Romance Izhaar - a - Mohabbat ( sab & bad Love story ) ~ Completed

[aalu]

sala yeh ek tarfa pyar bhi ajeeb hain... koi bhi jhandu kisi bhi maal ko le kar kitne sapne bunna shuru kar deta hain... bewi, bachha,,, pota poti... ankh khuli aur sach samne... wo kisi aur ke haath thame jaa rahi hain... aur yeh sapne mein uske saath budhe ho ke bhi aa gaye...
..
..
launda family friend bhi hain aur saath mein itna close kee akshara ke saath aata jata hain har roj... bechara chhokri gayee aur naukri bhi... lekin dard de ke bhi jhutiye ko malham mil gaya.. batao kya impression rah gaya ek bike nahin uth raha tha...
*****
singlepanti kee had dekho ab larko kee naam jap raha hain akshara ke naam jitni baar leta hain utni hi baar aarya ke bhi naam yaad karta hain... pata nahin akshara mile na mile iisse aarya se pyar na ho jaye...

ab uthne ke baad jaise ghur raha tha toh do chaar gaaliyan toh banti hain...

 

[Naik]

Update .....5 ....good & bad movements


Ghar par aaj mera bilkul bhi Mann nhi lag rha tha , bar bar dimag me vhi collage vala seen chal rha tha jisme Aksha us ladke se gale mil rhi thi ... Shivam ke dvara kahi gai bate mere kann ke parde fadd rhi thi .... Me jab se ghar aya tab se sone ke koshish kar rha tha taki ajj Jo bhi mene dekha or suna usko apne Mann mastishk se nikal sku , bs yhi ek matr jariya tha jo mujhe sukoon de ske par annginat bar koshish karne ke bad bhi nind nhi aii
Bs edher udher tehelta rha


Evening time Vedant mujhse milne Aya par mene sard dard ka bahana bnaya or use kal bat karne ko bolkar vapish bhej diya
( do dino se bhaiya apne sasural gye hue the kyoki kuch dino se baby ki tabiyat kharab ho gai , esliye usne kuch din vhi rehne ka vichar Kiya , me bhi baby se milna chahta tha par bhaiya ne ye kehkar mna kar diya ki jab vo vapas Ghar ayenge tab vo baby ko sath lekar ayenge )


Next day me bujhe Mann se job par gya par vha bhi me sahi dhang se kamm nhi kar pa rha tha esliye half day leave lekar ghar chla Aya .... Nind ki Kami se ankhe bojil hone lgi thi esliye jaise me bed par leta vaise hi andh lag gai or me nind ki badiyo me kho gya , jaha par mere or Aksha ke alava koi nhi tha , jaha hum dono ek dusre ke hatho me hath dal ka sunsan sadak par pyar bhri bate karte hue chalte ja rhe tha jaha hanare safar ka na to aadi tha na ant , tha to sirf or sirf viran rasto me ek khubsurat ahesas


Sham ke 4:30 pm par meri nind phone ke ring hone se khuli , mere anuman ke mutabik call Vedant ka hi tha .... Phone pick karte hi uska first sentence yhi tha

" lawde kaha mar gya bus stand nhi chalna kya , kahi aisa na ho ki vha bus stand par bhi teri mehbooba ke ek do ashiq or khde ho or vo humare puchne se pehle hi Teri jane jahan ko uda le jaye ” mene Vedant ki bat ka ek simple sa jabab diya ki aaj kuch jaruri kamm hai esliye nhi ja sakta .... Vedant meri rag rag se vakif tha , use pta tha ki mujhe koi jaruri kamm nhi hai or mere dvara bahana banane ka karan kya hai .... Usne jyada mujhe kuch nhi kaha or phone cut kar diya

*
*
*
Abhi me apne bed par lete hue Aksha ki pics Jo 7 din pehle Vedant ne mujhe send ki thi ....usme adhiktar pics Aksha ke collage ki thi jisme Aksha apni seheliyo ke sath , teachers ke sath to kuch singhal pics thi ...sayad hi koi aisi pics thi jisme uska muskurata hua masoom chehra na ho , janleva muskurahat mano use virasat me milo ho .... Me har pics me Aksha ke sath khud ki imagine karne lga , imagine se hi mera rom rom khil utha aisa me akshar karta rehta jisse mujhe ashim anand ki anubhuti hoti .


