi ke liye nazar andazz kar diya, aur usi waqt gadi khul jati hai,

-are ye nikki kahan rah gayi, kahin niche to nahi utar gayi, ravi jaa ke dekho to,

-papa wo dudh piti bachchi thodi hai,

-ravi jao,

sunil apna ankh dikhata hai to ravi apni behan ko kojane chala jata hai,

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-ahmad main phone kat rahi hun, train khul gayi hai,

-nahi main aur nahi bhejungi, please man jao na,

-kitane to bheje maine abhi,

-achcha baba, lekin main abhi phone kat rahi hun,

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nikki ke selfie

-nahi main nahi bolungi,

-please nahi na,

tabhi khojate khojate ravi pahunch jata hai, gusse me wo budbuda raha tha,

-achca main jab aaungi to muh me wo le lungi,

-nahi, na, ahmedu, na,

-lund,

dhak dhak, dhak dhak,

-nikki tum andar ho kya,

-haa main abhi aayi, tum jao ravi,

-itni der kyu lag rahi hai,

-tum bus jao na, main aa rahi hun,

ravi wahan se chala jata hai, nikki jhat se apna kapada daalati hai aur wapas apne seat pe aa jati hai, kavita ko jhapki aa rahi thi, aur upar wale birth pe ravi gusse me sone ki kosis kar raha tha, uska mobile me koi network nahi tha, aur nikki bhi upar birth pe chadh gayi, sone ka plan karane lagi, aur sunil aur sadia ke bich ankh michauli ka khel chal raha tha, train abhi khali hi thi is liye unhe ye bina kisi dikkat ke karane ka mauka mil raha tha, sadia apne pairon se sunil ka pair sehla rahi thi, aur sunil badi muskil se apna lund daba raha tha, tabhi train main station pe ruka jahan gadi bharane wali thi, sadia apne pair khich leti hain, aur kafi tezi se gadi chakachak bhad jata hai, kavita neend me aa jati hai, wahin ravi aur nikki dubara network aane pe mobile me busy ho jate hain,

-bhaisab kitani bheed ho gayi hai na,

-ha bhabhi, is taraf ac me to halat thoda sahi hai, yahan sleeper me to chalane ka bhi jagah nahi hoga,

-sach kaha aapne bhaisab,

sadia aur sunil yuhi baatein kar rahe the ki wahan pe ek bujurg aata hai,

-beta samane mera seat hai,

-achcha baba, aap baith jaiye,

wo buddha karib 65 saal ka tha, aur ek kafi mota chasma lagaya hua tha, wahin bagal me side pe do ladiyan thi, dono collage ke umar ki lag rahi thi, kuch der me gadi dubara suru ho jata hai, gadi ab tezi pakad leta hai, agla station kafi der me aane wala tha aur raat ke 11 bajane ko the, log jan bistar lagane lagate hain, aur sunil khudka, sadia ka, us buzurg ka, aur wo collage ladakiyan sab ka bistar lagane me madad karata hai, lekin ye sunil jaan bujhkar sadia se chipakane ke liye kar raha tha, aur sadia bhi kabhi pith kabhi jangh sunil pe mal rahi thi, kuch der me sara pariwar sone chala gaya aur dibbe me andhere pasar gaya,

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raat ko karib ek baj raha tha, sunil se nind koso dur thi, uski dil dimag pe abhi usi ke samane wale birth pe soyi sadia thi, lekin sunil ek jimmedar awhade wala aadmi tha, aur ek galti national news ban sakta tha, isliye sadia ke ek aad bar ishara dene ke baad bhi sunil uske birth pe nahi gaya, upar se uska pariwar, wo koi galti nahi kar sakta tha, lekin us se uska lund bhi badast nahi ho raha tha, aur wo uth jata hai aur sadia ko haule se jagata hai,

-sadia sadia, utho,

sadia uth kar jhat se sunil ko chum leti hai,

-hai sunil main isi ka to intejaar kar rahi thi,

-sadia tum mujhse bathroom me milo, kuch der baad aana,

sunil wahan se nikal jata hai, aur sidhe bathroom ke paas jata hai, wahan pe aadmi duty pe tha, sunil use utha 500 rupye deta hai, aur chaukidari karane ko bol deta hai, iske baad sunil bathroom me intejaar karane lagata hai, kuch der me sadia bathroom me ghus jati hai,

