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Update - 1
Kahani Raj ki jubani chalegi aur Raj ke jagah Mai likhunga. .hope so aap sabhi ko padhne me asani hogi. . . . . .
let's start. . . . . . .
Haar din ki tarah aaj bhi mai apne khet mai apna pasina baha raha tha kaam karke. .aur aaj jyada to kaam nahi tha per jitna bhi ta wo akele ke liye jyada tha. . .
Aaj akele kaam karna pad raha tha kyun ki aaj kamla kaki kaam pe nahi aayi kaal sham ko bola tha ki aaj unko kuch jaruri kaam hai isiliye mene unko aaj na ane ke liye keh diya tha. .kaam karte karte kaab 2 baj gaye pata hi na chala to mai kaam band karke apne jhopdi (ye ek chota sa 2 room aur 1 bathroom wala ghar hai jo kheto ke paas hai isme khet ka saman ek room rakha jata hai aur 1 mai ek bed rakhne ke jagah hai baas usine ek fan bhi hai garmi ki din ke liye. .aur side me bathroom bhi hai. .) Me chal diya khet ka saman wagera rakhne ke liye. .
saman wagera rakh ke bathroom mai ghus gaya fresh hone. .thodi der baad jhopdi ke bahar aake usko tala lagake apne ghar ki aur chal pada. .mere ghar hamare khet se yahi koi 2-3 kilometre ki duri me hai. .mai har ro Chalke aata jata rehta hun. . .
chalte chalte abhi akhri khet (sarpanch ka hai) bhi cross karne wala tha ki us khet ke paas bane jhopdi me se khuch awaj ayi wo bahut dabi dabi si. .per jitna awaj aaya mai Jan gaya ye kis tarah ki awaj hai. . .
To mai dekhne ke liye us aur chala gaya. .wanha jake us jhopdi ke charo aur ghum ne laga aur koi jagah dhund ne laga jisse mai ander ka bes kimti nazar dekh saku aur wo bhi aaj pehli baar. . .
luckily ghumte huye ek khidki thodi se khuli huyi mil gayi. .mai wanha jake us khidki aur thoda sa khol diya per dhire se khola taki ander jo bhi hai aur jo kaam kar rahe hai unko koi pareshani na ho. .aur jaab ander ka nazara dekha to mere hosh ud gaye thy. . .
hosh udne ki hi baat hai kyu ki ander kamla kaki sarpanch se chudwa rahi thy. .aur maine bhi unko koi disturb na karke unka khel dekhne lag gaya. .aur sath hi sath apna bhi saman nikal diya live dekh ke hilane ke liye. . .
(18 saal ka tha hamare khet mai ladka kaam karta tha Munna Bhai wo aab nahi rahe matlab mar gaya hai. .Thakur ke factory mai karte waqt. .per jaab wo hamare khet mai kaam kar rahe thy unse achi dosti ho gayi thy aur wo hi mujhe ye saab gyaan de dete hai aur hilana bhi sikha diya tha)
Mujhe aaye huye baas 5 min bhi huye nahi thy ki. . .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhhhh. . .aaaahhhhh. .randi mera nikalne wala hai. . .
kamla kaki : aaahhhhh. . Aaaahhhhhh. . .thodi der rukh ja. . .mera bhi. . .aaaahhhhh. .hone wala hai. . .aaahhhh. .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhh. .aaahhhh. .aur nahi reh sakta. . . .aaaahhhhhhhh. .me gaya. . . . .
aaahhhhhhhhh. . .naaaaahhiiiiiiiiii. . . .
ye chikh thy kamla kaki kyun ki kamla kaki hua nahi tha aur sarpanch ka maal kamla kaki ke ander chod ke unke upar ludhak chuka tha. .aur bahar mai mera maal pe atyachar hua tha. .kyun ki baas 5 min mai mera kuch hone wala nahi tha abhi abhi nikal tha bahar mere hatiyar ko aur uske sath dhoka ho gaya. . .fir bhi kamla kaki ke badan abhi bhi nangi hi thy to uski ko dekh ke mai apna kaam jari rakha. . .