Karib 25 dino se mene Aksha ko nhi dekha tha or na hi ek bar bus stand par chai ke thele par gya , ab es tanha zindagi me mera bs ek hi shahara tha vo tha mere pass Aksha ki tasveere jise me har din har rat akelepan me dekha karta or uske sath khud ko imagine karke hasin sapno me kho jata


Par jab bhi mere jaddo jehen me Aksha ke sath vo anjan ladka ata , dil me mano nukili churriya chal jati ..... Me en Dino Akela ghutt ghutt ke jee rha rha tha ya kehlo mar rha tha .

Me Etna well educated samjhdar hokar bhi etni bdi murkhta kiye ja rha tha , sirf us ladki ke liye jisse mene kabhi bat hi nhi ki thi sirf us din ko chhodkar jis din me or Vedant kabbaddi pratiyogita me bhag lele ke liye gye the jaha par Pani pite vakt Aksha apni seheliyo ke sath aii tha , us time mene muskil se 10 seconds kuch bola tha , Jo bhi bola uska bhi mujhe koi javab nhi mila , pyar me pagal kaise hote hai ye sirf suna tha ,ab ye pagalpan me kar rha tha , mujhe ye acche se pta hai ki me jo bhi kar rha hu vo meri murkhta ko darshata hai . I don't know ki mera nashib badalega ya fir jaisa hai vaisa hi rehega ?


Kabhi kabhi mujhe khudd par doubt hota hai ki me pyar na karke sirf or sirf pagalpanti kar rha hu ...Ek ladki ke chakkar me khudd ki life ko barbad kar rha hu ... Mujhe Vedant or Varun ne kai bar kha ki ya to me Aksha se apne dil ki bat keh du ya fir use bhul jau , par mene uski ek bat bhi nhi mani .


es bich mujhe ek bat pta chli vo ye thi ki 2 din pehle Vedant ne Shivam se us ladke ka bio data nikala jisse hume ye pta chla ki vo ladka Aksha ke nanihal se tha or vha par uska school friend tha or to us ladke or Aksha ke family vale ek family friends the .

Us ladke ka name ARYA tha or to or vo ladka ajkal Aksha ke ghar uske sath hi ata hai vo bhi bike par .... Es news ne meri tadab me char Chand lagane ka kamm Kiya ...mere mann me na jane kitne bar ye khayal Aya ki me us dai-chodd Arya ko kahi ekela dekh narklok bhej du ya use apahij bna du , yha tak ki mere mann me ye khayal bhi Aya ki me uske chehre par acid dal du jisse uska chehra jall jaye or Aksha ko uske chehre se nafrat ho jaye na jane kitne aise hi bematlab ke khayal me banata rehta


Par kehte hai na har din ek sa nhi rehta . badalte time ke sath halat , jajbat sab kuch badal jata hai usi trah meri life me bhi parivartan Aya vo ye tha ki aaj mujhe job se nikal diya gya kyoki karib 2 month se apna target pura nhi kar paya ... Meri kamm me ekagrta ki kami se bina documents check kiye do farzi logo ko loan de diya or vo log loan leke kahi raffu chakkar ho gye Jo address unhone mujhe diya vo farzi tha ....


Khair me apna region letter leke Ghar aa rha . Meri aaj job chutt gaii thi jiska mujhe dukh hona chahiye tha but mujhe koi fark nhi pad rha tha , me abhi bike chalate time Aksha ke bare me yhi soccha rha tha ki me aisa kya kru jisse Aksha meri zindagi me aa jaye ? me kaise us dai-chodd Arya ko Aksha ki zindagi se dur kru ? Kash aisa ho jaye ki Aksha mere dil ke jajbat samjh jaye ?


yhi sab sochta hua me Bina dyan diye bike chala rha , mera dhyan tab tuta jab meri ke samne bakriyo ka jhunnd aa gya ,me khudd ka sambhal pata tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi yani bakriyo ko bachane ke chakkar me mene bike ko kuch jyada hi turn kar diya jisse bakriya to bacch gaii par me nhi bch paya or meri bike vhi sadak kinare sleep hokar gir gai .