-hai sunil, kitna sahasi, so risky na, maja aa raha hai,

-meri bengali imriti idhar aa tu,

sadia aur sunil ek dusare se lipat jaate hain, aur sunil jhat se apna pant utarane lagata hai,

-sunil ye bathroom to bahut ganda hai kya karu,

saam ko nikki ke boyfriend ne jo salah nikki ko di thi wo sunil sadia ko deta hai,

-tum kya karo pura kapara utar do, main bhi utar deta hun,

-agar koi aa gaya to,

-are maine guard se talmel bana liya hai, chinta not,

-hi hi hi,

sadia jhat se apne kapade utar deti hai, aur sare kapade ko waha bade ek line pe laga deti hai,

-sadia tum kya lagati ho, kya kehate hain urdu me,

-dilkas,

-haan wahi,

sadia jaldi se ghori ban jati hai, kyuki aur kuch ka jagah nahi tha, aur sunil ko yaad aata hai ki uske paas to condom nahi hai,

-oh mere paas to condom hi nahi hai,

-are ye to bada problem hai baba, lekin chinta nahi na, main hamesha condom sath rakhati hun, hi hi hi, kab jarurat pad jaye, lekin sunil tumhe lana padega, mere bag ke side chain me hoga, mujhe sadi dubara pehanane me bahut dikkat lagega,

-achcha,

sunil jhat se kapada laga condom lene nikal jata hai, aur wo apne berth pe pahunch jata hai, sunil jab sadia ke bearth pe pahunchata hai to uska bag jo ki uske seat ke paas latkaya hua tha kholata hai, uska hath me condom lagata hai aur wo 3 pack leke jaldi jaldi nikla jata hai, uske uttejana me itni jaldi thi ki uska dhyaan hi nahi jata ki uske patni kavita ke samane sone wala bujurg apne berth se gayab tha,

sunil wapas bathroom me ghus jata hai, aur sadia ke honth apne honth se jakad leta hai,

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kavita din me bachcho ki jhikjhik aur phir khana banana aur phir tayyari karane me kafi thak gayi thi, uska sarir ki thakawat ki wajah se use kafi jaldi nind aa gaya tha, kavita ne sunil aur sadia ka harkat dekha tha aur use jalan bhi hui lekin uska sarir thakawat ke agosh me chala gaya,

wo bujurg jo kavita ke samane leta hua tha, usne sadia aur sunil ka sara harkat dekha, aur uska andar ka kaam jag gaya tha, jab sunil sadia ke sath bathroom chala gaya to wo bujurg me alag sa josh aur himmat aa gaya, us bujurg ki nazar sidhe kavita pe thi, use aisa lag raha tha ki wo ek asan sikar hai, wo bujurg sunil aur sadia ke jaane ke bad apne birth se uth jata hai, aur sidhe bathroom ko jata hain, jahan use guard dusre side jaane ko bol deta hai, phir wo bujurg wapas kavita ke birth ke samane jaata hai, use kafi darr lag raha tha, jaise sunil ko lag raha tha, lekin wo sunil se jayada himmat dikhata hai, aur kavita ke pair ke paas baith apna hath haule se kavita ke jangh sahlane lagata hai, aur phir ruk jata hai, kavita ke taraf se koi pratikirya nahi aati hai, to wo buddha aur himmat dikahta hai, aur dheere se kavita ka saree utha deta hai, aur apna ek hath aage badha ke kavita ke panty chune ki kosis karata hai, lekin kavita saree me panty nahi pehanati thi, aur us buddhe ka hath kavita ke bhatti me lag jata hai, aur wo hath wapas khinchane ke wahi rakh deta hai,

-ravi ke papa, aaaaaaaaaaaaah,

kavita halke se aanh bharati hai, wo buddha dara hua tha lekin wo himmat nahi chodata aur thoda lalchi ho wo saree ko ghutano pe chadha deta hai, kavita phir koi jawab nahi deti, bus haule se ravi ke papa bolati hai, phir wo buddha apna hath hata ke apna pani se lablabata muh kavita ke jalate hue bhatti pe rakh deta hai,