ander kamla kaki gusse se sarpanch ko Dhaka deke unke upar se utha diya aur uth ke beth gayi. . .
kamla kaki (gusse se) : sale namard. .mera hua hi nahi ye tera har baar ka hai. .mere ander aag lagake apni pyaasa bujha jata hai. . .haat sale. . .
sarpanch ka to nikal ne ke baad wo wanhi susta raha tha aur kaab so gaya pata hi nahi chala. .per kamla kaki apne chut mai ungli karne lagi. .ungli karte karte jaab khidki aur nazar gayi to mujhe dekh liya per boli kuch nahi per han unka munh khula ka khula reh gaya tha. . .
kyunki mai apna hatiyar hila raha tha usse dekh ke. . .aur munh khulega kyun nahi hatiyar bhi damdar tha pura 9.5 inch ka aur 3 inch mota. . .
aur wo thodi der baad apne hosh me aake mujhe unka chut dikha aur mere ankho me dekhke ungli pele ja rahi thy aur mai bhi dekh Liya tha ki wo mujhe hi dekh rahi hai to mene bhi bina deri kiye apan kaam jaro rakha. . .aur 5 min baad mera aur kaki ka maal nikal gaya aur mene usse wanhi sarpanch ke diwar me hi de mara fir mene apna pant pehna aur nikal gaya ghar. . .
ghar aane me baad maine apni maa ko awaj lagana suru kar diya. . .
mai : maa kaha ho bhuk lagi hai jaldi khana do fir se khet bhi jana hai pani dene ke liye. . .
maa ander kitchen se hi boli : tu ja pehle munh hath dho le mai khana leke aati hun. . .
mai bhi chal diya munh hath dhone ke liye. . .
(taab tak thoda mere ghar ke baare mai jaan lete hai ye ek manjile ka ghar hai isme 3 room hai 1 mera 1 meri maa ka 1 meri behen ka 1 kitchen hai aur 1 hall hai)
mai munh hath dhoke wapas aake aake hall me charpai bichake niche beth gaya. .bethe huye kuch hi time huye thy ki maa bhi aagayi khana leke. .aur mujhe khana deke mere sath hi side me beth gayi aur mujhe khana khate huye dekhne lagi. . .
mai khana kahte huye : maa yese kya dekh rahi hai mujhe. . .
maa : kuch nahi baas dekh rahi hun tu hamare liye kitna kaam karta hai aab lagta hai kisiko dhundna padega tere liye. .
mai : kyaaa. .aap kehna kya chahte ho. . .
maa : kuch nahi tu khana kha. . .
mai bhi chup chap khana khane laga fir bich me : maa ye chutki (meri choti behen) nazar nahi a rahi hai. .kahi gayi hai kya. . .
maa : han apni dost Rasmi (Rakhi kaki ki beti) ke ghar gayi hai bata rahi thy sham ko ayegi. .koi school ka kaam hai. . .
mai : maa. .maa. .usse school nahi college kehte hai. . .
maa : han. .han. .wanhi. . .
mai : thik hai. .taab tak mera khana bhi khatam ho gaya tha to mai uth gaya hath mun dhoke wapas maa ke paas aake. .
mai : maa mai ja raha hun khet mai pani dene ke liye. .sham se pehle aajaunga. . .
maa : aur kitna din lagega fasal nikal ne mai. . .
mai : maa kam to khatam ho gaya hai aab baas har took pani dena hai aur 15-20 din baad fasal niklega. . .
maa : thik hai jaa. .per sham se pehle wapas aajana. . .
mai : kyun maa kuch kaam tha kya. . .
maa : han tha to. .per jaab fasal niklega taab bata dungi. .aab tu ja khet. . .
mai : thik hai. .ye kehke nikal gaya ghar se khet ke liye. . .
Is baat se anjaan ki aaj se mai baas janat mai hi rahunga. . .
Agle update mai dekhenge ki kahani kis aur jayegi taab taak ke stay tune. . .