Meri kismat Achi thi ki jaha me gira vo ke kcha rasta tha or ajj barish bhi hui thi esliye rasta gila tha jisse mujhe jyada chott nhi lgi par mera pair bike niche aa gya jise mene khichne ka prayass bhi kiya par mujhse ho nhi pa rha tha ... Mere chehre par dard ke expression saff jhalak rha tha .. mene edher udher najar bhi doudai par vha aaspass mujhe koi najar nhi aa rha tha ...meri right hand ki hatheli bhi kafi chill gaii thi or usme blood bhi nikal rha tha jiske karan me jor lagakar bike ko hta bhi nhi pa rha tha



Fir ek miracle hua vo bhi bahut bda vala ....jab me apna pair nikalne ki koshish kar rha tha usi time mere pass ek scooty akar ruki jis par Aksha or ek ladki bethi hue thi ... Me to ekpal hypnotise ho gya , vo dono jakdi se mere pass aai or Bina Kuch bole apne najuk hatho se bike ko uper uthane lgi or usme vo safal bhi ho gai .

me ab bhi ektak Aksha ko dekhe ja rha tha jo uske sath vali ladke ke sath bike ki stang lga rhi thi ...lambe gane bal uske ek side chehre ko dhake hue the jisse mujhe uska chehra nhi dikhai de rha tha , kuch der pehle Jo me dard se behal tha ab na jane vo dard kaha gayab ho gya

Pyar m pagal ashiq aise haath m hath dhare bethne se kuch hasil nahi hoga kuch haath pair bhi chalao pata karo us ladke k baare m kon h kia rishta h Aksha se
Tow ladke ka aryan or woh family friend h isliye aisa chipak raha h are or kuch pata karo nahi pata chale friend boy friend na ban jaye or tum apne samne uski doli jate huwe dekho
Rahi sahi yeh kaser bhi poori ho gayi Job bhi chali gayi wapas aate huwe inta kho gaye Aksha ki yado m accident ker lia or kismat dekho wahi bachane aaya jisse pyar kerta h banda or banda tow poora statue bana huwa h
Dekhte h kia hota h aage
Khoobsurat update bhai

 

[Kingfisher]

sala yeh ek tarfa pyar bhi ajeeb hain... koi bhi jhandu kisi bhi maal ko le kar kitne sapne bunna shuru kar deta hain... bewi, bachha,,, pota poti... ankh khuli aur sach samne... wo kisi aur ke haath thame jaa rahi hain... aur yeh sapne mein uske saath budhe ho ke bhi aa gaye...
..
..
launda family friend bhi hain aur saath mein itna close kee akshara ke saath aata jata hain har roj... bechara chhokri gayee aur naukri bhi... lekin dard de ke bhi jhutiye ko malham mil gaya.. batao kya impression rah gaya ek bike nahin uth raha tha...
*****
singlepanti kee had dekho ab larko kee naam jap raha hain akshara ke naam jitni baar leta hain utni hi baar aarya ke bhi naam yaad karta hain... pata nahin akshara mile na mile iisse aarya se pyar na ho jaye...

ab uthne ke baad jaise ghur raha tha toh do chaar gaaliyan toh banti hain...

Bahut bahut sukriya aalu bhai apni pratikriya ke liye

Ye pyar Dhruva ko taklif ke Siva kuch nhi dega ...jiska Karan bhi khudd hi hai ..lounda apne dil ki bat bta nhi Sakta

Aise hi es nachij ki choti si kahani ke chote chote update padte rahiye ...

 

[Kingfisher]

Pyar m pagal ashiq aise haath m hath dhare bethne se kuch hasil nahi hoga kuch haath pair bhi chalao pata karo us ladke k baare m kon h kia rishta h Aksha se
Tow ladke ka aryan or woh family friend h isliye aisa chipak raha h are or kuch pata karo nahi pata chale friend boy friend na ban jaye or tum apne samne uski doli jate huwe dekho
Rahi sahi yeh kaser bhi poori ho gayi Job bhi chali gayi wapas aate huwe inta kho gaye Aksha ki yado m accident ker lia or kismat dekho wahi bachane aaya jisse pyar kerta h banda or banda tow poora statue bana huwa h
Dekhte h kia hota h aage
Khoobsurat update bhai

Bahut bahut shukriya Naik Bhai es behtrin pratikriya ke liye

Fattu hai Dhruva ... Dekhte hai vo himmat karke apne dil ki bat Aksha se keh pata hai ya nhi

Bs aap esi trah Jude rahiye

 

[Kingfisher]

Update ....6 ....dream become reality



me ab bhi ektak Aksha ko dekhe ja rha tha jo uske sath vali ladke ke sath bike ki stang lga rhi thi ...lambe gane bal uske ek side chehre ko dhake hue the jisse mujhe uska chehra nhi dikhai de rha tha , kuch der pehle Jo me dard se behal tha ab na jane vo dard kaha gayab ho gya


ABB AGGE ....