-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah,

kativa ek lumbi saans leti hai, aur us buddhe ka sir apne jhagh me jakad leti hai, aur usi waqt sunil wapas condom lene ko aata hai, wo buddha buri tarah se dara hua tha, lekin kavita ke jangh se na wo chut raha tha, aur na wo koi awaz karana chahta tha, aur wo chupchap wahin baithe raha, sunil phir wahan se bina janch kiya nikal jata hai, aur wo buddha apna jeebh nikal leta hai, aur uski jeebh kabita ke yoni ko chatane lagate hain,

-haaaaaaai aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ravi ke papa,

kavita ka hanth niche jaata hai, aur us buddhe ke sir pe padata hai, wo buddha aadha ganja tha, aur kavita jhat se uth jati hai,

-kon ho tum,

kavita us bujurg ke bal jod se pakad leti hai, aur wo halla karane hi wali thi ki, buddha rone lagata hai, aur kavita ke pair pakad leta hai,

-beti maaf kar do please, mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai, main aisa aadmi nahi hun,

-to sale tu kaisa hai, ruk main tujhe abhi pitwati hun, madarchod janani pe hath dalata hai,

-maaf kar do beti main tumhare hi pati ki wajah se behak gaya tha, aaanh aaaaaanh,

ab kavita ki nazar samane sadia ke berth pe jaati hai, aur wo hath se apne upar ke berth ko tatolati hai, aur wo sara manjara samajh jati hai, ab uska gussa use us buddhe se jyada sunil pe tha, uska gussa ye nahi tha ki wo sadia ki chut le raha hai, uska gussa tha ki wo do mahine se use nazarandaj kar raha tha, ab kavita gusse me uth jati hai,

-chal buddhe mere sath,

-betim mujhe police ko mat do, main mar jaunga, maaf kar do,

kavita hath niche kar us buddhe ka lund pakad leti hai, aur upar niche hilati hai, aur wo buddha ka halat thoda sahi hota hai,

-chal tujhe main police se danda nahi khilwaungi, balki tere dande ko khaungi,

wo buddha chaunk jata hai, aur kisi putale ki tarah kavita ke madak sarir ke piche piche chal deta hai,

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train ke bathroom me sadia aur sunil maje se chudai ka anand le rahe the, aur train ki patrio ki uchal unke anand ko aur badha rahi thi,

-sunil bahut maja aa raha hai, aagle bad bina condom ke karenge,

-are meri rosogollo, ye le,

-hai mere UP ka saandh aur chod mujhe,

kavita bhi usi bathroom ke disha me laati hai jahan sadia aur sunil the, wo buddha batana chahta tha lekin wo chup raha, is baar koi rokane nahi aya kyuki guard khud siya hua tha, kavita band pade bathroom me kan laga ke sunane lagi, waha sapast chudai ka khel chal raha tha, aur kavita upar phank se jhak ke dekhati hai aur wo uska pati hi tha us sadia ke sath,

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sadia-sunil

kavita bhi bagal wale toilet me buddhe ke sath ghus jati hai, aur jaldi jaldi apne kapade utarane lagati hai, us buddhe ki kismat hi khul gayi thi, aur wo apna dhoti utha leta hai, lekin kavita use pura utarane ko bolati hai, aur wo buddha chut ka bhuka turant man jata hai,

-ye le baba, tera to sone ka sandook khul gaya,

-ha bitiya,

-sale buddhe bitiya bolke chodega, ha ha ha,

kavita samane jhuk jati hai, uska gaand us buddhe ke samane tha,

-kya dekh raha hai baba, chod apni bitiya ko,

wo buddha kavita ka kamar pakad leta hai, aur chalati hui train me haule se apna lund chut me daal deta hai, kavita ka aag ka bhaati ki tapan mehsoos karate hi buddhe ki halat kharab ho jati hai,