Kahani Raj ki jubani chalegi aur Raj ke jagah Mai likhunga. .hope so aap sabhi ko padhne me asani hogi. . . . . .
let's start. . . . . . .
Haar din ki tarah aaj bhi mai apne khet mai apna pasina baha raha tha kaam karke. .aur aaj jyada to kaam nahi tha per jitna bhi ta wo akele ke liye jyada tha. . .
Aaj akele kaam karna pad raha tha kyun ki aaj kamla kaki kaam pe nahi aayi kaal sham ko bola tha ki aaj unko kuch jaruri kaam hai isiliye mene unko aaj na ane ke liye keh diya tha. .kaam karte karte kaab 2 baj gaye pata hi na chala to mai kaam band karke apne jhopdi (ye ek chota sa 2 room aur 1 bathroom wala ghar hai jo kheto ke paas hai isme khet ka saman ek room rakha jata hai aur 1 mai ek bed rakhne ke jagah hai baas usine ek fan bhi hai garmi ki din ke liye. .aur side me bathroom bhi hai. .) Me chal diya khet ka saman wagera rakhne ke liye. .
saman wagera rakh ke bathroom mai ghus gaya fresh hone. .thodi der baad jhopdi ke bahar aake usko tala lagake apne ghar ki aur chal pada. .mere ghar hamare khet se yahi koi 2-3 kilometre ki duri me hai. .mai har ro Chalke aata jata rehta hun. . .
chalte chalte abhi akhri khet (sarpanch ka hai) bhi cross karne wala tha ki us khet ke paas bane jhopdi me se khuch awaj ayi wo bahut dabi dabi si. .per jitna awaj aaya mai Jan gaya ye kis tarah ki awaj hai. . .
To mai dekhne ke liye us aur chala gaya. .wanha jake us jhopdi ke charo aur ghum ne laga aur koi jagah dhund ne laga jisse mai ander ka bes kimti nazar dekh saku aur wo bhi aaj pehli baar. . .
luckily ghumte huye ek khidki thodi se khuli huyi mil gayi. .mai wanha jake us khidki aur thoda sa khol diya per dhire se khola taki ander jo bhi hai aur jo kaam kar rahe hai unko koi pareshani na ho. .aur jaab ander ka nazara dekha to mere hosh ud gaye thy. . .
hosh udne ki hi baat hai kyu ki ander kamla kaki sarpanch se chudwa rahi thy. .aur maine bhi unko koi disturb na karke unka khel dekhne lag gaya. .aur sath hi sath apna bhi saman nikal diya live dekh ke hilane ke liye. . .
(18 saal ka tha hamare khet mai ladka kaam karta tha Munna Bhai wo aab nahi rahe matlab mar gaya hai. .Thakur ke factory mai karte waqt. .per jaab wo hamare khet mai kaam kar rahe thy unse achi dosti ho gayi thy aur wo hi mujhe ye saab gyaan de dete hai aur hilana bhi sikha diya tha)
Mujhe aaye huye baas 5 min bhi huye nahi thy ki. . .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhhhh. . .aaaahhhhh. .randi mera nikalne wala hai. . .
kamla kaki : aaahhhhh. . Aaaahhhhhh. . .thodi der rukh ja. . .mera bhi. . .aaaahhhhh. .hone wala hai. . .aaahhhh. .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhh. .aaahhhh. .aur nahi reh sakta. . . .aaaahhhhhhhh. .me gaya. . . . .
aaahhhhhhhhh. . .naaaaahhiiiiiiiiii. . . .
ye chikh thy kamla kaki kyun ki kamla kaki hua nahi tha aur sarpanch ka maal kamla kaki ke ander chod ke unke upar ludhak chuka tha. .aur bahar mai mera maal pe atyachar hua tha. .kyun ki baas 5 min mai mera kuch hone wala nahi tha abhi abhi nikal tha bahar mere hatiyar ko aur uske sath dhoka ho gaya. . .fir bhi kamla kaki ke badan abhi bhi nangi hi thy to uski ko dekh ke mai apna kaam jari rakha. . .