“ App thik to hai na , apko jyada chott to nhi lagi ? ” ....mujhe Aksha ki awaj sunai nhi Di , me to uske pankhudi jaise gulabi honthon ko hilte hue dekhe ja rha tha



“ Ssshhh apko to bahut jyada chhot lgi gai ...ohh god Kitna blood Nikal rha hai ” ... vo mere pair ke pass bethte hue boli ....or Usne kampte hatho se mere pair ke anghuthe ko pass chua jaha par chhot lgi thi ...


Mene bhi jab ek najar apne pair par dali to Mann hi kann god ko thanks bolne lga , kyoki mere anumaan ke mutabik bahut kamm chott lgi ... Mene to socha tha ki me zindagi bhar apahij na ho jau but aisa kuch nhi hua bs thoda sa blood Nikal gya tha sayad bike ke dabav se jamin se kankad ghuss gya tha ... Aksha ki dost or Aksha ne mujhe sahara dekar road ke side me ek choti cement ki deewar par leja ke betha diya ... Me bdi muskil se langda kar vha tak pahuncha tha sayad mashpeshiyon me khinchav aa gya tha



“ Thank you ... Thank you very much meri madad karne ke liye ” ... Jab me Aram se deewar par beth gya tab himatt juta kar dono ka shukriya adda Kiya


“ Are Esme thanks ki kya bat hai ! Humne vhi Kiya jo hamare alava koi dusra hota to vo bhi apki madad karta & Thank god ki apko jyada chot nhi lgi , dur se apko gira dekh hum to dar hi gye the ... apko dekh kar bike chalani chahiye thi ” .... Aksha ki dost mere kandhe par lgi gili mitti ko ek hath se saf karte hue boli ... Me dusri side bethi Aksha ki or dekha jo mujhe hi Dekh rhi thi ..mere dvara yu Achanak dekhne se usne apni najar ghuma kar samne dekhne lgi



“ Ha par agar aap dono ki jagah agar koi or hota to me unhe bhi thanks bolta ” ... Aksha par se apni najar hta kar hath ko kohni par lgi mitthi ko saf karte hue me bola


“ Apne bataya nhi aap kaise gire ? ” ... Apne dono hatho ki ungaliyon ko apas me milate kar mere pair ki chhot ki or dekhte hue boli ... Mene ek najar fir uske dekha ... Apne moti jaise danton se nichle honth ko kurede ja rhi thi , aisa karte hue vo bdi pyari lag rhi thi Mann to Kiya use apni banho me samet lo or bolu ki ... “ tumhare hi khayalon me khoya tha or Etna kho gya ki apne vartmann se dhyan hatkar future me chla gya ”



“ Actually mere samne achanak bakriya aa gaii thi or baris ki vajah se mutti bhi chikni thi esliye bike fisal gaii ... app chintit na hoiye , mujhe kuch nhi hua , I’m fine ” ... Me apne mitti se sni hatheli ko divar se saf karte hue bola



“ Acha ye sab chodiye or hamare sath hospital chaliye ... Agar ghav par marham patti nhi ki gaii to ye gavv apko jyada din tak taklif dega ”... meri dekha dekhi Aksha ki friend bhi apni hatheli divar par ragadte hue boli ... Uski bat par Aksha ne bhi hami bhri



“ App dono mere liye etni taklif Matt uthaiye , aye din aisi choti moti chote to lagti hi rehti hai ... Mere ghar me detol or first ed box hai usse marhamm patti kar lunga ... App dono me meri etni help ki uske liye me apka shukragujar hu or rahunga ” ... Etna bol kar Aram se apne pair jamin par rkhkar vha se Jane lga , kyonki meri himmat nhi ho rhi thi Aksha ke sath bethne ki usse bat karne ki esliye me jitna jaldi ho utna jaldi me vha se chle jana chahta tha