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us buddhe ke pair kanmp jate hain, aise aag ki bhatti to usne jawani me nahi jhela tha, aisa lag raha tha ki kavita ko 104 ki bukhar hai, aur wo buddha bina dhakke lagaye hi pani chodane laga,

-are baba kya ho gaya, dheela kyu pad gaya, baba jab sambhalane ki umar nahi to bhadka kyu rahe the,

-bitiya kitne saalon baad kiya hai, badast nahi ho raha hai,

-achcha,

-ha bitiya,

kavita piche ghum jati hai, aur us buddhe ka lund pakad leti hai,

-to baba ek baat batao, agar khada karun to chod paoge, mujhe pehale bata do, nahi to faltu ka mera time aur thuk waste hoga,

thuk sunate hi wo buddha samajh gaya, usme itna atmvisvas nahi tha ki wo jhel paye, lekin usne jindagi me apna lund kisi aurat ke muh me nahi daala tha,

-are bilkul bitiya, tum khada to karo, main tumhe ekdam saant kar dunga,

-hi hi hi hi,

kavita us buddhe ka lund muh me le leti hai, aur wo buddha jannat me pahunch jata hai, kavita pura lund ek bar me gatak leti hai, aur us buddhe ka gaand pakad aage piche karane lagati hai,

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-hai betu, aaaaah aaaaah eeeeeeh, beti muh nikalo phir nikal jayega,

-kya baba aap banate phirate hain sher, niklae chuhe, 1 min bhi muh nahi jhel paye,

wo buddha buri tarah hanf raha tha, aur kavita hanthon se muth mar ke us buddhe ko khalas kar deti hai, aur phir wo dono nikal jaate hain, kavita kaan laga ke sunati hai, sadia aur sunil abhi bhi jari the, aur wo jal bhun jati hai,

-sali mere haq ka mani pii rahi hai, madarjaat, saaaali, kavita jod se bathroom ka darwaja pitati hai, aur apne bearth pe chali jati hai,

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sunil aur sadia ka panchawa round chalu tha, aur sadia maje se chud rahi thi, tabhi darwaje pe jod se dastak hui aur wo dono ghabra gaye, sunil samay dekha lagbhag 3 bajane ko the, aur unka station 4 ko aata tha,

-are sadia, mera station aa raha hai, mugalsarai, ab hame band karana padega, aur ye kon hame disturb kar raha hai, sala guard ko paise dena bhi bekar hai,

pehale sunil phir kuch der me sadia wapas aa jate hain, aur sunil sab ko jaga deta hai, aur sab utarane ko tayyari karane lagate hain, kavita ka naak abhi bhi chadha hua tha, sadia bilkul gehari nind me thi, aur wo buddha bhi,

kuch der baad mughalsarai aa gaya aur yadav pariwar utar jata hai,

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raat ke lagbhag 4 baj rahe the, aur sunil faisala karata hai ki station pe raat guzarana safe hoga, aur kavita bhi maan jati hai, us waqt kafi labour station pe the, aur sare baithane ke jagah pe koi na koi so raha tha, sunil fir sidhe station inspector ke paas jata hai, aur unhe wo apne bade me batata hai to wo ek gadi ka intejaam usi waqt karwa deta hai, aur pura pariwar raat ke lagbhag 5 baje gaon pahunch jata hai, police ki jeep chaurahe pe utar wapas chali jati hai,

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yadav pariwar apne karm bhumi pe khada tha, lahlahati fashal ko dekha sunil ki ankhen chamak jati hai, charo aur prakriti se nahaya ye gaon sunil ki amkhein bhar deta hai, wahi uske bachche dusare hi duniya me khoye hue the, aur kavita andar se sunil se naraz thi, sunil pariwar ke sath ghar ki aur nikal jata hai,

raste me kafi si auratein soch karane nikali thi, aisa drisya ravi aur nikki ne nahi dekha tha, aur unke bagal se karib 10-12 auratein subah ki chanwa me guzari, nikki ko samajh me nahi aaya ki kya ho raha hai,