ander kamla kaki gusse se sarpanch ko Dhaka deke unke upar se utha diya aur uth ke beth gayi. . .
kamla kaki (gusse se) : sale namard. .mera hua hi nahi ye tera har baar ka hai. .mere ander aag lagake apni pyaasa bujha jata hai. . .haat sale. . .
sarpanch ka to nikal ne ke baad wo wanhi susta raha tha aur kaab so gaya pata hi nahi chala. .per kamla kaki apne chut mai ungli karne lagi. .ungli karte karte jaab khidki aur nazar gayi to mujhe dekh liya per boli kuch nahi per han unka munh khula ka khula reh gaya tha. . .
kyunki mai apna hatiyar hila raha tha usse dekh ke. . .aur munh khulega kyun nahi hatiyar bhi damdar tha pura 9.5 inch ka aur 3 inch mota. . .
aur wo thodi der baad apne hosh me aake mujhe unka chut dikha aur mere ankho me dekhke ungli pele ja rahi thy aur mai bhi dekh Liya tha ki wo mujhe hi dekh rahi hai to mene bhi bina deri kiye apan kaam jaro rakha. . .aur 5 min baad mera aur kaki ka maal nikal gaya aur mene usse wanhi sarpanch ke diwar me hi de mara fir mene apna pant pehna aur nikal gaya ghar. . .
ghar aane me baad maine apni maa ko awaj lagana suru kar diya. . .
mai : maa kaha ho bhuk lagi hai jaldi khana do fir se khet bhi jana hai pani dene ke liye. . .
maa ander kitchen se hi boli : tu ja pehle munh hath dho le mai khana leke aati hun. . .
mai bhi chal diya munh hath dhone ke liye. . .
(taab tak thoda mere ghar ke baare mai jaan lete hai ye ek manjile ka ghar hai isme 3 room hai 1 mera 1 meri maa ka 1 meri behen ka 1 kitchen hai aur 1 hall hai)
mai munh hath dhoke wapas aake aake hall me charpai bichake niche beth gaya. .bethe huye kuch hi time huye thy ki maa bhi aagayi khana leke. .aur mujhe khana deke mere sath hi side me beth gayi aur mujhe khana khate huye dekhne lagi. . .
mai khana kahte huye : maa yese kya dekh rahi hai mujhe. . .
maa : kuch nahi baas dekh rahi hun tu hamare liye kitna kaam karta hai aab lagta hai kisiko dhundna padega tere liye. .
mai : kyaaa. .aap kehna kya chahte ho. . .
maa : kuch nahi tu khana kha. . .
mai bhi chup chap khana khane laga fir bich me : maa ye chutki (meri choti behen) nazar nahi a rahi hai. .kahi gayi hai kya. . .
maa : han apni dost Rasmi (Rakhi kaki ki beti) ke ghar gayi hai bata rahi thy sham ko ayegi. .koi school ka kaam hai. . .
mai : maa. .maa. .usse school nahi college kehte hai. . .
maa : han. .han. .wanhi. . .
mai : thik hai. .taab tak mera khana bhi khatam ho gaya tha to mai uth gaya hath mun dhoke wapas maa ke paas aake. .
mai : maa mai ja raha hun khet mai pani dene ke liye. .sham se pehle aajaunga. . .
maa : aur kitna din lagega fasal nikal ne mai. . .
mai : maa kam to khatam ho gaya hai aab baas har took pani dena hai aur 15-20 din baad fasal niklega. . .
maa : thik hai jaa. .per sham se pehle wapas aajana. . .
mai : kyun maa kuch kaam tha kya. . .
maa : han tha to. .per jaab fasal niklega taab bata dungi. .aab tu ja khet. . .
mai : thik hai. .ye kehke nikal gaya ghar se khet ke liye. . .
Is baat se anjaan ki aaj se mai baas janat mai hi rahunga. . .
Agle update mai dekhenge ki kahani kis aur jayegi taab taak ke stay tune. . .