Me abhi kuch hi kadam langdate hue gya tha ki piche se mere kandhe par hath mehsus hua or jab mene mudakar dekha to vo Aksha thi , jo minnat bhri najar se mujhe dekhne lgi


“ mujhe nhi lagta ki app svayam bike chla kar ghar chle jayenge ” .... Kuch der ruk kar fir boli .... “ agar apko koi aitraaz na ho to me apko apke ghar chhod sakti hu ” ... Mujhe to ab bhi yakin nhi ho rha tha ki kuch der pehle or ab jo ho rha hai vo hakikat hai ya hamesha ki trah ek sapna jisme Aksha mere sath hoti thi jaise abhi hai .



Mujhe kuch na bolta dekha Aksha apni friend ke kann me kuch boli or mera hath pakad apki scooty ke pass le gaii or meri bike ki chabi nikal kar mujhe de di or scooty start kar mujhe picche bethne ko kaha ... Me bhi jyada vakt Jaya na karte hue uske piche peth gya ... Kuch der bad mere bataye hue raste par usne scooty mere ghar ke bahar rok do or mujhe sahara dekar ghar ke ander le gaii



Mera ghar ek normal ghar tha jaisa amtour par gaon me hota hai par Aksha use aise dekhne lgi Jaise vo koi fort ho ... Me dhire dhire chalte hue mere room me chla gya or mere sath Aksha bhi ander aa gaii ...uski najar bar bar edher udher ghum rhi thi



“ Tumhare ghar me or koun koun hai ? Koi najar nhi aa rha hai ? Kahi bahar gye hue honge sayad ” ... Khud hi mujhse swal puch khudd hu uska answer de diya ...pagal ladki .


“ nhi ”... Meri es na se Aksha meri taraf dekhne lgi


“ nhi matalab ? ” usne swalaliya najro se mujhe pucha


“ Me es ghar me akela rehta hu , mere alava mere ek bde bhaiya or meri ek chhoti bhatiji rehte hai , par kuch dino se bhaiya unke shasural gye hue hai baby se milne ... Vo actually baby vhi rehti hai so unse hi milne gye ” ...



“ to fir tumhare mummy papa ? Vo tumhare sath nhi rehte ? Or tumhari bhatiji hai to off course bhabhi bhi hogi to apne unka jikr kyo nhi kiya bhla ” ... Aksha ye sab bolkar mere pass hi bed par mere bagal me Beth gaii or mujhe hi dekhne lgi apne swalo ka javab janne ke liye



“ Vo Aksha ji mere mom dad or bhabhi ab es duniya me nhi rhe ... Ek hadse me dad or bhabhi gujar gye or kuch din pehle mom ka bhi heart attack Se swargvash ho gya ” ... Aksha ko ye bat kehte hue mujhe kitni taklif hue ye me hi janta hu ... Meri bat se Aksha ke chehre par dard or mere liye hamdardi saff jhalak rhi thi



“ Bhagvan ne tumhare sath bahut anyay kiya Dhruva . Me apne . Mom dad ke bina ek pal bhi nhi reh sakti or tumhare mom dad ! Ammm sorry mere dvara tumhe taklif hui , mujhe ye sab nhi puchna Chahiye tha ”... Aksha mere chehre par jhalak rhi udashi ko dekhakar uska Karan khudko hi manne lgi ... pagal ladki .



“ Are app aisa mat kahiye , jo hona tha vo ho chuka hai , accha ye sab chhodiye app yhi bethiye me apke liye pani lekar ata hu ” mere uthne se pehle hi usne mera hath pakad liya or Bethe rehne ka eshara Kiya me bhi chupchap vapas Beth gya



“ meri friend vha Akeli hai so mujhe ab jana hoga , me yha or rukna chahti to par majboori hai haa kall me pakka vapas aungi .... Or ha app jaldi se dva marhamm patti kar lijiyega or apne kisi najdiki se bol dijiyega ki apki bike leke aa jaye , kahi aap vapas mat chale jaiyega ! ” Etna bol kar Aksha vha se chli gaii .


Aksha ke jane ke bad mene jaldi se Varun ko call kiya or bike lane ko bol diya , me Vedant ko call karta but vo kuch dino se apne mama ke vha gya tha tha sayad kuch jaruri kamm ho ... Na usne mujhe bataya or na hi mene pucha .