-papa ye auratein subah subah kaha jaa rahin hai,

ispe suni hansane lagata hai,

-beti ye nadi ke kinare subah subah soch karane jaa rahi hain,

-chee paa, ab bhi,

-ha ha ha ha, are hamare ghar pe sabkuch hai,

nikki ki nazare usi disha me thi jahan ve auratein gayi thi, aur uski nazar kuch ladako pe padi jo jhadiyo me chipe hue the, nikki ko samajh me to aa raha tha ki ye badmash ladake hain, lekin usne dhyaan se dekha ki kuch auratein thik un laadako ke samane apna kapada khol baith gayi, aur wo man me sochati hai, ye to jaan bujhkar wahin baithi hain,

-chee,

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sab log gaon ke ghar pahunch jaate hain, lagbhag sabhi log jag chuke the, aur sabhi shadi ke kamo me busy the, milan hona suru hua aur sabhi ka swagat satkar suru ho gaya, aur wo bhi nasta kar ghar ki baatein suru kar diye, nikki aur ravi ko bahut ajeeb sa lag raha tha, wo wahan se kafi kat se gaye the, aur unhe baat karane me bhi dikkat ho raha tha, ravi ka to dum ghut raha tha, kavita baki aunty bhabhi me vyast ho jati hai, aur sunil mardo me, nikki apne phone pe signal dekhati hai, 0, aur wo mayus ho kar baith jati hai, agar signal hota to wo apne boyfriend se baatein kar leti,

-nikki nikki,

-aayi mummy,

nikki apne mummy ke kehane pe pahunch jati hai,

-beti ravi kahan hai,

-mummy bahar baitha hua hai,

-achcha, beti inse milo ye tumhari ye tumhari behan hai, rupwati, ye hain rahati hain,

nikki apna nazar rupwati pe dalati hai, wo ek bilkul dehati ladaki thi,

-aap inke sath raho, main ravi ka kuch karati hun,

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nikki rupwati ke sath hi baithane lagi, un dono me kafi farak tha, ek taraf nikki collage me padhane wali sehari ladaki, aur dusare taraf gaon me rahane wali rupwati, suru suru un dono me jara bhi baatein nahi ho rahi thi, lekin dheere dheere un dono me dosti ho gayi, aur nikki ko rupwati ki bubbly harakat kafu cute laga, rupwati uske baad nikki se khul ke baatein karane lagi,

-didi aapko sehar me kitna achcha lagata hoga, yahan to gaon me kuch hai hi nahi,

-nahi rupa log jahan rahate hain wahin unhe sab pasand aata hai, mere papa ko to gaon kafi pasand hai,

-nahi nikki di, waise sahar kaisa hai, main kabhi nahi gayi, batao na di kya kya hota hai wahan, jo tv pe dikhate hain wo sahi hai,

-are tv pe to kuch bhi anap sanap dikhate hain, unhe sach man liya kar,

-achcha, didi ek baat batao, kya aapka koi khas dost hai,

-khas dost mai samjhi nahi,

-khas dost nikki di, kya bolate hain use, boyfrand,

nikki sarma jati hai, aur haa me sir hila deti hai,

-are wah di, abhi aapne kaha tv me sab galat dikhate hain, aur aapka khud hai,

-kya naam hai uska, bataiye na,

-uska naam hai, mohammad rizwan ahmed , wo mere hi collage ka ladaka hai,

-hai didi, momin, kitni modern hain aap didi, ekdam sahari,

-hat ladaki,

-aapne uske sath wo sab kiya didi,

-kya sab,

-are didi wahi, hihihi,

-hat pagali, tu to mere bare sab jaan li, pehale ye bata tera koi hai ki nahi,

-are mera to hai didi, yahi paas me rahata hai piche basti me, bahut pyar karata hai mujhe,

-haan,

-haan to kya, mujhse shadi karane ko bol raha tha,

-achcha shadi, kya naam hai uska, aur tumne kiya ki nahi, hi hi hi,

-hanso nahi didi, maine kuch nahi kiya, bus upar se thoda thoda, baki shadi ke baad,