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Nice updateUpdate - 1
Kahani Raj ki jubani chalegi aur Raj ke jagah Mai likhunga. .hope so aap sabhi ko padhne me asani hogi. . . . . .
let's start. . . . . . .
Haar din ki tarah aaj bhi mai apne khet mai apna pasina baha raha tha kaam karke. .aur aaj jyada to kaam nahi tha per jitna bhi ta wo akele ke liye jyada tha. . .
Aaj akele kaam karna pad raha tha kyun ki aaj kamla kaki kaam pe nahi aayi kaal sham ko bola tha ki aaj unko kuch jaruri kaam hai isiliye mene unko aaj na ane ke liye keh diya tha. .kaam karte karte kaab 2 baj gaye pata hi na chala to mai kaam band karke apne jhopdi (ye ek chota sa 2 room aur 1 bathroom wala ghar hai jo kheto ke paas hai isme khet ka saman ek room rakha jata hai aur 1 mai ek bed rakhne ke jagah hai baas usine ek fan bhi hai garmi ki din ke liye. .aur side me bathroom bhi hai. .) Me chal diya khet ka saman wagera rakhne ke liye. .
saman wagera rakh ke bathroom mai ghus gaya fresh hone. .thodi der baad jhopdi ke bahar aake usko tala lagake apne ghar ki aur chal pada. .mere ghar hamare khet se yahi koi 2-3 kilometre ki duri me hai. .mai har ro Chalke aata jata rehta hun. . .
chalte chalte abhi akhri khet (sarpanch ka hai) bhi cross karne wala tha ki us khet ke paas bane jhopdi me se khuch awaj ayi wo bahut dabi dabi si. .per jitna awaj aaya mai Jan gaya ye kis tarah ki awaj hai. . .
To mai dekhne ke liye us aur chala gaya. .wanha jake us jhopdi ke charo aur ghum ne laga aur koi jagah dhund ne laga jisse mai ander ka bes kimti nazar dekh saku aur wo bhi aaj pehli baar. . .
luckily ghumte huye ek khidki thodi se khuli huyi mil gayi. .mai wanha jake us khidki aur thoda sa khol diya per dhire se khola taki ander jo bhi hai aur jo kaam kar rahe hai unko koi pareshani na ho. .aur jaab ander ka nazara dekha to mere hosh ud gaye thy. . .
hosh udne ki hi baat hai kyu ki ander kamla kaki sarpanch se chudwa rahi thy. .aur maine bhi unko koi disturb na karke unka khel dekhne lag gaya. .aur sath hi sath apna bhi saman nikal diya live dekh ke hilane ke liye. . .
(18 saal ka tha hamare khet mai ladka kaam karta tha Munna Bhai wo aab nahi rahe matlab mar gaya hai. .Thakur ke factory mai karte waqt. .per jaab wo hamare khet mai kaam kar rahe thy unse achi dosti ho gayi thy aur wo hi mujhe ye saab gyaan de dete hai aur hilana bhi sikha diya tha)
Mujhe aaye huye baas 5 min bhi huye nahi thy ki. . .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhhhh. . .aaaahhhhh. .randi mera nikalne wala hai. . .
kamla kaki : aaahhhhh. . Aaaahhhhhh. . .thodi der rukh ja. . .mera bhi. . .aaaahhhhh. .hone wala hai. . .aaahhhh. .
sarpanch : aaaahhhhh. .aaahhhh. .aur nahi reh sakta. . . .aaaahhhhhhhh. .me gaya. . . . .
aaahhhhhhhhh. . .naaaaahhiiiiiiiiii. . . .
ye chikh thy kamla kaki kyun ki kamla kaki hua nahi tha aur sarpanch ka maal kamla kaki ke ander chod ke unke upar ludhak chuka tha. .aur bahar mai mera maal pe atyachar hua tha. .kyun ki baas 5 min mai mera kuch hone wala nahi tha abhi abhi nikal tha bahar mere hatiyar ko aur uske sath dhoka ho gaya. . .fir bhi kamla kaki ke badan abhi bhi nangi hi thy to uski ko dekh ke mai apna kaam jari rakha. . .