Marham patti karte vakt me kuch der pehle hue incident ke bare me sochne lga ... Mere liye Vishwash Karna thoda muskil tha sayad bahut muskil tha kyoki jis ladki ka ek bar didar karne ke liye me paglo ki tarah har rojj bus stand jata tha ajj vo etne vakt mere sath rhi , mujhse bat ki , mujhe chua or meri madad ki .... Mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha ki me es khushi ka IJHAR kis trahh kru ... Mera Mann jhumne , nachne ko kar rha tha , ek bar to khayal Aya ki ghar ki chatt par Jake Aksha ka name jor jor se chilau Etna jor se chillau ke meri awaj Aksha bhi sunn ske ki uska deewan use pukar rha hai .



Sabse jyada tajjub to mujhe khudd par ho rha ki me usse Etni bate kar kaise li vo bhi bina hichkichahat ke ... Mere to uske dekhne se pasine chuut jate the par aaj jo bhi hua us par yakin Karna thoda muskil tha ki jis ladki ke piche me pichle ek sal se pagal hue ja rha hu usne aaj mujhse bate ki , mere ghar par mere room tak aaii .... Mera rom rom ye sochkar khda ho gya ki kal Aksha vapas mere pass ayegi ... jo pichle ek sal se nhi hua vo aaj hua balki kuch der pehle hua



Na jane kyo par Kal ki sochhkar mera dil gabrane lga ki aaj to mene usse kisi trah bat kar li par kal agar vo yha aai to me usse kaise bat karunga ? Kahi mere muhh se ulta sulta na nikal jaye jisse use Bura lge ? Kya me kal yha se chla jau jisse mujhe Aksha ko faise na karna pade !! Kya pta vo kal aye hi na ? .....yhi sab me bed par leta leta befijul sochne lga ....sochte sochte achanak me bed par Beth gya



“ OMG ! AKSHA ne ek bar Mera name liya ! Eska matlab vo mujhe janti hai ? Ha ... tabhi to usne mera name liya ...kahi vo bhi to mujhse pyar nhi karti ? Ohhh God kuch samajh nhi aa rha ....heeyy bhagvan mejhe mera pyar dila dena eske alava me apse kuch nhi manguga , apni Jann se bhi jyada pyar karta hu usse ...agar vo na mili to mera vajud hi na rehega ” me mann hi mann socha hi rha tha ki bahar bike ki awaj sunai di , sayad Varun bike leke aa gya tha .




To be countinue ....

 

[Naik]

Yeh achcha huwa ziada chot nahi lagi or jo sabse achcha huwa woh Aksha ko apni scooty ae gher tak chodne aayi or Dhuruv n itne dair tak usse baat ki lekin yeh sochne baith gaya kal jab woh aayegi tab m kaise use face karunga
Are mard bano or mauka bhi rehega badhiya apna dil khol ker saamne rakh dena Aksha ke ki dekho Aksha m tumse kita payer kerta hu ulta seedha sochne ka nahi
Himmate marda madde khuda
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen lovely shaandaar update bhai

 

[Death Kiñg]

Izhar – a – Mohabbat, kahani ke naam se hi pata chal jaata hai ke Kahani mein Mohabbat to hogi par locha hoga uska izhaar karne mein...

Maine aksar dekha hai ke sahi samay par apne Pyaar ka izhaar na karne par takleef aur dard ke siwa kuchh nahi milta... Arre yaar kam se kam izhaar to karo, zyada se zyada reject hi ho jaaoge, par kya pata accept kar liye jaao... Agar rejection milti hai to uska utna dukh nahi hota jitna ke izhaar na kar paane ke baad hota hai....

Dhruv ka bhi yahi chakkar hai... Aksha ko uss ladke ke saath dekh kar apne aap hi andaaze lagane lag gaya... Jabki wo family friend tha.... Dhruv ke character se ab tak yahi lagta hai ke Iss se naa ho paayega...

Haan ek soorat mein iska ishq bhi rang laa sakta hai. Agar Vedant sacha mitr bankar bichauliya ban jaaye....

Par thread ke naam (sad and bad love story) se to yahi lagta hai ke dukhon ke samandar mein kashti behne waali hai iski.... Dhruv ke liye chand lines...