-achcha upar upar se matlab kya,

-hai didi kya puch rahi ho, mujhe sarm aa rahi hai,

-bata na, agar tu batayegi to main bhi bataungi,

-achcha achcha, wo jyada kuch nahi di, thoda daba deta hai, bus,

rupwati apne mamme ke taraf ishara karate hue bolati hai, nikki ko is gaon ki ladaki ke samane kafi atmvisvas aa raha tha, aur wo aage bolane lagi,

-dekho rup, tum kisi ko batana nahi lekin main ne to apne boyfriend ke sath sab kar liya hai,

-hai dayya,

-dheere rup, sabko bata degi kya,

-nahi di, lekin lekin aapki to shadi bhi nahi hui ha, phir kaise, aapko darr nahi lagata hai,

-darr to lagata hai lekin main dhyaan rakhati hun, tum janati ho na, condoms,

-are baap re, di ye aap kya bol rahi hain,

-sahi bol rahi hun rup, sawdhani bahut jaruri hai,

-mera wala guddu bhi ek din laya tha, lekin ham to phek diye the, waise didi kaisa lagata hai karane me, wo,

nikki ko ab bahut maja aa raha tha rupwati se baat karane me use aisa lag raha tha jaise wo koi badi aurat ho jo kisi masoom bachchi ko sikha rahi ho,

-tumahara wala jab wahan dabata hai to kaisa lagta hai rup,

-bahut achcha lagata hai, didi,

nikki muska deti hai,

-to mujhe bhi waise hi bahut achcha lagata hai,

nikki aur rupwati ki dosti gehari hone lagi aur sath sath ghar ka kaam aur batein karate rahi, rupwati ko nikki ke riste ke bade me aur janana tha,

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kavita ghar me shadi ki tayyari me kafi vyst thi, aur sunil bhi, in sab ke bich me sabse jyda bore ho raha tha ravi, jo muh phula ke din baitha rahta, kavita ne use ghar ke kai logo se milwaya lekin wo kisi se baat nahi kar raha tha, aur kavita bhi pareshan ho kar ravi ko chor kam pe dhyaan dene lagi,

ravi phir bahar ko nikal jata hai uske papa ke kahane pe, lekin use gaon se nafrat tha, yaha na light tha, na internet aur na mobile, ravi aise hi ghumate ghumate waha se baithak ke paas pahunch jata hai, wahan pe karib 5-6 ladake baith kar tash khel rahe the,

-gawar sale,

ravi man me bolata hai,

-are ravi bhaiyya aap ayeye yahan,

ravi ko unme se ek ladaka pukarata hai,

-are aap hamko pachane nahi, hum hain guddu,

ravi is ladake ko bilkul nahi janata tha,

-are hum aapke apke ghar ke zamin pe kaam karate hain, aayeye idhar, aap sahar ke ladake yahan gaon me bahut boriyat ho rahi hogi,

-ha ye to hai, yahan kuch nahi, bilkul bekar pada hua hun,

un ladako ye paas ravi chala jata hai, aur unme baton ka daur suru ho jata hai, wo aapas me bhi baat kar rahe the,

-dekha subah johari ke maye, kitna gaand matka ke chale rahi, man kiya ki sali ke wahin pakad lehu,

-kya guddedar gaand rahi sali ke,

-tu ka kahat bare log, dekhat nahi mehman aail hetu,

guddu un sab ko sant karata hai,

-are ganwar hain, inki bataon pe dhyaan mat dijiye ga ravi babu,

-achcha,

ravi in sab baton ko janata to tha, lekin wo kuch jyada hi sakth launda tha,

-to ravi babu kab tak gaon me rahana hai,

-chacha ji ke shadi tak yahi rahna hai,

-are aapko pata hai manoranjan me kya intejaam hua hai, aslampur se shabnam orchestra walon ko bulaya gaya hai, bada maja ayega,

-ha ravi bhaiyya, waise aap to sahar ke bade log ho, apke to aur maje hain, lekin gaon dehat me ye mandali kafi prashidh hai,

ravi samajh nahi paya ki akhir kis cheez ke bade me baat ho raha hai, aur naa use baat karani thi in dehatio se,

-achcha main chalta hun, kya naam bataya tumne,

-guddu,

wahan se ravi wapas chal diya, aur jaise hi ravi waha se gaya, baat ravi ki maa kavita pe chali gayi,

