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okkBehtr hoga ap usse poch lo pehle q k ye uski mehnat hai plz ap bura mt manna aisa na hu ek achi story ek ghalti ki waja se zaya hujai plz
Bhai koi dusri achi site hu tu bta do jahn achi stories huMast Story hai Abhi tk yum per running hai ji
ThanksKahani sahi hai, ise thode edits ki jarurat hai, jese ki narration me jab kahani ke kisi characters ki apas me conversation hoti hai toh use thoda alag se dikhao isse readers ko padne me or samjhne me aasani hogi, congrats for your story