Izhar tu kar deta,
To wo tujhe tanha naa karti.
Tu waqt par Ikraar karta,
to wo kisi aur ko kubool naa karti.

Waise jo pehle update mein pahadi par baithne waala scene tha wo shayad future ka nazrana tha... Aur usse padhkar laga ke Dhruv shayad sach mein bahot der kar gaya...

Aarzoo to hai ke IZHAAR A MOHABBAT kiya jaaye...
lekin kya karen,
Jazbaat to hain par ye Alfaaz kahaan se laayen...

Outstanding writing bhai... Waise to sad love stories padhne se meri bahut phat ti hai par aapki iss kahani ko padhne se khud ko rok nahi paaya.... Amazing just amazing....

 

[Kingfisher]

Yeh achcha huwa ziada chot nahi lagi or jo sabse achcha huwa woh Aksha ko apni scooty ae gher tak chodne aayi or Dhuruv n itne dair tak usse baat ki lekin yeh sochne baith gaya kal jab woh aayegi tab m kaise use face karunga
Are mard bano or mauka bhi rehega badhiya apna dil khol ker saamne rakh dena Aksha ke ki dekho Aksha m tumse kita payer kerta hu ulta seedha sochne ka nahi
Himmate marda madde khuda
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen lovely shaandaar update bhai

Bahut bahut shukriya Naik Bhai

Dhruva thoda antarmukhi hai ... Dhruva jaise ladke ke liye apne pyar IJHAR karna muskil hoga ... Actually me ye kahani reality based hai so miracle hone ke kamm hi chance hai ... Or agar accha pyar etni asani se mil jaye to kick kaha milti hai ..

Esi trahh apna sath banaye rakhiyega

 

[Kingfisher]

Izhar – a – Mohabbat, kahani ke naam se hi pata chal jaata hai ke Kahani mein Mohabbat to hogi par locha hoga uska izhaar karne mein...

Maine aksar dekha hai ke sahi samay par apne Pyaar ka izhaar na karne par takleef aur dard ke siwa kuchh nahi milta... Arre yaar kam se kam izhaar to karo, zyada se zyada reject hi ho jaaoge, par kya pata accept kar liye jaao... Agar rejection milti hai to uska utna dukh nahi hota jitna ke izhaar na kar paane ke baad hota hai....

Dhruv ka bhi yahi chakkar hai... Aksha ko uss ladke ke saath dekh kar apne aap hi andaaze lagane lag gaya... Jabki wo family friend tha.... Dhruv ke character se ab tak yahi lagta hai ke Iss se naa ho paayega...

Haan ek soorat mein iska ishq bhi rang laa sakta hai. Agar Vedant sacha mitr bankar bichauliya ban jaaye....

Par thread ke naam (sad and bad love story) se to yahi lagta hai ke dukhon ke samandar mein kashti behne waali hai iski.... Dhruv ke liye chand lines...

Izhar tu kar deta,
To wo tujhe tanha naa karti.
Tu waqt par Ikraar karta,
to wo kisi aur ko kubool naa karti.

Waise jo pehle update mein pahadi par baithne waala scene tha wo shayad future ka nazrana tha... Aur usse padhkar laga ke Dhruv shayad sach mein bahot der kar gaya...

Aarzoo to hai ke IZHAAR A MOHABBAT kiya jaaye...
lekin kya karen,
Jazbaat to hain par ye Alfaaz kahaan se laayen...

Outstanding writing bhai... Waise to sad love stories padhne se meri bahut phat ti hai par aapki iss kahani ko padhne se khud ko rok nahi paaya.... Amazing just amazing....

Bahut bahut shukriya Death Kiñg bhai

Apne sahi anuman lagaya dost ...ye kahani apne tittle ke according hi chalegi ...jisme sad yani dard bhi hoga ...bad yahi ghundagardi bur minner si and IJHAR E MOHHABBAT bhi hoga but vo IJHAR unaccepted hoga
Apke dvara likhi gai shayri is too good

Romance story bahut kamm log hi padte hai fir bhi me likh rha hu kyoki mujhe bahut accha lagta hai har shabd dil se nikalta hai ..

bs apna sath yu hi banaye rakhiyega

 

[Kingfisher]

Update on the way