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-aur bataiye naa didi, mada maza aa raha hai,

rupmati apne hatheliyon se apne chut ko halka halka cheepa ke khujla rahi thi, aur nikki apne boyfriend ke kisse namak mirch laga ke suna rahi thi,

-thik hai main batati hun,

-bataiye na didi, koi bahut sexy story,

-achcha, pichale semester hamare collage me shimla ki outing thi, aur main aur mohammad usme gaye hue the, lekin humlogo ko boys aur girls me separate kar diya gaya tha, aur hum mil nahi paa rahe the, to phir mohammad ne mujhe raat ek baje apne hostel kamare me bulaya, bahut darr lag raha tha, lekin mai wahan chali gayi, lekin andar sare ladake soye hue the, mohammad mujhe apne sath chhat pe mujhe le gaya, wahan shimla me thandi hawa me rooh kanmp gaya, waha mohammad ne bistar bana ke rakha hua tha jispe mujhe patak diya aur mere muh me apna lund daal diya,

-hai didi, aur apne kuch nahi bola,

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-main kyu bolati mujhe to bada maja aa raha tha, bada berahmi se mere muh me apna lund daal raha tha, haaaaaaaaai, phir wo mujhe patak diya aur apna ang mere ang me daalane laga, hai rup kya batau kitna maja aa raha tha,

-hai didi,

-uske baad mohammad mere upar chadh gaya, aur mere sarir ko raundane laga, har dhakke ke baad mera halat kharab ho raha tha, aru wo mere me apna doodh daal diya,

-hai daiyya, nikki di,

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-main bistar pe pair failai leti rahi, aur mere chut se gehara mani behane laga, lekin isbar maine mohammad ka lund pakad ke apne muh me dal kar chusane lagi,

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-hai hai hai, aap khud,

-haa rup, jab tera boyfriend banega to tujhe bhi khus rakhane ke liye karana padega,

-lekin mera boy frand to hai pehale se,

-ha ha ha, sehar me hoti to karati tu bhi, uske baad maine mohammad ka lund chus chus ke mani apne muh me nikal diya, aur jaldi se pii gayi,

-chee didi, aap uska mail pi gayi, aapko ganda nahi laga, chee chee,

-nahi re, bada maza aata hai, aur upar se mohammad ye dekh janwar ho jata hai, usne mujhe uske baad do bar aur choda,

-hai didi, eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah,

rupwati apna hath apne chut pe chalate chalate apne ant pe pahunch gayi aur jhadane lagi, nikki ki bhi halat kharab thi, use ahmed bahut yad aa raha tha, lekin wo apne aap ko sambhal sone ko chali jati hai,

nikki akhir beti to apne maa ki hi thi,

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agle din-

nikki ko apne abdul ki yaad sata rahi thi, aur dusare taraf rupmati ko usne andar se aag laga di thi, sunila pichale din bhar kam me bitaya tha, aur phir raat bhar apne chahete mami ke bur me, sunil ko jawani ka pehala kaam usi ne sikhaya tha aur sunil ab bhi uska diwana tha,

-ragini mami kya hal hai tumhara,

-achcha hi sunil, tum kaise ho,

-main achcha hoon mami,

sunil apna patloon kholane lagata hai, ragini mami samajh jati hai ki sunil kya chahta hai, aur wo apna sari kholane lagati hai,

-sunil ab to tu 2 bachcho ka baap ho gaya hai, aur main adher, phir bhi tu mujhe chahta hai,

-are mami, aap kya bol rahi hain, aapko main kabhi kam nahi chahunga,

sunil ragini ka pair faila uske chut pe apna lund laga deta hai,

-aaram se dalna sunil kafi dino se kiya nahi hai,

-meri mami aap chinta mat karo, main pyar se hi karunga,

sunil apne mami ke bur me apna aujar sarka deta hai,

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har koi jeewan me koi na koi aisa hota hai jise wo yaad rakhta hai apne dil ke sandook me, sunil ki wo khas uski mami thi, jis se wo kai saalo me ek do bar hi mil pata tha,