ander kamla kaki gusse se sarpanch ko Dhaka deke unke upar se utha diya aur uth ke beth gayi. . .
kamla kaki (gusse se) : sale namard. .mera hua hi nahi ye tera har baar ka hai. .mere ander aag lagake apni pyaasa bujha jata hai. . .haat sale. . .
sarpanch ka to nikal ne ke baad wo wanhi susta raha tha aur kaab so gaya pata hi nahi chala. .per kamla kaki apne chut mai ungli karne lagi. .ungli karte karte jaab khidki aur nazar gayi to mujhe dekh liya per boli kuch nahi per han unka munh khula ka khula reh gaya tha. . .
kyunki mai apna hatiyar hila raha tha usse dekh ke. . .aur munh khulega kyun nahi hatiyar bhi damdar tha pura 9.5 inch ka aur 3 inch mota. . .
aur wo thodi der baad apne hosh me aake mujhe unka chut dikha aur mere ankho me dekhke ungli pele ja rahi thy aur mai bhi dekh Liya tha ki wo mujhe hi dekh rahi hai to mene bhi bina deri kiye apan kaam jaro rakha. . .aur 5 min baad mera aur kaki ka maal nikal gaya aur mene usse wanhi sarpanch ke diwar me hi de mara fir mene apna pant pehna aur nikal gaya ghar. . .
ghar aane me baad maine apni maa ko awaj lagana suru kar diya. . .
mai : maa kaha ho bhuk lagi hai jaldi khana do fir se khet bhi jana hai pani dene ke liye. . .
maa ander kitchen se hi boli : tu ja pehle munh hath dho le mai khana leke aati hun. . .
mai bhi chal diya munh hath dhone ke liye. . .
(taab tak thoda mere ghar ke baare mai jaan lete hai ye ek manjile ka ghar hai isme 3 room hai 1 mera 1 meri maa ka 1 meri behen ka 1 kitchen hai aur 1 hall hai)
mai munh hath dhoke wapas aake aake hall me charpai bichake niche beth gaya. .bethe huye kuch hi time huye thy ki maa bhi aagayi khana leke. .aur mujhe khana deke mere sath hi side me beth gayi aur mujhe khana khate huye dekhne lagi. . .
mai khana kahte huye : maa yese kya dekh rahi hai mujhe. . .
maa : kuch nahi baas dekh rahi hun tu hamare liye kitna kaam karta hai aab lagta hai kisiko dhundna padega tere liye. .
mai : kyaaa. .aap kehna kya chahte ho. . .
maa : kuch nahi tu khana kha. . .
mai bhi chup chap khana khane laga fir bich me : maa ye chutki (meri choti behen) nazar nahi a rahi hai. .kahi gayi hai kya. . .
maa : han apni dost Rasmi (Rakhi kaki ki beti) ke ghar gayi hai bata rahi thy sham ko ayegi. .koi school ka kaam hai. . .
mai : maa. .maa. .usse school nahi college kehte hai. . .
maa : han. .han. .wanhi. . .
mai : thik hai. .taab tak mera khana bhi khatam ho gaya tha to mai uth gaya hath mun dhoke wapas maa ke paas aake. .
mai : maa mai ja raha hun khet mai pani dene ke liye. .sham se pehle aajaunga. . .
maa : aur kitna din lagega fasal nikal ne mai. . .
mai : maa kam to khatam ho gaya hai aab baas har took pani dena hai aur 15-20 din baad fasal niklega. . .
maa : thik hai jaa. .per sham se pehle wapas aajana. . .
mai : kyun maa kuch kaam tha kya. . .
maa : han tha to. .per jaab fasal niklega taab bata dungi. .aab tu ja khet. . .
mai : thik hai. .ye kehke nikal gaya ghar se khet ke liye. . .
Is baat se anjaan ki aaj se mai baas janat mai hi rahunga. . .
Agle update mai dekhenge ki kahani kis aur jayegi taab taak ke stay tune. . .