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kavita ka ab dimag kharab ho raha tha, pichale pure raat wo sunil ka intejaar karate rahi aur wo nahi aya, use laga ki wo mard logo ke sath so gaye hain, use mami ke bare me jara bhi bhanak nahi tha, nahi to wo bahut bada hangama khada kar deti,

kavita achche se chudana chahti thi, use apne chut ko thoda thanda karana tha, lekin is chote se gaon me wo koi risk nahi lena chahti thi,

wahin dusari taraf nikki aur rupwati dubara sath me kam karane lage, rup aur nikki ke bare me janana chahti thi, khaskar sex ke bare me, wo pichale raat itna garam ho gayi thi ki,

-nikki di, kuch aur sunao na,kal bahut maja aa raha tha,

-abhi nahi rup, sam ko sunaungi,

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ravi ka abhi bhi mood kharab tha, aur chup chap ghar me din raat baitha rahta, uski maa savita use pichale raat bhi samjhaya ki waha ke logo se batein kare, dost banaye, lekin ravi kavita ki bilkul baat sahi sun raha tha, ispe kavita gussa ho gayi, aur wahi per kaam kar rahe guddu ke sath kam karane ko dantate hue bol diya,

ab ravi din bhar guddu ke sath uske kam me halka fulka hath batane laga, shadi me bahut sari tayyariyan karani thi, ravi ko guddu bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha, aur guddu ko ravi,

-ravi bhaiyya aap to sahar me rahate hain, aapki koi girlfriend hai kya,

-nahi hai,

-kya bhaiyya aap itne paise wale ho paki to har anguli pe ek honi chahiye, mere jaisa gareeb ki ek ho sakti hai to,

ravi ko thoda sa interest aata hai,

-matlab, kon hai wo,

-are hai ek isi gaon ki, lekin bahut nakhra karati hai, chut dene ka naam hi nahi leti hai, shadi shadi karate rahati hai,

-to kar lo shadi,

-kar lunga ravi bhaiyya, lekin kuch dino baad, waise aapko ek baat batau, gaon ke apne hi maje hain,

ravi ko samajh nahi aaya ki guddu kya bolana chahta hai,

-chalo aapko maje karwata hun ravi bhaiyya,

guddu ravi ko apne sath bagal ke gaon khanpur le jata hai, aur yahan pe kheto ke kagar pe kuch aurat kam kar rahin thi,

-bhaiyya apke paas 50 rupye hain,

-han sayad hai,

-mujhe dijiye main aapko maje karata hun,

-50 rupe me,

-haan 50 me,

guddu us paise ko le un auraton ke paas jata hai, aur kuch der me ravi ko ishara deta hai, aur ravi pahunch jata hai, unke bagal me ek aurat bhi khadi thi,

-chalo bhaiyya,

aur wo teeno ek jhadi me pahunch jaate hain, ravi ka dil dhak dhak kar raha tha,

-aap mehman ho aap pehale karo, main pahredari karata hun,

ravi us aurat ke sath jhadio me tha, use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, wo nadan tha, wahi wo aurat ravi ke kuch karane ko intejaar kar rahi thi, use bhi samajh aa jata hai ki ye naushikiya hai,

-tumne pehale nahi kiya hai,

ravi kuch nahi bolata, aur wo aurat jaldi se ravi ka pant utarane ki kosis karati hai,

-kya kar rahi hai, choro mujhe,

-are sab karana hai to karo, kyu mera time kharab kar rahe ho, khet pe bhi kaam hai mera,

ravi apna zip kholata hai, uska lund pe us aurat ka nazar jata hai, aur wo phir apna hath aage badhati hai, aur wo let jati hai,

-babu karana hai na,

-haa,

wo ladaki ravi ke lund ko apne chut se sata deti hai, aur ravi ek haule se dhakka de deta hai, is gaon se jisse ravi ko nafrat tha, usi ke khet me baith ek anjaan aurat ko chod raha tha, ab use gaon utna bhi kharab nahi lag raha tha,

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ravi apne pehale bar me kuch der me hi jhad jata hai, aur uske baad us aurat ko guddu chodata hai,

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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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